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Old 01-16-2006, 04:49 AM   #1
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My poems

My poems from newest to oldest. Wicth is your favorite?

Secret

Now we talk
After all this time
I still want to cry

I know you won't feel the same
So I can't say it
I don't want to lose you again

We lost each other
Now were found
With the same old pain I had

You laughed at me behind my back
While I still stook up for you
Can't you see I care

Now I see what I do
I seem to always push love away
I can't keep it a secret

I'm in love with you
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Bleed

It hurts so much
The wound is deep
I bleed on my knees

It seems I bleed when love goes away
I cry with pain
The love won't go away

As I go over it in my head
It all says my fault
The bleeding won't stop

All my loved ones seem to fade away
As the blood trikles out of my vains
The farther away they go the more it bleeds

Even though they left me bleeding
I know they still care
I know why they left

They can't stand me
They want me to stay the same
They don't feel the same way

I bleed thier love away
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Caught

I walk alone
I hear foot steps
Somewhere near

I start to run
They just follow
I look back

Nothing but shadows
I can fell a hand on my back
The other hand on my mouth

Now I can't breathe
I fall to the floor
I'm dragged away

I wake up
I'm in a basement
I yell and scream

Nobody there
Nobody cares
Nobody but me

I hear a door
I see some light
I feel the wind coming in

Who is it
Why did they take me
What did I do

They walk down
They turn on a light
There we are again

Traped again
Can't breathe
Can't be me

Mommy caught me again
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To the top

I'm at the top
Now I'm falling
I yell for help
They turn away

I hit the bottem
They look down
They laugh at me
I turn away

It's dark here at the bottem
I can see a little light from the top
As I receach for the light the darkness consumes
I lay at the bottem in fear

Now I get up
I see the light again
I get up
It's time to fight

I can see eyes in the dark
My inermost demons
They consume my soul
My iner light shines through

As I glow with light they burn
I fight my way to the top
I can see them scared
They merge as one

I'm at the top
So is the one demon
We look at each other
A most uncertain twist

I see my slef
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Rebirth

It is time
The time for rebirth
The time to rise

I must rebel
I must learn
It is time to change

I will change for me
Even it means pain
I can feel the pain that will fallow

I must rise through it
Through my loved ones
Through the fire

Then I can be real
Then I can breath
Then I will be one

The time has come
To rise up and fight
To come from the ashs

It comesumes me
The evil inside
So easy to give in

Not this time
Now I will be reborn
How it was meant to be

To be reborn like a phoenix
To fly high
To be free

When I get shot down from the sky
I will fall
Then rise from the ashs again and soar again

Rebirth is my hope
Rebirth is me
Rebirth and I are one

I will be rebirth
Rebirth will be me
I will grasp at the top and go higher

Then be reborn again
This is my time to get thier

To be reborn

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Time

Time is not real
My life has no purpose
They both are useless

There are here for people to have order
Without it some would go mad
While I would sit and think about her

As the world went crazy on the outside
I would think only of her safty
She is the only thing that matters

The rest can die
I would laugh and cry
As the world ended

Crying because I didn't get to kill them
Laughing because I miss them
She would make me go on

As the world fell apart
I would find her
Then I could die

As long as I got to hold her in my arms
It would be worth it
As long as I got to tell her that last thing

My life has a point now
To hold her in my arms just once
Then I can die with a tear in my eye and a smile on my face
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This is for a certain person.

Thank you for you

I wanted to die
You talked me through it
I told you the truth
You said it's okay

I told you of my death
You said it was noble
I told you I hate the people I love
You said I understand

I showed you me
You still spoke to me
I told you my problems
You helped me

I told you my belifes
You still were there
You know what a sick person I am
You didn't care

You take me for me
Like no one else
You are the one I care for but don't hate

My friend till death
I won't let you die
Not till you know one last thing

I don't know how to say it
But I think you know
Thank you for you

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~Dead~

I'm dead on inside
I want to die on the outside
But I have people to wacth over
But in my head I want them all dead
Just like me
Why do they like me
Why do they keep me here
Why must I stay
It's for them not me
If I was gone they would be dead to
If I die they die
Just like in my head
But I know why I stay
Deep inside I'm ready to die
But only dieing for there sfatey
But ween I die for them they will blame them seveles
And I will see them soon
But what I will see them dead on the inside
Not the outside
They will countine to live so that my life was not wasted
But I don't want this
I want them to move on
Live on like every other day
My way of life is for them
If they realy knew me they would hate me
And then the love would stop
But then I could reach up and live once again
Even if just for a second
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Old 01-16-2006, 11:35 AM   #2
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Old 01-16-2006, 01:34 PM   #3
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Thanks. What was your favorite?
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Old 01-24-2006, 06:57 PM   #4
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you are very talented...!really........
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:04 PM   #5
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hokage wazzup bro dang that poem was nice you really have an act for this poem thing you could be the next poe
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:06 PM   #6
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hokage wazzup bro dang that poem was nice you really have an act for this poem thing you could be the next picasso
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:22 PM   #7
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man you spaming..?
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:24 PM   #8
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Thanks guys. I think there bad, but thanks. I'll have a new one up soon.
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:35 PM   #9
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i`m sorry to say this..i just hopes it not offence you..but would you please make a little happy poem...not poem about death..it seem like you writing a suicide letter..but..that just a fiction rigth...right...right..!just concern okay!but the poem is good..i can feel the pain...and it really making me concern..!well thank god..when i read the last part..its about living...or should i say reborn..
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:45 PM   #10
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Yeah. I was working on a new one but lost it. It wasn't meant to be.
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Old 01-24-2006, 07:52 PM   #11
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i realy like #2 and #3
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Old 01-24-2006, 08:02 PM   #12
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I just made a new one. Enjoy.

@ColaBear_BiteMe09: Can you give me the names please. I just added a new one so different numbers.
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Old 01-24-2006, 08:11 PM   #13
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ok...
i like thank u for u, dead, and reberth.

can u look at my poem/song.....tell me wut u think
the poems dark..its for hatred i feel for ppl who have no emotions...and wel u know..V////V
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Old 01-24-2006, 08:15 PM   #14
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Old 01-24-2006, 08:20 PM   #15
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