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Old 06-23-2007, 08:39 PM   #1
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After many failed naruto fics i have move on to a new fic that i have been brainstorming for the last month now and am currently now starting. It is an Oblivion Fan fic taking place Three years after the incident with Dagon and the Mythic Dawn. It is about a new combatant to the arena that discovers a new mythic dawn plot and discovers the land of the deadra. Please i hope you enjoy this fic as much as i like writing it, Thank you
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Chapter One The Seventh Rank


It was early morning in the imperial city. The city just started to wake up and life was budding in the streets like flowers in springtime. The Market District is already buzzing with the news and gossip of the day. A man can be heard talking to one of the guards, “But if the Sintav’s start an attack then the streets will be filled with Violence.”


The guard just nodded and turned to attend his duties. Others start entering the streets from other districts and from the palace. The sun rises up bringing a blue glow to the marble stone of the buildings. In the center of the city is the White-gold tower or the palace as it is more commonly know. South of palace is another tower that stands over its own little city, the tower of the Arch-mage.


At the strike of nine a new noise is heard from the east. It is the cheers from the Imperial city arena. The arena is a gathering of gamblers and warriors like. In the arena two combatants are dueling for the entertainment of their fans. The battle between the eager Argonian and the savage Khajiit finishes as the blood from the lizard falls upon the fur of the cat.



Down below in the place called the blood works Training for the grand champion and others is underway. The gray prince the current champ is working with a new gladiator rank battler. Behind them the yellow team leader is working on hand-to-hand skills for matches. Across the way Owyn, the blade master, is speaking to the next blue combatant for his seventh title match, “Solus your next match is against a fierce opponent who will tear you limb from limb, this Orc carries around a massive hammer that could knock your head to Hammerfell.” “I will be ok he wont be too hard to take an idiot down,” Solus said in his usual monotone voice. He turned away and walked toward the red room with its great chalice of life.



Solus was a fairly thin man with faded blond hair and grayish-blue eyes. He always wore the same outfit to the arena now that they let him wear the armor. It was a black cloak that covered his mouth and flowed down into a cape that covered his trail. The cuirass itself was a dim red that was almost the color of a Dunmer’s eyes. The greaves were black with several tears and holes near the knees. On his side was his sword, a long ebony sword with the engraving soulless on it near the handle.


The red room was filled with more blood from the last battle. It was oozing down the side of the walls making their mark for the rest of arena history. The chalice of life was nearly crimson with blood. Solus Looked up to see the winning Khajiit walking down the stairs to blood the blood works while cleaning of his dagger. The cat turned to look at the approaching killer and whispered, “Be ready for anything” The cat turned back washed his face in the chalice and turned to claim his reward from Owyn.



Solus proceeded up the stairs to the door with a writing of blood on it reading, ‘Azura be with you.’ Solus pushed open the door which brought a bright blue glow into the room blinding him for a split second as the crowds of the arena came into focus. He moved to the raised gate that separated him from his target, which was looking at him with deadly Orc eyes.



The arena announcer’s voice rang through the stadium like thunder through a canyon, “today is special match between the blue teams reining gladiator and the yellow teams, who will win, lower the gates.’


The voice ended and the gates lowered the two charged right out of the gate. The Orc with his hammer drawn ran straight for the charging Solus, who had yet to draw his sword. Solus quickly vaulted over the green beast and drew his sword. The Orc turned around quickly but it was too late. Blood seeped out of his mouth falling on to the metal grate of the arena. Solus Slowly sheathed his sword and behind him his foe fell in two.
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Chapter 1 part 2

The crowd of gamblers and fans screamed as Solus Walked out of view under the stadium. Cleaning off his blade Solus Circled down the stairs of the red room to the chalice where he dipped his blade in and the blood sieved of. The red room gate closed behind the warrior as he made his way to clapping combatants, “good job Solus, way to go” they cheered as he walked to Owyn


“Man you scare me sometimes you know that, well here is you pay and the tie to symbol your rank as the blue team hero. I must say I though your streak would end today. Just goes to show that even an imperial can be the best, ha-ha,” Owyn laughed as he handed Solus a small light blue ribbon with the symbol of a horse on weaved into the ends of it. He tied to ribbon into the under side of his robe with the rest of his ribbons.


