NL the Anime Discussion Thread - Page 8

OnE473 · 03-16-2007, 04:43 PM

Ill help with it also i currently have alot of time on my hands Lily =/ you know the reason >_<

Gamestop doesn't like it whne u show up to work buzzed =(

DarkAztek · 03-16-2007, 08:10 PM

I'm not looking heavily into grammar and wording. That is easily changeable. The part that really matters is the story itself. It's a weird take and I normally like weird stuff. (I just figured I should try and make SOME kind of constructive criticism.)

Seal_master · 03-16-2007, 08:19 PM

Bravo lily bravo i just read the whole thing and i love it good job

Lily229 · 03-17-2007, 01:28 AM

Well if DA's read it and approves then I must be doing something good XD.

@.@ I hired a beta reader but she's a fucking lazy ass meanie pants -.-;;;. Either way, already a quater of a way done with chapter 12. I'm hoping that I can have maybe a double chapter post? o.O; Lets hope ^^

Xei · 03-18-2007, 05:11 AM

what ever you do i'm here to cheer for you!
L-I-L-Y go lily go!

dEcCrIx · 03-18-2007, 05:57 AM

great chapter lily...

very impressive and theres a lot of action there...

*chuckled on the very thought of sakura taming a virus*

i hav to say.... they deserve each other

*Sakura* · 03-18-2007, 06:40 AM

*slaps dec* =/ i own you

btw lily ive got some ideas, PM me whenever you get on =]

dEcCrIx · 03-18-2007, 06:43 AM

u only owned me coz ur so freakin cute.... ima feels wat the virus felt... lol

so much action lily... keep it up!

Sakatsu · 03-18-2007, 05:46 PM

phew.

well well well, it is a very interesting story, a historical forum fiction-anime-fied story plausible for her efforts in creativity of action and addictiveness. Creating a story around a forum is no easy task, the vast expanse of time, events and colourful characters makes it complex. The story of a girl who stumbles through a metropolis city from being a nobody with questions and strange markings and a bracelet to boot to a distinguished individual, struggling to make sense of the gift or curse she's recieved. Will this gift end up destroying her or will she persevere through the difficult scenarios and challenges that comes with living within this "perfect city" filled with Viruses and shady characters?

The oldies characters shed a light upon which has been faded and forgotten within the mass of newbies nowadays so its nice to take a trip back and remember all the good times that we've had.

Although I don't picture myself wearing knife heels, this is a creative and fresh interpretation of Sakatsu.

And Sakatsu knows that she's speaking in third person but thats okay. This story inspires me to writing my own offshoot one shot.......but no promises yet.

egh.

Pride · 03-18-2007, 11:13 PM

Story doesnt get really good till around chapter 19 tho,

<_<

>_>

hehehehe

OnE473 · 03-24-2007, 02:49 PM

Really nice chapter, cant wait for next chapter seems like alot of action is going to happen, cant wait to see some good fights =)

Seal_master · 03-25-2007, 12:32 PM

good chapter lily

dEcCrIx · 03-27-2007, 03:41 PM

again... nice chapter lily

shadowclone all alone in the game section.... wat an intro for him xD

Seal_master · 03-30-2007, 12:07 PM

*clap clap clap* nice chapter lily i like what you did with me but it kind of sucks i had to die but what ever your the creator

dEcCrIx · 03-30-2007, 01:06 PM

^Lol u've been backstabbed by ONE xD

@lily - very nice chapter.... it excites me to the end of it.... totally laughed at SM's demise XD lol

03-16-2007, 04:43 PM	#106
OnE473 Chuunin Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Drunk waitin for stop sign to turn green Age: 25 Posts: 327 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread Ill help with it also i currently have alot of time on my hands Lily =/ you know the reason >_< Gamestop doesn't like it whne u show up to work buzzed =( __________________ Made By The One And Only S_I =D [ http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5651/hfc1qv9.jpg It’s nice to Meet you. you realLY seem like an interestING person Proud Member of: Naruhina Fc Village Brawl FV Halo FC “Is there a difference between people who feel safer in the Light , and people who feels safer in the Dark

03-16-2007, 08:10 PM	#107
DarkAztek Sand Man Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Massachusetts Age: 30 Posts: 3,324 Thanks: 64 Thanked 583 Times in 190 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread I'm not looking heavily into grammar and wording. That is easily changeable. The part that really matters is the story itself. It's a weird take and I normally like weird stuff. (I just figured I should try and make SOME kind of constructive criticism.) __________________ [CENTER] Nam Myōhō Renge Kyō[/CENTER] [CENTER] [IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/HookerBodyShots/shark.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] [center][b]Filler content[/b][/center]

03-16-2007, 08:19 PM	#108
Seal_master Local Necromancer Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: A dank,dark cave with my undead minions Age: 20 Posts: 1,277 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread Bravo lily bravo i just read the whole thing and i love it good job __________________ All dead move to the hollow rythm of necromancy Chibi Thread Updated: 3/13/08 CO_OWNER of the RP FC Evil Fc thankies Kina X3 by MeteoraTC Member of: Fable Fc Naruto RPG fc Owner of: Blood+ Fc

