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Naruto: Revelations.
Scene shows Naruto witnessing the Juubi that destroys a villagge. Naruto: Dammit! The Juubi! What should I do!?! The Juubi is shown making a gargantuan Bijuu Bomb and destroying the whole area. After, *it turns around and sets his looks on another villagge nearby. Naruto still has the Rinnegan in his eyes. Naruto: No I won't let you! I have only one option left! Naruto makes two Kage Bushins and gives them instructions. Naruto: Gather Natural Energy for me! I must stop it! Naruto quickly dashes towards the beast and lands in front of it. The Juubi sets it's eyes of the unknown man who dares to confront him.* Juubi with a beastly voice: The insanity reaches new levels it seems. Naruto: What do you mean? Juubi: A mere human who doesn't even have a weapon dares to confront me. You're quite stupid i might say. Or maybe you wish to die. Naruto: Weapons? I don't need any weapons. Juubi: Oh...you will beat me with the power of your mind or what? Naruto: No. With my chakra! Juubi: Chakra! How does a child know about chakra!?! Naruto: Well...if you are so curious, i will show you! Suddenly Naruto is shown in Sage Mode. He quickly makes four kagebushins. Naruto: One of you, go distract him. One bunshin jumps and starts attacking the beast with rasengans. The Juubi seems immune to the attacks and quickly destroys the clone. Juubi: Don't worry. I will let you finish your technique. I want to see what a mere human can do. Naruto: Too bad for you- as he holds a Hurricane Rasengan. Juubi: I'm amazed boy that you can control the chakra like this. It seems that you managed to master the shape manipulation to the highest degree and you added elemental chakra to it. That's something. And you also control the Natural Energy around you.But you won't be able to hit me with that. You cannot come near me. If you do it, i will kill you. Naruto calmly: It seems that you are aware of the Natural Energy huh? You know that it's everywhere, right? So what happens... Naruto suddenly dissappears and appears Above the Juubi's head with a yellow flash! Naruto: When you use it as a landmark for a space-time ninjutsu!?! Take this! Hurricane Rasengan!!! Naruto slams the rasengan into Juubi's head. The energy released makes a huge crater around the Juubi. As the dust clears up the Juubi is shown standing, but with injuries on it's body. Juubi shocked: Impossible! *No human should be able to use such power! Naruto surprised: You...you are still on your feet!?! Juubi shouting: I'm the Ten Tails beast boy! I cannot be defeated so easily! The Juubi suddenly hits Naruto with one of it's tails throwing him in a building. Naruto slowly rises up from the ruins and looks around him. He sees an altar on which it's floating a spear. Naruto: What the...!?! He quickly rises up and runs towards the altar. He looks at the spear and has a shocked face. Naruto: *The Heavenly Spear of Gods!!! He also sees the Kohaku no Johei. Naruto : The sealing pot.* He quickly grabs the spear with one hand and the pot with the other. Naruto: This Rinnegan it's amazing! I already figured out how these should be used! Well...then let's do it!! He quickly dashes out of the temple and sees the Juubi waiting for him. Juubi: Finally ready to die? Naruto: I don't think so. You see..this friend of mine granted me some eyes that made me much more powerful. Let me show you something...i cannot kill you..but i can seal you!!! Naruto:*Heavenly Spear of Gods! Divine arts! Sealing dome!* The Juubi is shown having it's soul pulled out from the body and going to the tip of the spear. Naruto thinking: Wow..he Rinnegan allows me to understand every jutsu! Suddenly the time stops and Naruto remains unmoved. Naruto: What the hell!?! A sillhoute slowly forms in front of him.* Naruto looks at the sillhoute: Sasuke!?! But how can you be here!!!! Sasuke is shown wearing a white outfit. He smiles towards Naruto. Sasuke: Well...i'm not actually here. Probably right now i'm dead and my body is eviscerated by Raiden. I'm inside your mind. It's a part of my soul that i transfered to you alongisde with my eyes. The conversation that we will have right now it will take a half of a second in the real world. The human mind is truly amazing! Naruto: But why?!?What did you need to talk with me? Sasuke with a grave look: Because it all depends on the choice that you are about to make. Naruto: What do you mean? Sasuke:Are you aware of the temporal paradox? Naruto: Yeah..the Rinnegan revealed much of the science of the jutsu to me. When i used the last level of the Flying Thunder God to get here i understood the time paradox. Sasuke: So, basically, the temporal paradox is a theoretical paradoxical situation that happens because of time travel. A time traveler goes to the past, and does something that would prevent him from time travel in the first place. If he does not go back in time, he does not do anything that would prevent his traveling to the past, so time travel would be possible for him. However, if he goes back in time and does something that would prevent the time travel, he will not go back in time. Thus each possibility seems to imply its own negation - a type of logical paradox.* Naruto: I know this stuff. Also i learned that there are infinite number of universes, all-together known as multiverse. If a person is about to travel back in time, he will end up in a parallel universe. And every action that he does in that universe will affect the future in a different manner that it was in the universe where the time traveler came from. Sasuke: Correct. So your actions here will change the way that the future will manifest. Naruto: My actions?!? Sasuke: In the moment that a person becames a time traveler he gets into a parallel universe that until the moment of his arrival, it went by the same laws and it shared the same history with the original universe. The time traveler's action there will change the course of the history. That's why in our Universe Raiden defeated us. That's why there was an entity called the Sage Of The Six Paths. And that's why he is not here right now. He was a someone in our universe and he is someone else in this one. Naruto: So what I am supposed to do right now?!? Sasuke to himself: Idiot as always. He understands the concepts of the time paradoxes but he doesn't get the most simple things. Naruto: What!?! Sasuke: Listen up, idiot. In this Universe, you are the Sage of The Six Paths! You must defeat the Juubi! But if you seal the Juubi into yourself the history will be the same. Raiden will be born and there will be the same massacre.