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Old 01-28-2007, 01:57 AM   #76
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

hot stuff.


im really into this fanfic. i usually dont get interestedin fanfics as much anymore. but this has me hooked like its the actual show.
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Old 01-29-2007, 12:38 PM   #77
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thaks alot, i will update tuesday and it will be good, but i got to go, so thanks for the rep.
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i wonder why u havent tried advertising this
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Yea you should copy this on the Fanfic http://s3.freepowerboards.com/narutoload2/portal.php section of this site they will love it
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Old 01-30-2007, 03:37 PM   #80
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that sounds cool, if ya want ot go ahead. i will update wensday becouse this coumputer wont read my disk. but thanks for the info.
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Old 01-31-2007, 12:38 PM   #81
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Authors notes: Well here’s chapter 14, I tried my best to make it as good as I could, but I had a lot going on this weekend, and I didn’t get to finish typing it intel Monday after school. Anyways I hope ya like it, and the next chapter is when it really starts to get good. So enjoy.
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Chapter 14: The Shy Girl Speaks!
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*Ok Hiro, are we going to go talk to her?* ask Yodaime

*Uuumm, yes,…..but what…….what do I say to her?* ask Hiro

*Well……just ask her, how she feels and then just trust your gut* says Yodaime. ^^^

Hiro slowly walks over to the brown haired girl standing by the tree in the arena. When he gets a few feet from her, he looks down at the ground and then takes a big gulp and looks at her. She is starring at the ground and Hiro notices, how pretty she looks, she has on a blue shirt and is wearing a skirt that goes down 2 inches from her knees. ^^^

“Uumm, hi……Tiffany, you look….look really nice.” Says Hiro, as he looks in to her eyes, they are light blue and remind Hiro of the sky on a clear day.

“Ooohh,…..thank you Hiro…you…you look…uumm….dirty..haha” says Tiffany, who looks up at Hiro and giggles at the sight of Hiro, who is dirty and has blood on his clothes.

“Oh, well……I’m going to go clean up after were done talking….so what did you want?” ask Hiro, as he walks over to the tree and sits down by Tiffany, who had sat down.

“Well…… I …….. I was wondering……if maybe you wanted, to go with me…..to the dance tomorrow night….but if you don’t want to, that’s ok, I’ll understand” ask Tiffany, as she looks down at the ground.

“I…. I would……. I would love to go with you” answers Hiro, who looks over at the Kunoichi.

“Oh ok…. I see….. wait, you will!” says Tiffany, surprised by Hiro’s answer, she lends over and gives him a hug. ^^^

While Tiffany is hugging Hiro, she looks up at the sky and sees a shooting star. ^^^

“Wow, the night is so beautiful” says Tiffany, as she pulls away from Hiro.



“Yes it is beautiful” answers Hiro, who looks up at the sky. ^^^

The two ninja look at the sky for a while, the cool wind blows through their hair and this makes Tiffany shiver, so she gets closer to Hiro who puts his arm around her, and she lays her head on his shoulder.
The two stay there a little while longer, while the wind starts to blow a little harder and the leaves on the tree starts to fall around them. ^^^

“Well, I guess its time we get going, its 2:00 in the morning, and Tsunade is probable worrying about you” says Hiro, as he looks down at the girl.

“Yeah I guess your right, we should” answers Tiffany. ^^^

As the two stand up, Tiffany lends over and kisses Hiro on the cheek. Then she waves goodbye and leaves, after Hiro tells her he will see her at the dance. Hiro then leaves and goes home to take a long hot bath. ^^^
{The next day at Tsunades}

“So, Tsunade, you never told me, who she was and why you have been looking after her for the past 4 years.” Says Hinata, as she takes a sip of the tea she is drinking.

“Well Hinata…….the truth is, no one hear knows, but me, because I must keep it that way,…….although…. I guess I can tell you.
Tiffany is the daughter of…. Asuma Sarutobi..” says Tsunade, as she too takes a sip of her tea and studies Hinata’s reaction.

“But how…… Asuma has been dead for 11 years.” Ask Hinata, a little surprised by the news she just heard.

