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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Udon: Let me enlighten you, Orochimaru...Sasuke-sensei gave me a portion of his DNA and he had Tsunade-sama to give me a portion of her Senju DNA. That's how i'm able to use it.
Orochimaru: But you should have lost the eye! You should no longer have the Sharingan! Udon: The mosquito...Sasuke-sensei teached me a jutsu that allows me to transfer any damage that might come to my body...also the Sharingan... Orochimaru: To a summoning...so that's how...the Uchiha brat granted you the necessary DNA to use the Izanagi and he eliminated the effects by devising a jutsu that transfers the Sharingan and the damage at may occur to the user, to a summoning...clever kid... Suddenly Orochimaru coughs blood and has again the shocked look on his face. The panel shows us that he has a sword covered in black flames, going through his chest. He slowly turns his head and he sees behind him the man that holds the sword. Itachi: This is your end Orochimaru... Orochimaru: Itachi...Uchiha... Itachi as he activates his Mangekyou Sharingan. Orochimaru: Let me ask you...how...did you achieved...your MS?* Itachi: Sasuke showed me something...just before he left to kill Raiden...he showed me how i was in the alternate dimension...and the pain of what i saw there...was enough for me to activate it... Susano'o appears around Itachi. Itachi: It's time for you to vanish snake!* The Susano'o swings it's sword and hits Orochimaru, sealing him forever. Itachi releases his MS and he looks at Udon. Itachi: Well done Udon. You used your Sharingan amazing! Udon smiling: Thank you! Udon thinking: I wonder...how powerful have you got...Konohamaru... Scene it's switched. It shows the Konoha's gate. Out of nowhere a group of people suddenly appears. Naruto: We're back... Sasuke: Yeah... E: So the threat it's over. Mei: The threat that Raiden was...now we have to confront these Beyonders... Onooki: Well...tou saw what Sasuke made to that one... Gaara: Also, Naruto's power release...i don't think that it's a real threat. Shikamaru: Don't lose yourselves. We know nothing about them. Bee: Well...let the bitches come!* Naruto: We will see how the things will go on from now...thank you for the support..everyone.. E smiling: Don't mention it brat! I hate to say this...but you are the most powerful guy i know! * Scene it's switched. It shows Itachi talking with Sasuke.* Itachi: It's done, Sasuke. Orochimaru is not a threat anymore.* Sasuke: Well done...how did Udon managed him?* Itachi: Very well i might say. He used very well the Sharingan. In a few years he will be the most non-uciha proeficient user of the Sharingan. Actually he will be able to use better then many Uchihas. Scene it's switched. It shows Naruto's office. He is with Sasuke. Almost a year has passed from their journey to eliminate Raiden. Sasuke: What do you think? Naruto: Killing Raiden was to easy...something's wrong... Sasuke: I know...but what can we do besides waiting for the next assasult? Naruto: Prepare ourselves. I sent after Konohamaru...he is been away too long...i hope that he learned enough...he will be back tomorrow...i want you to test his power. See what he can do. Sasuke: I will...i'm sure that the kid it's much more powerful...don't forget that if it wasn't me, he would almost killed Orochimaru. Naruto: I know..we must invest everything we got in this kid...he is the only one who proved that he has the guts and courage to face anything. Sasuke smiling: He will be your legacy... Naruto smiles on't burry me yet!Scene it's switched. It shows a boy entering the gates of Konoha. He is tall, he has brown spiky hair, a short red scarf around his neck, black shirt *and red pants, black boots, he has his Konoha headband at his waist, wearing it as a belt, and a sword strapped to his back. He has a scar on his right eye, and cloth wrapped on his right arm. He also has five knives at his belt. He slowly walks towards the Hokage office, without anyone trying to stop him. Suddenly a man lands in front of him.*
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Kakashi: Welcome back!
Konohamaru: Thank you...i missed this place... Kakashi: We missed you too. How was the trip? Any problems? Konohamaru smiling: None at all... Kakashi: Good...well the Hokage waits for you. Panel it's switched. It shows Konohamaru entering Naruto's office Naruto turns around and looks at Konohamaru. Naruto: You've grown.* Konohamaru: I've been a year away training. It's naturally that i've grown. Naruto smiling: Heh...your ego has grown as well. Konohamaru: Nah, i'm just much more powerful. Naruto: Why don't we put that to the test? Konohamaru: Test?!? How? Unknown voice: By fighting me. Konohamaru turns around: Sasuke-sensei! Sasuke smiled: Yeah, i missed you too kiddo. Naruto: Tomorrow morning, at the training grounds, you will fight Sasuke. Youmwill prove to me what you can do, and i will find you an use after this! Scene it's switched. It shows Konohamaru on the streets of konoha. Suddenly he gets surrounded by a bunch of teenagers. Konohamaru smiles as he spots Udon, Moegi, Arinasa, Kaien and Zero. Udon: You took your time! Konohamaru: Well, the Kages are not merciful! Moegi: What's up with that scar? Konohamaru: I got it fighting the Raikage... Arinasa: We're glad to see you Konohamaru! Kaien smiling: Yeah, i missed my sparring matches with you! Zero: Welcome back Konohamaru... Konohamaru: Zero... Zero: Look, i'm sorry about what happend during the Chuunin Exams...I... Konohamaru smiling: It doesn't matter anymore...don't worry! Scene it's switched. It shows Naruto entering a house. As he opens the door he is greeted by Minato. Minato smiling: Naruto!* Naruto: Hey, Dad! How are you? Minato: Great, actually. Come on in...your mother and I, have something to tell you. Naruto surprised: What? Did something happend?!? Kushina appears in front of him...she is dressed in a long yellow dress. Naruto embraces her. Naruto: Mom.. Minato: Naruto, someone came to us today... Naruto: Who was it? Kushina: Hyuuga Hinata. She told me some stuff...and i kinda like her. She is a good girl. Naruto: So...What did she want? Kushina: Well, nothing really...i invited her to dinner...do you want to come too? I insist! Naruto: You know that usually i have lots of work to do... Suddenly he gets hit in the head by Kushina that has an angry look on her face. Naruto : But i can make it...sure... Minato and Kushina starts laughing. Naruto looks at them, he smiles then he laughs too. Scene it's switched. It shows Konohamaru at the training grounds. He is waiting for Sasuke. Around him are Udon and Moegi. Suddenly Sasuke lands in front of them. Sasuke: I'm sorry you two, but i will only fight with Konohamaru today. Udon: No problem. We are here, just to asisst. Sasuke looks at Konohamaru. Sasuke: Well...it will be the same old test. Grab the bell from me and you win. You have two hours to do so. You can only do it if you come at me with the intent of killing me. Konohamaru: Got it. Sasuke: So...let's go! Konohamaru throws a smoke bomb. Sasuke looks at the scene smiling.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
From the smoke jumps Konohamaru and he throws multiple kunais enveloped in electricity towards Sasuke. Sasuke dodges them all and appears behind Konohamaru, trying to strike him with his sword. Konohamaru draws his sword and clashes with Sasuke in the air. As he falls down on the earth, Konohamaru makes a handsign and he sends from his palm a lightning spear towards Sasuke who is still in thr air. Sasuke makes quickly a shadow clone, which grabes him and throws him out of the way. Sasuke lands on the ground making handsigns. He suddenly rushes towards Konohamaru and engages him in sword fight. Konohamaru holds his own and while he clashes with Sasuke, the latter activates his Spiralling EMS.
