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Old 04-14-2006, 11:29 PM   #1
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The Official NL Story

The Official NL Story


Welcome all to the one and only (hopefully) Official Naruto Lounge Story! It's great of you to take some time to read over this, as I have spent much time on it, and I still will be spending much time on it. Well, let me first introduce you to this little project I have going on here. It is a story loosely based on the Naruto Universe. The unique thing about it is that I use characters that are submitted to me by our very own Naruto Lounge members! Isn't that amazing? Yea, I thought so too.

Anyways, I will be having a Table of Contents in the second post to get everything organized. I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. Also, if you would like to be part of this story, please consult the "NL Story - Intro/Character Recruitment" Sticky Thread, which I have so conveniently linked you to. Also, I have a request for everyone which I will bold and color so everyone reads it:

PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO THIS THREAD! IT IS FOR THE NL STORY ONLY!!!

I am sure everyone is wondering where the heck they are going to discuss the stuff then? Well, I'll tell you! You can just go to the "NL Story - Discussion Thread" which once again I have so conveniently linked you to.

Once again, I hope everyone enjoys this as I much as I have, and please feel free to critique, rate, bash on, cuss out, or post hate replys in the NL Story Discussion Thread. Thank you all for your time!

Important Links

~"NL Story - Intro/Character Recruitment" - This is the thread to post up your character if you want to be included in the story. Be sure to read the first post for all the information!
~NL Story - Discussion Thread - This is where you can post anything related to the NL Story. Make sure you reply in that thread instead of this one!

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Old 04-14-2006, 11:36 PM   #2
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Table of Contents


Post # - Title


1 - Introduction

2 - Tabel of Contents

3 - Prologue

4 - Chapter 1

5 - Chapter 2

6 - Chapter 3

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Prologue


Twenty years. It had been twenty years. Twenty years since the demolish of the Akatsuki. Twenty years since the death Naruto and Sakura, who had taken over the position of the legendary Sennin. Twenty years since Sasuke had been killed because of his betrayal to Konoha. How did all this manage to happen? That had been the year that everyone was terrified. Everyone had been killed. There was, of course, some rejoice, as the Akatsuki had been destroyed. But who had destroyed them? With the help of the Hokage, which was, at that time, Tsunade, and Naruto and Sakura, who were the newest Sennin of Konoha. Another essential member was the very well known Jiraiya, also a former Sannin who had actually gone his own way to fight with Orochimaru single handedly. He had used a special technique that took his own life, but killed Orochimaru for good. With a few skilled Shinobi, they were able to find the Akatsuki Hideout, and managed to kill the members, but in return, they had to give up their own. Sasuke had become the newest member of the Akatsuki, and was killed along with the rest of the Akatsuki at the time of their destruction. But it had been twenty years since all of that. Now the new generation of shinobi peeped out of their dormancy. Konoha still had hope.

Having become great allies, Sunagakure had really helped Konohagakure restore themselves to their full power. Suna had sent many of their own ninja to protect Konoha while they were in their time of distress, as many other shinobi countries would want to take over Konoha because of their perfect location, large land, and the variety of shinobi who wielded powerful bloodlines. Though many villages attempted too, the Kazekage, who was Gaara, made sure that Konoha stayed what it was. But soon enough, even people from Sunagakure had started to make their way into Konohagakure. Because of the long period of helplessness of Konoha, many of the ninja had to even get homes within Konoha because of their long stay. Eventually, this led to Suna shinobi breeding with Konoha citizens and shinobi. What became of all this? Many mixes of bloodlines, many for the better, but some for the worse. There were some survivors of the Uchiha Clan who wielded the Sharingan, but soon, they had mated with Suna bloodlines, makeing a different bloodline trait all together. Many families went through this, but it did end up being a good thing. The ties between Sunagakure and Konohagakure grew even better, and there was free passage between the two. Thanks to the breeding of the different shinobi, Konoha's shinobi population grew at a incredibley rapid rate. In the matter of twenty years, Konoha had become even stronger than before, and were now basically one with Suna, as they owed them almost everything.

