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Old 03-23-2010, 03:21 AM   #136
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Kai (in thought): Impossible!

Asura: Heh, heh… With my knowledge of jutsu and shape manipulation, I was able to take the chakra repelling forces and shape its base into an object that suits whatever need necessary. Since your body is in partially its Bijuu form, I’m able to counter it a little… (The Racket starts to crack a little.) Then again, this is the Hachibi’s chakra, I’m not shocked that you’d soon overpower it… HAAAAA! (Kai is trying to use his head to fully break the Racket… Raitei notices that the grip on her is lessoned because Kai is focusing all his might to break the Racket… Raitei breaks free and rolls to the side… Kai is angered and uses his might to break the Racket… It shatters and Asura is thrown flying…)

Asura (in thought): I wasn’t prepared for that one. (Asura hits the ground as Kai is narrowing in on his location.)

Heh, I can always faze my body, he won’t even touch me…

(Raitei appears next to Asura, urging him to get out of the way.)

Raitei: C’mon!

Asura: You must’ve forgotten my jutsu… He can’t hurt me!

Raitei: You idiot we gotta think of a plan…

Asura: That’s right! (They both toss smoke bombs and rush off. Kai stops in his tracks…)

Kai (in thought): I’ll just hunt them down! (The smoke clears, and Kai spots Sakuya… She has a handseal forming.) LIKE I’D STAND BY AND LET THAT HAPPEN!

(Kai rushes forward and prepares to slash his way through Sakuya… He does so however, it just fazes through.)

Kai: *ROARRRRRR*

Kai (in thought): That’s not possible! How’s she doing that? (He repeatedly slashes through with no avail, immediately, another Sakuya is behind the seemingly invincible version…) What the hell? (The first Sakuya leans out of the way, and falls to the ground while the second one completes the genjutsu.)

Sakuya: Purgatory! (Another white flash blinds Kai’s face… Kai falls to the ground… In Kai’s new reality… He is not in Bijuu form… He is floating through an endless sky of whiteness… He is in a zone of nothingness… He just floats seemingly.)

Kai: How did I lose? What happened… I can’t feel my body… So numb… My chakra, I can’t gather it… Hachibi… Are you there? I can’t feel you… So numb…

(Back to reality… There are two Sakuyas however, one of them splits into two people, which are revealed to be Asura and Raitei…)

Raitei: I can’t believe it worked… The combined transformation that is.

Asura: Well I studied the jutsu… If two, or more people combine themselves together, the person whose ego is more prominent, the person who casts the jutsu, is able to use whatever jutsu he, or she knows… That’s why I was able to use my fazing ability. I knew if we both transformed, it would be hard to detect a henge, therefore, we were able to completely fool the Hachibi…

(Sakuya pants.)

Sakuya: Quickly… He’s probably trying to break out of it… It seems this genjutsu was stronger than I thought *pant*… He’s out for a good minute since he has the Hachibi’s chakra coursing through him… End it quickly; I’m out of gas… Hurry, only 50 seconds left…

Raitei: I’ll use my thunder strike! Since he’s probably using all the chakra in his body to break the genjutsu, he won’t be able to recover enough to prevent an immediate death… (Raitei charges with Raiton chakra again and leaps into the air…)

Asura: Pity the Hachibi will die… I wanted to use his chakra for something…

Sakuya: It can’t be helped… There was no way we could have subdued him… (The Lightning bolt smashes home on Kai’s body… Blood sprays everywhere, but we don’t see the true extent of the damage… Raitei is covered in blood… Her Raiton armor dissipates and she walks over to join the others.)

Raitei: Finally… He was such a diehard… (immediately a bullet goes through Asura’s head… Asura falls down, dead…)

Raitei: WTF!

Sakuya: SHIT IT’s MISA! BRACE YOURSELFS! (Before Raitei can activate her Raiton chakra, a bullet strikes her in the stomach, and she falls over in pain.)

Raitei: AHHHHHHHH!

(Another bullet fires however, due to Sakuya’s quickly reflexes, she pulls out a kunai and manages to deflect the bullet elsewhere… From behind Sakuya, Jisho prepares to swing his blade diagonally.)

Sakuya (in thought): The White Ghost… (She cartwheels out of the way and rushes off in a direction, however the shock wave from Jisho’s blade carries out and slices the fainting Raitei into two pieces.)

Jisho: She’s sharp… She must get around to have known about my ability…

(Misa appears and looks over at Kai’s corpse.)

Misa: Kai… (She tears up, but she wipes her face.)

(Jisho looks over toward the direction in which Sakuya ran… (Misa now is next to Jisho.)

Misa: If only we’ve known about Asura’s ability earlier, he wouldn’t have imprisoned us, and we could have killed him before… But now, Kai… Ehhh… No use worrying about it now… Let’s go, let’s hunt that Sakuya bitch down… (Misa wipes her tears, and puts on a devilish grin.)

Jisho (in thought): She took that a lot better than I thought she did, the 5th shinobi war must've hardened her soul… She’s more than ready to serve as our Mizukage…

Jisho: Now that’s what I like to hear! (The scene switches over Sakuya [she is running].)

Sakuya (in thought): Asura didn’t kill those two earlier it seems? Damn, and now he’s dead too… He just didn’t have time to faze out… It seems his experience isn’t as great as I thought it was… Being cooped up in his lab weakened his battle instincts… The moment we took down the Hachibi, he and Raitei let their guard down… Well fuck them, they deserved to die… Imbeciles never live long… (The scene switches over to somewhere on the outskirts of Mizugakure… Ino Shika Cho is down on one knee with blood flowing from his mouth and nose… In front of him are Take, Sazx, and Blake… They are also worn out a bit, however they appear to have the upperhand.)

Ino Shika Cho: How about we call this one a draw? Fellas, brilliant display of your abilities… Fighting you three have honed my own skills… I’d prefer it if we’d back down so I can fight you all again with the newfound experience I have gained…

Ino Shika Cho (in thought): Play it cool…

Take: BULL SHIT!

Sazx: I’ll grind you into dust!

Blake: If you are going to beg for your life, at least make it convincing UHE!

Ino Shika Cho: *Sheesh* Damn… You got me guys…

Ino Shika Cho (in thought): Have to think of something… I refuse to die… That is so unlike me to fall in battle…

(The Scene switches over to the fallen Oita… Tsuchikage has his foot on Oita’s neck… Kazekage is standing behind him… Oita coughs up blood.)

Oita: *Cough.*

Tsuchikage: This is where the UHE fall…

Kazekage: Kenjiro, put him out of his misery…

Tsuchikage: But first, I want him to feel the misery all those who suffered by his hands…

(The Scene switches over to a barren waste land… Daisuke is tending to an injured Muto… They are surrounded by many corpses.)

Daisuke: You’ll pull through… We just have to hang on, just until Konoha pulls through for us…

Muto: Uhhh… But if we are hit by another wave of troops, I don’t think the two of us will survive much longer…

Daisuke: Don’t let your resolve dissolve… If you want to survive, you have to maintain that will of striving to live through this turmoil…

(The scene switches over to the fight for the shinobi world. Both of Nila’s palms are pulsing with Fuuton chakra. She and Tetsuo rush forward, preparing to clash. Tetsuo pulls out a Kunai and emits Fuuton chakra along it…. Once they near each other, they clash… Nila’s wind sharpened hand is parrying against Tetsuo’s wind enhanced Kunai. Bursting waves of wind can be felt throughout the area… Zig [who is further back using a handseal to ensure that Tetsuo doesn’t disperse chakra based attacks], is taken aback by Nila’s skill.)
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Zig (in thought): Incredible… Nila’s talent…

(The Hokage from atop a cliff, watches the battle.)