Sasuke shouts: Amaterasu!!! Suddenly Konohamaru gets caught in the black fire. As he is burned he smiles and makes a handsing. Konohamaru: Ultra Clone explosion! He explodes in a giant beam of fire, making Sasuke dashing back to avoid getting hit. Sasuke: Impressive...a shadow clone that was able to deal with me for such long. Konohamaru appears suddenly at Sasuke's right and he makes handsigns. Konohamaru: Storm release! Violent wind pressure! Konohamaru launches from his hands a violent blow of wind. Sasuke quickly activates his Susano'o skeletal form,that protects him from the damage. Konohamaru making another handsign: Water release! Acid rain! An acid rain starts above the Susano'o. The acid slowly melts away the skeleton. As the Susano'o slowly reveals an opening because of the acid. Konohamaru quickly makes another handsing. Konohamaru: Hozuki Style! Water gun!* Konohamaru fires a droplet of water from his index finger that pierces right through the remains of the Susano'o. In the last second Sasuke dodges the bullet, that was aimed for his head. Sasuke: Interesting... Sasuke quickly makes some handsigns: Earth release! Multiple spikes! Several spikes emerge from the ground but Konohamaru jumps and avoids all. At the same moment Sasuke appears behind him and impales Konohamaru in the chest with his sword that it's covered in electricity. Konohamaru vanishes revealing himself as a water clone. Sasuke: I should've known... Konohamaru appears in front of him making quickly handsigns. Konohamaru: Earth release! Earthquake devastation! The ground around Sasuke starts violently shaking. He jumps in the air, spins while making a handsign and he summons a giant hawk which he lands on. Konohamaru: A hawk... Sasuke quickly makes some handsigns: Amaterasu burst! He spits a giant Amaterasu ball towards Konohamaru. Konohamaru quickly makes complicated handsings. Konohamaru: Earth style! Multiple layered wall! Several walls of earth appears in front him. The Amaterasu ball hits the walls and gives Konohamaru time to jump away. Sasuke lands on the ground. Sasuke: Impressive array of jutsu. I see that the Kages teached you something while you were away. But you are still away from grabbing the bell from me. Konohamaru: Maybe, maybe not... Sasuke: Unless you have devised some complicated plan...or you have some tremendous jutsu... Sasuke vanishes and appears behind Konohamaru. He impales his student with a chidori blade in the shoulder. Sasuke: You will never fool me... Konohamaru smiles: Ultra clone explosion! He explodes again, making Sasuke to dash back. Suddenly Konohamaru appears behind Sasuke and he manages to give Sasuke a punch *in the chest throwing him away. Sasuke looks at him surprised. Konohamaru is enveloped in a lightning armor, simmilar to the Raikage. Sasuke: Nintaijutsu? The Raikage taught you that?!? Konohamaru reappears behind Sasuke and tries to hit him, but Sasuke spins around, catches Konohamaru's leg and throws him away. Sasuke: You can beat me with sheer speed boy. My eyes can keep up with you no matter how fast you are. Konohamaru: The lightning armor is not for speed. It's for protection. Sasuke: Protection? From what? Konohamaru: From what it's about to happend. Suddenly Konohamaru gets Sage eyes. Sasuke: I see...you also had one of your clones gathering Natural Energy. Now your power is far more superior. You are in Sage Mode, and you also has the lightning armor. What's next? Konohamaru slowly releases the cloth wrapped around his right arm. Sasuke: What's that?!? Konohamaru: Something new....i need the Sage Mode to gove me the necessary chakras to use this... As he releases the cloth we can see that he has a black dragon tatoo on his hand. Sasuke: What the...!?! Konohamaru releases from his right arm a massive wave of chakra. Dark chakra. Konohamaru points his arm towards Sasuke. Konohamaru: Darkness release! Mystical dragon assault! Konohamaru releases a huge dark beam shaped as a dragon from his palm that goes straight towards Sasuke. Sasuke has a shocked look on his face and he quickly manages to form his fully developed Susano'o. The beam hits directly the Susano'o making a huge impact. As the dust clears we can see that Sasuke is standing in a huge crater, but no damage has comed to him, because he had the Susano'o's protection. Konohamaru is shown standing on one knee and breathing heavily. Sasuke: Impressive. But it took quite a tool on you...you improved..but... Suddenly Konohamaru appears behind Sasuke and hits him very hard, throwing the Uchiha crashing in the ground. Sasuke quickly raises but Konohamaru appears again behind him. This time Sasuke dodges the punch and throws Konohamaru several meters away. Sasuke: You will never get this bell. Konohamaru: I already did. Sasuke looks at his waist and he sees that the bell has gone. It's in Konohamaru's hand. Konohamaru smiles: When i used the Sage Mode, just before the beam clashed with your Susano'o i used the Flying Thunder God Technique to teleport behind you and grab the bell! You forgot that i can use that technique too!?! Sasuke: I knew that you can use it. I saw you using it during the Chuunin exams. But the Susano'o should restrain you from using it inside it. Konohamaru: Normally it does...but besides the Natural Energy around us, i also placed a seal on you when i gave you that punch in the chest. Sasuke: So that's how you did it...clever ....i'm impressed Konohamaru. You've grown into a splendid shinobi.* Konohamaru smiling: Thank you Sasuke-sensei! Sasuke thinking: This kid is amazing...in a single year he managed to be more powerful then Minato or Jiraya...he used multiple elemental clones diversions, he knows nintaijutsu, he knows Sage Mode and the flying thunder god...this new generation..it seems that they will surpass us soon...Udon is already extremly proeficient with his Sharingan and genjutsu use...Moegi is a better healer then Sakura...Kaien is a beast in terms of raw power...Arinasa is one of our best assassins...and Zero...he has abilities that could render almost everyone useless, in a battle against him...they truly are the next generation!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Scene it's switched. It shows four flashes that hits the grounds located in the outkirts of Konoha.
