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Old 08-25-2007, 04:40 PM   #631
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Old 08-25-2007, 04:59 PM   #632
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Old 08-25-2007, 05:06 PM   #633
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Old 08-26-2007, 09:14 AM   #634
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So.... Uh.... Are we still creating characters here? Or is there a new topic. Maybe this arguing about Yondaime was the new topic and I missed it.
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Old 08-26-2007, 10:36 AM   #635
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Old 08-26-2007, 10:41 AM   #636
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i am nobody here but a member but i sent a pm anyway to mikey to tell him your request just wait a bit and he will let you in.
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Old 08-26-2007, 11:06 AM   #638
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:-\ - Ignored? People probably read them, but just didn't comment on them. Everyone's character was ignored then, seeing what you're saying.
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So, um, what's the topic now?
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Old 08-26-2007, 02:43 PM   #639
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How about do geniuses work hard for their abilities?
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Old 08-26-2007, 03:31 PM   #640
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Okay, as much as I would like to write more, my responses are going to be short. ^^;;

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But it helped me. Thanks for the outline, UT. ^^*thumbs-up*
^.^ No problem. Glad it helped ya <3

Sharingan Lord:
First off, I love her character design. Black hair with a hint of cherry sounds real pretty.

I like how you stress her seemingly lack of emotions, and yet her favorite quote relates to friendship. ^^ To me that creates a good dynamic between her coldness and her warmth. Same thing with her goal/ambition.

Her abilities are eerily similar to what I was planning for my character, so I'll be sure to change a few things. xD <3

Tsukuyomi:

Daaaamn, he can take out two whole villages by himself? o.o Well, I guess that's acceptable since Yondaime defeated an entire army by himself, Sasuke a 1000 ninja, Sasori an entire village... so on and so forth. xD

Kurama's kind of like the Sannin of the Lightening Village, huh? ^_^ Nice work, I liked how you included that his biggest weakness is letting his enemies live. Your character seems like a genius at the levels of Itachi/Minato.

Kidmac:

Wow, he lost his parents in such a... pointless way, and that's what I like about it.

Did he have any connections to Zabuza/Haku?

Doujitsuspecialist1:

Heightened senses is always a cool route to take. Reminds me of Avatar's Toph (who I just encountered today). Nice work <3

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Thanks, UT! <3 ;D
Np <3

Shrike:

So he's a berserker with amnesia. Nice. ^^

I like how he's neither good nor evil. That's always a plus.

What exactly is the Shrike/the Calling Mode? I would like to know more about that. Is it natural or perhaps the result of experiments?

I like how his memories disorient him. To me that makes it seems as if he wants more than anything to remember, and yet is afraid to (since he has an idea that he committed something terrible in the past). That's a nice touch of depth.

AnticitizenOne:

With intelligence comes eccentricities. xD I like that he's very intelligent, but he spends a lot of his time messing around with random people. lolz. That's a funny quirk/hobby.

His abilities, gained through forty years of intense meditation and mental preparation, allow him to manipulate brain cells in order to gain desired results. For example, he could disable certain brain cells in order to cause the victim to fall into a coma, become psychopathic, or lose certain knowledge that he decides he doesn't want that person to have. Given this, he also has control of all of the opponent's senses, making them see, hear, smell, feel, or taste anything he wishes them to.

That is fucking awesome. *.*
And I'm so glad you gave him physical weakness to counter this deadly ability.

I gotta say, I love how you connected him to Sasori and Yura. Very well-done.
You're character is definitely unique. And I gotta ask, does he lack tact/people skills since he spent the majority of his life alone? (I would think he does) That's always a funny quirk for me.

MikeyM1979:

First question: Who's she talking to in her quote? xD I thought of Hinata, but I wasn't sure.

Anyway, damn! She's got immense powers. The Hyuuga fighting style is deadly on its own, and combined with water, fire, and wind elemental manipulation... and a chakra supply that's large in comparison to Naruto and Kisame... And speed that surpasses Itachi... I wouldn't want to encounter her. lol Not at all. xD

I liked her quirk! xD Lmao.
Nice character, I wonder how her first meeting with Neji would unfold.


