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Old 09-24-2007, 10:48 PM   #1
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This fanfiction is the continuation of my first fanfic by the name of "Lost Soul". Read it here: http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...=1#post1282248

Chapter 1 - Restless Nights

The night was cool and humid, dogs howled for a kid's pain. There was some disturbance earlier that night when somebody tried to break into several houses in a row. An emergency call for help was used, but Konoha's ninja couldn't come in time to catch the culprit.

Naruto avoided detection as best as he could, but the bright orange suit didn't help his sneaking much, neither did the pack of dogs that was chasing him. "I knew I should have listened to Hinata's advice..."

An orange blur flashed in the corner of a chuunin's eyesight, "Over there!" yelled the ninja, making his fellow co-workers rush into the alleyway where the orange blur ran in to.

Naruto knew this village by heart. He knew it more than anyone else alive, for his young years of pranks and running away had their benefits. He lured the search party into a dead end, and disappeared into a shortcut that nobody else knew of. He still had to run however; the pack of dogs had his scent and was on its way to give him a hefty dose of rabies.

Kakashi was called out to help search for the culprit, the parties of experienced ninjas had no idea where their target kept disappearing. The professional tracker put his head protector on and left his apartment. "Kuchiyose no jutsu!" exclaimed the copy ninja, slamming his palm into the ground.

A cloud of smoke revealed several dogs with Shinobi head protectors, "Yo, Kakashi, how's it going?" asked Pakkun.

"I need help finding a certain someone."

"Do you have a scent ready for us?"

Kakashi wasn't prepared at all, he had summoned his nin-dogs, but he would now waste their time trying to find a scent. "No."

Pakkun didn't get angry; he had a good friendship happening with Kakashi. But still wondered "Why did you summon us then? Getting senile?"

Kakashi grinned in embarrassment, rubbing the back of his head, "No, it's been a long day and I can't think straight. Tell you what, come help me search, and I'll get you all some dog food."

Pakkun got pissed off, "Kakashi, I may look like a dog, and I may like dog food, but don't forget who I am."

"I never did." smiled Kakashi

"Oh, alright then, we'll help you."

Naruto was panting from constant running, lost in thought, not knowing what to do. He didn't want to be charged with domestic disturbance, yet he didn't want to become a chew toy for stray dogs. Going home would also cause problems when the dogs would start marking it as their territory, and going to the Hyuga estate was too early to even consider. "Maybe I should just go outside the village and sleep in a tree. Dogs can't climb trees..."

The blond boy made a sharp turn around a corner and jumped up on a ledge to let the following ninja run by. "This is good practice..." smirked the teen.

The party of ninja ran by, not detecting his presence from the above. A sweat drop rolled down from his forehead, and fell from the tip of his nose. "I got to go to that hiding spot..." concluded the whiskered boy, and jumped down from his temporary resting spot.

Hinata was in her room, brushing her hair. "I wonder what Naruto is doing right now..." were her final thought before her father bust in her room, demanding that she turned her light of and went to sleep.

Tsunade was observing the restless night streets of Konoha in amusement. Lately there hadn't been much demand for the village's ninja, and missions were hard to come by, especially good B-ranked ones or higher. As a result there was much slacking off happening, and ninja were getting fat and lazy.

She knew the fact that Naruto was being chased by dogs, as well as she knew what had been going on in the streets below. Every little hiding spot Naruto had, every little detail he went through, she could see. The woman could have gone down and caught him herself, but she was using his misfortune to Konoha's advantage, and giving ninja some practice.

Pakkun's journey of sniffing the ground had come to an end; he lifted his head, "found him... Kakashi, you're going to love this..."

Naruto hid in his underground hideout, which he hid using a genjutsu that he learned a while back. Nobody but him would see the entrance, and if dogs could sniff him out, he set up a few harmless traps to stop them for the night. He leaned against the wall, and started eating chips, "This turned out to be a fun night."

Pakkun and several of his fellow dog-nin sniffed out Naruto's hiding spot and surrounded it. "He's in there, Kakashi."

Kakashi smiled, looking at a brick wall, "oh Naruto..." he shook his head, "you can't use this kind of genjutsu on me."

Naruto was starting to doze off, when a searing pain engulfed his wrist, he opened his eyes, "Oh no..." he looked down at his hand, which was now in the mouth of a dog, being chewed. "Rabies!" Screamed the whiskered kid and jumped up. Naruto then remembered something and observed the dog again, "Hey... I know you..."

