jericho Uzimaki

Uzimaki Fan Fiction.

“A Break in the War”

Flash back scene.

Sasuke and Karin are in Tobi’s eye dimension.

Karin, “are you sure about this?”

Sasuke, “yes I am, soon as I get th eoppurtunity I have to separate from you, being around Madara is far too dangerous for you. If something were to happen…”

Karin, {he cares, he really cares?!}

Sasuke, “how would I be able to heal from my wounds in battle, I will need that advantage.”

She has a disappointed look on her face.

Forward a little, we see Karin on the ground with Sakura coming behind Sasuke.

Karin is looking at him but with her eyes partly closed.

Sasuke, (Karin, this is it now, Sakura Haruno of the Leaf is behind me, she will not strike. But the others can’t be too far. Let them take you.}

Present time.

Karin is picking the locks of her cell while around the corner and down the hall we see the two ninja that were guarding her.

Leaf ninja 1, “man this is weird we just got ready to become Chunin then this war breaks out!”

Leaf ninja 2, “yeah, were still Genin what the heck, plus we’re on guard duty.”

A voice comes from off screen, “A ninja of the Leaf s still a ninja, Genin or otherwise. I assume you have a good reason for abandoning your post?”

Leaf ninja 1, “Anbu ninja?!”

There are 3 ANBU ninja standing there.

Leaf 2, “yes sir we huh,we have no excuse. Sorry master ANBU.”
ANBU ninja1, “never mind that we are taking the prisoner now, it is time for more interrogations.”

ANBU 2, “yes, the War does not stop the fact she has information on a known rogue ninja.”

Moments later we see the ANBU walking with Karin in the center of them.

Karin, {dammit, I almost had it open til these guys showed up.}

Soon they arrive at VoTE.

ANBU 1, “okay the cost is clear.”

They all puff into smoke and reveal.

Karin, “kids? Your all just kids?!”

Konohamaru, “I am Konohamaru, future Hokage of the Leaf Village, after Naruto Uzumaki.”

Moegi, “ I am Moegi and that’s Udon, we are team Ebisu!”

Karin, “that’s cute, but what the help do you call yourself doing breaking me out like that?”

Konohamaru, “we want you to help us track someone down. We know you’re a sensor, a good one too.”

Karin, “If I refuse?”

Suddenly two shadow clones come out from bushes with a rasengan, “let’s not find out.”

Karin, “wow you kids are kinds serious huh?”

We see Itachi now moving with Sasuke still trailing him.

They both have determination in their eyes.

We cut to Naruto facing Tobi and the others standing at his side.

Tobdara standing on top of the summoned statue, “you are an over confident child, you have gained access to the Kyubi chakra I give you that, but really IF your village was any good your teacher would have trained you on that years ago.”

Killer Bee, “okay, so much for your plan, come and get this ass whooping like a man.”

Tobdara, “indeed.”

He puts his hands together then disappears and reappears behind Kakashi and Guy, “Chibaki Tensei.”

A small black sphere floats upward pulling things towards it slowly.

Naruto, {no, not that technique again. Wait it is going slower than Nagato’s, is it because he only as one Rinnengan?} “Kakashi and Guy Sense look out that’s the jutsu Pein used to trp me when we fought before.”

Kakashi, “ I think I was otherwise engaged when this was used, it doesn’t look familiar.”
{it is pulling me but not taking me with it, it is just enough to..}

Naruto, {slow us down! He did that just to slow our movements?}

Tobdara, “your comrades do not have the chakra you have, they are at their limit.”

Suddenly insects swarm all around Tobdara.

{what?}

We see Shino, Choji and Shikamaru on the sides. Choji is holding everyone in place.

Shino, “the pull of that sphere is making all of our jutsu useless except my insects but they are just a mere distraction at the moment.

Naruto, “ bee we gotta take that sphere out, you know what to do. It isn’t that powerful one good hit should do it!”

A voice, “I’m on it!”

Suddenly we see Sakura running full speed towards the sphere.

Naruto, “what?! Sakura!”

Kurama, {relax Naruto look over there.}

We see Sakura standing to the far side with a slug on her shoulder. She makes the shadow clone hand sign and winks at Naruto.

Sakura’s clone makes and impact with a double fist clubbed blow, then a huge explosion occurs afterwards.
Guy, “she strapped explosive tags to her clone as well?”

Tobi, “enough of this!”

Suddenly 100s of Zetsu emerge attacking everyone. Tobdara makes his move attacking bee and evading Naruto’s kunai at the same time.

“I will have that Bijuu, you bastard!”

We see a close up of the Rinnengan and Sharinghan.

The summoned statue starts attacking everyone as well.

There is destruction and chaos.

Naruto, “I am going to end this now, Kurama!”

He goes Bijuu mode again then he starts saying different names as he is seen all over the field destroying Zetsu, saving comrades and grabbing Bee.


Over to team Ebisu.

We see them traveling seeing the light of Naruto’s fight in the near distance.

Konohamaru, “hold on Boss, we will be there in a minute!”

Now we see Kabuto standing talking ot some one we can’t see.

“I see, now you’re here to make me cancel the Edo Tensei hmmm? Well if I do that it will end this nice little brother reunion.”

We see Sasuke behind Kabuto and Itachi is in front of him.

Itachi, “I am protecting Konoha and the entire ninja world, and in turn, I am protecting my brother. I will gladly give my existence to protect him, again.”

Sasuke, {again?}

We see Edo Madara standing atop a huge tree limb, “I grow bored with you weak Kage of this time period. The only one I have seen with any resemblence of power was that clone that was here.”