The Hokage (in thought): With her mastery of the wind element and her ability to implement the gentle fist style into her attacks puts her general skill level as a shinobi beyond even mine… She’s keeping up with Tetsuo using her nin-tai… Hiro… You’ve seen her potential, and taken further than I could even hope to imagine… I’m proud of you both… It’s almost time for her class to take charge of things.

(Hope from the sidelines watches the battle.)

Hope (in thought): Sis… Heh… All of a sudden, I’m going to have to start asking her for pointers…

(The scene switches back to the battle held between Nila and Tetsuo.)

Nila (in thought): If only I hadn’t use my Byakugan’s new power twice already… I would have been able to get him while Zig has Tetsuo’s crazy chakra thingy on lock down… I’ll just have to take it to him Dicing Fist…

(Nila overpowers Tetsuo, and knocks him off balance pushing weight onto his Kunai… Nila uses this opportunity to use her other palm for a wind styled Hakke Kuushou… Everyone is shocked as they see her prepare the formation, especially Tetsuo…)

Tetsuo (in thought): She’s really skilled… (Tetsuo quickly gets on guard and football tackles Nila, which sends her sliding across the ground, then Tetsuo tosses his Kunai at Nila, hoping to pierce her… Hope immediately comes into the fray… He knocks the Kunai off balance with a mini-shinra tensei… Then he rushes over to Nila, to brace her slide…)

Hope: You alright!

Nila: Yeah… Thanks Hope…

Hope: You’ve done enough… Let me, or father step in…

Nila: Do you believe in me Hope?

Hope: Of course…

Nila: Just believe… That’s all I need…

Nila (in thought): Tetsuo lives up to his name… His taijutsu is flawless… I have the Fuuton affinity, but there’s no flaw to his game… But now that they believe in me, all I need is to believe in myself… Isn’t that all that matters, father?

(Tetsuo glances over at Zig.)

Tetsuo (in thought): He’s the problem… As my brother, he must have improved his chakra control by remembering me train when we were younger… My distinctive chakra flow can be easily mimicked by someone who shares a similar skill in chakra amplification… If I take him out, my chakra control over the field will return… If I can get that advantage back… (Immediately, Nila’s in front of Tetsuo. Nila points at herself with her thumb.)

Nila: I’m your opponent! Don’t underestimate me because I’m a woman… I’ve taken hits much harder than that!

Tetsuo (in thought): She’s got spunk, that’s for sure…

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-Nila's last stand!

(Nila is rushing towards Tetsuo at rapid speeds with her palms charged with wind chakra.)

Nila: AHHHHHHHH! (Nila gets within range and does a horizontal swing with her right wind charged palm. She aims for the eyes of Tetsuo. Tetsuo is amazed, however he manages to slip back a little to avoid the blow. However, a little blood springs through the air.)

Shit! So close! (Nila backs up about 30ft and rethinks her gameplan, meanwhile Tetsuo notices that he has a gash on his nose bridge. He wipes his face of blood.)

Tetsuo (in thought): She's so fast. Her taijutsu and her wind chakra. It's normally impossible to form wind chakra as an extension of the body, due to the damage it causes to one's body. But it must be her ability as a Hyuuga to exert dense levels of chakra on her person and use that as a mold to implement wind chakra. (Tetsuo begins making handseals, meanwhile Nila charges forward again.)

Nila: I won't let you finish! (Meanwhile Tetsuo expels large, tunneling, and twisting shapes of Katon. The scene switches over to the Hokage, who is now greeted by Hope.)

The Hokage: That's...

Hope: Such levels of flames.

The Hokage: That's Katon: Holy Prison of cleansing! That's katon from our village. Only Rina could use a technique like that. Where did he get it? Nila...

Hope: We should interfere!

The Hokage: If you interrupt his control of the flames, not telling what could happen. And it's not like we can try to stop the flames without hurting Nila.

(The scene switches over to Zig's location.)

Zig: NILA! DAMN WHAT ARE THOSE TWO IDIOTS DOING?! THEY KNOW I CAN'T LET UP MY TECHNIQUE OR WE'RE ALL TOAST! NILA! (We notice that Zig's sweating a lot. The scene switches over Nila's. She is encased in walls of flames. She looks up at the top and notices that top is also covered with flames.)

Nila: Crap! Did I bite the big one? SO freakin hot in here! (The scene switches to outside the large flame square prison. Tetsuo is standing outside of the flames.)

Tetsuo: Hmm... Goodbye, Uzumaki Nila. You dangerous bitch. (Tetsuo smooches the air and performs the final handseal. A brief close up on each of the hero's location shows that they are intensely worried. Soon as each wall of flame collides with the wall facing it, the fires disrupt and go into a spiring motion.)

Tetsuo: IMPOSSIBLE! (The spiraling flames grow and grow. The scene switches over to Zig's location, he is soon joined by the Hokage and Hope.)

The Hokage: Nila, she's performing her rotation!

Zig: Increditable.

Hope: And The flames keep on growing!

The Hokage: She must be transforming her rotative chakra into wind chakra to feed the flames... But, since she's taking control of the energy of the flames, she can direct them across the area! Guys, this is going to be the big one, let's get out here!

Zig: But what about Nila!?

The Hokage: She'll be fine, but this area isn't. Zig, can you keep disrupting Tetsuo's chakra field effect while in motion?

Zig: Yeah, though it won't be as powerful, but... I'll try.

Hope: We should get, the flames are nearing this area... (They look on as the flames are now spiraling in this direction. They all nod and rushes off. The Scene switches over to Tetsuo's location. He is commanding two Grand Waterfall Techniques. The splashing waves are combating the flames.)

Tetsuo: She's taken control of the flames with the initial energy of that rotation of hers, and she's even adding heat to the flames by fanning them... What a girl, no, what an opponent! My own attack against me...

(Inside the spiraling flames.)

Nila: SHOOT! Ok, pull it together girl... I can do this. This heat... It burns... *eek*. How's he stopping these flames! Suiton? TO be making this much water without a body of water near by...

Nila (in thought): Heh, what am thinking? To save the world... Heh, this is a death wish. But dammit, I'm going to try!

(The scene switches over to Tetsuo's location.)

Tetsuo: It seems not even two A-Rank Suiton can stop it! She's working on pure will alone. (Tetsuo spews out even more water from his gullet and now commands four more Grand Waterfall Techniques. The scene switches over to the outskirts of the battle. Zig, Hokage, and Hope now witness a huge display of spiraling flames and spiraling waters that now covers an abundance of the battle area they were previously at. Zig, then falls to his knees.)

Hope: ZIG!

Zig: *Deep breaths* HUH, HUH, HUH, HUH! My chakra... Dispelling the constant chakra Tetsuo's body is emitting across the field... I'll die if I keep this up...

The Hokage: Zig...

(Zig looks up at The Hokage.)

The Hokage: Whatever happens, protect my daughter.... (Hope helps Zig up.)

Hope: What are you thinking dad?

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Even though nobody posted here for a long time i thought it's better to put it here rather then making a new thread.
It's another plot development made by me. Tell me if you enjoy it because if you guys think it's good i will make a continuation for it. Any critics are welcomed.

Naruto: The beggining of the end.

Scene shows an Unknown sillhoute standing on a hill looking at two mirrors. The first mirror shows Naruto talking with Kyuubi and the second mirror shows Sasuke with EMS pattern in his eyes.

Suddenly the mirror with Sasuke cracks and he no longer has his EMS but just a white sclera.

