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Old 04-14-2006, 01:11 PM   #1
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Poem: Farewell

Wrote a poem yesterday. May post up more. I translated it from when i wrote it in romaji.


Time changes people
Changes me
Through darkened eyes
I finally see

What was once real
Is now just past
Just memories
That have to last

Now my pain
Becomes what's true
Can't take back things
I did to you

The lies I told
And thoughts I thought
Will never be known
I'll never be caught

No one knows
Except for me
The brilliant story
Only I can see

I think too much
Of what I could have done
Though the past is gone,
Already won.

The future's mine
For I am new
The past of me
Is finally through

The old me died
A long time ago
What of me left,
You will not know.

My thoughts are different
More for me
My heart lied broken
For all to see.

I know I caused this
This flaming hatred, anew
What I've done is behind me
But I hate myself, for you.

For everyone who should,
But doesn't even know
I kill myself each day,
This blood still has to flow.

Death, now only release
From this pathetic life
I now start to piece things
What's wronged make right.

If given time I'll fix it,
I believe this is true
My past is far behind me
With it, there lies you.
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Old 04-14-2006, 01:21 PM   #2
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Wow, that hit the spot. its like a dead on hit. Bullseye. a ringer. the womp-womp.
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Old 04-14-2006, 01:27 PM   #3
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thats means alot to me right now
its really good
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Old 04-14-2006, 02:54 PM   #4
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Old 04-14-2006, 03:57 PM   #5
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I didn't know the dawg was a poet o_o
Very nice man, very nice.
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Old 04-15-2006, 05:41 AM   #6
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well the dawg is a ladies man as well but hey thanks.
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Old 04-15-2006, 08:45 AM   #7
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Very talented indeed, nice poem...very tocuhing if i do say so myself.
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the ending is excellent, couldn't have been done better
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Old 04-15-2006, 12:09 PM   #9
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Amazing. Like ~O_O~ You've got some mad poetry skills. The feelings you evoke are really nice. Except for a few word choices, everything was perfect. I love it. 9.7/10
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Old 04-18-2006, 12:14 PM   #10
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ma man UD is a good poet , does the poem relate to anything in particular? nice goin dude
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Re: Poem: Farewell

Yukasho no baka

what else have you stolen?

Same song by somebody else to the last word. Posted nearly a year earlier. http://yumetachi.deviantart.com/art/Farewell-24350425

shimata I thought I got your band when you posted your lyrics......but now I'm just dissapointed in you.
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