What I'm Called

Gemakai · 03-20-2005, 04:29 PM

This is a little Gaara poem I wrote one day during this one creative writing club meeting my friend forced me to come to...I should go back though... but I digress...

---

Do you see these wounds,

These scars upon me?

Scars representing

All my misery?

No, of course not,

And why would you care?

Afterall, your kind

Had place them here

You said you loved me

Like mother did before

Then you betrayed me,

Resented me, even more.

Gaara, what you called me,

A demon that loves himself.

I live for my existence

And no one else.

People’s eyes, they hate me!

I see it day by day!

So why should I care

Of what they say?

I’m always alone,

With scars buried down

Deep into my soul

Now, love can’t be found.

Gaara, I am called,

A demon that loves only himself.

I live for my existence

And no one else…

---

And there you have it. Undeniable proof that I've gone batcrap freaking insane!

Yunacat · 03-20-2005, 05:30 PM

You haven't gone insane. That poem is very true. It's probably pretty much how Gaara feels and thinks too. It's the sad truth of him... I liked it so much i feel like writing one myself... >> << >> << >> ^^

Jaded_Ninja_23 · 03-20-2005, 05:53 PM

Wow, I like that, makes me think of the stories I used to write when I was in school. *sigh* I love the poem though, Yunacat's right, It probably is what he's thinking though.

OffTheChain · 03-21-2005, 04:23 AM

that is so true and yet soo sad

, but its really good poem,

Kites · 03-30-2005, 12:49 AM

dang man!!!!! you got some nice rythems there! I live for exsitance and nobody else!!! omgz man that was pimp!

UND3R D0G · 03-30-2005, 06:32 AM

thats was quite poetic gemakai......nice flow to it

moomunky · 03-30-2005, 06:36 AM

very niceindeed *snaps fingers repeatedly in an applause type way*

Roy Mustang · 03-31-2005, 12:05 AM

omg ITS THE SIGN OF THE APOCOLYPSE GEMAKAI MADE AN AWESOM POEM run!

nelsonkong · 03-31-2005, 01:29 AM

Good poem..that's Gaara..Great one.

Dizzykilla · 03-31-2005, 03:55 AM

yeah i agree with all here..................u made a great poem there..........u should do a nother one........about Rock lee...........he so dreamy...................out.

Mistress_sfc · 04-01-2005, 01:58 AM

I agree with everyone. Very, very nice poem! I write poems myself, maybe I should do one about one of the characters of Naruto too.

Ok wait, thought about it, and it might not be such a good idea. I suck at writing poems.

Lets stick with Gemakai as a poem writer.

Dizzykilla · 04-01-2005, 09:40 PM

Dam girl.............that pic is hott............j/p........look do one about rock lee plz..............out.

Gemakai · 04-01-2005, 11:00 PM

Wow, so I'm the official Naruto Poem Writer?

SUCCESS! I HAVE MADE A LEGACY FOR MYSELF!

Kora: Gem! You're making a retard of yourself!

I am? Oh.....uh.......um....HENTAI FOR ALL!

Kora: *slaps him* Baka!

LightDreamer · 04-01-2005, 11:44 PM

I love it! Keep writing xD It's so great =]

Swtvi3tboi08 · 04-02-2005, 12:22 PM

i think its good. good job. i like the poem about gaara.

03-20-2005, 04:29 PM	#1
Gemakai Shiny Dark Knight Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Depths of your Heart Posts: 1,220 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	What I'm Called This is a little Gaara poem I wrote one day during this one creative writing club meeting my friend forced me to come to...I should go back though... but I digress... --- Do you see these wounds, These scars upon me? Scars representing All my misery? No, of course not, And why would you care? Afterall, your kind Had place them here You said you loved me Like mother did before Then you betrayed me, Resented me, even more. Gaara, what you called me, A demon that loves himself. I live for my existence And no one else. People’s eyes, they hate me! I see it day by day! So why should I care Of what they say? I’m always alone, With scars buried down Deep into my soul Now, love can’t be found. Gaara, I am called, A demon that loves only himself. I live for my existence And no one else… --- And there you have it. Undeniable proof that I've gone batcrap freaking insane! __________________ The Following May Contain Themes that would taint your little mind into questioning your life and beliefs and possibly causing you to jump off a cliff... you poor hopeless sap.