Unknown : Good. Everything goes just as I planned.The future looks promising.Eventually you will reach me Uchiha Sasuke. You will want your powers back. And i will wait for you. Because i'll make sure that you will lose your EMS.
He turns his face to the mirror with Naruto.
Unknown: Uzumaki Naruto...it's time to make you realise your role in this setup. It's time for you to unleash your potential and confront Madara. And soon, your heritage will be under my command!

Scene shows Kabuto standing in a cave .

Suddenly a shadow appears behind him giving him a kick. Kabuto is thrown a few meters away but he quickly regains his posture and makes a handsign.
Kabuto: Snake gun!
A snake emerges from the tip of Kabuto's finger towards the shadow.
Shadowed figure: Fire style! Fireball jutsu!
The fireball hits the snake killing it.
Kabuto: Uchiha Itachi...so you've made it here...
Itachi: Yakushi Kabuto, no other mortal have dared to summon the deads as you did. You will pay for this.
Kabuto: Maybe, maybe not...
Itachi as he activates MS: Susano'o!!
Kabuto makes a handsign and another pentagram appears with Kabuto in its center.
Itachi: What are trying to do?
Kabuto: I will tell you, the man who feared nothing, the infamous Uchiha Itachi, the true meaning of despair!

Scene shows Madara appearing on the hill with the Unknown figure next to him.

Madara: It's almost done...Raiden-sama.
Unknown voice: Good. You tricked them well with the Eye of the moon. Now, make that Yakushi kid to use his summon.
Madara: Yes master. I will force him if i have to.
Unknown voice: Probably you will have to.
Madara: It seems that your plan is coming to an end Raiden-sama.
Raiden: It seems so. This Uzumaki child...he remembers me of my brother...
Madara: Indeed. As far as you told me he has some similarites with him.
Raiden: The same foolish mind, the same amazing power...it's like Sasuke is his brother. Opposed in everything...complementary...
Raiden: Resume your plan Madara.
Madara: What about you Raiden-sama?
Raiden: I'm going to Konoha.

Scene shows Naruto in his mind with the Kyuubi

Naruto: What did you do? Why am i here?
Kyuubi: Stupid brat! You thought you can use my power like that and keep going? There is a price for everything!
Naruto: Wha..what price?
Kyuubi: Your life! The more you use my chakra like that, the more you will be drained from your life energy! You will kill us both! You drain my chakras and you drain yours!
Naruto yelling: That's because you aren't going to help me!
Kyuubi: And why would i help you stupid brat? I want to be released not to be kept here forever!
Naruto: Then let's make a compromise! Let's make a deal!
Kyuubi: What deal? Let me free and i will listen to you.
Naruto: That's my intention nine tails. But first you will listen to me. I will let you free but first i need your cooperation to finish that technique.
Kyuubi: It's impossible brat! No man can use that technique. I thought you understood that the last time you tried.
Naruto: Some things have changed.
Kyuubi: So it's done ? You will let out of this your stubborness and you finally decided that it's time to forget words and use it?
Naruto: I think it's time to get serious about it. I will fight Sasuke and there is no other way.
Kyuubi: So if i give you the chakra to do it you will let me free?
Naruto: if you give me the chakra i will let you free.
Kyuubi: then it's a deal brat. I will keep my word. I hope you will do the same.
Naruto: I will! Many people have put their hopes into me ( he flashbacks Jiraya, kakashi, sakura, nagato, konan, itachi, minato and kushina) ! I will not fail them! I will beat Sasuke!
Kyuubi: Then open this cage and let me adjust your body to fit mine!
Kyuubi: But first,I will show you some of your history first.
Naruto: What do you mean?
Kyuubi: I mean that i will reveal to you the secrets of your inheritance.
Naruto: Do it!
Kyuubi: Then get ready brat!

The surroundings are switched to Konoha's begginings showing Hashirama Senju with Mito Uzumaki somewhere in the village.

Hashirama with a serious face: We defeated Madara...but i have a feeling that this isn't over. Like something doesn't fit.
Mito: What are you talking about? You killed him.
Hashirama: Before i've impaled him with my sword in the chest, just for a moment a had a feeling that he was smiling ironically...
Mito: You were in the heat of the battle, darling...
Hashirama: No...something deep inside me tells me that he is not dead yet.
Mito: Even if he managed to survive by some means he won't attack us yet...he is afraid of you.
Hashirama: Maybe he won't attack us in our lifetime...but who knows in the future? I have to leave something behind. Something for the next generation...

Scene switches again and it shows the Second Hokage as he orders his team to leave.

Tobirama: I will be the decoy, of course.
Next panel shows him fighting Kinkaku and Ginkaku

Tobirama: It seems that this is the end for you! Bringer of darkness technique!
Everyone is surrounded by darkness except Tobirama.
Tobirama: That should assure my escape...Anyway the scroll is safe with Hiruzen!
Unknown voice: I wouldn't be so sure, Second Hokage.
Tobirama: Who are you?!?
Madara shows up with a mask covering half of his face and long hair.
Tobirama: Y.you!?! But you should be dead!
Madara: Should be dead is not the same with being dead! Prepare yourself Tobirama Senju!

Next panel shows Tobirama uncouncious, held by Madara in the air with one hand and in the other hand, Madara has a sword.

Madara: Farewell Senju! He swings his sword decapitating Tobirama.

The scene is switched again and it shows a younger Hiruzen training with Orochimaru.
An ANBU appears behind him.
Anbu: Hokage-sama! Mito-sama is...
Hiruzen: Enough. I'm coming. Orochimaru go on with your training.
Orochimaru: Yes, sensei.

Next panel shows Hiruzen standing next to Mito who is old and in a bed.

Hiruzen: Mito-sama...
Mito: Hiruzen...these are my last words...listen carefully...
Hiruzen: Don't talk like that!
Mito : I've said that you must listen closely. My husband, Hashirama and my brother in law, Tobirama...they've left behind a scroll...a scroll containg the most secret and powerfull jutsu known to us. Protect that scroll with the price of your life. There will come one day when you will make use of it.
Hiruzen: Mito-sama, i know that you have the gift of seeing glimpses of the future...but why would i need "that" jutsu?
Mito: I've saw that one day a boy with the power to control the kyuubi will have it. And he will use it to destroy our greatest enemy...
Hiruzen: Our greatest enemy?
Mito: His knowledge has been passed down from Hokage to Hokage...since my husband and Tobirama are not here i will tell you...Uchiha Madara...he is still alive. And there will come one day when his ascension to power of the gods will be near complete...we must stop him!

Next panel shows and old Hiruzen talking with Jiraya. Behind the door is seen Kushina as kid hiding.
Hiruzen: And that's what she told me. What do you think?
Jiraya: I think she was right. The signs are bad, master. I've heard that the Mizukage, Yagura is controled by someone. And every now and then people can see glimpses of in his eyes of a red pattern with three tomoes...
Hiruzen: The Sharingan...
Jiraya: I will watch over the scroll too, if you will ever fail master.
Hiruzen: Let's hope that the day will never come.

Scene is switched again to Minato as Hokage. He is in a room with Kushina, Hiruzen and Jiraya.

Hirzuen: You understand Minato? That's what the previous two Hokages left behind for us.That's your duty as the Fourth Hokage!
Minato: I understand Sarutobi-sensei.
Jiraya: I will help you Minato. We must find a way to use "that" jutsu if the need arises.
Hiruzen: I put my faith in you two.

The scene is switched again to an older Hiruzen talking with Jiraya standing over a baby Naruto.