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The rest of that crap: Too lazy to type up, I'll do it later.
LMAO. <333


Okay, I'll post mine later since I don't want to go over the chara limit. ^^ (I'm not finished yet anyway).
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And I am dreaming of them on the plains
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Watching for some sign of rain to cool their hot heads

And how dare that you send me that card when I'm doing all that I can do
You are forcing me to remember when all I want is to just forget you

If the tiger shall protect her young then tell me how did you slip by
All my instincts have failed me for once
I must have somehow slept the whole night

And I am dreaming of them with their kill
Tearing it all apart
Blood dripping from their lips and teeth sinking into heart

And how dare that you say you'll call
When you know I need some peace of mind
If you have to take sides with the animals
Won't you do it with one who is kind

And if the hawks in the trees need the dead
If you're living you don't stand a chance
For a time though you share the same bed
There are only two ends to this dance

You can flee with your wounds just in time or lie there as he feeds
Watching yourself ripped to shreds and laughing as you bleed

So for those of you falling in love keep it kind
Keep it good
Keep it right
Throw yourself in the midst of danger but keep one eye open at night


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Old 08-26-2007, 03:48 PM   #641
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How about [do] geniuses work hard for their abilities?
...I don't get it. But I noticed all of our geniuses have had a special ability, sooo...
...I think they do work hard. (Otherwise they wouldn't be geniuses. ^^) But not as hard as Lee.
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Okay, I'll post mine later since I don't want to go over the character limit. ^^ (I'm not finished yet anyway).
Oh wow, there's a character limit to this site? Well, I guess you do learn a new thing everyday...
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Old 08-26-2007, 03:59 PM   #642
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Kidmac:

Wow, he lost his parents in such a... pointless way, and that's what I like about it.

Did he have any connections to Zabuza/Haku?
They died like Batman's parents....... not pointless necessary

No he didn't know Zabuza and Haku. He became the Kage's student shortly after Zabuza became a rouge ninja.

Mikey why were you so against adding the 4th as a genius?
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Mikey why were you so against adding the 4th as a genius?
He wasn't satisfied enough with the amount of reasons other than 'Jiraiya said so', I think.
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Old 08-26-2007, 05:28 PM   #644
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Basic

Name: Zatara Senrei
Sex: Female
Age: 27
Origin: Konoha
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5’4
Weight: 120 (muscle weighs more than fat 8D)
Relatives: Uzuri (mother) – remains in Konoha but they stay in contact via hawks. Her father (Zatara Tahomores) is deceased. No siblings.
Taka (nickname) – her baby girl who is deceased.

Personality

Mental Strengths:
Intelligence, Compassion, Wit, Charm, Tolerance, Loyalty, Protective, Strong sense of Humor...
Mental Weaknesses: Carelessness, Loneliness, uses Sarcasm as a defense, Nightmares, Self-indulgent, Cynical, Manipulative at times...
Favorite Color: Blue and Earth tones (browns, greens, yellows, ect)
Favorite Quote: Well, I dreamt I saw you walking up a hillside in the snow
Casting shadows on the winter sky as you stood there counting crows
One for sorrow
Two for joy
Three for girls and four for boys
Five for silver
Six for gold and
Seven for a secret never to be told
There's a bird that nests inside you
Sleeping underneath your skin
When you open up your wings to speak
I wish you'd let me in


and

I walk along these hillsides
In the summer 'neath the sunshine
I am feathered by the moonlight falling down on me


(both quotes come from Counting Crows - Murder of One)
Hobbies: Reading and traveling
Goal/Ambition: To find one…
Quirks: loves small children and furry animals; either cries or sings when she’s drunk, depending on her mood; reads Icha Icha series 8D
Greatest Strength: Intuition
Biggest Weakness: Loss