* Naruto: Then..i will seal it in the pot. Sasuke: Exactly. If you seal the beast into the pot, you will change the course of history and Raiden will never exist. You will be known as the Sage and you will have the chance to change the history.* Naruto: Then i know what I have to do! Sasuke: Then...good luck Naruto! The image shows the reality getting back to the normal.* Naruto points the spear towards the sealing pot, and thus locking the Juubi in the Kohaku no Johei. The mighty Juubi's body falls dead on the ground. Naruto opens his eyes revealing again his Rinnegan. Naruto: Then..i will do like this. The Rinnegan granted me this power. He starts gathering chakra and makes some handsigns. He suddenly releases into the skies a small black ball. Naruto: Chibaku Tensei!!! The Juubi's body and the rocks in the nearby are dragged towards the black ball and thus making something that looks like a meteorite. Naruto raises his hands: And now to throw it away...Shinra Tensei!!!! As Naruto uses the jutsu the huge rock is pushed away into the outer space. He turns around and looks at the sealing pot.* Naruto: It's time to end all of this. He starts making complicate handsings. Naruto: Divine Arts! Seal breaking! Nine parts division! From the pot there are released nine beams of energy that goes into the skies and then the beams scatter across the land. The beams represent the new born tailed beasts. Naruto divised the Juubi's soul in the tailed beasts. Naruto smiles and falls down on the earth exhausted from the extensive use of chakra.
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Scene shows Naruto slowly waking up after a few hours.*
Naruto thinking: Well...it seems that this is the end...i defeated the Juubi...i've made a better future..i stoped Raiden's appearence...i won. But it's like something is missing. Maybe I should try to get back to my time. I wonder what awaits me there. But first... Naruto takes down from his arm the Konoha headband. He goes into the temple and leaves it on the altar. Then he goes out. He starts forming a Rasengan and he destroys the sealing pot and the spear. Naruto to himself: That should do it. It's time for me to go back to my time. He*goes in Sage mode and activates his Rinnegan. *He starts making handsigns and shouts: Naruto: Flying Thunder God technique! God's paradox teversing technique! A vortex appears and slowly envelopes Naruto's body and in a few seconds he vanishes entirely. Scene shows Konoha.* The villagge looks good, like it was never destroyed. All the citizens are ailve and well. The panel shows a kid rushing his mom. Kid: Come on mom! I want to see him! The Mother: Don't rush me! You will get to see him! Kid: Hurry! We don't assist to the election of a new Hokage everyday! The scene shows the Hokage tower. At it's base there are gathered a lot of people, citizens, ninjas and shinobi from other villagges. Suddenly on the top a vortex appears. From the vortex a man gets out and looks around him amazed. Naruto: Wow! Everything is at it's place. Unknown voice: Yeah, it's like you're the same spoiled brat i met a couple of years ago! Who would have taught that you will became Hokage? Well i guess that with your parents and teachers like Kakashi and Jiraya it was expected. Naruto quickly turns around and sees a blonde woman with large breast looking at him. Naruto: Granny Tsunade! Tsunade: Why acting so surprised? You just saw me a few hours ago. Now get ready. You will be presented to the villaggers in a few moments. Naruto: Presented?!? Tsunade pushes him forward. Tsunade: Stay there! Suddenly a man lands near them. Naruto looks at him surprised. Naruto: Sasuke! Sasuke: What?!? Don't tell me that you are afraid!?! -he starts laughing- The wielder of the legendary Rinnegan, jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi, Toad Sage and master of the Flying Thunder God technique is afraid of a crowd of people that wants to adore him? Stop acting moronic. Sasuke slowly walks to a point where the citizens can see him. Sasuke turns around and tells Naruto: Come over here when i will tell your name. Naruto: O...Ok.. Sasuke shouting: Citizens of Konoha! Shinobis of Konoha! Today...it's my honor...to present to you...a man who defeated our most powerful enemies...a man who protected our villagge in times of peace and in times of war...a man that risked his own life for our sake...i present to you...The Sixth Hokage! Uzumaki Namikaze *Naruto!!!! Naruto steps near Sasuke and looks at the crowd. Sasuke slowly retreats leaving him looking. The crowd starts applauding and shouting it's joy. They are all proud of their new Hokage. As the crowd still expresses it's joy Naruto slowly turns around to leave but a group of people lands in front of him. Naruto looks really shocked at the group of people that just appeared. The group is made of the Third Hokage, Kakashi, Jiraya, and the most important...his parents. They are all alive and standing in front of him. The third is the first to approach him. Hiruzen: Good job boy! I'm proud to see that you have grown into a such fine shinobi! Kakashi: The day that i met you i was surprised to see an unpredictable ninja like you. And i was right. I thought that you will be a weak ninja. But here you are...the most powerful shinobi in the villagge. I'm proud of you! Jiraya: Well, you've been a pain the ass but i'm proud to call you my student! As they leave Minato and Kushina are approachig him. Minato: Good job son! I'm proud of you! You proved that you are much more powerful then me! And i'm so proud of you to call you my son! Kushina: