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The scene it's switched. It shows Naruto watching over Sasuke's body.
Outside the room Sakura is talking with Hinata. Sakura: He is there for days. He wouldn't leave the room. Hinata: He cared for Sasuke... Sakura crying: Sasuke...was like a brother to him...that's why i called you here Hinata. Hinata: I don't get it. Sakura: I thought that maybe...maybe you could talk to Naruto... Hinata blushing: Why me!?! Sakura: Come on Hinata...didn't you see how he looks at you? Please...give it a shot! Hinata: O...okay...i will... Hinata enters the room. Naruto turns around and looks at her Naruto: Hinata... Hinata: Naruto... Naruto: Did Sakura sent you? Hinata: Yeah...she is worried about you...she misses Sasuke too...but there is nothing you can do by sitting here. Naruto: I know...i wanted to leave...but something keeps me here... Hinata: Naruto...i feel the same way, you know... Naruto surprised: How so? Hinata: I wanted to leave something behind...but i couldn't ...even though it hurt me to do nothing...it felt the better way. I wasn't able to get over it, and probably i will never be able to do it.* Naruto: Hinata...what are...what are you talking about? Hinata as she goes closer to Naruto: I'm talking...i'm talking about....i'm talking about you...Naruto... The panel shows*us how Hinata's face goes closer and closer to Naruto. The last panel shows us how they kiss, and how Sasuke's body is enveloped in a bright light and vanishes. The panel shows Raiden and Vishnu. Raiden: Who are you talking about? A dark light is seen. Unknown: He is talking about me. Raiden quickly turns around and he spots Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is wearing the same black outfit, but now with red stripes accros it. He has his sword again. The look in his eyes is very intense. Sasuke with the Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan in his eyes: Raiden... Raiden: You should be dead. Sasuke: I should. I heared about your plan. You will never suceed. You cannot even grasp the Creator's energy, and you want to overthrow him? You must be insane. Vishnu shocked: Sasuke...Sasuke talked to the Creator? So that's why Naruto wasn't able to revive him! Raiden: Sasuke...indeed i didn't anticipated this...but it doesn't matter. I will still win. Vishnu: You will lose Raiden. Trust me. You will lose this game. Sasuke: And i will make sure that you will die violently when this is over. Raiden as he slowly vanishes: Well then...i declare you war...and you will beg mercy when this will be over... Raiden completly vanishes from their sight. Vishnu: He was just an astral projection. Sasuke: Vishnu...good to meet you finally. Vishnu: Same. How do you know about the Creator's energy? Sasuke: I've felt it. I talked with him. He brought me back to life and gave me a sign for you. Vishnu falls to his knees: A sign!!! A sign from the Creator! Show it to me! Sasuke takes of his shirt and turns around, in order for Vishnu to see the sign on his back. The circle that has three numbers inside it. Vishnu with a shocked look: The Golden Ratio!!!* Vishnu starts crying showing for the first time his human side. Vishnu: I knew it...i knew that the Creator didn't forgot about us... Sasuke puts back his shirt and turns around. Sasuke with a menacing look : Send me back to the real world! Brahma is heading over there and I don't want Naruto to get all the glory! Vishnu: Heh...you're truly a God Slayer! The panel it's switched. It shows Brahma destroying Konoha's gates. Suddenly in front of him lands multiple ninjas. Brahma: Hmpf...humans... Naruto lands himself in front of Brahma. Naruto: I'm Uzumaki Naruto. The Sixth Hokage! Who are you? Brahma: My name is Brahma! I'm one of the Trimurti and a beyonder. You cannot oppse me human! Itachi lands close Naruto. Itachi: Hokage-sama...i talked to Vishnu. He said that help is on it's way, and that the man who was sent will arrive *in a matter of moments. Naruto smiling: Perfect. Let's see how the afterlife fits him. Itachi confused: What are you talking about? Brahma: Stop talking nonsense kid! You will die here! Brahma draws a sword covered in fire and dashes towards Naruto. The Hokage remains still. Suddenly a dark light is seen and *someone appears and grabs Brahma's hand, stoping him. Brahma: Who are you? Sasuke: Your worst nightmare! The panel shows Sakura shocked staring at Sasuke, Itachi surprised and slowly crying and all the other shinobis applauding. Naruto smiling: Welcome back...we missed you! Sasuke: Same here...now let me focus on this guy! Naruto: He is all yours.* Brahma: You don't stand a chance brat! Who are you? Sasuke smiling cruely: My name is Uchiha Sasuke. You must heard of me. I'm the God Slayer! Next chapter: Sasuke's return. The God Slayer's determination!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
So badass. One question.
