Rath

I wasn't sure if this topic would be better off in the fan fic section, it might clog up the naruto one. I know this was done before in the past but i wanted to start it up again if you don't mind.
Besides it is one of the few places where you can share your naru fantasies without (hopefully) being made fun of

I'll post mine after everyone feels ok about this.

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YoshiToshi

Oooh! I remember this!

The story I'm working on is based on Naruto, and yes, the Naruto characters are in there, but I also have my own characters. All of these characters have demons sealed within them, and 12 of them combined make the Juunishi Zodiac.
I didn't post up all 12 characters, because I'm not that far into the story yet.
Oh yeah, the main character don't got a name, because my story makes the reader the main character.

Name: (none) AKA: Rizumouko/Rizusenshi
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Height: 5'7"
Weight: You don't need to know that.
Hair: Black, waistline.
Eyes: Light blue, not like Naruto's.
Rank: Chuunin (Potential Jounin)
Personality: Kind, always smiling. Cares for others first before own self.
Hobbies: Music, Hanging with friends.
Apparel: Blue t-shirt and brown long pants.
Bracelet: Holds half of Rizumouko, other half inside of character. Made up of beads, one jade bead in the middle with kanji character for 'tiger' on it.
Place of Birth: Village of Rhythm.

Necklace: Konoha leaf design, with rubies, emeralds, and aquamarines inside it.
Juunishi Bloodline:

Jutsus: (the description is there so I know what jutsu is what)

Katon, Ryukajiyami no jutsu: black fire that is similar to Ryuka.
Katon, Karyuu Endan: Way cooler than goukakyuu
Chidori: Lightning stuff
Rasengan: The one Naruto uses.
Tajyuu Rasengan Bakafuu: Multiple Rasengan
Secret Jutsu of Rizumu! Chidori to Rasengan, Karamiau: Both Chidori and Rasengan, shoot towards
Kane Seishi: Ability to control and morph metal
Doton, Doryuudan: The earth move shaped like a dragon, which shoots earth bullets out of it's mouth.
Katon, Karyuudan: Usually follows Doryuudan
Suiton, Suijinheki no jutsu: water barrier
Kuchiyose no jutsu: summoning
Hyouton, Haryuu Mouko: Charging Ice Tiger; ice surrounding needed.
Nippon, Jukusei Ryu no Jutsu: healing technique
Chakra no Hayai Hitokire: When chakra surrounds an opponent, spiralling, and quickly slicing at the opponent.

Kuchiyose creatures:

Houkatora: Giant sized tiger, abilities of fire. White with red stripes.
Kooritora: Giant sized tiger, abilities of ice. White with light blue stripes.
Kazetora: Normal sized tiger, abilities of wind. White with green stripes.

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Rizumouko info:
Rizumouko: Rizu: first part of the word rhythm. Mouko: fierce tiger
Rizusenshi: Rizu; first part of rhythm. Senshi:warrior
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Name: Nobuharu Yoshi AKA: Hiryudoru
Age: 16
Height: 5'6"
Weight:: 150 lbs (buff)
Hair: Grey hair; spiky
Eyes: Green
Rank: Missing-Nin (Jounin Level)
Personality: Confident, Smug, easily jealous, and somewhat flirtatious.
Apparel: Grey long sleeve shirt and black long pants with Blue flak jacket.
Bracelet: Holds half of Hiryudoru, dragon of Juunishi demons. Made up for beads, middle bead made of jade, with character for 'dragon' on it.
Place of Birth: Village of Dance
Hobbies: Relaxing and checking out girls

Jutsus:

Katon, Ryukajiyami no jutsu: black fire (similar to Ryuka)
Ryuka Tatsumaki no jutsu: Tornado of fire
Ryu Henge: transforms into dragon-men
Tajyuu Kage Bunshin: multiple shadow clones.
Kouryou Yobigoe no jutsu: intense hail.
Doton, Ryuresshin no jutsu: Large earthquakes
Chidoryu Jiten no jutsu: Red and blue chidori spinning into a beam, shaped like a dragon head.
Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu: Black dragon spirals from the thrust of the hand, sending opponent high into the air.
Souryuu Boufuusetsu: Much like Kokuryuu, but with two thrusts of the hand, and two black dragon spirals, they spiral together into a tornado.