Gaara, {Naruto, even your clone makes a lasting impact.} “we are here now Madara Uchiha1”
Mei, “Yes we are the Kages of the Shinobi Alliance we will stop you and protect those dear to us.”

He smiles and then.

“Tell me, can you stop three?”

All of there eyes get bigger as this is asked.

Edo-Madara, “yes I will crush you and then crush that boy and retrieve my 9 tailed pet.”

Suddenly a coffin appears behind him that appears even stronger than the last.

Tsunade, “no you don’t…”

Edo-Madara is being pulled into the coffin.

Tsunade, Tsuchikage, get me there, now!”

Oonki swoops down and grabs her, he puts her down righ tin front of Madara, “what are you planning?”

Tsunade, “ending this, he will never come back when I am done.”

Edo Madara gets pulled into the coffin but Tsunade jumps in with him.

Raikage, “you fool woman!”

It slams shut and vanishes.

Next: “A Piece of the Puzzle is Found.”

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Gamble

Joshua the Rogue

Transformers:Generations
For NaruHina fans

First Orange knuckle head ninja

The Question

Vishnu

Amazing one Jericho.

__________________
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

jekyl_hyde

this is the continuation from my predictions in the prediction thread

A Past That Will Not Let Go

Scene shows figures on the finger- tips of Gedo Mazo. Zoom in on Tobi and Kabuto.

Tobi: You bastard, why did you summon him? I would have thought that you would have been smart enough to at least wait a little bit longer.
Tobi in thought: But something must have happened for you to summon him this early. Naruto…. you really are a menace to the society I want to create. No matter, this will work out even better for me.
Kabuto: It could not have been avoided. This shinobi alliance, they are actually more formidable than you think.
Tobi: So why did you pick these three?
Kabuto: For fun.
Tobi: Well concentrate, we can’t waste a single moment. This is going to take at least two days.

Scene switches to Sasuke, Juugo, and Suigetsu.

Suigetsu: So what do you think Sasuke?
Sasuke: Maybe that fool was close to being a genius. And to think, he worked with Danzo this whole time. That sorry son-of-a-bitch. He will reap what he sowed.
Juugo: So….. what’s on the scroll?
Sasuke: Death… and a gift.

Sasuke holds the scroll firmly in his grasp.Scene switches to Madara in the Tsukuyomi with Tsunade.

Madara: So how do you like this reality Senju bitch?!
Tsunade: I know of this technique. I’ve seen it before.
Madara: Then you know how long your body will be useless to you…. if you are able to recover from my Tsukuyomi. Right now, your fellow Kages are dying thousands of times, over and over. They’re also witnessing their loved ones perishing at my hands.

Panel shows Gaara trying to save Kankuro and Temari as they die from Amerterasu. The next panel shows Oonoki giving up on saving his village being crushed by Shinra Tensai. The next panel shows KillerBee and Darui dying at the hands of Madara’s Susanoo. The last panel shows Mei witnessing her village return to days of the Blood Myst as she is struck time and time again by the former 7 swordsmen of the myst.
Madara: And the worst part for you all, not even one second has passed in reality.
Scene switches to Naruto and Bee standing in a field ravaged by the war.

Naruto: This is the place.
Bee: But where….
Naruto: Down there

Naruto points at the ground.

Next time
Closure

jericho Uzimaki

Uzimaki Fan Fiction

“A piece of the Puzzle Is Found”


We see the battle field as many Zetsu fall and everyone is wining their battles in the Alliance.

“Son- Goku.”

We see Naruto strike the statue holding the bijuu sending it flying yards away crashing ito the already destroyed mountains from earlier.

Tobdara, “return!”

The statue vanishes. But Tobdara is all alone facing the entire Konoha 11 branch of the Alliance.

Naruto charges him instantly and before he can phase he is struck by a spiraling rasengan. He is drove into the ground by Naruto.

Tobdara, {dammit I can’t focus enough, it’s like it is destroying every fiber of my body one at a time twisting it apart.}

Later, a huge crater is seen where this took place.


Now we see Kabuto facing off with the Uchiha brothers.

Kabuto, “not so fast Uchiha, we have a guest.”

Edo Madara’s coffin pops up and exiting it is Edo-Madara holding Tsunade by the throat.

Itachi, “Lady Tsunade, “the legendary Sanin, You are Hokage now, I assum eby your robe?”

Edo-Madara, “another Uchiha member? How unfortunate we are both deceased, but I see that younger one is alive and well.”

Kabuto, “after you kill her, you will destroy these two as well.”

He drops Tsunade, “I take orders form no man, I certainly don’t follow the order to kill my own clan brothers. That is beneath even me.”

They are all shocked.
Itachi, “do I not look familiar to you? You aided me in the slaughter of our clan just 8 years ago.”

Edo-Madara, “what did you say? Slaughter of our clan?!”

Kabuto, “well, well it looks like the masked Madara took a path of the chosen route for your plan.”

Edo-Madara, “I will deal with him later.”

Tsunade, “you will deal with me now!”

Suddenly Itachi stands in between them, “I will take it from her Hokage.”

Sasuke, “Always the hero protecting someone.”

Itachi, “I rather the protect the life of someone, than avenge their death.”

Sasuke looks on with out a word.

Kabuto grabs Anko with his snakes and performs hand seals.

Edo-Madara eye turn black but then back to regular.

“You think you can take control of me boy? I am Madara Uchiha leader of the Uchiha Clan, founder of the Leaf village!”

Soon a rumbling occurs. As we see outside a giant meteor like before is headed towards them.

A thunderous crash occurs shaking the ground for miles.


We see team Ebisu.