You are all that we wished for our son to be! I'm so happy that you are my son! Naruto slowly starts crying and he suddenly embraces them both. Naruto with a low voice: Thank you...thank you...i love you both!!! The scene is switched and the panel shows Naruto at the training area. Suddenly someone lands near him. Naruto turns around and he sees Sasuke. Sasuke lies on the ground. Sasuke: Congratulations. You did it. Naruto: Yeah...i'm finally Hokage. Sasuke: That's not what I was talking about. Naruto: What do you mean? Sasuke: You made the right choice...that's what i mean. Naruto shocked: What are you talking about?!? Sasuke smiling: I'm talking about the fact that you sealed the Juubi in the pot and not in yourself. I'm talking about the fact that we won. Raiden is not a threat anymore. Naruto: But! How do you know!?! Sasuke slowly rises up: I'm simply smarter then you are. Oh, and if you were wondering...all the people that got killed in your lifetime are alive in this Universe.even my brother and my clan are alive! Except for Madara and Raiden of course. Naruto: But how did you managed to come here!?! Sasuke: Heh...i told you that i was more powerful then you! You always underestimated me. Did you thought that i would stay in an Universe controled by Raiden? Anyway...we will talk later i have to go! Naruto: Wait! But it's too late...Sasuke already vanished. Naruto: Damn it...well..i guess it's time to keep an old promise. Scene shows Naruto inside his mind with the Kyuubi. Naruto: I don't know if you know...but i have made a promise. Kyuubi: I know. I looked at all lf your memories. Interesting past you had, Naruto. I know about the time paradox. I know everything. Naruto: Then...i guess that it's time to release you. Kyuubi: Wait! I think that i will stick with you for a while. Who knows what will happen next. Naruto: Really!?! But i thought that you wanted to be free! Kyuubi: Not right now. I kinda got used to this lifestyle. And you being my host...makes life much more interesting! Scene shows Naruto back in the reality. Naruto is shown standing on the top of the Hokage Mountain. He looks at the horizont. Naruto to himself: It seems that everything will be better from now on...the nightmare is over! From now on...it will be peace! Scene is switched back in time. The panel shows the moment when Naruto teleported himself to the future, back in his time. It shows him vanishing. The next panel shows a man who is hidden by shadows entering the temple where Naruto left his headband. The man grabs it and in that moment he gets electrified. He stays like that for a few moments then he makes a handsign and he incinerates the headband.He gets out of the temple and when he is a few meters away the temple gets destroyed by an enourmous beam of light that descended from the sky. Unknown man: You are wrong Uzumaki Naruto...the nightmare just started! The- End! I hoped that you enjoyed my fanfictions guys. I made that guy at the end so when i will have time probably i will add new stories. But for now, i will take a short break. If you have any questions just ask me and i will answer them. I know that the time paradox concept it's a little too much for Naruto but it was the best way to make it the way i wanted. Thank you for the critics that i have received until now, and thank you for having the patience to read my stuff!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
That cliffhanger was nice.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
i think u hurried it a bit but neverthless very gud (whom i kidding awesomeee) ending ....
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
I didn't hurried it at all...i have in mind something to write...but after a break because i have to study. I dedicated three days to finish this part. You will have to wait at least a week. Anyway thanks for all the comments guys. You will love the new stuff that i will write soon.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Something for you guys. ( about the new fanfiction )*
Naruto will assume his Hokage role. The fanfiction will trace his actions as a Kage. *We won't see him in so many battles like before but the ones that he will be part of it...well let's say that those battles will be epic. There will be something new for Naruto. And for Sasuke. Something that Kishi never showed us. Sasuke gets his own Genin team. I'm going to develop the story much more on Minato. Shikamaru and Sasuke are now the closest people to Naruto. Another Rinnegan ability will be revealed. There is a new threat. Some of the battles will take place in an alternate dimension. I will focus on Sasuke a little. He really needs some development. I will give Sasuke a new jutsu. Something to rival Naruto's own power.* I will insiste more on battles with jutsu. I will not focus on the doujutsu so much like i did, but the Sharingan and the Rinnegan will have like always a big impact. The Byakugan will be the point of interest for the new threat. The fanfiction will end with the election of a new Hokage. One that nobody expects. And as i said i will start it in a week.
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VISHNUUU That ending was very EXCITING to read man and what a CLIFFHANGER! May i ask who that unknown person was at the end lol? Tell me please, i love spoilers. My first instant thought it would be the original Sage of the 6 paths since naruto took that position by travelling back in time, the original sage probably observed the whole scenario and got a bit jealous. Perhaps this is because he wanted the acknowledgement from the people of his village or the world due to having a similar lifestyle as naruto of being loneliness and segregated by people (calling him a monster maybe because he had some power or ninjutsu people were afraid off or since it was mentioned he was the first to create ninjutsu or knowledge of chakra, people began to freakout when they witnessed as no ones knows about ninjutsu or chakra as they are assummed to be normal human beings OR people freaked out because of the Sage having the byakugan as his original doujutsu.