“You know you can have two more matches today and get that much closer to getting you tenth win as a hero. After that you will be a champ like the gray prince, well not like him, he is crazy good,” Owyn said looking at the prince train with Ysabel, the battle matron.

Owyn was a Redguard meaning that his skin was very tan. He had brown eyes that matched his dark brown hair which was puffed into an afro. His armor was that of the blade master a red cuirass with the symbol of the Diagna engraved in the shoulders of it. The greaves were of a faded green which looked like the trees that hail from the Shores of Summerset isle.



Owyn smiled a bit at the legacy of the Diagna that he was wearing; he could not help but be proud. Solus turned to look at him and asked in his shallow tone, “I wish to fight again.” Solus stared at him with a none-emotional look on his face. Owyn tried to find some sense of fear, determination, or even happiness from him but none could be found.


‘He must have a death wish or be incredibly crazy, oh well’ Owyn though to himself shaking his head


“Alright head on up there I will have your opponent waiting for you,” Owyn proclaimed with a stupid grin on his face.



Solus again entered the red room, passed the chalice, and again proceeded to walk up the bloody stairs. He came across the sign again, pushed it by and walked up to the iron gates. The announcer’s voice again shook the walls of the arena declaring what he said before. His voice finished but the gates they did not move.


Solus gazed across to see an Altmer in light blue mage robes, signaling that he was from the Arcane University. His face was like all high elves narrow and ugly with a small hair stripe going across his head. On his back was an old wizard staff with a faint white glow in coming from it.


Finally the gate opened and Solus charged at his foe on to be met with a fireball soaring for his face. Solus swiftly flipped back drew his sword and cut the fire ball into smaller ones that fell to the ground. Solus looked up to see that his opponent had drawn his staff.


Solus pulled from his pocket a small trinket which he threw at the elf. From the trinket came a wall of fire that caused the foe to step back to avoid burns. He tried to survey the arena but the smoke from the flames was too thick to see anything. From the flames came a black figure with a sliver glint.



Solus’ sword made quick work of the staff which the mage used to block his attack. The elf got on his feet and started to beg for his inferior life. Solus could do nothing but look at the half crying man kneeling before him but end the life that the foe begged so much for.


The elf’s head rolled into the center of the arena where all could see. From the flames the winner stepped slowly to his side of the arena where he retired to the red room. This time there was no applause just the sight of people staring at the man, at the Unforgiver. This time Solus did not talk to Owyn instead he walked over to the door across from the red room and entered his room.

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Chapter Two Part One, The Secret Legacy

The next day Solus exited from his room to speak with Owyn about yesterday’s reward that he had yet to collect. That day reporters from the Black Horse Courier were there to question the man about the fiendish act that he committed the day before. All Solus could mutter was it was his fault for being in the arena.


The next day the paper would say The Unforgiver: The killer of the Arena. Solus was not happy or sad or angry in fact he didn’t care what the paper said about him. All he could care about was who his next opponent would be. And pray be that that soul is strong or else.



He did the procedure of the arena and was already standing at the iron bars. The announcer’s voice peered over the crowds causing them to roar even loader, “From the blue team we have the heartless man, with no emotion, no regret, and not a care at all; the Unforgiver.” The crowd reared their heads toward the blue gate to see the black cloaked man with his evil blade of blood.


The gates lowered to give way to the Khajiit and the Imperial. Solus moved towards on of the spiked bars at the side of the stadium. The Khajiit was keen to his plan and decided to use her cat reflexes to climb one of the center pillars. Solus could only do one thing.


He bolted towards the pillar and cried in his monotone voice, “Alteration Spider Boots.” His boots met with the wall and he started to climb with the agility of a spider. The Khajiit could not believe her eyes. “He must be the spawn of Sithis,” she said to herself right before her body met cold steel of Soulless.


Solus wiped the blood from his sword and walked quietly out of the arena. He made his way to Owyn to collect his reward from the match.