Karin, “oh my, that was such a huge amount of chakra. It is inhuman, no one can have that much built up!”

Konohamaru, “hurry up, let’s go!”


At the HQ, we see the Kages coming in.

Raikage, “we need to find the Hokage, now!”

Sensor, “she is no where to be found sir, it may be all this chakra but I can’t find her.”

We see debris every where. Edo Madara is no where to be found but we see a Susan’oo, it is protecting Sasuke and Tsunade is laying on the ground at his feet inside of it.

Itachi has protected Anko. Kabuto is no more he is dead and the entire area is decimated.

No one is saying anything.

Some time later we see the Uchiha coming over a hill together with Tsunade and Anko in tow, they are still not awake.

The Alliance approaches the same location.

“Sasuke! Hey Sasuke!”

It is Sugeitsu with Jugo, “I have something for you. Might come in handy.”

Jugo, “who is the lady and didn’t you kill that guy holding the girl over there?”

Sasuke, “My brother is here because of a jutsu Kabuto Yakushi performed, learned from Orochimaru. This is the Hokage, Lady Tsunade.”

Tsunade waking up and standing up, “I am okay now, This changes little Sasukje, you did commit crimes and murdered innocents.”

Sasuke, “ I am not turning myself in and you are in no condition to try and stop me from leaving.”

“I am.”

Naruto is standing there in Kurama Mode with out the Fox Aura.

Itachi, “Naruto, Madara, the true Madara has gotten away. Where he is, is more important then this. Sasuke will be brought in for what he has done outside of the law. but the safety of the ninja world is still at stake.”

Suddenly a huge crash occurs sending everyone scattered, landing in random places.

It is Madara atop the Statue. He has attacked and is plowing through headed for Bee, as everyone is attempting to attack he is using his Rinnengan/EMS & Hokage jutsu keeping them all at bay.

in the last struggle he grabs Bee and as Naruto tries to release the grip he is captured too.

The statue vanishes.

We see Kurama talking to Naruto, “well brat this is where I leave you, but your tough like your mother, you will survive this.”


Naruto groggy, “Kur..am..a”

Kurama, “Before I go I am gonna give you something that was yours in the first place. A piece of you that I have been using in place of mine all theses years. Your dad took my Yin half, so I been taking yours over the years slowly making it my own, getting back to my full strength. You have a lot more to you than even you know Naruto. I ain’t getting soft , just that If this guy is gonna take me he ain’t gonna get all of me and a piece of you too. Somehow I think this won’t be the last time I …..”


Silence.


Soon we see a hazy vision of people gathered then it gets more clear. It is the Alliance they came to rescue the Two, but Bee did not survive. Darui, Omoi, and others are leaning over his body.

We see so many laid out hurt and battered. Naruto gets up and soon is walking through the area finding everyone, seeing who survived and who didn’t. til he comes to Sasuke holding Tsunade’s body with Sakura wounded crying.

Kakashi, “everyone fought hard, for your life and the Shinobi world. It is gonna be a new start, a new beginning.”

He looks over to his right, Naruto’s eyes follow.

“although not an easy one.”

Konohamaru is laid out flat on the ground.

Karin, “he saved me, he saved….you.”

“cough, cough…why you look so sad I’m not dying til I fight you for the Hokage title., cough, cough.

Naruto smiles.

Soon Raikage comes over with Samurai and shackle Sasuke and give him and Iron mask as well.
Raikage, “You didn’t think it would be all forgiven did you?”

Hinata walks over to him, “Naruto, Madara will be back to find the tailed beasts, we have 4 years to get ready. The Alliance is weak right now over what to do we are still at peace with each other but we a separate villages once again.”

Shikamaru has an arm in a sling, “Seems that all the Beasts were destroyed in the battle of jutsu and techniques used to defeat that immortal Madara.”

Yamato is there as well he makes hi sway to them, “tailed beasts wil take no longer than 4 years to regenerate, it is a mystery where they will manifest, but they will be stronger when they do.”

Itachi, comes up to them, “The ninja known as Sugeitsu is now in league with Madara, he had a scroll that he initially gave to Sasuke. It had several things on it, he took the part that showed how to do the body transfer technique.”

Guy is being helped by Lee who has bandages but is okay, “Hokage Hatake, what now?”

Kakashi, “we go home, finish rebuilding, and get ready to train like the Leaf ninja have never trained before. Say goodbye to your village counterparts they have things to do to.”

Some time later we see Naruto looking at a grave, then he looks up at the newly started stone face of Kakashi.


Across the way on the edge of a field is Sakura, “(yelling) Naruto, come on it’s the first day of Leaf wide ANBU training, your still a Genin you know!”

She turns and runs off screen.

Naruto’s face looks a bit older not much, hair is longer though.

He takes a breath, “Genin.”

Flickers out then reappears on the same edge of a field Sakura was on.



Next: “the beginning”

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Gamble

Joshua the Rogue

Transformers:Generations
For NaruHina fans

First Orange knuckle head ninja

The Question

Vishnu

After a long wait ( and i'm sorry for it) the next chapter will be up in a couple of hours. It's almost done. I'm sorry that it took this amount of time, but i had to study, and to research a bit for this one.

__________________
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

Again i'm sorry that it took so much. The next one it's already in progress. I should end it by tomorrow night.


Naruto: Departure.


The scene shows Konoha. Vishnu, Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, Minato and the Third are having a council.