"Oi, Naruto, long time no see!" Exclaimed a familiar voice.

A smile crept over the kid's face, "Pakkun!" Yelled Naruto and rushed over to the dog to give him a hug. "How have you been?" At that moment another thought came to mind, "Wait a second... If you're here, then so is..."

"Oi Naruto, what the hell have you been doing to the village? It's an uproar out there." Said the masked ninja.

"Kakashi!" yelled Naruto in joy, "You have to help me! I was walking home, and as I was going around the corner, I saw a pack of dogs waiting on my doorstep! So I started running away from them, and have been running ever since! I tried to get some help by knocking on doors and screaming for them to let me in! Nobody helped me!"

"Yeah, I wouldn't want a screaming lunatic with a pack of diseased dogs in my house either." replied Kakashi.

"Then they set ninja parties to chase me down, now I'm being hunted by all kinds of species! I noticed that birds don't seem to like me either!" Whined Naruto.

"Alright, let's get you over to Tsunade and get this mess cleared up. And what is it with you and dogs?"

Naruto went into a fit of tears and confusion, "I don't know! They all hate me!"

Tsunade was sitting in her office, looking over the sleeping village from her window. She had already called all the search parties off, prepared tea and dog food for her incoming guests, and was waiting for them to knock any second now. "Come in!" exclaimed the Hokage. The door opened, Naruto, Kakashi, and the pack of nin-dogs entered her office. "I've been expecting you."

Naruto didn't feel like screaming; he was tired, sweaty, and in desperate need of tea to get rid of his pesky thirst. He walked up, sat down, and started happily sipping the hot beverage, "This is good tea, thanks Baa-chan..." were the boy's last words before he fell asleep.

Tsunade looked up at Kakashi's inquisitive stare, "Yes, I organized all this. What can I say? I got bored."

"The dogs with rabies were quite unnecessary."

Tsunade agreed, "Yes, but I didn't do that part. Naruto attracted the dogs without my help."

Pakkun stepped into the conversation, "Sorry to interrupt you, but..." Pakkun started giving quick glances to the dog food that Tsunade had set up beforehand.

"Of course, you can all treat yourself, that's why I put it there,” replied Tsunade to the pack of nin-dogs. She turned back to Kakashi, "Naruto seems to have gained a new enemy. So far, this person has been doing nothing but trying to make his life miserable. I just used this situation to Konoha's advantage.

Kakashi sat down, and tried to run this through his head. "It's late, and I haven't had sleep for almost a week now. Let's discuss this tomorrow."

Tsunade nodded, "Escort Naruto back home safely, and get some sleep yourself."

"Hai." nodded Kakashi, getting up. He then turned to the pack of dogs feasting on their well-deserved meal, "Pakkun, I'm going now. When you and the rest of your gang are finished eating, you will be dismissed."

"Hai, have a good one, Kakashi." replied Pakkun through a full mouth.

Kakashi slapped Naruto awake and helped him stand back up, "Naruto, you're going home."

Naruto looked up, not sure if the happenings were another dream or not, "Huh? Oh yeah, sure..." replied the blond kid and fell back asleep.

Kakashi put Naruto's arm around his shoulder and headed towards the door, "What about the dogs?"

"I wouldn't worry, they're gone now." replied Tsunade.
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Hinata lay in her bed, unable to sleep. Something was troubling her, she felt a need to sneak out her window and go pay Naruto a visit. She got up and peeked out her door, satisfied by the fact that everybody seemed to be asleep, she dressed up and climbed out her window into the night.

Hiashi opened his eyes, his blood limit activated. He got up, already knowing that Hinata snuck out to see her secret boyfriend. Hiashi had sensed it for a while now, Hinata's change. His daughter was no longer shy, lost her stutter, and even defied his orders every once in a while. He dressed up and started trailing Hinata to her secret lover.

Kakashi dragged the boy beside him with effort; something was out of place about Naruto. Kakashi put him down and opened the boy's coat. "Oh Naruto..." sighed Kakashi, pulling a plate of metal from Naruto's suit. "Be careful, strength isn't something that's too useful nowadays. And this kind of power is bad for your health."

Several dogs appeared from behind a corner, growling, fanged mouths foaming with rabies. The pack started circling Kakashi and his unconscious comrade.

