Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! - Page 2

The Special One · 08-14-2009, 04:34 PM

-Shun's Mission

(Flash back to the meeting in which Hiro and Shun had their conversation.)

"Take this, Uzumaki Sensei wanted me to give you this once I met up with you, as it slipped his mind previously," said Hiro. (Hiro tosses a slightly longer Kunai with a strange mark on it towards Shun. Shun catches it.)

"A Kunai. This is what the Hokage wanted you to give to me," asked Shun. "Yeah. He said it was very important. He said if you were in a bind, and I know you will be in one, to use it against the opponent, it should give you the upperhand," said Hiro.

"I take it this is one of the Hokage's techniques. Heh, I'm his body guard, I shouldn't have to rely on his protection," said Shun. "Yeah, we know how capable you are, you did help my sensei quite a bit during the war old pal," smiled Hiro.

"Then again, I wasn't told his name, just that I'd know who he was when I saw him. His abilities, physical description, nothing. Who ever he is, he must holds some importance that The Hokage was willing to send someone such as me out to go fetch him just of yesterday. He told me tonight would be the best opportunity. Can't help but wonder if it is all connected," said Shun.

(Switch Back to the present.)

"Hmm. I'm almost approaching the River Country locale. I'll go scout the area from these trees," thought Shun. (Shun hides behind the brushes and vegetation and then looks up at the sky.)

"Indeed, I'm right under the meteor. It is just sitting there. Who is behind this and are they using this as a bargaining chip to meet their demands? Oh well, I can't dwell on it now. Summoning Technique. Ninja Art: Owl Seeker," said Shun. (Shun summons four owls from the woods to his location, then using his tracking jutsu, he commands them and gives them human speech.)

"Guys, I'm going to need you to scout the area. Search around the perimeter high up in elevation to avoid detection. Report to me of your findings. Then tell me the most safest entrance route. Spread your wings and fly," said Shun. (The four owls search the area checking for an entrance and scouting the area for unsual findings.)

(Switch Scene to Outskirts of Konoha. Hiro is rushing Nila back to Konoha.)

"Just a little further. I can see the Hokage Statues from here," said Hiro.

(Switch Scene to one of the Owls. It flies over the area and spots several patrols slaughtered along a Coal mine village. Another Owl spots multiple figures sitting down, channelling chakra into the Meteor. The Other owls reaches the same location to spot the strange situation. Soon afterwards they fly back towards Shun's location.)

"What's taking them so long....," mumbled Shun. (After a moment of sleep. The 4 owls return for report. He wakes up immediately.)

"So, how did it go," asked Shun. "The Coal Mining Village Known as Gold Mine Village, has had their patrols viciously attacked," said Owl 1. "We have also seen the perhaps origin of this meteor souce," said Owl 2.

"What the hell? Give me a break down of the situation immediately," said Shun. "There were multiple shinobi further up on a high mountain. They were channelling chakra into the meteor. The others where wearing gray like cloaks, while another held a strange weapon. A kind of Sycthe like insturment," said Owl 4.

(Shun uses a jutsu to enhance the birds' awarness.)

"What the hell? Give me the easiest escape route in, then I want you guys to meet up with the Hokage's informants on the way to Konoha; you now know everything I know because of my jutsu. Inform them of this information. I'll see what I can do at the mean time. This man with the Sycthe. He's the missing nin. I'll proceed with extreme caution," said Shun.

"Fine. We'll intercept communications and tell them to immediately back you up. The easiest route in is through the North Western Cave. No patrols are down there. The path takes you straight into their meeting place through a passage way from the back. Be prepared for traps though," said Owl 4.

(The owls take off.)

"There is only one man who uses a Scythe. It must be Konoha's Reaper. But he use to be The Hokage's student. Why did he defect? Perhaps I'll find that out. Well, if I had The Hatchet with me, I'd feel better about this, but I'll be enough to hold off until back-up arrives. Dosa hmm? Are you behind this as well," Shun asks himself.

Next Time: A shocking reuion.

kluang · 08-17-2009, 09:50 PM

Moments before Hiro arrived at Konoha with Nila,

At Hokage’s Mansion. The Hokage just sits at his chair while his wife is screaming at the guards

"What kind of idiots do you have guarding the entrance?!!!!!" screams Hinata.

“The finest in Konoha madam.” Answer the guards. Hinata glared at the guards. Shikamaru who was watching the scene, whisper at the Hokage.

“I thought Hinata was kind-hearted, soft-spoken, polite and quite submissive.”

“She is. But when about the kids, well she turns into a white eye gorilla.” Says the Hokage jokingly. Hinata turns around and look at the Hokage with a very angry expression.

“What did you call me!!!!!!!!!” scream Hinata. “Oh boy….” Whisper the Hokage.

At the Konoha gates, Hiro and Nila just arrived. There he saw a figure wearing a straw hat and a cape over a standard jounin uniform. The figure raises his head and Hiro can clearly see a pair of Rinnengan looking at him.

“Hope…..” says Hiro.

“Hiro-senpai. I’m sorry on what my little sister did. I do hope you forgive her.”

“Never mind. She’s a headstrong and passionate girl. I’m use to it.” Reply Hiro.

“Unfortunately she also has a brain of mule. Charging without thinking twice.” Says Hope.

“Well, can’t say I disagree…..” Says Hiro.

“I will take her home. My father is waiting for you at his office.” Says Hope as he took Nila from Hiro.

“Its seems it’s more serious then we anticipated.” Whisper Hiro.

“After sending my sister home I will join you.” Says Hope and he leave Hiro alone at the gates.

“You guys may not be related by blood, but you took care of her like a true flesh and blood.” Grin Hiro as he makes his way towards the Mansion.

Hope jumps from building to building, carrying his sister as he makes his way home.
Nila awaken from her sleep and she saw her brother carrying her.

“Idiot, you know how much we worried about you?” ask Hope. “I’m sorry.” Whisper Nila. Hope sighs and he landed in front of their house. “We’re home.” Says Nila. Hope dropped her down and backs away.

“OWW, what was that for?” ask Nila as she rubs her head. Hope keep silent and still backs away form Nila.

“What are you doing?” ask Nila.

“Saving myself.” Reply Hope.

“From who?” ask Nila.

“Her.” Reply Hope. Suddenly Hinata appeared and rushing towards her and hug Nila tightly. “Mother?” ask Nila. “You got a lot to explain, little woman.” yells Hinata and drags Nila into the house. Nila looks at her brother to bail her out again. Hope just shakes his head and says this time he can’t. He then looks at the meteor with his Rinnengan he knew this is no natural cause. “Better go and meet Hiro-senpai.”

At Shun’s location.

Shun creeps closer to the group and hide behind a tree while eavesdropping on the group. He still can’t figure the face of the scythe wielding ninja. He took a binocular and peek at the strange group. Then he saw the face of an old friend. Dosa, who seems to be monitoring the group. Then Shun sense danger behind him and jumps upward, managing to avoid a Lighting Strike. He looks back and saw a beautiful blonde woman with blue eyes and a very sexy outfit. “Spy. From Konoha it seems.” Says the woman. “And you are?” ask Shun as he took out both of his blade and get into attacking stance. “Raitei.” Says the woman. Then Shun remembers from his bingo book. Her looks and jutsu matches a name. Raitei, the Lightning Succubus. An SNA kunoichi that said to master the lightning element as highly as Hiro. Went missing after SNA disbanded. “Her strength and speed surpass me. If I’m going to walk out this fight alive, I’ve got to be smart. One small mistake and I’m toast.” Thinks Shun. Seeing Shun determined to fight her, lightning cracks around her. “Arrogant fool.” Says Raitei.

At the mountains Dosa watches as Raitei and Shun are ready to fight. Then a ninja with long black hair, wearing a white cloak that covers a blue gi. With his demonic eye he watches them and then looks at Dosa.

“What are you doing here Asura?” ask Dosa.

“To see where you’re loyalty lays, Dosa.”

“You still don’t trust me, do you. Tell me why should I trust you?” Ask Dosa.

”If you don’t trust me, then you are wise.” Says Asura.

Hope: He was found in an abandon village by the Hokage weeks after his marriage to Hinata and they both decide to raise him as their own. The couple saw the Rinnengan eyes that the baby have, and the Hokage decide to called him Hope in contrast of the last Rinnengan user who called himself Pain. As a Rinnengan user his mastery of jutsus are faster then others, where other take years, he took months or weeks to master a certain technique. While Pain separate all 6 body individually with different abilities, Hope keep all Rinnengan justus in his body alone. His mastery of jutsus isn’t as many and powerful as Pain’s but he is currently studying the sage’s scroll to learn more of Rinnengan abilities and most people predict he will be the next Hokage. He is a compassionate brother and person but also posses one of the sharpest analytical minds of the new generation. 5 years older then Nila and a jounin, he always looks after her when he’s around and Nila look up to him and always mixes him in her troubles.

Raitei: One of the SNA. Master of the lightning. Feels betrayed after a few SNA left the organization and works for various villages. Vows to hunt and kill them all.

Asura: Nothing is known about him except he is the middleman between the SNA higher ups with their soldiers

The Special One · 08-21-2009, 04:55 PM

-Judgement Part 1

"Shit, I need to lose her and quick, I can't let Dosa betray us and let this operation go down to hell thought," Shun. "Oh hum. It seems you're thinking again. To bad it won't do you any good," said Raitei.

(Raitie extends her arm, this causes an arc to extend and strike at Shun's person while it breaks off from Raitie. Immediately, Shun pulls out one of his circular blades and manages to knock the attack away, which causes a small lightning strike.)

"So, you're not the run of the mill spy, this should be interesting," said Raitie. "Damn," said Shun.

(Immediately three poofs appear in front of Shun.)

"Back up it seems. Fools, they'll die all the same for interfering in our affairs," said Raitie.

(The smoke clears revealing three Anbu Ops.)

"No, a handful of Anbu won't be enough to deal with Raitie," said Shun. (The three Anbu removes their masks one by one.) "Wait a second, it is use guys," said Shun.

-The top Anbu in the entire unit, who were handpicked by the Hokage, and fought with Shun and the others during the 4th Shinobi War. There is a long brown haird guy who resembles Human Realm Pain [No connectionion], a short red haird lass, and a medium spiky blond haired guy who is kind of short in stature.)

"So if it isn't Shun. Don't worry about us, the Hokage sent us in the back you up," said Bruce. (Long Brown haired guy.)

"Go finish your mission, fine Dosa," said Rise. (Short-haired girl.) "We know about Raitie. She was a prime target in a follow up investigation involving SNA. She's strong, but we'll manage," said Braig.

"How's," said Shun before being cut off. "He's fine, he just pulled through," said Rise.

"Anbu ops hmm? No matter. All small fries anyway," Chuckled Raitie. (Lightning from her body channels and connects to the sky, she is now being powered by lightning bolts from the heavens.)

"NOW, we'll handle this," said Bruce. "Don't die guys," said Shun. (He rushes off. The three Anbu begin making handseals.) "We'll buy you time, old friend," said Rise.

"As soon as I kill you three, I'll go straight after that punk," smirked Raitie.

(Switch Scene to a forested area, a young familure looking man is rushing towards the suspended meteor. This youth's face has matured since the last time we've seen him. He no longer wears a jacket, he dresses in the typical Sand Jounin-Chuunin attire. His hair, although a few inches in length, is still smooth in texture. He is taller, around 5 ft 8. He has bulked up slightly, having a more manly physical appearance.)

"I was told by the Kazekage to follow the meteor's presence in two days time. And it is definitely there. I guess the Hokage has sent word to all of the Kages in regards to capturing the SNA," said Teru.

(Switch Scene to another forested area. Seven swordsmen wielding unique blades race to the meteor's location. On their forehead protectors, you can see the Hidden Mist symbol.)

(Switch scene to another forested area. There is a man dressed in all black. He has many blades, one on each thigh. Short swords, one on each arm. Two larger ones holsted on his back, and Kunai sheethes near his anckles. His face is covered with a black scarf like cloth that wraps over his nose, lips, chin, and head. He rushes toward the location of the meteor. All that we know is that he has the Rock village Head Band holsted on his belt.)

(Switch Scene to the site. Shun approaches the backside of Dosa. Several feet away from Dosa is Asura and three other cloaked troops.)

"It has been awhile, Konoha's Reaper," said Shun. (Dosa turns around.)

"Shun... My place is with them now. I can't just ask you to leave with all that you have witnessed, so... I'm asking you to die by my hands," said Dosa. (Asua smiles. Dosa pulls out his weapon and strikes at Shun with rapid speds however, at the same pace, Shun pulls out both of his weapons and counters.)

"I don't care if you are the legendary Dosa. S-Class shinobi are not above treason. What is the meaning of this," asked Shun. "It seems you've parried me well. I wouldn't expect anything less from my Senpai," smiled Dosa.

"Answer me, what is this thing, and what do you plan to hope from unleashing it upon this world," yelled Shun. (Asura automatically reaches the both of them.)

"Give this fool no answer. I'll kill him myself," said Asura. "Stay out of it. This is my fight to end," said Dosa. "Fine...," said Asura. (He backs off and returns to his place yards away.) "ARRRGGH," yelled Dosa. (With his might he effortlessly knocks Shun back onto his own back several feat back. Dosa then swiftly moves to his location.)

(The Scene switches to Raikage's office. A young black female who is possibly in his 20s, and has fucky pony tail styled braids for hair style questions her decision.)

"Ryu is definitely one of our best agent. But that man's vanity and those ridiculous antics annoy me to no end. Ewww, for his sake his evaulation better be a positive one if he actually manges to make an impact on the behalf of the world. Where is he? I told him to meet me at my office a head of time and that it was an emergency. Eww, And the Meteor gets bigger by the second. I'm going to look like such a fool if my aide doesn't show up," moaned Raikage.

(She looks like both Killer Bee and Raikage. Could it be either of their Daughters)

-Next Time: Where the Hell is Ryu at a time like this? The explosive events of the wild mad man begins now. Several hours before the meteor strike leading up to his dymanic appearance, will begin shortly.

naruto_nutty · 08-21-2009, 06:48 PM

Return of a Kekkai Genkai

It is a starry night in Otogakure, and nocturnal creatures are out hunting, their victory cries can be heard from miles away.

A ninja stands silently on a branch just outside the village bordering wall, looking down into Otogakure, the village is dead. His eyes drifts towards the sky and begins calmly tracking a meteor, that is pummelling towards a forested area 20 kilometres from his current location.

“Meteor???” he mutters to himself.

Making a quick mental decision, he heads off in that direction.

“Who does Asao thinks she is, obviously apart from village leader” Seijuro Ryu grumbles contemptuously to himself.

Using his great speed and instant travel technique he quickly covers the distance between Kumogakure and the forested area surrounding Konoha. According to his trajectories the meteor will land somewhere between Takigakure and Otogakure.

Now at the border of Otogakure, he comes to an halt on a branch just outside of Otogakure.

“Damn, my Hiraishin; Shunshin Technique, won’t work here since I’ve never bothered to mark this god forsaken village, I’m paying for it now. I hate that woman, who wakes a guy up in the middle of the night and sends them off to chase some stupid rock of fire falling from the sky!!!.

Looking up ahead over Otogakure bordering wall, the village is dead. He sets off in the meteor last seen direction.

Five kilometer from the crash site, the ninja stops rapidly and jumps higher into the trees, someone is approaching with incredible pace. Without a hint of alarm or hesitation, the ninja draws his katana from a hilt on his back and stands with its point extending downwards.

Ryu travels quickly, apart from being able to make himself nearly undetectable, his speed was legendary in the Shinobi world, he had one point even got compare with famous 4th Hokage, Konoha Yellow Flash, these two qualities were not the only reason he was picked specially by the Raikage for this mission.

The ninja leaps down upon his adversary, intending to make this a quick confrontation. With swift reflexes, the enemy dodges and counters with a kunai.

Both weapon collides, the ninja leaps back from the clash and vanishes. His opponent is bewildered by the sudden confrontation and his carelessness.

“What the hell, can’t a fellow Shinobi get a break once in while” Ryu exclaims loudly to the forest.

Ryu leaps as the branch he is standing on snaps cleanly in half, he grabs onto a slender one just above and swings himself up. Balancing expertly with one leg on the 4 inch branch, he pivot backwards, while barely catching the half broken branch below him with one hand and hooking the slender branch with the back of his knee.

In one fluid motion he releases himself from this precarious position, while by using the falling momentum of the heavy branch he had just grab hold of, to continue his swing, propelling himself into a forward tucked flip, before landing on a branch in the next tree.

Without stopping to pause for breathe, he marks the area and flickers out after his attacker.

“This just isn’t my night, first I’m awoken in the dead of the night, no I’m dragged out of bed in the dead of the night, then I am send off to investigate some ‘meteor’, then attacked by a coward of a shinobi” Ryu declare loudly to no one in particularly, while glancing around for any sign of the adversary

The ninja continues unfazed toward the meteor crash-site. Ryu is close behind and steadily gaining.

Ryu places another Shunshin mark. The enemy has stopped and is near-by. With quick reflexes, he moves his head to the left to avoid an attack from behind.

Grabbing his opponent arm, he turns the palm skyward, and with a bone crunching jerk, he snaps it over his shoulder, and swings his head viciously backwards to break his opponent nose.

The ninja disperses in a lightning flare, which hits Ryu full from behind. He is thrown by the sudden lightning force.

Wincing from the burn on his back, he pushes himself to feet

“That was Raiton Kage Bunshin Jutsu, so I’m dealing with a Lightning user and a fast one at that, that two traits we share in common. I don’t like how this night is turning out, next thing you know I’m finding out we are damn relatives, could even be my father.” He jokes to himself, “Ok, time for me get more serious about this fight, if someone gets to that site before me, Asao gonna put ANBU black ops on my ass”
Rising back to his feet, he draws his short range Katana from a scabbard on his back, he gives it a 360 twirl and quickly parries a high strike from his opponent, who is using the cover of the branches and trees to deliver strikes then retreating.

He parries four consecutive attacks from different directions.

“Can we please put a wrap on this, I got an appointment with a meteor and this game is tiresome.”

No response!!!

“Have it your way,” Ryu strings together a few hand-seals and declares, “Raiton Abakimasui Jutsu.”

Bolts of Lightning flares from his katana blade, as it illuminates the area. Raising it above his head, its act as a torch.

“This should draw you out faster, or atleast reveal your face.”

Ryu quickly uses the sword to search a few likely areas but to no avail.

“You are persistent, plus I think I hear the ANBU coming already, so thats my cue to wrap this up”!!!

“Katon Ninpo: Hibashiri Jutsu!!!”

A spherical fire wall surrounds Ryu starts to burn inwards, towards him. He quickly release the lighting jutsu and sheaths his Katana

“Katon Ninpo: Hibashiri Jutsu,” performs Ryu,

This new ring expands out from Ryu, towards the enemy own jutsu, as to nullify it.

The jutsus clashes, the flames licks each other and slowly burns out.

“He is able to perform Fire Jutsu aswell, another of my damn traits, just who is he.”

The ninja approaches Ryu, his face is covered by darkness, the only clear feature is his silhouette and katana, which is held in one hand by his side.

Seijuro Ryu stands still, his Katana held in both hands, pointing towards his opponent.

“Who are you?” he asks

No answer

“What do you want?” he tries again

“YOU!!!!” the ninja replies.

Ryu braces himself, the ninja rushes forward. Ryu raises his blade to deflect the blow, the blades clashes.

Ryu’s blade shatters!!!

His opponent entire body and weapon is engulf in Lightning, he strikes again.

Ryu dodges!!!

His opponent strikes are increasing in pace and power. Ryu cannot keep up.

“I have got one more ace to play, but his speed is unbelievably, its even greater than my natural speed, damn and I can’t even see his face”

Ryu looks up at his opponent katana, that is just a few inches from his neck.

“SHARINGANNNNNNN!!!!!!!”

The Special One · 08-24-2009, 07:23 PM

-Judgement Part 2 (Shun drops both of his blades as he skids across the ground.)

"Damn. He has improved his speed and strength beyond anything I would have imagined," said Shun. (Dosa readies his weapon at Shun.) "Shit... It is not over yet. I can't just up and go just yet," mumbled Shun.

(He then has a flash back to where he and Hiro where talking about the mission. He remembers the Kunai that Hiro gave him, and remembered that the Hokage wanted him to use it if he were in a dire situation.)