Naruto: So he summoned back Livontes?
Vishnu: Exactly. Unfortunately I am the only one who can keep up with Livontes. You will have to fight Quintrix on your own.
Sasuke: I stoped him last time.
Vishnu: You stoped him because Naruto already weakend him. Trust me, if you fight him when he is at full power...i don't know the odds.
Sarutobi: What if Raiden decides to attack us at the same time? We cannot hold them both.
Itachi: We will have to do what we can.
Minato: There is an option. Me, Jiraya, Tsunade, Kakashi, the Third, Itachi and others, could try to hold Quintrix and Sasuke and Naruto to fight Raiden.
Sasuke: It's quite a desperate situation. They are both above our current power levels. We have two Beyonders available, Yama and Krishna but i don't know what they can do.
Vishnu: Yama and Krishna could hold Quintrix. So all of you could concentrate on Raiden.
Naruto: I will fight Quintrix. I will kill him myself.
Itachi: Last time he defeated you. You could lose again.
Naruto: Last time, i was worried about the village. This time i will go all out against him. Konoha got destroyed but nobody died.
Vishnu: It could be a solution...Sasuke and the others could be a match for Raiden until we are done.
Sasuke: What do you think about Livontes?
Vishnu: I don't know...we were evenly matched. It could end bad.
Sarutobi: How bad?
Vishnu: He could overcome my power. In that case we lost. Because nobody can fight those three and win.
Sasuke thinking: I have the power...the Creator granted me his power...but i will have to use it at the right moment...
Vishnu looks at him and for a second Sasuke spots on his face something awkard. Vishnu understood what Sasuke thought about.
Vishnu: We have an option for the battlefield, so the Earth won't be affected. The ruins of the Celest City. There, we can go all out. The dimension got stable.*
Naruto: Good. Because this one will be tough.*
Vishnu turns around and he looks at Sasuke.
Vishnu: I'm worried about you Sasuke.
Sasuke: What so you mean?
Vishnu: Your powers...the demonic release...it closer to Raiden's power than anything i have ever seen. Take care, so you won't succumb to it's hatred.
Sasuke smiling: Vishnu...i have witnessed all the hatred in the world. I can take it.
Minato: And now...what about Hinata?*
Vishnu: She should be safe, for a while. I think that despite the situation, Quintrix won't give her to Raiden. Because Raiden needs her eyes.
Sarutobi: But who is exactly this Quintrix? And what's his angle?*
Vishnu: I don't know...i'm sorry...I think that he wants to achieve more power anyway. But for what purpose, i don't know. He used to be one of my best friends. I don't know what made him like this.
Minato: Then...it means that this is the final clash. If we lose this...the world as we know it will end.
Vishnu: We will not allow this, Minato Namikaze. I will put my life on the line so we won't lose! Now prepare yourselves! We are leaving in three days for the ruins of the Celest City. We will have there our final showdown!

The scene shows Quintrix and Hinata. They are in a cave.

Hinata: What do you want with me?
Quintrix: Nothing, actually. I want to make Naruto the man that he must be.
Hinata: He is much more powerful then you are!
Quintrix smiles: No he isn't.
Hinata: You're just a monster! You don't care about the others! Just about achieving more power!
Quintrix: Let me tell you a little story girl. There was once a man, who accepted to make a sacrifice, in order to end the evil. A man who learned about the true mastermind of evil. A man who abandoned everything he got and he fooled his friends. He agreed to play the bad guy role and it fits him. But when the time comes, he will make the correct choice. If he still can do it. If he receives a sign.
Hinata looks at him surprised: What do you mean? Are you that man?
Quintrix smiles: I mean that you must have faith.*
He turns around and leaves.
Quintrix thinking: I'm no longer that man...

The scene shows Livontes and Raiden.

Livontes: So we march again.*
Raiden: Indeed. I granted you great powers last time. Use them properly Livontes. Defeat Vishnu, and you will rule everything. And i will be free...
Livontes: Indeed.
Raiden thinking: Fool...

The scene shows Naruto and Vishnu.

Naruto: Here is something: i don't get it how Raiden got all this power. He was the Sage's elder son.
Vishnu: I have a theory. His spirit was reborn in the elder son. That's why we never spotted him before. He took care of everything. His plan was well made. First he got banished. I think that he waited for the right moment, then he manifested himself in the elder son. He assumed that identity, and he created all the conditions for what happens today. His plan all this time, was to drag me into battle, so he can steal my powers.
Naruto: And what does he wants exactly?
Vishnu: My power, Livontes's power and the tailed beast insde you. With these elements he will be able to acces his former powers once again...and he will be able to challenge the Creator!

__________________
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

The panel shows Sasuke sleeping.*

He suddenly gets up Sweating heavily.*
Sasuke to himself: What was that!?!
He reminds his dream.

-dream-

Sasuke is shown walking towards a cliff. The panel shows a man standing there.
Sasuke: Finally...
The man turns around revealing himself as Raiden.
Raiden: Indeed...you're finally here, Sasuke...how does it feel? You lost.
Sasuke swings his sword towards Raiden's neck.

The panel shows Sasuke back in the present time.

Sasuke: What a wierd dream...

The scene shows Raiden. He is with Quintrix and Livontes.

Raiden: The fight must start. We need to march towards Konoha as soon as possible.
Livontes: Who guards the city?
Quintrix: Uzumaki Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke, Vishnu and Krishna.
Livontes: Do you think that you can handle them Quintrix?
Quintrix: I'm sure that i can.
Livontes: Good. Then i can concentrate on Vishnu.
Raiden: Good. You will win. I can feel it.
Quintrix: I still have some gods under my command. We will use them also.
Quintrix thinking: You failed to see the entire picture Raiden...
Raiden thinking: Soon...you will both perish for my sake...
Livontes: Betrayal it's in the air with these two...

The scene shows Konohamaru, Udon, and Moegi. Saduke lands in front of them.