Kakashi looked around to see if any human was in sight, he didn't want anyone to see what he was going to do next. Satisfied that he was the only conscious human on the premises, he took his forehead protector off and dropped it beside Naruto. He then loosened some of his clothes to give his body room to breathe.

The dogs were advancing, murderous eyes fixed on what they assumed to be their prey.

Kakashi started removing his mask, revealing his left Sharingan eye. He then pulled the cloth down even further; he was revealing his face to the dogs.

The pack of dogs fell to the ground, unconscious, when Kakashi released a thunderous roar.

Naruto instantly woke up from the noise, to find himself lying on the ground beside Kakashi, surrounded by unconscious, shivering dogs. "What happened?" asked the blond getting up from the cold, hard ground.

Kakashi turned back to Naruto, mask already put back in its proper position, "Oh, you're awake. Good, I won't have to carry you anymore."

Naruto felt light, awake, and ready for a whole new day. "What time is it?"

"I think it's around four-thirty."

Naruto decided to go home to make himself some eggs for breakfast, "Alright, thanks for the escort. I'll get home by myself."

Kakashi smirked, and replied, "I highly doubt it," as Naruto collapsed into sleep again. "You may feel wide awake, but your mind still needs rest. Your latest training takes a lot out of you."

Hinata didn't activate her blood limit. She ran down the streets, knowing that her father was following her. If she had activated her blood limit, Hiashi would know that she was aware of his presence. She didn't want to give Naruto any trouble, but she couldn't turn around and run back home, it would raise suspicion in her father.

Hiashi had been following Hinata for a while; the girl was leading him into an old part of Konoha, overgrown with trees. "Where on earth is she going, and who is this guy that thinks he's worthy of her?" thought Hiashi

Hinata ran past the landscape of trees and bushes, until she arrived at a terrain of trees growing out of a pond. She stopped and took her shoes off.

Hiashi stopped in his tracks, seeing that his daughter ceased her running and was now doing something else.

Hinata, barefoot, stepped onto the water and tied her hair back. "I hope this works..." thought Hinata as she started training her fighting style.

The man was stunned, he was so sure that she snuck out to visit her boyfriend, that he failed to consider that she left to go train, "Hinata..." He shook the pride he had for his daughter off, "No, she was definitely going to see him, she just noticed me and changed course to try and confuse my logic." Thought Hiashi, "But how could she notice me? She didn't activate her Byakugan, not even for a split second... how did she... notice me?"

Hinata's quick fighting style of mixing chakra, and using the terrain as an obstacle course, was beautiful to Hiashi. He watched as his daughter, flawlessly executed every move of the never before seen style. "Where did she get this? How did she get this?"

The training used up all Hinata’s concentration; she couldn't focus in on her father's position or presence. The only thing she could do is keep training for half an hour, and look for his presence once she pretended to take a break. But she was in no hurry; she enjoyed her new style almost as much as she loved Naruto. The night's potential was fulfilled by Naruto and Hinata's doings.
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kakashi, if you ask that question one more time, it WILL be the end.

FOR THE LAST TIME, NO IT'S NOT THE END! PART TWO DOES NOT END AFTER ONE CHAPTER!!!
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Chapter 2 - Ichiraku Ramen

Hiashi forced himself to walk away, rather than come out of hiding and demand an explanation from Hinata. He wished to know who her boyfriend was, and where she got the new style from, but considered his daughter's change. If he would burst into her life in such a vulgar manner, he would lose her completely; she would always defy his will and become an unsuitable heir to the Hyuga family.

Hinata trained until morning. She stopped for what looked like a break, to see if there was any presence of her father lurking about. Satisfied by the fact that nobody was watching her, she put her shoes back on and walked back to the social part of Konoha.

Naruto woke up from a knock on his door. His head felt like it was splitting in half, and his muscles were so sore, that he dropped to the ground when he tried to stand up.

Upon hearing a loud thud on the ground, Ino burst in through Naruto's door. "Hey, blondie," said the girl coming over to the kid on the floor to help him get up.

"You shouldn't be talking," replied Naruto.

Ever since several months beforehand, there had been a chain reaction of change in people's personalities. Naruto was undergoing a special training he created for himself, formed from the advice of a very confused friend of his named Kiyoshi. He started playing chess with himself, writing down all possibilities he had for his next move, and choosing the best. The training stabilized his mind, he was able to think seven moves ahead, and consequentially his clear and flawless thinking calmed him down into a cool, yet social teen.

