Simon

**Ninja48** · 04-12-2008, 07:07 PM

So, what's wrong with it exactly. Besides there being two focal points. Also, fuck borders. But not Borders.

Bod · 04-12-2008, 08:32 PM

i really like the text integration. the red flows very well in the tag, and that concept has a lot of potential, but some of the execution doesn't exactly go well with the bag work. And apart from being a bit too messy on the stock it's kind of flat. the all black with only severe highlights doesn't give much depth.

Some parts just look odd paired together.

Assaulter · 04-12-2008, 09:31 PM

Would be badass if you could integrate something into the black spot and have the red and blue be over that. Would have made the sig that much better. Plus anyone that says that needs a border needs slapped. The sig looks like it flows into the forum background.

By the way how did Mystik beat you... She was lacking in several places that yours picked up on... Your text was better, background, flow, and colors...

04-12-2008, 10:02 PM

/r/ that you make a tut of this style. It intrigues me. Anyways, I think the sig is very well done. Better than Mystik's, that's for sure. I liked it more when the characters (text) had the white inside of them, though.

xXmagnesiumXx · 04-12-2008, 10:49 PM

I see nothing wrong with it. I still think it should have won, sorry Mystii =)
I think you just made the cape part a tad long. Cut the entire length a bit.

Shikamaru2007 · 04-13-2008, 06:21 AM

CoOol
You have a nice taste
Keep it Up

Harrada · 04-13-2008, 07:06 AM

I like it keep it up!

**Ninja48** · 04-13-2008, 11:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LonelyNinja

/r/ that you make a tut of this style. It intrigues me. Anyways, I think the sig is very well done. Better than Mystik's, that's for sure. I liked it more when the characters (text) had the white inside of them, though.

You mean this one:

I suppose I could make a tut. We shall see.

sasuke_power · 04-13-2008, 11:42 AM

holy shit the one with the white looks better than your other one.

I seriously dont know what happened in the contest. All I can say is that maybe they thought the flow was a lil off because as stated it looks messy on the bg?

cant really say, nonetheless really good job.
And please a tut would be awesome

**Ninja48** · 04-13-2008, 12:37 PM

COLOR COMBINATION that I didn't think of because I was too fucking blasted:

xXmagnesiumXx · 04-13-2008, 01:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ninja48

COLOR COMBINATION that I didn't think of because I was too fucking blasted:

YES
swirls of power

04-13-2008, 11:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ninja48

COLOR COMBINATION that I didn't think of because I was too fucking blasted:

Yeah, that's what a tut should be made for.

Nexus · 04-14-2008, 09:19 PM

Well, for the most part, the sig is cool. I think that you should've blended the middle more as the colors you've chose very good. Also, despite your statement, a red and white border would look very nice with the sig.

Bod · 04-14-2008, 09:24 PM

wow, the last edit wasn't much but it really made a big difference, especially on the depth. The only real complaint i could have now is the abundance of the black space, perhaps a slightly smaller canvas with a shift of the right side work towards the left in response to the constriction. of course if you did that you might have to toy with the stock a bit to achive the proper perspective with the text. nothing major though, it never comes out well if you do much.

OffTheChain · 04-15-2008, 08:46 AM

spin on power.

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXmagnesiumXx

I see nothing wrong with it. I still think it should have won, sorry Mystii =)
I think you just made the cape part a tad long. Cut the entire length a bit.

^ Just what I was thinking.

04-12-2008, 07:07 PM	#1
Ninja48 48 Cypherin' Ninjas Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: 305 Posts: 2,466 Thanks: 182 Thanked 644 Times in 257 Posts	Simon So, what's wrong with it exactly. Besides there being two focal points. Also, fuck borders. But not Borders. __________________

04-12-2008, 08:32 PM	#2
Bod Hunter-Nin Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 23 Posts: 1,156 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Simon i really like the text integration. the red flows very well in the tag, and that concept has a lot of potential, but some of the execution doesn't exactly go well with the bag work. And apart from being a bit too messy on the stock it's kind of flat. the all black with only severe highlights doesn't give much depth. Some parts just look odd paired together. __________________

04-12-2008, 09:31 PM	#3
Assaulter Symphony of Destruction Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: U.S.A. Posts: 526 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Simon Would be badass if you could integrate something into the black spot and have the red and blue be over that. Would have made the sig that much better. Plus anyone that says that needs a border needs slapped. The sig looks like it flows into the forum background. By the way how did Mystik beat you... She was lacking in several places that yours picked up on... Your text was better, background, flow, and colors... __________________ Last edited by Assaulter; 04-13-2008 at 12:11 AM.