What is your logic behind thinking Konohamaru will be more powerful than Naruto and Sasuke? I guess I don't see it. He has a large chakra pool but that's it and lots of good jutsus for his age but he doesn't even have the rinnegan or EMS. Unless you plan on merging their eyes into Konohamaru I don't see how he can be so powerful. |
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Thank you for the question, i hoped that you enjoyed the fanfic
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Yeah, i also intend to use it as a catalist for the next events. Thank you.
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Will Naruto fight Shiva? I'm just waiting for him to fight and see his full power. No rush though.
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Shiva is one of the most powerful enemies i've created. Much more powerful then Brahma.I cannot say anything yet but Shiva's power wasn't shown so far. Of course, he will need a very powerful enemy in order to show his entire power.
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I know it was fast but this it's the chapter that starts the real action. Hope you enjoy it.
Naruto: Alliances Panel shows Sasuke facing Brahma. Sasuke: Heh...Brahma huh? Brahma: Why the superority? Sasuke: I already killed two of your most powerful assassins. What makes you think that you will survive me? Brahma smiling: Two facts. The first one: You died fighting Narasimha. I admit that was quite a feat to take him down too. And the second: I'm much more powerful then you are. Sasuke: You really belive that don't you? Naruto: Sasuke... Sasuke: What is it Naruto? Naruto: You had your share of gods. Let me deal with Brahma. Sasuke: Are you sure? Naruto: Yeah...i must stretch a little. Brahma laughing: Last time you faced a god you used a petty trick. What makes you think that you can defeat me? Naruto smiling: Well...first of all...i'm currently above the gods power except for Vishnu. Second of all...neither of you have witnessed me in a battle. So you don't know what to expect from me. Sasuke on the other hand, used an array of jutsus that you might know how to counter. Why should he waste his energy on you, since i'm already here. Brahma: Well then kiddo...i assume that you want to die. I will make it happen. Naruto as he activates the Rinnegan: You sent assassins to threaten my villagge and my friends's lives...you tried to destroy our world...your assassin nearly killed Sasuke...i cannot stand and watch anymore. Prepare yourself Brahma. You will have the unique chance to observe the full extent of the Sixth Hokage's wrath! Brahma raises his hands and he gets enveloped in a flame armor. He also makes a quick handsign. Brahma: The power of the Sun is in my hands! I'm the primordial force! You cannot defeat me human! Brahma: Creation energy! Fire golem! A fire golem emerges from the ground. It has a huge sword and he is quite big. Naruto smiles. The fire golem quickly dashes towards Naruto. He is really fast. He tries to slash Naruto but the latter dodges the attack. Naruto turns around forming a blade of wind. He clashes with the golem and manages to slash the beats. But the golem reforms itself and spits a fireball towards Naruto. Naruto makes a spin in the air,dodging the fireball, and two handsigns. Naruto: Water release! Water prison! From the ground emerges four water pillars that hits the golem at full power. The golem vanishes for a moment but then it reappears. Brahma laughing: You cannot stop him with water! Naruto appears in fromt of the golem and gives him a kick. While the golem is in the air Naruto throws four kunais at him. When the kunais are near him Naruto makes quickly some handsigns. Naruto: Four points restraining barrier! A blue dome envelopes the golem and it restrains him. Brahma releases his energy creating a huge crater around him. He suddenly dashes towards Naruto and he attempts to land a punch. Brahma shouting: Planteray destroying punch! The scene gets freezed in the moment when Naruto simply catches his punch and breaks the bones in Brahma's hand. Brahma dashes back quickly. Brahma thinking: What was that!?! How could he do it! It's impossible! Naruto: You see Brahma...you cannot defeat me.