Sasuke: Finally the team it's reunited.
Udon: Yeah...it's been a while.
Konohamaru: Indeed. But now, i feel like i could take out even you Sensei! I'm maybe the third most powerful ninja in the village!
Sasuke smiles: I defeated four extremly powerful Beyonders and countless enemies. It's true that you defeated also two mid level beyonders, but you still have a long way to go until you can match my power.
Udon: You killed two of those guys?
Konohamaru: Yeah! They were a piece of cake!
Sasuke: I'm proud of you guys! You have became true shinobis! And i can trust you now. You will be the protection team for Konoha. I'm pretty sure, that someone will attack the village while we are away, and you will do your best to guard it. I trust your powers guys! Don't let me down!

The scene shows Naruto talking with Kurama.

Naruto: What do you think of this?
Kurama: It's strange. Why would Quintrix kidnapp Hinata? And for what purpose?
Naruto: I don't know what to think about him. The attack that Sasuke stoped...it was a dangerous one. I would survived it. First he used all his power to defeat me, but he didn't tried to finish me...he is wierd. And Raiden's power...it feels like we don't have a chance.
Kurama: Naruto...you proved your value. But you also dissappointed me.*
Naruto surprised: What do you mean?
Kurama: Where is that brat who went against anyone, even though he knew that he couldn't win? Where is that person Naruto? Because you're no longer that man. Quintrix was weaker than you think. But he defeated you. Why? Because you stoped fighting with your heart! Have you seen Sasuke? He didn't get defeated even once! Even when he died he took that bastard with him! He killed Nirriti and a great number of enemies! What did you do? You couldn't beat Shiva, or Quintrix! You defeated Brahma, but he was weak! And you needed my power! You have got weak Naruto! And i'm not going to be the pet of a weakling!
Naruto shocked: What...what do I have to do?
Kurama: Don't lose your confidence brat! Never!

The scene shows Sasuke standing on the top of Hashirama's head in Konoha. Behind him, lands Vishnu.

Sasuke: What happend?
Vishnu: Nothing. I came here, just to talk to you.
Sasuke: About?
Vishnu: About your power, Sasuke. It worries me. It was granted by Raiden...and as I saw during your fight with Nirriti, it changes you.*
Sasuke: It's true that i felt much more powerful during that fight...and that there are some parts of it, that transformed me into a beast...but i'm not worried.
Vishnu: Sasuke...that power it's indeed a great asset...but be careful about the costs of using it. It may come a day when you will have to choose between your powers. And if you make the wrong choice, you might succumb to darkness. Try to find an inner balance between Raiden's dark power and the power that the Creator granted you. If you do so...you will be unstoppable.
Sasuke surprised: You...you know about the power that the Creator gave me?
Vishnu has a sad smile: I know...it was very nice of you...
Sasuke: What do you mean?
Vishnu turns around and looks at the sky.
Vishnu: You won't know what sacrifice you will have to make until the very end...that's the same mistake i made. But i don't regret it. Because i saved the world from Livontes. This time, it's your turn. And Raiden it's a far more powerful enemy. But who knows...he question is: will you be able to make the correct decision in the end?
Vishnu dashes away leaving Sasuke alone with his thoughts.
Sasuke thinking: Sacrifice huh?

__________________
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

The scene shows Quintrix and Hinata.

Hinata: What does Raiden wants with me?
Quintrix: Your eyes. Your Byakugan it's the most powerful in the Hyuuga clan. He wants it.
Hinata: But why?!?
Quintrix: To became complete once again.*
Hinata: Complete?
Quintrix: There was once a being. A supreme one. He created the world. But he also had a dark side. One day, he decided to separate that side from himself. He managed and he imprisoned the new creature separated from him. Let's call the ones remaning The Creator and Raiden. The Creator it's the good one, and Raiden the bad one.The Creator imprisoned that Raidenin the Earth. The only way for Raiden to escape this boundaries is to achieve a power comparable to the original being. And there are ways to do it. First, he needs all the Tailed Beasts sealed inside him. Then he needs a portion of the the Creator's own power. Also he needs to master the three great Doujutsu and to fuse them. He already did it with the Rinnegan and the Sharingan. The only one left, it's your Byakugan. If he succeds, he will be one step closer to achieve his plan.
Hinata: And what does he wants exactly?
Quintrix with a sad voice: Chaos. He only wants chaos...

The scene shows Naruto training.

Naruto to himself: I finally got it!
Krishna lands near him.
Krishna: What are you doing?
Naruto: I'm perfecting a jutsu. I will need it soon.
Krishna: What jutsu?
Naruto: The light release. A new element forged by the combination of fire, earth, water, wind and lightning. The Rinnegan grants me acces to these elements and i finally understood how to use each of them. It may be my most powerful jutsu.
Krishna: Wow! I'm amazed!
Krishna thinking: I really am...this kiddo...he has mastered all the five elements, he can stop the time, he can teleport himself in an instant, he has an immense strenght and endurance, high chakra levels, he is in contact with the Natural Energy and he also has a Tailed Beast sealed within himself. With him on the battlefield we might have a chance...the humans...they surprise me...
Naruto: Krishna...
Krishna: What's up?
Naruto: We will win this. No matter what.
Krishna: Yeah...we will.
Naruto with a determined look: We will win Krishna! Mark my words! We can do it!

The scene shows Vishnu. He is alone, in the middle of a forest near Konoha. He is meditating.