Jiraya:I can't belive Minato is dead!
Hiruzen: Do you think...it was him?!?
Jiraya: I wasn't a match for Minato, Sarutobi-sensei...he surpassed me a long time ago...i think that only Madara could do that. Minato was aware of Mito-sama's prophecy...about a boy wielding the power of the Kyuubi. I think that's why he sealed the Kyuubi inside this child.
Hiruzen: Turn back when he grows Jiraya. Take care of him. Initiate him in the first steps of "that" jutsu.
Jiraya: Why won't you do it?
Hiruzen: Oh, my chakras are not what they used to be...also i think that i don't have that much time...I think that Orochimaru will come back after me!
Jiraya: I will stop him!
Hiruzen: No! That's between me and him! You will take care of the boy...he has nobody left..
Hiruzen speaking to himself: Uzumaki Naruto...are you the destined one?
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Scene is switched back in the present .

Scene shows Naruto and Kyuubi.

Kyuubi: Now, you understand, runt? Your inheritance? The legacy that those men left behind for you?
Naruto: I...i understand. Now i got it...i will use that power to stop Madara and save Sasuke!
Kyuubi: Stupid kid! You will use that power to kill Madara and Sasuke! Not just to stop them!
Naruto: Killing won't get us anywhere! The circle of hatred will be reborn!
Kyuubi: Then let me show you runt! Let me show you what kind of future awaits for you!
Naruto: My future?
Kyuubi: I will show you the two paths that are lied down for you...it depends on you which one you will chose!

Scene is switched to a devastated Konoha with the citizens lying dead on the streets. Naruto and Kyuubi are watching as Sasuke is slowly walking on the streets towards the ninja Academy.
Sasuke: They are the last ones.
Near him is Tsunade impaled with a sword in the chest.
Sasuke looks at the Ninja Academy and opens his eyes widely.
Sasuke: Amaterasu!!!
He looks as the Academy is set on black fire and ninjas are fleeing out of it and are getting hit by Amaterasu flames. Iruka is standing in front of Sasuke with tears rolling out his eyes.
Iruka: Sasuke...
Sasuke: Iruka...you're the last one to stand out. Do you think you can beat me?
Iruka: ...how low have you fallen...
In an instant Sasuke is at his back slashing him with a sword.
Sasuke: I'm sick of that line.

Scene shows Sasuke again but in a different place. He at a cemetery looking at graves.
On the nearest graves Naruto and the Kyuubi are looking at the names: Hyuuga Neji, Rock Lee, Izunuka Kiba, Might Guy, Shizune, Choji, Hyuuga Hinata...one grave draws Naruto's attention: Haruno Sakura.

Naruto screams in pain: No..NO!!
Kyuubi: Keep watching.
Sasuke is shown walking to the biggest grave where a man is standing.
Sasuke: So you're protecting the grave? How foolish...you should have fled when you got the chance...
Shikamaru with deep cuts on his face and clothes torn apart: I will protect it! You will not defy it!
Sasuke: Fool...
Shikamaru: Shadow jutsu! Shadow control!
As Shikamaru's shadow extend to Sasuke, the latter jumps away avoiding the shadow.
Sasuke: Look at you...the man who once had a strategy for each battle...now you attack me head on? -he makes a handsign- Chidori Spear!
A chidori beam hits Shikamaru right in the chest. He spills blood and falls down on the earth.
Sasuke approaches the grave and looks at the name encrypted on the grave.
Sasuke: So...here you rest...in the end you were just another loser who got crushed by me..
Naruto and the Kyuubi looks at what is encrypted on the grave.

"Here rests Uzumaki Naruto...the fallen saviour"
The scene dissipates as Sasuke destroys the grave.

The scene is switched back inside Naruto's mind

Naruto shouting: What was that? How is that possible?!?
Kyuubi: That's the future that awaits you if you chose to let the Uchiha brat live. Madara will be dead, but Sasuke will destroy everything that's dear to you. And after he kills you,there will be nobody left in his way.
Naruto: You've said that there is a different path...
Kyuubi: Let me show you...

The scene is switched again to a rebuilt Konoha

Naruto is looking at a gathering of all villaggers and ninjas. He also looks at a more matured version of himself. A version of himself that is taller with his hair a bit longer and with a serious face.
Naruto: What is this?
The matured version of Naruto is standing at the top of the Hokage building and next to him is Kakashi.

Kakashi: Citizens and Shinobis of Konoha! The Sixth Hokage: Uzumaki Naruto!!!
The crowd starts to applaude and the mature Naruto smiles.

Next panel shows the Hokage Naruto standing in the same cemetry looking at a grave.

Naruto: In the end i saved you friend...i released you from this cursed world...nobody will ever know...but i've saved you! You're now free from the cursed circle of hatred!

Scene shows Naruto and Kyuubi back inside Naruto's mind

Kyuubi: That's the future that awaits you if you chose to fight Sasuke. If you chose to fight with the intent to kill!
Naruto: ....
Kyuubi: So which path will you chose?
Naruto: The path that will leed me to the Hokage mantle and Sasuke alive!
Kyuubi: Foolish as usual...

Scene shows Naruto slowly rising up.

Naruto is wearing a white jumpsuit with a small orange line accros his chest, the red coat that he weared in his battle with Pein and no longer has his headband on his head, but it's tied to his arm, much like Shikamaru. His hair is a bit longer and he has a much more mature face. Also he is a bit taller but his look on the face is the most notable difference. He looks very calm, very confident on his powers. His appearence changed drastically after his sync with the Kyuubi.
Naruto: So that's the effect the release had on me, huh? Let's try a chakra release...
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Scene shows HQ getting violently shaked!

Raikage: What was that!?! The enemy?!
Shikaku: No...it was raw chakra..a release of chakra.
Tsunade with a shocked look, thinking: I think i've recogniswd that chakras! Could it be...you?
Random sensor: Whaa!?!
Raikage: What happend ?
Random: It's...it's Naruto!
Tsunade: Something happend to him?!?
Random sensor: No...actually ...
Raikage: Spit it out already!
Random sensor: His chakra levels! They just raised to incredible amounts! It's like he has five times the power he just had moments ago!

Scene shows Kabuto facing Itachi.

Itachi with a feared look : What do you mean? Madara is just a puppet?
Kabuto: Do you know the legend of the two sons of the Sage?
Itachi: Yes i do.
Kabuto: Then you know that the elder son got the sage's eyes and the younger the sage's body right?
Itachi: Yes.
Kabuto with menacing eyes: Well then, i must tell you...that the elder son is alive. And he will do everything it takes to capture Naruto and Sasuke!

Panel switched to Naruto.

Naruto to himself: So that's how my body adjusted to the Kyuubi. And...it's like my head got cleared up. Like a weight was lifted from my brains. I can think more clearly now. Well it seems that i will have to make some preparations. I need to learn to control my chakra. And i need to learn that fast. And i think i know the right person to teach me that.

Panel is switched to HQ

Raikage to random sensor: Well? Where is that kid?
Random sensor: It seems that he is going somewhere towards some mountains.
Tsunade: Mountains? Did he discovered some hideout?
Random sensor: I don't know Hokage-sama.
Raikage: Well then it seems that we will have to trust the brat.

Scene is switched to Kabuto and Itachi.

Itachi: Someone's coming!
Kabuto: So..he decided that he will confront me.
Itachi: Naruto!
Kabuto thinking: I will finally get my hands on the Kyuubi!
Suddenly a shadow appears behind Itachi.
Kabuto: Uzumaki Naruto...so you've decided to confront me?
Naruto: No.
Itachi: Why are you here Naruto?!?
Naruto: For you Itachi. I need your help. And i need it fast! Let's go!
Kabuto: Not if I have something to say! He makes one handsign and throws from his mouth snakes.
At the same moment he recieves a punch in the back from Naruto who is revealed behind Kabuto.
Kabuto: What tremendous speed!
Naruto: I don't have time for you right now!
Kabuto: Naruto you will not leave this place!
Naruto looks menacing at Kabuto: Oh,but i will.
Kabuto makes one handsign: Ninja Art! Darkne...
He is stoped by Naruto being in front of him and giving him a punch right in the chest making a hole. At the same time Kabuto starts to turn in hundreds of snakes leaving no evidence of his former body.
Itachi: It seems that he escaped for now...let's go Naruto.