"That's it," said Shun. (He pulls out the Kunai and at the last moment parries Dosa's weapon. As he parries it, a cloud of smoke appears.)

"What is going on here," asked Dosa. (In the smoke a cloaked warrior appears. He locks eyes with Dosa.)

"Uzumaki Sense," said Dosa. "That's it, it was a transformed shadow clone," smiled Shun. (Dosa and The Hokage lock eyes.)

"Shun quickly, get over here," said The Hokage. "What the hell, how come Dosa isn't attacking," said Asura from far away. "Should we get them," said SNA Troop. "I'll monitor them for now, I'll call the signal soon," said Asura. (Asura's eye closely monitors them.)

"Sorry about earlier. If I didn't go hard on ya, the whole mission would be shot," said Dosa. "What the hell is this all about Hokage? Why was I kept in the dark," questioned Shun. "We have more important things to worry about, such as these troops, this man, and the meteor," said The Hokage.

"SNA, I need more detail," asked Shun.

"We as well as our allied nations used them in the war however, due to their experiments, half of ones that survived gone out of control while the other half were of use though a large portion died as a result of the brutal enhancement process. We weren't able to control them. It was only a matter of time before the ones that we could control, would go off on their own and try to protect the failed projects.

After all the experiments, they felt like brothers after all. They grew angry when the when we decided to eradicate the specimens. They were test subjects of unbelievable talent. We couldn't let them linger. This meteor is a result of them being left alone.

After losing trust in them due to previous examples, in order to protect the villages, we had no choice but to capture them and restrain them. They grew hostile and I've been tracking them for years. Maybe, it was our fault from the beginning I don't know anymore. Their goals are uncertain.

But we still need to stop them, That is why I had Dosa under go a similar program and had him infiltrate their groups. Only someone with similar reflexes would suffice. Good thing we didn't lose Dosa, thanks to his strong will," said The Hokage.

"No wonder why I was no match for him. His abilities are hardly what I'd call human," said Shun.

"I'll hold them off," said Dosa. (Dosa rushes over to intercept them.)

"Dosa, you betrayed us. How could you, and you were one of us," mentioned Asura. "Heh, heh. Doesn't matter now. You guys aren't going anywhere anytime soon," said Dosa. "Fool... It is not wise to be changing sides," said Asura. (His eye pierces his comrades and they all attack Dosa at once.)

"This meteor. There is only one way to deal with it now. Are you familure with the Mass Sealing Chakra method," asked The Hokage. "Yeah, but I don't have nearly the chakra to perform such an S-Rank sealing technique," said Shun. "Don't worry about it. Although I'm a shadow clone and my chakra is halved, I am the host of the Kyuubi. I'll lend you the chakra," said The Hokage.

"Why don't you do it then," asked Shun. "Well, umm. I've never been good with sealing techniques," laughed The Hokage. "Damn Hokage. He is as foolish as he looks. Fine I'll do it. What is it, all 12 hand seals in standard order and then finally all 12 in reverse order for a total of 24 handseals, got it covered," said Shun.

(The Hokage pulls out the Forbidden Scroll and lays it out. Shun prepares the handseals, while The Hokage places his hands on his back. Immediately Asura comes rushing in to interupt the party.)

"Damn, we won't be able to hack it," said Shun. (The Hokage soon smiles as a large wall that stretches wide and high stops Asura and shields the Hokage. From afar Teru appears and lands somewhere near the battlefield.)

"So, this is the guy. The SNA leader. We were told to restrain him under all circumstances. Must be an extremely powerful person if it requires some of the strongest shinobi from 5 Great Countries," said Teru. (Behind him, various and many troops from the allied nations amass and surronds Asura as he rebounds from the attack and gazes at how far wide and up the wall is. The scene soon switches to the other side of the Huge Earth Wall.)

"So, this was the aide Hiro was talking about. You really are sharp," said Shun.

(Back to the action.)

"If you allied nations think you can just seal up my gift to the world, you've all been mistaken. You all turned your backs on us. Now, we'll turn the world upside down.... From the abyss of devastating opression. I call forth the warriors the forbidden. Rise Now my army," yelled Asura. (He places his hands on the ground and summons many SNA troops.)

"Human summons," said The warrior from the Earth Village.

(After a long adventure, Ryu drops in from the Sky and effectively kills one of the SNA members with a downard slash of his blade.)

"Any one waitin n' line to die come stand right up, it's free admission time for ass kickin," yelled Ryu.

(Switch Scene to Raitie, she immediately dissapears. The area is reduced to rubble. The Three Anbu are knocked out cold and blood is sprayed everywhere.)

Next Time: Allied Nations vs. SNA A battlefiled of Unreasonable Porportions.

kluang · 08-25-2009, 12:27 AM

“Alright SNA leader, stop.” Says the warrior from earth village.

“Leader? Me? No no no. Foolish ninja. I’m no leader. I’m just the middleman between these boys and the higher ups. Their progress and report will be directed to me and I will report to the higher ups. And the same for the higher ups. Their order will go through me and I will tell these boys what to do.” Explain Asura.

“Then if we restrain him we will get info bout this SNA bullshit, right?” ask Ryu. The Earth warrior nods. “Then we kick his ass!!!!!!!!!” scream Ryu and he charged at Asura and the SNA ninjas. The ninjas retaliate and charge towards Ryu.

3 days before the fight

Mist Village.

The Mizukage is sitting in her room, looking at a ninja carrying a large sword on his back that looks like Zabuza's with little changes and have an eye patch on his left eye.

“Hokage just told me about SNA.” Says the Mizukage.

“So?” ask the ninja. “Don’t give me that, Shisio. You are one of them right. Or at least was, Mist Slasher.” Sasy the Mizukage.

“I’ve cut ties with them. So what now. You want me to chase that rock?” ask Shisio. The Mizukage takes a deep breath and nods her head.

“Figures. No. I want to find who kills Amy.” Says Shisio. The Mizukage expression changes and seems to regret something.

“Amy, I sent her as a spy to get SNA to join the Mist Village. I bet they kill her.” Says the Mizukage. Shisio looks and punches the office wall. He look at the Mizukage with anger in his eyes.

“You want SNA to join us?” ask Shisio.

“Yes.” Says the Mizukage

“Why?”

“What SNA lacks is quantity. But they make up with their quality. If we can get them on our side, the other village can be destroyed easily.” Says the Mizukage.

“You want to start another war?” ask Shisio.

"No. I want to protect the village interest." says Mizukage.

“Then I kill them all and dump their corpses at the nearest forest.” Says Shisio and he turn to leave the office. “And one more thing Shisio. I heard Hiro is also on this mission.” Says the Mizukage. “I will kill Hiro and dump his corpse at the nearest bog.” Says Shisio and he touch his eye patch. “Both of you fought each other many times during the war, and the results are the same. Draw. You remember when you formed the Devil platoon.” Says Mizukage. Shisio stand silently at the office door. “You remember do you? You and your platoon stay behind enemy line, cut off their support lines, dismember the enemy body and make it look like it’s the devil’s work. Then you meet Hiro and both of you fought. You gave Hiro a scar on his chest and he gave you a scar that makes your left eye blind.” Says the Mizukage. Shisio walks and close the door shut. The Mizukage smiles devilishly.

“The master of wind and the master of the sword will clash again.” Says Asura as he emerged behind the Mizukage." Why would you tell him about Hiro? You want reawaken the blood thirsty side of him?" ask Asura.

"Yes. If Konoha lost its Aerial Hatchet, it will be a major blow to them."

The Mizukage smiles and took a file from her drawer. “This is it? The location where the tail beasts are seal?” ask Asura. The Mizukage nods and ask Asura about the meteor. “The meteor makes the sky shines. And a good decoy wouldn’t you say, Mizukage. If what inside here is true, the higher ups will consider your proposal.” Says Asura as he disappeared.

Shisio who was behind the wall out side of the office heard it all.

“Not my problem. But surely gets Hiro's attention." says Shisio.

At the battle location.

Shisio is standing at a hill looking at Ryu and the earth warrior as they cut through the enemy lines.

"I don't see Hiro here. But that guy......" says Shisio as he looks at Asura.

Ryu cuts through the ninjas and getting closer towards Asura and when he gets closer, Ryu give a loud roar and use his blade to cut Asura in two. The blade hits and ripped Asura in two, but it seems likes Asura's body is made out of air. The cut went through him like it was nothing. Asura just smiles.

"Ever heard of the phrase, heart grabbing?" ask Asura. Before Ryu can answer, Asura plunged his arms into Ryu's chest and grab his heart. Ryu give a loud scream and his body starts to shake. Asura just smiles and began to grab Ryu's heart harder until Ryu falls to his knees. The earth warrior watches the scenes runs towards Asura but was blocked by several SNA ninjas. He makes a few handseal and says

"Earth elements: 13 Earth poles." and 13 poles comes out from the ground and hit all the ninjas, and makes the way towards Asura clear. Asura looks at the earth warrior and pull out his arm and Ryu falls unconcious. Suddenly an earth pole emerged next to him, forcing Asura to jump away.

"He avoided?" ask the Earth Warrior. He then makes few handseals and 13 earth poles emerged and attack Asura, but all of them went through him. Asura runs towards the Earth warrior, but suddenly another pole emerged underneath Asura, caught him by suprised, forcing him to avoid it. He looks at The Earth ninja direction but he wasnt there. The Earth ninja appeared behind him and attempt to end Asura with his sword. Asura makes one hand seal:

"Time jutsu: Slow." And the Earth ninja movement become sluggish and slow. Asura turn around and give him a powerful kick to his neck, send him flying a few metres away.

"You figured out my space jutsu. I can only use it when I see an attack coming. So you attempt to trap me with those earth element jutsus. You are wrong if I only know space justus. Space and Time are one. If you master space, you also can master time. Thats how I can make you slow. But thats not all." sasy Asura while the Earth Warrior is standing up. Asura who stands metres away from him dissapeared in an instance and appeared infront on him with in less then a second, delivering hundreds of punches towards the earth ninja and finish it with a kick to the abdomen sending the ninja flying towards the forest area.

"I can fast forward myself too. When I finish with you. I'll take care of that traitor Dosa and his merry bands of leaves."

" One on one I'm dead. I need back up to deal with this monster." thinks the earth warrior as he sees Ryu tyring to full himself together as he sits beside a tree.

"I've got better things to do tonight than die." says Ryu

" This is not good." says Shisio. He unsheath his sword and send his fire elemet chakra to the blade and the blade began to glow red, and fire comes out from its steel.

" I'll kill that demon and throw his corspe at the nearest river." says Shisio

Shisio: Master of the sword with his near godly speed and nearly flawless sword style makes him a very dangerous man. He can't use genjutsu and have a limited knowledge of ninjutsu but makes up with his taijutsu and swordmanship. He can add elements to his sword and he can use both wind element and fire element to add more damage to his sword attack. During the last war he is known as the Mist Slasher.

naruto_nutty · 08-25-2009, 06:17 PM

Decoy!!!

Two Shinobi’s stands silent from afar, watching has the battle unfold. Ryu had decided to send in doppelganger to test the strength of his target.

He had just witness his Shōten Technique destroyed by a very powerful shinobi, who seem to be using Time/Space Jutsu, since his katana passed straight him. His opponent had reach into the double and pull out his heart.

He couldn't help but wince, as the poor Shinobi who he had perform the Forbidden Technique on, collapse to the floor and the battle continue to progress.

“That why you don’t rush into battle son!!!” said the mysterious ninja standing net to him.

(Flashback)

“SHARINGANNNN!!!!” exclaim Ryu as he called forth his embryonic ability.

The ninja hesitated for just a second before continuing with his attack. Ryu use that hesitation to his advantage, with his Sharingan activated he predicted the katana path and adjust his head a millimetre from its path.

The ninja carried on with his onslaught unfazed by his opponent new revelation.
His speed increasing beyond normal, even with his dojutsu, Ryu was unable to keep up.

Katana whizzing through the air, along with open palm strikes and well aimed kicks at Ryu left him unable to do anything but deflect and dodge blows.

Ryu was desperate, so he did the only thing left.

He leaped!!!

“Katon; Enkuo Juurensha Jutsu!!!”

Flaming missiles, erupted from his mouth as he completed the hand-seals for the technique, and flew straight at his opponent.

“Chidori; Senbon”

Bolts of Lightning scattered, targeting the flaming missiles before they could target him and cause any harm..

The jutsus collided.

With the area illuminated from the explosion, Ryu takes a look and instantly recognises the adversary.

“Raijin; Uchiha Sasuke, the last of the Uchiha clan!!!” remarked Ryu.

“Hehhehehe, I’ve hit the jackpot, I’m going to be so rich with the bounty on your head, how much was it…. ummm around £1 billion Ryo… Kirigakure hunter-nins are gonna be after my head for this.” exclaimed Ryu excited by his luck.

“Hmm… well its would seem I’m not the last Uchiha… in fact it looks like you are...son!!!” Sasuke answered mysteriously, a sly grin spreading across his face.

Ryu stops, the jutsus dissipated. He looks at Sasuke with curiousity and studies his face.

They are very similar in appearance, this he knew since he was a child, as the villagers kept reminding him to be careful and not wander off in-case Kirigakure stumble across him and mistake him for the most infamous missing-nin of all time; Uchiha Sasuke.

He had made it his stimulus to be become greater than this mysterious shinobi, but over the years, Sasuke legend just seemed to grow and grow, soon he was the most wanted missing-nin in Kirigakure Bingo book and was then he became known as Raijin; God of Lightning, as ninjas who opposed him were left as a pile of ashes.

“It was my dream to hunt you down and make you pay for all the innocents you’ve killed. I’ve studied you in great detail when I was a Genin and I grew up to master the same elements you use, then I discovered my Kekkai Genkai at 8, during my Chunin stage, this along with my great prowess, if I must say so myself, quickly got me promoted to a Shinobigashira. Now I, at 15 who have earn the respect of Raikage and one of Kumogakure, Head Ninja, will be the one to end your reign of terror.”

“Good speech, but maybe you didn’t hear me before, you’re an Uchiha, just like me, in fact it is likely that I’m your Jippu, that would certainly explain the Kekkai Genkai, since I am the only remaining Uchiha” Sasuke replied while sheathing his katana.

“Ummm… interesting but with the money you’re worth, think of all the girls and mansionsssss, no hard feelings!!!” retorted Ryu while performing the nine hand-seals he needed and gathering chakra into his palm.

“Here’s a move out of your repertoire, CHIDORIIIIII!!!!” he roars and launches an attack.

Sasuke makes no attempt to avoid the move, which is aimed just inches from his heart.

The jutsu connect and passes through him!!!

Ryu stands arm outreach with look a horror and shock on his face

“May I continue with my explanation.” Sasuke calmly asked looking him face to face.

(Back to present)

“So,,, ummm, Dad, rightttt?” Ryu ask sheepishly and receiving no reply.

“I was send here on a mission, remember, the meteor should we try and assistance Konoha or continue?” he asked again.

“If I’m not mistaken that Konoha Aerial Hatchet; Shun of the Kezugma clan fighting against those summons,” probe Sasuke paying no attention to his son question

“Yep, I see you’re well inform and I’ve discovered that Asura is the one who cast summoning and also dispatch the ninja I send in. What do you know about the Special Ninja Association, SNA?”

“I know that they were to an extent doomed from the beginning simply because an organisation similar to their cause try and failed to achieve the same goal of world peace and my former sensei also attempted the same feat but got greedy” Sasuke answered cryptically.

“I assume you’re referring to Akatsuki and Orichimaru” Ryu reply smugly, “Did I mention that I studied you in great detail.”

“How is Asao doing, is she still scheming and creating up problems, for Konoha” asked Sasuke, changing the subject.

“Uhhhhhhhhh, how do you know the Raikage”

“Isn’t it obvious by now, I’m the reason she even got elected to the position. Didn’t you notice the previous one never returned to Kumogakure, but of course you didn’t since you were probably out pursuing girls, still I’m impress with your proficiency in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu although you have a lot to learn and if you’ve earn it, maybe you’ll get eyes like mine.”

Ryu had no witty comeback for this, so he stayed quite and observe the battle from afar, anxiety kicking in sooner than later, he would be joining whether his father liked it or not.

The Special One · 08-28-2009, 01:57 PM

-Judgement Part 3

(At the battle field Teru watches as the emmense battle between shinobies take place. He also notices that the Seven mist swordsmen aren't doing anything.)

"It seems they're just sitting there, best not to worry about it now... I hope that earth shinobi and that Cloud ninja get their acts together. This wall should last until The Hokage and his aide figure out how to seal that Meteor. In the Meantime, Earth Style: Human imprisoment," said Teru. (He places his hands on the ground and earth type prisons individually restrain some of the SNA troops. There are still many of them left however.)

"This is the best I can do for now. This should be able to buy time," mumbled Teru.

"ARRGH. Fools got nothing on me," smiled Dosa. (He continues to effortlessly hack and slash through SNA troops. Flash back to the immediate past. The Scene is at Konoha. A conversation between Hiro and Hope breaks out as Hope escorts Hiro to the edge of the village.)

"I guess it is just one of those things you have to do," said Hope. "Something big is going down. I can't just let it without dirtying up my hands at least. But do me one favor, make sure Nila stays out of it. I think it is one of those days again," said Hiro.

"Yeah. I understand. I'll go inform the Father that you're leaving," said Hope. "I, perhaps it really is time I use these bad boys," said Hiro as he rubs his sheaths. "The Mountain Cutters. I've heared you've never used them, wait, I heard a story about you using them against some legendary mist shinobi," said Hope.

"That was a long time ago...," said Hiro as he vanishes. "Dosa. I wonder what you're up to. I can't sit back and allow you to have all the fun," said Hiro.

(As Hope turns around, a young man, who is fairly tall touches Hope's head with both palms, causing him to pass out.)

"Nila. I hope you are proud about what you've done," said The Young Man curtly. "Heh, you did it," said Nila. (Who is covered in bandages, yet still has her gear on.)

"Uuhh if only you didn't have that dirt on me. Next time be more lenient, we are part of the same squad afterall. And to think I'd get pulled into one of your games. You know the village's top shinobi should be above blackmail," sighed Young man.

"Oh calm down, Zig, we all know you would have done it anyway. You act all big in tough because you think you're the village's top cheese, competiting equally with Hope in terms of popularity at least, but we all know you have a big soft spot for Nila," said Laya.

"That, was. FUCK You," yelled Zig. (Nila cuddles under Zig.) "Oh Ziggy, only you can use a genjutsu strong enough to knock out my big brother," fake blushed Nila.

(Zig is angry yet blushes at the same time.)

"God damn it. The luck of being teamed up with two crazy ass females. Who'd put their own mother to sleep," sighed Zig. "Oh Ziggy, you did that to," smiled Nila. "That, that was. Fuck you," yelled Zig. (Laya and Nila give each other high fives.)

"Now, Nila, you want us to follow Hiro's trail right," said Laya. "Yeah. I can use my Byakugan however, he's too far out of range," said Nila. "Don't worry, a guy like him carries a baggage of chakra. It is still in the air, I'll find him," said Laya.

"Shit, just think about all the trouble we are going to be in when Hiro Sensei catches us," mumbled Zig. "Whinning again aren't we," asked Laya. "If you weren't a girl I'd ring pretty little your neck," said Zig.

"Oh you cocky ass fuck, I'm done with your bastard ass attitude," yelled Laya. "Oh, what are you going to do about it, humm, bitch and moan like usual? You're just jelous that the village overlooked you and chose me as the BISS NASS, you ASS," laughed Zig.

"Enough of your bull shit," said Laya. (Laya and Zig lock eyes.) "OK AFTER HIRO WE GO," yelled Nila. (Both Laya and Zig fall over from the excited Nila, whom just nonchantly over looked the vicious display of conduct between her two teammates.)

"How can she be so optimistic when she returned home just hours ago needing immediate medidcal attention," mumbled Zig. "What was that Ziggy," asked Nila as she gets close in his face. "Ahh nothing. So Laya, use that wonderful nose of yours before the Hokage finds us and has our asses," sighed Zig.

