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Old 06-26-2008, 04:16 PM   #1
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sometimes i wonder if the chedder is for better or worse
to re-emburse your lifestyle is a gift or a curse
i try to stick to reality and away from a hearst
but shit aint real no more and everything is rehearsed
you gotta test these niggas dont just take they word
cuz once they start droppin dimes den your feelins get hurt
dont listen to the shit that they telling you son
half these niggas aint raw and they tellin for fun
i lived this life for a while im as real as they come
so im droppin madd knowledge you could take it and run
you could beat a hundred cases but all it takes is one
and dont hustle wit a nigga if u know that he punk
cuz soon as one time come, he'll drop your name
they'll tell him set you up and he'll do the same
fuckin up your game plan
you aint see it comin cuz he was your main man
and now you stuck thinking that that niggas a fake and
you cant do shit cuz he out and safe (damn)
what else can you do but contemplate in a cell
dont know snitchin nigga ever wanna see u prevail
so you start plottin on him while you sittin in jail
meanwhile dat snitch living and he like "oh well"
"dat nigga aint me, he aint in the streetz
as soon as he get free i'll remain low key"
but little do he know you got the A-P-B
and if he come back the hood he gonna rest in peace
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Old 06-26-2008, 04:37 PM   #2
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I think I have heard lyrics like that in just about every modern day gangsta rap song! How awesome!
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Old 06-26-2008, 05:22 PM   #3
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Could have worded it better in some spots. Because of that it's pretty average.


Also, I take it you're ogstatus07 on DatPiff?
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Old 06-26-2008, 06:20 PM   #4
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Could have worded it better in some spots. Because of that it's pretty average.


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Old 06-27-2008, 08:06 AM   #5
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Yeah.....u know u spelled hearse wrong right? It was okay but a little cliche at the same time.
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Old 06-30-2008, 05:51 PM   #6
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how so.....

constructive critism........
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Old 07-01-2008, 12:01 PM   #7
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Redneckboy had a point. You just stuck to the formula of the typical rap song and you really didn't step outside the box to add your own element.
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Old 07-02-2008, 04:13 PM   #8
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o........well
i was tellin a story in my life
i wasnt tryin to mimic
all this shit actually happened to me
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Yeah! its such a amazing and i'll remember it.
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