Vishnu thinking: Raiden...Quintrix and Livontes...i know where to place Raiden and Livontes...but what about Quintrix...what's his role in this? What does he wants? And Livontes..i always knew that this day will come. It seems that my decision remains the same. Naruto..he will continue my work...and Sasuke...i think that i know what the Creator will ask him to do...but he will be able to kill Raiden when he will find out the truth? *We were meant to guard the time flow...but i always knew..the time it's an abstract concept. Naruto and Sasuke managed to break this concept. They didn't travel through time..they never did...i guess that nobody ever thought that two mere humans will be able to see past this illusion...i always thought that the Creator made it perfect...and yet, Naruto and Sasuke released themselves for a brief moment from the illusion and they changed it, accordingly to their inner desires...and Raiden knew this..that's why he let Sasuke escape into Naruto's illsuion back then...he knew that Sasuke was the catalyst to everything. Now the question is if Sasuke will be able to endure the truth...

The scene shows Naruto talking with Minato and Kushina, inside the Hokage office.

Naruto: Dad...soon there is going to be a battle...a battle thst will determine our fate forever. If...if anything happens to me and Sasuke...you must protect the village...
Minato: What could hapen to you Naruto? You are the most powerul Kage that ever existed.
Naruto: Heh...i wish that the ones we ware going to fight were human beings. I wish that they would have our limitations...
Kushina: Naruto...your power it's not given by chakra or by Kurama. Your power comes from your heart. If your heart it's strong, you will win!
Minato: No matter what happens Naruto...never lose your confidence. You are a good person. And you will not lose. Because you have friends, family and people to protect. And because you're my son. And i trust thst you will do your best! Kushina and I..we are lucky to have you as our son! And we are proud of you!*
Naruto smiles: Heh...thank you dad..mom...
Kushina: We trust you, Naruto! And never forget that we also love you!
Naruto: So this is a goodbye...
Minato: But not the one that you are thinking of. This is just a temporary goodbye.
Naruto: Heh..thank you...really...i needed this...frankly i'm quite scared of what could happen...but i must do my best!*

The scene shows Sasuke at home. In front of him are Fugaku and Itachi.

Fugaku: Take care son! We put all our hopes on you!
Sasuke: I know dad...i know...
Itachi: I wish i could come with you brother.
Sasuke: No Itachi. You must stay here and protect the people in the village. Naruto is pretty sure that they will also attack Konoha.
Itachi with a menacing glare: Trust me, brother...no harm will come to this village!
Sasuke smiles: I count on you!
Fugaku: Sasuke: you are the liht of the Uchihas in the time of darkness. Guide the clan. We gave faith in you!
Sasuke: Thank you dad...
Itachi: Now listen to me Sasuke. Come back alive!*
Sasuke: I will brother!*
Itachi: Oh and...
Itachi goes closer to Sasuke and pokes him in the forehead.
Sasuke surprised looks at Itachi.
Itachi smiles: Promise me that there will be a next time Sasuke!
Sasuke smiles: There will be a next time brother!

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

The scene shows Sasuke and Sakura. They are inside Sakura's house.

Sakura: And this is my place! I know that it's not like the Uchiha estate but..
Sasuke: It wonderful, Sakura. I would give our domain for a quiet home like yours.
Sakura blushes: Heh...
Sasuke: Sakura...i came here to tell you something. The last time i left you didn't gave me the chance. You said that we will talk when I get back. But tommorrow i'm leaving again. And this time...i really don't know...i really don't know if we will ever make it back...
Sakura shocked: What do you mean?!?
Sasuke: This time...this time we are facing something that we never did before...And...Naruto and I ...might never return alive from this battle...
Sakura crying: Don't say that Sasuke! Don't say that! Don't...
Suddenly Sasuke places his hand on her mouth.
Sasuke: Then let me say something else...because i might never have the chance to do it...and if i return i will tell this to you everyday...Sakura...i lo...i love you!
The last panel shows Sakura getting closer and closer by Sasuke.

The scene it's switched. It shows Naruto and Sasuke standing both on the Hokage mountain. It's sunset.

Naruto: So...this is the end...
Sasuke: Yeah...the end of our struggle...
Naruto: Did you said your goodbyes to everyone?
Sasuke: Yeah...you?
Naruto: I did...
Sasuke: What do you think about this Naruto?*
Naruto: Well...the correct word would be that i'm scared.
Sasuke laughs: Look st you. You've grown up. You're no longer the same brat that you used to be. You're now mature and responsible.
Naruto: You're not the one to talk!
Sasuke laughs: Indeed! We are pathetic! What happend to our energy? With our foolish minds?
Naruto: They are tired...tired of so many things that happend...

The scene shows Naruto Sasuke, Krishna and Vishnu.

They are in front of Konoha's gates.
Vishnu: Are you ready?
Naruto: We are.
Sasuke: Let's do it!
Vishnu: Then...Krishna...teleport us!
Krishna makes a handsign and they all vanish with a flash.

The scene shows the ruins of the Celest City.

Four people materialize in front of the ruins.
Vishnu: Here we are...
Naruto: The City...i'm sorry Vishnu...
Vishnu: Yeah..a pitty...
Krishna: Lord Vishnu!
They turn around and they spot two persons standing several meters away.

Quintrix: Heh...it seems that Raiden was right.
Livontes: Indeed....so this is the place for our final showdown. Are you ready Vishnu?
Vishnu: Livontes...
Sasuke: Quintrix! Last time...you managed to accomplish quite a feat by defeating Naruto...But this time you will have to face both of us! You cannot win!
Quintrix: Uchiha Sasuke...you're quite bold!
Naruto shouts: Quintrix! Where is Hinata?!?
Quintrix smiles: If you defeat me...i will tell you!

