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Old 03-08-2013, 03:00 PM   #16
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@numinous i considered you one of the old school predictors i mentioned above, however for what ever reason you seem to have turned into the latter of late
The royal fuck? You clearly haven't read what I wrote in this thread to profess such obvious inanity. I both congratulated the author and pointed out the flaws in the prediction (and even himself thanked me for doing so) and now I'm "just a troll"?

One thing is to defend those who produce content (when such content is worth defending, by the way, and this prediction is), another and much reprehensible is to blindly charge in like a crazed white knight and joust the fucking wall if needed only because it's in the way. So, please, think before you start writing things that are clearly untrue.

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@ bolded: in other words, not having to defend it at all, by the looks of the threads. Even if I was still writing predictions, I wouldn't post them in a place where criticism is null because criticism is vital to any writer, unlike continuous praise which just poisons the writer into thinking he's somehow flawless.

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i look at it this way......If someone offers you a glass of water when your thirsty....dont bitch about how it tastes .......and the simple fact that these guys have come to the prediction thread, means they were "thirsty and askin for water"
What a completely ignorant remark.
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in other words, not having to defend it at all, by the looks of the threads. Even if I was still writing predictions, I wouldn't post them in a place where criticism is null because criticism is vital to any writer, unlike continuous praise which just poisons the writer into thinking he's somehow flawless.
Bitch please... I'm the best writer in da WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!! Aman Shahur can suck it!

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No, the title is mine, ALL MINE, muhahahahahahaha!!!!

@ rikudounaruto: that action bit you gave in the latest post is fine because it's clear and concise. It's like I said, just avoid overly long paragraphs, because you already do a good job at writing said action.
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Hi guys. It's been too long since i've made a prediction. I'm bit rusty but i hope that ypu'll enjoy it. And Rikudounaruto. Don't. Fucking. Stop. Writing. If you want to improve you must be oblivious to retards like the one who said that you're predictable and listen to guys like Numinous for example. You are promising. And stop saying that you're nowhere my level for example. Search the forum for my early predictions. You'll see that i sucked. Big time. So, confidence in yourself and keep writing.


Naruto 624: Brothers.



The scene shows Butsuma Senju facing Tajima Uchiha. Also, their younger childs are throwing eachother menacing glares.

Tajima: It seems that we had the same idea...Butsuma.
Butsuma: I suppose so...yet...we didn't had exactly the same idea...Tajima!
Tajima has a strange smile: Are you sure?
Butsuma waves his hand and almost instantly behind him lands several Senju shinobis.
Butsuma as he smiles with confidence: Yeah...i'm sure. You are surrounded Tajima. Both you and your two sons. Who would have thought that we will kill the leader of the Uchiha clan and his heirs...
Tajima: Well...Butsuma..i'm not quite ready to die. That's why...
Instantly dozens Uchihas land behind him.
Tajima: I came here prepared as well. So...how should we do this?
Butsuma slowly nods his head. Tobirama catches the movement of his father and launches himself with a speed above the average shinobi. A small trail of water is left behind him as he is dashing at a high speed towards Tajima. Tobirama draws his sword from his back and attempts a slash at the leader's neck. But he barely misses...being an inch away from slashing him. The panel shows Tajima with the Sharingan activated.*
Tajima: Not even close enough.
Tobirama smiles: Close enough!*
Tajima places his hand on his neck. A scratch forms around his fingers and blood slowly drips from it.
Tajima thinking: That brat...he added a small extension made of condensed water at the tip of his blade. Not even my Sharingan was able to spot that. He must die otherwise the kid will grow to be a serious threat.
Tajima starts making handsings but just before he finishes doing them, Butsuma appears from above and strikes with his sword. Tajima blocks and the two men engage in sword fighting. While Butsuma has the upper strenght, Tajima is compensating with speed. Butsuma tries to decapitate Tajima, but the latter skillfully dodges and jumps above the Senu's head. While being in mid-air, Tajima makes a couple of handsings.
Tajima: Fire release! Great purge!!!*
He spits a giant wave of fire at Butsuma. Before the Senju can react, Tobirama makes a couple of handsings while appearing exactly next to him.
Tobirama: Water release! Water vortex!
From the ground, a vortex of water emerges surrounding the two Senju and clashes with the fire stream, extinguishing it.
Izuna uses the opportunity and places his hands on the ground.
Izuna: Earth release! Spikes of death!
Several spikes appear from the ground, aimed at the Senju. Butsuma waves his blade while running two fingers accros it.
Butsuma: Wind release! Cutting edge contact!
Butsuma releases from his sword a slash of wind that severs the spikes.
The two teams of combatants stop for a moment.
Tajima: Well,well...it seems that the Senju are working good together. How 'bout we turn this into a full scale battle?*
Butsuma as he raises his hand: Senju clan! Attack!!!!
The countless Senju shinobis dash towards the Uchiha. At the same moment, the Uchihas ready their kunais and dash towards the Senjus. Clashes are all over the area. While the Senjus have the upper strenght the Uchihas compensate with their unparalleled speed and Sharingan.
Soon there is blood everywhere. The Uchihas have an agressive fighting style and they rely mostly on the swordplay combined with their Sharingan, while the Senjus are mostly in the deffensive.
Butsuma shouts desperate: Hashirama!!!! Watch out!!!