Four people emerge from the flashes. Shiva, Yama, Kalkin and Kali. Shiva: So...this is their description. We will move as an unit. We will kill anyone who stands in our way. Yama: Be careful if you meet Uchiha Sasuke. He is much more cunning then Uzumaki Naruto. We will let Shiva to deal with the Hokage. Kalkin: I want to fight the Uchiha! He sounds promising! Kali: Then i will entertain myself with who? Yama: Two more people can put us serious problems. Uchiha Itachi and Namikaze Minato. Kali: I will take the other Uchiha. Yama: Then i will kill the Namikaze guy. Shiva: So it's settled. When we are done here, you will escort everybody back in the Celest City, Yama. I will remain here to destroy this dimension. Yama: Got it. Shiva: Then...let's go...let's capture Uzumaki Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke! Panel it's switched. It shows Naruto in his office looking towards the four lightnings the hit the earth outside Konoha. Naruto makes two clones. Naruto to the first clone: Go at dad's place. Tell him that there will be no dinner tonight, and that he has to prepare himself for war and come here as soon as possible. He will alert the Nara's, Jiraya, the Third, Tsunade and Kakashi. They must all come here as quickly as they can. 1st clone: Got it! What about Sasuke and Itachi? Naruto: I'm sure that Sasuke already noticed. He will be here soon. Naruto to the second clone: Go and bring me here Konohamaru, Zero, Udon, Moegi, Kaien and Arinasa. Quickly! At the same moment Sasuke enters the room, with Itachi. Naruto: Itachi! Go and alert the troops. Prepare the ANBU and the villagge defences. We are under attack. You must hurry. Itachi: Got it! As Itachi leaves, Sasuke looks at Naruto. Sasuke: It's time...right? Naruto looks on the window. Naruto: Yeah...they're finally here... The end. Next chapter: the Beyonders clashing with the shinobis. Sasuke vs Kalkin. And Naruto's encounter with Shiva the lord of destruction!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
my heart is still beating... every word i think to describe this is understating it.... awesome vishnu... yet sasuke shadow clone? nice lil touch
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Well, it's an useful jutsu. Why Sasuke shouldn't use it? I think that it's time to leave behind the eternal Rasengan concept. In my fanfic, every character will come up with surprising jutsus.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
And here i thought u were gonna continue... ah well might as well wait for it then
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
@k-lai: two more days
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^well like I said, I'll wait for it
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The Gods are overrated!
Scene shows Naruto's office. We can see inside Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, Minato, Shikaku and Shikamaru, The Third, Jiraya, Ibiki and Tsunade. Naruto: We are under assault. The enemy is near the villagge. The third: Who is it? Naruto: Them. Minato: So you were right. They did come afterall. Sasuke: Everyone...don't take them lightly. They posses powers that we don't understand.* Itachi: So what's the plan? Naruto: Ibiki...organize the ANBU. Take strategic positions and prepare the village defences. Tsunade, prepare the medic nins. We will need them. Shikaku and Shikamaru, you will take Inoichi and you will come up with a strategy for us. Sarutobi-sensei, you will assist Jiraya and you will take the villaggers to shelter. You will protect them from that spot. I will engage them directly with Sasuke, Dad, and Itachi. I doubt that you will have any work to do the rest of you, but just in case. Everybody: Got it! Naruto waves his hand: Now, go! They all leave the office except Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi and Minato. Minato: How many? Naruto: Four. One for each of us. Sasuke: The ANBU will be ready to provide backup.* Itachi: Well then..let's do this. Scene it's switched. It shows Shiva, Kali, Kalkin and Yama entering Konoha. Shiva: Interesting. The people left the villagge. They went to take shelter. As it would matter. It's time. Everyone, split up. Go after your targets.* They all dissappear in an instant. The panel shows Naruto in Sage Mode. Naruto: They splited up. One is standing and he has a tremendous energy. The others are spreading around the villagge. Sasuke: I'm out. I guess that i'm already one of their targets...so the enemy will find me. Naruto: Dad, Itachi. You go too. I will confront the one with tremendous power. I have a plan! Itachi, Minato: Rogered! They all exit the Hokage office. Panel it's switched. It shows Sasuke standing on the top of Hashirama's head.* Suddenly a man lands behind him.He has short spiky blonde hair and he is quite tall. He has a giant sword strapped to his back and multiple knives at his belt. Sasuke slowly rises up and looks at him with contempt. Kalkin: Hey boy!* Sasuke: And you are? Kalkin: I'm Kalkin! The Lord of Electromagnetism! Sasuke: There is such a god? Kalkin: Don't mock me brat! Sasuke: I'm Uchiha Sasuke. But i bet that you already knew that. Kalkin smiling: Heh...you got me. Sasuke: And what do you want, Kalkin? Kalkin: Well...bassically you. And the Uzumaki brat.* Sasuke: Just the two of us?* Kalkin: Well, actually Shiva wants to destroy this world too, but that's another matter. Sasuke: I see. So your mission it's to capture me and Naruto and to destroy this dimension. Kalkin: Exactly! Sasuke: Well...there is a problem here. If you want to get me and Naruto we could leave with you. But since you want to destroy our world too, we will have to fight, because we cannot let that happen. Kalkin having a large smile: I don't see the problem! Sasuke smiles too: You actually enjoy this. You just want to fight me. Kalkin: Exactly! Sasuke smilimg: You're like a beast. Well, then...Kalkin...i guess that we should only fight for the excitment of the battle. Kalkin: I already like you! That's what i want. Just to have fun!