Vishnu: Livontes...do you really want to do this?
Livontes: You denied me the life! You took everything i got from me! Oh, of course that i want this! You will die Vishnu!
Vishnu: Hmpf...i despise you Livontes. From the proud warrior that you once were...look at you...have low you have fallen.
Livontes: It doesn't matter Vishnu. All that matters right now it's you and me!
Suddenly they both take a straight posture and look in eachothers eyes.
Krishna shouts: Naruto! Sasuke! Take cover! The blast can kill you!
Quintrix jumps away and looks amused at the scene.
Suddenly the whole air get dense, the wind gets powerful, and the earth starts shaking. The two Beyonders face eachother. Livontes has fire in his eyes, and Vishnu has the lightning pattern active.
Sasuke activates his Susano'o in order to protect himself, while Naruto gets enveloped into Kurama's chakra and starts makimg handsigns.
Naruto: Secret chakra release jutsu! Rinnegan defence!
A translucid dome appears around Naruto, protecting him. Krishna also gets under Sasuke's Susano'o.
Vishnu: I'm sorry Livontes...but today...it's over for you..
Livontes: One of us will die here today Vishnu...and which one will determine the winner in this war!

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

Vishnu thinking: Raiden must be lurking around, waiting to collect our energies...to bad that i will mess up his plan!
Livontes starts emiting a flame aura that burns everything around it. Vishnu manifests a lightning aura.*
Sasuke: What's happening?
Krishna: They are going to clash on a mental level. But the eneergy released it's so huge, that it could kill you!
Quintrix thinking: So...the next stage...what choice will you take Vishnu? The one in which you die? Or the one in which you kill Livontes?
The last panel shows Vishnu with a determined look on his face.
Vishnu: This battle...war forseen...it's our destiny...
Livontes smiles maliciously: Indeed...
Vishnu shouts and he lets out a great deal of energy that destroyes the surroundings: Then let's make it our final fight!!!
Suddenly they both vanish from sight! The panel shows them far away above the City. St their location, the sky it's dark, there are seen countless giant lightnings and flames and huge bursts of light.
Quintrix: So...it has begun...
Naruto: You're next Quintrix!
Quintrix: I don't think so, Naruto!
Krishna: Guys...distract him while i prepare my energies for my assault.
Sasuke: We won't distract him. We will try to kill him.
Naruto: Exactly.
Sasuke: Naruto i will go first. We will attack with the three diversions move.*
Naruto: Got it.
Quintrix: Done with your little strategic chitchat?
Sasuke smiles and vanishes. He appears in front of Quintrix attempting to hit him with a dimensional shattering lightning blade. Quintrix evades the attack, and Sasuke makes a spin and throws an Amaterasu ball at him.*
Quintrix points his hand at the black flame, shouting: Vanish!
The flame vanishes, but the defence he used, leaves the God uncovered for a second. In that second Naruto appears in front of him and tries to hit Quintrix with a Raenshuriken. Quintrix takes the attack with no visible damage.
Quintrix laughs: You will need more than that brat!
Suddenly Sasuke dashes towards him and engages Quintrix in sword fighting. Quintrix manages to avoid two strikes and he makes a few steps back.*
Quintrix: Purgatory!
He releases from his mouth a large wall of fire that goes straight towards Sasuke.
Sasuke quickly makes handsigns: Earth release! Earth wall!
An earth wall emerges from the ground, protecting Sasuke from damage.
Sasuke jumps on the top of the wall and he starts making handsigns.
Sasuke shouts: Narutoooo!!!
Quintrix turns around only to get hit by a Kurama Rasenshuriken. He crashes into the ground but he quickly gets up.
Quintrix: I think that you are insane. These aren't the type of attacks that could kill me.
Krishna shouts: But this one is!Wind give me the speed, water give me the tranquility, earth give me the durability, lightning give me the power, fire give me the determination! Dragon of the Celest City! Elemental attack!
Krishna releases from his palms a white dragon that goes towards Quintrix.
Quintrix thinking: I don't have time...the only option...
Quintrix quickly raises his hands and absorbs the dragon. In an instant he turns around and he releases the dragon back to Krishna! The white dragon hits Krishna at it's full force throwing the god several meters away.
Sasuke looks at the scene.
Naruto: I'm going to help Krishna! We will need him. In the meanwhile keep him busy!
Sasuke: Got it!
Sasuke turns around and looks at Quintrix.
Sasuke: So it seems that it's one on one.
Quintrix: Finally...i was tired of fighting three people.*
Sasuke: Well...you will fall today. And we will also defeat Raiden.
Quintrix laughs: Defeat Raiden? And who has the power to do it?
Sasuke: Me and Naruto.*
Quintrix: You and Naruto? Let me tell you something. In the alternate dimension...the one where you came from...are you aware about the prophecy that the frogs made about Naruto?
Sasuke: What prophecy?
Quintrix: That Naruto will die by Raiden's hands. It's happening Sasuke. Can you stip something that it's already determined?*
Sasuke: How...how do you know about the prophecy?
Quintrix with a determined look: It doesn't matter. But one thing is sure: Naruto will die today!

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

The scene shows Vishnu and Livontes. They are clashing above some mountains. Around them are lightnings and fire. The ground it's just a pit of lava and the sky it's dark, clouded and tornadeos are formed. Vishnu and Livontes are fighting with their swords. They are equally matched.

Vishnu shouts: I defeated you once! I can do it again!
Livontes: You will dieee!!!
They clash and the energy released tears apart everything in it's way. It reduces the mountains to the ground and suddenly black holes are formed around them.
Vishnu thinking: This fight it's destroying the fabric of the dimension. I need to hurry!
Suddenly from far away it's seen a column of dark energy that hits the sky.
Livontes: What's that!?!
Vishnu: Sasuke...