* Suddenly Naruto appears behind Brahma with an orange flash and gives him a punch that breaks the god's right shoulder. Naruto: Because, i'm far superior... He appears again in front of Brahma and he destroyes the god's ribcage. Naruto: Both in power and intelligence. Brahma: Damn you! Damn you! How can you be so powerful?!? Naruto makes a few steps back.* Naruto: So powerful? I only gave you a small portion of my taijutsu.* Brahma raises his left hand. Brahma: Solar assault! He sends an enourmous beam of fire towards Naruto. The latter just looks at it and then he raises his hands too. Naruto: Shinra Tensei! The attack gets nullified leaving Brahma shocked. Naruto: You've made a mistake by coming here. A big mistake. And you will pay for it,with your life. Naruto creates a Rasenshuriken in his right arm. Then, he infuses it with Kurama's chakra. The Rasenshuriken glows red. Naruto as he throws the Rasenshuriken at Brahma: Kurama Rasen Shuriken!!! The Rasenshurkien hits Brahma and severs him in half.* But the god vanishes. Naruto: Interesting. Brahma appears behind Naruto and attempts to strike him. Naruto quickly dodges and he makes a few steps back. Brahma: You though that you can kill me so easily? Get real brat! Brahma makes another quick handsign. Suddenly Naruto is in front of him holding a rasengan. Naruto slams the Rasengan on Brahma throwing the god dead on the ground. But Brahma's body vanishes again.* Naruto: So that's how he does it. Brahma appears several meters away. Brahma: You will never be able to kill me! Never! Naruto: Heh...it seems that i will have to use something special on you. Brahma's fire armor gets more intense. Brahma: Prepare yourself! Supernova attack! Naruto: Heavenly path! Short meditation! Brahma sends a huge beam that destroyes everyhing in it's path towards Naruto. When the beam it's about to hit Naruto the image stops. Like the time was freezed. Brahma is moving in slow motion. Naruto is the only one moving normal. He makes a handsign and he creates a clone several meteres from the beam. The clone raises his hands towards it. The real Naruto makes a few steps towards Brahma as the time gets to it's normal flow. Clone Naruto: Shinra Tensei!!!!!! The clone manages to negate the attack and gets destroyed by the wave of energy released.*
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Brahma confused: What just happend!?!
Naruto appears behind him. The next panel shows us Brahma's shocked face. Naruto: I used my Rinnegan to stop the time for a few seconds. Then I created a clone that would protect the villagge from your assault. The panel shows us Brahma's complete body. He has a huge slash on his chest. Naruto: Also...you didn't had time to use that power of yours. I noticed how you did a handsign just a few seconds before i attacked you. Your power is simmilar with that of the Izanagi. But you just decompose yourself in e moment of an attack, leaving an afterimage. Then you recompose yourself. But i didn't let you do it this time. Oh, amd you got slashed by a blade of wind if you're thinking about how you got that. Brahma: Impressive... Naruto: You will not going to die. I will need you for interogation. Brahma: Who said that you got me already? Don't get cocky brat!!! Suddenly Brahma starts glowing red. Brahma: Release the power and endure the wrath of the Sun God!!!! Brahma's power release shakes the ground and the image shows him holding a flame sword and being enveloped in larger flames. Naruto: Interesting. The power of the Trimurti... Brahma:You don't get it kiddo...the Sun itself is the source of my energy.* Naruto with a dangerous smile: Well then...i guess that i will have to extinguish the Sun! The panel shows Naruto inside his mind talking with Kurama. Naruto: You heared him.