The panel shows Hashirama Senju watching shocked the development of the battle. He cannot belive his eyes and he has.lost his focus. He is unaware of the danger lurking next to him. An Uchiha appears above him while making handsigns

Random Uchiha: Fire release! Fierce blade!
The Uchiha creates in his palm a fire sword and he aims at Hashirama's head. Just before Hashirama can react Madara appears next to him in a crouched position, pushes him away with one hand and the other one he places on the ground.
Madara: Earth release! *Protective dome!!!
From the ground a dome of earth emerges and surrounds Madara protecting him from the sword attack, while Hashirama was pushed away. But the danger isn't over it.*
Hashirama gets on his two. His face shows that he finally realised that he was close to death. His eyes are now filled with determination. And the timing is perfect. At that very moment, he makes a leap backwards. A blade just missed his head.
Hashirama: So you're Madara's brother...
Izuna is shown ready to kill. He already has the Sharingan active.
Izuna puts away the blade and makes several handsings.*
Izuna: Lightning release!!! Pillars of thunder!!
Izuna releases from his palms several lightning beams at Hashirama. The Senju boy reacts instantly and creates and earth wall to protect him. He keeps on making handsings and he releases from the earth wall several earth spikes at Izuna. By using the Sharingan, the young Uchiha dodges all of them.
Suddenly Madara lands between them.
Madara: Stop this!!! Now! Izuna back off!!!
Hashirama: Madara we need to stop tje fighting!*
Madara: I know...but we are mere childs. How can we stop the fighting?!?
Hashirama: Together. We can fight them together. I have an idea...how good are you with water release?

The panel shows Butsuma fighting his way towards Tajima. The Senju is quite skilled with his sword. His style is based more on raw strenght. Butsuma is combining his swordplay with earth release, using devastating punches and hard hits by his sword. An Uchiha tries to hit him with a fire release jutsu, but Butsuma simply cuts through the flames with his sword,then he releases from his palm an earth spike that impales in the chest, the enemy. On the other side, Tajima is using his speed and clean, precise slashes to take out the Senjus. Suddenly the combatants are face to face. The two leaders met eachother.

Tajima Uchiha while making handsings: Fire release! Majestic annihilation!*
Butsuma Senju: Water release! Wave devastation!
Both leaders release giant elemental jutsus at one another. As the two justsus came in proximity one to another, they cancel eachother out. Butsuma leaps back and shouts.
Butsuma: Semju clan!!!! Regroup!!!
Tajima uses the same move.
Tajima: Uchihas!!!
Butsuma to all the Senjus that just appeared behind him: We are going to use our clan's devastating attack! The Tsunami cataclismic event!
Tajima: Uchihas! Fire release! We are going to burn their souls out of their bodies!!!
All the shinobis start making handsings. The Senjus are making handsigns for the water release, while the Uchiha for the fire release.*

The panel is switched. It shows Izuna Uchiha. While his brother and Hashirama are talking he spots something. Tobirama preparing all by himself a jutsu. Suddenly Izuna appears behind him and prepares to impale Tobirama. As the blade is getting closer and closer, Izuna's sword pierces Tobirama's chest. But the future Hokage bursts, splashing water all around him, water that*envelops Izuna in a *bubble.

The real Tobirama lands near the bubble. He throws a severe look at Izuna.
Tobirama: Izuna Uchiha. Today. Is the day you die!