“Damn you know that Khajiit is probably with her gods now thinking she was still alive, haha. Well Solus it looks like you’re only at hero rank and you already have a title, so that means that the officials want to you to have a rank match. This match will be against the yellow team champion, A Warrior archer, and a myrmidon spell caster; so be ready and head up there now,” Owyn finished pointing to the red room.


Solus waited patiently at the gates as his opponents viewed him from across the way. The champion was a Nord, the spell caster a Breton, and the archer was a Bosmer. The gates fell and a silence befell the crowd as the fighters took to the stage. Solus made quick work of the spell caster who is now missing a leg, an arm, and pretty much everything else.


He also took down the archer with ease, cutting the bow and his face in to. The blood from both fallen foes soaked the floor as the champion raced towards his foe. With a small axe in hand he met Solus blow for blow. The deciding factor was a slight of hand. Solus quickly made it to the top of one of the four pillars and shouted, “Destruction Obliteration.”


In his hand appeared a small red,-blue, and white orb. Solus shoved the orb into his blade, which then began to shine brightly. Solus charged faster then ever. When the two weapons met, a discharge came from Soulless and froze, then shocked, and finally burnt the Nord into submission. Solus looked down at the charred remains of his foe and walked away as if nothing happened.


Owyn was stunned to see Solus let alone not scratched. “So you did you’re the champion of the blue team and I must say you did it with flare. So now I give to you title of Blue Team Champion, The Unforgiver, The Soulless warrior. People will pay big to see you fight I can tell.” Owyn finished and started to smile as his new champion walked to his room for a well earned rest.
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Chapter Two Part Two

He walked to the door with the initials SH on it. He opened it up to reveal a small one bedroom. It was yellow in color with the dim glow of a candle on the bedside table which was made of Skyrim oak, which is a dark brown color. The bed was lowered to the floor with nothing to support it. The sheets were a dull blue with under laying sheets. Over to the side of the door Solus placed his sword and cloak on a pedestal.



He looked around the room as if it was his first time ever walking into it. On the bed was a letter, with a red gold dragon insignia place on the seam of the letter. He picked it up and admired the gold lacing around the edges of it. He broke the seal and picked out the card.


On the inside it read in blood red letters:
If it is power that you seek, head to Chorrol to the big oak tree. If it is spells that you must wield, find the well at the AU field. If you eye must be keen, Find the man named Freen. Or if it is battles that must be fought and won, ask for Umbra at Pell’s Gate during the no sun.


There was no clue as to who sent it except for the now broken seal there was nothing. He looked toward the wall to the map. He quickly guided his hand down the Red Ring Road to a point of break in the land around it near the old bridge. That was where Pell’s Gate was and that’s where he was headed.


He grabbed his blade and his cloak and his travel pack from a journey, long forgotten. He suited up and head out. “Hey Owyn, I’m gonna be gone for a bit all my matches will be postponed alright,” he said to the busy Owyn. Owyn just waved his hand good bye, and Solus was off.


He headed down to the Telos plaza and exited via the front gates. In front of him the bridge that leads to power and strength, behind him a city filled with cheer and happiness. He chose the power.


He walked around the RRR to a point until darkness started to fall. He set up camp a little ways off the road to steer clear of bandits. He started a fire and looked up at the sky. “It’s still the same since then, nothing has changed,” he hushed to himself.


He turned to the fire and poured sand to snuff it out. And laid onto the mat for his bed. He closed his eyes and watched the darkness fall around his vision. His inner eye viewed into color and a red tint came into view.


He looked around and saw fire and ash circle around through winds. It was the Imperial city burning like it did three years ago. He turned and saw his friends and his soldiers dying by the hands of the heavily armored enemy. Beyond that could be seen the red figure of the enemy’s god its self, ‘Mehrunes Dagon’.


He sat up panting, sweat dripping from his musty hair. His breathing was heavier then normal. He looked as if he saw a ghost. In this case he did the ghost of his past the past he must try not to remember. The past that made him who he was, a killer that cared nothing for but the battle; An Unforgiver.
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Chapter Three The secrets of a past



In the morning he awake with out a look on his face. His conscious was cleared and he was about to head to Pell’s Gate. It was Tirdas, the sun was shining and fish could be seen leaping to the gallant air from Lake Rumare. The picture was completely serene.