Scene is switched to HQ

Random sensor: Raikage-sama! hokage-sama! Naruto is coming this way! And he is not alone, he brings along Itachi Uchiha!
Raikage: Uchiha?!? Why him?
Naruto appearing in front of Raikage: Because he is the only one capable to help me. And i need you too Grandpa Raikage!
Tsunade thinking: What speed!
Raikage: You need me? What for?
Itachi appears too: He needs you to train him in chakra control. He needs you so you can augument his chakra precision.
Raikage: But that takes years! We don't have that time.
Naruto looking at Itachi who has his Mangekyou in his eyes: Actually we do have the time.
Raikage: I see...so the Uchiha brat will trap us in a Genjutsu. But i don't trust him! He is and Edo golem!
Naruto: I trust him and he is not an ordinary Edo Golem! He broke put of Kabuto's control!
Tsunade: Is that true?!?
Itachi: It's true. Well then shall we begin?

Scene shows Raikage and Naruto caught in Tsukuyomi.

Raikage: What's the difference? The time flows in the same way. Why don't we train in the real world?
Itachi appears: The difference is that 1 second in the real life is equal to one day here. So if in the real life you stay under this jutsu long enough, it's like you've trained for...
Naruto: Ten years, right?
Itachi: Exactly. So you're wrong Raikage. The time doesn't flow by the same principles here.
Raikage: But i don't get it...how can you train under a genjutsu?
Itachi: Well it's all happening in your mind. And your brain makes the proper adjustments to the body like muscle growth, power increase, inteligence increase. It's like your immagination controls your body and mind growth.
Raikage as he turns his face to Naruto: Well, we have ten years brat! Let's do it! I will make a truly powerful shinobi of you!

Scene shows Mizukage and the ninjas at Daiymo's location.

Mizukage: Prepare yourselves! That thing will attack us soon!
Suddenly a giant black earth spike emerges from the ground killing several ninjas.
Mizukage makes a handsign: Lava release! Volcanic eruption!
On the ground it's opened a giant hole from which lava get's up enveloping the earth.
Mizukage: That should bring him out.
From a tree behind Mizukage a shadow is released and the Black Zetsu with a spike attached on his hand, goes straight to her. She turns around and makes another handsign: Lava release! Volcanic sword!
A sword appears in her hand and she blocks an attack from the spike.
Zetsu: It seems that you're quite skilled. Nevertheless, you will still die here!
He makes a handisgn and a swamp appears on Mizukage's feet.
Mizukage: Wha..!?! Dammit i can't move!
Black Zetsu dashes towards Mizukage with the spike pointed at her.
Back Zetsu: You're dead!
Chojuro appears: I wouldn't be so sure! Hiramekarei release!
He hits Zetsu with the hammer formed by Hiramekarei sending him in some rocks.
Chojuro: You will have to kill me before you get to Mizukage-sama!

Scene shows Bee arriving at the HQ.

Bee: What's goin on fools?
Tsunade: Your brother and Naruto. They are training.
Bee: How! They're just standing there!
He notices Itachi standing there as well.
Bee: Oh, i get it. For how long they are doing this?
Tsunade: For almost an hour. There are ten minutes left. Itachi said that he will keep them there for an hour.
Suddenly the HQ receives a blow and it's violently shaking.
Bee: Whaa!?!
Tsunade with a serious look: So...they are here.
Tsunade: Everyone get your battle positions! The enemy is on to us! Protect Naruto, Raikage and Itachi from any interferences! Don't let anyone touch them!
She throws away her jacket and puts a forehead protector with the sign of the ninja Alliance on.
Tsunade: They will witness now why I was chosen the Fifth Hokage!
Bee: Shit...these are...
The former Jinchuurikis are standing in a line looking at them.
Tsunade: At it seems that they have on Sharingan and one Rinnegan.Bee listen to me. This will be hard. The Rinnegan assures them a shared vision and with six Sharingans pointed at you they can predict your every movement. All we have to do is separate them and fight them one on one.
Bee: They are also the previous Jinchuurikis...
Shikaku: So basically if we try to attack them at once they will predict every movement we are going to make and they will all see that.
Tsunade: Exactly. Well then, shall we begin?

Panel shows Naruto and Raikage.

Naruto is standing on his feet and Raikage is on one knee sweating a breathing heavily.
Raikage: That's it punk. You finally did it.
Itachi: Raikage-sama. There is a half of a second remaing in the real world. That means that you still have a few hours.
Raikage: Then I think it's enough.
Naruto: Enough for what?
Raikage: Enough for you to test the new power with Sage Mode.
Naruto: You're right! Let's do it!
Itachi looking with a smile on his face and thinking: Only if you could see him right now Yondaime...he surpassed you and he is much more powerful then you ever hoped him to be!

Scene shows Shikaku lying down on the earth, Bee fighting Yugito, Roshi, Yagura and Han at the same time and Tsunade standing on her knees in front of Utakata.
They are all in a bad shape with their clothes ripped off and wi deep cuts on their bodies.

Utakata points a kunai at Tsunade.
Tsunade: Do it boy! Don't just stand there! Do it!
As Utakata is slowly retreating his hand in order to impale Tsunade she is thinking: At least I've protected the boy!
Utakata goes for the slash but his hand is caught in the last second. A sillhoute in standing next to him.
Naruto: I'm sorry...
He ripps off Utakata's arm and gives him a punch throwing him in some rocks. As Utakata is rising up Naruto is already behind him. Naruto grabs Utakata's head and decapitates him in one move. He looks back only to see Bee getting thrown down by Han.
In an instant he dissappears and the next panel shows all the previous Jinchurikis down on the earth all decapitated.
Tsunade: Na...Naruto! Is that you?!?
Raikage: It's him. I've made a true shinobi out of this brat.
Naruto turns around: Don't worry Granny Tsunade...i've got this.

Scene shows Kabuto at another cave

Kabuto: That brat nearly got me there! Anyway it's good that i've obtained this! -he makes one handisgn- edo tensei! Impure world ressurection!
A coffin emerges from the earth with the name - Toad Sage on it.
Kabuto: Now, let's see how you will do against your former master...Uzumaki Naruto.

Scene shows Kakashi bandaged and his division

Kakashi: That's it for the Seven swordsmen of the mist.
Fodder sensor: Commander! I've just noticed a tremendous chakra coming this way!
Kakashi: Another one!?!
Suddenly a giant fire wave comes directly to them. As all of the ninjas dodge it and as Kakashi lands he looks in the direction from where the wave came.
Kakashi: No...impossible...not you!
A figure is standing in front of Kakashi. A person wearing a red vest, having a giant scroll on the back and white long hair.
Kakashi: Jiraya-sama!
Jiraya: Run Kakashi!!!
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Naruto: Commander Hatake Kakashi.

Scene shows Kakashi deeply injured and held in the air by Jiraya. All the other ninjas from his division are dead.
Jiraya: I'm sorry Kakashi...i didn't want to do this...
Kakashi: Jiraya..sama...
Jiraya throws down Kakashi and makes a handsign and he disappears.