Anyways it can be anything i guess, from your prologue above it seems the uknown person can be anyone with the byakugan or the original sage with the byakugan. |
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Is this Thread DEAD??????
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Well u just brought it back to life!
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No it's not dead. By the end of the week i will bring out the new stuff as i promised. Probably in 5-6 days it will be up.
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Hey Forummates, welcome to the New Naruto Fan Fiction.
Hope you'll enjoy it. Let's roll!!! Konoha Chronicles by Last Swordmans Word Chapter 1: The World of Shinobi The morning Sun is rising over the forest. It's the Land of Fire. Since over 50 years of fighting between the Ninja Clan's have passed. A hundred thousands of shinobi fought and suffered for the sake of their Clan. This world where nothing but a giant Battlefield where the mankind were ruled by a war that spread hatred, murder and betrayal. The world of shinobi reached a point near at it's abyss.* We see two young men standing in front of a large graveyard. They're followed by a little group of Shinobi. It's the Elite of the feared Uchiha Clan listening to the words of their leader in front. One of the most skilled Shinobi in this World. The legendary Uchiha Madara and his cousin and closest advisor Uchiha Shinji. Madara: All these proud men died for nothing. Making peace with our rivals makes their death meanigless You see Izuna's grave over there? What would he have done in this situation? Shinji: Madara-sama, I know you two always did your best to protect us and you lead us to the top of the Shinobi World. He would be proud on the decision you choose. Afterall he always hated the senseless killing in this World. I think through his eyes in you he can see you doing the right thing. Madara: Stop this bullshit! Izuna were born as one of the finest Uchihas. He was a Warrior only living for the victory in battle. The only man with enough heart to give*his eyes for the clan's sake. He never wanted something like peace. Shinji: Excuse me Madara-sama. How frivolous of me to think i had known your brother more than you. But as you see.... Our clansmen are fed up of competing with the Senju and we don't know how long we'll hold the Upper Hand in this rivalry. A lot of our men died in this war. It's an oppurtunity to gain a basement of power if we share this Alliance with the other Clans. Madara: You expect the Senju to be your allys??? They'll never let such a powerful clan like the Uchiha be their allys. *Remember our History, we're a clan only driven by the goal of ruling the others, never allowing another one to step above us. Our only friend and ally is our hatred. We were born with it, we grew with it and we finally die with it. Those that died for the peacefully way of living will never see their dream come true. Peace creates Hatred and this cycle of hate will never stop as long as Human being exists. *But as seema I can't do nothing against your decision. Seems like the hatred disappeaeed out of our hearts. The Uchiha clan is weakened by a feeling called fear and this will close the fate of this clan. One day they'll betray us for sure but then it's to late. Remember my Words Shinji.* Shinji: ..... Thinking: His rage will never quit. His bitterness rised since we lost Izuna. He never wanted this for his Brother and especially for the Uchiha clan. Suddenly a Clansmember appears in front of them.* Shinji: What is it Raiga? Uchiha Raiga: Madara sama, Shinji - Senpai!!! The Clans elder are waiting for your orders. The other Clans already gathered their leaders and elders together. The Meeting will start in a few hours.* Madara: So it's time... Tell them I'm on my way. And order the others to the Uchiha Hideout. I need to give them some words. Raiga: Got it! Raiga rushes to the other clansmember and they vanish to the hideout. Shinji: I'm on my way Madara-sama, i expect your presence at the meeting. Keep your head up. Madara: You lost sight of what you are Shinji. I don't know about your feelings deep inside but to put such a trust in the hands of a bunch of cowards like the other clans leaders makes me wanna kill you here and now. You should be glad that theres nothing more I love than my clan and you're one of them. Overthink your Actions and Words because in this world the weak heart and mind drags you to your end. Shinji: I'm sorry Madara sama. ( he disappears in a swirl.) Madara looks on the graves. He reads a name.* Madara: Look what you're victim has brought us to, Uchiha Izuna. A tear rolls down his eyes and he vanishs in trees. Scene changes to a little town. Only a few houses are build but a lot of people gathered with their families and stuff to this place. Tents are seen around the area with the biggest one in the middle. *A large group of shinobi is guarding the big tent everyone with another symbol on his armour. A tall men with a blue and grey vest steps out of the tent. His head protector looks like Yamatos. It's Senju Tobirama, brother of Senju Hashirama the leader of the Senju Clan and host of the meeting. Senju Toka, a young girl in the early twentys spots Tobirama an rushes to him.* Toka: Tobirama sama, how things are going in there? Tobirama: Most of the Clanleaders already arrived with their Elders. I need you to guard this place as soon as we start the meeting. I put my trust in you Toka. Toka: Alright. I'll guard this tent with my life. Anyway I'm not alone in here. These other guards of the Clans.... I'm kinda interested in their abilities. This would be sure a nice sparring if it comes to fighting. Tobirama: No Toka!!!! Remember what i told you about this meeting. We can't afford any conflicts anymore. This is the first day to build a foundation that will finally give peace to our country. This is especially for you since i know your temprament so if you see him hold yourself a bit.