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Old 07-07-2006, 03:15 AM   #1
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Hey, im gonna post some of my poems or songs...dunno if i have the final version of the songs. Im the lyricalist,second singer and drummer for my band by the by.

Poem:
I am no longer asleep
My eyes are wide,my vessels straind
Carring messages to and froe
But my mind,is still,shut down
Im dreaming still
Still im dreaming
Dreaming still,3 ways to say
What I doing at the moment
A sword unsheathed from my throat
My words come out cracked
This buring coat of pain
Over my throat
I must get some water
But my fingers wont move
As if soen to my stone bed
As i lay
Lay awake
The blood drips from my nose
I have the thoughts staind in my minds
The war is over
I have made it threw
But at what price
I have lost my life
My mother,my father
My wife,Son,daughter and brother of those 2
I am isolated,so cold
My back is stiff,I go to breath
And my bodie wants to shut down
I have no energy left
So hyped up about nothing
I am running on adrenaline alone
My legs are as if there is a god sitting on my lap
The weight of loss,and burdern
Across my bodie it lays
So warm,yet the feel of liquid
My inhales match that of a snail
My exhale remsemble an overworked child
Im shaking
Is this blood?
Everything is turning red now
Despare tranformed into rage
I push my bodie,as if my sould left me
And pulled my 1000 pound bodie up
My mucles seemed to explode
MY bodie rooted itself into the earth
I relised it was my time
In the name of god
I have killed,and bin killed
Damned and have bin damned
Spilt blood,and losed blood
All in the name of my savior
This has become selfish hypocracy
I no longer wish to be me anymore
So I,with this last breath
Here by vow,to now do nothing
In the name of a higher being
I am myself,me and i
For now on,my mucles will explode everyday
For i sware,i will not see you
When these eyes of mine shut
I shall live till my bodie is dust
and my armor,rust

Raw songs (Not finalised. Since I wright the lyrics and my friend puts them in song format "intro, verse, chorus,verse 2, chorus, etc." pluse he has to change my lyrics...i dont know why. I have these raw songs)

Imagination:
Dont pull the wall over my eyes
End the road with a sheet of bricks
Let my mind roar, and my spirit destroy
Dont place your chains on my wrist
These legs need room to run
And my throat needs space to breath

Dont hold me back
Dont put me in a cage
I dont need your hands
I can suffocate myself

My mind is in a thousand directions
I dont need you to point out east or west
Let me find my own way around
Its ok if I get lost in seas of thoughts
Tidal waves of ideas crash upon my broken mind
Filtered through broken shards of empty dreams

Dont hold me back
Dont put me in a cage
I dont need your hands
I can suffocate myself

Your words of wisdom
Or critasizim are not needed
My canvas shall be bathed in my blood
I dont need a donation, or a helping hand
Its possible to do things a new way
So its ok to sway from the herd

Trial:

I know this will all come back to me
But not right now
So as the jurry decides my everything
I remeber, back, so far back
When i used to play in the field
the green,green field
That field is now a company
Watching the sky
the blue, blue sky
with the white, white sky
with the field under me
that sky is now a black cloud of smog
As they talk amung themselfs
I rember my first girlfriend
I remeber her laugh
her cute, girly laugh
I rember my first kiss
my first wet, wet kiss
I remeber her smell
her sweet,sweet smell
As they come to a close
I remeber my father's advice

my father's bitter, bitter adive
that i did not follow
I rember my mother's words
her calming, calming words
They are coming to a close, and I can feel it
I wish I could lay with my first girlfriend
under that clear blue sky, with the white clouds
laying atop of the green field before they give their finnal decision
I rember my first bath
in the warm, warm water
I rember my first test
I rember my first hug
I remeber my first pet
I remeber my first time watching tv
I remeber the feel of air, the smell of water
the taste of defeat, the warmth of love
but most of all, i rember that i did all this
to myself
my bitter, bitter self
my pathetic, pathetic self
As they say that I am guilty
I remeber, I remeber
How skin feels, how apples peel
How certin cuts bleed more then others
That a broken man never heals, while a leg takes a few months
But I do not remeber why I am throwing myself at the mercy
the ugly, ugly mercy
of myself

(we changed the lyrics and such about 2 times after this)


VVVMade this up 2 minutes ago...litteritaly

Cycle of ways:
Under the water
I have reached perfection
Think I found him when I went insane
Found myself on a battle feild
Coated in empty being
There isnt anything I cant stand
My smileing enemy
Laughing in the gun vision
I pull the triger, my daughter blows out the candles
Her inocence goes they way of the flame
18 is burnt in half
I hand her the keys
Found with the bottle of milk in her hand
Metal entered self
Self made immortality
Glory fades as they kneel
Family giveing away memories
Mother lost her way in 3
Under her make up, cancer waited
Sooner or later it would feed


Ill look for more, and if you dont like them tell me what you dont like, if you like them tell me what you like. Id realy like the help, so there ya go behind the music look at my bands lyrical rough drafts

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Old 07-08-2006, 03:31 AM   #2
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wrote this song for a girl (second song that i did the arrangments myself)

Thought I knew beyond the mirror
Insight of the blind man
Was nothing compared to you
Beauty found a shell
Took root and gave life meaning
Nothing was left the same

All my fears are laid to sleep
In her smile
In the overwhelming thought of her

Crack addicts sleep more then me now
A peace of mind, an injection of solice
She infested me
Worked her way through my body
Parasites of her being

All my faults are put to rest
All my fears are laid to sleep
In her smile
In the overwhelming thought of her

Bridge:
Found myself, stumped upon a riddle of self
Am I who I want to be
But then I see her
And I slowly start to pick myself up
Only to crumble again in her sleeping hours

The phone never rings
These hours only bring me face to face with myself
Leavnig me lonely and withdrawn
Her everything haunting me
Sleepless nights, and a sweaty pillow
Checking my phone every minute
Only to be slapped in the face be absence of her

Found my zen (x3)
Found my zen in you
Found my zen (x2)
Found my zen in you (fade out)
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