Suddenly a figure appears at Kakashi's side.
Kakashi: Na...Naruto...
He receives a kick in his chest sending him a few meters away.
Sasuke: All you can say as you are almost dead is that loser's name? I'm mad that someone else got here Before me. I wanted to kill you. Nevertheless it's enough for me to be the one who finished you.
Kakashi slowly makes two handsigns: Sealing jutsu! Memory transfer!
Sasuke is instantly in front of him and he cuts Kakashi's both hands.
Sasuke as Kakashi is in pain: What was that jutsu? What did you do?
Kakashi with a whispered voice: You have fallen Sasuke...you're no longer the student I had...
Sasuke impales him with a sword in the chest and Kakashi spits a considerable amount of blood from his mouth.
Sasuke: Stop with that shit! I will erase...
As Sasuke shouts Kakashi can't hear him anymore. He looks at his face and sees him as the kid he was in team 7.
Kakashi thinking: I never thought it was going to end this way...i'm sorry everyone...finally, dad, Obito, Rin, master...i'm coming home..i've struggled enough in this world...i leave the rest to you...Uzumaki Naruto...

Scene shows Naruto, Itachi, Raikage and Tsunade standing in front of HQ.

Tsunade: So you've finished your training Naruto?
Naruto: Yeah and i've finally maste....he suddenly has a shocked face.
Raikage: What happend brat?!?
Naruto with a sad voice: Kakashi-sensei....he..
Itachi: I'm going! Bee come with me!
Bee: Sure thing fool!
The two men are dashing towards Kakashi's location.
Suddenly a white energy ball emerges from the earth and hits Naruto and he falls down to the ground uncouncious.
Raikage: Brat!?!
Tsunade: He is alright Raikage. That was Kakashi's technique. It's a memory transfer technique. I think he has something to say to Naruto.

Naruto is shown in a room where a man reassembling Kakashi is hanging himself.
Naruto: No don't ! He tries to stop the man but he phases through him.
Naruto: What the!?!
Kyuubi inside of Naruto: Stop it runt. You're just a spectator to this. You can't do anything.
Naruto: But!?!
Suddenly a door is opened and a small kid looking just like Kakashi sees the hanged man.
Kid Kakashi screming: Noooo!!! Daad!! Nooo!

Scene is switched and Naruto sees the moment when Obito gave his eye to Kakashi.

Obito: Kakashi take care of Rin...
As the rocks fall on Obito's body Rin starts screaming.
Kakashi: There is nothing we can do....let's go Rin...

Scene is switched again and Naruto sees Kakashi with tears in his eyes in front of Minato.

Minato: I'm sorry Kakashi...Rin is...
Kakashi shouting: NO!! Who did it?!?
Minato: Orochimaru did it...she was kidnapped by him to use her in an experiment. The third tried to save her..but it was too late..
Kakashi: Where is Orochimaru!?!
Minato: He fled...
Kakashi: NOO! He has mangekyou Sharingan in his eye.

Panel shows now, Naruto spectating The Third Hokage, Jiraya and Kakashi

Hiruzen: So...he gave his life in order to protect the boy...
Kakashi: Minato-sensei...
Hiruzen: I trust you Kakashi that you will take care of the boy when he grows up.
Jiraya: I will also take care of him when he is old enough.
Kakashi: I promise, Hokage-sama...

Scene is switched again to Kakashi finding Naruto at the Valley of the End.

Kakashi thinking: I know that you fought bravely, Naruto...but Sasuke's hatred was too much to beat..there will be one day when you will get powerfull enough to beat him...Kakashi's eye has Mangekyou in it.

Scene shows present Naruto again

Naruto slowly rising up: So that was your life Kakashi-sensei...
Tsunade: He is dead isn't he?
Naruto: Yeah...
Random sensor: Raikage-sama! hokage-sama! Some misteryous monstrous chakra is coming this way!
Raikage: Who is it this time!?!
Tsunade stares in shock as she says : I recognize this chakra...it's him!
Jiraya appears in front of everyone.
Naruto: Ero sennin!?!
Jiraya: Yeah, Naruto that Kabuto brat brought me back. I don't want to do this! I'm sorry!

Scene is switched to Sasuke

Sasuke is looking at the dead body of the former jonin and Commander Hatake Kakashi.
Sasuke: In the end you were just another loser who died in front of me.
Itachi and Bee arrives at the scene
Itachi: Brother...that low you have fallen...
Sasuke: What is this? Itachi!!! What trick is this?!?
Itachi: There is no trick Sasuke. Kabuto summoned me via Edo Tensei. But I've breaked out of his control.
Bee: Yo! Uchiha fool!
Sasuke: You! You tricked me back there. You will pay for this!
Itachi: Bee...i didn't expect to encounter Sasuke here, go back to HQ. I will handle the things here.
Bee: Sure bout that ?
Itachi: Of course. Now go!
As Bee rushes back to HQ Sasuke looks to Itachi with hate in his eyes.
Sasuke: Itachi...so you're back. Then you will be happy to hear that i'm on the quest to avenge you and reabilitate the Uchiha name.
Itachi: By killing everyone related to Konoha? That's your quest? The one of a sadistic monster?
Sasuke: You could never understand...
Itachi as he activates Susano'o: Neither do you...i'm sorry Sasuke...i will make sure here...that there will be no next time for you.
Sasuke as he activates Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan: You think you can kill me brother?
Itachi: Kill you? No i don't want that. I have something else planned for you!

Scene shows Mizukage and her team

Most of the ninjas are lying dead in front of Dayimo's house. Chojuro is uncouncious. And Mizukage is injured and she has her right arm severed.

Black Zetsu: I told you. Don't underestimate my power.
Mizukage thinking: Such a beast...
Zetsu: You're ready to die?
Mizukage: Even if I die here, you won't win this war!
A spike suddenly emerges from the earth, impaling Mizukage directly in the chest. Her face has a shocked look on it but she manages to make a smile before as the blood slowly comes out of her mouth.
Black Zetsu: Why do you still smile? You smile in front of death?
Mizukage raises her left hand making a handisgn.
Black Zetsu emerges behind Mizukage.
Black Zetsu: I'm the land itself! You cannot protect from me! There is no way for you to be able to protect yourself. He makes a handsign: Emerge!
Several other spikes emerges from the earth thrusting into Mizukage. But her face still retains her smile.
Mizukage with her last powers turns around and smiles to Black Zetsu.
Mizukage: You're dead...Lava release! Suicide eruption!
Mizukage and Black Zetsu are enveloped in a huge explosion. As the dust clears we can see Black zetsu blown into pieces and Mizukage's body on the ground.

Scene is switched back to HQ

Naruto: Ero-sennin!?!
Jiraya: Look at you Naruto...you've grown into a such fine shinobi. Just as i would like my grandson to be.
Naruto: I don't want to fight you Ero-sennin.
Jiraya: You will have to do it.
Naruto: Why didn't you take me with you ?!? Why did you had to go alone?
Jiraya: Shut up! It was for the village. I couldn't risk your life in my fight!
Naruto shouting: Why? Why couldn't you? It's not like i could have died!
Jiraya: Yeah it's just like that! You would got killed that day too! And it was for Konoha's sake that you would survive!
Naruto with a sad voice: Because Konoha would lose her advantage if Kyuubi got captured right?
Jiraya: Are you an idiot? Because Konoha would lose her chance at getting the best Hokage that it will ever be! Now get ready! Kabuto is making me attack you!

