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12-23-2005, 10:30 PM
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Genin
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Song Lyrics (Please R&R)
Alrighty people I need to have a judgement on my song I made. I got the lyrics here that I made for my friend. He wanted me to make it so he can sing it to his GF (he has no skills in songs, poems or any form of writing) so I wanted to know if this was good. Anyway shere are the lyrics and tell me what you think (first time by the way so they prolly suck).
Aquamarine Eyes Everytime I stare deep into your eyes I feel like I'm being dragged in and drowning Everytime I glance at those eyes I feel as if I am looking straight at the ocean Those big aquamarine eyes that I charish Please do not ever make them parish Whenever I look at your eyes and smile I think about how much I need you Whenever I look at you and grin I think about how much I love you Whenever I merely see you smile I think about how much I want it to last You the one I charish more than anyone Please do not ever perish and leave me Everyday I think about you I want to hold you in a warm embrace Everyday I hear your angelic voice I want to thank God for putting you on Earth Everyday I stare deep in to your blue eyes I wish I could stare into those eyes forever I love you and I hope you never change I need you and I couldn't live without you. I love you and I hope we could be together I wish we could be with one another forever I love you more than anything Espcially those Aquamarine Eyes that stare into my soul.
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12-24-2005, 11:31 PM
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It is pretty god, through in some " WAR! FUCK THE SYSTEM!"
 Nah, it is really good, nice work. The girl will like it
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12-29-2005, 11:11 AM
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