03-20-2005, 05:30 PM	#2
Yunacat Genin Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: 風を聞く窓から見る ... Age: 24 Posts: 114 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You haven't gone insane. That poem is very true. It's probably pretty much how Gaara feels and thinks too. It's the sad truth of him... I liked it so much i feel like writing one myself... >> << >> << >> ^^ __________________ Owner of the Rock Lee Fanclub Co-Owner of the Gaara Fanclub Member of the Konoha 5 FC

03-20-2005, 05:53 PM	#3
Jaded_Ninja_23 Academy Student Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Orlando, FL Age: 30 Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow, I like that, makes me think of the stories I used to write when I was in school. sigh I love the poem though, Yunacat's right, It probably is what he's thinking though. __________________ I give props to .::Professor::. I give props for this one to Daisuke

03-30-2005, 12:49 AM	#5
Kites I Love Donuts Join Date: Nov 2004 Age: 21 Posts: 1,165 Thanks: 27 Thanked 19 Times in 12 Posts	dang man!!!!! you got some nice rythems there! I live for exsitance and nobody else!!! omgz man that was pimp! __________________ til infinity..

03-30-2005, 06:32 AM	#6
UND3R D0G Chuunin Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Osaka-fu, Japan Posts: 403 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thats was quite poetic gemakai......nice flow to it __________________ Yoshaa: In love with Mistress? PWNED 1x by Angelwings Japanese Pimp Freakzoid Inuzuka Riyo, Tammy + Sakatsu Fanboy [[Its squircle goddammit! Not square + circle!!]] New email : yukasho57@gmail.com

03-21-2005, 04:23 AM	#4
OffTheChain ☆ Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 8,963 Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	that is so true and yet soo sad , but its really good poem,

03-30-2005, 06:36 AM	#7
moomunky Genin Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 282 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	very niceindeed snaps fingers repeatedly in an applause type way

03-31-2005, 12:05 AM	#8
Roy Mustang Zero Alchemist Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Torrance, CA Posts: 3,096 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	omg ITS THE SIGN OF THE APOCOLYPSE GEMAKAI MADE AN AWESOM POEM run!

03-31-2005, 01:29 AM	#9
nelsonkong S-Ranked Shinobi Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Middle of no where Posts: 2,792 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good poem..that's Gaara..Great one. __________________ Ma Sis : Sakatsu, Bubblezio

03-31-2005, 03:55 AM	#10
Dizzykilla Special Jounin Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Racine, Wisconsin Age: 26 Posts: 2,383 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	yeah i agree with all here..................u made a great poem there..........u should do a nother one........about Rock lee...........he so dreamy...................out.

04-01-2005, 01:58 AM	#11
Mistress_sfc Genin Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The Netherlands Age: 27 Posts: 274 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I agree with everyone. Very, very nice poem! I write poems myself, maybe I should do one about one of the characters of Naruto too. Ok wait, thought about it, and it might not be such a good idea. I suck at writing poems. Lets stick with Gemakai as a poem writer. __________________ ...Kisses from Mistress... Thanks 6n6 for the sig! ...Shadowwolf is my special bitch ...

04-01-2005, 09:40 PM	#12
Dizzykilla Special Jounin Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Racine, Wisconsin Age: 26 Posts: 2,383 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Dam girl.............that pic is hott............j/p........look do one about rock lee plz..............out. __________________ 1.14.20.9 - 14.15.15.2 DIZZYKILLA PAINT PROGRAM

04-01-2005, 11:00 PM	#13
Gemakai Shiny Dark Knight Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Depths of your Heart Posts: 1,220 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow, so I'm the official Naruto Poem Writer? SUCCESS! I HAVE MADE A LEGACY FOR MYSELF! Kora: Gem! You're making a retard of yourself! I am? Oh.....uh.......um....HENTAI FOR ALL! Kora: slaps him Baka! __________________ The Following May Contain Themes that would taint your little mind into questioning your life and beliefs and possibly causing you to jump off a cliff... you poor hopeless sap.

04-01-2005, 11:44 PM	#14
LightDreamer Jounin Join Date: Nov 2004 Age: 22 Posts: 741 Thanks: 1 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts	I love it! Keep writing xD It's so great =] __________________ GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (now imagine that 100 billion decibels louder than your average fire truck alarm and you will get the summation of my feelings towards your childish bickering) -- If you gave me the letters hrt you could give me [ea] to get h[ea]rt or [u] to get h[u]rt, but I'd rather have hurt than a heart without [u] - GOD I love that. You could give me a hundred thousand million years and I wouldn't have thought of that. -- All this time I've spent trying to change into someone you would love, I didn't notice you changed into someone I can't love anymore. Goodbye My King . --- The adulation of strangers.

04-02-2005, 12:22 PM	#15
Swtvi3tboi08 Eat Ma Meat! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: the corner Age: 23 Posts: 2,469 Thanks: 40 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	i think its good. good job. i like the poem about gaara. __________________ Jacked from Kaylah. Thanks Terri.

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