Background Information:

Zig: Part of Team Hiro and is a teammate to Laya and Nila. He is an extremely styled and proficient shinobi for his age. He is Jounin and is currently the talk of the town being the most talented and specialized shinobi in his age group. Though he is not as developed a shinobi as Hope, as Hope is five years older and has had time to hone his skills. He and Hope are bitter rivals as Zig looks up to him and trains hard to compete with him in sparring however, they are particularly close friends. Many of Zig's abilities and talents have yet to be revealed however, he has demonstrated that he can use complex based genjutsu by placing his palms on the heads of his victims, rendering them in a state of sleep. Despite his prowess as a young and upstanding shinobi he is constantly pestered by his fellow female teammates Nila whom he has a huge crush on and is too arrogant to admit it and she knows it, which causes him to do things he wouldn't normally do. He has a huge dislike for Laya as he uses the common words that she's as useful as a house mutt, due to her heritage. He wears the typical Jounin-Chunnin attire. His hair sticks straight up and spikes at the end. His face resembles Ryu from Street Fighter although, he is not as buff as the video game character. He is tall, around 6 ft in height. He is the only student in his class to have made it to Jounin.

Laya: The other member of Team Hiro and Nila's counterpart in crime and in life... She and Nila love to gang up on their prestigous teammate using their women like charms to annoy him to no end as well as to entice him into doing things that he normally wouldn't. She is related the Inuzaka Clan and carries the traits that allows her to be an excellent tracker. With her enhanced hearing and smelling characteristics and Nila's eye sight the two couldn't be a more perfect pair, as they can dig up clues and dirt on anything, especially on Zig. She has pink really short hair (styled into a female like hair cut of course) with markings on her face. She wears the typical Jounin-Chuunin attire for females. She considers Zig as a waste of flesh despite of the fact that he beat her handfully in a type of organized battle watched by spectators to prove a point, which led to Zig getting recognized as the next best thing as he continued on to defeat other combatants. Despite Zig comparing equally to Hope in terms of popularity, Laya seems to have instinctively removed the thought of losing to him from her mind. Her face is a mixture of Sakura's and Ino's. Like Nila's, her rank is Chuunin.

Next Time: The Scene switchs back to the battlefield.

The Special One · 08-28-2009, 03:00 PM

-Judgement Part 4

(In The Hokage's office. The Hokage is in a lone room by himself.)

"I guess my shadow clone has meet up with Shun and Dosa. I can feel my chakra being activated," Thought The Hokage.

(Switch scene onto the otherside of the iron curtain. The Shadow clone now has Kyuubi eyes as he presses his hand ontop of Shun's back.)

"How you holding up there kid," asked Hokage. "I"m doing fine. I had no idea this thing held so much chakra. I just hope the backup is able to hold themselves together long enough," said Shun.

"If we're lucky. But never give up hope," said the Hokage.

(Switch Scene to the Battlefield. Shisio takes notice of the meteor's energy being absorbed.)

"Asura mentioned the importance of that object. Heh, gots nothing to do with me. Aerial Hatchet. I quence my thirst of these baffoons first," said Shisio. (He immediately lands near Asura with his blade blazing.) "Though I could hardly care what happens to the world, your precious meteor is about to be sucked up," said Shisio.

"Take care of them and I promiss you a meeting with Konoha's Aerial Hatchet," said Asura.

(Switch to Ryu and Sasuke.)

"That's your cue. Konoha can root for all I care but if this project goes underway, my mission fails. Remember who you are boy. When it is time I'll come for you again, and explain to you the secrets of the Mangekyou Sharingan. When you are ready that is," said Sasuke. "Wait, about the," said Ryu before he is cut off.

"Fine, I'll just have to do with that shameless dead beat dad has to say anyway," said Ryu. (He rushes at top speed and appears in front of Asura once more as they are closer to the wall placed up by Teru and farther away from the other disputes.) "Hmm. You'll do good to get out of the way. That host of yours was nice, let me reinvent the scenario involving you this time," smiled Asura.

(Ryu activates the Sharingan.)

"WHat's this? Sharingan, impossible," said Asura. "I'd like to see you do that trick again. This time I'd like to see you weasal your way out of this one," smiled Ryu. (Ryu rushes at him with a Chidori Sword.)

(Switch Scene to Shisio. The Earth warrior draws his huge Katana from his back and parries Shisio's blade. They both grunt.)

"Oh ho... I had no idea that there were still shinobi out here with some real talent. Tell me, what is your name before I end your wretched life and drence your corpse in the river," said Shisio.

(Shisio's blade is nullified.)

"My name is Blake. Like that blade of mine. I call it the Blocker. I pour my chakra into it at the same intervals as the chakra in your blade connects with mine and then cancels the attack. A nifty idea I picked up. ARRGH," yelled Blake. (Blake uses one hand to hold Shisio still and then uses his free hand to toss a suprise short sword at his guts. Of course Shisio turns into a pile of smoke.)

"He's fast. He shouldn't be able to avoid my scout's knife with a suprise," said Blake. (From the side Shisio attempts to strike with his blade. However Dosa parries the blade with his weapon.)

"I didn't need your help Konoha spy," said Blake. "Well I thought I'd cut in anyway. This guy is trouble, let me tell ya," said Dosa.

(They are still parried together.)

"This man, his strength, it's unreal. Hey! You from Konoha right? Tell me, do you know a man named Hiro," asked Shisio.

"Heh, hehe. Ha, ha, ha... Hiro. How long since I've heard that name. Well I'll tell ya what. If you can get through me, you can get to Hiro. But let me tell ya, I'm the better deal Shisio," grinned Dosa.

"ARRGH. You know my name, who are you," asked Shisio. "Nothin more than a spectator to your battle with Hiro. He let ya live though. If I were em' I'd carry your head home with me, I'm not like that pathetic sap Hiro, I finish what I start not leave little war wounds over people's faces. Look at all em that popped out of no where. All dead... And you will, be too," yelled Dosa. (Dosa uses his strength and knocks Shisio forward a little, giving Dosa enough room to strike horizontally with his Sycthe.)

"Hmm. Not bad," said Shisio. (Shisio ducks and then channels wind into his blade and prepares to strike Dosa in the stomach while striking in a crouched position. Dosa does a backwards flip and then tosses his weapon at Shisio.)

"What wrecklessness. Tossing his own weapon away," said Shisio. (Shisio parries it however is shocked at the fact that Dosa quickly rushes into the fray unarmed and hook punches him in the face.Dosa Picks up his weapon weapon in mid air with his free hand and prepares to slash right through him.)

"Hmm. Dosa. He's not bad," said Blake from a back.

"Hah... I'm not clean like Hiro. THis ain't gonna end in a draw," said Dosa. (Shisio quickly gather his senses and vanishes into thin air. He then swings his sword, which causes a gust of wind to pumble Dosa's body. It quickly disperses into a shadow clone. The real Dosa attemps to strike at his blindside. But Shisio quickly uses his wind blade to parry and knock Dosa back slightly.)

"His reflexes are fast even against a trick out of Uzumaki Sensei's book.. Even with this SNA configuration in me, he's. Its like I'm fighting him again. Like I'm fighting Hiro. That strength and that amazing resilience. He should be down by now," mumbled Dosa.

"hah, hah, hah. It has been so long since I've recieved such a blow. You're brilliant... It pains me to kill you and dump your waste into the river," said Shisio. (Shisio then channels all five chakra natures into the blade at once, turning it into a cursed looking thing with a sick aura around it.)

"All five chakra natures hmm. A single person can't possibly manipulate all them at once. Not even Rina. Though I can't worry about her at the moment. Looks like I need to be serious too," said Dosa.

(Switch Scene to Ryu and Asura. Ryu rushes straight through Asura.)

"Hmm. Still not enough," said Asura. "I wouldn't be so sure you fool," smiled Ryu. "What is this," said Asura. (He notices a small cut on his face.)

"Just a few more run throughs as I'll have ya diced," said Ryu. "Don't get Cocky," said Asura.

(Asura glances up at the Seven mist swordsmen.)

(Switch Scene to Forested area. Laya, Nila, and Zig are further behind Hiro but notices the scenario.)

"Not so fast, Nila, we may bump into Hiro. We need to keep a very low profile," said Zig. "Yeah I know. He's in my sights. Though, that's the least of our worries," said Nila. "Yeah, I smell blood, and I smell lots of strong chakras up ahead towards that meteor," said Laya.

"But it is strange. I snuck out before and I swear it was much larger. Nah, maybe my imagination," said Nila. "Yeah, best not to worry about trivial matters," said Zig.

(Switch scene to Hiro. He finds the corpse of his former comrades. Near the battlefield.)

"Bruce, Rise, Braig. Who did this to you... Who ever it was must have been extremely powerful to defeat The Hokage's top brass Anbu. Sorry I wasn't there my friends. I need to hurry up. I can't let this go on anymore. SNA Bastards. You'll pay dearly for this. Fuck killing them, I'll slice their souls from existence if need be," said Hiro.

(Switch Scene to the Battle field. Dosa takes off his Jacket. He places tosses his Scythe to the side.)

"Hmm, not using your weapon anymore hmm," smiled Shisio. "Nah. Your monster of a blade would have it instantly. It is time I relied on my more cruelier methods. It has been awhile since I've used Ninjutsu, but give the circumstances I'm ready to bend my rules," said Dosa.

(Immmediately a lightning bolt strikes down. When it clears, it reveals Raitie.)

"Raitie. What the hell are you doing here," asked Dosa. "It seems you've betrayed us I've been watching for a while. Heh, I'll kill ya you know that right," said Raitie.

"He's mine, get lost or I'll kill ya both," said Shisio. (Immediately a huge gust of wind blinds everyone's eyes, the ground splits a little when a huge figure appears. He carries two insanely big short swords on his thighs. He has spiky hair and a evil mad man's face. His face looks like he craves the blood of the devil.)

"Hiro," mumbled Dosa. "HIRO," yelled Shisio. "The only one doing the kill would be me. The ones who has killed my comrades, I'll butcher you all. Who's ready for some skin to be shaved," said Hiro.

"The entire area is has now been infliced with a powerful wind. Its like his presence is causing the entire climate to change," said Blake.

(Teru stands back watching the area.)

"This man. His chakra is unbelievable," said Teru.

(Back to the Battle field.)

(He pulls his huge curved jagged teeth weapons called Mountain Cutters out, which causes waves of wind to blow everyone away except SHisio. Who keeps his footing by placeing his blade in the ground and holding unto it.)

"WHat chakra," said Raitie. (She is blown away.) "DAMN. He couldn't possibly have improved this much," said Dosa. (He slides back as well.)

(Switch Scene To Ryu and Asura.)

"This chakra, I can feel the air around me. It is beginning to cut into me. It must be him," said Asura.

"What the hell is that," said Ryu.

(Switch Scene to forested area. They are nearing the battle field.)

The Special One · 08-28-2009, 05:05 PM

"What is going on, it is like a Hurricane is about to be formed," said Laya. "This wind chakra. Its Hiro. I know because I've whitnessed it during sparring," said Zig. "He lives up to his title afterall. We need to hurry up and get down there," yelled Nila.

(Switch Scene to onto the inside of the wall.)

"Do you feel it to lord Hokage," asked Shun. "Yeah, its Hiro. And apparently, he's pissed. I wonder what might have happened. ANyway focus on your objective," said The Hokage.

(Switch Scene to the battle. A tornado like barrier continously circles around Hiro as the entire area is ingulfed in a wind like storm.)

"Hiro... Finnally the time has arrived. I've got a score to settle," said Shisio. "Did you kill them," said Hiro. "What," asked Shisio. "I SAID DID YOU KILL THEM," yelled Hiro. (He swings his blade, which causes a huge horizontal like wind wave to swiftly reach Shisio's location. Shisio slides under it, to avoid it.)

"No. I have killed no one of yet. But I'd be glad to add you to my list of corpses to toss into the river," said Shisio.

"It was me," said Raitie as she rebounds back and slowly braces herself through the wind.

"You. You're that Lightning Specialist. SNA Garbage. You know better than to approach me with such arrogance," yelled Hiro. (He prepares to swing his weapon however Dosa gets in the way, which causes him to stop his attack.)

"Ahh, the good ole mountain cutters. They say they are named that because one swing of your mightly blade can reduce mountains into pebbles...," said Dosa.

"What is the meaning of this Dosa," asked Hiro. "Don't worry, the Hokage trusts me. Let me handle this babe. Then, you're next on my list. I want to show you what several years of pain and torture as training can bring upon even the most revered current Konoha Shinobi besides The Hokage himself," said Dosa.

"You make her beg for death for me. I'll take out my frustration on Shisio," said Hiro.

"So. He's Hiro. I've heared rumors but I never thought the Aerial Hatchet was this monstrous in person," said Raitie. "Don't worry about that, deal with me," yelled Dosa. (He rushes over to her person. A lightning bolt strikes down and engulfs Raities body, charging her for battle.)

"I've waited so many years for this. Ever since, ever since you've done the unthinkable," said Shisio.

"War is war. There is no need to refuel needless hate. But I'll kill you though. Because you're in cahoots with them," said Hiro. "Justice hmm. SHut your ass up. Don't think I've forgotten what you've done to my comrades. Don't think I forgot what you've done to, to," yelled Shisio.

"Hmm," mumbled Hiro.

Next Time: The Clash of old rivals, the battle of a life time

kluang · 09-01-2009, 09:47 PM

At an unknown location.

7 hooded people are gathering at a table and one of them is looking at the battlefield through a crystal ball.

“How’s the meteor?” ask a giant hooded figure.

“It’s starting to be sucked. At this rate the meteor will vanishes.” Said the person who is looking at the crystal ball.

“And how is Asura?” ask a female hooded figure.

“At this rate both he and Raitei will die. Seems almost everyone is there.” Says the person with the crystal ball.

“Let them die then. They serve their purpose.” Says the giant hooded figure.

“No. Asura and Raitei are vital members. We need them. Like us they are also masters of their field.” Says the female hooded figure.

“Enough. So, summoner, have we confirmed the tail beasts prisons?” ask the person with the crystal ball.

“Yes. It seems the Mizukage was lying, Tetsuo.” Says the summoner. He took off his robe and unveils a young man that’s look a lot like Sephiroth. “Only half of the locations are confirmed.” Says the summoner.

“How many locations have been confirmed, Oita?” ask Tetsuo

“Five.”

“And about Asura and Raitei?” ask the female hooded figure.

“I’ll go.” Says a fat hooded figure. He took of his robe and unveils a fat man dress in samurai attire, much like Choji.

“Ino Shika Cho. You will help Asura and Raitei?” ask the female figure. Ino Shika Cho nods.

“Then it’s settles. Michi and Oita will go and collect the confirmed tail beasts.” Says Tetsuo. A female member took of her robe and unveils a short hair female with snake tattoo cover her left cheek and she have snake eyes much like Orochimaru. She hissed at Oita and a white snake comes out from her collar and reveals its fangs at Oita.

“Ino Shika Cho will aid Asura and Raitei. Tank and Sakuya…..” says Tetsuo with his finger points at the giant hooded figure and the female member.

“Both of you will take care of the Mizukage.”

Tank stood and took of his robe. His face resembles Stone Cold Steve Austin. Sakuya also took her robe off. She looks and dresses in ninja attire, except its white.

“Then I will tell her our answer to her proposal.” Says Tank. Sakuya nods.

“No. Don’t kill her yet. We need to secure the tail beasts first. Then you can kill her.” Says Tetsuo. Tank grunts.

‘Ino Shika Cho. Be careful, the master of wind and the master of the sword are also present in that area.” Says Tetsuo. Ino Shoka Cho nods.

“Master of the sword and wind my ass. The master of the fist will pummel their faces.” Says Tank.

“I will teleport you all to your locations.” Says Tetsuo as he makes a few handseals and summon 3 doors behind him.

Back at the battlefield.

Hiro and Shisio circling each other looking for a gap to strike.

‘I should have known you will be with the SNA. Your loyalty is always with the flames war.” Says Hiro.

“I’m not with them.” Says Shisio as both of them looking for a gap to attack.

“Then why you attack my friends?” ask Hiro.

“I was bored waiting for you.” Answer Shisio. Hiro grunts and runs quickly towards Shisio and they parried each other technique. Hiro increases his wind element to strengthen his attack while Shisio turn his blade into a burning hot metal to counter the wind from Hiro. Realizing this will be a stalemate, both ninja jumps away, but this time Shisio attacks Hiro. Hiro makes a few hand seals and says:

Wind Element: Wind Shredder!!!!

Then few chakra blades appear around Hiro and flew towards Shisio. Shisio activate his fire chakra and destroys each blade. After destroy all the blades, Shisio realize Hiro was gone and he look upwards and see Hiro rotates himself like a drill and charges towards Shisio. Shiso increases the fire element in his blade and parries the attack, but the force of Hiro’s attack makes the ground beneath Shisio’s feet began to crack, but Shisio still unfazed, parries Hiro’s attack, but he’s slowy being pushed deeper into the ground by Hiro’s attack. Realizing parrying this jutsu with fire element only won’t do any good, he activate his wind element to increase his fire element power and manage to push Hiro away. Hiro landed a few feet away from Shisio and they look at each other, recognizing each other ability.

“You know, after the war I’ve been in journey around the lands. Searching for techniques and jutsus, and maybe some answer.” Says Shisio.

“Yeah so?” ask Hiro.

“I’ve been to the Fire Temple. Amida's 1000-Arm Death Embrace is the temple most powerful technique.” Says Shisio. Hiro looks at him suspiciously.

“You mean….” Says Hiro.

“I’ve learn that jutsu. Don’t worry I don’t kill the monks. I don’t want unwanted attention. I just find the scroll, and use my photographic memory remember the jutsu. And I make a few alterations to it.” Says Shisio. He closes his eyes and a giant demonic figure with 1000 arms each equipped with a sword standing behind him.

“I just make it, more suited to me.” Says Shisio.

“God of Sword’s 1000 Sword death Embrace.”

“Shit!!!!” scream Hiro and he makes a barrier from the wind moments before the spiritual swords attack him. The attack increases rapidly and Hiro’s barrier finally broke. Hiro looks at Shisio’s direction but he was gone,then he felt a tremor beneath him, and Hiro jumps upward while Shisio comes out from the ground. And they fought in mid air.

“I’ve also learn, we must not be confined by one village style. We must explore more and I create this, just for you.” Says Shisio and he turn his sword side ways:

“Konoha Senpuu-Sword Version.”

Hiro parries the sword with his blade, but Shisio uses his legs to kick Hiro’s stomach and he falls down to the ground.

“Konoha Senpuu has two attacks, incase the opponent manage to avoid the first kick, the user can use his second leg to attack. The same goes with my own version of it.” Says Shisio.

Hiro slowly stands up, and smiles.

“You’ve improved, Shisio.” Says Hiro.

“So have you. Your wind is mightier then before. But I’m better. Let me make a deal. If you manage to defeat me or even it’s a draw again, I’ll admit defeat. And even told you what SNA really after. If I win, I’ll throw your corpse to the nearest river.” Says Shisio. Hiro nods. Shiso smiles and channel all 5 chakras into his sword.

“And before we fight, let me tell I’ve also been to the Land of Iron.” Says Shisio.

“You’ve combine ninja sword style with samurai’s?” ask Hiro. Shisio give a big grin.

“You gonna taste this technique.”

“Crap.” Says Hiro. He increases the wind within his blade until the grounds around him are cut to little pieces and he charges towards Shisio and scream

“Raging Wind!!!!!!!!”

Shisio prepares by dropping into a partial crouch, both knees bent, left arm drawn back and right extended forward; he grasps the hilt of his sword with his left hand and rests the tips of the fingers of his right hand on the blade near its tip and thrust himself and his sword forward.

“Falcon Thrust!!!!!!!!!!!”

Ino Shika Cho: A member of the higher ups of SNA. Has the combining ability of the Akamichi clan, Nara clan and the Yamanaka clan. He can control the shadows, manipulating minds and body enlargement jutsus.

Tank: Member of SNA higher up. Master of taijutsu. A ninja who lets his temper took the best of him and only Sakuya can calm him down. .For him, the war is his opportunity to bash some heads.

Sakuya: Member of SNA higher ups. Master of medical technique. Shared a powerful bond with Tank since she was enroll into SNA. They also do missions together and she is Tank voice of reason.

Oita: Member of SNA higher up. Master of Summoning. For him SNA, is his gateway to be a daimyo and rule a nation.