* Sasuke still smiling: You will lose your sense of humor when i will chop off your head. Kalkin smiles too: Well...maybe i will get yours first! Don't try to fool me brat! I can see it in your eyes! Your lust for fighting...it's bigger then mine! Sasuke: Let's see... Suddenly Sasuke vanishes and the panel shows him above Kalkin delivering a kick in the god's head. Another Sasuke appears in front of Kalkin, hits the god in the neck, throwing him in the air. The first Sasuke hits Kalkin again and throws him in the ground. The second Sasuke tries to make a handsign but suddenly his hands are severed. Kalkin stands in front of him, holding his giant sword. The second Sasuke dissappears. The real Sasuke lands on the ground and draws out his sword. Kalkin smiles and points his hand towards Sasuke. Kalkin: Lightning strike! He releases from his hand a lightning towards Sasuke. Sasuke streams electricity through his sword and he cuts in two the lightning. Kalkin: Impressive! Sasuke: And you haven't seen anything yet! Suddenly Kalkin appears behind Sasuke, and attempts to hit the Uchiha with his sword. Saduke evades the attack, makes a couple of handsigns and he throws a shuriken towards Kalkin. The god easily dodges it, bt the shuriken transforms revealing a Sasuke clone. At the same moment with the clone, the real Uchiha places his hand on the ground. Sasuke and clone: Lightning release! Pillars of sealing! Four pillars emerges from the ground, but in an instant Kalkin shatters them. Sasuke: Interesting... Kalkin: You will need much more then these lame attempts to hit me boy! Sasuke: You're right. It's time to get serious on you. Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Sasuke activates his Spiralling EMS and throws Kalkin a menacing look.* Kalkin: New tricks, huh? Sasuke smiling: Wait for it, you will just love this trick!
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Panel it's switched. It shows Itachi dashing to Konoha's outskirts. He looks at his right and he sees that the Hokage mountain is hit by multiple giant lightnings.
Itachi: So Sasuke already engaged one of them... Suddenly Itachi stops. He sees a woman standing in front of him, several meters away. Kali: Uchiha Itachi...i'm Kali the Godess of Power! My body it's like a rock and my assaults are without mercy! Itachi: Of course you are... Kali smiles: Well, well...you will regret your ignorance, mortal! Itachi as he activates his MS: Maybe, maybe not... Suddenly Kali appears behind Itachi and impales him in the chest with a sword. Itachi smiles and he transforms in crows. Kali: What the...!?! Itachi with a menacing tone : You're already under my Genjutsu...have you ever heard the term Tsukuyomi? Scene it's switched. It shows Minato facing Yama. Yama: My name is Yama Dharma, the God of Death. Minato: I'm Minato Namikaze...the yellow flash. Yama: Well, Minato Namikaze...let's do this!* Minato quickly launches a special kunai towards Yama, but the latter dodges them. Minato smiles and he dissappears with a yellow flash. He appears behind Yama and hits him with a Rasengan. Yama gets thrown several meters behind but he quickly regains his posture. Yama thinking: He teleported where that kunai was...interesting. Suddenly Yama's eyes turns red. Minato dashes towards him and engages the god in taijutsu. Yama handles him well, and in an instant he evades Minato's attack. Minato makes a spin and he throws another kunai towards Yama. Yama stares at it and dodges the kunai. Minato smiles again but suddenly he gets a shocked expression. Yama: Yeah...that's right... Minato thinking: He couldn't possibly understood my power just by one attack. Yama: You're probably thinking that i couldn't get your abilites. But you're wrong. I did. And now...you are good as dead! Yama quickly dashes towards Minato, but suddenly a shadow appears in front of him. Yama stopes shocked and falls to his knees. * Panel it's switched. It shows Sasuke directing several Kirins st Kalkin. The god takes them all, but no injury appears on him. Sasuke thinking: Just as i thought...i cannot kill him using lightnings...so even if i hit him with the dimensional shattering lightning blade...he may survive it, and i cannot afford to take chances...and if i use the Heaven's curse he may stop it as Yama did....maybe...i have to use something else...much more powerful.. Kalkin shouting: You cannot kill me brat!!! Sasuke stops the lightnings and stares at Kalkin. Kalkin as he starts releasing a huge deal of energy: You already got serious...it's my turn! Kalkin releases his energies creating a huge blast. As the dust clears up an yellow aura it's around him looking just like Raikage's armor, but much more intense. Kalkin: I control the power of the nature itself! Sasuke thinking: Fuck! It seems that there is no other way!* Kalkin suddenly points his hands at Sasuke and he releases multiple lightnings towards him. Sasuke manages to dodge all of them but Kalkin raises his hand. Kalkin: Magnetic hit! Sasuke gets hit by a magnetic wave that throws him several meters away. He coughs blood. Kalkin draws his sword and sends from the tip of it multiple lightnings towards Sasuke. Sasuke: Earth release! Earth wall!* He creates an earth wall that shields him from the attack. In an instant Kalkin appears behind Sasuke and tries to hit him with his giant sword. Sasuke quickly draws his sword and blocks the attack. But Kalkin vanishes then appears in front of Sasuke, giving the Uchiha a punch that throws him away. A second later, as Sasuke is still in the air because of the punch, kalkin appears above him and hits Sasuke again throwing the latter into the ground. Sasuke slowly rises up, being severly injured by the magnitude of the attacks. Sasuke vanishes and appears behind Kalkin. Sasuke: Amaterasu! Black flames envelop the god. Sasuke: You're dead! Kalkin: Electromangnetic release! Kalkin releases a wave of magnetism and pushes away the flames. In an instamt he appears behind Sasuke and impales the Uchiha in the chest with the giant sword. Sasuke coughs lots of blood, but he manages to get his hands on the sword and to get it out of his chest. Then he makes a few steps back. Kalkin: I'm surprised that you survived. Anyway, i didn't hit any vital points. I need you alive. Sasuke shouts: Don't you dare to think that you won! Sasuke suddenly makes complicated handsigns. Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic ways! Phantom's power! Sasuke releases a wave of dark chakra and as the dust clears again we can see that he is enveloped in a black chakra. Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic ways! Realms clashing! Suddenly the sky opens revealimg a black hole...but the ground below Kalkin opens to revealing another one. Kalkin shocked: Dammit! I have to move. In an instant Sasuke throws his sword that impales Kalkin in the shoulder, leaving the God paralyzed because of the Natural Energy seal that restrains his movement. Kalkin: What the fuck!?! Sasuke: You're dead..this jutsu shortens my life span...but it's the necessary power in order to eliminate you! Kalkin takes the sword out of his shoulder and throws it way. But it's too late... From the black hole in the skies and the one on the earth two black beams emerge with Kalkin in the middle. As the beams touches one another, they cause a giant explosion destroying the Hokage mountain. As the dust clears there is a giant crater on the mountain. Sasuke it's standing outisde the crater and he is enveloped in his fully Susano'o. He is breathing heavily. In the middle of the crater the panel shows Kalkin. He has injuries on his body and he lost his left arm. His clothes are torn apart and he has a giant scar shaped as a lightning on his chest. But he is alive...and standing. Sasuke thinking: What the...!?! He took such an attack and he is still standing! Impossible! Kalkin shouts: Amazing! You made me lose in arm in order to survive! But you will regret this Sasuke Uchiha! You will regret the day when you tried to kill the Lord of Electromagnetism! Sasuke: Actually i won't regret it...the day when i KILLED the Lord! Suddenly Sasuke launches himself towards the crater. He takes his sword that was impaled in the ground and he engages Kalkin in sword fighting.* Sasuke shouts: So because of the Earth's natural electromagnetism field you can virtually have unlimited powers! Kalkin: Exactly! That's why noof your attacks will work on me! I can protect myself! You cannot even cut me now! You already used your most powerful attack and i survived it! You lost Uchiha Sasuke! At that moment Kalkn leaveshimself opened and Sasuke tries to slash him. But his sword stopes in Kalkin's chest, without leaving any injury. Sasuke quickly dashes back and he throws a smoke bomb. As the smoke clears up Sasuke is nowhere to be seen.
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The panel shows Sasuke hidden behind some rocks.
Sasuke thinking: Dammit! I need time to think about his jutsu! He can stop any attack because he has a field around that protects him. So...how can you beat a sword with a stick.... Sasuke suddenly has a surprised face. Sasuke: You trick him to let go of the sword! Scene it's switched. Sasuke suddenly appears in front of Kalkin.* Kalkin: So...are you ready to lose? Sasuke: Not quite. Kalkin: You cannot even hit me boy. Why to waste the time? Sasuke: You're right. You need me. You have to take me back alive, right? Kalkin: Yeah i do. Sasukeas he slowly draws out his sword: So...i thought...why should i let you to accomplish your mission? Kalkin has a sudden moment of revelation on his face. At the same moment Sasuke smiles and he quickly tries to decapitate himself. Before Sasuke could kill himself, Kalkin appears in front of him and grabbes Sasuke's hand, thus stoping him from commiting suicide.Kalkin looks angry in Sasuke's eyes. Sasuke smiling: You fell for it, idiot! Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Tsukuyomi! Kalkin gets a shocked expression, then he just falls on the ground being trapped in the genjutsu. Sasuke goes towards Kalkin, amd he charges his sword with electricity. Sasuke thinking: Now he lost his electromagnetic shield. I must hurry! Sasuke as he points the sword at Kalkin's meck, being ready to decapitate him: Gods....are overrated! The panel only shows Sasuke making a quick movement with the sword and something falling on the ground. Sasuke thinking: Now...time to go after the next one! Just as he finishes saying that, Sasuke falls on the ground exhausted. Sasuke with a whispered voice: Dammit...i used too much of my chakra... He goes uncouncious near the dead body of the God of electromagnetism. Panel shows Shiva standing in the center of Konoha. Suddenly a man lands in front of him. Shiva looks at him. Shiva: Uzumaki Naruto...the Sixth Hokage...are you here to surrender? Naruto: I see that you know my name. It's nice to introduce yourself. Shiva: Very well. My name is Shiva. I'm the God of destruction. And i'm here today to capture you and Uchiha Sasuke. Naruto: Interesting... Shiva: After i capture you and Kalkin, another god, captures Uchiha Sasuke i will destroy this dimension and we will take you with us. Suddenly Shiva has a very shocked look on his face. Naruto smiles: Well, well...it seems that the one Sasuke fought is now dead. So much of that Kalkin. Sasuke killed him. His energies are gone. Shiva vissibly shaked by the situation: One loss, will not stop us from our mission! Naruto smiles again: Well, it looks that you need to learn to count. It appears that another energy just vanished! Scene it switched.* Panel shows Itachi trapping Kali into Tsukuyomi. Suddenly Kali smiles and thursts her hand into Itachi's shoulder. Itachi: What the!?! Kali: You thought that you can beat me like this? That it's that simple? Itachi: Actually i hoped so! Kali: You were wrong Uchiha Itachi! And now you will pay for your insolence. Itachi: If you want to kill me...i will make sure to take you with me! Itachi quickly makes a few handsigns. Itachi: Fire release! Purifying dragon flame! Itachi releases from his mouth a giant dragon made by fire. The flame dragon hits Kali with full power. As the smoke clears up we can see Kali unscathed.