* Toka: ( with an angry look and her hands made to a fist) It's ok! I will ignore the past for the sake of peace. But that won't save him either his *murderer and grave is already clear. It only depends on when he will die. Tobirama: (thinking) Her lust for revenge gets more with every day. I hope she won't lose herself in this cycle of hatred. Suddenly a group of four shinobi reach the tent. ???: Senju Tobirama! You've grown to a great Shinobi as I heard. Tobirama: Takashi Sensei!!! I'm happy to see you made it here.* Uzumaki Takashi: Anyway the Land of Swirls is not so far away. I'm here to support my cousin in his plans. You will see it yourself later. Show me my place little Tobirama. Toka: Uzumaki???? Tobirama: Yes Toka. This is Uzumaki Takashi leader of the new founded Whirlpool Village and close relative of our Clan. He were my first teacher during the start of the First Shinobi World War. Our Clans fought together for a long time. Toka: So thats the case.* Tobirama: If you would follow me Takashi Sensei. I'll lead you to your seats. Toka is watching both Shinobi disappear in the tent.* Elsewhere a full room of Shinobi is shown. Everyone of them wears the Uchiha crest on their back. There is a podest with three Shinobi standing there. One is holding a speech. It's Shinji and beside him the two Uchiha Elders. Madara sits in the back of the crowd and seemly in bad mood about the willing of cooperation. Shinji: So it's settled. The Uchiha Clan is willing to join the Shinobi Alliance. We won't interfere in any action anymore given by any customers. *Our only loyalty belong the Alliance and the Land of Fire. Madara: *.... (smirks) |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Back in the little town we enter the big Tent and see a large round table. At the head of the room we see a man. He has long brown hair and wears a heavy red armour over his black suite. It's Senju Hashirama followed by Tobirama and the two elders of the Senju Clan. On the other side of the table the Daimyo of the Land of Fire is seen with a five man delegation of advisors and ministers.
The rest of the table on the right and left side shows a lot of Shinobi every group *dressed different from each other.* Hashirama: So Tobirama, as it seems the Uchiha haven't arrived, yet. Hope they'll make their minds up a bit. Madara can't refuse to cooperate with us or else this will start up in another war like I know him.* Tobirama: Don't bother Brother I guess he don't want to confront an Alliance of the most skilled Clans in the Land of Fire. In addition to that the Uchihas are tired of War. They're not the old stubborn enemy we fought the last decades. It's time to put our Power and talent together to create a force far beyond what has ever been in Shinobi's History. We can change everything, Hashirama. Hashirama: You're right it's time to stop the fighting , now!!!! Hashirama stands up and speaks in loud voice. Hashirama: Shinobi. This word, normally standing for Honor, Force and Mind, like it's standing for peace, love and hope, is shunned down in this world. Since I was born and raised in this world I can't remember a peacefull time. We fought and hated, we captured and conquered and we killed and were killed. All tears and blood that dropped this earth were dropped for the the rich and famous of this Country. The ones that don't cared about who does what for a less price. That we payed back with the live of our familys and friends. Today , me Senju Hashirama, welcome you to this peaceful and bright landscape within the Leafs of Hope to make an example. An example for all people in this world, that we Shinobi will stand for our true and honest principles. Peace not only now, we must secure this for all times. Outside Toka and a few other Senju resting and guarding the Tent like all the other Shibobi belonging to the Clans. A lot of distrust and hate is in the air.* Toka: Look at them. These folks are hungry for our fall. It seems kinda difficult to believe these People can share an Alliance with us. We were Enemys since day one. Our familys killed their familys and otherwise. What the hell has gotten in your fathers mind to try to join an force within people hating and killing each other til yesterday, Doya????? How are we supposed to forget all that happened in this war? Doya: Toka we had the same things done. We killed and were killed. In no matter we are better than them. But times changed and the old ones that started the last War are almost all dead. And we still carry their burden as it were nothing. But that's not the way its supposed to be.* Toka: Pfff... Like I care about. I know nothing but war something else would be boring. ???? (she spots four men coming out of the wood drawing the attention of all men on the field. Doya: So they finally made it.* Toka is seen in full rage staring at the one at left side. It's Shinji. Lead by Madara and and followed by the Uchiha Clan. Madara and Shinji accompanied by their two elders step out of the crowd and head straight to the big tent in the middle of the field. Shinji: Madara-sama. Please let us handle this peaceful. If it goes well we can get with a good advantage out of this meeting.* Madara: It depends on how they will handle the Uchihas. There is only one advantage that makes me satisfied.