Suisui

Well I wrote this deep-like song a while ago in a foreign language. But I adjusted it with so-so ryhmes just to put a new complexion to it. And in english this time.



Summarize of Spring


Though so many times the colors of spring return through our skin
Under serene clouds, you still hold onto your umbrella
Such an ironic sight; I want to burn it in a candelabra
While the ephemeral dew pours into your eyes, rain's falling

Pausing into the exceptional poetry of our life
To where only lies a historic meaning to this season, sinking
With no happier coda, hands and mind in strife
Staring at your trembling loneliness I no longer reason, musing...

"The most desirable part of you is leaving you"
"The most desirable part of you is leaving you..."



There are rumors to
believe I may like you
With this in mind I could only adress you properly
Your oval face,
as it stands in grace,
Almost breachs the law of a creation like clay
...panders the heart but withers the courage away



May the world through time change and decay together
The beautiful meaning of our meeting
Will never age, in my heart forever
Eventhough this unilateral love keeps fleeding
The mere conceit for loving only you 'stronger

The exceptional poetry of our life
Only has a historic meaning to this season, melting
I do wish to carry no burden; mind treason giving
But if it is you, heaven knows... only to bring back the smile
That you locked away in the rain



The days and nights
Years spent thinking of you
Were not wasted into a forgetful mind
As I kept sending a white dove aimlessly to you
As I kept hoping the happiest pieces of your expression
To fix the mask of my dream



The colors of spring has finally returned
Yet under serene clouds, you held your umbrella restlessly
Such an ironic sight; I yearned to burn
In lust for color, sad rain is falling carelessly

Listen, for too long on me you have pledge a test
Though through my eyes clearly shows what I want to confess
Even if awkward gazes seems to stare down my way, there's no shame
Spoken words that travel towards you deafened by your rain

"The most desirable part of you is leaving you"
"The most desirable part of you is leaving you..."

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fieldscarcrow

it may be that its translated..but it makes little sence (or atleast the first verse), dont ever say "I wrote a deep like song" and "the most disirable thing
" blah blah blah was an awsome line

Suisui

Lol... nice one. But as for me, I can really reflect on it. It is sad that the feeling isn't mutual to everyone's eventhough it forces you to let go of complexity into it and just read and take it as it flows. Senseless or not. Well... let's simply say that I was born modest... or pretending to. No one will ever know.

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skwee

its awsome ,the rhyming is alittle of but not alot 9/10

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"There are things you want to hear,and things you need to hear,
and I am here to tell them to you..."-Skwee

DGLG

Speechless....

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