* Kurama: Yeah...i did. Naruto: So...lend me some of your power. I will show him what it means to be powerful! Kurama: Don't be reckless Naruto. His power it seems to be vast. Naruto: Don't worry i have a plan! Scene it's switched back to the present. Brahma: Witness my power!!! Naruto closes his eyes and reopens them revealing himself in Sage Mode but with Rinnegan eyes. Around him it starts to glow a red chakra enveloping him in a shroud. Naruto makes a few handsigns: Sealing jutsu! Nine layers Barrier dome! Sasuke: Minato, Jiraya, Sarutobi sensei, Brother! All: Got it! The five of them make the same handsigns at the same moment. Sasuke, Minato, Sarutobi, Jiraya and Itachi: Sealing jutsu! Five energy seals barrier! A large orange dome appears, that surrounds Naruto and Brahma. The third makes handsigns: Earth release! Giant earth wall! He creates a giant earth wall that protects the villagge behind him. Jiraya makes handsigns: This comes from Orochimaru! Summoning technique! Six Rashomon gates! Six Rashomon gates appears in front of the earth wall. Minato makes himself a couple of handsigns: Water release! Water wall! A giant water wall appears in front of the Rashomon gates. Sasuke makes two handsigns: Wind release! Freezing breathe! The wind that Sasuke used turns the water wall into an ice wall. Itachi: Mangekyou Sharingan! Susano'o! Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Susano'o! Their two Susano'o guards the Rashomon gates.* Brahma: What is this?!? Naruto: Let me explain to you. It's the protection for Konoha. So our battle wouldn't destroy it. First we got the Third's earth wall. The wall is guarded by six Rashomon gates. In front of the gates there is a ten meter ice wall. The ice wall is protected by Itachi's Susano'o and finally Itachi is protectedby Sasuke's Susano'o. Also we got my nine layers barrier that it's surrounded by a five seal barrier. Brahma: There will be no battle! You will die in amatter of moments! You overestimate yourself! Naruto: We shall see. Brahma quickly dashes towards Naruto, but the Hokage dissappears. Naruto reappears behind Brahma and hits him with a Rasenshuriken. The jutsu had no impact on the god. Naruto: Interesting. Let me show you...what it means to be powerful. Two Kyuubi hands emerge from Naruto's back. Naruto rises his right hand and he starts forming a Rasengan. The Kyuubi hands merge Kurama's own chakra in the Rasengan. Naruto also adds his wind nature and the Natural Energy chakra. The earth is shaked by the amount of power deployed by Naruto. The air gets thick and the atmosphere heats up. Naruto throws a menacing glare at Brahma. Naruto: This is your end...Brahma, Sun God! Brahma quickly releases all his power in his rand hand. Brahma shouts: Big Bang Supernova!!!!!! He releases a fire beam towards Naruto. The beam has so much power that it burns the atmosphere in its way. Naruto holds a giant red Rasenshuriken that spins violently. Naruto dodges the attack from Brahma. The beam goes straight through the barriers and it's barely stoped by Sasuke's Susano'o. Sasuke thinking: What power! Naruto: Flying Thunder God! He dissappears and reappears behind Brahma with an orange flash. Naruto shouts: Wind release! Ultimate Kurama Sage Mode Rasengan!!!!!! Brahma doesn't have the neccessary time to dodge and he gets hit by the Rasengan. The attack creates a huge blast that throws Sasuke and Itachi away and destroy every other defences. As the blast is going towards Konoha, Sasuke appears in front of it,making handsigns. Sasuke shouting: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic ways! Shield of Darkness! A shield made of black metal appears in Sasuke's Susano'o hand. The Susano'o uses the shield to stop the blast and manages to keep it away from the villagge. As the dust clears up the panel shows the place where Naruto and Brahma fought. It's an enormous crater. We can see two people standing. Naruto and Brahma. Brahma has severe wounds. He is missiong his left eye and arm, he has burns all over his body and hecoughs blood. Brahma with a whispered voice: Impossible! He has access to a power of a God! Our power!
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Naruto: I warned you that you won't survive. You didn't listen. In case you're wondering this is not my power. It's the Natural energy that i use and Kurama's own power. That's why you cannot defeat me.