Because of the mixing of the two cultures and peoples, many new things sprang threw the new generation. There was a massive rush of new jutsus, and many new weapons were made for shinobi. The Ninja Academy became tougher, as did the exams to progress, to make sure only the toughest would survive. Konoha had also changed a bit. People seemed to be leading much more progressive lives, and the new wave of shinobi had also become much stronger than before. But not everything was good. It seemed that there were new organizations being made. There were shinobi that were trying to start the Akatsuki once again, and there were other shinobi trying to bring Otogakure back to it's former ferocity. Many of Suna's own shinobi tried to assassinate the Kazekage Gaara because he had helped Konoha become extremely powerful, and had not taken it over when it had the chance. Of course, none of these assassinations succeeded. The Kazekage continued helping Konoha, as they now had very strong ties.

What is to become of Sunagakure and Konohagakure? Will they always close allies? Who is trying to start the Akatsuki again? Who is trying to become the next Orochimaru by bringing Otogakure back again? Will anyone dare to attack Konoha? Will Konoha always be peaceful? So many questions cross the minds of people everywhere. But only time will tell...

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Chapter 1


The morning sun was just on the horizon, getting ready to wake up the world. Well, maybe not all the world, as all the young ninja of Konoha were already awake, heading to the Ninja Academy. Normally, many would find this odd, as most kids never enjoyed going to school. But today was different. It was the second to last day of school, and it was probably as important, if not more important, than the last day of school. During the second day of school, all the young ninja were to fight each other, much like a battle royale. It never used to be like this, as Konoha always chose to do the more peaceful thing, using a simple exam to see if you passed or failed. But ever since Konoha had become close with Sunagakure, the system had changed. They adopted Suna’s way of choosing Suna, and it proved to be more proficient than the older way, as now they could weed out the weaker shinobi. If some got through by sheer luck, then they would be taken out when the Chuunin Exams came around.

The Academy students were sitting in the large classroom, all not speaking like their usual morning bickering. Today, everything was quiet. Not one uttered a word, for they focused on the task they faced soon enough this very day. All of them were naturally nervous; it was inevitable. This would be a win or lose situation; there was no in between. This year’s batch of possible-graduates was indeed a skilled batch. This year, there were three rookies, being the most skilled of the bunch. But the others, they were actually very skilled too. This year’s competition was going to be difficult. There were one hundred and ten students in the graduating class this year, and only about forty of those students were to become a Genin. The last forty standing would be the graduates, and would be officially announced as the new Genin the last day.

Morino Ayasei, the Chuunin Instructor, walked into the already filled classroom, as she assumed his position in the front of the large classroom. She was a descendant of the great interrogator, Morino Ibiki. Most would probably never guess that at first glance, but once one heard her, it could easily be pointed out. Ayasei was just as harsh as Ibiki himself, and just as good of an interrogator as he was. But she declined the offer for that position, and had decided to make the new generations of shinobi stronger. It was easily proven that she succeeded.

Ayasei looked around the room, staring into the eyes of all the students, then took a slight breath. “Today, class, will be the Judgement Day. Today will prove if you are eligible to further your career as a shinobi or not. I am sure that by now, everyone knows of what it is that you all must do, but if you do not, let me tell you. We will be heading to the Arena of Konoha, in which you will all be stuffed into, to fight.” She gazed around the room once more, seeing a few people start to wipe their brow of perspiration, as the tension already started to grow. “The last forty standing will be this year’s Genin. I expect you all to remember what you have learned up until now, and to do your best. And remember that today, your friends will be enemies, and your enemies might prove to be your greatest allies.” Ayasei took a deep breath. She remembered when she had to take this test. It was not pleasant to say the least. But she was over that now. It was time to see who would prove to be the better lot of this year’s graduating ninja.

Ayasei called out for the Genin to get up and to meet at the Arena in about ten minutes, gathering whatever they needed. As soon as she finished saying that, the young shinobi jolted out, gathering whatever they needed, then ran to the Arena. In about six minutes total, everyone was already at the Arena. There were even spectators; lots of spectators. This only rose the tension levels in the shinobi. But this didn’t concern Ayasei. She had just wanted to see if her training of these young ninja had paid off, and to see which ones would prove to be the fittest of the bunch.

Ayasei jumped down to the center of the Arena, as the shinobi started to surround the stadium, getting into their fighting stances. It was about to start; one of the greatest battles in their lives.