03-18-2007, 05:11 AM	#110
Xei S-Ranked Shinobi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Kuta-Wato Empire Age: 21 Posts: 3,124 Thanks: 47 Thanked 36 Times in 32 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread what ever you do i'm here to cheer for you! L-I-L-Y go lily go! __________________ Co-owner of the: Akatsuki FC Member of the: Prince of Tennis FC Akatsuki Leader FC Fruits Basket FC My loyalty is to the:

03-18-2007, 05:57 AM	#111
dEcCrIx Snake Eyes Yeah! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: kicking zombie's arses Age: 27 Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread great chapter lily... very impressive and theres a lot of action there... chuckled on the very thought of sakura taming a virus i hav to say.... they deserve each other __________________ NEVER FORGET thx Ninja48 FC's: Akatsuki FC Death Note FC Fighting Game FC

03-18-2007, 06:40 AM	#112
Sakura fuckin' hawt Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 778 Thanks: 2 Thanked 39 Times in 19 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread slaps dec =/ i own you btw lily ive got some ideas, PM me whenever you get on =]

03-18-2007, 06:43 AM	#113
dEcCrIx Snake Eyes Yeah! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: kicking zombie's arses Age: 27 Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread u only owned me coz ur so freakin cute.... ima feels wat the virus felt... lol so much action lily... keep it up! __________________ NEVER FORGET thx Ninja48 FC's: Akatsuki FC Death Note FC Fighting Game FC

03-18-2007, 05:46 PM	#114
Sakatsu Jounin Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Pacific Northwest Age: 67 Posts: 771 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread phew. well well well, it is a very interesting story, a historical forum fiction-anime-fied story plausible for her efforts in creativity of action and addictiveness. Creating a story around a forum is no easy task, the vast expanse of time, events and colourful characters makes it complex. The story of a girl who stumbles through a metropolis city from being a nobody with questions and strange markings and a bracelet to boot to a distinguished individual, struggling to make sense of the gift or curse she's recieved. Will this gift end up destroying her or will she persevere through the difficult scenarios and challenges that comes with living within this "perfect city" filled with Viruses and shady characters? The oldies characters shed a light upon which has been faded and forgotten within the mass of newbies nowadays so its nice to take a trip back and remember all the good times that we've had. Although I don't picture myself wearing knife heels, this is a creative and fresh interpretation of Sakatsu. And Sakatsu knows that she's speaking in third person but thats okay. This story inspires me to writing my own offshoot one shot.......but no promises yet. egh. __________________ Playing for our Lives Bassist Sakatsu "Our Own Way is the Local Way." Support Local Music! No infraction without representation, biotches!1! This is the Symphony of the Damned. Knowledge Is Power!

03-18-2007, 11:13 PM	#115
Pride Change is coming Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Louisiana Age: 23 Posts: 1,248 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread Story doesnt get really good till around chapter 19 tho, <_< >_> hehehehe __________________ [1.14.20.9 - 14.15.15.2]

03-24-2007, 02:49 PM	#116
OnE473 Chuunin Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Drunk waitin for stop sign to turn green Age: 25 Posts: 327 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread Really nice chapter, cant wait for next chapter seems like alot of action is going to happen, cant wait to see some good fights =) __________________ Made By The One And Only S_I =D [ http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5651/hfc1qv9.jpg It’s nice to Meet you. you realLY seem like an interestING person Proud Member of: Naruhina Fc Village Brawl FV Halo FC “Is there a difference between people who feel safer in the Light , and people who feels safer in the Dark

03-25-2007, 12:32 PM	#117
Seal_master Local Necromancer Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: A dank,dark cave with my undead minions Age: 20 Posts: 1,277 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread good chapter lily __________________ All dead move to the hollow rythm of necromancy Chibi Thread Updated: 3/13/08 CO_OWNER of the RP FC Evil Fc thankies Kina X3 by MeteoraTC Member of: Fable Fc Naruto RPG fc Owner of: Blood+ Fc

03-27-2007, 03:41 PM	#118
dEcCrIx Snake Eyes Yeah! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: kicking zombie's arses Age: 27 Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread again... nice chapter lily shadowclone all alone in the game section.... wat an intro for him xD __________________ NEVER FORGET thx Ninja48 FC's: Akatsuki FC Death Note FC Fighting Game FC

03-30-2007, 12:07 PM	#119
Seal_master Local Necromancer Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: A dank,dark cave with my undead minions Age: 20 Posts: 1,277 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread clap clap clap nice chapter lily i like what you did with me but it kind of sucks i had to die but what ever your the creator __________________ All dead move to the hollow rythm of necromancy Chibi Thread Updated: 3/13/08 CO_OWNER of the RP FC Evil Fc thankies Kina X3 by MeteoraTC Member of: Fable Fc Naruto RPG fc Owner of: Blood+ Fc

03-30-2007, 01:06 PM	#120
dEcCrIx Snake Eyes Yeah! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: kicking zombie's arses Age: 27 Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: NL the Anime Discussion Thread ^Lol u've been backstabbed by ONE xD @lily - very nice chapter.... it excites me to the end of it.... totally laughed at SM's demise XD lol __________________ NEVER FORGET thx Ninja48 FC's: Akatsuki FC Death Note FC Fighting Game FC

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