The scene shows the two enemy groups preparing to destroy one another. As they are about to finish the handsings, everyone's hatred can be felt in the air. The intensity of the battle is about to reach its climax.

The Uchihas at the same time: Fire release!!! Torch of the demons!!!!
The Uchiha's fire release jutsus, combines in a giant demon made of fire, that wields a flame sword. The demon aims at the Senjus.
The Senjus at the same time: Water release! Tsunami cataclismic event!!!
The Senju's jutsu creates out of nowhere an impressive wave attack. The wave is roughly 200m tall.*
The wave and the demon are about to clash. That would pretty much destroy the entire area, causing collateral damage. Suddenly, between the jutsus, two boys land. The future Hokage...Hashirama Senju. And the greatest threat the world has ever known...Madara Uchiha. They both start making complicated handsings at the same time. The moment they are done, they clap their right hands together and they both shout.
Hashirama and Madara: Earth release!!!/Water release!!! Giant earth wall!!!/Giant wave attack!!!
And suddenly the unexpected happens. Instead of forming a giant earth wall and a giant wave to combat the demon...almost instantly an immense forest emerges around them. The trees are so high that they stop the wave and block the demon.
Madara shocked: What the...?!?
Hashirama thinking: Could it be...the moment we claped hands...
Madara thinking: It seems that...our chakras...created a new element?!? But how is that even possible!?! It shouldn't be possible!*

The panel shows Butsuma Senju and Tajima Uchiha looking at the two boys.

Butsuma thinking shocked: Wood release!!!! The same kekkei genkai as the Sage of the Sixth Paths!!!*
Tajima thinking: So...it seems that those two brats are the key...
Butsuma: Tajima...
Tajima: I know Butsuma...they just recreated a kekkei genkai.
Butsuma: While being two separate people.
Tajima: This means...
Butsuma with determination: That they are the true heirs of the two brothers!
Tajima smiling: And that their chakras complete eachother! Imagine what they could do together...the world could be at their feet!

The end.
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Good to see you back Vishnu... hopefully on a more permanent basis this time too.

Dude... I would at least like a cliff notes version of how you have Madara ending up being as sadistic as he is based on what you just wrote.
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Vishnu, the man/myth/forum legend. Welcome back to the mayhem.

J_H, I've send enough posts lately from you and Jericho that could've breathed some life and creativity to these threads. Hopefully just being here helps you get the cobwebs out for your fanfiction.

And I can't remember who but someone posted about checking another site for their posts, Narutobase. From what I saw there's a lot of activity there without the quality of the postings here. Just FYI to anyone wondering from that same posts. Also they appear to be biting tons of stuff from here away. Saw the same prediction posted as an original by like 4 people. Sad and pathetic. *smh*
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J_H: i will provide much more than cliff notes.
Kidd: Thanks man. It's good to be back. But i have to confess something. The whole "atmosphere" here...died. Simply died. It feels like it's not the same thing anymore.

Anyway...for the sake of old times, i will write another prediction. Throw at me every criticism that you've got.
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I was bored So here you go

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The Scene starts off where it left off.

Butsuma: So Tajima it appears we are at a predicament what should we do.

Tajima: why should we change things let’s do what we normally do, but I can’t believe that my Son Madara Uchiha befriended your son a Senju Dog

Batsuma: I was about to say the same thing how could a noble Senju like Harishima befriend one of the Uchiha Trash

Both Tajima and Batsuma attack eachother with their Kunai as their sons Izuna and Tobirama Jump in the air

Izuna: Great Firball Jutsu

Tobirama: Dancing Water Dragon

Both attacks clash and cancel each other out with a mist covering the battle field

Tajima: it seems the battle has turned in our favour Batsuma with our eyes we can still see but what about you.....

Tajima get punched in the gut

Batsuma: when you shout I don’t need eyes to know where you are

Tajima: you Senju …..

Batsuma Kicks him in the head sending him flying a few feet away,

Batsuma: still talking

While this is going on Tobirama and Izuna are clashing with their Kunai and sword all over the battle field

Izuna: you are quite skilled for a Senju Dog (puffing)

Tobirama: your not bad yourself (puffing)

Batsuma: I have had enough with this wind tempest
The steam clears

Batsuma: it seems this is going nowhere Tajima

Tajima: I agree, lets finish this

Batsuma & Tajima in Unison: NOW!!