Hinata's confession changed her completely, in both; mind and appearance. She was no longer shy; Naruto's acceptance wiped all her doubts off clean, and nobody could intimidate her or make her feel sorry for herself. Her old sweater was long gone, replaced by a sleeveless black shirt, with her forehead protector tied around the waist, and a loose scarf around her neck. She even made attempts to color her hair every once in a while, but Hiashi always forced her to wash the dye out.

Ino had given up on good looks ever since the arrival and quick departure of her love. She had destroyed her shallow and immature self when she started training for the boy named Kiyoshi, trying to better herself to find a place in his heart. Her love didn't return from his mission, but kept changing her never the less. She became good friends with Naruto, seeing what Kiyoshi saw in the former sergeant loudmouth. And now failed to see what she once saw in a boy named Sasuke. She watched Sakura in pity, as her good pink-haired friend wouldn't give up hope on Sasuke's return.

The changes in several of Konoha's ninja brought on more change in others, creating new links and bonds of friendship throughout Konoha, thus making the village smaller and familiar to everyone. People became less prejudicial, the dawn of a new generation was starting to change the old one's heart. Yet it still wasn't enough for the seniors of Konoha to stop hating the Kyubi, no matter how much control the Jinchuuriki had over the beast.

Ino picked Naruto up, "What the hell happened to you?"

Naruto groaned, trying to remember the previous night. He was so sure that he didn't go partying or get drunk, but the feeling he had felt too much like a hangover. "Oh yeah... I was being chased by everyone."

Ino didn't ask, for she didn't want to know. Naruto was a good friend, cool and considerate. But the misfortunes were still on his back, and he didn't know how to shake them off.

She brought him to the kitchen, sitting him down on the floor and rummaging through his nearly empty refrigerator. "You're so immature... you have to go grocery shopping more often."

Naruto remembered back to the previous evening, "I went grocery shopping yesterday... those damn dogs made me lose my food..."

Ino stared at him blankly; she was trying to force herself to drop the conversation, but her fun loving self kept screaming to ask what happened to Naruto. "Well, I guess we can go to Ichiraku for breakfast."

Unspeakable joy brewed in Naruto's eyes, "Sure, let's get some people to come with us."

"Let me guess... Hinata?"

"Yeah. Who do you want to bring?"

Ino sighed, "Sakura."

Naruto blew a raspberry at the name. Several months back Sakura used a jutsu on him, making him hate her. Unfortunately the effect was permanent, and now he couldn't stand looking at the pink-haired girl without mumbling an insult. "Fine..."

They took a good half an hour to pick the two girls up from their homes, and were finally on their way to Naruto's favorite source of ramen.

Hinata giggled at her jumpy boyfriend, "Naruto, I think it's time to admit that you're addicted."

The boy of the group smiled, "Silly Hinata, Ichiraku ramen isn't addictive..."

Sakura joined in, "I thought so too, but you are proving me wrong." Naruto blew a raspberry in her direction. She smiled, "Oh, grow up."

Ino stepped in between the two, seeing Naruto getting ready to tackle Sakura into a nearby garbage bin. "So Hinata, have you told your father about Naruto yet?"

Hinata looked down, "That's a dangerous choice. He's not the kind of father that would tolerate, let alone approve my relationship with Naruto."

"And Naruto... you're fine with this?"

Naruto put his arm around Hinata's shoulder, "I'll wait. No need to hurry."

Hinata continued, "He followed me last night, my father." Everyone's stares were fixed on her. "I snuck out to visit Naruto, and he started following me. He knows that I have a boyfriend, I'm just lucky that he didn't force it out of me."

Ino became concerned for the girl, "Hinata, are you... afraid?"

For the last few months, Hinata was a fearless warrior, as long as she was side by side with her boyfriend. Nothing could touch them if they were together. Ino knew this, and was surprised to see Hinata afraid. But she understood the reason perfectly, Hinata wouldn't want Naruto fighting her father, and she feared that it was inevitable.

"Yes," whimpered Hinata. Then let off a surprised yelp as Naruto picked her up by the waist.

"Hinata, I won't fight your father, you have to trust me. I would never let it get to that." whispered Naruto in her ear, and then pecked her cheek with a quick kiss.

Sakura watched the two lovebirds in envy. She would give anything to have that kind of relationship with Sasuke, but it was not meant to be. Her loved one was consumed by hate, and spat back out as an empty shell of a man, seeking nothing but revenge.