Solus Grabbed his bag and headed south on the east side of the lake. His walk was slow but the journey was a good one. From time to time an Imperial legion watchman would pass by greeting him a good day. Traveling merchants and their huge wares would also pass by.


He new that today was going to be a horrible day because of all the signs around him. ‘No bandits, no creatures, what is going on there has to be something wrong here,’ he thought to himself calmly. This had to be an omen of the dawn.


He closed his eyes from time to time, but every time he would he would see it. A picture from his past an image of that journey he tried to forget with hiding and killing. He heard the cheers and shunned the people who did and embraced the art of war and death.


Through many of the images he saw one that made him happy it was that of training with his son Nero who died years ago when Solus was just 16. Solus shut that thought out and returned to the task at hand which by the way that the city kept moving was close very close.


“Just another three miles to go,” he said with out feeling.


“Good day sir,” said a man with great looking armor.


The man was a red guard, which you could barely tell because of the armor. The armor its self was unique something Solus had only seen on his last journey. The entire thing was a dull silver grey, with gold lining parts of the armor in straight lines.


“Good day,” he replied to the man


“Just remember the dawn shall live again,” the man said just before passing him.


Solus turned to respond, “Yes but not until the moon kills the lig… where did he go.” The man was gone like he never even existed. Solus shook it off as his mind playing tricks on him. So he returned to the given course.


After another thirty minutes of walking he made it. Pell’s gate was just ahead. Solus made his way to the center of town and approached the nearest person. “Excuse me I want to know if Umbra means anything to you,” the man looked at him as though Solus was crazy.


When the man saw no signs of joking he got closer and whispered, “Across the old bridge lies an Ayleid city known as Vindasel. Go down unto the farthest room and there will be a woman named Lenwin, Kill her and take the sword far from here.” The man stopped and then walked away not to look back how could he though the man he just talked to was about to die by the hands of the greatest warrior.



Solus looked back at the man and then looked forward toward the old bridge; which wasn’t far away. It took him ten minutes to reach it. The outside was dead nothing left but decaying pillars and the door to the death trap. Solus Thought less of it but little did he know was that this battle would change his life and the course of history years to come.
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He found that there were only three of them. The middle one was most likely the leader with his orcish armor and steel plated steel he was the most heavily armed, the other two looked like stooges that couldn’t think apart from eat, sleep, and kill. They were lightly armored with what looked like rough leather (which must have been uncomfortable).


All three had glass maces, which they must have stolen them because they looked uncomfortable in their hands. Solus Turned back to the middle bandit and opened his mouth to spew the words, “You want my stuff claim it off my corpse,” he raised his hand and spoke again, “Mysticism, black mist.” His hand opened and a weird mist appeared that blinded everyone except Solus who now (with life detect) could see there vitals perfectly.


The sound of an unsheathed blade and then came a spewing sound. As the mist cleared three bodies lied on the floor. Solus sheathed his sword and began again at his journey towards Vindasel.


He looked back at the bridge to see from friends of the bandits coming over to check out what happened at the bridge edge. The bodies they found were mutilated and blood stains on the ground said that it wasn’t a troll or and ogre, but a warrior with a sword. The men quickly picked the parts of each body (which they found most were cut off although at first glance the body was whole).



Solus quickened his stride until he reached another bridge. This time no bandits but on the other side stood his goal, Vindasel and the power that he sought out, Umbra. In front of the door to ruined city were some scamps and a conjurer outside. It looked old and the conjurer looked young.


“This Lenwin girl must have a bad tab for a cruddy defense like this,” Solus said.


He moved closer to the place and was jumped by the guards, “Destruction shock wave,” the name of the spell was calmly said as Solus tapped the ground with his foot. The white-blue wave shot out from the epicenter and shocked the enemies to death. Their charred remains laid smoking from the torso.



Solus looked down at them and his mind shot at him. His vision went black and then red. He thought for a slight second that he might have been hit in the back of the head. The red opened up and a lava lake lay before him. He was in Oblivion again and to the side of him he could see it the great deadric gate that possessed the siege machine scorpion.