* They pass the Senjus while Toka still looking with anger in her face. Shinji notices her and looks to her with a smile. Shinji: Hey Senju, nice eye patch you got there. Toka paralyzed in her rage almost exploding pulls her Kunai out as Doya makes a handsign and drags her feet to the ground. Doya: Toka!!! You know you can't do that and I also wouldn't allow it. Tobirama's order you remember. After all we invited the Clan's and the Daymiou to this place. We can't be the troubling ones in such a situation.* Toka:.....( puts her kunai back and Doya releases the jutsu) Back in the tent the Clansmember listening to Hashirama who asks the rest of the Clansleader to stand up and introduce their selfs. Hashirama: I'll start like I already metioned and most of you know. I'm Senju Hashirama, representing the Senju Clan. Inuzuka: Inuzuka Kato. Representing the Inuzuka Clan. Hyuuga: Hyuuga Toshi. Representing the Hyuuga Clan. Sarutobi: Sarutobi Sasuke. Standin here in the Name of the Sarutobi Clan Namikaze: Namikaze Tendo. Namikaze Clan. Nara: Nara Kitsune. Here for* Nara Clan Yamanaka: Yamanaka Sembo. Head of the Yamanaka Clan Many other Clans like Akimichi, Haruno, Aburame and Hatake are named. The word goes back to Hashirama. Hashirama: So now that we know our names we can settle the main points of this meeting that I invited you to. Here besides me is the Uzumaki Clans leader Uzumaki Takashi. He will aid us as a neutral but trustworthy advisor in this matter. The matter of joining to a army of shinobis. Ready to withstand any Treath united as one. Shinobis of the Land of Fire, which is our homeland. The daymiou of our homeland wants and like I prefer to do the security for all the people that live in our land. We should be the Security. We should be the protectors of our homeland thats why we need an Alliance of Shinobi of all the Clans in the land of fire. A man in with long hair and a red armor vest with a big fan steps into the scene. Madara: First of who the hell put you on command anyway!!!!!!! * Madara enters the Clans meeting. What will be his claim??? Next Time: The Hidden Leaf Village |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
As i promised i made the next chapter. The story is based on my previous fanfiction. If you don't understand something don't hesitate to ask me.
Naruto: The next generation. Observation- the events are taking place in the parallel dimension that Naruto accesed after defeating the Juubi. All the characters, including Itachi, the Uchiha clan, The Thrid Hokage, Minato, Orochimaru and Jiraya are alive in this universe. But things are about to change soon... Scene shows a peacefully Konoha. The birds are singing and children are playing on the streets. The panel shows Iruka and some Academy students practicing shuriken throwing. Then, the panel is switched and it shows the Training Ground. There are spotted three kids. They are not older then 13. Two boys and one girl. One of the boys has a white shirt and white pants. He also wears a red scarf and has blue boots. He has short spiky brown hair. The other one has brown hair and he wears glasses and a sleepy face and the girl has red oval markings on her cheeks and orange hair tied in two big pigtails. Togheter with them is a Jounin. The Jounin wears his standard uniform and black sunglasses. Ebisu: Well...it seems that your new master will be here in a moment. Konohamaru: But why do we have to change our master!?! Moegi: Stop being such a baby Konohamaru! Udon: Yeah, and we can't do anything. We were assigned to this new guy by the Hokage himself. Konohamaru: The Hokage!?! Ebisu: Stop it! Act proprely. You are not assigned to someone common. You will be trained by one of our best ninjas. It's said that only the Hokage can beat him. If you really want to be Hokage you will need to obey your new master and listen to him. He can teach you lots more then I can do. Konohamaru: Really!?! Who is he? Unknown voice: Me. Suddenly another man lands near them. A man dressed in black. The new guy has black hair, black shirt and pants, on his right shirt hand he has a red and white fan design and he carries a brown belt on which it's tied a katana at his back. He also wears black fingerless gloves and he has a menacing look. On his right arm it's tied the leaf's headband. Konohamaru stares at the new man that has arrived alongside with his teammates. Ebisu: Thank you for accepting. Sasuke: No problem. Thank you for the good words.* Ebisu: Well i guess that they are yours right now.* Sasuke: Yes. You are relieved of your duty to protect and teach them. I will take good care of them. Ebisu as he makes a handsign: Well guys...it's been a pleasure! Good luck! All of them: Bye Ebisu-sensei! Sasuke turns around and looks at them. Sasuke: Well...let's start with the introductions. I'll be first. My name is Uchiha Sasuke. I'm a Jounin and the second man in the villagge in terms of power. The first one is obviously the Hokage. I will be your Sensei from now on and if you listen to what i have to say you will became great ninjas. My hobbies...well i guess that my single hobby is training. Plans for the future: None yet. My past: You don't want to know. Your turn. Konohamaru: My name is Konohamaru Sarutobi! My dream is to be the next Hokage! I have made a promise with Naruto..excuse me..Hokage-sama that we will fight and if i beat him i will be the next Hokage! My specialty is ninjutsu and my hobby is eating ramen! Sasuke thinking: Fight with Naruto huh...interesting kid. He is like a second Naruto. Udon: My name is Udon. My hobby are mathematics and i'm versed in genjustu.