Ino also watched Naruto gently handle Hinata, softly putting her back to the ground. "I wonder where Kiyoshi is..." thought the blonde girl.

The four of them arrived at the ramen bar and placed their orders. While they were waiting, a familiar voice came from behind them, "Naruto? A ladies man? Well now I've seen everything."

The blond boy turned around to see Shikamaru lazily sitting on a lamppost. "Shikamaru! Where have you been?" exclaimed Naruto.

"Sand Village..." smirked Shikamaru.

Naruto gave him an inquisitive glance, "How'd it go with..." Naruto didn't want to give Shikamaru's secret away. There were three girls within earshot, so Shikamaru could only give one of two possible answers.

Naruto hoped that Shikamaru would say that he'd tell him later, but instead, Shikamaru's the answer was, "None of your business."

"Ouch, that was harsh,” thought Naruto.

To Shikamaru's surprise, the former spas-master gave off a calm shrug and signaled him to join in on their breakfast. "What's wrong with Naruto? What has been happening while I was gone?"
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Shikamaru met the infamous Kiyoshi at one point, but left for his mission an hour after Kiyoshi. He didn't know what change brewed in Konoha, the relationship between Naruto and Hinata, the loss of prejudice, nor what happened to the person who was the cause of all the change.

Not that Naruto didn't realize Shikamaru's absence disallowed him to watch the change of his comrades; it was just that Naruto didn't care enough to tell him what's been going on. He knew that Shikamaru would catch on fairly quickly without his help, so he let it go and wrapped his hands around Hinata.

Shikamaru was confused beyond grasp. "Did Naruto finally see Hinata? Couldn't be... he must have had help. But who would go out of their way to help them?"

"Oi, Shikamaru." said Kakashi, surprising everyone. The rather large group turned around, listening to what the copy ninja had to say. "Good thing so many of you are gathered here, I won't have to go hunting you down one by one."

Naruto knew what this meant. Kakashi wouldn't go around hunting people down unless there was a mission to be handed out. The boy was twitchy for an adventurous mission, already forgotten what had happened to Kiyoshi that summer. "What's the mission, Kakashi?"

Kakashi shook his head, "No mission... party!"

The teens were startled by the word; they've never had a general party planned out like this. "What kind of party?" asked Ino.

"A dance."

Naruto tackled Kakashi into a lamppost, shaking it, and making Shikamaru fall off and raise a dust cloud. He knew what these parties were about; couples, dating and obviously enough, dancing. What angered him is that this was planned, while Ino didn't fully recover from Kiyoshi. He would assault Tsunade later on that night.

"Naruto!" exclaimed Hinata, running up to him and dragging him away.

Kakashi got up and dusted himself off, "I don't know what to make of that reaction. Are you happy or mad?"

Naruto calmed down; he was making a scene, in front of a small crowd, as Hinata's boyfriend. "I'm sorry."

Ino took Sakura and walked away from the group. "Thanks Naruto, but I'm fine," thought the blonde girl, glancing back at boy.

Kakashi sat down beside Naruto, "What was that about?"

"Ino's not recovered, she must be in a world of hurt right now."

Shikamaru's confusion roared and echoed through the mountains. "Hang on a second. Ino's not recovered from what? Where is Kiyoshi? And since when are you considerate enough to care about her feelings?"

The three remaining team members from that summer's mission told Shikamaru what had happened while he was away. Down to Hinata's confession, every known detail the mission, and the death of Kiyoshi's love; Hikari.

"So what happened to him?" asked Shikamaru, stunned by the heartbreak of the story.

"Nobody knows. He's either dead, or wandering this world without aim,” replied Kakashi

"Oh boy, this is troublesome..." thought Shikamaru. "Why hasn't anyone tried to search for him? Having a broken heart makes people do stupid things."

"It wasn't Konoha's number one priority, and he can't hurt himself physically."

Shikamaru shook his head and looked over to Naruto, "Can you imagine if Hinata died?" Naruto's face tightened with shock, he hadn't considered this before, and he didn't want to. "It's not physical damage that a person goes through, it's mental and spiritual.

Kakashi got up, leaving the three remaining teens to converse. "Don't forget, party tomorrow at eight. Shikamaru, you might meet someone there for yourself."

Naruto snickered, "Who's clueless now?" Kakashi ignored the comment and ran off in search of more teens to invite. "Shikamaru, maybe you should..."