“Well, I was surprised to find that out also……but it seems, that Asuma had fathered her and when he died, for some reason, her mom left her with a guardian. Then 4 years ago, I came across a letter from Asuma, that was meant for me,….apparently he met someone really special and the two got together, but as you know Asuma was the 4th Hokages son, so he was not suppose to have a child yet, also I believe that the main reason he didn’t tell anyone else…is because Tiffany’s mom…..was a rogue ninja….and I also believe she was a member of the….Uchiha clan..” says Tsunade

“What….but I thought Sasuke was the only member left?” says Hinata, as she lends on her knees, waiting for Tsunades answer.

“Well I believe that maybe she was a rogue ninja, before their clan was wiped out, so no one would know about her, but never less, I know this because, the first year she came here, when we went a way for awhile, Tiffany got really mad at this kid and she started chasing him, when I caught up to them, her eyes were blood shot red and as you know


her eyes are light blue, but I don’t think she realizes that she has such a powerful gift yet.” Answers Tsunade, who turns to see Tiffany starting down the stairs.

“Uumm, am I interrupting” ask Tiffany, as she reaches the last step and turns to look at the two ladies in the room.

“Oh, of course not” answers Hinata.

“Well…. I ……. I was going to go get my dress for the dance” says Tiffany, as she looks down at the ground.

“Oh ok, well hurry back, so we can do your makeup…..you want to look really nice for Hiro, don t you?” says Tsunade with a smile, but this just makes Tiffany blush and she goes out the door.

“Well Hinata, she reminds me a lot of you…..she’s really shy, but I think if she is around Hiro maybe she will out grow it” says Tsunade, who turns and slaps Hinata on the leg.

“Maybe….well, I guess I better get going, so I can help Hiro get ready” says Hinata, as she stands up and gives Tsunade a hug and leaves.
{A Little While Later at Hinata’s}
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Old 01-31-2007, 12:39 PM   #82
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

Chapter 14 countinued

“Ok Hiro, you dressed yet?” ask Hinata, as she opens the door and sees Hiro standing by the mirror naked.

“Mom!!……what are you doing” yells Hiro, who grabs a towel and covers up, really quick.

“ My bad……but it’s, not like I haven’t seen you before” says Hinata, as she turns around blushing.

“Ok Hiro, all finished, you look handsome” says Hinata, as she finishes putting the bow tie on Hiro’s suit.

“Well….mom…..what should I do?” ask Hiro

“Son, the only thing, you can do, is tell her how you really feel, don’t hold nothing back…..and as your dad once told me……if you have something precious in your life, you have to protect, even if that means giving your life for that person, if it’s precious to you, you have to protect with both arms…so remember that,…..so son if you truly like her, then tell her how you feel” answers Hinata, as she smiles and gives hi ma hug, then Hiro leaves the house. ^^^



Hiro starts walking towards the area where the dance is. The dance is outside and with the light breeze blowing, it is perfect for it. Hiro gets closer to the dance and when he rounds the corner, he sees Tiffany, standing by the fence, she has on a blue dress with no straps and her hair is down to her shoulder blades, it is gently blowing in the breeze. ^^^

“Uumm…Hi….you look unbelievable” says Hiro, as he walks up to Tiffany.

“Thanks….you….you look really great too.” Answers Tiffany, who walks up to Hiro and hugs him.

“Do you….want to dance.” Ask Tiffany

“Well…..sure….but I’m not good” answers Hiro, as Tiffany grabs his hand and leads him to the dance floor. ^^^

Hiro starts out good, but then he steps on her feet, and Tiffany tells him not to worry about it. Hiro notices how happy Tiffany is, because he remembers back to the past 4 years and how unhappy she was, the only time she ever seemed happy, was when she was paired with him during training. He then notices how the moon light was shining off her hair and the way the light reflected off her dress. Hiro was just amazed by how beautiful she was, he never saw her in anything else but a blue sweater and black pants that went to her knees. After a while of dancing and giggling because of Hiro’s clumsy feet, the two ninjas decide to go for a walk. ^^^

“So Tiffany, this has been the best night of my life” says Hiro, as he turns to Tiffany and smiles.

“Yeah…I’m really glad we got together….but Hiro, I was wondering if……if maybe you wanted to be….to be more than friends?” ask Tiffany, who looks down at the ground and bites her lip.

“I…..*What should I say*…..I…yes!!…..I do, if you do” answers Hiro, as he turns in front of Tiffany and grabs her hands so she looks at him.

“Really!!..’ says Tiffany, as she looks up at the blond haired boy, with brownish, green eyes and then she lends up and they start to kiss.

