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Old 02-01-2007, 10:05 AM   #1
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ummm...This section makes most sense to put this in.
its a poem i amde for english class please read and commenthttp://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47826498/
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Old 02-01-2007, 10:19 AM   #2
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Re: poem

oh i hate poems!!!!!

but that one...in a wierd way...it was kinda funny..i dont know why

any way thanx
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Old 02-01-2007, 10:27 AM   #3
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It is not bad for a poem at all!
some parts were hard to understand at first because you didn't have punctuation...
it is a little...gloomy tho....if you tried to brighten the next one up, i think that it would be more enjoyable
not bad at all, it rhymed, and btw....what grade did you get?
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Old 02-01-2007, 11:09 AM   #4
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i got an A on it,the punctuation is just bad cause i never typed a poem before only written so the format fels kina strange
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well, awesome on your grade!
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Old 02-01-2007, 11:24 AM   #6
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thanks,i probably have the next part up by tommorow
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Old 02-01-2007, 12:12 PM   #7
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That poem was awesome. i got a B when i wrote a poem. she said it was too depressing. umm.... yeah. i WAS kinda depressed when i wrote it, yeah.
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thanks,and your teacher was a dumbass poetry is a reflection of the human emotion that makes us livng connected souls,and you did it right if it reflected how you felt while writing.your teacher should know that
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