* Kali: I told you that you cannot kill me like that! Itachi makes another handsign: Earth release! Mountain crash! Suddenly a giant rock appears ablve Kali and falls towards her. When the rock it's close enough she just gives it a punch, destroying it. Itachi makes again handsigns:Wind release! Shattering blades! The violent wind hits Kali but nothing happens to her. Itachi: Lightning release! Finger beam! Itachi sends a fast beam of lightning from the tip of his finger. The beam hits her but again, she is unscathed. Itachi makes a few steps back and he activates his MS. Kali looks at him menacing. Itachi quickly makes a couple of handsigns and he sends a clone towards her. She just avoids the clone's attack, but Itachi makes another handsign. Itachi:Super Clone Explosion! The clone explodes throwing Kali several meters away. Itachi making handsigns: Water release! Tsunami Cataclism! He summons a huge wave that hits Kali directly, making a small lake around them. Kali rises up with no injury on her. Kali: You need more then that to be able to kill me! In an instant Kali appears in front of Itachi and impales him in the chest with a short sword. Itachi coughs blood and smiles at her. The next panel shows Kali's face shocked. The next scene shows Kali impaled with a blade made of Amaterasu flames. Itachi is shown standing behind her, and holding the sword. Kali: But...but how!?! Itachi: You left your guard down, the moment you thought you killed me. You were indeed powerful...but you were also to arrogant...that's why...you die today, godess of power! Itachi makes the flames much more intense and they envelop Kali's entire body. Itachi turns around and walks away as she screams in the agony of death. Scene it's switched. It shows Naruto facing Shiva. Shiva has a surprised face and he whispers: Kalkin...Kali...impossible... Naruto: You see...it's not that easy to bring us down. Shiva: You don't get it kid...even if your friends managed to kill Kalkin and Kali...nobody can stop me right now. Even you lack the power to oppose me. I will capture you and the Uchiha and i will shatter this dimension. Naruto smiles: Well...why don't you show me then?* Shiva: Ignorant fool. As you wish. Suddenly Shiva points his hand towards the sky, gathering lots of white energy into his palm. Shiva: Chaos bringer! Shiva's face it's a shocked one as nothing happend. At the same moment Naruto gives him a punch that throws Shiva several meters away. Shiva: Impossible! Why aren't my powers working!?! Suddenly a kid lands behind Naruto. A kid with white hair... Zero: As long as I am here...no energies can be used! Shiva: Who are you? Naruto: His name is Zero. And he restricts any energy usage around him. So you can just rely on taijutsu right now. I knew that you are much more powerful then me. I've sensed that. That's why i had to stop you, lord of Chaos. Because i knew that if i engaged you in fighting i would destroy the villagge. Shiva: Interesting...but how did you knew that it was going to work? Naruto smiles menacing: Yama Dharma.*
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Flashback.
Yama dashes towards Minato and is ready to kill him. Suddenly Naruto lands in front of Yama and activates his Rinnegan. Yama falls down to his knees. Yama thinking: What the...!?! That was my first reaction!?! Yama quickly rises up and makes a few backsteps. Yama as he gathers red energy around him: Uzumaki Naruto...i have to capture you right now!!! Yama appears behind Naruto and tries to hit him. Naruto quickly turns around, catches Yama's hand and at the same moment he holds a blade of wind in the other hand. The blade it's at Yama's neck. Naruto: Yama Dharma....if you value your life, we need to discuss! Flashback 2. Yama is on the ground uncouncious. Naruto talks to Minato. Naruto: Using the Flying Thunder God and bring Zero to me. I have a plan to stop this Shiva! Minato: Got it!* Scene shows Naruto facing Shiva. Naruto: So...you've lost... Shiva thinking: They got me on this one...I don't know what kind of powers does that kid wields, but it affects my own powers. I cannot manifest here it seems. We will need to trap them. Suddenly Shiva throws a diamond on the ground. Naruto stands still looking at it. The diamond projects Vishnu's hologram. Shiva: Vishnu...we have lost. They killed Kali and Kalkin and took Yama prisoner. They also used a jutsu to deny my acces to my own power. I have nothing else to do here. Transfer me back to the Celest City. Vishnu: Very well...but first give me the opportunity to have a chat with the Hokage. Leave him one of our diamonds.* Shiva angered: Why should i do this? Vishnu: Because it's an order! Shiva reluctantly throws a diamond towards Naruto. The Hokage catches it and looks at Shiva very intense. Shiva as he slowly starts vanishing: Next time...that kid won't be around to protect you. Mark my words Hokage...you will die in the most worst way possible. I will make sure of it! Shiva dissappears in a flash of light. Naruto looks at the sky. Naruto: I will wait for that day! Scene it's switched. It shows two persons landing on the destroyed Hokage mountain.* Sasuke is shown lying uncouncious, near Kalkin's dead body. The first person in an ANBU who quickly takes the body and dissappears with it. The second one, it's a girl. She wears a red shirt tied with a blue belt. She has a short red skirt and long boots. She is very pretty and she has pink hair.* The girl goes closer to Sasuke, makes a few handsings and she starts healing him. A few moments later Sasuke wakes up. Sasuke whispering: Sa..Sakura? Sakura: Sasuke...you idiot...you could have died... Sasuke: I killed him? Sakura: Yeah you did...but you're in terrible condition! You were nearly killed! Sasuke: He was a tough one... Sakura: That tough? Sasuke as he falls asleep: Yeah...that tough...thank you...Sakura... Sakura: I'm always here for you...Sasuke... Scene it's switched. It shows Naruto's office. Inside are Naruto, Itachi, Minato and the Third. The Third: The things went smoothly with the kids. They accepted the situation. Even Konohamaru. I was quite surprised. Naruto: Well done...thank you Sarutobi-sensei! Minato: Yama is currently uncouncious but he will wake up soon.* Naruto: Good. Bring him to me when he does. Itachi: They were quite a threat... Naruto: Yeah...that Shiva guy...was stronger then us...we were lucky to trick him. Great job dad. Yama fell for our trap! Minato: He did. As you said...we were lucky. Sasuke's opponent was very strong i heard. Naruto: Indeed...Sasuke collapsed from exhaustion after killing his enemy. He used lots of power to kill that one.* Itachi: We have to consider fighting such powers again. Naruto: Actually...if the gods are on this level we might win. I'm worried about Shiva. He said that he will destroy this dimension and i saw on his face that he was serious about having this kind of power. Anyway...you're free to go. Everyone leaves the office except Minato. Minato: Come over to us tonight, son. We will have that dinner. Kushina can invite Hinata too. Naruto: Well...i... Minato: Stop it. We almost died today. You deserve a break. And that girl wishes to spend some time with you. It's not like i'm the one to talk this kind of stuff withmyou, but... Naruto: I will come dad. I promise. I will go visit Sasuke in the hospital then i will come! Minato: Ok then! Don't upset your mother, you know that she wishes you to spend some time home. Naruto: I know, i know... Minato smiles then leaves the office. At the same moment Naruto looks on the window and dissappears with a red flash.