Brahma thinking: Dammit! His power overcomed mine! One of the Trimurti! I cannot die like this! Not me! Not in front of him! Brahma quickly turns around and he raises his right arm. Brahma: You!!! You will die here with me!!!! Superno... A red flash is seen and Brahma stops from delivering the attack and he has a shocked look on his face. The panel shows us his entire body. His chest it's impaled by a blade. Naruto looks at the man behind Brahma. A*man, that has long black hair, a large scar on his face, a muscular posture and a murderous intent in his eyes.He wears a tight black jumpsuit with red braces and boots. Brahma: Why? Why did you betrayed me?!? Quintrix:You're no longer useful to us. Shiva had to do this but he attended another mission in the meantime. So i had to come to clean up this mess. Brahma: I don't understand.... Quintrix: Fool. You really thought that we wanted you as the Supreme God? Our aim is to bring Livontes back! You were just in pawn in Master's hands! Brahma with his last breathe: He...he will....he will betray you too, Quintrix...mark my words.. Quintrix smiling: I don't think so...goodbye Brahma. Quintrix takes his sword out of Brahma's chest. The God falls on the ground dead. Quintrix: One of the Trimurti has died here today.* Naruto: Who are you ? Quintrix: Let me introduce myself. I'm Quintrix. Also known as the Fallen.* Naruto: The Fallen? Quintrix: I was the first one to rebel against the Creator and the other Beyonders. Naruto: Well, since you are here and Brahma is dead...i have no choice but to capture you instead. Quintrix smiles: You think it's going to be easy, Uzumaki Naruto? You already defeated one of the most powerful gods, today. You might be out of luck with me. Naruto: I trust my luck. Suddenly Naruto appears in front of Quintrix and attempts to slash him with a wind blade. Quintrix swings his own sword and parries the attack. They exchange a few more blows, and Quintrix dashes back. Naruto: You're not going anywhere! Quintrix: I must go. I have orders. This is not the day that you will die. Quintrix dissappears only to get intercepted by Sasuke in the outskirts of Konoha. Quintrix: Heh...the God Slayer...Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke has the Spiralling EMS in his eyes and a dimensional shattering Lighhtning blade in his right arm. Sasuke smiling: You think that you can escape me? Quintrix: I hope. Sasuke vanishes and appears in front of Quintrix. He clashes his Dimensional Shattering Lightning Blade with Quintrix's sword, creating a huge blast.* Sasuke thinking: He blocked it! Quintrix makes a few steps back and raises his right hand. Quintrix: Darkness shot! He sends from the tip of his fingers a black beam towards Sasuke. In the last moment Sasuke activates his Susano'o and stops the attack.* He then, jumps from the just making handsigns. Sasuke: Spiralling EMS! Demonic ways! Singularity! He shots himself another black beam towards Quintrix, but the god dodges it. The beam destroyes the ground. Quintrix: Impressive. But i'm afraid i must go. Sasuke appears in front of him and tries to slash him with his sword, that it's covered in Amaterasu flames. But he hits an empty stop. Quintrix already vanished but his voice is heared like an echo. Quintrix: Next time, Sasuke...next time we will put our lives on the line! Sasuke thinking: Next time, huh... The panel shows Yama and Konohamaru inside a room.With them is a group of men dressed in blue robes, each having two swords, five knives and a spear. Yama: I'm surprised by you. You killed a Beyonder. Even thoughh it wasn't a very powerful one, but still... Konohamaru: He wasn't that tough. And thanks to my training i'm already much more powerful then many Jounins in Konoha. Yama: Indeed. Now...let's prepare for the war. Yama shouts : Blue Guard! Be prepared! Captains one step forward! Four men make a step forward. Yama: Shiro! Tadao! Lenn! Senkai! Are you prepared to lead your men against any enemy that may come?!? All of them: We are ! Yama: Good. Then...Shiro you will guard the north side, Tadao you will go in the west, Lenn you will have the south, Senkai you will have the east. Prepare the armies and wait in the main court for Loed Vishnu. He will give you more details. As all the men leave the room Konohamaru looks at Yama. Konohamaru: What's going on? Yama: One of the Trimurti, Brahma was killed. It means that a war is about to start. His death means that the things are already in motion. Konohamaru: A war? But who would oppose you? What army do they have? Yama: You know that i'm the god of death right? Konohamaru: I do.* Yama: Well...there is one...with a greater power...the one who offers the deads a place to reside. The King of Hell.... Konohamaru: The King of Hell? Yama: His name is Nirriti the black. He rules over the dead people. Konohamaru: And what's his connection here? Yama: He wasn't quite Vishnu's fan. He joined Shiva in his quest to destroy us. Since Brahma wasn't killed by Shiva, we have reasons to belive that he will come with an army to attack us. That's why we must be prepared for anything. Suddenly a lightning strucks Vishnu's tower. Yama looks at it. Yama: There is little time left...let's go...Vishnu waits for us.