Power

Capabilities: Genjutsu, Tracking, Avg-to Above Avg taijustu, can manipulate water and lightening and uses ninjutsu related to those.
Weaknesses: Each time she uses her special power, impressions of whatever her opponent saw returns to her and this drains her. When she combines water and lightening, there’s a chance it will backfire since the two are incredibly reactive to each other.
Special Power: Releases a vapor from the tips of her fingers that casts a genjutsu on her opponent. After that, she has no control over what her opponent sees, because her genjutsu causes her opponent to get lost in their own memories and force them to encounter the darkest depths of their soul; what they loathe about themselves, who or what they’ve failed, their fears and lies, ect. This has a wide range of after-effects as it solely relies on the other person. Senrei utilizes the moments where her opponent is disoriented or in shock to make her final move.
Speed: 8
Stamina: 6
Intelligence: 9
Chakra: 5
Luck: 4

Brief History

Senrei's childhood was peaceful, relaxed and comfortable. She had a natural affinity to water since a young age and her father used to train her. However, he died protecting Konoha against the Kyuubi. This loss changed her and she became very focused on improving, wishing to carry her father's name along with her success. She is very similar to him in terms of ability, and trained with the scrolls he left behind (as he was a scholar of sorts, one who recorded his techniques and impressions of the world around him). These scrolls are perhaps her most precious possessions.

Her mother, Uzuri, is in ANBU and leads recon missions. This is where Senrei's skills in tracking emerged. Uzuri helped Senrei with her training after her father, but ANBU was/is her first priority. They are close yet distant, and growing up Senrei was a Daddy's girl, and continued to be so even after his death. Basically, his words guide her even now.

Because she lost her father just before she graduated the academy, she ended up distancing herself from many of her friends (Rin was one of them). She was close to her teammates, but ended up leaving Konoha to travel the world and record her impressions as well. She was 16 when she left the village. She clashed with her mother on this decision, but because Uzuri is a very prideful woman, she would not break down and forbid Senrei from leaving. She let her daughter do what she thought was best for herself, even though she didn't agree.

Living life as a nomad, she took up odd missions and jobs to sustain herself.
Eventually she met another nomadic shinobi, a man by the name of Dante, and the two worked together for several months. The night they were to part, in a moment of passion and slight anxiety of the future, Senrei made love to him. When she awoke the next morning, he was gone and all that was left was a dagger, with the inscription reading: Faded from the Winter.

Dante was the one who trained her to perfect lightening manipulation. The two were drawn to each other after they met at a Fuedal Lord's home. They were both there intent to complete a mission of assassination, and during this mission they bonded over their similar thought process and easy flow of communication. However, they spoke little of their pasts and much of Dante still remains a mystery to Senrei. She has not seen him since that night, when she was 20 years old.

As you might have guessed, Taka was the result of that night. When Senrei awoke puking and feeling dizzy, her intuition told her that she needed to return to Konoha. She did so and gave birth at her childhood home. With Taka she experienced two years of bliss; content to remain rooted in Konoha and worked a few missions when Uzuri was home and able to watch over Taka. However, Taka contracted a fatal illness and died before her third birthday. This loss was even more life-changing for Senrei. For several months she entered a desolate mindset, where she ate little and spoke even less. During this time, her nightmares were so intense that she became a bit of an insomniac. Her body became weak, but during this time she developed her genjutsu.

When she refound herself, she once again returned to her nomadic lifestyle. But she was forever changed and developed a taste for hard alcohol and marijuana. (oh yah, she has a hand-crafted pipe from an old man she met in Suna. She stayed with him for weeks because his eyes reminded her of Taka's bright blue ones and consequently Dante's as well).

Her nightmares persist, though usually not as intense. Because of her genjutsu, they are riddled with other's fears and losses, and depending on what occurs in her nightmare, her mood can be affected for days, even weeks. She continues her training, creating several techniques along the way (most relate to water and lightening combos).

EDIT: Here's a song from Iron and Wine that suits her... except the part about American states. lolz.

