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gaaraofthesand.1234 · 11-18-2007, 06:06 PM

ooc:made up ones.

tenkaichymaster · 11-18-2007, 06:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sakura21

ic: Back at the Konha village, Fuyumi was training on her newley developed technique. She had been training with Arashi, and they were at it for hours. Fuyumi was training her new iron petal jutsu, while Arashi had his wind sword out for practice. Fuyumi kept at bay, while Arashi charged at her head on. [I know thats not you] Fuyumi told herself, wondering hwere he had gone. She had ignored Arashi coming at her thinking it was just a clone, when she got slashed by the sword. As she fell to the ground, Arashi ran over to help her. {Fuyumi, Are you alright?} As he tried to help her up, Fuyumi turned around with a red face and yelled:[ ARASHI YOU IDIOT< THATS tHE %TH TIME YOU TORE MY NEW OUTFIT!] While Fuyumi had been yelling, Hibikki had been siting on the sidlines, thinking about Sorayai and the others.( Were could they have gone, why did they just dissapear without a single word?) For the last 2 weeks, Hibikki had been worried about Sorayai and the otheres, and couldn't stop thinking about them. (Hey you two, I'm going to go home now, you can keep training if you guys want, later.) He summoned a big blue bird that had an eypeatch on its eye and, and the giant bird and Hibikki were covered by blue clouds, then they vanished. [Well were could he have ran off to in such a hurry? And why would he use that bird to go?] Arashi was worried now, because Hibikki and him had been friends for years, and he had only seen him use that bird to travel whenever he was nervious or worried about something. Fuyumi was still yelling at Arashi, then he just dissapered while she was yelling at him. [Hm, were'd everybody go?]

ooc: Can the real Naruto characters be in this, or just our made up ones?

ooc: Sakura don't forget to use quotes when a character speaks..

example: "what heppened in here?!" Kenshi said...

gaaraofthesand.1234 · 11-18-2007, 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tenkaichymaster

ooc: Sakura don't forget to use quotes when a character speaks..

example: "what heppened in here?!" Kenshi said...

ooc: Your one to talk!!!! ypu had not used quotes forever... untill we all were yelling at you, lol.

tenkaichymaster · 11-18-2007, 06:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gaaraofthesand.1234

ooc: Your one to talk!!!! ypu had not used quotes forever... untill we all were yelling at you, lol.

ooc: I know!!! but then I corrected it, that's why I am telling Sakura.. lol.

sakura21 · 11-18-2007, 06:17 PM

ooc: okay EDIT: Is it okay if I use these things --- ( [ {, cause those are what I've been using.

ic: [Hm, so they just left whitout a word, I guess that Genji-sensei left too, he probably left a while ago.] Fuyumi got up off the dirty ground, and headed back to the village. Meanwhile.... Hibikki was flying around on his bird. ---So Hibikki, what are you looking for now? Thats the only reason that you could have summoned me.--- The giant bird wanted to know what he was here for. (I'm looking for someone.) ----Your still looking for that girl and those others?---- (No, its someone....something else this time, you should know by now what it is.) ----Ah, what do you need him for at a time like this?----- (Well if you must know, hes gonna help me get what i need. He's gonna help me find and kill my brother.)----Your no match for that man, even with his help you'll never kill him, face it, not even the great sky pheonix can kill that man. He's unstobable.----- (No, thats not who were going to see.) ---?---- (Were going to see....Unryu.)-----What!---- (Thats right, we need to go up in the sky and find Unryu, so that I can get something from him. I need him to train me, and I need to be able to summon monsters that are at his level of strength.) ----What are you talking about, you know that theres only one creature in this whole land thats been able to defeat Unryu.---- As they headed off into the sky, Hibikki took out a small red scroll. (Are you ready?)----Lets go---

tenkaichymaster · 11-18-2007, 06:18 PM

ooc: sakura I meant this sign: "
that's the one you use for quotes

I'MNOTCRAZY · 11-18-2007, 06:25 PM

ooc: "bla" is for saying stuff. bla is for thoughts. everything else is normal text. it's just like writing a book.