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The panel shows Vishnu's tower. Konohamaru and Yama enters the room.
Vishnu: Konohamaru come here. We must start your training as soon as possible. Konohamaru: Ok. I was waiting for this! Vishnu: I will teach you how to access energies that the human kind wasn't even aware! But first, you must pass a test.* Konohamaru: What test? Vishnu: You must show me that you can handle it. To prove that you will need to show enough concentration power to release yourself from the restrain i'm going to use on you. Konohamaru: Well...do it then! Vishnu: Very well...but i must warn you...if you don't manage to do it, you will die! Konohamaru: I was about to die in all my former trainings! I won't give up! Vishnu: As you wish.* Vishnu touches Konohamaru's forehead, and the kid falls down on the ground uncouncious. Vishnu: If he manages to wake up, he will be on the right path. Yama: He will. You didn't saw what he did to Mara. Vishnu: Raw power is not the only thing he needs... Scene it's switched. It shows Shiva walking a dark hallway. He enters a large room where in the middle it's a throne. On the throne it's a man dressed in a black armor. He has long dark hair and red eyes. Shiva: King of Hell...Nirriti... Nirriti: Shiva...why have you comed? Shiva: I belive that you're already aware. Nirriti: Indeed...you want me to join you. You want to unleash the power of my army against the Celest City. But i think that you don't know the forces that you're messing with. If Vishnu was weak i would have already conquered the Celest City.But he is much more powerful then us combined. So why bother to join forces with you? So i can die? No thanks. Shiva: You're right...but there is a way to defeat Vishnu. Nirriti: Yama is untouchable. Shiva: But if a war strucks out... Nirriti: Yama could be exposed. Vishnu would concentrate on stoping the invaders..and that could be the chance to take Yama down and bring chaos upon the inner balance of the Celest City. But Vishnu himself is not one to be neglected. If he shows up on the battlefield my army would be decimated.* Shiva: But it would give us the necessary time to kill Yama. Nirriti: And who will face Vishnu's wrath on the battlefield in order to keep him away from Yama? Shiva: We will! Nirriti: It's a tempting offer, Shiva... Shiva: I need you...i need your force in order to suceed. Nirriti: And what's my gain here? Shiva: I will release you from this hell! You will no longer have to be the General of the Deads. Nirriti: You don't have the power to do that. Only Vishnu currently has that power and I am sure that he won't release me. Shiva with a menacing look: Currently, only Vishnu holds that power...but there was one...that could release you... Nirriti suddenly understands: Livontes... The panel it's switched. It shows Naruto and Sasuke talking with Ishmu's hologram. Vishnu: The war is about to begin. Shiva will trick Nirriti to come against us. He is the King's Hell and he has under his command a large army of corpses. Their plan is to keep us away from Yama and to assassinate him. That way, they will suceed in destabilizing the order in our world and it would ensure my downfall and thus, the destruction of your world. Raiden's plan was indeed briliant. Naruto: I still cannot belive that he planned this. That he orchestred everything. Vishnu: We fell for it. And now we must make a stand against him. Because he is no longer a threat just for you, but he is a threat against the Creator.* Sasuke: What do you want us to do? Vishnu: Come to the Celest City. I need you here in order to fight the army that will attack us. I need you to be my generals. Because i have to protect Yama. Naruto with a determined look on his face: We will come. And we will protect your world. I swear on my title of Hokage! The image it's switched. It shows Konohamaru in his mind. He is floating in some kind of void. He opens his eyes. Konohamaru: Where am I? What is this? Suddenly another Konohamaru appears dressed in black. Konohamaru: You're...me!?! Second Konohamaru: I'm your inner spirit. Do you know why are you here? Konohamaru: This is part of my training...i guess... Second: Exactly. But in order to wake up...you have to defeat me. If you do it...you will wake up...but if you don't...you will die. Konohamaru tries to activate his Raiton armor but he doesn't manage. Konohamaru: What the....?!? Second: Oh, i forgot. You cannot use ninjutsu here! Prepare yourself! I'm coming after you! The ground forms itself and they sit on it. The second Konohamaru attemps to hit the original one with a Rasengan. Konohamaru makes a few steps back and dodges the attack.* Konohamaru thinking: Dammit...i have to defeat him without my powers...but how?!? Suddenly he gets hit by the false one and he crashes into the ground. Konohamaru: Dammit!* He dodges another Rasengan attack and he starts running. Second: Coward! You cannot escape me! Konohamaru thinking: I cannot use any of my ninjutsu, or the Sage Mode...i'm without defence against him...what should i do? Suddenly he remembers something Sasuke said. Flashback. Sasuke talking to Konohamaru. Konohamaru: I find it hard sometimes... Sasuke: What? Konohamaru: Everyone expects some much of me...but i'm afraid that i'm lacking the power ... Sasuke smiling: Konohamaru...never forget this...there may be situations when your ninjutsu skills are useless against an enemy. In that moment remember...that the true power comes from the heart and not from the array of ninjutsus that you mastered. The guts to stand up proud and face your enemy with determination and courage, the confidence that you will win no matter what...it's more powerful then any ninjutsu!