*Oh my…her lips are so soft…..what do I do* ask Hiro to himself, as Tiffany puts her arms around his head.

*Aright Hiro…yeah!* says Yodaime

*You…what are you watching for…..you pervert * says Hiro ^^^


After a couple minutes the two remove their lips from each other and just stare at on another. ^^^

“Hiro…this has been the happiest day of my life” says Tiffany, as she lends over and hugs Hiro and whispers in his ear, “ I love you”

*What do I say?* ask Hiro

*Just tell her, how you feel* answers Yodaime

“I…..I love you too!!” says Hiro, as they both start kissing again.

“What are you two doing” ask Sasuke

“Uuuhh…we were just…” starts Hiro

“I’m just kidding guys…..but hey Hiro, remember in the morning, you need to come by Tsunades…ok” says Sasuke, as he walks away waving.

“Well….I guess we need to get going huh” says Hiro, as him and Tiffany start walking towards her house. ^^^

The two walk together and stop in front of Tsunades. ^^^

“Well Hiro, tonight has been….the best ever, its like a dream” says Tiffany

“Yes, it has…Tiffany, I want to tell you something……I promise to protect you always and to never leave you” says Hiro, as he lends forward and kisses Tiffany again.

“I know you wont leave me, because if you do I’ll hunt you down and kill you” says Tiffany, who smiles at Hiro, who pulls her closer to him, to lock lips again. ^^^

The two say good-bye and Hiro heads home, feeling like he’s floating on clouds. ^^^

“So, did you have a good time?” ask Hinata, as Hiro enters the room.

“Yes, me and Tiffany are…together” answers Hiro, as he turns to go up the stairs.

“Wait a second…..you and her didn’t,….you know..did you?” ask Hinata, who walks to the foot of the stairs and looks up at Hiro.

“What!!!…mom that’s sick!!” answers Hiro, who runs up the stairs to his room.



“Haha, well that’s good, you should wait intell your ready” says Hinata to her self.
{Next day at Tsunades office}

“Well Hiro…..we are sending you with Kakashi and Sasuke on a “A” ranked mission, you are to do what ever Kakashi says, understand” says Tsunade

“Ok sure, but…..what is the mission?” ask Hiro, who turns to look up at her.

“We have news that Naruto, has been sighted and we are to investigate and if need be, try and stop him!!” answers Kakashi.

*Finally…. I get to go after my dad* says Hiro to himself

*Yes…but Hiro, this is not going to be easy, for if the Kyubi, has succeeded with his plans, then he maybe to powerful for anyone to stop.* says Yodaime

*I know, but…..that wont stop me…I promised my mom, and I wont break that promise!!* says Hiro

“Ok Hiro…we leave tomorrow…so if there’s anything you need to do, you better get it done and get a good night’s sleep, because we leave early and I’m not sure how far, we will be going” says Kakashi, as he puts a hand on Hiro’s shoulder.

“Ok…I’m ready…lets do it” says Hiro, as he stands up, and puts his fist up in the air.

“You are defiantly his son!!” says Sasuke, as they all laugh, Hiro not understanding why.
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Authors notes: Well, this chapter was sort of easy to right, because the scenes are sort of what happened to me at our home coming dance. But I hope ya liked it, and please read and review like always. Thanks for all the support, and I will try and finish the next chapter soon.
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Old 01-31-2007, 08:42 PM   #83
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

Man i hope this story is a lot longer cause i don't want it to end cause you are a really good storyteller except for all the spelling errors and the fact that Sarutobi is older than yondamie kinda distracted me
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Old 02-01-2007, 12:58 AM   #84
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Um only problem i have is that asumas the son of the third hokage (sandaime) not Yondaime...but the forth hokage thing...makes hiro and tiffany...incest...eeeeew. Otherwise this is a freakin awsome fanfic XD!!
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Old 02-01-2007, 04:48 PM   #85
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dude it doesn't the fourth only watches so it is perverted unless he takes control
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Old 02-01-2007, 06:33 PM   #86
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ooh they kissed lol, good chapter
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Old 02-01-2007, 06:40 PM   #87
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it is i can't wait for more
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Old 02-01-2007, 08:21 PM   #88
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I AM SO TOUCHED T_T and u make these gurlz in here sound so hot xD og heres a picture of them sorta expert this is a gurl lolz
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Nice thats pretty cool
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