Shikamaru cut him off, "Be quiet Naruto. I'll talk to Tsunade about it. Speaking of which, I'm not very pleased with you."

"What do you mean?"

Hinata was lost; she had no idea what they were talking about. "What is going on?"

"Will you please tell her?" asked Naruto.

Shikamaru got up and started leaving, "You love to spread this around don't you? You didn't have to tell Tsunade about it."

Naruto was surprised, "I didn't tell Tsunade anything, she must've figured it out herself."

"I'll ask her today. In the meanwhile, be quiet."

Hinata stared at Naruto blankly, as sadness fell over her boyfriend's face. "What was that about?"

Naruto was disappointed to have nearly lost a good friend for no good reason what so ever. "Please, Hinata, don't ask me. I don't want to keep secrets from you, but I don't want to be put in these kinds of situations. It's not my secret to share."

"I understand."

Shikamaru stared at the clouds as he walked down the streets of Konoha, heading towards the Hokage's building. He didn't know how to feel; his reasoning kept shifting points of view and feelings on the subject. The whole reason he got a chance for something as amazing as a vacation to Suna, was because Tsunade knew his secret. Would that mean Naruto couldn't keep his mouth shut? Or did Shikamaru just get mad at a good friend for something he didn't do? "Troublesome..." thought Shikamaru
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...gomen...wont happen again... please dont be mad...i like the story its funny the way nauto knows something that kakashi doesnt^^
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Wow, that was really good! I can't wait until the rest comes out!
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Here's the next chapter. I have 13 more lined up, and ready to be posted.

Chapter 3 - Reunion Party

The air was cool and moist, making the fallen leaves stick to the teen's boots as he walked down a path filled with memories. Nothing could change the past; all he could do is observe it as if it were a play or book. Things could have turned out better than they did, but they could have been worse too. Not disappointment, but bliss fell over the longhaired blond traveler as he made his way past half empty trees of orange and red leaves.

Naruto was getting prepared for the party, trying to find an orange suit that made him look best. "I definitely should have taken Hinata's advice..." thought Naruto, as he observed the messy looking person in his mirror.

A knock came on the door; Hinata was there to pick him up. Naruto imagined what would have happened if he went to pick her up instead, then shuddered at the image of his beat up and motionless body being dragged out of the Hyuga estate. He quickly put some cologne on and rushed over to the door.

Opening the door, allowing the delicate, yet dangerous Hinata walk inside. He watched her in awe as she let herself in. She wore a light-violet dress, slits on the sides, open shoulders, and very revealing. Hair flowed back in a glossy river, and high-heeled shoes to match her dress. She giggled at Naruto's stunned expression, "You're going to make me blush,"

Naruto snapped out of it, "Sorry." He turned around and got jumped away from the mirror, being terrified by its reflection. "Hinata, can you help me? I can't find anything good to wear.

The girl walked over to his wardrobe, only to be frozen with shock. Nothing but orange suits and black t-shirts. "Why didn't you get anything presentable?" Asked the girl, turning to Naruto, who was too embarrassed to reply. "Never mind, we'll have to improvise."

"How?"

Hinata took out an orange jacket and put it over Naruto's shoulders. "We have to do something with your hair..." Naruto looked over his current attire. His usual jacket, hanging loosely over his shoulders, emphasizing the cool in his black t-shirt. Hinata got some water and combed his hair back, into a tidy hairstyle. "This is definitely you," giggled the girl, and kissed him on the cheek.

Naruto felt warm; nobody had ever looked after him the way Hinata did, somewhat resembling the care of a mother he never had.

The night grew, the couple left Naruto's residence to go to the party, and pick up several people on the way there. Many people refused; Shino considered the whole idea of parties to be silly, Shikamaru refused to go for a reason he wouldn't tell them, and they had to drag Sakura out of her bed with Ino's help. The night brewed, the deep, ground shaking music could be heard and felt from miles around. There wasn't any need to go to the party, people stayed home and still felt like they were there, dancing with their friends.

As the group of four headed to the source of loud music and fun, they heard the melody change into something familiar. The sound somewhat resembled drumming, bass and violins, they followed the rhythmic beats to Konoha ninja academy's front doors. Their mouths fell wide open after they saw what happened to their former school; the whole school was changed into a big concert, roof was the stage, big speaker in front of the doors, people dancing in any empty space they could find.

