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Old 06-13-2007, 11:43 AM   #1
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Already Dead: A Naruto Fanfiction

Note: This Fanfic takes place after the timeskip, after the fight between Team Kakashi and Deidara with Sasori, upon their return to Konoha.

Chapter One: The Mission

Naruto sighed, it had to be another stupid mission that Tsunade was giving him, the reason he was called to her office at sudden notice. He continued to walk through the building to the Hokage’s office, and spotted the door. He turned the knob and opened the door, revealing Tsunade and her ever-present subordinate Shizune.

“Naruto,” Tsunade said. “Finally you’re here. I have a mission…”

“I knew it!” Naruto said. “You’re giving me another one of those lame D-Ranked missions aren’t you?” Tsunade attempted an interruption, but Naruto kept going. “I’m a real ninja now and these worthless missions aren’t helping my skill at all.” Tsunade interrupted, a little louder this time, but was once again ignored. “Ninjas don’t prosper given tasks like cleaning yards and assisting with shopping and…”

“NARUTO!!!!” Tsunade yelled at the top of her voice, “Will you shut up already? It’s an S-Ranked mission. I need you on it, but if you don’t want to I guess I’ll just take someone else. Maybe Neji Hyuuga is free and will be willing to go on the mission.”

Naruto was rendered temporarily speechless, dumbstruck. Not due to Tsunade’s yelling, but from the announcement of an S-Ranked mission. He tried to speak, but no words escaped his mouth, he was overwhelmed with joy. “Really!!!!” Naruto said. “Granny Tsunade, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!” He calmed down slightly. “So, what’s the mission about?”

“Oh, you’re not going solo,” Tsunade said. “That would be too much for you. Sakura, Kakashi, and Rock Lee are also coming with you, this mission is too important for you to mess up. Now, getting back to the mission…”

“Fuzzy-brows,” Naruto said. “Why do I need such an escort for such a mission?”

“If you would shut up for a second I could get a chance to tell you,” Tsunade said, her temper having returned to normal now. “Your mission is the assassination of an important S-Ranked criminal, he seems to be actively killing people on our countryside and this cannot be allowed to continue. As soon as everyone else gets here…”

Just then, the door opened again. Kakashi came in, followed by Sakura. “What did we miss?” Kakashi said. “I do hope you haven’t given Naruto the mission information without us, otherwise I’ll have to come up with another original late excuse, and I’m running short.”

“No, you’re just in time,” Tsunade said. “Now as soon as Rock Lee gets here…”

The door burst open, and in came Rock Lee, taking some kind of fighting pose and jumping in through the open doorway. “I’m here, present for mission briefing Hokage-sama. I hope I’m not late.” He was acting strangely; normally he would shout his title ‘Konoha’s Green Beast’ and then do some kind of fancy kick. Maybe the idea of an S-Ranked mission was even affecting someone like Lee.

“You’re not late,” Tsunade said. “In fact I was just about to give the mission information. Now like I was saying, your mission is to assassinate an important S-Ranked criminal in the path outside of Konoha. Never have we reported so many deaths of people on their way to Konoha, and it needs to stop if tourism should continue. Here is some information on the criminal in question, but we weren’t able to gather much of it, due to lost records in Konoha’s libraries.” She displayed a card in front of them for all to see.

The card read:

“Name: Kumizu no Kagizu
Rank: S-Ranked Missing-Nin
Age: Unconfirmed
Gender: Male
History: Defunct from Konoha before he became a Genin, exiled due to murders he committed as an academy student. He previously lived with a large group of Missing-Nin, stealing and killing to be alive. Kagizu’s name translates into ‘Kagizu of the Black Water’; it is unknown why that is his name. Very little information about his powers is available at this time.”

Naruto was the first to speak. “That’s all; you’re not giving us much to work with Granny Tsunade.” He said, still trying to taunt Tsunade. “Going in with this little information could get us killed.”

“It’s all we have,” Tsunade said, sighing after she said it. “We need to search the library for more information about such a criminal, or his organization. Shizune will be right on that.” She motioned toward the door, Shizune went running outside saying “Yes, Tsunade-sama.” Something was up with her; she was a bit more jumpy than usual today.

“Alright,” Kakashi said. “No sense in us wasting more time, us going now could mean the difference between life and death, for someone.” He took the mission card and walked out the room, motioning for everyone else to follow.

“Good luck,” Tsunade said, talking more to herself than everyone else. “You are going to need it.” The door closed, and Tsunade was alone in the room, completely lost in thought. This might yet be one of the most difficult missions of Naruto’s life. All she could hope was that he was ready for it…
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That's a pretty good start. Nice, black water. So, he never became a Genin? But he did grow on his own. I think you've captured more of the essence of the characters so far than I have. Keep up the story! *shakes Anti violently*
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Nice story! Much better than mine ((I fail at writing))! Keep it up or I'll PM you into a coma.
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That's a pretty good start. Nice, black water. So, he never became a Genin? But he did grow on his own. I think you've captured more of the essence of the characters so far than I have. Keep up the story! *shakes Anti violently*
In fact I already have Chapter 2: The Fight Begins typed up and Chapter 3: Kagizu's Power+Chapter 4: Lee's Determination written up. You're going to have to wait until the beginning of tomorrow for Chapter 2 and the next day for Chapter 3. I'll try to keep up a daily flow of chapters.