Michi: Member of SNA higher up. The so called “Perfect Clone of Orochimaru.” She was trained is SNA to be like Orochimaru. Her justu and strength are equal to Oro and her goal is to destroy Konoha just like Orochimaru.

Tetsuo: Member of SNA higher up and is the confident and charismatic young leader of SNA. He leads SNA and setting himself up as a false messiah. He creates the meteor and wants to combine it with the 9 tail beasts as a salvation as he sees mankind can be saves by destroying the previous order and built a fresh new order with he and SNA leads the world unto true harmony. His ability is unknown.

The Special One · 09-02-2009, 01:14 AM

-Interruption 1

(In a forested area just outside the battlefield, Nila’s team scouts the area.)

“Oh my God! What a battle,” said Nila. “What’s going on? Tell me,” said Zig. “Everyone’s fighting. I see many dead men and several shinobi I’ve never seen before. Oh, and Hiro sensei is locked in battle against another dangerous opponent using amazing chakras. I also see… Teru? He looks a little different,” said Nila.

“Teru? That’s the sand’s prodigy kid you’ve beaten two years ago. Why is he in a place like that,” asked Zig. “I have no idea, I guess he’s important people,” sighed Nila.

“Oh yeah, despite beating him, he is probably tasked with more important missions than you,” Zig said all cold like. (Nila looks down. Laya then slaps Zig in the face.) “What the hell was that for? What did I do,” yelled Zig.

“You think about that next time you open your dumb ass mouth,” yelled Laya. (Nila notices something.)

“What is it Nila,” asked Laya. “What exactly is going on now,” asked Zig.
“I was right. Behind that huge wall of earth that even stretches to this side, something is sucking the energy out of that meteor,” said Nila. “What do you think it could mean,” asked Laya. “Hmm, perhaps someone is sealing it away,” said Zig. “Maybe. OH,” yelled Nila.

(She shocks her comrades.) “What the hell was that for,” asked Zig. “Girl I know you get excited easily, but don’t give me a heart attack,” said Laya.

“Shun. Mr. Shun I forgot… He helped me out a lot back when I secretly went out. I wonder if he’s ok,” mumbled Nila. “Ah, he’s one of the Hokage’s body guards, had no idea he was caught up in this too. But I know a little about what goes on in the shinobi world and since I’ve been on more missions than anyone in our class. Looking at the situation, I say we get out of here. This is way in over our heads,” said Zig.

“Though I hate to admit it. He might actually be right for a change. Nila are you listening to us,” asked Laya.

(Close up on Nila’s eyes shows a young worried woman. The Scene switches to the battlefield. Hiro sheathes his blades then uses his hands to manipulate two huge duel tornadoes that collides with a Large Falcon like figure made up of the various chakra nature manipulations. Chakra arks from Shisio’s blade and continuously flows a path of chakra into mid-air to give the form of a devastating bird that collides with the huge spiraling winds. The huge enormous waves of chakra creates a huge explosive like discharge that blows both of them away. They get up and face each other once more.)

“It’s time we finish this, Hiro. My last attack, a technique I’ve worked on for years. Now, you’ll be the first to witness its purest form,” said Shisio.

The Special One · 09-02-2009, 01:19 AM

“So… You have an ace as well. I was told by my teacher, The Hokage, never to use this technique. It’s not something humans should have to witness in a life time,” said Hiro. (Hiro pulls out his weapons. )

“Well then. Let's go for the ultimate wager,” said Shisio. (He begins to awkwardly go into a stance.)

“Do you know why I carry these weapons? I’m not a swordsman yet I carry these huge weapons you see in front of you. Since my chakra has grown so strong, when I use higher level wind ninjutsu, my hands begin to feel the adverse affects. These blades are nothing more than mounts, or protective gloves in a sense. They aren’t my swords, they're my limbs. The technique I’m about to use, injured my arms so badly that I was forced to fight with weapons when I use higher level ninjutsu. Ironic that even I am not immune from such a wind styled attack, given my title and my assumed absolute control,” said Hiro.

“My technique is not as explosive as yours might be however, as a master swordsmen I've used my blade to kill my victims in as many ways as possible. During my years of experience in the art, I discovered a much more subtle yet effective approach for eliminating my most destructive opponents. This means I know every fiber of a human body’s vulnerable points. From the skin, muscles, joints, nerves, and organs, this technique strikes the most vital point in each category, which collapses the opponent with 100% accuracy. No one could possibly survive, I’ve tested it out a flesh clone” smiled Shisio.

“No need for me to explain mine then. I just hope someone manages to scrape up the scraps when I’m done here,” smiled Hiro.

(Immediately before Hiro and Shisio unleashes their strongest techniques they find themselves unable to move. Someone drops in from behind Shisio.)

“What is happeneing here? I can’t move,” said Shisio. “An interference. Damn, this technique.,, It reminds of of the shadow possession,” said Hiro.

(Hiro spots someone behind Shisio.)

“I’ve used one of my animal scouts to check the area. I can’t have you two using techniques, in which you don’t know the outcome as it may directly affect the project that is going on. Therefore I’ve restrained you. Don’t worry. Due to the situation at hand, I won’t kill you,” said Ino shika Cho.

“Who are you? Are you with the SNA,” asked Hiro. “That’s none of your concern,” said Ino shika Cho. “Idiot. I’ve made a deal with Asura. I’m not in your employ so get the fuck out of my way,” said Shisio. “Oh no, that mustn’t do,” said Ino Shika cho.

(Switch Scene to a forested area.)

“NO!! Hiro is in danger, he can’t move. And there's another opponet,” said Nila. WHAT,” yelled Laya.

(Zig grabs Nila by the arm.)

“Damn it all. Remember what I said before? Let the big wigs handle this,” said Zig. “Fuck that, you can take that high and mighty attitude of yours and shove it. He’s our Sensei,” yelled Nila. (She pulls away and rushes to the battle field. Laya and Zig look at each other concerned like.)

“Shit, it's ideas like this that gets people killed,” yelled Zig. (He rushes off as well.) “Wait guys,” yelled Laya.

(Switch Scene to the battlefield.)

“You see, we have to preserve something here, so we can’t let you guys go haywire as we know how devastating the two of you can be,” said Ino Shika Cho. “Shit,” said Shisio. “Hmm, what’s this,” said Ino Shika Cho.

(Immediately one young shinobi appear in front of Hiro.)

“Nila! Look at you, you're injured. Damn it why are you here? And how come Hope didn’t stop you,” said Hiro. (Zig and Laya drop in as well.) “No. I stopped Hope. Nila doesn’t deserve all this,” said Zig. “Wow, thanks Zig,” said Nila. “Yeah, we all could have stopped her if we wanted, we just came along anyway,” said Laya. "Guys, thank you," said Nila.

“Damn it, you guys are idiots, but you’re hard headed, just like your stubborn ass teacher,” winked Hiro.

Next Time: Nila, Zig, and Laya are on the Scene, what happens next?

-Interruption 2

"I see things are already taken care of here, so I'll take my leave," said Ino Shika Cho (He vanishes, this causes the shadow possession to break.)

"Now, where were we," asked Shisio. "I'm sorry mister, but now that we're here, you won't be landing another finger on our Sensei," said Nila as she waves her finger. "Sorry Master, but we can't sit back and let you fight, not now. We're here now as Nila said, so you with the sword back down. There's no way you can takes us all on. We're Hiro's students after all, don't think it'll be easy," said Zig.

"Shisio. Our duel will have to wait. As much as I'd hate to do this, I can't fight you with them here. They'd get in the way. And besides, a four on one wouldn't be a fair fight now would it," said Hiro.

"Fine do as you like. How cute, saved by your proteges. You just won't get any leads on the SNA because you failed to defeat me. Next time, be prepared for an all out struggle," said Shisio. "We're very sorry you couldn't get the intel you needed," said Nila.

(Shisio makes a handseal and then vanishes. The scene then switches to Asura. Ryu has now gained the upper-hand and has grabbed Asura by the collar.)

It is over now. I'm taking your weird eye lookin ass back to HQ for debriefing," said Ryu. (Asura looks into Ryu's eyes and then smiles. Asura then locks eyes with the mist swordsmen. All of a sudden Ryu is surrounded by the seven mist swordsmen.)

"What the hell? The mist is in cahoots with the SNA," said Ryu. "Put that man down, or we will be forced to restrain you by any means required," said a man in a cloak wielding Zabuza's sword. (Ryu drops Asura, as the freed man rushes toward the Meteor. The seven mist swordsmen then follow Asura. Switch Scene to Ino Shika Cho.)

"So, I didn't have to rescue him after all. With the seven mist swordsmen, Asura should be able to reclaim the project. We'll have to finish this up another day. We had no idea The Hatchet and The lengedary swordsman would show up," said Ino Shika Cho. (He drops by and lands next to Dosa. The traitor is holding Raitie by her neck with one hand.)

"Dosa. You traitor. I should have you killed right now. But I haven't the time to waste against trash like you. Because of you, the Boss might have to have this project go through more experimental phases. If only we checked you more thoroughly. We should have known it was too good to be true that one of Konoha's most powerful and famous shinobies would defect and join us. Now you were leaking valuable information to Konoha in order to establish the surprise raid from the surronding nations," said Ino Shika Cho.

"Heh, heh. My bad. We can settle this after I squeeze the life out of her. Though I think she is kinda cute, I can't just forgive her for killing my real comrades. We fought that grueling war with them. We fuckin bleed, lived, and died together. This hag will die by my hands. I've got no love for someone such as this person," said Dosa. "Sorry, but we can't have you low lives in our affairs. We need that woman alive," said Ino Shika Cho.

(With fast reflexes Ino Shika Cho quickly grabs Raitie tosses her body on his shoulders and vanishes from the area via a transportation method.)

The Special One · 09-02-2009, 01:22 AM

"Looks like the lightning vixen escapes. I'll make a promise. If we meet again, that rose will wither away as I drain the last bit of life from her deprived body," said Dosa.

(Scene switches to The Hokage and Shun. The meteor is getting smaller.)

"Just a little bit more," said Shun. "Yes, then we can," said The Hokage before being destroyed by an attack from behind.

"No, no, no!! Now I don't have the chakra to seal this thing up," said Shun "Oh my. So it was you causing all this mess. I should have killed you long ago. To think the Hokage used his shadow clone for the technique. Clever," said Asura.

(The scene switches to the Hokage office.)

"It can't be. We've came so far," said The Hokage.

(Back to the site.)

"No, why are the mist swordsmen on his side? I don't have the chakra to fight them all. And even if I did, I'm way outnumbered," said Shun.

(Switch Scene to the battlefield. The remaining good forces rejoin.)

"So, Teru, how has it been these past two years," asked Nila. "Fine. Being promoted to Jounin was the best thing that could have happened to me after losing to you and shaming the village. I've spent the last two years being in tune with the earth. With private lessons from Kazekage, I rose to Jounin and I was sent in here by the higher ups because they had faith in my ability. Seeing you here, I'm sure the same is true for you, right," smiled Teru. "well, umm," mumbled Nila.

(Several minutes worth of time passes as the ignorant are briefed on the information that had gone down.)

"So, that was what went down here," said Zig. "Apparently, The Hokage saw this coming," said Blake. "I had to put up that wall to stop them from interfering with the process of sealing up that mass of chakra," said Teru. "It seems the Hokage called it right, the meteor has indeed decreased in magnitude," said Blake. Though if it wasn't for Dosa, this whole mission would have failed," said Hiro. "Ahh, whatever. Don't think I've forgotten that rematch," said Dosa. "You put up that Wall Teru? Wow, you must have become amazing since I've last fought you," said Nila.

"That wall isn't all that great you know," mumbled Zig. "Heh, jealous I see," said Laya. "Fuck you," said Zig. (Hiro smiles. Ryu crashes in.) "Hey, while you guys dilly dally, I took the inititive and checked out where Asura was headed. And he is headed towards the meteor with the mist swordsmen, now its not even in the sky anymore. I don't know what's going on, but I can't fight all those swordsmen by myself," yelled Ryu.

(Everyone is shocked. The Scene switches to the site. Shun is being straggled by one of the swordsmen while Asura seals up the meteor using one of his own scrolls.)

"Now I can take this back to the headquarters. You guys finish him off," said Asura as he vanishes with the sealed meteor's chakra in his grasps.

(Shun is tossed to the ground the straggler switches places with a man using a familure blade. The one swordsman wielding Kisame's Shark Skin, prepares to strike the defenseless Shun, but is stopped by a blade from Blake. ) "Kill the intruder," said one of the mist swordsmen. "I wouldn't do that. You guys don't want to mess with us," said Zig. "Shun, are you all right," said Hiro. (Dosa rushes in and scoops up Shun with fast reflexes and returns to the gathering of the good guys.)

"Mr. Shun," yelled Nila. "Nila, Hiro, everyone, thanks, but he got away with the meteor," said Shun. "We'll worry about that later," said Hiro. (Blake swiftly returns to his position with the others. The swordsman surronds all of them and then launches at them with their blades. Teru places his hands on the ground.)

"Earth style: Protective Dome," yelled Teru. (An earth like dome covers them, temporarily protecting them for the swordsmen's attacks. Switch Scene to Mizukage's office. Two SNA higher ups meets with Mizukage.)

"You lying scum bag. Do you know you back stabbed us," said Tank. "I've gave you 5 correct locations," said Mizukage. "I should shake your brain loose. Do you know what happened when some of our aide were sent to scout the other 3 areas of interest? The Land of Iron has remained untouched by shinobi for half a centuary. Due to its power, even wet works like us don't touch it, but we believed that we could get some important data before launching a suprise raid. You told us that the reason the last 3 Bijuu where so hard to find, was because of where they were stationed. Yet we found nothing, and we lost valuable aide to their government.

Now their organization has its eyes on us. Not just that, we also searched the Renewed Whirlpool country, and since the war, Konoha, Suna, and Kumo has used their ties and wealth from the last war to establish a powerful government there. Even our top agents were snuffed out and again, no location of the tailed beast was established from the other three locations you specified. I don't even want to bring up the Demon country. You were trying to fuck us over. You know since the uprising of the SNA and the under the table dealings with many other small countries and villages that the other 4 great shinobi nations have kept their eyes on us. We can't afford to have our organization out in the cold like that, not yet! Where's the three other Bijuu you are hiding, and why did you set us up? Give me a fucking answer before I get to pounding the body of this pathetic excuse for a person standing in front of me," said Tank.

(Mizukage smiles.)

"I was testing you. To see if you guys were the right guys to ask for a collaboration," said Mizukage. "Test my ass, I'd like to give you a pop quiz. I don't think you'd like the pop part," said Tank. "Settle down Tank, we need to remember what we came for," said Sakuya.

"I won't tell you anything until I'm sure the Bijuu fusing mechanism is going along nicely. And how am I not sure you guys won't double cross me and take the Bijuu for yourselves? My village's future vias for the project. And if you guys aren't willing to commit, I'll take my business elsewhere. Now, I need data and results before I commit to your objectives and offer you aide. There is no agreement if the project hasn't even succeeded yet," said Mizukage. (Tank starts cracking his knuckles.) "You must think I'm not too bright! Bitch I'll break your face if I don't get answers," said Tank.

"Is that so," smirked the Mizukage. (Tank's eyes go blood shot.) "This bitch thinks I'm dickin around. Time's up! You bout to get fucked up," yelled Tank.

"Deal's off then," said Mizukage. (Immediately 4 Mizukage Aides guards the Mizukage.)

"I'll gladly murder all of you," yelled Tank. (He balls up his fists and goes into a striking stance. Sakuya places her arm in front of the Tank.)

"You're in the way," said Tank.

"Hey now! I said Calm down. Stop acting like an idiot, remember what the boss said? This is no way to strike deals. I'll speak for you now on since you have no manners and will ruin everything. Please forgive him for his negligence. Our underling, Asura, who is a field examiner has already begun the project. If everything has gone successfully, he should have the data required for establishing such a method," said Sakuya.

"Asura hmm? He didn't quite mention the project in detail," said Mizukage.

"We need the tailed beasts in order to ignite the fusion between all of them in the high density mass of chakra. Asura should be strengthening it right now. I understand you smuggled detailed information regarding the tailed beasts during the war. We will forget all your misdeeds if you come clean with their whearabouts. And I also understand that this village is home to one of them," said Sakuya.

(Switch scene to Asura. He is rushing back to headquarters.)

"Damn, and after the boss trusted me with his work. I needed more time. If I had just one more hour, the growth process would have been suffice. But with the damage the Hokage done to it, I'll need a lot of time. It took years to compose the data, now it is all for nothing. Damn it, If I begin work in secret and then launch the meteor project again to finish the growth preparation, perhaps I can avoid the boss's warth," said Asura.

(Switch Scene to the outskirts of the Waterfall Village. Oita and Michi scout out man patrols who are currently on guard duty.)

"We where told that this was one of the correction locations," said Oita. "Yeah... From what I understand the Bijuu, Shichibi has been bounded into an infact 18 years ago, 11 years before the 4th shinobi war," said Michi. "I believe around half of the tailed beasts were bounded to hosts after the demise of Akatuski decades ago. I've heared there were a couple who retainted their Bijuu and lived through Akatuski's rule," said Oita.

"Yeah, Uzumaki Naruto, who was made Hokage a few years after Akatuski disbanded during the age of disarmament and Killer Bee, who was the brother of a former Raikage. We weren't given details on his whereabouts though," said Oita. "That schemer Mizukage probably knows," said Michi.

"Well we can't worry about that right now. We need to capture the Shichibi. Apparently, she is an extremely powerful host," said Oita. (Michi licks her face.) "I can't wait to test my abilities out on her," smiled Michi. "We'll this isn't a field trip," sighed Oita.

(Switch scene to a battle from a training hall inside a waterfall cave. A beautiful young woman with long white hair, waterfall headprotector on, dawning a wonderfully knitted kimono stands firm, while many shinobi lay unconscious.)

"Training's over for today I guess. Gosh, I hope I didn't hurt them too badly," gently smiled Aya.

(Switch Scene to SNA headquarters. Ino Shik Cho arrives and nonchantly tosses Raitie's broken body down on the floor.)

"Good. After she recovers, I have a proposition to make," said Tetsuo

The Special One · 09-02-2009, 02:18 AM

Next Time: The SNA's higher ups makes a move. Now with Asura failing to produce results, how will this affect the decision of the Mizukage to strike a deal with the SNA? Michi and Oita closes in on the Host from the waterfall village.

Background information:

Aya: She is a spectaculor Kunoichi. She is the embodiment of pureness in every sense of the word. Her fair skin, long white hair, and innocent face tricks many into underestimating her, which causes her to drastically get the upperhand on her opponets. Many of her skills are unknown however, Michi and Oita are sure not to underestimate her, and regards her as a threat.