A group of Sneju and a group of Uchiha jump out from the trees

Tajima: hahaha you dog, you had the same Idea as mine

Batsuma: it seems so, shall we continue

Tajima: Uchiha Secret technique Great Uchiha fireball

All the Uchiha shoot a fireball out at the same one joining together to make one massive one

Batsuma: Senju secret Technique Great Senju Tsunami

All the Senju make tsunami that join together to make one. The attacks are about to collide when Madara and Harishima come in-between the attacks and stop them

Everyone together apart from Madara and Harishima: How the Fuck did they stop that (all Jaws dropped)

Harishima: We must stop this fighting with our Clans and learn to Love and forgive, the children of our clans cannot keep dying what will be left of the future…

Everyone slowly fall asleep

2hrs later

Harishima: and together we can make a new FUTURE

Batsuma and Tajima: You Done

Harishima: Yeah

Batsuma: well done that was very good, here is a shiny sticker

Harishima: SHINIY

Madara: Oh Boy

Madara wakes everyone else up

Madara: what he means to say is this we need to stop fighting and start loving

He then proceeds to bend Harishima Over and fuck him in the ass till he climaxes

Everyone: WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST SEE

Madara that is what we need to do

Random Uchiha: GAAAAYYYYYYY!!!
Madara: who the fuck just said that, how am I gay I was the giver I had my dick so far up his ass it was coming out his mouth, I am not gay that is just prison Love, he is the gay one cause he just got fucked up the ass.

Harishima stays quite

Izuna: I can not fucking believe you just did that bro, you are gay, end of

Madara: Izuna I am not gay I just explained it, you have to believe me Izuna, your my last brother I love you

Izuna: FUUUCKKK NOOOOOOO, stay away from me I am not gay, I used to think it was just brotherly love when you fondled me in the shower but now I realise you were getting turned on you faggot.

Everyone looks at the two brothers: he does what with you

A Uchiha: your both gay haha, the future heads of our clan are gay we have not got any hope for the future, everyone knows that only the Dads is the Uchiha clans can fondle their children not brothers, the rest of the Uchiha agree

Batsuma: OH shit Oh shit I cant believe you just said that, guys look at the Gay Clan hahaha

All the Senju laugh together

Tobirama: but dad Since bro has been hanging with this Uchiha trash his been….

Harishima kicks him in the face

Tajima: I just realised something in our magical hax tablet it says something great will happen when the DNA of a Senju and the DNA of a Uchiha mix

Batsuma: this has been passed down to us aswell

Harishima: THAT IS ENOUGH (Imagine Morgan Freeman Shouting)

Tobirama: Danm bro that was off the hizz house

Harishima pauses for a second giggles: thanks bro

Tobirma: And now its not

Harishima: wood style, Wood Prison

Branches trap everyone instantly

Tajima: So this is the power that happens when the Uchiha and Senju combine

Harishima: if you want to live you must obey everything that I say we will create….

A few hours later

Harishima: and that’s it

Izuna: wait what just happened I think I nodded off

Tobirama: same here

Both Tajima and Batsuma: Shut up will do whatever you say just shut up

Izuna: Wait, wait, wait let me get this straight, my gay brother fucks this guy, and because his DNA got in to this Senju dog he has suddenly gained a new element

Tajima and Batsuma: Yeah pretty much

Izuna: I thought so but he literally just got this new power how the fuck does he know such a power jutsu that he can trap the Uchiha and Senju elite

Harishima: this is what you call shitty writing
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So here it is... Fuki fuki time for you envy bitches learn something the boss is here....bakayarou konoyarou...Enjoy it

Naruto Chapter 624*

Shinobi

Scene starts with both Clanleaders and their sons standing in front of each other ready to fight til death.
Hashirama and Madara are watching from beside how their alliance for peace is tested the first time.
Tajima Uchiha is watching the clanleader of the Senju Butsuma in battle stance while glaring in disappointment on his elder son Madara.*