They looked up on the roof to find even more amazement; Choji was beat boxing, creating the best background beat a rapper would ever want. They looked around for the rapper who hadn't stepped in yet. A voice took up the empty spot in the song, a familiar voice that Hinata used to hear every day back when she was on her team; Kiba's voice.

To everyone's amazement, Kiba made an amazing rapper, and an even better singer when the song turned into that of the rock genre. Choji took up the drums, as Lee stepped up with a swinging electric-guitar solo, softening the music into a slow-dance song.

Naruto couldn't help but snicker at his friends, and yet be slightly jealous of their never before seen talents. He decided to break the ice. "Shall we?" asked the boy, offering his hand to Hinata for a dance.

"Sure," smiled the girl.

Sakura and Ino watched the couple disappear into the vast crowd. "What do we do now?" asked the pink-haired girl.

Ino patted her head, "Time to go hunting for a guy."

Sakura chuckled, "So much for the mature Ino..."

"No... Not a guy for me," replied the blonde, "A guy for you."

Sakura tried to run away, but found herself caught by the collar and dragged into the crowd. "Let me go Ino! I don't want any guy but Sasuke!"

Ino shook her head, "I wish Sasuke was here, so that we could get rid of her crush on him... like we did with Naruto,” thought the girl.

Sakura screamed and kicked, but her friend wouldn't let her down. Eventually the hauling came to a stop and she found herself tossed into the arms of a boy, "Damn it, Ino..." thought Sakura before looking up at the guy holding her, and giving off a sweet smile of satisfaction. "Thanks."

A chill went down Ino's spine, one she hadn't felt in a long time. She couldn't put her finger on it, but something was out of place. Not knowing whether it was good or bad, a smile crept over her face; instinct told her that she wanted this chill for a while now.

The soft rock session was coming to an end, yet nobody knew. The guitar and singing were fading, until only a solid beat from Choji's drums could be heard. The percussion started becoming intense; hard kicking blows, and brushing hi-hats came in, setting the mood up for what came next in line.

Nothing happened but Choji's changing hard beats. No change until a series of short, tempered turntable scratches started to fade into the musical composition. A cloud of green smoke exploded on the rooftop, initializing the deep, raving melody that was nobody's but Sai's.

Smoke cleared, revealing the emotionless boy, pressing his headphones down with one hand, the other in charge of a pair of turntables and big boards of knobs, which were his DJ set.

Loud cheering from the crowd was overwhelmed by the deep and loud club techno music that was the combination of Choji's beats and Sai's melody.

Naruto turned to Hinata and smirked, now was their chance to show the crowd what they were capable of. Their fighting style which could be easily interpreted as a dance, fit into the music with ease.

Hinata smiled back and nodded, indicating her approval to start the show. Naruto stepped back and stretched his hands out to the sides, making the people around him nervous and step back. He calmly leant forward and jumped up into the air, creating several back flips.

Hinata ran in, catching his hand as he was still going up, and pulled him back down in a spring-like retraction.

Naruto was in a vertical and motionless handstand, Hinata standing over him in a battle stance. A moment passed before the two started their action; Naruto spun around, legs together and stretched out upwards, standing on the ever-shifting fingertips.

Hinata went low and tripped him off his hands with a sweeping kick, flinging him upwards through the air, still spinning. While her boyfriend was airborne, she spun around, lifting her feet off the ground with sweeping jump-kicks that went in all directions. Yet still remained under the airborne Naruto.

Naruto stretched his fists out to the sides as he fell back down to the ground, spinning in a dangerous fury of attacks. Falling down, headfirst, he relied on Hinata's concentration to execute the next move. But he wasn't worried; they had been training this beautiful battle-dance for the past two months, they were separate, but at the same time they were one in spirit.

Hinata saw Naruto falling down several feet to her left; she changed the course of her next move several degrees in his direction, and back flipped. Clinging on to his hands in midair and making them spin around eachother, they created something resembling a ying-yang.

Everyone around, watched the couple in awe; a dance that's best described as team break-dancing. Tsunade watched the event from the above in amusement, "I'd love to see that style in actual combat... looks very promising."

A ninja appeared at her side, "Tsunade-sama, we have a problem."

Tsunade didn't turn away from the dance of a ninja couple, "Hm?"

"Tsunade-sama, this is serious!" exclaimed the guard.

"What is it? I'm listening,” replied the Godaime, still watching the events below.

"We have an intruder! This guy used the village dance to their advantage! We need to find and dispose of him!" yelled the ninja.