08-14-2009, 04:34 PM	#16
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Shun's Mission (Flash back to the meeting in which Hiro and Shun had their conversation.) "Take this, Uzumaki Sensei wanted me to give you this once I met up with you, as it slipped his mind previously," said Hiro. (Hiro tosses a slightly longer Kunai with a strange mark on it towards Shun. Shun catches it.) "A Kunai. This is what the Hokage wanted you to give to me," asked Shun. "Yeah. He said it was very important. He said if you were in a bind, and I know you will be in one, to use it against the opponent, it should give you the upperhand," said Hiro. "I take it this is one of the Hokage's techniques. Heh, I'm his body guard, I shouldn't have to rely on his protection," said Shun. "Yeah, we know how capable you are, you did help my sensei quite a bit during the war old pal," smiled Hiro. "Then again, I wasn't told his name, just that I'd know who he was when I saw him. His abilities, physical description, nothing. Who ever he is, he must holds some importance that The Hokage was willing to send someone such as me out to go fetch him just of yesterday. He told me tonight would be the best opportunity. Can't help but wonder if it is all connected," said Shun. (Switch Back to the present.) "Hmm. I'm almost approaching the River Country locale. I'll go scout the area from these trees," thought Shun. (Shun hides behind the brushes and vegetation and then looks up at the sky.) "Indeed, I'm right under the meteor. It is just sitting there. Who is behind this and are they using this as a bargaining chip to meet their demands? Oh well, I can't dwell on it now. Summoning Technique. Ninja Art: Owl Seeker," said Shun. (Shun summons four owls from the woods to his location, then using his tracking jutsu, he commands them and gives them human speech.) "Guys, I'm going to need you to scout the area. Search around the perimeter high up in elevation to avoid detection. Report to me of your findings. Then tell me the most safest entrance route. Spread your wings and fly," said Shun. (The four owls search the area checking for an entrance and scouting the area for unsual findings.) (Switch Scene to Outskirts of Konoha. Hiro is rushing Nila back to Konoha.) "Just a little further. I can see the Hokage Statues from here," said Hiro. (Switch Scene to one of the Owls. It flies over the area and spots several patrols slaughtered along a Coal mine village. Another Owl spots multiple figures sitting down, channelling chakra into the Meteor. The Other owls reaches the same location to spot the strange situation. Soon afterwards they fly back towards Shun's location.) "What's taking them so long....," mumbled Shun. (After a moment of sleep. The 4 owls return for report. He wakes up immediately.) "So, how did it go," asked Shun. "The Coal Mining Village Known as Gold Mine Village, has had their patrols viciously attacked," said Owl 1. "We have also seen the perhaps origin of this meteor souce," said Owl 2. "What the hell? Give me a break down of the situation immediately," said Shun. "There were multiple shinobi further up on a high mountain. They were channelling chakra into the meteor. The others where wearing gray like cloaks, while another held a strange weapon. A kind of Sycthe like insturment," said Owl 4. (Shun uses a jutsu to enhance the birds' awarness.) "What the hell? Give me the easiest escape route in, then I want you guys to meet up with the Hokage's informants on the way to Konoha; you now know everything I know because of my jutsu. Inform them of this information. I'll see what I can do at the mean time. This man with the Sycthe. He's the missing nin. I'll proceed with extreme caution," said Shun. "Fine. We'll intercept communications and tell them to immediately back you up. The easiest route in is through the North Western Cave. No patrols are down there. The path takes you straight into their meeting place through a passage way from the back. Be prepared for traps though," said Owl 4. (The owls take off.) "There is only one man who uses a Scythe. It must be Konoha's Reaper. But he use to be The Hokage's student. Why did he defect? Perhaps I'll find that out. Well, if I had The Hatchet with me, I'd feel better about this, but I'll be enough to hold off until back-up arrives. Dosa hmm? Are you behind this as well," Shun asks himself. Next Time: A shocking reuion. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-09-2009 at 02:09 PM.

08-17-2009, 09:50 PM	#17
kluang One Punch Man Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,418 Thanks: 3,186 Thanked 4,658 Times in 2,099 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! Moments before Hiro arrived at Konoha with Nila, At Hokage’s Mansion. The Hokage just sits at his chair while his wife is screaming at the guards "What kind of idiots do you have guarding the entrance?!!!!!" screams Hinata. “The finest in Konoha madam.” Answer the guards. Hinata glared at the guards. Shikamaru who was watching the scene, whisper at the Hokage. “I thought Hinata was kind-hearted, soft-spoken, polite and quite submissive.” “She is. But when about the kids, well she turns into a white eye gorilla.” Says the Hokage jokingly. Hinata turns around and look at the Hokage with a very angry expression. “What did you call me!!!!!!!!!” scream Hinata. “Oh boy….” Whisper the Hokage. At the Konoha gates, Hiro and Nila just arrived. There he saw a figure wearing a straw hat and a cape over a standard jounin uniform. The figure raises his head and Hiro can clearly see a pair of Rinnengan looking at him. “Hope…..” says Hiro. “Hiro-senpai. I’m sorry on what my little sister did. I do hope you forgive her.” “Never mind. She’s a headstrong and passionate girl. I’m use to it.” Reply Hiro. “Unfortunately she also has a brain of mule. Charging without thinking twice.” Says Hope. “Well, can’t say I disagree…..” Says Hiro. “I will take her home. My father is waiting for you at his office.” Says Hope as he took Nila from Hiro. “Its seems it’s more serious then we anticipated.” Whisper Hiro. “After sending my sister home I will join you.” Says Hope and he leave Hiro alone at the gates. “You guys may not be related by blood, but you took care of her like a true flesh and blood.” Grin Hiro as he makes his way towards the Mansion. Hope jumps from building to building, carrying his sister as he makes his way home. Nila awaken from her sleep and she saw her brother carrying her. “Idiot, you know how much we worried about you?” ask Hope. “I’m sorry.” Whisper Nila. Hope sighs and he landed in front of their house. “We’re home.” Says Nila. Hope dropped her down and backs away. “OWW, what was that for?” ask Nila as she rubs her head. Hope keep silent and still backs away form Nila. “What are you doing?” ask Nila. “Saving myself.” Reply Hope. “From who?” ask Nila. “Her.” Reply Hope. Suddenly Hinata appeared and rushing towards her and hug Nila tightly. “Mother?” ask Nila. “You got a lot to explain, little woman.” yells Hinata and drags Nila into the house. Nila looks at her brother to bail her out again. Hope just shakes his head and says this time he can’t. He then looks at the meteor with his Rinnengan he knew this is no natural cause. “Better go and meet Hiro-senpai.” At Shun’s location. Shun creeps closer to the group and hide behind a tree while eavesdropping on the group. He still can’t figure the face of the scythe wielding ninja. He took a binocular and peek at the strange group. Then he saw the face of an old friend. Dosa, who seems to be monitoring the group. Then Shun sense danger behind him and jumps upward, managing to avoid a Lighting Strike. He looks back and saw a beautiful blonde woman with blue eyes and a very sexy outfit. “Spy. From Konoha it seems.” Says the woman. “And you are?” ask Shun as he took out both of his blade and get into attacking stance. “Raitei.” Says the woman. Then Shun remembers from his bingo book. Her looks and jutsu matches a name. Raitei, the Lightning Succubus. An SNA kunoichi that said to master the lightning element as highly as Hiro. Went missing after SNA disbanded. “Her strength and speed surpass me. If I’m going to walk out this fight alive, I’ve got to be smart. One small mistake and I’m toast.” Thinks Shun. Seeing Shun determined to fight her, lightning cracks around her. “Arrogant fool.” Says Raitei. At the mountains Dosa watches as Raitei and Shun are ready to fight. Then a ninja with long black hair, wearing a white cloak that covers a blue gi. With his demonic eye he watches them and then looks at Dosa. “What are you doing here Asura?” ask Dosa. “To see where you’re loyalty lays, Dosa.” “You still don’t trust me, do you. Tell me why should I trust you?” Ask Dosa. ”If you don’t trust me, then you are wise.” Says Asura. Hope: He was found in an abandon village by the Hokage weeks after his marriage to Hinata and they both decide to raise him as their own. The couple saw the Rinnengan eyes that the baby have, and the Hokage decide to called him Hope in contrast of the last Rinnengan user who called himself Pain. As a Rinnengan user his mastery of jutsus are faster then others, where other take years, he took months or weeks to master a certain technique. While Pain separate all 6 body individually with different abilities, Hope keep all Rinnengan justus in his body alone. His mastery of jutsus isn’t as many and powerful as Pain’s but he is currently studying the sage’s scroll to learn more of Rinnengan abilities and most people predict he will be the next Hokage. He is a compassionate brother and person but also posses one of the sharpest analytical minds of the new generation. 5 years older then Nila and a jounin, he always looks after her when he’s around and Nila look up to him and always mixes him in her troubles. Raitei: One of the SNA. Master of the lightning. Feels betrayed after a few SNA left the organization and works for various villages. Vows to hunt and kill them all. Asura: Nothing is known about him except he is the middleman between the SNA higher ups with their soldiers __________________ To err is human, to forgive, divine. Humans aren't machines... they have souls, feelings. They live, they die, they love, they hate... And yes, they even make mistakes..... When kluang finds you creepy and wrong then you are beyond horrible. He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. And when you gaze long into an abyss the abyss also gazes into you. Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe. Quis custodiet ipsos custodes? Being Malaysian is about driving in a German car to an Indian restaurant for an Indonesian food, then travelling home, grabbing a Pakistani kebab on the way, to sit on Swedish furniture and watch American shows on a Japanese TV. Because we have no originality. Last edited by kluang; 08-19-2009 at 05:42 AM.

08-21-2009, 04:55 PM	#18
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Judgement Part 1 "Shit, I need to lose her and quick, I can't let Dosa betray us and let this operation go down to hell thought," Shun. "Oh hum. It seems you're thinking again. To bad it won't do you any good," said Raitei. (Raitie extends her arm, this causes an arc to extend and strike at Shun's person while it breaks off from Raitie. Immediately, Shun pulls out one of his circular blades and manages to knock the attack away, which causes a small lightning strike.) "So, you're not the run of the mill spy, this should be interesting," said Raitie. "Damn," said Shun. (Immediately three poofs appear in front of Shun.) "Back up it seems. Fools, they'll die all the same for interfering in our affairs," said Raitie. (The smoke clears revealing three Anbu Ops.) "No, a handful of Anbu won't be enough to deal with Raitie," said Shun. (The three Anbu removes their masks one by one.) "Wait a second, it is use guys," said Shun. -The top Anbu in the entire unit, who were handpicked by the Hokage, and fought with Shun and the others during the 4th Shinobi War. There is a long brown haird guy who resembles Human Realm Pain [No connectionion], a short red haird lass, and a medium spiky blond haired guy who is kind of short in stature.) "So if it isn't Shun. Don't worry about us, the Hokage sent us in the back you up," said Bruce. (Long Brown haired guy.) "Go finish your mission, fine Dosa," said Rise. (Short-haired girl.) "We know about Raitie. She was a prime target in a follow up investigation involving SNA. She's strong, but we'll manage," said Braig. "How's," said Shun before being cut off. "He's fine, he just pulled through," said Rise. "Anbu ops hmm? No matter. All small fries anyway," Chuckled Raitie. (Lightning from her body channels and connects to the sky, she is now being powered by lightning bolts from the heavens.) "NOW, we'll handle this," said Bruce. "Don't die guys," said Shun. (He rushes off. The three Anbu begin making handseals.) "We'll buy you time, old friend," said Rise. "As soon as I kill you three, I'll go straight after that punk," smirked Raitie. (Switch Scene to a forested area, a young familure looking man is rushing towards the suspended meteor. This youth's face has matured since the last time we've seen him. He no longer wears a jacket, he dresses in the typical Sand Jounin-Chuunin attire. His hair, although a few inches in length, is still smooth in texture. He is taller, around 5 ft 8. He has bulked up slightly, having a more manly physical appearance.) "I was told by the Kazekage to follow the meteor's presence in two days time. And it is definitely there. I guess the Hokage has sent word to all of the Kages in regards to capturing the SNA," said Teru. (Switch Scene to another forested area. Seven swordsmen wielding unique blades race to the meteor's location. On their forehead protectors, you can see the Hidden Mist symbol.) (Switch scene to another forested area. There is a man dressed in all black. He has many blades, one on each thigh. Short swords, one on each arm. Two larger ones holsted on his back, and Kunai sheethes near his anckles. His face is covered with a black scarf like cloth that wraps over his nose, lips, chin, and head. He rushes toward the location of the meteor. All that we know is that he has the Rock village Head Band holsted on his belt.) (Switch Scene to the site. Shun approaches the backside of Dosa. Several feet away from Dosa is Asura and three other cloaked troops.) "It has been awhile, Konoha's Reaper," said Shun. (Dosa turns around.) "Shun... My place is with them now. I can't just ask you to leave with all that you have witnessed, so... I'm asking you to die by my hands," said Dosa. (Asua smiles. Dosa pulls out his weapon and strikes at Shun with rapid speds however, at the same pace, Shun pulls out both of his weapons and counters.) "I don't care if you are the legendary Dosa. S-Class shinobi are not above treason. What is the meaning of this," asked Shun. "It seems you've parried me well. I wouldn't expect anything less from my Senpai," smiled Dosa. "Answer me, what is this thing, and what do you plan to hope from unleashing it upon this world," yelled Shun. (Asura automatically reaches the both of them.) "Give this fool no answer. I'll kill him myself," said Asura. "Stay out of it. This is my fight to end," said Dosa. "Fine...," said Asura. (He backs off and returns to his place yards away.) "ARRRGGH," yelled Dosa. (With his might he effortlessly knocks Shun back onto his own back several feat back. Dosa then swiftly moves to his location.) (The Scene switches to Raikage's office. A young black female who is possibly in his 20s, and has fucky pony tail styled braids for hair style questions her decision.) "Ryu is definitely one of our best agent. But that man's vanity and those ridiculous antics annoy me to no end. Ewww, for his sake his evaulation better be a positive one if he actually manges to make an impact on the behalf of the world. Where is he? I told him to meet me at my office a head of time and that it was an emergency. Eww, And the Meteor gets bigger by the second. I'm going to look like such a fool if my aide doesn't show up," moaned Raikage. (She looks like both Killer Bee and Raikage. Could it be either of their Daughters) -Next Time: Where the Hell is Ryu at a time like this? The explosive events of the wild mad man begins now. Several hours before the meteor strike leading up to his dymanic appearance, will begin shortly. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 11-01-2009 at 07:19 AM.

08-21-2009, 06:48 PM	#19
naruto_nutty Cunning Chunin Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: London, posh twats Age: 21 Posts: 673 Thanks: 831 Thanked 239 Times in 175 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! Return of a Kekkai Genkai It is a starry night in Otogakure, and nocturnal creatures are out hunting, their victory cries can be heard from miles away. A ninja stands silently on a branch just outside the village bordering wall, looking down into Otogakure, the village is dead. His eyes drifts towards the sky and begins calmly tracking a meteor, that is pummelling towards a forested area 20 kilometres from his current location. “Meteor???” he mutters to himself. Making a quick mental decision, he heads off in that direction. “Who does Asao thinks she is, obviously apart from village leader” Seijuro Ryu grumbles contemptuously to himself. Using his great speed and instant travel technique he quickly covers the distance between Kumogakure and the forested area surrounding Konoha. According to his trajectories the meteor will land somewhere between Takigakure and Otogakure. Now at the border of Otogakure, he comes to an halt on a branch just outside of Otogakure. “Damn, my Hiraishin; Shunshin Technique, won’t work here since I’ve never bothered to mark this god forsaken village, I’m paying for it now. I hate that woman, who wakes a guy up in the middle of the night and sends them off to chase some stupid rock of fire falling from the sky!!!. Looking up ahead over Otogakure bordering wall, the village is dead. He sets off in the meteor last seen direction. Five kilometer from the crash site, the ninja stops rapidly and jumps higher into the trees, someone is approaching with incredible pace. Without a hint of alarm or hesitation, the ninja draws his katana from a hilt on his back and stands with its point extending downwards. Ryu travels quickly, apart from being able to make himself nearly undetectable, his speed was legendary in the Shinobi world, he had one point even got compare with famous 4th Hokage, Konoha Yellow Flash, these two qualities were not the only reason he was picked specially by the Raikage for this mission. The ninja leaps down upon his adversary, intending to make this a quick confrontation. With swift reflexes, the enemy dodges and counters with a kunai. Both weapon collides, the ninja leaps back from the clash and vanishes. His opponent is bewildered by the sudden confrontation and his carelessness. “What the hell, can’t a fellow Shinobi get a break once in while” Ryu exclaims loudly to the forest. Ryu leaps as the branch he is standing on snaps cleanly in half, he grabs onto a slender one just above and swings himself up. Balancing expertly with one leg on the 4 inch branch, he pivot backwards, while barely catching the half broken branch below him with one hand and hooking the slender branch with the back of his knee. In one fluid motion he releases himself from this precarious position, while by using the falling momentum of the heavy branch he had just grab hold of, to continue his swing, propelling himself into a forward tucked flip, before landing on a branch in the next tree. Without stopping to pause for breathe, he marks the area and flickers out after his attacker. “This just isn’t my night, first I’m awoken in the dead of the night, no I’m dragged out of bed in the dead of the night, then I am send off to investigate some ‘meteor’, then attacked by a coward of a shinobi” Ryu declare loudly to no one in particularly, while glancing around for any sign of the adversary The ninja continues unfazed toward the meteor crash-site. Ryu is close behind and steadily gaining. Ryu places another Shunshin mark. The enemy has stopped and is near-by. With quick reflexes, he moves his head to the left to avoid an attack from behind. Grabbing his opponent arm, he turns the palm skyward, and with a bone crunching jerk, he snaps it over his shoulder, and swings his head viciously backwards to break his opponent nose. The ninja disperses in a lightning flare, which hits Ryu full from behind. He is thrown by the sudden lightning force. Wincing from the burn on his back, he pushes himself to feet “That was Raiton Kage Bunshin Jutsu, so I’m dealing with a Lightning user and a fast one at that, that two traits we share in common. I don’t like how this night is turning out, next thing you know I’m finding out we are damn relatives, could even be my father.” He jokes to himself, “Ok, time for me get more serious about this fight, if someone gets to that site before me, Asao gonna put ANBU black ops on my ass” Rising back to his feet, he draws his short range Katana from a scabbard on his back, he gives it a 360 twirl and quickly parries a high strike from his opponent, who is using the cover of the branches and trees to deliver strikes then retreating. He parries four consecutive attacks from different directions. “Can we please put a wrap on this, I got an appointment with a meteor and this game is tiresome.” No response!!! “Have it your way,” Ryu strings together a few hand-seals and declares, “Raiton Abakimasui Jutsu.” Bolts of Lightning flares from his katana blade, as it illuminates the area. Raising it above his head, its act as a torch. “This should draw you out faster, or atleast reveal your face.” Ryu quickly uses the sword to search a few likely areas but to no avail. “You are persistent, plus I think I hear the ANBU coming already, so thats my cue to wrap this up”!!! “Katon Ninpo: Hibashiri Jutsu!!!” A spherical fire wall surrounds Ryu starts to burn inwards, towards him. He quickly release the lighting jutsu and sheaths his Katana “Katon Ninpo: Hibashiri Jutsu,” performs Ryu, This new ring expands out from Ryu, towards the enemy own jutsu, as to nullify it. The jutsus clashes, the flames licks each other and slowly burns out. “He is able to perform Fire Jutsu aswell, another of my damn traits, just who is he.” The ninja approaches Ryu, his face is covered by darkness, the only clear feature is his silhouette and katana, which is held in one hand by his side. Seijuro Ryu stands still, his Katana held in both hands, pointing towards his opponent. “Who are you?” he asks No answer “What do you want?” he tries again “YOU!!!!” the ninja replies. Ryu braces himself, the ninja rushes forward. Ryu raises his blade to deflect the blow, the blades clashes. Ryu’s blade shatters!!! His opponent entire body and weapon is engulf in Lightning, he strikes again. Ryu dodges!!! His opponent strikes are increasing in pace and power. Ryu cannot keep up. “I have got one more ace to play, but his speed is unbelievably, its even greater than my natural speed, damn and I can’t even see his face” Ryu looks up at his opponent katana, that is just a few inches from his neck. “SHARINGANNNNNNN!!!!!!!” __________________ Which of these would you take home Here is Aizen Advert for recruiting Vasto Lordes because I can't imagine how else he does it. Becoming a Vasto Lorde does have its privileges, e.g you get to choose which meal you want today from a menu of hollows (big and small), adjucha, humans and the main course Shinigami's, but wait it's doesnt end there if you rip your mask off, you get the ultra special form of ARRANCAR, this baby comes with special Shinigami powers, extra powerful moves, like Grand-ray Cero and the extremely rare Zanpakuto. So sign up today, offer ends 31st Dec, terms and conditions apply. Please see Gin or Tosen for any further more details. Here is a link to the sexiest thread ever (Visiting my Profile may cause Epileptic Fit/Raucous Laughter) Last edited by naruto_nutty; 08-25-2009 at 02:42 PM.