Tajima: So you choose the path of a traitor Madara! I always knew you were hardheaded but not that you were that dumb to betray us.
Madara: I understand your point father, the Clan interest is a duty for the son of the Uchiha Clan leader. But the duty of a Shinobi is to maintain honor on the battlefield.*
Im no coward to lure my rival out to stab him in the back.
Izuna: Brother... *Thinking: whats going in his mind.
Tajima: You dare to call me a coward?
Madara: Right father and *I will make sure to show our enemies the true power of the great Uchiha Clan in a more honered way.
Madara turns to Hashirama with a smile.
Madara: Hashirama, guess we have to hold on a bit more time to do our change. Let's be real shinobi!!! Fight me Hashirama Senju!!!!
Hashirama:....(smiles)
Butsuma: I told you Hashirama, you can't be friends. Now tell us on which side you are?
Tobirama: Brother join us now.*
Hashirama: *It's no question about joining my family Tobirama! Father as long as you lead the Senju I'll give my life to protect my clan and those dear to me by fighting our enemies but you should know the day will come when I will change this cursed Shinobi system. I do not consider the Uchiha as our Enemy, i would rather call them our opponent. Madara, so be it. True Shinobi should understand each other, that there is no way beyond fighting to reach that state of understanding.*Madara!! Show me if you can beat me this time.
Tobirama: Hashi...thinking: i know how you feel about this but your still determined to bring it on. Thats my brother.*
Butsuma: Son....thinking: whats wrong with this boy, he really expects this brat to be his friend! Seems the Uchiha brat feels the same way. Maybe he's right and we old dogs failed after all...
Butsuma: Let's go boys we'll show this Uchiha scum their limits.

Back in present time
Edo Hashirama: So we fought ages along with our comrades trying to maintain peace. Every lost familymember and friend was a test to our friendship. But we kept the hatred away building on a better future we knew time will pass and sacrifices had to be made.
I remember us at the age of sixteen. *We already were the new leaders of our clan and finally the old hardheaded people who sent the children to war were outnumbered. Both clans elite fighters knew each other after decades of bloody battles. The relationship between the *Uchiha and Senju stabilized by time and we held a bit of symphaty for each other. Until that day...
Sasuke: Explain what happened?
Tobirama: Brother....

Back in the past*

Madara and Izuna are being hunted down by some unknown Ninja. On their back a crest similar to a swirl is seen.*

Izuna: We can't escape them Madara. We have to fight them now and kill as many of them as we can.
Madara: Sometimes retreat is the better option to gain time and strike back in the right moment. We are outnumbered in here and this clan is to dangerous to underestimate them brother. We know nothing about the Uzumakis techniques so we must be careful.*
Izuna: Fuck you Brother! You said it youself the Uchiha are no cowards... Im going all out!
Madara: Follow my order Izuna!!! You can't do as you please in a situation like this.

Izuna stops on a branch and prepares some Handseals.
Izuna: With their speed they won't be able to dodge this. Katon: Great fireball technique.

Izuna covers a big range with flames spreading towards the Uzumaki ninjas which were not ready for this surprise attack.
Uzumaki Teamleader: Shit he got us. Guys go down immediately!!!
Suddenly a younger girl of them rushes in front and opens a scroll.
Uzumaki Mito: I'll handle it. Uzumaki Sealing Technique: Secret Element Sealing!!!

The fire of Izunas attack is completely consumed by the scroll.
Mito: Now what goes around comes around. Shunshin no jutsu.

With immense speed the girl appears before Izuna and releases the fire back at him out of the scroll.
Izuna: Damn i can't dodge this anymore
Madara: Izuna!!!!! Mangekyou Sharingan: Susanoo

Madara activates Susanoo to catch Izuna out of range of the fire jutsu but...

Mito: I won't let you. Doton: Rising Earth wall!!!

Madaras Susanno Hand shatters the rising earth wall between him and his brother but the fire already consumed Izuna who's falling on the ground screaming in pain!

Madara: Brother!!! noooooo.....
You'll pay for this. Amaterasuu!!!!!

The Uzumaki Ninja are covered in black flames except the girl that hit Izuna covered herself in an eath dome to protect herself.*

Mito: Shit I couldn't rescue them. This is bad i have to escape.
Madara: I won't let you!!!

He activates the hole susanoo armor and pulls out the sword to slash her. Suddenly....

Tobirama: Suiton: Water dragon missile.
Hashirama: Wood release: Binding Forest

The water hits Izuna to cancel the fire burning his skin while Hashirama binds Madaras Susanoo in wood branches letting Mito escape.