“There is one rule, and that is that if one shinobi kills another, than they are to be disqualified. That’s all. On my whistle, you may begin,” said Ayasei, as she jumped back into the spectator area of the Arena. Suddenly a loud, shrill whistle hovered over the air for a small amount of time.

It had begun.
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Chapter 2


It was a nice day out, the sun shining brightly as a cool breeze seemed to constantly be blowing through the Konoha Arena. The day was nice, but the tension was not. A heated free for all battle was about to take place, and it was very possible that someone may as well end up dead. But that was the least of anyone’s worries right now. Right now, everyone concentrated on the fight that was on the verge of starting.

A shrill whistle fluttered in the air, as for a moment, everything stood still. The Academy Students did not move, and the spectators inched closer to the ends of their seats in anticipation. At any moment, one of the most important fights was about to erupt, right in front of their eyes.

The first to break the silence was a young student named Kazashi Rokai. He was one of the three “Advanced Students” this year, as people liked to call them. He was born into the Kazashi clan, a clan which was bred out of the combining of a Konoha bloodline and a Suna bloodline. The Konoha bloodline was the famed Uchiha clan, known for their deadly Sharingan. The Suna clan was widely known as the Sazuchi clan, known for their special blood property. This blood property was sand that ran through the veins of the clan member, and could be expelled through any openings in their body. Because it was a part of the member’s body, they had perfect control over it, and could create it when needed. The combination resulted in the Kazashi clan, which had the ability to create sand in their bodies, as well as could use their clan’s doujutsu ability, Kanrigan. When activated, the user has the ability to see moments ahead of the present time, giving them a better chance of dodging and evading attacks. Clan members that achieved Kanrigan all had a common characteristic; they were blind in the left eye. Kanrigan allowed the right eye to have better vision to compensate for the loss of the other eye.

Rokai had activated his Kanrigan, the bloodline doujutsu of the Kazashi clan. His right pupil suddenly changed, as the eye turned a black color, and two orange circles formed inside the pupil. Rokai quickly examined his surroundings. A grin formed on his face, as the adrenaline started to pump through his veins. He jumped into the air, a kunai in his hand, as he started to crash upon an unfortunate Academy Student. Rokai knew that this was one of the weaker students this year, as he had already picked out who his targets were. He was to eliminate the weaker kids, then go for the stronger ones.

The other student quickly flashed out a kunai of his own, as sparks flew with the clashing of the metals. Rokai quickly jumped back, then flashed a string of handseals. “Kazaton: Nenshou Yari no Jutsu [Burning Sand Element: Burning Spear Skill]!”

Kazaton. It was the newly created jutsu element mainly exclusive to the Kazashi clan. They had their own style of jutsus, which were all based around their internal sand, and with the fire affinity of the Uchiha clan which they combined with. This made the Kazaton element, also known as the Burning Sand Element. It had spectacular effects if used correctly, and almost all Kazashi members could use it correctly.

The student brought up his hand in a defensive maneuver, as he attempted to block his face from the rushing redish spear of sand hurling towards him. As the spear collided with him, it exploded, as blood dripped down from the student’s arms, as well as many cuts all over the top portion of his body. Rokai grinned. One down...many, many more to go.

Rokai swivelled his heard around. He found his next target...
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Chapter 3


Miyano Keiji scanned the arena quickly. A small amount of perspiration started to emit from his forehead, though it was unseen by the long black air that he had. Yet, there didn't seem to be any expression of worry on his face. He was the type of person who enjoyed being isolated, keeping to himself. Keiji was another one of the "Advanced Students" this year. He was very skilled, and was quite known for his original style of fighting. He is one of the very, very few who combine the talents of Genjutsu along with the power of Taijutsu to create a special fighting style, confusing the enemy, then coming in with powerful blows.