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Back to Konohamaru's mind.
Konohamaru thinkng: That's right! Sasuke-sensei was right!* He suddenly turns around and catches the second Konohamaru's hand.* Second: What the!?! Konohamaru with a determined look in his eyes: I'm a Sarutobi! I cannot lose until i'm Hokage! And you will not stop me! Because i'm fighting with my heart!!! He releases the fake one and makes a few steps back, then he punches the second's jaw so hard that it throws him several meters away. As the second rises up he sees Konohamaru above him, holding a giant Rasengan. Second Konohamaru: Impossible! You shouldn't be able to use ninjutsu! Konohamaru shouting: This is my mind! And my power is not held by chakra! It's held by my heart! Take this bastard! Gargantuan Rasengan!!!!!!! Konohamaru slams the giant Rasengan in the fake one causing a giant blast. As the dust clears up we can see him standing proud on his feet. Konohamaru: Sasuke-sensei was right! I can never give up! The image shows Vishnu's large chamber. The God is Standing at the window. Suddenly Konohamaru gets up. Vishnu turns around and looks at him. Konohamaru: Well? Vishnu: I'm proud of you! Let's begin step 2! The image shows Naruto and Sasuke on the Hokage mountain. Sasuke: Well? Naruto: We're going. We cannot afford Vishnu's fall. Sasuke: I thought so. When do we leave? Naruto: Tomorrow morning.* Sasuke: Got it! The panel shows Naruto in his office. It's night. Hinata enters the office. Hinata: Naruto... Naruto: Hinata i called you here for a reason. In the morning i'm leaving with Sasuke. We are going to face our most powerful enemy.* Hinata: What are you saying? Naruto: I'm saying that we could not return...and i wanted to tell you something...Hinata...i..i lov... Suddenly Hinata is in front of him and covers his mouth with her palm. Hinata smiles: Tell me when you get back, Ok? The scene shows Sasuke standing on Hashirama's head, on the Hokage mountain. Suddenly a woman lands near him. Sasuke: Sakura... Sakura: It's true that you're leaving tomorrow morning with Naruto? Sasuke: It's true... Sakura: Do you really have to go? Sasuke: Yeah..i cannot tell you.. Sakura: I don't want to know where are you going. I just want to know that i will see you again. Sasuke: That's not a promise that i can make Sakura...neither me or Naruto...you don't know what forces are we about to challenge... Sakura as she gets her face very close to Sasuke's : I trust you. I know that you will get back.* Sasuke: Sakura...i... The scene it's switched. It shows Shiva and Nirriti looking at an army of dead bodies. Shiva: I'm impressed Nirriti. How many? Nirriti: A million. Shiva shocked: That..that many? Nirriti: Don't underestimate the Celest City, Shiva...it may be to little... The scene it's swithced. It shows Naruto and Sasuke at the front gate. Around them are Kakahsi, Minato, Jiraya, Itachi, Tsunade, The Third, Kakashi, Sakura and Hinata. Kakashi: Take care you two... Sasuke: We will... Naruto: Tsunade...send people to the other Kages. I left four sealed letters in my office for them. The letters must arrive at them as soon as possible. Tsunade: Got it. Be careful, Naruto... Naruto: Sure. Sakura and Hinata are slowly crying. Minato: Son...whatever enemy you're going to face there...don't ever forget...that you're the Sixth Hokage!* Naruto: I won't father! Itachi: Sasuke...in a world of darkness...you're the light of the Uchiha clan. We are proud of you! And we trust that you will come back!* Sasuke smiling: I will be back, brother! Naruto: Dad...in case that i'm not going to return...you have a letter in my office. It will unseal itself if something happens to me. Minato smiling: What are you talking about? You will return Naruto! You're my son and i trust you! Naruto smiling: Heh...then..let's go Sasuke... He throws the diamond on the ground. Sasuke: We're ready. A light bursts out of the diamond and envelopes the two of them. When the light vanishes they dissappeard. Jiraya: What do you think Sensei? The Third: I trust them. They proved their power before and i'm sure that they will stop the threat.* Sakura: But we don't even know what they are up against!!! Kakahsi has a tear in his eye: That's because they wanted us to protect the villagge. They took the burden and they will carry it until the very end. We have to trust them!