* Moegi: I'm Moegi! I was trained by Sakura-sama and i want to became a medical ninja! Sasuke: And with that been said i hope that you are in a good shape. Konohamaru: The best shape ever! I can take on anyone right now! Sasuke smiling: Perfect because i have a little test for you. If you fail it,* you will go back to the Academy. But if you're in the best shape i trust that you will pass it. Udon: What kind of test?!? Sasuke:We will simply fight one on one. You will show me what you can do. For Moegi i will have a different test. She doesn't need to fight me. She will show me what she learned with Sakura. Konohamaru: Fighting huh? Then i'm the first one! Sasuke: Are you sure? Konohamaru: Damn right i'm sure! You will be sorry! Sasuke: Hmpf...let's see what you got kid. The scene shows Sasuke and Konohamaru looking at eachother. Sasuke: If you manage to hit me you pass. If you don't you're going back to the Academy. Konohamaru: Well then let's do it! Konohamaru throws a smoke bomb, enveloping himself in the smoke. At the same time he makes the kagebushin sign. He jumps from the smoke and makes some handsigns. Konohamaru: Katon! Pheonix Sage Fire! Konohamaru sends an array of flames towards Sasuke, but the latter makes some handsigns. Sasuke: Suiton! Serena! From a small portion in front of Sasuke it starts raining and thus he puts out the flames. But inside the flames where hidden shurikens. Sasuke dodges two shurikens and catches the last one, he spins and he throws it back at Konohamaru hitting him in the chest. But the boy that got hit was just a clone as he dissappears. Sasuke: Interesting. Suddenly from the smoke it's thrown a kunai towards Sasuke's head but he sets his eyes on it and dodges it easily. Sasuke: You think that you can get me with that kiddo? Konohamaru transforms from the kunai he just threw from the smoke, just like Naruto did against Zabuza. He dashes towards Sasuke and he makes some handsigns. Konohamaru: Wind release! Violent Palm! He claps his hands and he sends towards Sasuke multiple cutting wind projectiles. Sasuke smiles and he makes two handsigns. Sasuke: Doton! Earth wall! An earth wall emerges from the ground and it protects Sasuke from the attack. At the same moment Sasuke appears behind Konohamaru and catches him puting him down on the ground. Sasuke: That was fun kid...you are interesting but i'm sorry to tell you that you are going back to the academy! Konohamaru: No! Let me go! I cannot dissappoint The Hokage and lose to you! Sasuke: If it conforts you, Naruto was a bigger loser then you when he was your age. Konohamaru suddenly serious: Don't you ever dare...to talk that way about him! -he makes a handsign- Clone super explosion! The kid Sasuke holds explodes with blue flames. Sasuke quickly jumps back to avoid getting hit by the flames.* Sasuke thinking: Itachi's technique !!! *Where did he learn that!?! At the same time,another Konohamaru appears behind Sasuke and tries to hit Sasuke with a kunai. But Sasuke turns around and delivers a kick to Konohamaru sending him in some rocks and leaving him uncouncious. Sasuke: And that's it for Konohamaru. Too bad...he is quite good. Suddenly the ground that Sasuke stands on gets cracked and Konohamaru emerges from it with a kunai pointed at Sasuke's neck. Sasuke barely has time to make a fast Chidori and he hits Konohamaru in the shoulder with it, leaving the boy injured on the ground. Konohamaru holding his shoulder: Dammit! Sasuke slowly approaches him: So you're stubborn as Naruto. Konohamaru smiling at him: And you haven't seen anything yet! Quickly Sasuke turns around and he makes a chidori because above him is Konohamaru. The kid is about one meter away of hitting Sasuke with a giant Rasengan. Sasuke shocked thinks: Rasengan!?! Konohamaru as he gets ready to clash with Sasuke: Oodama Rasengan!!!! Sasuke: Chidorii!!! As the two jutsus clash a great deal of energy it's released also raising lots of dust. As the dust clears up we see Konohamaru falling exhausted on the ground and Sasuke standing with his back at Konohamaru. Konohamaru: I..i lost...-and he collapeses-. Sasuke: No you didn't.* Sasuke looks at his right hand that has burn injuries all over it. Sasuke towards Udon and Moegi: He manage to give me a hit. He is in. Let's see what will you do. Sasuke thinking: That Naruto bastard. He teached this kid more then eating ramen and Sexy Ninjutsu. To think that he was able to use a fire and a wind technique, so many clones, one of Itachi's techniques, also being *able to create so much diversions and to use such a powerful Rasengan. He is much more powerful then Naruto was. If i will train him proprely, in four years he will be able to fight Naruto on equal terms. Sasuke: Moegi heal him. When you're done you will pass. But only if you do it in less then five minutes. Moegi: i'm on it! Sasuke: Now Udon...let's fight with genjustu! If you can place me in a genjutsu you passed. Suddenly Konohamaru's voice is heared. Konohamaru: Teach him a lesson Udon! Do it! Sasuke looks surprised at Moegi who smiles. Sasuke: Meogi...you passed too. Udon: Hmm...i can't fight on equal terms with a Sharingan master. Especially the Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan user. Sasuke: I will use only the basic Sharingan. Satisfied? Udon: Do you promise? Sasuke: I do. Udon: Then you just lost. Sasuke: What do you mean? Sharingan! Sasuke suddenly gets a shocked face: Amazing. The details are reprodduced perfect from the reality.* Udon is shown standing actually behind Sasuke. Sasuke: Great job Kid. You're quite good with genjutsu. But you actually lost. Udon: What do you mean? Sasuke: Look behind you. Udon looks behind him and he sees Sasuke standing in a tree and looking at them. Udon: It was all a genjutsu? Sasuke: Exactly. But you managed to make a genjutsu inside another. You need to polish your skills. We can do that. You passed too. Congratiulations. Meet me tomorrow in front of the Hokage tower at noon.* Sasuke dissappers in an instant.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The next scene shows Sasuke entering the Hokage office.