She belongs back in western Kentucky
Or maybe somewhere in Tennessee
Far from home there’s a way to her body
Though she’s wind-blown and slightly

Long ago there were plums on the table
Where momma smoked in the afternoon
The guilty played half-asleep in the stable
And she would wake when she’d heard you

Papa was gone but he’s still in the mud
And the river runs thick with his innocent blood
And God gave a stone but it rolled down the hill
It’s the shape of His breath, or Her breath if you will

She belongs back in western Kentucky
Or even somewhere in Tennessee
She was born though the womb wasn’t ready
To give it’s love to the strength in this street

Papa was gone but he’s still in the mud
While the river runs thick with his innocent blood
And God gave a stone but it rolled down the hill
It’s the shape of His breath, or Her breath if you will

Long ago there was warmth from the kitchen
Across the baseboards through every room
She belongs back in western Kentucky
And I will pray maybe she’ll see it soon


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Okay, I'm going to stop there because this is getting really long. But damn! I had so much fun doing this. 8D Maybe I'll draw Senrei soon...

Oh! I'd really appreciate it if you guys checked out my Sakura fanart... ^^ Here's the link for easy access 8D http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=32195

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They died like Batman's parents....... not pointless necessary

No he didn't know Zabuza and Haku. He became the Kage's student shortly after Zabuza became a rouge ninja.

Mikey why were you so against adding the 4th as a genius?
I didn't mean pointless, but more that it occurred without much reason or motive behind it. And thats what I liked. 8D
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It's no wonder how they scream
Like you and I they must have some temper

And I am dreaming of them on the plains
Dirtying up their beds
Watching for some sign of rain to cool their hot heads

And how dare that you send me that card when I'm doing all that I can do
You are forcing me to remember when all I want is to just forget you

If the tiger shall protect her young then tell me how did you slip by
All my instincts have failed me for once
I must have somehow slept the whole night

And I am dreaming of them with their kill
Tearing it all apart
Blood dripping from their lips and teeth sinking into heart

And how dare that you say you'll call
When you know I need some peace of mind
If you have to take sides with the animals
Won't you do it with one who is kind

And if the hawks in the trees need the dead
If you're living you don't stand a chance
For a time though you share the same bed
There are only two ends to this dance

You can flee with your wounds just in time or lie there as he feeds
Watching yourself ripped to shreds and laughing as you bleed

So for those of you falling in love keep it kind
Keep it good
Keep it right
Throw yourself in the midst of danger but keep one eye open at night


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Old 08-26-2007, 06:29 PM   #645
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With intelligence comes eccentricities. xD I like that he's very intelligent, but he spends a lot of his time messing around with random people. lolz. That's a funny quirk/hobby.
I suppose that's all I could think of for hobbies. Since he has that power it seemed like the best kind of hobby to give him to be honest. Thanks, I appreciate that people are finally commenting about mine
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His abilities, gained through forty years of intense meditation and mental preparation, allow him to manipulate brain cells in order to gain desired results. For example, he could disable certain brain cells in order to cause the victim to fall into a coma, become psychopathic, or lose certain knowledge that he decides he doesn't want that person to have. Given this, he also has control of all of the opponent's senses, making them see, hear, smell, feel, or taste anything he wishes them to.

That is fucking awesome. *.*
And I'm so glad you gave him physical weakness to counter this deadly ability.
Well who needs physical strength when you have abilities like that. I invented a character for a roleplay that died a while ago and finally put him to use. I originally had him as a person who came from a clan of people with psychic powers, but here I took out all the abilities of moving things with his mind and justified it all with scientific explanations.
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I gotta say, I love how you connected him to Sasori and Yura. Very well-done.
Thank you, I felt like Sasori randomly learning a mind-warping technique was a bit off, especially since his specialty is puppets and pretty much nothing else related to extreme Gen or Ninjutsu. So I had my character teach it to him.
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You're character is definitely unique. And I gotta ask, does he lack tact/people skills since he spent the majority of his life alone? (I would think he does) That's always a funny quirk for me.
He would, yes, I admit I hadn't thought of that. Impressive idea, it should be added.

On to your character:
I have to admit your character was very impressive, especially the lengthy story which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I liked how the father of the child remains a mystery. That was an interesting way to bring out the reason for her Genjutsu abilities, in that her body was frail and weak so she needed it. Also, it's good that you don't have a bloodline limit on yours, in my opinion it sort of sucks your character dry of originality to do that.
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