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The scene it's switched. It shows Konohamaru and Vishnu entering a large white room.
Konohamaru: What are we doing here? Vishnu: This is the place for step 2. I see that you have a sword. Take it out. Konohamaru takes out his sword. Vishnu creates one from his palm. He has a long sword decorated with a hawk head on the hilt. Konohamaru: Wow! Nice sword! Vishnu: Thank you. Now let me explain what we are going to do here. But first...attack me. Konohamaru: What? Vishnu: You heared me. Attack me with any ninjutsu that crosses your mind. But there is one condition. Your sword must have an active part during the attack. You can go all out. Konohamaru: Got it... Vishnu: Then..ready! Set! Go! Konohamaru dissappears with a red flash. He appears behind Vishnu and attempts to strike him with the sword, but Vishnu turns around and blocks the attack. Konohamaru makes a few steps back and he thrusts the blade in the ground. He starts making handsings. The cloth on his right arm falls on the ground revealing e black dragon tatoo. Konohamaru:**Darkness release! Mystical dragon assault sword! The black dragon gets channeled through e sword. Konohamaru dashes towards Voshnu and clashes his sword with the god's own blade. Vishnu easily breaks the dragon. Konohamaru: Impossible! Vishnu: Ok. Time to stop. Konohamaru puts his sword away. Konohamaru: What's the point of this training? Vishnu: You saw that with ninjutsu you cannot defeat me. The only way to understand what i meant is to try and to feel the sword. Konohamaru: To feel the sword? Vishnu: Indeed. Sit down here. Meditate. And try to understand the sword. You'll get it eventually. When you do it, i will be back. Konohamaru: Wait! But it's too late. Vishnu already vanished. Konohamaru: Well...i should give it a try! The scene it's switched. It showsYama leading *Naruto and Sasuke towardsVishnu's large room. At the same moment another panel shows Shiva and Nirriti leading a grand army towards the Celest City. Another panel shows the Blue Guard watching over their sectors. Another panel shows Konohamaru sitting on the ground with the sword on his lap and with his eyes closed. Another panel shows Shiva's determined eyes. Another scene shows us Raiden on the top of a cliff. Multiple meteors sre falling around him, enveloping everything in fire. The panel shows Raiden's determined face and his Spiralling eyes. Raiden to himself: Your move Vishnu!* *The last panel shows Vishnu's tower. The top of the tower it's hit by multiple lightnings. The scene shows us that Vishnu is on the top of the tower and he is projecting those lightnings towards the sky. Also, lightnings are descending from the sky and hit the tower. The whole atmosphere it's an intense one. The last panel shows Vishnu's eyes. They have the three lightnings pattern inside them. The look in his eyes is very determined. Vishnu with an intense voice to himself: My move...Raiden!!! The end. Next chapter: Vishnu shows his power. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *Naruto and Shiva- the promised confrontation.
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Thank you. I'm already workimg on the next one, and i must say that it's halfway done.
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