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Old 02-24-2012, 03:47 PM   #361
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Hey,Vishnu i like your fanfiction, but i have one question as i saw in the last posts the naruto is weak compared to other gods and sasuke, will he get powerup?
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Naruto is currently weaker than Quintrix and Livontes. And those two are around Vishnu's power level. Sasuke gets more and more powerful with each chapter, because he learns how to acces the powers of the Spiralling EMS, powers that he didn't had before. Sasuke managed to stop Quintrix only because he was already weakened from his clash with Naruto. I cannot say if Naruto gets power ups or not. I would spoil everything, sorry man.
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Old 02-27-2012, 06:31 PM   #362
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I thought Finnegan gave access to all nature manipulation types. Why did he require kurama for three of the five elements of light release.

Good work as always. Interesting development with the perfect doujustu stuff.
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Old 02-27-2012, 08:56 PM   #363
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^ yes i had the same question ... bringing byakugan to complete the dojutsu is pretty new ... wow wat made u think abt tht?
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Old 02-28-2012, 01:32 AM   #364
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I brought Kurama's chakras because Naruto cannot manipulate properly all the powers of the Rinnegan. He is not controling it at it's full extent. And about the Byakugan...i though about that since i finnished the other fanfic. I thought that it needed to be integrated somewhere, because everyone has Rinnegan and Sharingan but the Byakugan can also be a major power factor.
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Old 02-28-2012, 12:02 PM   #365
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Not being a critic here but it seems u just kinda make sasuke look cool more than naruto sometimes just sometimes, lol Vishnu
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Old 02-28-2012, 12:13 PM   #366
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Not being a critic here but it seems u just kinda make sasuke look cool more than naruto sometimes just sometimes, lol Vishnu
I know. But I did this for a purpose. Sometimes the hero needs to be reminded that he is not almighty. With each chapter i want to reveal more. Naruto still needs development. And Sasuke....well...with him it's a different story. Let's just say that in the end the moments that made him cool will fade.
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When you answer a question Vishnu, I just have more questions lol.
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Old 02-28-2012, 02:19 PM   #368
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When you answer a question Vishnu, I just have more questions lol.
simply because i cannot answer properly a question without spoiling everything. Sorry...
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Oh I understand, just funny that's all.
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Old 02-29-2012, 09:40 PM   #370
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quick question vishnu....

i thought you had raiden being the elder son of rikkudo sennin.

so how can he be half of "the creator"?
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other than that, i have enjoyed your fanfic.
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^ i think the ans could be that raiden never claimed himself to be elder son.... it was madara whofirst suggested it, i think.. i dont really remember
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Old 03-01-2012, 05:45 AM   #373
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There is some stuff that needs to be revealed about Raiden. I didn't do it in the previous chapter, because it needs a catalyst. You will understand soon.
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so when will the next installment be up Vishnu? Oh and try using my name as one of the villains for a change(just a request)...lol
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so when will the next installment be up Vishnu? Oh and try using my name as one of the villains for a change(just a request)...lol
I will try to use it . Anyway, my user name...it's just a coincidence. I had this whole fanfic in my mind for about a year, now and i never thought that i will wnd up using my character's name as my username.

And...guys i'm sorry for taking so long, but i need to think this, because i reached a point where if I create any plot hole, the whole fanfic will have no further logic. I have the main lines of the plot but i need to write it carefully so this chapter would answer most of the questions that have been raised so far. I had to read both of my fanfics again in order to do this one right, because it will be the best one so far. The chapters i posted led to this one. So i'm sorry but it will take another week to have it done, because i still have to study in the meantime.
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