Naruto: I'm sorry Ero-Sennin...i get it now...
Jiraya: Naruto...kill me!
Jiraya dashes towards Naruto. He is already in Sage mode.
Jiraya: Ultra-Big-Ball-Rasengaaan!!!
Naruto stands in front of Jiraya calmly waiting for the jutsu to hit him.
Tsunade: Narutooo! Go away!!!
As the Rasengan hits Naruto a huge explosion sets up devastating the surroundings. As the dust clears up we can see Naruto unscatted from the blast.
Jiraya amazed: The jutsu didn't touched you?!?
Naruto: It did. You see...i've trained ten years in the Tsukuyomi with Grandpa Raikage...also i've got the Kyuubi synchronized with me. I've also learned then Sage Mode...also i got a very fine control over my chakra. Grandpa Raikage taught me how to release chakra out of my body at the same power as the enemy's attack. So my chakra just negates your attacks. And with the limitless source of chakra that Kyuubi provided me...i have the perfect shield.
Naruto: Now it's my turn to attack...
Naruto takes a stance with his hand pointing at Jiraya.
Jiraya: Do it kid...
Naruto: Raaaaaseeennnn!!!!!
A beam of blue energy goes from Naruto's hand hitting Jiraya at full force destroying his body beyond edo regeneration.
Tsunade amazed: Wasn't it Rasengan?
Raikage: Rasengan is a close range technique...but Rasen...it's a beam of his chakra send directly to your enemy...it's the same principle just that he added the push to the Rasengan.
Naruto watches as Bee lands near him.
Naruto: Bee what happend?
Bee: It's the Uchiha fool! He is fighting Sasuke alone! I think Sasuke killed the Sharingan dude!
Naruto to himself: Sasuke...you went that far? Kakashi Sensei...
Naruto looks with a shocked face and suddenly he disappears in a cloud of smoke.
Tsunade shouting: Naruto!!!

Scene shows Raiden standing on the top of Konoha's mountain.

Raiden: It's time to unleash Naruto.
He makes two handsigns and starts an incantation.
Raiden: From the divine skies and from the pegan earth make a bond that will bring the chaos upon reality...VARUUN!!!
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From the center of Konoha and from the sky two beams of energy emerge and when the two beams meat eachother an explosion like a nuclear one eradicates Konoha and destroying all the vilagge.

Raiden: Now that for a blast...let's see how you will handle this Uzumaki Naruto!

Scene shows Mount Myobokuzan.

Naruto appears in front of the Toad Sage. Next to him are Ma and Pa.
Naruto: Old-man toad?
Pa: Naruto-chan...the hermit has another prophecy of you.
Naruto: Another prophecy?

The second prophecy

Panel shows Naruto in front of the Great Toad Sage.

Naruto: Another prophecy?
Toad: I saw you...you're going to fight a solitary man...some man that the history has forgot...
Naruto: Madara?
Toad: No...not Madara...someone that you will lose to..but in the end you will win.
Naruto: How so?
Toad: I can't see...because of that person you will no longer be with us soon.
Naruto: You mean that he will kill me?

Scene shows the destroyed Konoha.

Raiden: Now...let's see how you will react to this Uzumaki Naruto.
Madara phases next to him.
Madara: Raiden-sama. It seems that everything is going accordingly to your plan.
Raiden: Madara... resume your plan.
Madara: Understood. What about you master?
Raiden: I will collect the artefact.
Raiden dissappears leaving Madara alone.
Madara thinking: Now, to get Sasuke fight them.

Scene shows HQ

Tsunade talks to random fodder: Make search parties all over the battlefields! If the enemy got Naruto we are in grave danger!
Suddenly Naruto appears next to her in a cloud of smoke.
Raikage quickly appears and grabs Naruto: Where were you! Do you think we have time for jokes!?!
Naruto: It wasn't a joke. I was summoned at Mount Myobokuzan.
Tsunade : The toads...did they said anything to you?
Naruto with a sad look: Yeah...they did...it doesn't matter anyway.
Tsunade: What it is Naruto?!?
Naruto: I said that it doesn't matter.
Raikage: Boy you're gonn...
Suddenly a random ninja bursts in HQ
Random: Raikage-sama! Hokage-sama!
Tsunade: What happend?
Random: It's about Konoha! The village has been destroyed!
Tsunade in shock: The citizens! What about them?!?
Radom: The attack was a surprise. Nobody knows where it came from...i'm sorry Hokage-sama...
Tsunade very shocked: No...it's not possible..NOOOO!!!!
Raikage: Bra...!?! Where did he go!?!
Shikaku: To Konoha obviously.
Raikage: We need to stop him right now!
Shikaku: Get real Raikage-sama. Nobody, i think that not even Madara are able to stop him right now. Sensors are reporting from all over the battlefield that an orange flash went right through the middle of the open war zone and it's headed towards Konoha. He really is the son of the Fourth!

Scene shows Sasuke fighting Itachi

Itachi is using Amaterasu on Sasuke, but the latter evades all the attacks.
Itachi: You're good, little brother.
Sasuke: Shut up!! You will die here!
Sasuke forms a new Susano'o form and shots an arrow engfulled in Amaterasu flames.
The arrow hits Itachi but he recovers instantly.
Itachi: You cannot kill me by normal means.
Madara phases next to Sasuke.
Madara: Let's go Sasuke.
Sasuke: No! I am not goimg anywhere until i kill him !
Madara: You can't kill him, until you kill Kabuto! Let's go!
Itachi looks at them as they vanish away.
Itachi: I saw it Madara...even through your mask. You are afraid of someone. Someone much more powerful then you...

Scene shows Naruto heading towards Konoha

Naruto looks at an apocalyptic scene. Alll the buildings are destroyed. There are ruins everywhere. Not even a sole survivor is seen. He activates Sage Mode and his face is shocked.
Naruto: They...they are !!!

Scene shows HQ

Random Sensor: Raikage-sama! We have a situation here.
Raikage: What now?
Sensor: Madara appeared on the battlefield with Sasuke! They are heading towards Kazekage-sama and Tsuchikage-sama.
Raikage: Let's go Tsunade! We will end this!
Tsunade: Shikaku you're in charge of the HQ!
SikAku: Good luck!

Scene shows Gaara and Onooki

Gaara: Something is coming!
Onooki: The enemy?
Gaara: I think so.

Suddenly someone lands near them. Sasuke is looking straight into Gaara's eyes.

Gaara: Heh...Uchiha Sasuke.
Onooki: That Uchiha brat! You are a shame for your clan! You dishonored them alongside with that criminal brother of yours!
Sasuke: Did you entrusted your village to someone yet, Tsuchikage?
Onooki: What do you mean?
Sasuke: Exactly what i've said. Did you got the chance to pick a succesor?
Onooki: Why would i do that? I'm not dead!
Sasuke activates EMS and says with a menacing look: Oh, but you are dead! You were dead from the moment when your path crossed with mine!
Gaara: You will have to kill me first!
Sasuke: No need for. The old man is already dead. Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Internal Amaterasu!
The tsuchikage falls down in pain screaming: My insides! Are burned!!!
Sasuke: Any last words ?
Onooki makes a handsign: Kazekage...you're still young...you don't deserve to die like this...go away...Dust element! User transition! You will die here Sasuke Uchiha!
Onooki's body turns into a human shape dust technique and it explodes destroying the surroundings. As the dust clears we see Sasuke enveloped by Susano'o and looking to he place where the Tsuchikage was.
Sasuke: Disappear with the dust...old man..
Gaara: Noo!!
Madara warps in front of Gaara.
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Madara: Kazekage, you're alone this war. I'm sorry but you will die here!
Two persons enter the scene.
Tsunade: No he won't die Madara. You will have to fight us both!
Sasuke: It won't be a problem.
Raikage appears in front of Sasuke all charged up.
Raikage: It's payback time brat!
Sasuke: Raikage. Last time you lost an arm. This time you will lose your head.
Raikage: Don't get cocky brat!