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Hiryudoru: name means 'flying dragon'

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Name: "Zashimaru" AKA: Inukuniku
Age: 17
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 145 lbs
Hair: Long brown hair, down to mid-back.
Eyes: Chestnut
Rank: Chuunin (Potential Jounin)
Personality: Acts like a little kid, likes to play pranks. Has an extremely short temper.
Apparel: Cargo pants, blue tee-shirt. Right ear pierced, and has a scar down right eye.
Bracelet: Holds half of Inukuniku, dog of Juunishi demons. Made up of beads, middle bead made of jade with character for 'dog' on it.
Place of Birth: Village of Hunt
Loves: Pork, Beef, and all kinds of meat.
Hates: Vegetables in general.

Jutsus:

Hyouton, Rouga Nadare no Jutsu: an avalanche of wolves; must be in ice surrounding, wolves can be turned back to snow with a powerful thrust.
Inu Henge: transforms into a dog monster.
Suiton, Suishouha: appearing water out of nowhere, and can be directed at target.
Suiton, Suijinheki: Water shoots out of the mouth, blocking an incoming attack.
(Ability): Able to shoot chakra from hand, like an energy ball.
(Ability): Chakra force field
Inunozansa no jutsu: with a scroll, summons many wolves, and all charge to enemy, ripping flesh off of enemy.
Tsumegarou: After Inu Henge, size is multiplied, and strength is multiplied as well.
Sutainu no jutsu: When punching the ground, force of the strike turns into chakra, and charges to enemy, shocking him from underground.

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Inukuniku: inu=dog, .......the other part means dog flesh
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Name: Igezawa Shinji AKA: (Still thinking of a name for him)
Age: 13
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 100 lbs
Hair: short, dirty/messy Dark brown
Eyes: Green-blue
Rank: Genin (potential Chuunin)
Personality: Playful, rowdy, rough.
Apparel: Short pants and a tee-shirt.
Bracelet: Blah blah blah rabbit, jade, blah blah.
Place of Birth: Village of Lightning
Loves: Candy and Zashimaru
Hates: Girls and slow-pokes

Jutsus:
Chidori (still in-training): lightning stuff
Katon, Goukakyuu no jutsu: *This attack is much faster when used by Shinji* basic fire attack
Inasuko Bunshin no jutsu: Just like Kage Bunshin, but clones are given 100x plus speed than user.
Mienai Hien, Katana version: With a sword, chakra is fed into it, extending the length of the blade. It is able to move at a speed which looks invisible.
Muon Satsujin Jutsu: *not said out loud* is a technique to dispatch your foe with no warning. Your quick speed and skills will instantly kill them before they can provide a defense. It is done exceptionally quick by Shinji.



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Name:Minakura "Ichimaru" Ikasaishou AKA: Nezurobou
Age: 27
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 150 lbs
Hair: Spiky hair, orange.
Eyes: Red
Rank: Jounin
Personality: Gentle, caring, kind, not a fighter.
Apparel: Usually traditional japanese wardrobe
Bracelet: Is a necklace; holds half of Nazurobou, rat of Juunishi demons. Made up of beads, middle bead made of jade, with the kanji word Rat engraved in it.
Place of Birth: Village of Konoha
Loves: The company of children
Hates: Loneliness

Jutsus:
Wakeruhei no jutsu: Split between user and demon. Can only be done for at most 30 minutes.

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Nezurobou: Nezu is half of word Rat, and robou is ending of Thief.

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Name: Sekamana Shinzumi AKA Zuruihebi
Age: 18
Height: 5'9"
Weight: N/A
Hair: Dyed Fire red
Eyes: Golden
Rank: Chuunin
Personality: Tom-boyish, rough, impolite
Apparel: Wears Zashi's clothes.
Bracelet: yadda yadaa........ kanji with snake in it.
Place of Birth: Hunt
Loves: Zashimaru, and alcohol
Hates: People who are weak.

Zuruihebi: Zurui means sly, Hebi means snake.
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Name: Igezawa Kousuke AKA
Age: 24
Height: 6'2
Weight: 180 (extremely muscular)
Eyes: Green
Hair: Long, and shaggy; light brown
Rank: Jounin
Personality: Tough, Kind-hearted, and short-tempered
Apparel: Long pants and a open shirt
Place of Birth: Unknown. Now living in village of rain
Loves: His little brother
Hates: Trespassers and Orochimaru

Jutsu: Chuunin level ninjutsu and genjutsu; high taijutsu level.
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Name: Uchiha Ryoji "Kajisenshi" <~~~This is the bad guy in the story
Age: 16
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 130 lbs
Eyes: Black, Sharingan's red.
Rank: Missing-Nin
Personality: Over-confident, smug, manipulative
Apparel: Uchiha shirt, with pants and missing-nin forehead protectors.
Place of Birth: Konoha
Loves: Only himself and power
Hates: Those who think they're stronger than him.
Currently working with Akatsuki