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Scene it's switched. It shows a red flash, then Naruto appearing on a hill away from Konoha. He takes out of his pocket the diamond that Shiva gave him. He activates his Rinnegan then he looks at the diamond. Naruto channels his chakra into the diamond then he throws it on the ground. From the diamond it appears the hologram of Vishnu.
Vishnu: So...you're Uzumaki Naruto... Naruto: I am. And you are? Vishnu: I'm Vishnu. Naruto: No "Lord" in there?* Vishnu: No. Actually not. I ordered Shiva to give this to you, because i wanted to have a chat with you. I find you quite interesting. Naruto: Who you really are and what do you actually want? Vishnu: Well...for you to understand who we are...you need to make a journey. If you trust me i will show you. Naruto: Should I trust you? You sent four men to kill my people and to destroy my world. Vishnu: I sent four men to capture you and Sasuke. The decision about destroying your world was not mine. Naruto: Well, aren't you the leader? Vishnu: It's a council...it's not only my decision...i will show you. Suddenly the setup around Naruto changes. Vishnu is in front of him. The panel shows a world being born. The land has trees that starts growing and the world it's in development. Vishnu shows him the beggining of the world. Vishnu: First, it was the Creator. And nothing else. Then he made us. We were his forst creation. By he didn't made too many. We were only a couple of people. The Creator made me, Shiva, Brahma, Yama, Livontes, Quintrix and Kubera. Then he made the world. He created the flow of time and he let us to guard it. Brahma was our first leader. I was like a Genin rank in your world. My best friend was Livontes. A man that shared my principles and my opinions. But i was deceived. Livontes turned against us and he discovered how to gain acces to a greater power then ours. He tried to seize control of the Creator's powers.Quintrix and Kubera went with him. Brahma was overwhelmed by the situation. In a desperate moment i've made a pact. I asked the Creator to grant me the power to defeat Livontes. In return i had to became the guardian of time. The Creator gave me power. Yama managed to seal awa Quintrix and Shiva with Brahma managed to kill Kubera. But Livontes was too much for them. I fought Livontes in a battle that almost destroyed the time itself. I've won that day...and i thought that i've paid a small price for receving the necessary power to defeat him. But the Creator made the humans. Then i understood what price i've paid. I had to witness the atrocites of the mankind for centuries and centuries. I had to punish these atrocites. I took the role of an executioner. I never wished for this. In time, the Creator granted us brothers and sisters. And so I created a place where we can reside...the Celest City. A realm outside the flow of time, in it's own dimension. But just like the humans, the gods started to commit atrocites. I've established a Council...a council thaty had to analyze and to decide the best judgement for those who trespass the laws of time. *That's why it's not only my decision. The Council it's ruled by a trinity. A trinity formed by me, Brahma and Shiva. The first gods. We were called in many ways by the human kind. Trimurti, Gods, outer beings, the Beyonders...Our role it's to maintain order in time. To prevent the change of the flow and to punish those who by their actions made changes to the flow of time. But lately, something is wrong. I can sense it. I understand why you chose to travel in time. I saw what Raiden did. But still, something is not right. The other don't see it because they don't have my power, but i was reluctant to destroy your dimension because of this. Naruto: What's wrong? Vishnu: Someone...who is very careful to stay out of my sight...manipulates the events. I feel that something terrible will happen. And that there are traitors in the Celest city.**I don't trust anyone from the Council, except for Yama. That's why i want to keep him outside the Celest City. Because i belive that there is a plot to change things.* Naruto: What kind of plot? Vishnu with a menacing tone: A plot to overthrow me and play with the flow of time. A plot against the Creator.* Naruto: And what do you want me to do? Vishnu: Normally we wouldn't have this chat Uzumaki Naruto. But since you captured Yama i want you to hold him there. It the God of Death gets killed, it will bring a great unbalance,to this world. In the meantime i will search for the cause of the disturbance. Naruto: Yama isn't one of the first gods? Why isn't he with you, Shiva and Brahma in the higher rank? Vishnu: Because of Shiva...it's a long story. But i will ask you something Uzumaki Naruto? Will you help me? If you do, i guarantee you that no harm will ever happen to you and to your world! Naruto: Yeah right. I feel like i can trust you Vishnu. But who will stop Shiva from coming here and destroy this dimension? Vishnu with a menacing tone: I will stop him. I will confront him personally. In my lomg life, i've made many mistakes, Uzumaki Naruto. But this time...i will make the right choice! So...are you with me? Naruto with a determined voice: I am...i trust your word Vishnu! Vishnu: Then i will trust you too.* Naruto: One more thing...i was always wondering... Vishnu anticipating Naruto's question: You need to be one of us to understand the true nature of the Creator.* Naruto as Vishnu's hologram vanishes: So i need to be like you, huh?* Scene it's switched. It shows Sasuke in the hospital. He suddenly opens his eyes. *Sakura is near him.* Sasuke: Sakura...you saved me! Sakura smiling: No problem! It's my duty!* Sasuke: Just your duty? Sakura as she blushes: Well...no...but... Sasuke: Come over here. Sit near me.* Sakura goes near Sasuke and sits on the bed.* Sasuke as he looks in her eyes and their faces are very close: Sakura...thank you!* Panel it's switched. It shows Naruto entering Sasuke's hospital room. He remains at the entrence, smiles and turns back and walks away.