...since it's in Konoha...again...I have nothing to do...

sakura21 · 11-18-2007, 06:30 PM

ooc: okay okay, I'l' use qoits.

ic: Hibikki pulled open the scroll as they stood their. Hibikki made some handsigns, and then said: "Hidden Technique; Dragons Deminsion" a portal opened in front of them, and they flew in. Meanwhile, Arashi had been tracking down Hibikki, and lost his location. "Dangit, hes gone off to far away." Arashi headed back to find Fuyumi.

tenkaichymaster · 11-18-2007, 10:04 PM

"I need to train and prefect this jutsu" Kenshi said while he tried to get up..

"No Kensh!!!i" Kaoru said as she stopped him..
"Leave me alone, I need to train" Kenshi said
"No, you can't, you are still too weak, if you go right now you could end up.." Kaoru said..

" how? dead?" Kenshi said
"Yes..." Kaoru said

*So what does that matters to youanyway?" Kenshi asked
*Well..., Actually.. " Kaoru said

Suddenly the Hokage entered the room

"Kenshi I see you are still alive" he said
"Yea, barely but he is..." Kaoru said
"It needs more than an explosion to kill me, you should already know that" Kenshi said

"Yes, Indeed" the Hokage said
"Well, now if you excuse me I need to go trainning" Kenshi said
"What? trainning? but you just woke up" The hokage said
"Can you at least rest a little ?" Kaoru asked
"No!. I need to master this jutsu, I need to!!" Kenshi replied
"Well.. if you go right now, you will only not maste it, but you will kill yourself as well..." the Hokage said

Kenshi suddenly stopped..

He is right, I may end up killing myself, but it doesn't matter I need to master this jutsu...

"You should listen to Kaoru and rest first" the Hokage said
"No!, I neeed to go trainning!, now if you excuse me" kenshi replied

Kenshi intented to reach the exit but suddenly the Hokage moved behind him and made him faint with a hit..

"Hokage, what did ya?" Kaoru asked
"He is going to be okay, he i just knocked out" the hokage said
"But what are we going to o if he wakes up again?" kaoru asked
"Simple, we will tie him to the bed, come on help me with that" the hokage said...

Then the two tied Kenshi to the bed....

ooc: this reminds me of that naruto episode... lol

sakura21 · 11-19-2007, 06:47 PM

ic:After Hibikki and the bird left in the portal, they ended up in the hidded cloud village, were they would find Unryu, the great cloud god. As they flew threw the village, unseen, the giant blue bird asked Hibikki: "Hibikki, this makes no sence, I though that you were looking for some friend of yours last time we met, did you find her?" "No" " Then why are you looking for your brother if your trying to find an ally that can help you defeat him?" "Because, I think he might no of there were abouts, and while I get my answers, I want to be strong enough to kill him, I can't just go to him at this level. I have to become strong, but not just to kill him and find Sorayai, but to also figure out something else also." Hibikki paused for a moment and thought about his little brother whom he had lost, and later found out that he was a subordinate of his older brother. "We're here, prepare the scroll." They had reached the portal of Life and Death, which was the portal that would lead them to Unryu. Hibikki undid the scroll again, except opened it completly this time, revealing the word death on it. For some reason, the portal had opened and allowed them to enter the afterworld.

ooc: Okay, is akatsuki still going to be apart of our story, and are there still tailed beast?

I'MNOTCRAZY · 11-19-2007, 07:12 PM

ooc: yeah...there are still tailed beasts...

Rashawn104 · 11-22-2007, 06:38 PM

ooc: Srry everyone, I wasn't on nl for a long time for no reason, I was on myspace alot, maybe thats the reason...anyway, we're starting over now? If so, can I change my charrys, or should they be the same?

I'MNOTCRAZY · 11-22-2007, 09:55 PM

ooc: they stay the same...although I'm not sure if we are starting again or not...

gaaraofthesand.1234 · 11-24-2007, 07:19 PM

ooc: Yellow rashawn... I here you were talking ti your girl friend, lol.

sakura21 · 12-09-2007, 01:58 PM

ooc: COme on guys, we need to bring this fc back up, its been dead for like two weeks now, come on following: gaaraofthesand.1234, tenkaichymaster, and imnotcrazy, since were like the only four who post in this fc, then we need to start posting, oh yeah, and the same goes for me, i haven't been posting here either, so i take some of the blame.Oh, I think that I might not be apart of this fc anymore, it depends....

11-18-2007, 06:06 PM	#1231
gaaraofthesand.1234 Missing-Nin Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc:made up ones.