08-24-2009, 07:23 PM	#20
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Judgement Part 2 (Shun drops both of his blades as he skids across the ground.) "Damn. He has improved his speed and strength beyond anything I would have imagined," said Shun. (Dosa readies his weapon at Shun.) "Shit... It is not over yet. I can't just up and go just yet," mumbled Shun. (He then has a flash back to where he and Hiro where talking about the mission. He remembers the Kunai that Hiro gave him, and remembered that the Hokage wanted him to use it if he were in a dire situation.) "That's it," said Shun. (He pulls out the Kunai and at the last moment parries Dosa's weapon. As he parries it, a cloud of smoke appears.) "What is going on here," asked Dosa. (In the smoke a cloaked warrior appears. He locks eyes with Dosa.) "Uzumaki Sense," said Dosa. "That's it, it was a transformed shadow clone," smiled Shun. (Dosa and The Hokage lock eyes.) "Shun quickly, get over here," said The Hokage. "What the hell, how come Dosa isn't attacking," said Asura from far away. "Should we get them," said SNA Troop. "I'll monitor them for now, I'll call the signal soon," said Asura. (Asura's eye closely monitors them.) "Sorry about earlier. If I didn't go hard on ya, the whole mission would be shot," said Dosa. "What the hell is this all about Hokage? Why was I kept in the dark," questioned Shun. "We have more important things to worry about, such as these troops, this man, and the meteor," said The Hokage. "SNA, I need more detail," asked Shun. "We as well as our allied nations used them in the war however, due to their experiments, half of ones that survived gone out of control while the other half were of use though a large portion died as a result of the brutal enhancement process. We weren't able to control them. It was only a matter of time before the ones that we could control, would go off on their own and try to protect the failed projects. After all the experiments, they felt like brothers after all. They grew angry when the when we decided to eradicate the specimens. They were test subjects of unbelievable talent. We couldn't let them linger. This meteor is a result of them being left alone. After losing trust in them due to previous examples, in order to protect the villages, we had no choice but to capture them and restrain them. They grew hostile and I've been tracking them for years. Maybe, it was our fault from the beginning I don't know anymore. Their goals are uncertain. But we still need to stop them, That is why I had Dosa under go a similar program and had him infiltrate their groups. Only someone with similar reflexes would suffice. Good thing we didn't lose Dosa, thanks to his strong will," said The Hokage. "No wonder why I was no match for him. His abilities are hardly what I'd call human," said Shun. "I'll hold them off," said Dosa. (Dosa rushes over to intercept them.) "Dosa, you betrayed us. How could you, and you were one of us," mentioned Asura. "Heh, heh. Doesn't matter now. You guys aren't going anywhere anytime soon," said Dosa. "Fool... It is not wise to be changing sides," said Asura. (His eye pierces his comrades and they all attack Dosa at once.) "This meteor. There is only one way to deal with it now. Are you familure with the Mass Sealing Chakra method," asked The Hokage. "Yeah, but I don't have nearly the chakra to perform such an S-Rank sealing technique," said Shun. "Don't worry about it. Although I'm a shadow clone and my chakra is halved, I am the host of the Kyuubi. I'll lend you the chakra," said The Hokage. "Why don't you do it then," asked Shun. "Well, umm. I've never been good with sealing techniques," laughed The Hokage. "Damn Hokage. He is as foolish as he looks. Fine I'll do it. What is it, all 12 hand seals in standard order and then finally all 12 in reverse order for a total of 24 handseals, got it covered," said Shun. (The Hokage pulls out the Forbidden Scroll and lays it out. Shun prepares the handseals, while The Hokage places his hands on his back. Immediately Asura comes rushing in to interupt the party.) "Damn, we won't be able to hack it," said Shun. (The Hokage soon smiles as a large wall that stretches wide and high stops Asura and shields the Hokage. From afar Teru appears and lands somewhere near the battlefield.) "So, this is the guy. The SNA leader. We were told to restrain him under all circumstances. Must be an extremely powerful person if it requires some of the strongest shinobi from 5 Great Countries," said Teru. (Behind him, various and many troops from the allied nations amass and surronds Asura as he rebounds from the attack and gazes at how far wide and up the wall is. The scene soon switches to the other side of the Huge Earth Wall.) "So, this was the aide Hiro was talking about. You really are sharp," said Shun. (Back to the action.) "If you allied nations think you can just seal up my gift to the world, you've all been mistaken. You all turned your backs on us. Now, we'll turn the world upside down.... From the abyss of devastating opression. I call forth the warriors the forbidden. Rise Now my army," yelled Asura. (He places his hands on the ground and summons many SNA troops.) "Human summons," said The warrior from the Earth Village. (After a long adventure, Ryu drops in from the Sky and effectively kills one of the SNA members with a downard slash of his blade.) "Any one waitin n' line to die come stand right up, it's free admission time for ass kickin," yelled Ryu. (Switch Scene to Raitie, she immediately dissapears. The area is reduced to rubble. The Three Anbu are knocked out cold and blood is sprayed everywhere.) Next Time: Allied Nations vs. SNA A battlefiled of Unreasonable Porportions. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-09-2009 at 02:33 PM.

08-25-2009, 12:27 AM	#21
kluang One Punch Man Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,418 Thanks: 3,186 Thanked 4,658 Times in 2,099 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! “Alright SNA leader, stop.” Says the warrior from earth village. “Leader? Me? No no no. Foolish ninja. I’m no leader. I’m just the middleman between these boys and the higher ups. Their progress and report will be directed to me and I will report to the higher ups. And the same for the higher ups. Their order will go through me and I will tell these boys what to do.” Explain Asura. “Then if we restrain him we will get info bout this SNA bullshit, right?” ask Ryu. The Earth warrior nods. “Then we kick his ass!!!!!!!!!” scream Ryu and he charged at Asura and the SNA ninjas. The ninjas retaliate and charge towards Ryu. 3 days before the fight Mist Village. The Mizukage is sitting in her room, looking at a ninja carrying a large sword on his back that looks like Zabuza's with little changes and have an eye patch on his left eye. “Hokage just told me about SNA.” Says the Mizukage. “So?” ask the ninja. “Don’t give me that, Shisio. You are one of them right. Or at least was, Mist Slasher.” Sasy the Mizukage. “I’ve cut ties with them. So what now. You want me to chase that rock?” ask Shisio. The Mizukage takes a deep breath and nods her head. “Figures. No. I want to find who kills Amy.” Says Shisio. The Mizukage expression changes and seems to regret something. “Amy, I sent her as a spy to get SNA to join the Mist Village. I bet they kill her.” Says the Mizukage. Shisio looks and punches the office wall. He look at the Mizukage with anger in his eyes. “You want SNA to join us?” ask Shisio. “Yes.” Says the Mizukage “Why?” “What SNA lacks is quantity. But they make up with their quality. If we can get them on our side, the other village can be destroyed easily.” Says the Mizukage. “You want to start another war?” ask Shisio. "No. I want to protect the village interest." says Mizukage. “Then I kill them all and dump their corpses at the nearest forest.” Says Shisio and he turn to leave the office. “And one more thing Shisio. I heard Hiro is also on this mission.” Says the Mizukage. “I will kill Hiro and dump his corpse at the nearest bog.” Says Shisio and he touch his eye patch. “Both of you fought each other many times during the war, and the results are the same. Draw. You remember when you formed the Devil platoon.” Says Mizukage. Shisio stand silently at the office door. “You remember do you? You and your platoon stay behind enemy line, cut off their support lines, dismember the enemy body and make it look like it’s the devil’s work. Then you meet Hiro and both of you fought. You gave Hiro a scar on his chest and he gave you a scar that makes your left eye blind.” Says the Mizukage. Shisio walks and close the door shut. The Mizukage smiles devilishly. “The master of wind and the master of the sword will clash again.” Says Asura as he emerged behind the Mizukage." Why would you tell him about Hiro? You want reawaken the blood thirsty side of him?" ask Asura. "Yes. If Konoha lost its Aerial Hatchet, it will be a major blow to them." The Mizukage smiles and took a file from her drawer. “This is it? The location where the tail beasts are seal?” ask Asura. The Mizukage nods and ask Asura about the meteor. “The meteor makes the sky shines. And a good decoy wouldn’t you say, Mizukage. If what inside here is true, the higher ups will consider your proposal.” Says Asura as he disappeared. Shisio who was behind the wall out side of the office heard it all. “Not my problem. But surely gets Hiro's attention." says Shisio. At the battle location. Shisio is standing at a hill looking at Ryu and the earth warrior as they cut through the enemy lines. "I don't see Hiro here. But that guy......" says Shisio as he looks at Asura. Ryu cuts through the ninjas and getting closer towards Asura and when he gets closer, Ryu give a loud roar and use his blade to cut Asura in two. The blade hits and ripped Asura in two, but it seems likes Asura's body is made out of air. The cut went through him like it was nothing. Asura just smiles. "Ever heard of the phrase, heart grabbing?" ask Asura. Before Ryu can answer, Asura plunged his arms into Ryu's chest and grab his heart. Ryu give a loud scream and his body starts to shake. Asura just smiles and began to grab Ryu's heart harder until Ryu falls to his knees. The earth warrior watches the scenes runs towards Asura but was blocked by several SNA ninjas. He makes a few handseal and says "Earth elements: 13 Earth poles." and 13 poles comes out from the ground and hit all the ninjas, and makes the way towards Asura clear. Asura looks at the earth warrior and pull out his arm and Ryu falls unconcious. Suddenly an earth pole emerged next to him, forcing Asura to jump away. "He avoided?" ask the Earth Warrior. He then makes few handseals and 13 earth poles emerged and attack Asura, but all of them went through him. Asura runs towards the Earth warrior, but suddenly another pole emerged underneath Asura, caught him by suprised, forcing him to avoid it. He looks at The Earth ninja direction but he wasnt there. The Earth ninja appeared behind him and attempt to end Asura with his sword. Asura makes one hand seal: "Time jutsu: Slow." And the Earth ninja movement become sluggish and slow. Asura turn around and give him a powerful kick to his neck, send him flying a few metres away. "You figured out my space jutsu. I can only use it when I see an attack coming. So you attempt to trap me with those earth element jutsus. You are wrong if I only know space justus. Space and Time are one. If you master space, you also can master time. Thats how I can make you slow. But thats not all." sasy Asura while the Earth Warrior is standing up. Asura who stands metres away from him dissapeared in an instance and appeared infront on him with in less then a second, delivering hundreds of punches towards the earth ninja and finish it with a kick to the abdomen sending the ninja flying towards the forest area. "I can fast forward myself too. When I finish with you. I'll take care of that traitor Dosa and his merry bands of leaves." " One on one I'm dead. I need back up to deal with this monster." thinks the earth warrior as he sees Ryu tyring to full himself together as he sits beside a tree. "I've got better things to do tonight than die." says Ryu " This is not good." says Shisio. He unsheath his sword and send his fire elemet chakra to the blade and the blade began to glow red, and fire comes out from its steel. " I'll kill that demon and throw his corspe at the nearest river." says Shisio Shisio: Master of the sword with his near godly speed and nearly flawless sword style makes him a very dangerous man. He can't use genjutsu and have a limited knowledge of ninjutsu but makes up with his taijutsu and swordmanship. He can add elements to his sword and he can use both wind element and fire element to add more damage to his sword attack. During the last war he is known as the Mist Slasher. __________________ To err is human, to forgive, divine. Humans aren't machines... they have souls, feelings. They live, they die, they love, they hate... And yes, they even make mistakes..... When kluang finds you creepy and wrong then you are beyond horrible. He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. And when you gaze long into an abyss the abyss also gazes into you. Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe. Quis custodiet ipsos custodes? Being Malaysian is about driving in a German car to an Indian restaurant for an Indonesian food, then travelling home, grabbing a Pakistani kebab on the way, to sit on Swedish furniture and watch American shows on a Japanese TV. Because we have no originality. Last edited by kluang; 08-26-2009 at 05:30 AM.

08-25-2009, 06:17 PM	#22
naruto_nutty Cunning Chunin Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: London, posh twats Age: 21 Posts: 673 Thanks: 831 Thanked 239 Times in 175 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! Decoy!!! Two Shinobi’s stands silent from afar, watching has the battle unfold. Ryu had decided to send in doppelganger to test the strength of his target. He had just witness his Shōten Technique destroyed by a very powerful shinobi, who seem to be using Time/Space Jutsu, since his katana passed straight him. His opponent had reach into the double and pull out his heart. He couldn't help but wince, as the poor Shinobi who he had perform the Forbidden Technique on, collapse to the floor and the battle continue to progress. “That why you don’t rush into battle son!!!” said the mysterious ninja standing net to him. (Flashback) “SHARINGANNNN!!!!” exclaim Ryu as he called forth his embryonic ability. The ninja hesitated for just a second before continuing with his attack. Ryu use that hesitation to his advantage, with his Sharingan activated he predicted the katana path and adjust his head a millimetre from its path. The ninja carried on with his onslaught unfazed by his opponent new revelation. His speed increasing beyond normal, even with his dojutsu, Ryu was unable to keep up. Katana whizzing through the air, along with open palm strikes and well aimed kicks at Ryu left him unable to do anything but deflect and dodge blows. Ryu was desperate, so he did the only thing left. He leaped!!! “Katon; Enkuo Juurensha Jutsu!!!” Flaming missiles, erupted from his mouth as he completed the hand-seals for the technique, and flew straight at his opponent. “Chidori; Senbon” Bolts of Lightning scattered, targeting the flaming missiles before they could target him and cause any harm.. The jutsus collided. With the area illuminated from the explosion, Ryu takes a look and instantly recognises the adversary. “Raijin; Uchiha Sasuke, the last of the Uchiha clan!!!” remarked Ryu. “Hehhehehe, I’ve hit the jackpot, I’m going to be so rich with the bounty on your head, how much was it…. ummm around £1 billion Ryo… Kirigakure hunter-nins are gonna be after my head for this.” exclaimed Ryu excited by his luck. “Hmm… well its would seem I’m not the last Uchiha… in fact it looks like you are...son!!!” Sasuke answered mysteriously, a sly grin spreading across his face. Ryu stops, the jutsus dissipated. He looks at Sasuke with curiousity and studies his face. They are very similar in appearance, this he knew since he was a child, as the villagers kept reminding him to be careful and not wander off in-case Kirigakure stumble across him and mistake him for the most infamous missing-nin of all time; Uchiha Sasuke. He had made it his stimulus to be become greater than this mysterious shinobi, but over the years, Sasuke legend just seemed to grow and grow, soon he was the most wanted missing-nin in Kirigakure Bingo book and was then he became known as Raijin; God of Lightning, as ninjas who opposed him were left as a pile of ashes. “It was my dream to hunt you down and make you pay for all the innocents you’ve killed. I’ve studied you in great detail when I was a Genin and I grew up to master the same elements you use, then I discovered my Kekkai Genkai at 8, during my Chunin stage, this along with my great prowess, if I must say so myself, quickly got me promoted to a Shinobigashira. Now I, at 15 who have earn the respect of Raikage and one of Kumogakure, Head Ninja, will be the one to end your reign of terror.” “Good speech, but maybe you didn’t hear me before, you’re an Uchiha, just like me, in fact it is likely that I’m your Jippu, that would certainly explain the Kekkai Genkai, since I am the only remaining Uchiha” Sasuke replied while sheathing his katana. “Ummm… interesting but with the money you’re worth, think of all the girls and mansionsssss, no hard feelings!!!” retorted Ryu while performing the nine hand-seals he needed and gathering chakra into his palm. “Here’s a move out of your repertoire, CHIDORIIIIII!!!!” he roars and launches an attack. Sasuke makes no attempt to avoid the move, which is aimed just inches from his heart. The jutsu connect and passes through him!!! Ryu stands arm outreach with look a horror and shock on his face “May I continue with my explanation.” Sasuke calmly asked looking him face to face. (Back to present) “So,,, ummm, Dad, rightttt?” Ryu ask sheepishly and receiving no reply. “I was send here on a mission, remember, the meteor should we try and assistance Konoha or continue?” he asked again. “If I’m not mistaken that Konoha Aerial Hatchet; Shun of the Kezugma clan fighting against those summons,” probe Sasuke paying no attention to his son question “Yep, I see you’re well inform and I’ve discovered that Asura is the one who cast summoning and also dispatch the ninja I send in. What do you know about the Special Ninja Association, SNA?” “I know that they were to an extent doomed from the beginning simply because an organisation similar to their cause try and failed to achieve the same goal of world peace and my former sensei also attempted the same feat but got greedy” Sasuke answered cryptically. “I assume you’re referring to Akatsuki and Orichimaru” Ryu reply smugly, “Did I mention that I studied you in great detail.” “How is Asao doing, is she still scheming and creating up problems, for Konoha” asked Sasuke, changing the subject. “Uhhhhhhhhh, how do you know the Raikage” “Isn’t it obvious by now, I’m the reason she even got elected to the position. Didn’t you notice the previous one never returned to Kumogakure, but of course you didn’t since you were probably out pursuing girls, still I’m impress with your proficiency in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu although you have a lot to learn and if you’ve earn it, maybe you’ll get eyes like mine.” Ryu had no witty comeback for this, so he stayed quite and observe the battle from afar, anxiety kicking in sooner than later, he would be joining whether his father liked it or not. __________________ Which of these would you take home Here is Aizen Advert for recruiting Vasto Lordes because I can't imagine how else he does it. Becoming a Vasto Lorde does have its privileges, e.g you get to choose which meal you want today from a menu of hollows (big and small), adjucha, humans and the main course Shinigami's, but wait it's doesnt end there if you rip your mask off, you get the ultra special form of ARRANCAR, this baby comes with special Shinigami powers, extra powerful moves, like Grand-ray Cero and the extremely rare Zanpakuto. So sign up today, offer ends 31st Dec, terms and conditions apply. Please see Gin or Tosen for any further more details. Here is a link to the sexiest thread ever (Visiting my Profile may cause Epileptic Fit/Raucous Laughter) Last edited by naruto_nutty; 08-26-2009 at 02:07 PM.

08-28-2009, 01:57 PM	#23
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Judgement Part 3 (At the battle field Teru watches as the emmense battle between shinobies take place. He also notices that the Seven mist swordsmen aren't doing anything.) "It seems they're just sitting there, best not to worry about it now... I hope that earth shinobi and that Cloud ninja get their acts together. This wall should last until The Hokage and his aide figure out how to seal that Meteor. In the Meantime, Earth Style: Human imprisoment," said Teru. (He places his hands on the ground and earth type prisons individually restrain some of the SNA troops. There are still many of them left however.) "This is the best I can do for now. This should be able to buy time," mumbled Teru. "ARRGH. Fools got nothing on me," smiled Dosa. (He continues to effortlessly hack and slash through SNA troops. Flash back to the immediate past. The Scene is at Konoha. A conversation between Hiro and Hope breaks out as Hope escorts Hiro to the edge of the village.) "I guess it is just one of those things you have to do," said Hope. "Something big is going down. I can't just let it without dirtying up my hands at least. But do me one favor, make sure Nila stays out of it. I think it is one of those days again," said Hiro. "Yeah. I understand. I'll go inform the Father that you're leaving," said Hope. "I, perhaps it really is time I use these bad boys," said Hiro as he rubs his sheaths. "The Mountain Cutters. I've heared you've never used them, wait, I heard a story about you using them against some legendary mist shinobi," said Hope. "That was a long time ago...," said Hiro as he vanishes. "Dosa. I wonder what you're up to. I can't sit back and allow you to have all the fun," said Hiro. (As Hope turns around, a young man, who is fairly tall touches Hope's head with both palms, causing him to pass out.) "Nila. I hope you are proud about what you've done," said The Young Man curtly. "Heh, you did it," said Nila. (Who is covered in bandages, yet still has her gear on.) "Uuhh if only you didn't have that dirt on me. Next time be more lenient, we are part of the same squad afterall. And to think I'd get pulled into one of your games. You know the village's top shinobi should be above blackmail," sighed Young man. "Oh calm down, Zig, we all know you would have done it anyway. You act all big in tough because you think you're the village's top cheese, competiting equally with Hope in terms of popularity at least, but we all know you have a big soft spot for Nila," said Laya. "That, was. FUCK You," yelled Zig. (Nila cuddles under Zig.) "Oh Ziggy, only you can use a genjutsu strong enough to knock out my big brother," fake blushed Nila. (Zig is angry yet blushes at the same time.) "God damn it. The luck of being teamed up with two crazy ass females. Who'd put their own mother to sleep," sighed Zig. "Oh Ziggy, you did that to," smiled Nila. "That, that was. Fuck you," yelled Zig. (Laya and Nila give each other high fives.) "Now, Nila, you want us to follow Hiro's trail right," said Laya. "Yeah. I can use my Byakugan however, he's too far out of range," said Nila. "Don't worry, a guy like him carries a baggage of chakra. It is still in the air, I'll find him," said Laya. "Shit, just think about all the trouble we are going to be in when Hiro Sensei catches us," mumbled Zig. "Whinning again aren't we," asked Laya. "If you weren't a girl I'd ring pretty little your neck," said Zig. "Oh you cocky ass fuck, I'm done with your bastard ass attitude," yelled Laya. "Oh, what are you going to do about it, humm, bitch and moan like usual? You're just jelous that the village overlooked you and chose me as the BISS NASS, you ASS," laughed Zig. "Enough of your bull shit," said Laya. (Laya and Zig lock eyes.) "OK AFTER HIRO WE GO," yelled Nila. (Both Laya and Zig fall over from the excited Nila, whom just nonchantly over looked the vicious display of conduct between her two teammates.) "How can she be so optimistic when she returned home just hours ago needing immediate medidcal attention," mumbled Zig. "What was that Ziggy," asked Nila as she gets close in his face. "Ahh nothing. So Laya, use that wonderful nose of yours before the Hokage finds us and has our asses," sighed Zig. Background Information: Zig: Part of Team Hiro and is a teammate to Laya and Nila. He is an extremely styled and proficient shinobi for his age. He is Jounin and is currently the talk of the town being the most talented and specialized shinobi in his age group. Though he is not as developed a shinobi as Hope, as Hope is five years older and has had time to hone his skills. He and Hope are bitter rivals as Zig looks up to him and trains hard to compete with him in sparring however, they are particularly close friends. Many of Zig's abilities and talents have yet to be revealed however, he has demonstrated that he can use complex based genjutsu by placing his palms on the heads of his victims, rendering them in a state of sleep. Despite his prowess as a young and upstanding shinobi he is constantly pestered by his fellow female teammates Nila whom he has a huge crush on and is too arrogant to admit it and she knows it, which causes him to do things he wouldn't normally do. He has a huge dislike for Laya as he uses the common words that she's as useful as a house mutt, due to her heritage. He wears the typical Jounin-Chunnin attire. His hair sticks straight up and spikes at the end. His face resembles Ryu from Street Fighter although, he is not as buff as the video game character. He is tall, around 6 ft in height. He is the only student in his class to have made it to Jounin. Laya: The other member of Team Hiro and Nila's counterpart in crime and in life... She and Nila love to gang up on their prestigous teammate using their women like charms to annoy him to no end as well as to entice him into doing things that he normally wouldn't. She is related the Inuzaka Clan and carries the traits that allows her to be an excellent tracker. With her enhanced hearing and smelling characteristics and Nila's eye sight the two couldn't be a more perfect pair, as they can dig up clues and dirt on anything, especially on Zig. She has pink really short hair (styled into a female like hair cut of course) with markings on her face. She wears the typical Jounin-Chuunin attire for females. She considers Zig as a waste of flesh despite of the fact that he beat her handfully in a type of organized battle watched by spectators to prove a point, which led to Zig getting recognized as the next best thing as he continued on to defeat other combatants. Despite Zig comparing equally to Hope in terms of popularity, Laya seems to have instinctively removed the thought of losing to him from her mind. Her face is a mixture of Sakura's and Ino's. Like Nila's, her rank is Chuunin. Next Time: The Scene switchs back to the battlefield. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-09-2009 at 04:20 PM.