He ran up fast and looked for what was beyond that hellish gate. Behind it was many Dremora with machinery and tools and in the mess of Deadra was what looked like an unfinished lower part to the siege machine.


Again his vision went black as he passed out. He saw blue and opened his eyes to see a marble stone step that was once under him. He lifted up and saw the stone doors to Vindasel. “What was that, a vision or a dream,” he calmly said to himself. He walked slowly to the door, pushed it opened and slowly walked inside.
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sorry it took so long for this one but i was kinda lazy so i hope to have another chapter by thursday and if not please don't complain (even though no one reads this)
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Chapter 4 The Unsealing





The city was dark with Ayleid crystals imbedded in to the earthen stone of the walls. There were stairs in which Solus slowly stepped down to a bigger room where he saw a trapped tile. There were blood stains on the tile surrounding a circler hole in side it.


Solus raised his hand and recited, “Alteration heaven boots.” He began to rise up and he floated across the air above the deadly pit. He landed just in front of a terrified rat that ran away in fear from the evil air-walker.



Solus moved farther into the dungeon meeting several rats and crabs. He even went through a gas vent to reach a gold iron door that led into Lenwin’s chambers. He opened the gate and saw the corridor in which led to her.




At the end of the walkway he reached a large lit chamber. The chamber was fairly bare with only a chest, a box, and a bed. Next to the chest was an armored person. The armor was in the ebony class and the sword that the person wielded was something the likes Solus had never seen before.




“Hey you there,” Solus called out to them.


“Yes what do you want,” said the woman in an evil tone.


She turned around and looked straight at Solus. He stared right back and began, “You there who are you,” he said even though he knew the answer. “Me I am Umbra, this place is Umbra, and my sword is ‘Umbra’,” she said drawing her sword from the side.

Solus mimicked her movements drawing out Soulless. He pulled it to his front preparing for a quick battle. She moved the sword to her side in an awkward position. She raised the sword and began to run forward yelling, “FOR UMBRA.”


She came down with a strike from her left shoulder. Solus met and replied with a side swipe and then a thrust. The blows were blocked as well. He was calm as she swung angrily at him in an attempt to break him into pressure; it failed along with her attempts to strike.

Lenwin began to rise in fatigue. Her breathing became heavy and her movements slower but her skill started to improve immensely. Her strikes became more powerful and precise, and her aim was targeting his vitals in serious places.


“YOU’RE INHUMAN,” she screamed as a strike to his neck was blocked.


Her scream was shrugged off by his calm expression and his lack of fatigue. Eventually she staggered back and blacked out from exhaustion. He saw it as an opening in which to strike. He ran forward with the sword in front.


His streak came down from his head and as he blinked before the kill, he was in Oblivion again. His strike came down to nothing but air. He looked around and saw it wasn’t a normal plane of Oblivion but instead a weird looking swamp island area.


He saw a path that lead to a huge city placed atop a hill. He started to look about again. He saw that he was standing on a huge mountain above the swamp as he examined his current surroundings. It looked as if the place was divided into evil and good for trees and landscapes were opposites in contrast. One was colorful and divine with bright lovely reds and yellows. The other side was of a place much darker with shades of black dark green and grey molded into it.



“Welcome to my home young one I hope you like your stay because you will be livin here soon, very, very soon. And there will be cheese lots and lots of cheese,” Said a voice that sounded almost Scottish.



Solus looked behind him and the lighting from the Ayleid city returned. Lenwin was still in her dream state as Solus became conscious again. He looked to his hand and saw that his sword was still there.


“What is happening to me,” he said quietly hoping not to wake his opponent.


He shrugged off his immediate confusion and again began to charge. This time his sword was met with her sword. He looked at her closed eyes. That she was still fighting with.


She pushed his sword away and opened her waking eyes. The eyes that were now gazing at Solus was not the green eyes he was fighting but a deep purple that look as though they were tainted with poison.


“YOU, you are stronger then I am I yield,” said Lenwin as she dropped to one knee.