11-18-2007, 06:17 PM	#1235
sakura21 Genin Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Konohagakure=] Age: 19 Posts: 232 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: okay EDIT: Is it okay if I use these things --- ( [ {, cause those are what I've been using. ic: [Hm, so they just left whitout a word, I guess that Genji-sensei left too, he probably left a while ago.] Fuyumi got up off the dirty ground, and headed back to the village. Meanwhile.... Hibikki was flying around on his bird. ---So Hibikki, what are you looking for now? Thats the only reason that you could have summoned me.--- The giant bird wanted to know what he was here for. (I'm looking for someone.) ----Your still looking for that girl and those others?---- (No, its someone....something else this time, you should know by now what it is.) ----Ah, what do you need him for at a time like this?----- (Well if you must know, hes gonna help me get what i need. He's gonna help me find and kill my brother.)----Your no match for that man, even with his help you'll never kill him, face it, not even the great sky pheonix can kill that man. He's unstobable.----- (No, thats not who were going to see.) ---?---- (Were going to see....Unryu.)-----What!---- (Thats right, we need to go up in the sky and find Unryu, so that I can get something from him. I need him to train me, and I need to be able to summon monsters that are at his level of strength.) ----What are you talking about, you know that theres only one creature in this whole land thats been able to defeat Unryu.---- As they headed off into the sky, Hibikki took out a small red scroll. (Are you ready?)----Lets go--- __________________ Owner of: Japan FC Member of: Akatsuki Fc Genius Fc Co-owner of: Kekkei Genkai Fc Last edited by sakura21; 11-18-2007 at 06:18 PM.

11-18-2007, 06:18 PM	#1236
tenkaichymaster ..:::KERO:::.. Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere on this planet. Age: 19 Posts: 536 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: sakura I meant this sign: " that's the one you use for quotes

11-18-2007, 06:25 PM	#1237
I'MNOTCRAZY ANBU Join Date: May 2007 Location: MD Age: 21 Posts: 1,993 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: "bla" is for saying stuff. bla is for thoughts. everything else is normal text. it's just like writing a book. ...since it's in Konoha...again...I have nothing to do... __________________ want to see what FC's I'm in? click V you have a lot of these to go nope not here either you have a couple more more like 20 jk. here they are: Co-Owner: Naruto RPG FC Hagane Mukuge awesome RPing posts: 1. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=656 2. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=675 3. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=773 Member:NaruHina FC Super Smash Bros. FC The Genius FC Avatar: The Last Airbender FC

11-18-2007, 06:30 PM	#1238
sakura21 Genin Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Konohagakure=] Age: 19 Posts: 232 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: okay okay, I'l' use qoits. ic: Hibikki pulled open the scroll as they stood their. Hibikki made some handsigns, and then said: "Hidden Technique; Dragons Deminsion" a portal opened in front of them, and they flew in. Meanwhile, Arashi had been tracking down Hibikki, and lost his location. "Dangit, hes gone off to far away." Arashi headed back to find Fuyumi. __________________ Owner of: Japan FC Member of: Akatsuki Fc Genius Fc Co-owner of: Kekkei Genkai Fc

11-18-2007, 10:04 PM	#1239
tenkaichymaster ..:::KERO:::.. Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere on this planet. Age: 19 Posts: 536 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ "I need to train and prefect this jutsu" Kenshi said while he tried to get up.. "No Kensh!!!i" Kaoru said as she stopped him.. "Leave me alone, I need to train" Kenshi said "No, you can't, you are still too weak, if you go right now you could end up.." Kaoru said.. " how? dead?" Kenshi said "Yes..." Kaoru said So what does that matters to youanyway?" Kenshi asked Well..., Actually.. " Kaoru said Suddenly the Hokage entered the room "Kenshi I see you are still alive" he said "Yea, barely but he is..." Kaoru said "It needs more than an explosion to kill me, you should already know that" Kenshi said "Yes, Indeed" the Hokage said "Well, now if you excuse me I need to go trainning" Kenshi said "What? trainning? but you just woke up" The hokage said "Can you at least rest a little ?" Kaoru asked "No!. I need to master this jutsu, I need to!!" Kenshi replied "Well.. if you go right now, you will only not maste it, but you will kill yourself as well..." the Hokage said Kenshi suddenly stopped.. He is right, I may end up killing myself, but it doesn't matter I need to master this jutsu... "You should listen to Kaoru and rest first" the Hokage said "No!, I neeed to go trainning!, now if you excuse me" kenshi replied Kenshi intented to reach the exit but suddenly the Hokage moved behind him and made him faint with a hit.. "Hokage, what did ya?" Kaoru asked "He is going to be okay, he i just knocked out" the hokage said "But what are we going to o if he wakes up again?" kaoru asked "Simple, we will tie him to the bed, come on help me with that" the hokage said... Then the two tied Kenshi to the bed.... ooc: this reminds me of that naruto episode... lol