In the Hokage office is shown a tall blonde man, that wears a white shirt and black pants. Over the shirt he has a red coat with black flames on it. His headband it's tied to his right arm like Sasuke's. Sasuke: They are all amazing. Naruto: Indeed. What do you think about them? Sasuke: Well, let's start with Moegi. She managed to accomplish quite a feat. She healed Konohamaru in one minute. She is truly gifted. In a couple of years she will surpass Sakura. Udon has an amazing skill with the genjutsu. He managed to use a powerful one without and incantations or handsigns. And Konohamaru...that kid is really something. He made good use of the shadow clones, he used two elemental jutsu and he attacked me with Oodama Rasengan. Also he is quite a tactician. He used lots of clever diversions and he speculated my only moment when i let my guard down. He will be a splendid ninja. Naruto: Good. Now, Sasuke...i need you to prepare them. Sasuke: What for? Naruto: The Chuunin exams...it will start in two weeks.* Sasuke: Two weeks? That's more then enough. Anyway Konohamaru and Udon can take on any Genin. I must focus on Moegi. Naruto: You will be surprised to see how the things are. She excels in taijutsu. She is like a second Sakura! Sasuke: Okay then. I will show them some tricks.* Naruto: Sasuke... Sasuke: What? Naruto: Take care of Konohamaru. Please. Sasuke: I will. He is my student right now. I will protect him no matter what. Naruto: Thank you! I trust more then anyone, my friend! Sasuke: Don't worry.* Naruto: One more thing Sasuke... Sasuke: What? Naruto: You never told me how do you knew of the alternate dimensions. Sasuke: I will tell you when it's the right moment. Scene is switched. It shows the training ground. Sasuke is there with his team. Sasuke: Konohamaru come here. Konohamaru: What it is? Sasuke: I'm going to show you something new. Konohamaru: A new jutsu?!? Sasuke: Yeah...something devastating.* Scene is switched. It shows the Hokage office. Naruto is standing in front of the window. Suddenly behind him appears an ANBU.* Naruto: What's the report? ANBU: Hokage-sama...i'm here to deliver a messagge from the Kazekage. He will arrive in Konoha in 3 days for the Chuunin exam. Also the Raikage has sent many candidates for the exam.* Naruto: Good. I missed Gaara...probably the Raikage will attend to. Secure the villagge! And prepare the troops for everything! We must not have any interference at this exam. ANBU: Yes sir! I will order the ANBU to scatter accross the villagge. They will locate any possible threat. Naruto: Good. Now go! As the ANBU dissappears Naruto turns his face at the window. Naruto: How will you handle yourself Konohamaru? Scene is switched showing a tired Konohamaru who is standing in a large crater. Sasuke is behind him. Sasuke: Good job. You finally did it.* Konohamaru: But it's very hard... Sasuke thinking: I'm surprised that he managed to master it in a few hours. It took me several days. Naruto needed a full month to be able to master it. Sasuke: And now...you will need to practice team combinations. It's essentially because you will need to fight together. Scene is switched. Ot shows an entirely different setup. It's the place where the Juubi was defeated by Naruto. It's a scene that shows a different timeline. A hooded figure is looking at the desert that appeared in front of him. Unknown: So here it is...the final showdown... Suddenly from the ground emerges a man covered all in black and with a headband that has written on it: "Phantom". Unknown: So...you're the Desert's phantom... Phantom: Yeah...and who you are? Unknown: It doesn't matter.* Phantom: Nobody is stupid enough to came here to defy me. You must be a stranger. Unknown: Actually I'm a stranger. A stranger to this world...to this time... Phantom makes a few handsigns: Chakra release! Unknown starts laughing: That's all you got boy? A mere chakra release? Phantom shocked: Usually it works!?! Unknown grabs Phantom and draws him near his face. Unknown: Look into my eyes! The man known as Phantom spots two red eyes and as he stares in shock, suddenly his face loses his expression. The unknown man throws the body of the man known as the Desert's Phantom.* Unknown: Goodbye...you're just a joke after all. But you are perfect for my experiment. The unknown guy points his finger at the earth and he sends flames frommthe tip of his finger. He uses the flames to make on the earth a small pentagram. He places the body in the pentagram and hen he makes some handsigns. Unknown: Herethical Summoning! Border seal! Change! As soon as he finishes the incantation he collapses on one knee barely breathing. Unknown thinking: That jutsu took a lot of my current stamina. Who would have thought that i will be stuck to this level... Suddenly in front of him the space literally tears apart leaving a crack in it. The jutsu he used was a space-time technique that breaks the borders between worlds. The crack reveals the image of a distant Konoha but like it opened suddenly it closed like it was never there. The image shows the unknown figure as he slowly turns around. The panel only shows his eyes. His right eye is a normal Sharingan and his left eye is a Rinnegan. Unknown: Soon, i will be there, Uzumaki Naruto...and i will shake the very foundations of your world!!! Next chapter: - the chuunin exams start. How will Konohamaru do? - Naruto discovers something and he sends a team to investigate. A team formed by the best ninjas. -Sasuke confronts an old enemy.
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