Scene shows Kabuto

Kabuto is preparing a new invocation. He makes complicate handsigns and a casket rises from the earth. He brings Anko to the center of a pentagram.
Anko: Wh...what are you doing?
Kabuto: I'm sacrificing you. You will die to serve a greater purpose. You should be proud.
Anko: You damn bastard! I will kill you for...!
She suddenly collapses on the ground uncouncious.
Kabuto: It's time...Summoning Impure world resurrection!
A casket rises from the earth. The casket has the Uchiha crest on it.
Kabuto: Now...let's reunite the two brothers!

Scene shows Madara fighting Gaara and Tsunade.

Madara: You cannot keep up with me!
Gaara: Sand Tsunami!
A wave of sand goes towards Madara but he evades it using his t/s jutsu.
Suddenly Tsunade is behind him and she tries to get a kick on him but he points his hand at her.
Madara: Shinra Tensei!
Tsunade is thrown away and Gaara catches her with his hand. They are both in a bery bad shape.

Next panel shows Sasuke and Raikage.

Raikage is trying to land a blow on Sasuke but the latter evades all the hits. The raikage suddenly uses his tremendous speed and appears behind Sasuke ready to use his Lariat.
Sasuke: You lose Raikage. Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Black Hole!
The panel shows Raikage with his arm stoped in the air. He has a shcoked expression on his face, and the next panel shows blood dripping from his chest. The next scene shows his entire body. From his chest down to his waist he has a giant hole.
Sasuke: I told you. You are dead Raikage.
Raikage: Damn it...
He falls down on his knees and he still retains the shocked expression.
Tsunade notices him.
Tsunade: NO!! Raikage!
Madara: Well done Sasuke.
Gaara: You will pay for this Sasuke!!!
Raikage: Tsunade...let Darui know...
Tsunade: I got it!
The Fourth Raikage falls down on the earth dead.His hole in the chest is the testament of Sasuke's hate.
Sasuke turns his head to Gaara.
Gaara: Uchiha Sasuke....you are beyond salvation.
Sasuke: You're next Gaara!

Scene shows Naruto in Sage Mode.

Naruto is standing in the devastated Konoha.
Naruto: They are all....they are alive!!!
He head out for one of the caves in the Hokage mountain. Naruto spots the ramen guy.
Naruto: What happend here?
Ramen guy: The elders...they gave their life to protect us! They've made some sort of shield over Konoha and we all got saved! We headed out here in order to be safe.
Naruto: The elders, huh....
he suddenly has a shocked expression and he dissappears from the panel.
Next panel shows him dashing at full speed through a forest. At the same time he has a mental conversation with the Kyuubi.
Naruto: You've sensed too, right?
Kyuubi: Madara's chakra...and Sasuke's. Togheter with the Kages. And the raikage's chakra just disappeared. Hurry up brat! And if you encounter the Uchihas...give out all you got!
Naruto: I know! Thanks for agreeing to sync with me...

Scene shows Tsunade thrown down and Gaara held by Sasuke is the air. Gaara is badly injured with blood on his head and chest

Sasuke: This is the end Gaara. You used to be more powerful then i was but my hatred overwhelmed you.
Gaara with a calm face: You're touched by insanity Sasuke. I can't belive that Naruto stil hopes for your redemption. Your actions here today have guaranteed that you will die. Even if it's not by my hand.
Madara appears next to them.
Madara: Well done Sasuke. You proved that your Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan is much more powerful then i hoped to be.
Sasuke: Time to go get Naruto.
Madara: First things first. I think you want to meet an old friend first.
Sasuke: Old friend?
Madara: Yakushi Kabuto. I'm sure that you two have much to talk about.
Sasuke: Take me to Kabuto! I will kill him! He dared to summon Itachi back that way!
Madara: Then let go of the Kazekage. He is almost dead anyway. He doesn't have long until he passes away.
Sasuke drops Gaara on the earth
Sasuke: Any last words, Gaara?
Gaara: Naruto...will beat you!
Sasuke: That for me to know and for you to wonder. Because you will die.
Madara grabs an uncouncios Tsunade from the ground.
Sasuke: Why don't you just kill her?
Madara: Because i need her Senju blood. Let's go Sasuke.
Madara phases away with Sasuke And Tsunade.

Scene shows Naruto arriving at the place where the Kages were defeated.

He sees Gaara lying on the ground and Raikage dead.
Naruto: NO!! What happend here!?!
Gaara: Na...naruto...
Naruto: Gaara! Are you OK? Who did this?!?
Gaara: Sasuke and Madara. They took Tsunade with them. She is still alive...Sasuke killed the Raikage and the Tsuchikage...
Naruto: Wait here i will go get Sakura for you!
Gaara: No Naruto! I don't have much time...i will die in a matter of moments...defeat them Naruto...beat Sasu...
Naruto intrerupts him: No more words! It's time to show you my real speed. I will take you to Sakura right away.
Naruto grabs Gaara and the next panel shows him talking with Kyuubi.
Naruto: Lend me your speed. I need to save him!
Kyuubi: Run brat! I will send my chakras to augument yours. I will use the chakras in your members in order to make you faster then your dad! Now go!

The panel shows different battlefields and the ninjas witnessing an orange flash dashing at an extraordinary speed.
Random fodder: That was!!! Naruto?!?

Scene shows Naruto arriving at the tent where Sakura is with Gaara on his back. Sakura quickly comes out and grabs Gaara.
Naruto: Heal him if you can Sakura-chan.
Sakura: Where are the other Kages?
Naruto slowly turns his back preparing to leave: There are not here....i'm going to HQ.

Scene is switched to Kabuto and the coffin with Uchiha crest on it.

Kabuto: Come out Izuna Uchiha.
Izuna emerges from the coffin. He looks life a softer Sasuke but with his hair a little longer.
Izuna: Impure world ressurection. What a demonic way to use the deads.
Kabuto: Shut up. What do you say about seeing your beloved brother?
Izuna: Madara? You summoned him too?
Kabuto: No need for it. He is alive.
Izuna: Madara...survived?
Kabuto: Yes he did. He betrayed you that day. I summoned you with your Mangekyou powers. You're not blind anymore. Now,tell me...what do you have in mind right now?
Izuna with Mangekyou in his eyes and a menacing look: Revenge!



So this is what i wrote so far. Tell me your thoughts.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Even tho I read most of them before already, but it was brilliant and you should continuee.
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Yeah it's something composed of the parts i used before. But they were needed in order to make the story progress in the way i want it.

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Awesome F'N Read !!!!
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Hey Vishnu,

Superb creation. I certainly would like to see its end. But something intrigues me. Are the start of the prediction and the end in same story line. If so how is sasuke have his eyes and y is he surprised to see itachi?
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Superb creation. I certainly would like to see its end. But something intrigues me. Are the start of the prediction and the end in same story line. If so how is sasuke have his eyes and y is he surprised to see itachi?
I don't get it. What do you mean exactly?
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[Naruto: The beggining of the end.

Scene shows an Unknown sillhoute standing on a hill looking at two mirrors. The first mirror shows Naruto talking with Kyuubi and the second mirror shows Sasuke with EMS pattern in his eyes.

Suddenly the mirror with Sasuke cracks and he no longer has his EMS but just a white sclera.]

and

Kakashi: Na...Naruto...
He receives a kick in his chest sending him a few meters away.
Sasuke: All you can say as you are almost dead is that loser's name? I'm mad that someone else got here Before me. I wanted to kill you. Nevertheless it's enough for me to be the one who finished you.

1st he loses his eyes and in the 2nd there is no mention.
Thats wat confused me
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