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Ahh quit flaming yourself, you're a decent writer. Also you're the only writer I know who writes in the first person, and you do that quite well.
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Ok, the next chapter is here:

Chapter 2: The Fight Begins

It seemed to only take several seconds for the four ninja to exit Konoha and be on their way outside it. The morning was sunny and apparently perfect; it didn’t look like much could spoil this day. It was a shame they had to battle. Naruto looked at Sakura, then at Lee, and then Kakashi, maybe they understood more about this than he did.

“Sakura-chan, Lee,” Naruto said, in the spirit of conversation. “How have you two been since our last mission?” Lee and Sakura both looked back at him; Lee was the first to answer.

“I have not been up to much since the last mission,” Lee said, seemingly in poor spirits. “Just a few D-Ranked Missions that do not require much skill, to get an S-Ranked mission so early, they must be very desperate to send us.”

“I hope that we can all come back safely,” Sakura added, seemingly getting her ability to speak back. “An S-Ranked mission so close to home, I don’t understand why they didn’t send an elite squad for such a mission instead of us.”

“Don’t worry,” Kakashi spoke up. “We’ll all be fine, they probably overestimated this guy. He didn’t do anything except kill civilians right? We don’t even have a record of him killing any ninja yet, so it’s likely not to be much of a big deal.” Sakura, Lee, and Naruto all nodded, that made them feel a little better about the mission, at least for the moment.

They continued to walk, the sun slowly going down on the morning. They were several miles away from Konoha at this point, and they had to be on their guard for an attack. Maybe it was a wise decision. Sakura pointed in a direction in silence, and everyone looked there. It was a silhouette in the distance, of a man.

Everyone took battle positions, and Lee ran ahead with his amazing speed. As they got closer, they noticed that the man was at least two and a half meters tall, with an extremely muscular build, and he was wearing a black coat with red water droplet designs on it, and a red undershirt with black water droplets. That had to be him, Kagizu of the Black Water. Lee rushed ahead and kicked, only to realize that it was not even there.

“Bunshin,” Lee muttered, as he suddenly felt a sharp hand hit him in the side, the real man had appeared there. “Konoha Dai Senpuu!” He yelled, and kicked the man once, no good, his leg was caught. Lee kicked with the other leg, but was caught once again. In a feat of amazing strength, he threw lee, weights and all, about ten meters away with seemingly no effort at all.

Lee caught himself and landed on his feet, angry at how the man had easily bested his attack. He charged again and brought his hand back for a powerful punch, he neared the man and punched with all his strength… His feeling of satisfaction was replaced with a stunned stare of disbelief; the man had caught his punch without even moving from his spot. Even that feeling did not last long, it was replaced with blinding pain when the man squeezed his hand, and all of the bones shattered. Again, the sickening sound of bones cracking reached back as far as where Naruto, Kakashi, and Sakura were still running, as he bent Lee’s wrist back so far the bone snapped. He wasn’t ready to be done yet, he picked Lee up again and threw him, and he landed in a heap, thirty meters away.

Sakura, overcome with rage and grief, put on her black gloves and punched the ground with all the possible strength and chakra control. The very earth split in front of her, and the shattered earth was going in the direction of Kagizu. He laughed insanely, and punched the ground in front of him in the direction of Sakura. The earth displaced even faster, and the two walls blasted into each other and Kagizu’s wall prevailed, going ever closer to Sakura. She of course had the ability to get out of the way, but everyone was absolutely shocked… He was stronger than Sakura...

Sorry for the short chapter, the next one will be longer.
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0.0 FIGHT SCENE! *cheers*
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Fight gets much more complicated next chapter, hope you get the chance to read it tomorrow. I usually post them early in the morning, as soon as possible after I wake up. Just to let you know this fight goes on for at least three more chapters
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YES! like reading fights. They're fun to write, aren't they? You captured the characters very well.
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Thanks, and yes I do enjoy writing fights, I was about to write chapter five earlier today but decided against it so as to not rush myself. Also, I'll have to check out your latest fanfic post now that I have the chance to read it.
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thanks, it's kinda blech to me. I like the way I wrote it bt I felt reall sad all the way through.
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Chapter 3: Kagizu’s Power

Sakura, Naruto, and Kakashi were all stunned. How could Lee be bested so quickly, and how could this man be stronger than Sakura? He wasn’t… he couldn’t be… human, could he? Nobody had time to contemplate it, if they didn’t attack they would never win, that or he would come for them. Both of those options were totally unacceptable.

Sakura rushed for Kagizu, and just as he was about to swing at her, she leaped over him with all her strength and rushed to Lee’s aid. Naruto and Kakashi prepared to attack, Kakashi began forming seals.

“Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Grand Fireball Technique)!” Kakashi said. He breathed a massive ball of fire that went straight toward Kagizu, its blazing aura leaving sparks in its wake. Just as this happened, Naruto threw a Shuriken.

“Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shuriken Shadow Replication Technique)!” Naruto yelled. The shuriken flew through the air, become four, sixteen, thirty-two, and finally sixty-four. Soon the air was full of the deadly little projectiles. The two continued to rush forward, their projectiles more quickly so.

“Baksuiton: Suijinheki (Black Water Release: Water Encampment Wall),” Kagizu said, with his menacing, insane laugh. A mass of water begun to form in front of Kagizu, but there was something wrong with it. It was a sickening black color, and unlike the normal wall this one spiraled like a tornado as it formed, like a deadly black twister shredding through the daytime air.

The fireball, in all its size and impressiveness, was no match for the water wall, and it faded into oblivion on contact. Naruto’s Shadow Replicated Shuriken didn’t do any better, in fact, they did worse. All of them were caught in the twister, and simultaneously about half of them flew toward either of the two ninja. Half of them went at Naruto and half at Kakashi.

Kakashi pulled a kunai, and using his extreme reflexes and skill he raised it and blocked five of the Shuriken almost simultaneously, creating a hole in the wall of Shuriken that was before him. Kakashi dived through the opening, rolled on the landing of his dive, and pulled up his forehead protector to reveal Kakashi’s edge, his three tomoe Sharingan. He raised the kunai knife and rushed at Kagizu. Kakashi in all of his professionalism was able to do this all in a single fluid motion.

Naruto chose a different method of blocking the Shuriken that came at him. He used his trademark move, the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, and created a single replication. Combining it with the Henge technique, he transformed the Bunshin into a large metal shield. He held up the shield and the Shuriken bounced off. Just then a puff of smoke appeared and the Bunshin became a replication again. Both of them formed the spiraling spheres of chakra in their hands for Naruto’s special attack, and charged down Kagizu.

Kakashi, being faster than Naruto, made it to Kagizu before he did. He raised the kunai knife high into the air. Kagizu swung his fist violently at Kakashi’s face, but Kakashi ducked to avoid it, he once again raised the kunai and ran it through Kagizu’s neck. The kunai came through with nearly no resistance at all, something wasn’t right about that. Kakashi wasn’t given enough time to figure out what happened as a sharp blow chipped the back of his head and his face slammed into the ground.

Kakashi turned himself over, and standing over him was none other than Kagizu. How? Kakashi soon felt that the kunai he was holding was soaked with water. That had to be the reason they called him Kumizu no Kagizu. He ‘was’ black water.

Naruto was their one hope, and he was directly behind Kagizu. He thrust his arm forward, so did the clone on the opposite side of him. As they both shouted “Rasengan!” Seconds later, nothing had happened. The Rasengan had hit a solid force that it couldn’t go through. The real Naruto pushed harder, and put more chakra into the Rasengan. The only thing that greeted him was the all-too-familiar “poof!” of a Kage Bunshin being forcibly dissipated. Naruto’s arm suddenly stopped moving, and he felt pressure as if something had closed around it.

Naruto managed to force his arm out of whatever it was in, just in time to be punched in the chest and fly back ten meters, barely managing to land on his feet. It was then that Naruto noticed something, there was a hole in Kagizu’s torso, and it was slowly closing. That’s what happened. Naruto had attacked from both sides, but Kagizu opened a hole in his stomach and the two Rasengan attacks collided. When Naruto put more chakra into his, all he did was destroy his own Kage Bunshin.

“My special Taijutsu style the Doukotsu (Structured Body) knows no weakness,” Kagizu said, laughing menacingly. There was something familiar about the laugh, but Naruto couldn’t place the name of who he sounded like. “I have full range and control of my body’s shape, form, density, and volume. My only limits are my imagination and the amount of water that I have to work with. You cannot win against this style.”

This is insane, thought Naruto, how do you fight someone with such power? Naruto had no time to answer his own mental question as he saw Kagizu lunging for him, barely concentrating in his effort as he knew there was nothing the unready Naruto could do, hardening the water he was made up of for the short fight. The only thing he was met with was pain in his cheek as Lee’s foot slammed into the side of the face of the unsuspecting Kagizu. He flew about seven meters, but he caught himself on the end of the fall and landed totally upright.

“If you want a fight,” Lee said, unusually seriously. There was a fire in his eyes the likes of which neither Sakura nor Naruto had seen before. “You have got one.”

Sakura appeared at Lee’s right hand, and Naruto joined the battle formation at his left hand. Naruto saw what was going on; Lee had never been beaten in Taijutsu so outright since Kaguya Kimimaro. Lee was more determined than ever to win, and he might just succeed….
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this fanfic = win

best one i've ever read here

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but on the other hand i hope this fight doesn't go the way i think it will go...
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Re: Already Dead: A Naruto Fanfiction

Great chapter. But, wasn't Lee's hand crushed? Don't tell me Sakura healed all of those broken bones. O_O So, he's sort of a badass combination of Suigetsu and Gai. Nice.
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