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Old 04-07-2007, 10:30 AM   #106
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Hi I joined just to reply to this story. If you type in narutoxhinata at google this story bis on the first page. Thats How aI found it. One problem. It should have been Negi and Tenten. Not Rock lee. my opine on
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Old 04-07-2007, 10:39 AM   #107
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Old 04-07-2007, 10:41 AM   #108
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umm this used to say where my signature.
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Old 04-07-2007, 11:33 AM   #109
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Don't double post, the mods lay the smackdown on your ass...

Nice fanfic btw, I wonder if Hinata's baby will have the Byakugan.
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Old 04-07-2007, 09:15 PM   #110
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Thanks for letting me know. Waiting for next chapter.
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Old 04-17-2007, 12:31 PM   #111
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holy crap its been like a month since i have been able to get on, but i have some free time now and i will try to put the chapter on wensday if i can finnaly get my floopy to work, well i am so sorry for the wait but i really want to finish this story thats why i wanted some one to finish it for me, but i will try my best to do that.
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Old 04-17-2007, 01:10 PM   #112
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great story! it's fun 2 read!
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Old 04-17-2007, 03:51 PM   #113
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once again, i really am sorry about not being able to continue the saga for you, but now is just really not a great time. my girlfriend just went into rehab...
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Old 04-17-2007, 07:24 PM   #114
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thank god your back i was, you left me un such suspense, i realy enjoy reading your fan fiction, its like the best please post the next chapter as soon as you can cause this is one bad as fan fic
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Old 04-18-2007, 12:12 PM   #115
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Authors Notes: Well ya all talked me into doing more chapters so, I did. This took my awhile to do because like I said, I am really busy right now. But here’s chapter 15, enjoy!
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Chapter 15: Out of Time!!
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“Hiro are you ready for to day?” ask Hinata

“Well I guess so….. but I just wonder how he is and how are we going to stop him, if he is a powerful as everyone says he is.” Answers Hiro, as he takes a sip of his tea.

“Hiro just trust in your self, and never give up…….and remember everything you have been taught.” Answers Hinata, as she walks over and hugs the blond boy.

“Yeah I know mom…..its just….. I’ve never met him and ……oh well, it doesn’t matter,….but I guess I better get going mom, I’m going to go meet Tiffany before I leave so, I guess,……this is goodbye for now” says Hiro, as he walks over to Hinata, and gives her a big hug…….and she lets a tear fall from her eye.

“Yeah I guess it is goodbye for now, but you promised you would be back, so you better or else” says Hinata, as she pulls away from Hiro and looks him in the eyes and then gives him a kiss on the cheek and sends him out the door, with a wave and goodbye.

*Oh Hiro……I hope you find him and bring him home….. I love you both so much, if something was to happen I don’t know what I would do…*says Hinata to her self as she watches the boy leave down the street.
{At Orochimaru’s hideout}

“Ok, Kyubi, I’m getting tired of all this traveling and killing….lets go back to that damn village and kill them all”says Orochimaru as he walks past Naruto

“Hahaha, what’s your problem….. I told you I would let you destroy the village in the leaves, didn’t I” says Kyubi, as he takes a huge chunk out of the wild boars meat he is eating.

“….yes….but why must we go to that village…are you not powerful anofe yet….besides the Kaze Kage, wont die that easily” answers Orochimaru

“No worry’s…..he wont be a match for me” says Kyubi ^^^
{Back at Tsunades}

Hiro walks up to the door and knocks, after a couple minutes of silence; he opens the door and walks in. He looks around and sees no one there, so he heads upstairs to see if some one is there.


When he gets up to the top, he hears someone singing so he gets to the door and opens it. Inside he sees Tsunade naked drying off her hair, he stands there for a minute then Tsunade turns around and sees him and for a second says nothing, so Hiro turns around as Tsunade pulls on her bath robe. ^^^

“Um….so…..so where is Tiffany?” ask Hiro, as he takes a big gulp of air.

*Oh my…..she looks better than ever!!* says Yodaime

*You pervert* says Hiro, shaking his head.

“ Well she left with Gaara, this morning, they went back to the sand village and she went to retrieve something and bring it back” says Tsunade, as she walks past Hiro and goes into her room to put on clothes.

“ Oh…why didn’t she tell me, she knew I was leaving today didn’t she?” ask Hiro as he follows Tsunade, but then turns around again as Tsunade drops the bathrobe and pulls on some white panties and gets dress.

“Well, she said it was very important for her to go….so, I guess she must have forgot.” Says Tsunade, as she heads down stairs, Hiro following her.

“Oh, well tell her, I’m going to miss her and I hope I can see her soon.” Says Hiro, as he heads towards the door.

“Hiro…..be careful and listen to Kakashi, hell keep you alive.” Says Tsunade as she walks into the kitchen. ^^^

Hiro leaves the house and meets Kakashi and Sasuke, after getting some lunch they head out towards the village that Naruto was last sighted. ^^^
{Back at Orochimaru’s}

Orochimaru and Naruto start towards the sand village, when they come across a sand village guard. ^^^

“Orochimaru….take care of him and quick” says Kyubi

“…..why do I have to do all the dirty work, I have been for years now and I’m tired of it” says Orochimaru

“Really…..well I guess I can deal with that” says Kyubi, as he stands up by Orochimaru and turns as if to leave, then suddenly turns around and with one hand goes through some hand signs and yells “ Burning fist jutsu” and Naruto’s right hand turns fiery red and he jabs Orochimaru in the chest and like a hot knife through butter, his hand and 3 inches of his arm slide into Orochimaru chest, which makes him spit up blood. ^^^

“AAAAAhhh…….why you…aaahh..” says Orochimaru, as he grabs Naruto’s arm.

“Well look, who is helpless now, hahaha, so Orochimaru, its been fun, but its time to say good bye” says Kyubi, as he grabs Orochimaru’s heart and pulls it out of his chest, allowing Orochimaru to see his heart before falling to the ground and taking his last breath of air. ^^^

The sand ninja hears this and when he sees Naruto step out of the woods, he takes off towards the village, when Naruto pulls out a kyuni with his bloody hand and throws it at the ninja and it imbeds itself into his skull, droping the ninja to the ground in a bloody pool. ^^

“Well all we have to do now is take care of Gaara” says Kyubi.

*Well I hope Tiffany is safe, Gaara better take care of her*says Hiro.
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Authors notes: Well I hope ya like it, I know its shorter than normal, but I have little time to work on it, and I will try my best to hurry on the next one, but please pm me or post your thoughts ok, thanks and have a great week.
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

fun story...I hope it'll come more of this story
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ok, im glad you like it please let others know about it.
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Old 04-19-2007, 06:45 PM   #118
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hope the next one is a bit longer, keep up the good work coondawger2001
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Old 04-19-2007, 09:31 PM   #119
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

this is seriously the best fanfic that i've ever read, and that is by no means a meager compliment. your storytelling and imagery expertise is astounding, and the effort you are putting into this saga is greatly appreciated.
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Old 04-20-2007, 12:28 PM   #120
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Re: The future hokage!: a NarutoxHinata stroy.

wow guys thanks alot, i havent had time to type the next chapter but i will get next week. i dont have internet at the house so i wont be back on intell monday but thanks alot for the support. the next one will be as long as the others. well i got to go, please tell others about it ok. thanks bye.
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