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Check out my fanfic, Naruto: Hokage Chronicles.

Let me know what you think by reviewing and commenting here.

I could also use a little help with it. I'm having trouble coming up with names for some of my origanal characters. I need names for...

A little sister for Ino.
She's loud-mouthed and goofs off a lot, but she idollizes Ino and Sakura. She also constantly bugs her teammate, Neisan, with her constant flirting.

A ninja hound.
Don't even know if I want a male or female, but I'm leaning towards male. It has black fur, with grey patches on it's face.

I need other names, but these are names I'll need before I write chapter 3.

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zer0systm

ahh since no one is helpin out i'll lend you a hand

uhh Ino's sister....how bout something like Inka
and the dog uhh.....i dunno how about Raiden or Saiba or something
Hope it helps

Forlong

Well, I've updated. Thanks, zer0systm, for the names.

I'm going to need a little more help. In chapter five or six, I'll be bringing in a bunch of villains. Two squads of them are going to attack the Village Hidden in the Snow and Naruto's squad will be caught in the middle and have to help. Just like the good old days.

I need names for some of them. Just to get you guys interested, I'll tell you about all eight. The ones I've named first:

Raiden
The leader of the group. A lightning ninja from the late Rain Village. He's bent on killing Naruto for some stupid reason.

Harima
The last ninja with the Ice Element Kekkei Genki. Also one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. He doesn't cooperate with Raiden. He'll only help if he can kill someone who brought down a member of his clan, and Naruto is on his list. Does everyone want to kill him?

Arishima Aiko
She has a Kekkei Genki that combines Fire and Wind into superhuman speed. She left the Leaf Village when she failed the Chunin Exams. She thinks the blame falls on Sakura, not herself.

Miyoshi Deividdo
I like him, so I'll bring him back.

Now, the ones I need names for:

~The second in command. A male ninja from the Grass Village with Fox Sage powers. He's calm and quick-witted.

~A female puppet master from the Sand Village. She has an incredibly short temper, and is hard for even Raiden to control.

~A male medical ninja from the Stone Village.

I'll find a name for the last one myself. It's a major spoiler.

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Meteor Rain

The Grass Village ninja would be Sythico. (Sai-The-Co)
The puppet Master would be named, Cynn (Sin)
The Medical Ninja would be named Henlo (Hen-Low)

Hope this helps.

EDIT: Have Raiden be angry at Naruto from killing his brother. (The guy with the lightning weapons. The episode about curry of life thing.)

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zer0systm

~The second in command. A male ninja from the Grass Village with Fox Sage powers. He's calm and quick-witted..........Hrmm how bout Rukawa Kitsue

~A male medical ninja from the Stone Village.........uhhh Kenji Shinoda

~A female puppet master from the Sand Village. She has an incredibly short temper, and is hard for even Raiden to control........ahhhhh Kaname Fuu but everyone calls her Fuu because its easier

Forlong

Thanks for the help guys. I'll use the extra names too. I got the fourth chapter here.

I just realized I need names for members of Squad 8, which will be led by Ino. I want a rival for Inka in it. I can't think of anything else I'll want for it yet. Any suggestions?

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Wind Sage 00

I have to say, I really enjoyed your fanfic's. I think I liked the last one the best, it was like reading a script straight from Kishi's own storyline. It seems like Nii-san is like the Sasuke of the group, the Hyuuga boy is like Naruto, and Inka is like Sakura.

I'm not sure on the whole part of Naruto having rock jutsu, and Sakura having a scarlet chidori, but hey it was still a great read.

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jon

The sixth chapter was kinda short but it was great

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Masterpiece...

Love it !!!

Keep updating...

Good job !!!

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i like it
the only thing that annoys me are the english jutsus
google a japanese translator or something

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jon

7th chapter..well it was OK

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meeh~

Ahhhh memories of Kakashi's team, nice storyline. i like. lols.
not to be a bother or anything, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors but nothing too major. keep it up

feastfulsaint

I want more. I am actually hooked on this.

Forlong

Thanks. Where are the grammatical errors? I thought I got them all.


Sorry I missed posting a chapter this week. I had to edit my new computer. Good news is I shouldn't have any trouble updating on time anymore.

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meeh~

There's a few but they don't make much of a difference. I know how you feel, when your writing there always bound to be at least one mistake. Great read chapter 8 was a little bit slow moving though. Hope it picks up again. (and hope you dont have anymore computer problems too!)

Cheers.

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