"Estimated age?"

"He is in his late teens." Replied the man. Tsunade looked up from the crowd and did something that the ninja couldn't grasp with logic; she smiled. "Tsunade-sama... what are your orders?"

"You're back..." thought the Tsunade. The woman looked down at the ground again, "Don't do anything, there's no need for commotion over that kid."

"But Tsunade-sama!"

"I said go back to your post and keep watch! This kid is a friend."

The ninja didn't understand her reasoning, but followed her orders never the less. "Hai!"

Tsunade couldn't help but smile, "Have you gotten over her? Did you come here looking for a home again?"
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Naruto and Hinata kept their movements going, supporting each other’s otherwise impossible moves. It was time to take it to the next level; Hinata tossed her boyfriend into the air, as he summoned a couple dozen clones and fell back down to join Hinata's side. They used the group of clones as an obstacle course, creating death-defying flips and spins, thus making the crowd dizzy.

The longhaired boy in a trench coat walked down the dark streets of Konoha, drawn by the raving sounds resembling those of an underground club. Walking and thinking of the various thoughts he had earlier; the things he changed and the people he saved, for better or for worse, he killed other human beings. He felt like the grim reaper, yet an event he experienced a month earlier proved his feeling to be wrong. Someone stepped into his life, changing him once again.

Ino's chill turned into a heart-warming sensation, whatever brought it on was nearby, and she wanted to know who or what it was. She forced her way out of the crowd.

Naruto and Hinata kept going until a dark figure stepped up. The cloaked person grabbed them by the ankles and tossed them up into the air.

Hinata turned to look at Naruto, he nodded. The stranger offered hostility, he would get a hostile reaction in return. They flipped over and fell back down towards the cloaked stranger. Instead of landing, they skipped directly to the attacking, both swinging their kicks into his face.

The stranger, hood covering his sight completely, blocked the counter-attack, but didn't toss them up into the air again, he didn't have enough time. His movements were much like theirs, he evaded and moved their attacks off to the side, before they turn around and engage again.

Nobody knew whether this was a part of the show, but wouldn't want to interfere in either case. The band watched the fight below, speeding the beat up to see if the three dancers could keep up.

Naruto was oblivious; this was just another opponent for him and Hinata to take down, but more difficult.

Hinata's stomach started tingling in anticipation; the fight gave her a feeling, a feeling that she had felt a few months before. Still not able to remember whom this opponent was, she concentrated on trying to take him down. The more they tried to take this person down, the more he matched their speed and agility. She finally remembered who he was, the only boy she ever knew to hold his attacks back in order to balance the fight. "It can't be..."

The stranger lifted his head, revealing a smile under his hood, "I see you went far with this style."

Naruto and Hinata jumped back, landing several meters away from him to watch him remove his cloak.

Before Kiyoshi could take his disguise off, a blonde girl ran up to him and hugged him. She didn't need to see him to know that he was Kiyoshi, she remembered the chill she had before, the chill brought on by the thought of Kiyoshi's death. "Never leave again..."

Naruto still didn't know who this person was, but the girls seemed to know him. "Who are you?"

Kiyoshi threw the cloak off, "still don't remember me?"

Naruto couldn't believe his eyes. The guy who changed his life, opened his eyes and mind, had come back from the dead. "What happened to you?" Asked the whiskered boy, examining Kiyoshi's scars.

Kiyoshi looked up, revealing three long scars running from the bottom of his jaw and down the neck. "The explosion cut up my throat pretty badly."

Hinata flinched from the thought; it looked as if there were three metal plates that entered his neck diagonally. "Don't do that again..."

It didn't take long before Naruto and Hinata went back to the dance, Ino went home, and Kiyoshi found a bench he could sit on and talk to himself. Tsunade watched the boy, "So you're back... and even less sane than you were before."

Kiyoshi's eyes widened for no reason, he reached inside his coat and pulled out something rectangular. "Tsunade-sama! Catch!" yelled the boy, tossing a box of chocolates to the hidden Godaime.

She caught the box, "How did he notice me?" thought the woman.

The party went deep into the night, making everyone sleep in the next day. An unsanitary method of reunion on Kiyoshi's behalf, but an effective appearance to the public.
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Kiyoshi returns! (13 more chapters, you say? WOW!)

Anyway, I LOL'd at the fact that Chouji, Kiba, and Lee formed a rock band. Great writing, keep it up!

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