Keiji knew he didn't have that much time to think. People might team up to take him down, as Keiji knew as well as everyone else that he was one of the strongest, and he was be a primary target so that the weaker ones could survive. But Keiji was not about to let that happen. A plan started to formulate in his mind, as a grin started to creep up from the corners of his mouth. He spotted that other Advanced Students Rokai. Keiji saw him flawlessly take out one of the students in the matter of seconds, using a spiralling spear of hot sand at the students. Keiji wanted to attack Rokai, but that would not be the wisest thing to do. If they fought, their battle would go on a for a while, as both of them were quite skilled. In that time, they would wear each other out, and that would let the weaker students finish them easily. Obviously Rokai had already started attacking the weaker ones. Keiji decided to do the same.

Keiji spun completely, locking his ferocious eyes onto one student, who was holding a kunai in a defensive position. That would do him no good, and Keiji knew this. Quickly, Keiji formed a quick string of handseals, his fingers and hands moving in a blur. "Gyaku Kagami [Reverse Mirror]..." said Keiji, in his soft, reserved tone. Suddenly, the target student seemed to be truck with a bit of shock. Keiji knew now that the jutsu had worked. The point of the jutsu was simple; it made the target see exactly what is behind him, though still thinking that he or she is looking in front of them. It proved to be very useful for confusing opponents. Keiji rushed in with thunderous speeds, as suddenly, he dropped down, planting his left hand on the floor, smashing the heel of his foot onto the unfortunate student's jaw, knocking two teeth out in the process. The student went flying into the wall of the stadium, as he simply fainted. A quick blurr of some shinobi could be seen picking up the body, but in an instant, they left with the body of the uncconscious student. One less person to deal with.

Keiji turned around. It seemed that many more had already been weeded out. By this time, it seemed that only about 100 or so still remained. But Keiji was ready. This would be a breeze for him. His past training was nothing compared to this, and he could easily take out a few more. But he kept one thing in mind; he might have to fight someone who was of equal strength to him, such as Rokai, or the other Advanced Student. There were three this year, and if he were to face any of them, he definitely needed his strength.

His past jutsu, Gyaku Kagami, really didn't use much chakra, and he could probably conserve a lot of chakra just in case if he juse used the same tactic he did with the previous student. Adrenaline started to pulse through Keiji's veins. This was truly going to be quite fun.

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Chapter 4


Nakama Toshi was not the type of girl who was scared of anything. In fact, she seemed more calm about this whole arena fighting thing than anyone else. In all truth, she was slightly nervous, but she knew she would prevail. At least, that’s what she had to think if she wanted to prevail. As the fighting started, she saw how just within the first few minutes, many had been taken out. Toshi decided the smart thing to do was defend for now and save some chakra, and attack when the amount of ninja was considerably lower. In just about 10 full minutes, the amount swiftly dwindled down to around a hundred. It was now time for Toshi to strike.

Nakama Toshi was the third ‘Advanced Student’ this year. Her scores in the Academy even surpassed that of Rokai and Keiji. Though she may not have looked it, she was quite intelligent. The Nakama Clan is a very odd one. It is a fairly new Clan that actually branches off from the Aburame Clan. The creation of this clan was made possible by the breeding of an Aburame clan member and a member of a certain Suna clan. The Nakama Clan uses scorpions much like the Aburame Clan uses bugs. These scorpions feed off of the host’s chakra, and turn it into poison and food. This results in a symbiotic relationship between the scorpions and the host, and the scorpions do the will of the host.

Toshi saw a cluster of three Genin together. This was the perfect opportunity to use her jutsu. Quickly, she made six full handseals, as she kneeled down and touched the floor. She called out “Sasuken [Scorpion Sting].” There were no movements. Suddenly, all three of the students cried out at the same time. They attempted to move, but couldn’t. The scorpions stung their legs, paralyzing them temporarily. Toshi sprang up to them, taking out a kunai and jabbing on of the students in the shoulder, the other in the leg, and the last, slashing him across his back. Toshi wasn’t exactly the nicest girl when it came to fighting. All three of the students fell, as a blur took place and all three bodies were gone.

By this time, the last 40 were still standing. The battle was over. This year’s graduates had been chosen. Another one of those shrill whistles blew through the air. Morino Ayasei appeared in the middle of the stadium. “Congratulations to this years graduating students!” she said, as an applause roared through the actually packed arena.

“Tomorrow will be graduation day. Your teams will be assigned, and you will receive your headbands. Congratulations once again.” said Ayasei, and she disappeared again, as the arena began to clear out.
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