08-28-2009, 03:00 PM	#24
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Judgement Part 4 (In The Hokage's office. The Hokage is in a lone room by himself.) "I guess my shadow clone has meet up with Shun and Dosa. I can feel my chakra being activated," Thought The Hokage. (Switch scene onto the otherside of the iron curtain. The Shadow clone now has Kyuubi eyes as he presses his hand ontop of Shun's back.) "How you holding up there kid," asked Hokage. "I"m doing fine. I had no idea this thing held so much chakra. I just hope the backup is able to hold themselves together long enough," said Shun. "If we're lucky. But never give up hope," said the Hokage. (Switch Scene to the Battlefield. Shisio takes notice of the meteor's energy being absorbed.) "Asura mentioned the importance of that object. Heh, gots nothing to do with me. Aerial Hatchet. I quence my thirst of these baffoons first," said Shisio. (He immediately lands near Asura with his blade blazing.) "Though I could hardly care what happens to the world, your precious meteor is about to be sucked up," said Shisio. "Take care of them and I promiss you a meeting with Konoha's Aerial Hatchet," said Asura. (Switch to Ryu and Sasuke.) "That's your cue. Konoha can root for all I care but if this project goes underway, my mission fails. Remember who you are boy. When it is time I'll come for you again, and explain to you the secrets of the Mangekyou Sharingan. When you are ready that is," said Sasuke. "Wait, about the," said Ryu before he is cut off. "Fine, I'll just have to do with that shameless dead beat dad has to say anyway," said Ryu. (He rushes at top speed and appears in front of Asura once more as they are closer to the wall placed up by Teru and farther away from the other disputes.) "Hmm. You'll do good to get out of the way. That host of yours was nice, let me reinvent the scenario involving you this time," smiled Asura. (Ryu activates the Sharingan.) "WHat's this? Sharingan, impossible," said Asura. "I'd like to see you do that trick again. This time I'd like to see you weasal your way out of this one," smiled Ryu. (Ryu rushes at him with a Chidori Sword.) (Switch Scene to Shisio. The Earth warrior draws his huge Katana from his back and parries Shisio's blade. They both grunt.) "Oh ho... I had no idea that there were still shinobi out here with some real talent. Tell me, what is your name before I end your wretched life and drence your corpse in the river," said Shisio. (Shisio's blade is nullified.) "My name is Blake. Like that blade of mine. I call it the Blocker. I pour my chakra into it at the same intervals as the chakra in your blade connects with mine and then cancels the attack. A nifty idea I picked up. ARRGH," yelled Blake. (Blake uses one hand to hold Shisio still and then uses his free hand to toss a suprise short sword at his guts. Of course Shisio turns into a pile of smoke.) "He's fast. He shouldn't be able to avoid my scout's knife with a suprise," said Blake. (From the side Shisio attempts to strike with his blade. However Dosa parries the blade with his weapon.) "I didn't need your help Konoha spy," said Blake. "Well I thought I'd cut in anyway. This guy is trouble, let me tell ya," said Dosa. (They are still parried together.) "This man, his strength, it's unreal. Hey! You from Konoha right? Tell me, do you know a man named Hiro," asked Shisio. "Heh, hehe. Ha, ha, ha... Hiro. How long since I've heard that name. Well I'll tell ya what. If you can get through me, you can get to Hiro. But let me tell ya, I'm the better deal Shisio," grinned Dosa. "ARRGH. You know my name, who are you," asked Shisio. "Nothin more than a spectator to your battle with Hiro. He let ya live though. If I were em' I'd carry your head home with me, I'm not like that pathetic sap Hiro, I finish what I start not leave little war wounds over people's faces. Look at all em that popped out of no where. All dead... And you will, be too," yelled Dosa. (Dosa uses his strength and knocks Shisio forward a little, giving Dosa enough room to strike horizontally with his Sycthe.) "Hmm. Not bad," said Shisio. (Shisio ducks and then channels wind into his blade and prepares to strike Dosa in the stomach while striking in a crouched position. Dosa does a backwards flip and then tosses his weapon at Shisio.) "What wrecklessness. Tossing his own weapon away," said Shisio. (Shisio parries it however is shocked at the fact that Dosa quickly rushes into the fray unarmed and hook punches him in the face.Dosa Picks up his weapon weapon in mid air with his free hand and prepares to slash right through him.) "Hmm. Dosa. He's not bad," said Blake from a back. "Hah... I'm not clean like Hiro. THis ain't gonna end in a draw," said Dosa. (Shisio quickly gather his senses and vanishes into thin air. He then swings his sword, which causes a gust of wind to pumble Dosa's body. It quickly disperses into a shadow clone. The real Dosa attemps to strike at his blindside. But Shisio quickly uses his wind blade to parry and knock Dosa back slightly.) "His reflexes are fast even against a trick out of Uzumaki Sensei's book.. Even with this SNA configuration in me, he's. Its like I'm fighting him again. Like I'm fighting Hiro. That strength and that amazing resilience. He should be down by now," mumbled Dosa. "hah, hah, hah. It has been so long since I've recieved such a blow. You're brilliant... It pains me to kill you and dump your waste into the river," said Shisio. (Shisio then channels all five chakra natures into the blade at once, turning it into a cursed looking thing with a sick aura around it.) "All five chakra natures hmm. A single person can't possibly manipulate all them at once. Not even Rina. Though I can't worry about her at the moment. Looks like I need to be serious too," said Dosa. (Switch Scene to Ryu and Asura. Ryu rushes straight through Asura.) "Hmm. Still not enough," said Asura. "I wouldn't be so sure you fool," smiled Ryu. "What is this," said Asura. (He notices a small cut on his face.) "Just a few more run throughs as I'll have ya diced," said Ryu. "Don't get Cocky," said Asura. (Asura glances up at the Seven mist swordsmen.) (Switch Scene to Forested area. Laya, Nila, and Zig are further behind Hiro but notices the scenario.) "Not so fast, Nila, we may bump into Hiro. We need to keep a very low profile," said Zig. "Yeah I know. He's in my sights. Though, that's the least of our worries," said Nila. "Yeah, I smell blood, and I smell lots of strong chakras up ahead towards that meteor," said Laya. "But it is strange. I snuck out before and I swear it was much larger. Nah, maybe my imagination," said Nila. "Yeah, best not to worry about trivial matters," said Zig. (Switch scene to Hiro. He finds the corpse of his former comrades. Near the battlefield.) "Bruce, Rise, Braig. Who did this to you... Who ever it was must have been extremely powerful to defeat The Hokage's top brass Anbu. Sorry I wasn't there my friends. I need to hurry up. I can't let this go on anymore. SNA Bastards. You'll pay dearly for this. Fuck killing them, I'll slice their souls from existence if need be," said Hiro. (Switch Scene to the Battle field. Dosa takes off his Jacket. He places tosses his Scythe to the side.) "Hmm, not using your weapon anymore hmm," smiled Shisio. "Nah. Your monster of a blade would have it instantly. It is time I relied on my more cruelier methods. It has been awhile since I've used Ninjutsu, but give the circumstances I'm ready to bend my rules," said Dosa. (Immmediately a lightning bolt strikes down. When it clears, it reveals Raitie.) "Raitie. What the hell are you doing here," asked Dosa. "It seems you've betrayed us I've been watching for a while. Heh, I'll kill ya you know that right," said Raitie. "He's mine, get lost or I'll kill ya both," said Shisio. (Immediately a huge gust of wind blinds everyone's eyes, the ground splits a little when a huge figure appears. He carries two insanely big short swords on his thighs. He has spiky hair and a evil mad man's face. His face looks like he craves the blood of the devil.) "Hiro," mumbled Dosa. "HIRO," yelled Shisio. "The only one doing the kill would be me. The ones who has killed my comrades, I'll butcher you all. Who's ready for some skin to be shaved," said Hiro. "The entire area is has now been infliced with a powerful wind. Its like his presence is causing the entire climate to change," said Blake. (Teru stands back watching the area.) "This man. His chakra is unbelievable," said Teru. (Back to the Battle field.) (He pulls his huge curved jagged teeth weapons called Mountain Cutters out, which causes waves of wind to blow everyone away except SHisio. Who keeps his footing by placeing his blade in the ground and holding unto it.) "WHat chakra," said Raitie. (She is blown away.) "DAMN. He couldn't possibly have improved this much," said Dosa. (He slides back as well.) (Switch Scene To Ryu and Asura.) "This chakra, I can feel the air around me. It is beginning to cut into me. It must be him," said Asura. "What the hell is that," said Ryu. (Switch Scene to forested area. They are nearing the battle field.) __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-09-2009 at 04:44 PM.

08-28-2009, 05:05 PM	#25
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! "What is going on, it is like a Hurricane is about to be formed," said Laya. "This wind chakra. Its Hiro. I know because I've whitnessed it during sparring," said Zig. "He lives up to his title afterall. We need to hurry up and get down there," yelled Nila. (Switch Scene to onto the inside of the wall.) "Do you feel it to lord Hokage," asked Shun. "Yeah, its Hiro. And apparently, he's pissed. I wonder what might have happened. ANyway focus on your objective," said The Hokage. (Switch Scene to the battle. A tornado like barrier continously circles around Hiro as the entire area is ingulfed in a wind like storm.) "Hiro... Finnally the time has arrived. I've got a score to settle," said Shisio. "Did you kill them," said Hiro. "What," asked Shisio. "I SAID DID YOU KILL THEM," yelled Hiro. (He swings his blade, which causes a huge horizontal like wind wave to swiftly reach Shisio's location. Shisio slides under it, to avoid it.) "No. I have killed no one of yet. But I'd be glad to add you to my list of corpses to toss into the river," said Shisio. "It was me," said Raitie as she rebounds back and slowly braces herself through the wind. "You. You're that Lightning Specialist. SNA Garbage. You know better than to approach me with such arrogance," yelled Hiro. (He prepares to swing his weapon however Dosa gets in the way, which causes him to stop his attack.) "Ahh, the good ole mountain cutters. They say they are named that because one swing of your mightly blade can reduce mountains into pebbles...," said Dosa. "What is the meaning of this Dosa," asked Hiro. "Don't worry, the Hokage trusts me. Let me handle this babe. Then, you're next on my list. I want to show you what several years of pain and torture as training can bring upon even the most revered current Konoha Shinobi besides The Hokage himself," said Dosa. "You make her beg for death for me. I'll take out my frustration on Shisio," said Hiro. "So. He's Hiro. I've heared rumors but I never thought the Aerial Hatchet was this monstrous in person," said Raitie. "Don't worry about that, deal with me," yelled Dosa. (He rushes over to her person. A lightning bolt strikes down and engulfs Raities body, charging her for battle.) "I've waited so many years for this. Ever since, ever since you've done the unthinkable," said Shisio. "War is war. There is no need to refuel needless hate. But I'll kill you though. Because you're in cahoots with them," said Hiro. "Justice hmm. SHut your ass up. Don't think I've forgotten what you've done to my comrades. Don't think I forgot what you've done to, to," yelled Shisio. "Hmm," mumbled Hiro. Next Time: The Clash of old rivals, the battle of a life time __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 08-28-2009 at 05:12 PM.

09-01-2009, 09:47 PM	#26
kluang One Punch Man Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,418 Thanks: 3,186 Thanked 4,658 Times in 2,099 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! At an unknown location. 7 hooded people are gathering at a table and one of them is looking at the battlefield through a crystal ball. “How’s the meteor?” ask a giant hooded figure. “It’s starting to be sucked. At this rate the meteor will vanishes.” Said the person who is looking at the crystal ball. “And how is Asura?” ask a female hooded figure. “At this rate both he and Raitei will die. Seems almost everyone is there.” Says the person with the crystal ball. “Let them die then. They serve their purpose.” Says the giant hooded figure. “No. Asura and Raitei are vital members. We need them. Like us they are also masters of their field.” Says the female hooded figure. “Enough. So, summoner, have we confirmed the tail beasts prisons?” ask the person with the crystal ball. “Yes. It seems the Mizukage was lying, Tetsuo.” Says the summoner. He took off his robe and unveils a young man that’s look a lot like Sephiroth. “Only half of the locations are confirmed.” Says the summoner. “How many locations have been confirmed, Oita?” ask Tetsuo “Five.” “And about Asura and Raitei?” ask the female hooded figure. “I’ll go.” Says a fat hooded figure. He took of his robe and unveils a fat man dress in samurai attire, much like Choji. “Ino Shika Cho. You will help Asura and Raitei?” ask the female figure. Ino Shika Cho nods. “Then it’s settles. Michi and Oita will go and collect the confirmed tail beasts.” Says Tetsuo. A female member took of her robe and unveils a short hair female with snake tattoo cover her left cheek and she have snake eyes much like Orochimaru. She hissed at Oita and a white snake comes out from her collar and reveals its fangs at Oita. “Ino Shika Cho will aid Asura and Raitei. Tank and Sakuya…..” says Tetsuo with his finger points at the giant hooded figure and the female member. “Both of you will take care of the Mizukage.” Tank stood and took of his robe. His face resembles Stone Cold Steve Austin. Sakuya also took her robe off. She looks and dresses in ninja attire, except its white. “Then I will tell her our answer to her proposal.” Says Tank. Sakuya nods. “No. Don’t kill her yet. We need to secure the tail beasts first. Then you can kill her.” Says Tetsuo. Tank grunts. ‘Ino Shika Cho. Be careful, the master of wind and the master of the sword are also present in that area.” Says Tetsuo. Ino Shoka Cho nods. “Master of the sword and wind my ass. The master of the fist will pummel their faces.” Says Tank. “I will teleport you all to your locations.” Says Tetsuo as he makes a few handseals and summon 3 doors behind him. Back at the battlefield. Hiro and Shisio circling each other looking for a gap to strike. ‘I should have known you will be with the SNA. Your loyalty is always with the flames war.” Says Hiro. “I’m not with them.” Says Shisio as both of them looking for a gap to attack. “Then why you attack my friends?” ask Hiro. “I was bored waiting for you.” Answer Shisio. Hiro grunts and runs quickly towards Shisio and they parried each other technique. Hiro increases his wind element to strengthen his attack while Shisio turn his blade into a burning hot metal to counter the wind from Hiro. Realizing this will be a stalemate, both ninja jumps away, but this time Shisio attacks Hiro. Hiro makes a few hand seals and says: Wind Element: Wind Shredder!!!! Then few chakra blades appear around Hiro and flew towards Shisio. Shisio activate his fire chakra and destroys each blade. After destroy all the blades, Shisio realize Hiro was gone and he look upwards and see Hiro rotates himself like a drill and charges towards Shisio. Shiso increases the fire element in his blade and parries the attack, but the force of Hiro’s attack makes the ground beneath Shisio’s feet began to crack, but Shisio still unfazed, parries Hiro’s attack, but he’s slowy being pushed deeper into the ground by Hiro’s attack. Realizing parrying this jutsu with fire element only won’t do any good, he activate his wind element to increase his fire element power and manage to push Hiro away. Hiro landed a few feet away from Shisio and they look at each other, recognizing each other ability. “You know, after the war I’ve been in journey around the lands. Searching for techniques and jutsus, and maybe some answer.” Says Shisio. “Yeah so?” ask Hiro. “I’ve been to the Fire Temple. Amida's 1000-Arm Death Embrace is the temple most powerful technique.” Says Shisio. Hiro looks at him suspiciously. “You mean….” Says Hiro. “I’ve learn that jutsu. Don’t worry I don’t kill the monks. I don’t want unwanted attention. I just find the scroll, and use my photographic memory remember the jutsu. And I make a few alterations to it.” Says Shisio. He closes his eyes and a giant demonic figure with 1000 arms each equipped with a sword standing behind him. “I just make it, more suited to me.” Says Shisio. “God of Sword’s 1000 Sword death Embrace.” “Shit!!!!” scream Hiro and he makes a barrier from the wind moments before the spiritual swords attack him. The attack increases rapidly and Hiro’s barrier finally broke. Hiro looks at Shisio’s direction but he was gone,then he felt a tremor beneath him, and Hiro jumps upward while Shisio comes out from the ground. And they fought in mid air. “I’ve also learn, we must not be confined by one village style. We must explore more and I create this, just for you.” Says Shisio and he turn his sword side ways: “Konoha Senpuu-Sword Version.” Hiro parries the sword with his blade, but Shisio uses his legs to kick Hiro’s stomach and he falls down to the ground. “Konoha Senpuu has two attacks, incase the opponent manage to avoid the first kick, the user can use his second leg to attack. The same goes with my own version of it.” Says Shisio. Hiro slowly stands up, and smiles. “You’ve improved, Shisio.” Says Hiro. “So have you. Your wind is mightier then before. But I’m better. Let me make a deal. If you manage to defeat me or even it’s a draw again, I’ll admit defeat. And even told you what SNA really after. If I win, I’ll throw your corpse to the nearest river.” Says Shisio. Hiro nods. Shiso smiles and channel all 5 chakras into his sword. “And before we fight, let me tell I’ve also been to the Land of Iron.” Says Shisio. “You’ve combine ninja sword style with samurai’s?” ask Hiro. Shisio give a big grin. “You gonna taste this technique.” “Crap.” Says Hiro. He increases the wind within his blade until the grounds around him are cut to little pieces and he charges towards Shisio and scream “Raging Wind!!!!!!!!” Shisio prepares by dropping into a partial crouch, both knees bent, left arm drawn back and right extended forward; he grasps the hilt of his sword with his left hand and rests the tips of the fingers of his right hand on the blade near its tip and thrust himself and his sword forward. “Falcon Thrust!!!!!!!!!!!” Ino Shika Cho: A member of the higher ups of SNA. Has the combining ability of the Akamichi clan, Nara clan and the Yamanaka clan. He can control the shadows, manipulating minds and body enlargement jutsus. Tank: Member of SNA higher up. Master of taijutsu. A ninja who lets his temper took the best of him and only Sakuya can calm him down. .For him, the war is his opportunity to bash some heads. Sakuya: Member of SNA higher ups. Master of medical technique. Shared a powerful bond with Tank since she was enroll into SNA. They also do missions together and she is Tank voice of reason. Oita: Member of SNA higher up. Master of Summoning. For him SNA, is his gateway to be a daimyo and rule a nation. Michi: Member of SNA higher up. The so called “Perfect Clone of Orochimaru.” She was trained is SNA to be like Orochimaru. Her justu and strength are equal to Oro and her goal is to destroy Konoha just like Orochimaru. Tetsuo: Member of SNA higher up and is the confident and charismatic young leader of SNA. He leads SNA and setting himself up as a false messiah. He creates the meteor and wants to combine it with the 9 tail beasts as a salvation as he sees mankind can be saves by destroying the previous order and built a fresh new order with he and SNA leads the world unto true harmony. His ability is unknown. __________________ To err is human, to forgive, divine. Humans aren't machines... they have souls, feelings. They live, they die, they love, they hate... And yes, they even make mistakes..... When kluang finds you creepy and wrong then you are beyond horrible. He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. And when you gaze long into an abyss the abyss also gazes into you. Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe. Quis custodiet ipsos custodes? Being Malaysian is about driving in a German car to an Indian restaurant for an Indonesian food, then travelling home, grabbing a Pakistani kebab on the way, to sit on Swedish furniture and watch American shows on a Japanese TV. Because we have no originality.