Solus stride over to his kneeling foe with his sword still in hand. He reached her with the intention to kill. Lenwin could only slightly breathe before he came with a strike to her neck. She countered quickly pushing him back to where he stood before.


“This is hopeless I will finish this now,” he said with an angered grin on his face.


He raised his hands and said, “Alteration spider boots.”

Again he climbed, this time he climbed the chamber walls. When he stood in the direct center he pointed his unarmed hand at Lenwin as he shouted, “DAEDRA DESTRUTION INFINATE FURY,” his hand surged with red energy as it piled into his palm. He then opened his hand all the way forcing the energy away from him and into his target.


“What is this power, it is consuming me total…,” her last words were cut off by the attack which removed he body from the world. He dropped down and looked at what remained from her, a broken helmet and a black, purple and white sword. He dropped to one knee and retrieved the sword.


It felt light in his hands, and the metal seemed to glow with a faint purple. He placed his own sword with the helm to symbolize his victory over a good foe. He turned and walked back out the walkway.
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Re: The Unforgiver

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Chapter 5 Unlikely Allies


Solus made his way to the entrance of the city with the new sword by his side. It still glowed its faint purple which provided a faint glimmering light to guide him through. He pushed the doors open to reveal the light of the sun illuminating the day sky from the far west.

He looked at the bodies of his former foes in front of him. The sounds of Lake Rumare wafted in from the north and the smells of Pell’s gate filled the dense air with bread and meat.


“So this is the outside world it’s been a while since I have seen it,” a voice came from now where.


“Who’s there, show yourself now,” Solus commanded.


A ghost like figure appeared in front of him; the ghost was a bluish color and looked like a twenty year old man. “It is me, Umbra the sword you now posses, is me,” the spirit said to Solus. The figure moved around in front of him, moving with the waves of the lake. “Now I must say after all the people that have been after me you are by far the strongest,” Umbra said in a sighing voice.


Solus looked past him to the city which illuminated a bright orange and red. The spirit stood calmly and started to speak again, “Now you are my master and I will serve you as your steed.” Solus peered back at him and started, “Well how is it that a sword has a soul and what is your enchantment I need to know.” “Now, now aren’t you the wondering one, well I am the original Umbra when I died my soul was placed into this sword, and if you must know my enchantment is soul trap,” Umbra explained.



“Ugh, soul trap are you serious, damn that is not acceptable, I can’t work with soul trap,” Solus complained. Umbra floated by and into the sword with a faint whisper evaporating out, “You know there is an Ayleid ruin that holds a grand Varla stone that can change my power check your map and more treasure waits.” The ghost subsided and Solus whipped out his map and started to view it as a whole, there in the mountains of Valus was a red mark.


He had an instinct feeling it would be there, the ruined city of Natrodam. It was far into the mountains being a trek of many days possibly weeks. “This is going to be troublesome,” Solus said to himself almost sighing in boredom. “What do you mean troublesome it’s an adventure it’s a journey its,” “It’s boring and useless I will just give you to the mages guild so they can tamper with you,” Umbra started being interrupted by his owner.

“Well that’s not very nice and also not possible; you see as a living sword my enchantment was made by Ayleid magic there for must be changed by Ayleid magic,” Umbra mused. “Then lets skip the journey, I have been yearning to use this spell for a while just never saw the use until now,” Solus quickly peeped back almost grinning at the though.


“Mysticism: Warp Slip” he breathed.

A sudden sick feeling was growing inside of him his body was now signally a sign of poisoning in his stomach. Solus then moved from the spot at which he was standing and passed through the view of the lake into blackness.


The blackness swallowed him whole, leaving nothing to see but the faint blue glow of Umbra who was looking green. The blackness then spat back its dinner as a child would with its greens. The two looked up and admired the luscious green and white that the mountains had bestowed upon the world.



“Amazing,” they both said in unison.


“Now to the ruin, it looks like you may have been off by a few yards or miles or what ever,” Umbra rustled in the air.


“Hold on a sec what direction is it Umbra,” Solus probed the blue mass.