11-19-2007, 06:47 PM	#1240
sakura21 Genin Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Konohagakure=] Age: 19 Posts: 232 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ic:After Hibikki and the bird left in the portal, they ended up in the hidded cloud village, were they would find Unryu, the great cloud god. As they flew threw the village, unseen, the giant blue bird asked Hibikki: "Hibikki, this makes no sence, I though that you were looking for some friend of yours last time we met, did you find her?" "No" " Then why are you looking for your brother if your trying to find an ally that can help you defeat him?" "Because, I think he might no of there were abouts, and while I get my answers, I want to be strong enough to kill him, I can't just go to him at this level. I have to become strong, but not just to kill him and find Sorayai, but to also figure out something else also." Hibikki paused for a moment and thought about his little brother whom he had lost, and later found out that he was a subordinate of his older brother. "We're here, prepare the scroll." They had reached the portal of Life and Death, which was the portal that would lead them to Unryu. Hibikki undid the scroll again, except opened it completly this time, revealing the word death on it. For some reason, the portal had opened and allowed them to enter the afterworld. ooc: Okay, is akatsuki still going to be apart of our story, and are there still tailed beast? __________________ Owner of: Japan FC Member of: Akatsuki Fc Genius Fc Co-owner of: Kekkei Genkai Fc

11-19-2007, 07:12 PM	#1241
I'MNOTCRAZY ANBU Join Date: May 2007 Location: MD Age: 21 Posts: 1,993 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: yeah...there are still tailed beasts... __________________ want to see what FC's I'm in? click V you have a lot of these to go nope not here either you have a couple more more like 20 jk. here they are: Co-Owner: Naruto RPG FC Hagane Mukuge awesome RPing posts: 1. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=656 2. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=675 3. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=773 Member:NaruHina FC Super Smash Bros. FC The Genius FC Avatar: The Last Airbender FC

11-22-2007, 06:38 PM	#1242
Rashawn104 Academy Student Join Date: Nov 2007 Age: 19 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: Srry everyone, I wasn't on nl for a long time for no reason, I was on myspace alot, maybe thats the reason...anyway, we're starting over now? If so, can I change my charrys, or should they be the same? __________________

11-22-2007, 09:55 PM	#1243
I'MNOTCRAZY ANBU Join Date: May 2007 Location: MD Age: 21 Posts: 1,993 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: they stay the same...although I'm not sure if we are starting again or not... __________________ want to see what FC's I'm in? click V you have a lot of these to go nope not here either you have a couple more more like 20 jk. here they are: Co-Owner: Naruto RPG FC Hagane Mukuge awesome RPing posts: 1. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=656 2. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=675 3. http://forums.narutocentral.com/show...&postcount=773 Member:NaruHina FC Super Smash Bros. FC The Genius FC Avatar: The Last Airbender FC

11-24-2007, 07:19 PM	#1244
gaaraofthesand.1234 Missing-Nin Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: Yellow rashawn... I here you were talking ti your girl friend, lol.

12-09-2007, 01:58 PM	#1245
sakura21 Genin Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Konohagakure=] Age: 19 Posts: 232 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: ¤¤§< FANFIC~FC >§¤¤ ooc: COme on guys, we need to bring this fc back up, its been dead for like two weeks now, come on following: gaaraofthesand.1234, tenkaichymaster, and imnotcrazy, since were like the only four who post in this fc, then we need to start posting, oh yeah, and the same goes for me, i haven't been posting here either, so i take some of the blame.Oh, I think that I might not be apart of this fc anymore, it depends.... __________________ Owner of: Japan FC Member of: Akatsuki Fc Genius Fc Co-owner of: Kekkei Genkai Fc Last edited by sakura21; 12-09-2007 at 02:16 PM.

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