Jutsu: All strong jutsu

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Azumi

oh... toshi, u really got a imaginative mind, i cant think of those characters for a very short time... maybe it'll take me a year. ok, i've been thinking of this character for at least a month. she was a nin from the hidden mist. she has a very powerful bloodline that no one has ever think of. her name was louiva (loy-va),. she has a very thick, sleek, waist-long silver-purple hair, and about 5'6 in height. she was slim and very fit. she wore a purple-silver nin clothes (i dont know what to call it. she use water as her bloodline, and her special technique is the water dragon technique. she can also produce weapons by turning the water into a very solid, hard-to-break ice. she was in love with with gaara (yes, gaara!) and that love of hers for him might lead her to her doom....... bad ending, huh?
well, she wil fight for gaara's love and that would prpbably make gaara more manly.

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Glaiza_mei

lol...that's toshi for you azumi!!! ^^

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Let me be with you gaara-kun...*hugs*

Teny

I think she spent a lot of time on that, as she said that she 'remembers'
and also she said she's been working on them.
XD

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These are Jamie-chans moves, not for yoouu

noraa

my character would have the shark bijuu in him and he would have black hair and light green eyes his height is 5'7 personality is exactly the same as naruto but smarter and his overall clothes would be blue/sky blue/black...

sasuke-kan

name:/
age:/
clan:uchiha
rank:ANBU
technique's:shadow replication,chidori,sharingan(its a technique no?),katon housenka,doton doryuu taiga,doton doryuudan,karyuudan,hidden snake hands,desert coffing ^^
summoning:kuchiyose edo tensei
this is shorter then what uchiha1412toshi writed no?

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blazin yukasho

id make a ninja wit an afro and his best jutsu would be *one thousand flying kunai afro no jutsu*, this cause the user to sprout 1 thousand kunai out of their afro and use lightspeed to rapidly throw each one at the enemy..

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destructioninjalloy

hmm..wow..you guys are really good of making a character..well i`m also got one..his name is mirasu..that probally not his true name.he`s playing guitar in the street of konoha..but really a horrible player..and he actually spying on konoha village..his looks..just like the old guy who make ramen..but he actually good at making booby trap rather than ninjutsu or taijutsu..and he does not have any forehead protector..he also can determine his enemy next move..just like a detective..he actually can read people character..and that what makes his booby trap unavoidable..that probally about it..hei..this just a character i make instantly.!

Rath

sounds cool, it reminds me of one person in this chinese movie i watched a couple of months ago.............what was it, i think kung fu hustle, these guys who play that instument and are bad guys or something, forget it :P

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Itachi the Assassin

Name: Uchiha Kurai (Kurai meaning dark)
Age: 20
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 145 lbs
Eyes: Normal eyes Red ( Does have the Sharigan of course)
Hair: Black,longer than Itachi's and is thrown up in a ponytail
Rank: Missing-Nin ( S-ranked when he went missing)
Personality: Very overconfident, thinks he's better than everyone. Only cares about one brother and that's Itachi.
Apparel: Anbu uniform with missing nin headband.
Place of Birth: Konoha
Loves: Itachi and murdering low level ninja
Hates: Anyone who gets in his way.
Relitives: The only two living brothers...Itachi and Sasuke.

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name: n/a
age: 17
height: 6'0"
weight: 150
hair: black(like night), very short
persanalaty:doesnt talk, smart, creepy,doesnt care about anything
rank: n/a was train by a missin nin would be acpaple of hokage
apparel: wears black and dark blue close, no fp
plase of birth: n/a
loves: n/a
hates n/a
technique's:dragon fist, summon dragon, bloodline no1 knows about(copy anything even other blood limtes and keeps them no matter what), lactos, and every other move ever used on him
relitives: n/a
talents: all Jutsu types

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GAma_Oyabun

dude, ur so evil, ur like a copy of itachi cept ur creepier since u actually care about itachi, i mean how do u know he cares about u? other than that its pretty cool

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Itachi the Assassin

LoL. I'm a big fan of the Uchiha brothers so that's why I made an older one. Didn't say Itachi had to care about him or me which ever you were pointing out. My guess Itachi would kill him but that's okay. Itachi rules anyway.

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Rath

btw, remember if you have a picture of the character that would be really awsome too(a lot more clear) n_n

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