Madara: Hashirama... You dare to let her escape...*
Hashirama: Madara, me and Tobi were sent to assist the Uzumaki as our allies in defending their territory. *You assisinated their leader. What did you expect. I can't let you kill her Madara... Im sorry my friend
Madara screams in anger: Friend??? You turned against me to rescue that bitch that hurt my brother!!!!
Hashirama: Im sorry but she's important to me I can't let you lay a finger*on here...*
Tobirama landing near his brother both with sad faces.
Tobirama: Damn you Izuna, how could you be so foolish my rival...
Hashirama: Madara let me heal his wounds.
Izuna coughing blood with his burnt skin
Izuna: Stop it! It's too late.... Brother seems I won't make it. Lead our clan to glory and don't fall for our enemy like I did this time. I'm proud of you. Take my eyes and lead the Uchiha to the future. Farewell brother...

Izuna loses his conciousness and his eyes turn grey...

Madara: Brother... Nooooooo!!!!!!!
Tobirama: Brother we have to leave. Uchiha reinforcments are coming at us. It's a whole bunch of them.*
Hashirama: WaitTobirama!
Madara....I knew one day our friendship will be tested out. We killed each others parents, brothers and sisters, lovers and friends Maybe you will choose another way for the future... But remember I never wanted that to happen... I'll be your friend aiming for that goal we cherish... I know its hard but revenge is no option. We have to build our alliance now! You now where we meet. Im sorry for Izuna. Goodbye friend.

Both senju vanish in the forest leaving Madara in suffer and pain for his little brother.

Back in present

Edo Hashirama:*
This incident was the main blow on our friendship. A lot of time passed and I already married that woman from the Uzumaki that killed Izuna that day. We were distant relatives with the Uzumaki Clan and I knew her since my childhood. Madara finally had a reason to hate me and to be consumed by that hatred in letting the world know his pain. He remembered the people he lost..... started to put revenge before love and people who knew about his respect and honored way of shinobi were shown a new darkside of Uchiha Madara. He killed his own clansmen or ordered them to sucide missions to maintain his goals.
Tobirama: That's what i meant Sasuke. The great love he held for his brother set him on the path of darkness...just like you it seems...
Sasuke:.....(looking confused)
Hashirama: Although he was a very intelligent man he didn't lost his cool lead his clan better than anyone before. One day he ordered me to a meeting... Years passed and the clans fed up with killing each other. Because of the pressure of his fellows he ordered me to invite the leaders for a truce.
Orochimaru: The Founding of the Village...Konohagakure
Hashirama: Thats were it started. We set the place and started diplomacy acts with the feudal lords to gather other clans to share this new home.
Minato: Shodai sama...then why did Madara joined and also invited you to this alliance? The way you describe his personalityit seems from the start he aimed for betrayal!!!
Hashirama: Hiruzen you choose a well successor with a sharp thinking. Im proud of you!!
Hiruzen: A decision that put me on death list...(looking a Orochimaru) So it had to be the right one. Thank you sensei
Tobirama: Right 4th Hokage... He aimed for that. My brother was happy about Madaras agreement and were fooled by his emotions.
After founding the Village and electing my brother as Hokage he lost the arm as a leader and felt classified and ashamed about his failing. So he made an alliance with the Hidden Stone while the Tsuchikage were in the Land of Fire after a Kage meeting where we arranged *the balance of the tailed beasts. Madara secretly forced to
Tsuchikage to refuse to the agreement since the Kyuubi belongs to Konoha what would have provoked a war.*
The Stone sent a special unit to capture the Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi and succeded before Madara got rid of them and kept the Beast for his own purpose. He fled the Village abandoned by his clan and wanted to get revenge on Konoha.
Hashirama: And then he came back to fight me at the Valley of End...

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what you wrote there Lost swordsman is not a prediction for the next chapter but what will happen in the next 1 month or so you should flesh it out make it longer, also everything you wrote is very predictable and is what most likely will happen. just to let you know people don't come to read what is most likely to happen they come to read what the certain author wants to happen, may it be rikudo, vishnu or anyone else just predicting the obvious is no fun.
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Wow GAY- Man you predicted that I would let Mito kill Izuna...maybe your an Oracle or something like that fuck... Thank you for the critics.... Im still burnin these retards in here
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Nah im chillin just having some fun here... Take it easy amigo
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