“Its right this way you can trust me I promise,” The spirit pointed towards the right where some newer trees could be seen. The forest as they walked was astonishing; the green was a shade both had not seen before and the snow made it seem surreal, a true haven. Occasionally the sight of a wolf or a rabbit can be seen moving across the sights. To the back of them the sentinel mountains hung high over head casting a heavy shadow in certain places to cool of what was already icy.



The two arrived and in due time; already there were a group of battle mages from the Arcane university. “Who are they and what are they doing here, oh, oh my looked they are bringing out the great stone of the city it won’t be long before the Varla is found,” Umbra panicked.


The mages were indeed pulling out artifacts from the city, from weapons to magic and much more poured out for minutes before men and women in black cloaks ambushed and attacked the mages. The battle could be seen from the two’s view.

“Let’s see if you are as good as they say,” Solus announced taking Umbra in his hands and drawing it running towards the action. Battle mages would throw spells only to have them shot back. When Solus arrived the spells from the University side ceased.


He raised his sword high and bolted forward taking down eight at once, “You really are amazing Umbra.”


The spirit tried to keep up with its ‘body’ but couldn’t because of the sheer speed.



At the fall of the last enemy, mages gathered around murmuring about fight that just happened. They all approached him silently to have a blade at the leader’s neck. Solus swiftly withdrew and bowed to man. “Sorry for my intrusion but it appeared as if you need help,” Solus apologized to the lot.


“Who are you and why are you here?” the leader question sternly.


“Me, oh well I am Solus, the Unforgiver, ring a bell. As for why I am here,” he started, “is a business of my own.” The man looked for any signs of a joke or evil. “What is an arena dog doing here tell me or I will have you forcefully removed from the area.”


“That’s not very nice, well then I am here to find a mythic stone which can change the….” He stopped to look as a woman dressed in fine blue silk exited the city. “Oran who is that; wait forget it I need help this is kinda heavy and my arcane just ran out, sorry,” the woman commanded the leader.


Gritting his teeth he barked, “Stay here urchin; coming Ms. Herrick”


‘Ms. Herrick? Then she is the leader here I should talk to her really’ he thought.


He quick dash to the girl and lifted a heavy chest the last few feet. “There you go,” Solus said with again no expression. “Oh thank you you’re too kind,” she said gleaming into his eyes softly with a thin strip of crimson streaking her face. “Your welcome Breton’s shouldn’t do too much heavy lifting it may hurt their arcane presence,” Solus joked peering back into her eyes.


Seeing her up close her features came into view. She was a thin girl with flowing brown hair. Her eyes were thick shaded pools of silver which signaled deep divine arcane. Her lips were supple and pink while she had no blemishes on her face. Her figure was flawless even in the robes she wore, an object of beauty. Finally her voice was soft yet forceful and signaled a deep inner angel inside as if the woman descended from The Nine.

“Um hello, my name is Anya,” the girl spoke again.


“Hello Anya, my name is Solus are you the leader of this expedition,” he questioned still gazing into her eyes. “Yes I am why, is there something in there that you require,” she returned repeating the gesture he’s giving her. “Yes there is, if you can allow it I would like to venture down and look for a special item.”



Anya looked past him to the entrance and could hear the air escaping, “I can not allow any one to venture down there,” she eventually replied.


“Is that so,” he looked back to the dark hall that was almost calling his name.

“Yes I can not allow anyone down there; alone,” he looked back sharply at what she had just said. She turned to her men and began to order, “Men continue to guard the entrance me and,” she turned to the mysterious man and then back at her men, “Solus enter the crypt.”


Both then turned and strode into the depths of the city.



“Solus can you see if not take my hand for a second if you will” she told pushing her hand next to his but to her displeasure no hand was to be found. “Illusion sun light,” Solus’ hand glowed with a green light and his body illuminated the walls around him.
Impressed by his skill Anya smiled with joy. She was beginning to think this was what Marval was talking about. In front now stood a door way. On the outside it read ‘Those who enter face the wrath or the Lich King the last true Ayleid ruler.’ Anya wove her hand over the writing and it opened. She turned to him and asked, “Are you ready.” “Let’s end this race,” he spoke stepping through the black veil.
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