09-02-2009, 01:14 AM	#27
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! -Interruption 1 (In a forested area just outside the battlefield, Nila’s team scouts the area.) “Oh my God! What a battle,” said Nila. “What’s going on? Tell me,” said Zig. “Everyone’s fighting. I see many dead men and several shinobi I’ve never seen before. Oh, and Hiro sensei is locked in battle against another dangerous opponent using amazing chakras. I also see… Teru? He looks a little different,” said Nila. “Teru? That’s the sand’s prodigy kid you’ve beaten two years ago. Why is he in a place like that,” asked Zig. “I have no idea, I guess he’s important people,” sighed Nila. “Oh yeah, despite beating him, he is probably tasked with more important missions than you,” Zig said all cold like. (Nila looks down. Laya then slaps Zig in the face.) “What the hell was that for? What did I do,” yelled Zig. “You think about that next time you open your dumb ass mouth,” yelled Laya. (Nila notices something.) “What is it Nila,” asked Laya. “What exactly is going on now,” asked Zig. “I was right. Behind that huge wall of earth that even stretches to this side, something is sucking the energy out of that meteor,” said Nila. “What do you think it could mean,” asked Laya. “Hmm, perhaps someone is sealing it away,” said Zig. “Maybe. OH,” yelled Nila. (She shocks her comrades.) “What the hell was that for,” asked Zig. “Girl I know you get excited easily, but don’t give me a heart attack,” said Laya. “Shun. Mr. Shun I forgot… He helped me out a lot back when I secretly went out. I wonder if he’s ok,” mumbled Nila. “Ah, he’s one of the Hokage’s body guards, had no idea he was caught up in this too. But I know a little about what goes on in the shinobi world and since I’ve been on more missions than anyone in our class. Looking at the situation, I say we get out of here. This is way in over our heads,” said Zig. “Though I hate to admit it. He might actually be right for a change. Nila are you listening to us,” asked Laya. (Close up on Nila’s eyes shows a young worried woman. The Scene switches to the battlefield. Hiro sheathes his blades then uses his hands to manipulate two huge duel tornadoes that collides with a Large Falcon like figure made up of the various chakra nature manipulations. Chakra arks from Shisio’s blade and continuously flows a path of chakra into mid-air to give the form of a devastating bird that collides with the huge spiraling winds. The huge enormous waves of chakra creates a huge explosive like discharge that blows both of them away. They get up and face each other once more.) “It’s time we finish this, Hiro. My last attack, a technique I’ve worked on for years. Now, you’ll be the first to witness its purest form,” said Shisio. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-02-2009 at 01:52 AM.

09-02-2009, 01:19 AM	#28
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! “So… You have an ace as well. I was told by my teacher, The Hokage, never to use this technique. It’s not something humans should have to witness in a life time,” said Hiro. (Hiro pulls out his weapons. ) “Well then. Let's go for the ultimate wager,” said Shisio. (He begins to awkwardly go into a stance.) “Do you know why I carry these weapons? I’m not a swordsman yet I carry these huge weapons you see in front of you. Since my chakra has grown so strong, when I use higher level wind ninjutsu, my hands begin to feel the adverse affects. These blades are nothing more than mounts, or protective gloves in a sense. They aren’t my swords, they're my limbs. The technique I’m about to use, injured my arms so badly that I was forced to fight with weapons when I use higher level ninjutsu. Ironic that even I am not immune from such a wind styled attack, given my title and my assumed absolute control,” said Hiro. “My technique is not as explosive as yours might be however, as a master swordsmen I've used my blade to kill my victims in as many ways as possible. During my years of experience in the art, I discovered a much more subtle yet effective approach for eliminating my most destructive opponents. This means I know every fiber of a human body’s vulnerable points. From the skin, muscles, joints, nerves, and organs, this technique strikes the most vital point in each category, which collapses the opponent with 100% accuracy. No one could possibly survive, I’ve tested it out a flesh clone” smiled Shisio. “No need for me to explain mine then. I just hope someone manages to scrape up the scraps when I’m done here,” smiled Hiro. (Immediately before Hiro and Shisio unleashes their strongest techniques they find themselves unable to move. Someone drops in from behind Shisio.) “What is happeneing here? I can’t move,” said Shisio. “An interference. Damn, this technique.,, It reminds of of the shadow possession,” said Hiro. (Hiro spots someone behind Shisio.) “I’ve used one of my animal scouts to check the area. I can’t have you two using techniques, in which you don’t know the outcome as it may directly affect the project that is going on. Therefore I’ve restrained you. Don’t worry. Due to the situation at hand, I won’t kill you,” said Ino shika Cho. “Who are you? Are you with the SNA,” asked Hiro. “That’s none of your concern,” said Ino shika Cho. “Idiot. I’ve made a deal with Asura. I’m not in your employ so get the fuck out of my way,” said Shisio. “Oh no, that mustn’t do,” said Ino Shika cho. (Switch Scene to a forested area.) “NO!! Hiro is in danger, he can’t move. And there's another opponet,” said Nila. WHAT,” yelled Laya. (Zig grabs Nila by the arm.) “Damn it all. Remember what I said before? Let the big wigs handle this,” said Zig. “Fuck that, you can take that high and mighty attitude of yours and shove it. He’s our Sensei,” yelled Nila. (She pulls away and rushes to the battle field. Laya and Zig look at each other concerned like.) “Shit, it's ideas like this that gets people killed,” yelled Zig. (He rushes off as well.) “Wait guys,” yelled Laya. (Switch Scene to the battlefield.) “You see, we have to preserve something here, so we can’t let you guys go haywire as we know how devastating the two of you can be,” said Ino Shika Cho. “Shit,” said Shisio. “Hmm, what’s this,” said Ino Shika Cho. (Immediately one young shinobi appear in front of Hiro.) “Nila! Look at you, you're injured. Damn it why are you here? And how come Hope didn’t stop you,” said Hiro. (Zig and Laya drop in as well.) “No. I stopped Hope. Nila doesn’t deserve all this,” said Zig. “Wow, thanks Zig,” said Nila. “Yeah, we all could have stopped her if we wanted, we just came along anyway,” said Laya. "Guys, thank you," said Nila. “Damn it, you guys are idiots, but you’re hard headed, just like your stubborn ass teacher,” winked Hiro. Next Time: Nila, Zig, and Laya are on the Scene, what happens next? -Interruption 2 "I see things are already taken care of here, so I'll take my leave," said Ino Shika Cho (He vanishes, this causes the shadow possession to break.) "Now, where were we," asked Shisio. "I'm sorry mister, but now that we're here, you won't be landing another finger on our Sensei," said Nila as she waves her finger. "Sorry Master, but we can't sit back and let you fight, not now. We're here now as Nila said, so you with the sword back down. There's no way you can takes us all on. We're Hiro's students after all, don't think it'll be easy," said Zig. "Shisio. Our duel will have to wait. As much as I'd hate to do this, I can't fight you with them here. They'd get in the way. And besides, a four on one wouldn't be a fair fight now would it," said Hiro. "Fine do as you like. How cute, saved by your proteges. You just won't get any leads on the SNA because you failed to defeat me. Next time, be prepared for an all out struggle," said Shisio. "We're very sorry you couldn't get the intel you needed," said Nila. (Shisio makes a handseal and then vanishes. The scene then switches to Asura. Ryu has now gained the upper-hand and has grabbed Asura by the collar.) It is over now. I'm taking your weird eye lookin ass back to HQ for debriefing," said Ryu. (Asura looks into Ryu's eyes and then smiles. Asura then locks eyes with the mist swordsmen. All of a sudden Ryu is surrounded by the seven mist swordsmen.) "What the hell? The mist is in cahoots with the SNA," said Ryu. "Put that man down, or we will be forced to restrain you by any means required," said a man in a cloak wielding Zabuza's sword. (Ryu drops Asura, as the freed man rushes toward the Meteor. The seven mist swordsmen then follow Asura. Switch Scene to Ino Shika Cho.) "So, I didn't have to rescue him after all. With the seven mist swordsmen, Asura should be able to reclaim the project. We'll have to finish this up another day. We had no idea The Hatchet and The lengedary swordsman would show up," said Ino Shika Cho. (He drops by and lands next to Dosa. The traitor is holding Raitie by her neck with one hand.) "Dosa. You traitor. I should have you killed right now. But I haven't the time to waste against trash like you. Because of you, the Boss might have to have this project go through more experimental phases. If only we checked you more thoroughly. We should have known it was too good to be true that one of Konoha's most powerful and famous shinobies would defect and join us. Now you were leaking valuable information to Konoha in order to establish the surprise raid from the surronding nations," said Ino Shika Cho. "Heh, heh. My bad. We can settle this after I squeeze the life out of her. Though I think she is kinda cute, I can't just forgive her for killing my real comrades. We fought that grueling war with them. We fuckin bleed, lived, and died together. This hag will die by my hands. I've got no love for someone such as this person," said Dosa. "Sorry, but we can't have you low lives in our affairs. We need that woman alive," said Ino Shika Cho. (With fast reflexes Ino Shika Cho quickly grabs Raitie tosses her body on his shoulders and vanishes from the area via a transportation method.) __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-06-2009 at 01:04 AM.

09-02-2009, 01:22 AM	#29
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! "Looks like the lightning vixen escapes. I'll make a promise. If we meet again, that rose will wither away as I drain the last bit of life from her deprived body," said Dosa. (Scene switches to The Hokage and Shun. The meteor is getting smaller.) "Just a little bit more," said Shun. "Yes, then we can," said The Hokage before being destroyed by an attack from behind. "No, no, no!! Now I don't have the chakra to seal this thing up," said Shun "Oh my. So it was you causing all this mess. I should have killed you long ago. To think the Hokage used his shadow clone for the technique. Clever," said Asura. (The scene switches to the Hokage office.) "It can't be. We've came so far," said The Hokage. (Back to the site.) "No, why are the mist swordsmen on his side? I don't have the chakra to fight them all. And even if I did, I'm way outnumbered," said Shun. (Switch Scene to the battlefield. The remaining good forces rejoin.) "So, Teru, how has it been these past two years," asked Nila. "Fine. Being promoted to Jounin was the best thing that could have happened to me after losing to you and shaming the village. I've spent the last two years being in tune with the earth. With private lessons from Kazekage, I rose to Jounin and I was sent in here by the higher ups because they had faith in my ability. Seeing you here, I'm sure the same is true for you, right," smiled Teru. "well, umm," mumbled Nila. (Several minutes worth of time passes as the ignorant are briefed on the information that had gone down.) "So, that was what went down here," said Zig. "Apparently, The Hokage saw this coming," said Blake. "I had to put up that wall to stop them from interfering with the process of sealing up that mass of chakra," said Teru. "It seems the Hokage called it right, the meteor has indeed decreased in magnitude," said Blake. Though if it wasn't for Dosa, this whole mission would have failed," said Hiro. "Ahh, whatever. Don't think I've forgotten that rematch," said Dosa. "You put up that Wall Teru? Wow, you must have become amazing since I've last fought you," said Nila. "That wall isn't all that great you know," mumbled Zig. "Heh, jealous I see," said Laya. "Fuck you," said Zig. (Hiro smiles. Ryu crashes in.) "Hey, while you guys dilly dally, I took the inititive and checked out where Asura was headed. And he is headed towards the meteor with the mist swordsmen, now its not even in the sky anymore. I don't know what's going on, but I can't fight all those swordsmen by myself," yelled Ryu. (Everyone is shocked. The Scene switches to the site. Shun is being straggled by one of the swordsmen while Asura seals up the meteor using one of his own scrolls.) "Now I can take this back to the headquarters. You guys finish him off," said Asura as he vanishes with the sealed meteor's chakra in his grasps. (Shun is tossed to the ground the straggler switches places with a man using a familure blade. The one swordsman wielding Kisame's Shark Skin, prepares to strike the defenseless Shun, but is stopped by a blade from Blake. ) "Kill the intruder," said one of the mist swordsmen. "I wouldn't do that. You guys don't want to mess with us," said Zig. "Shun, are you all right," said Hiro. (Dosa rushes in and scoops up Shun with fast reflexes and returns to the gathering of the good guys.) "Mr. Shun," yelled Nila. "Nila, Hiro, everyone, thanks, but he got away with the meteor," said Shun. "We'll worry about that later," said Hiro. (Blake swiftly returns to his position with the others. The swordsman surronds all of them and then launches at them with their blades. Teru places his hands on the ground.) "Earth style: Protective Dome," yelled Teru. (An earth like dome covers them, temporarily protecting them for the swordsmen's attacks. Switch Scene to Mizukage's office. Two SNA higher ups meets with Mizukage.) "You lying scum bag. Do you know you back stabbed us," said Tank. "I've gave you 5 correct locations," said Mizukage. "I should shake your brain loose. Do you know what happened when some of our aide were sent to scout the other 3 areas of interest? The Land of Iron has remained untouched by shinobi for half a centuary. Due to its power, even wet works like us don't touch it, but we believed that we could get some important data before launching a suprise raid. You told us that the reason the last 3 Bijuu where so hard to find, was because of where they were stationed. Yet we found nothing, and we lost valuable aide to their government. Now their organization has its eyes on us. Not just that, we also searched the Renewed Whirlpool country, and since the war, Konoha, Suna, and Kumo has used their ties and wealth from the last war to establish a powerful government there. Even our top agents were snuffed out and again, no location of the tailed beast was established from the other three locations you specified. I don't even want to bring up the Demon country. You were trying to fuck us over. You know since the uprising of the SNA and the under the table dealings with many other small countries and villages that the other 4 great shinobi nations have kept their eyes on us. We can't afford to have our organization out in the cold like that, not yet! Where's the three other Bijuu you are hiding, and why did you set us up? Give me a fucking answer before I get to pounding the body of this pathetic excuse for a person standing in front of me," said Tank. (Mizukage smiles.) "I was testing you. To see if you guys were the right guys to ask for a collaboration," said Mizukage. "Test my ass, I'd like to give you a pop quiz. I don't think you'd like the pop part," said Tank. "Settle down Tank, we need to remember what we came for," said Sakuya. "I won't tell you anything until I'm sure the Bijuu fusing mechanism is going along nicely. And how am I not sure you guys won't double cross me and take the Bijuu for yourselves? My village's future vias for the project. And if you guys aren't willing to commit, I'll take my business elsewhere. Now, I need data and results before I commit to your objectives and offer you aide. There is no agreement if the project hasn't even succeeded yet," said Mizukage. (Tank starts cracking his knuckles.) "You must think I'm not too bright! Bitch I'll break your face if I don't get answers," said Tank. "Is that so," smirked the Mizukage. (Tank's eyes go blood shot.) "This bitch thinks I'm dickin around. Time's up! You bout to get fucked up," yelled Tank. "Deal's off then," said Mizukage. (Immediately 4 Mizukage Aides guards the Mizukage.) "I'll gladly murder all of you," yelled Tank. (He balls up his fists and goes into a striking stance. Sakuya places her arm in front of the Tank.) "You're in the way," said Tank. "Hey now! I said Calm down. Stop acting like an idiot, remember what the boss said? This is no way to strike deals. I'll speak for you now on since you have no manners and will ruin everything. Please forgive him for his negligence. Our underling, Asura, who is a field examiner has already begun the project. If everything has gone successfully, he should have the data required for establishing such a method," said Sakuya. "Asura hmm? He didn't quite mention the project in detail," said Mizukage. "We need the tailed beasts in order to ignite the fusion between all of them in the high density mass of chakra. Asura should be strengthening it right now. I understand you smuggled detailed information regarding the tailed beasts during the war. We will forget all your misdeeds if you come clean with their whearabouts. And I also understand that this village is home to one of them," said Sakuya. (Switch scene to Asura. He is rushing back to headquarters.) "Damn, and after the boss trusted me with his work. I needed more time. If I had just one more hour, the growth process would have been suffice. But with the damage the Hokage done to it, I'll need a lot of time. It took years to compose the data, now it is all for nothing. Damn it, If I begin work in secret and then launch the meteor project again to finish the growth preparation, perhaps I can avoid the boss's warth," said Asura. (Switch Scene to the outskirts of the Waterfall Village. Oita and Michi scout out man patrols who are currently on guard duty.) "We where told that this was one of the correction locations," said Oita. "Yeah... From what I understand the Bijuu, Shichibi has been bounded into an infact 18 years ago, 11 years before the 4th shinobi war," said Michi. "I believe around half of the tailed beasts were bounded to hosts after the demise of Akatuski decades ago. I've heared there were a couple who retainted their Bijuu and lived through Akatuski's rule," said Oita. "Yeah, Uzumaki Naruto, who was made Hokage a few years after Akatuski disbanded during the age of disarmament and Killer Bee, who was the brother of a former Raikage. We weren't given details on his whereabouts though," said Oita. "That schemer Mizukage probably knows," said Michi. "Well we can't worry about that right now. We need to capture the Shichibi. Apparently, she is an extremely powerful host," said Oita. (Michi licks her face.) "I can't wait to test my abilities out on her," smiled Michi. "We'll this isn't a field trip," sighed Oita. (Switch scene to a battle from a training hall inside a waterfall cave. A beautiful young woman with long white hair, waterfall headprotector on, dawning a wonderfully knitted kimono stands firm, while many shinobi lay unconscious.) "Training's over for today I guess. Gosh, I hope I didn't hurt them too badly," gently smiled Aya. (Switch Scene to SNA headquarters. Ino Shik Cho arrives and nonchantly tosses Raitie's broken body down on the floor.) "Good. After she recovers, I have a proposition to make," said Tetsuo __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-02-2009 at 02:56 AM.

09-02-2009, 02:18 AM	#30
The Special One Kage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oakpark, Michigan Age: 22 Posts: 5,054 Thanks: 884 Thanked 4,449 Times in 1,550 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! Next Time: The SNA's higher ups makes a move. Now with Asura failing to produce results, how will this affect the decision of the Mizukage to strike a deal with the SNA? Michi and Oita closes in on the Host from the waterfall village. Background information: Aya: She is a spectaculor Kunoichi. She is the embodiment of pureness in every sense of the word. Her fair skin, long white hair, and innocent face tricks many into underestimating her, which causes her to drastically get the upperhand on her opponets. Many of her skills are unknown however, Michi and Oita are sure not to underestimate her, and regards her as a threat. __________________ The Specialist, forever http://forums.narutocentral.com/showthread.php?t=24201 ^My first thread.lol Last edited by The Special One; 09-02-2009 at 02:58 AM.

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