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Old 08-05-2007, 06:56 PM   #1
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Red face uh...poems written over vaca...comment...please?

...a couple of poems...i wrote over vaca...cuz so0o0 many things happened....please comment them....

........................................ ........................................ ........................ eerrr....this was because alotta people that i kno and my friends kno died between this and last year....my friend helped me with it...
Darkness surrounds me
Friends staring and laughing
Suffocatin from the dead around
Losin the soul within me
Wanting to die yet I must live
Entombed in a glass coffin
I can feel the devil's chilling breath
Then I see a light, is God tricking or saving me?
An Angel appears,and with a flash of light
I find myself in my bed
Waking from what wasn't a dream
Thinking it's safe to open my eyes
yet when they open they see dismantled,bloodied bodies on the floor
Sitting up and sweatin profusly
I start to question myself and my sanity
Thinking if I did this carnage
Yet not believing it I lay back down
Saying Goodbye 2 the souls who now rest in peace
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Left without any opinions of my own
Dressed the way people want me to be
Im not my own person
Im not free, Im a slave to society
My soul is a slave to the world
Both body and soul take beatings from this planet
The devil is filling my mind with lies
Laughing while waiting for the flood to happen in my brain
Yet I'm starting to break free
Ready to see this thing called the world
I'm ready to live my life
I'm a slave no more, I refuse to be one
Rob me, handcuff me, shoot me, stab me, curse me, kill me
If I must die for it, I will die being my own person
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Peace and quiet
A meadow
A happy birthday
A horse
A day of school
Then the tide changes
The peace turns to rage with a simple push
The quiet becomes noise with a volume change
The meadow catches fire burnin everything in it by a lightning strike
The birthday turns into a funeral by a mere heart attack
The horse dies giving birth
The day of school becomes the Columbine Shooting because of two angry kids
Wat I mean iz you never know the sorrow a little thing can cause. U can die in a *snap* of the fingers. Live life to the fullest!!
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Leave me for everything I've done wrong and right
Do it for saying this tonight
You gave me your heart and I took it
Everything is going wrong now, I guess that is what I get
So leave me to die,that is now my fate
I hurt you after all the pleasure we gave each other, I told you too late
So leave me to tighten the rope
Let me be and I'll just let you cope
Leave me to let my feet hang above the fallen chair
For your pain, I will no longer breath air
I still love you just as you loved me
I die with my still locked heart, just drop the key
But with my final breaths, I will pledge my love to you
I hope you can still say that you love me too
I know you wanted this
Before you leave can I get one more kiss?
Now leave me to die alone
Leave me to settle this on my own
Leave me to allow this to end peacefully, in silence
Leave me for this can''t be solved through repentance
Leave me so you can live your life happily
Leave me because I don't want you to see
Leave me alone in my empty room....
Leave me, for this is now my blessed tomb
that one was just randomly written................................. ........................................ ...................................
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Old 08-05-2007, 07:32 PM   #2
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Re: uh...poems written over vaca...comment...please?

*snap snap snap snap* yea you know, people snap to poems lol,they were pretty good in my opinion :O
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