04-12-2008, 10:02 PM	#4
LonelyNinja Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Simon /r/ that you make a tut of this style. It intrigues me. Anyways, I think the sig is very well done. Better than Mystik's, that's for sure. I liked it more when the characters (text) had the white inside of them, though.

04-12-2008, 10:49 PM	#5
xXmagnesiumXx '光和雨 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: none Posts: 1,297 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Simon I see nothing wrong with it. I still think it should have won, sorry Mystii =) I think you just made the cape part a tad long. Cut the entire length a bit.

04-13-2008, 06:21 AM	#6
Shikamaru2007 Special Jounin Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Kingdom Of Laziness Age: 21 Posts: 2,045 Thanks: 0 Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts	Re: Simon CoOol You have a nice taste Keep it Up __________________ - FanClubs - The Proud Owner Of : Join Us at : Final Fantasy FC A Proud Member Of : ~ The Official Shikamaru FC ~ ~ The Uzumaki Naruto FC ~ ~ The New Gaara Offical FanClub ~ ~ The New Uchiha Clan FC ~ ~ Kingdom Hearts FC ~ A Proud Co-Owner Of : ~ The "NEW" Madara Uchiha FC ~

04-13-2008, 07:06 AM	#7
Harrada Jounin Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Konohagakure Posts: 934 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Simon I like it keep it up! __________________ Owner of: People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be "correct" or "true?" merely vague concepts... their "reality" may all be a mirage. Can we consider Them to simply be living in their own world, shapes by beliefs? The warrior protects and defends because he realizes the value of others. He knows that they are essential to society and, in his gift of service, recognizes and values theirs... When faced with a woman or child in a situation in which they are vulnerable, there are two types of people: those who would offer succor and aid, and those who would prey upon them.

04-13-2008, 11:42 AM	#9
sasuke_power The Reaper Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Splinter in your mind that you cant reach Age: 24 Posts: 561 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Simon holy shit the one with the white looks better than your other one. I seriously dont know what happened in the contest. All I can say is that maybe they thought the flow was a lil off because as stated it looks messy on the bg? cant really say, nonetheless really good job. And please a tut would be awesome __________________ --------SIG-------- > SP aka Kio 日本国(Japan) < Brawl Code: ADD ME! 3437-7578-6300

04-13-2008, 12:37 PM	#10
Ninja48 48 Cypherin' Ninjas Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: 305 Posts: 2,466 Thanks: 182 Thanked 644 Times in 257 Posts	Re: Simon COLOR COMBINATION that I didn't think of because I was too fucking blasted: __________________

04-14-2008, 09:19 PM	#13
Nexus Susano'o Legend Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: MI Age: 29 Posts: 3,752 Thanks: 31 Thanked 177 Times in 157 Posts	Re: Simon Well, for the most part, the sig is cool. I think that you should've blended the middle more as the colors you've chose very good. Also, despite your statement, a red and white border would look very nice with the sig. __________________ *1 OF A KIND* [

04-14-2008, 09:24 PM	#14
Bod Hunter-Nin Join Date: Feb 2006 Age: 23 Posts: 1,156 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Simon wow, the last edit wasn't much but it really made a big difference, especially on the depth. The only real complaint i could have now is the abundance of the black space, perhaps a slightly smaller canvas with a shift of the right side work towards the left in response to the constriction. of course if you did that you might have to toy with the stock a bit to achive the proper perspective with the text. nothing major though, it never comes out well if you do much. __________________

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