rap

killahninjanigga · 06-26-2008, 04:16 PM

sometimes i wonder if the chedder is for better or worse
to re-emburse your lifestyle is a gift or a curse
i try to stick to reality and away from a hearst
but shit aint real no more and everything is rehearsed
you gotta test these niggas dont just take they word
cuz once they start droppin dimes den your feelins get hurt
dont listen to the shit that they telling you son
half these niggas aint raw and they tellin for fun
i lived this life for a while im as real as they come
so im droppin madd knowledge you could take it and run
you could beat a hundred cases but all it takes is one
and dont hustle wit a nigga if u know that he punk
cuz soon as one time come, he'll drop your name
they'll tell him set you up and he'll do the same
fuckin up your game plan
you aint see it comin cuz he was your main man
and now you stuck thinking that that niggas a fake and
you cant do shit cuz he out and safe (damn)
what else can you do but contemplate in a cell
dont know snitchin nigga ever wanna see u prevail
so you start plottin on him while you sittin in jail
meanwhile dat snitch living and he like "oh well"
"dat nigga aint me, he aint in the streetz
as soon as he get free i'll remain low key"
but little do he know you got the A-P-B
and if he come back the hood he gonna rest in peace

RNB · 06-26-2008, 04:37 PM

I think I have heard lyrics like that in just about every modern day gangsta rap song! How awesome!

**Ninja48** · 06-26-2008, 05:22 PM

Could have worded it better in some spots. Because of that it's pretty average.

Also, I take it you're ogstatus07 on DatPiff?

killahninjanigga · 06-26-2008, 06:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ninja48

Could have worded it better in some spots. Because of that it's pretty average.

Also, I take it you're ogstatus07 on DatPiff?

yezzir

state yo name gangsta

Cipher · 06-27-2008, 08:06 AM

Yeah.....u know u spelled hearse wrong right? It was okay but a little cliche at the same time.

killahninjanigga · 06-30-2008, 05:51 PM

how so.....

constructive critism........

Cipher · 07-01-2008, 12:01 PM

Redneckboy had a point. You just stuck to the formula of the typical rap song and you really didn't step outside the box to add your own element.

killahninjanigga · 07-02-2008, 04:13 PM

o........well
i was tellin a story in my life
i wasnt tryin to mimic
all this shit actually happened to me

alengrew · 12-27-2010, 07:36 AM

Yeah! its such a amazing and i'll remember it.

06-26-2008, 04:16 PM	#1
killahninjanigga Genin Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: in your computer Age: 23 Posts: 106 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	rap sometimes i wonder if the chedder is for better or worse to re-emburse your lifestyle is a gift or a curse i try to stick to reality and away from a hearst but shit aint real no more and everything is rehearsed you gotta test these niggas dont just take they word cuz once they start droppin dimes den your feelins get hurt dont listen to the shit that they telling you son half these niggas aint raw and they tellin for fun i lived this life for a while im as real as they come so im droppin madd knowledge you could take it and run you could beat a hundred cases but all it takes is one and dont hustle wit a nigga if u know that he punk cuz soon as one time come, he'll drop your name they'll tell him set you up and he'll do the same fuckin up your game plan you aint see it comin cuz he was your main man and now you stuck thinking that that niggas a fake and you cant do shit cuz he out and safe (damn) what else can you do but contemplate in a cell dont know snitchin nigga ever wanna see u prevail so you start plottin on him while you sittin in jail meanwhile dat snitch living and he like "oh well" "dat nigga aint me, he aint in the streetz as soon as he get free i'll remain low key" but little do he know you got the A-P-B and if he come back the hood he gonna rest in peace __________________

06-26-2008, 04:37 PM	#2
RNB El Topo Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Pennsylvania Age: 20 Posts: 1,169 Thanks: 3,294 Thanked 1,887 Times in 822 Posts	Re: rap I think I have heard lyrics like that in just about every modern day gangsta rap song! How awesome! __________________ "Nature loves to be hidden." - Heraclitus

06-26-2008, 05:22 PM	#3
Ninja48 48 Cypherin' Ninjas Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: 305 Posts: 2,466 Thanks: 182 Thanked 644 Times in 257 Posts	Re: rap Could have worded it better in some spots. Because of that it's pretty average. Also, I take it you're ogstatus07 on DatPiff? __________________

06-27-2008, 08:06 AM	#5
Cipher Genin Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Atlanta, The Dungeons of Rap Age: 23 Posts: 135 Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts	Re: rap Yeah.....u know u spelled hearse wrong right? It was okay but a little cliche at the same time.

06-30-2008, 05:51 PM	#6
killahninjanigga Genin Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: in your computer Age: 23 Posts: 106 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: rap how so..... constructive critism........ __________________

07-01-2008, 12:01 PM	#7
Cipher Genin Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Atlanta, The Dungeons of Rap Age: 23 Posts: 135 Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts	Re: rap Redneckboy had a point. You just stuck to the formula of the typical rap song and you really didn't step outside the box to add your own element.

07-02-2008, 04:13 PM	#8
killahninjanigga Genin Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: in your computer Age: 23 Posts: 106 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: rap o........well i was tellin a story in my life i wasnt tryin to mimic all this shit actually happened to me __________________

12-27-2010, 07:36 AM	#9
alengrew Missing-Nin Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 64 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: rap Yeah! its such a amazing and i'll remember it.

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