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Scene it's switched. It shows the Celest City council. At a table three man are sitting.*
Shiva: And that's what happend. Brahma: We must send our full forces at them. I will send general Indra over there.* Vishnu: Should we do so? Brahma shouts angry: They've killed ywo Beyonders! And they took Yama prisoner! Of course that we need to kill them! Suddenly Vishnu rises up violently shattering the table. He has a yellow aura that it's crossed by lightnings. Also, in his eyes are three small lightnings shaped in the form of the Sharingan's patter. Three lightnings around a circle. Vishnu shouting : We need to kill them? Who do you think you are!?! Brahma: We are the leading force! That's who we are! Vishnu: If you forgot Brahma, i am the leading force! Not you! You are my advisor! Shiva souts: They've killed Kalkin and Kali! Why should we let them alive!?! Vishnu: So this is about revenge, Shiva? We've placed ourselves above the humans. You want to be a superior force that guides them, not the punishing force that eradicates an entire dimension, just because they didn't obey to a rule!* Brahma: They didn't obey to our most important rule! Vishnu: First of all, they had a reason for doing so! Second of all, nobody told them about the rules! What we are doing is wrong! Shiva: They should accepted their destiny and die in the fight with Raiden! Vishnu: They saved your ass, Shiva! They've stoped Raiden from aquiring the power to kill you! Shiva: You would have... Vishnu: I would have protected you! But now, i'm not so sure! And you think that their destinies are already determined, right? Shiva: Exactly! By the Creator himself! Brahma: You now that he is right! Vishnu with sadness in his voice: I'm sorry to see, that none of you understood the true nature of the Creator... Shiva: What do you mean? Vishnu: If the Creator decides their destiny, have it occured to you, that maybe, it was their destiny to trespass the laws and act as they did? That the Creator decided so?* Shiva with a menacing tone: Well, Vishnu...he appointed us as guardians here! And he hasn't give us a sign for centuries! So don't talk to me about the Creator! He is in his eternal sleep and we have to act according to our wish! That's why we are guardians! Vishnu:You have fallen, Shiva... Shiva: At least i'm capable to take the right choices! Vishnu: From this moment...i erase all your atributions. You will no longer be in the Council and you will obey my orders directly. You are not free to take decisions on your own anymore, regarding their dimension. Both of you just lost the power to act without my consent. If you don't obey to my orders you will be executed! Shiva with an angered voice: How do you dare!?! Vishnu with a menacing voice: I dare! Come on...do something and i will kill you in an instant! Shiva: You will lose this game Vishnu!* Shiva bursts out of the room. Brahma leaves too, but before he looks at Vishnu. Brahma: You just made to biggest mistake of your rule, Lord Vishnu. From this moment you lost my support and Shiva's support. You disturbed the tranquility of our world with your actions. And there will come a day in which you will be found responsable for this. Suddenly Vishnu is in front of Brahma, grabs the god by his neck and slams him into the ground. Vishnu: Who do you think you are to threathen me? Mark my words Brahma...i know about your game. I know what you planned with Shiva and Mara. Don't you thi nk that i know about your plan to take over the power? To be once again the leader? And if you make the slightest mystake...i will erase your existence! Now get out of here rat! Brahma leaves the room leaving Vishnu alone.* Vishnu to himself: The die has been cast... The scene it's switched. It shows Naruto standing in his office. Sasuke enters the room. Naruto: I*have some news... Sasuke: Important, huh? Naruto: Exactly. Use your Sharingan to acces my memories. It's a long story and you need to see it with your own eyes. Sasuke: Sharingan acces! Mind revelation! In a matter of seconds Sasuke sees Naruto's last memories. He learns about the encounter with Vishnu's hologram. Sasuke: You really trust him? Naruto: Yeah...i do... Sasuke: Then, if there is really a plot in the God's world...we need to prepare for the worst. Naruto: Indeed... Sasuke: Well...we can't do amything, until he contacts you. So let's hope for the best... Naruto: Yama is up. Saduke: I will go see him. We need him to tell us everything he knows. Naruto: Exactly. Anyway...congratulations! Sasuke as he leaves the room: For what? Naruto smiling: You and Sakura... Sasuke: You saw it? Naruto: I did...i was about to visit you but i saw you two... Sasuke turns around: What did you saw? Naruto: The part where you thanked her, and when your faces got closer and closer. Then i left. Sasuke: One day...i will *beat you senseless! Naruto laughing: Good luck with that!
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