The scene shows Sasuke and Quintrix.

Sasuke shouts: Fuck you! I don't belive any of is! Prepare yourself! I'm coming!
Quintrix: Then come at me with everything you got!
Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic ways! Phantom's menace!
Sasuke releases a great deal of dark chakra, and the chakra forms a giant black column around him. As the column slowly vanishes, the panel shows Sasuke wearing black pants, a black short and a black coat. The uniform has red stripes on it. Sasuke holds in his hand Vishnu's sword and has in his eyes the Spiralling EMS.
Quintrix: Well...it seems that you assumed a new form...
Sasuke: This is the end.
Suddenly he vanishes and appears in front of Quintrix clashing their swords.*
Quintrix shouts: That's all you got!?!
Quintrix makes a swing and kicks Sasuke away.
Sasuke shaking of anger: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan...demonic ways...Realms clash!!!
Above them opens a black hole and below them another one. Quintrix is right in the middle of them.
Sasuke shouts: Dieeeeee!!!!
From both holes emerges two dark beams. The explosion it's immense. It tears apart everything in it's way. As the dust and smoke clears up the panel shows Quintrix with minor burns on him.
Sasuke has a shocked face.
Quintrix appears in front of Sasuke and punches him so hard that it throws him several meters awY.
Quintrix: I told you. You cannot kill me by normal means, Sasuke.
Naruto lands near Sasuke.
Naruto: Krishna is stable.
Sasuke: Good...i needed you. It seems that i cannot kill him by myself.
Quintrix: Neither can you Hokage. Have you told him about the prophecy Sasuke?
Naruto: What prophecy?
Sasuke: A prophecy made by the frogs that says that you will die by Raiden's hand.
Naruto: Oh, that...well...i already changed my future! I don't worry about that anymore! It doesn't matter anything but the present!
Suddenly Quintrix appears again behind Sasuke and unleashes upon him a purple beam. The beam hits Sasuke and throws him away. The panel shows the Uchiha on the ground barely breathing.
Suddenly Naruto appears in front of Quintrix and punches him so hard that it throws him crashing into some rocks.
Quintrix shouts: You cannot do it! You don't have the power! Sasuke's already down! You're alone!

The scene shows Naruto in his mind talking with Kurama.

Kurama: It's time. Do it brat! Release our Power!
Naruto: Indeed. Let's do it Kurama!

The scene gets back to the real world.

Naruto looks at Quintrix.
Naruto: The power? I don't lack the power. Let me prove.
Suddenly he starts emiting blue waves of chakra out of his body. Massive waves. Quintrix stares in silence. Clouds are starting to spinning in the sky, faster and faster. Lightnings are seen and thunders are heared. The ground starts shaking. The wind gets extremly intense and huge tornadeos starts to form. The ground gets cracked open in several places and beams of steam are emerging. The tornadeos are covered in lightnings that goes acrross them and hits the earth. Suddenly the whole process stops. It's like the silence before the storm. Naruto still stands up and looks calm. Quintrix looks at him shocked.
Naruto raises his hand: Shinra Tensei!!!!
Quintrix suddenly looks up, only to see a huge meteor coming down at him!
Quintrix amazed: Such power!
Quintrix quickly gathers purple energy into his hands.
Quintrix shouts: Wave release! Royal carnage!
He releases a giant purple beam from his hands. The beam hits the meteor destroying it!
Quintrix: That was tough...
Naruto appears behind him. The panel shows his determined eyes with Rinnegan active.
Naruto with a menacing voice:And you haven't seen anything yet!
He punches away Quintrix, but the latter regains his posture quickly.
Naruto as he starts emiting again chakra: Last time...i needed Kurama for this...but this time...Kurama will just enhance my attack! The most powerful attack!
Naruto makes five handsigns, as light starts gathering into his palms.
Quintrix: What the...!?!
Naruto shouts: Light release! Heaven's kingdom!
Naruto releases an immense light beam. The beam hits Quintrix at it's full force. The blast can be seen from many miles away. As the dust clears up we can see that the jutsu caused a goant crater in the ground. Naruto falls on his knees exhausted.
Naruto sweating: It's over...
Quintrix: As i said...you don't have the power to do it!
Naruto turns around only to see Quintrix severly injured, but alive. Quintrix holds a sword in his right hand. He makes a move and he is ready to impale a paralazed Naruto.
Naruto thinking: Shit! That jutsu took everything i got! I'm paralyzed! Fuck!
The blade goes closer and closer to Naruto's chest.
The next panel shows the blood in the air and Naruto's shocked face. Then it shows Sasuke standing in front of Naruto. He took the sword in his back, protecting Naruto.
Naruto shouts: Sasukee!
Sasuke: You...you...cannot..,die yet...the world...needs you...
Quintrix draws his blade out, but when he does it, it reveals the golden ratio on Sasuke's back.
Quintrix shouts shocked: The golden Ratio! The sign has been given!*

The panel shows Vishnu and Livontes looking at eachother. The area around them it's devastated.

Livontes: You will lose.
Vishnu: I think that it's time to end this, Livontes. Time to get serious.
Livontes: You cannot do it! You don't have the guts to risk the entire world in our battle!
Vishnu as he activates his Raigan, with a determined voice: This time...i'm puting everything on the line!!!

The end.

Next chapter: Vishnu vs Livontes.
Quintrix's revelation.
Sasuke's death.
*

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

royalmage

Wow just amazing. Your story telling abilities are awesome. Look forward to the next one.

Vishnu

Thank you man. I really appreciate it.

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

ivhturp2

nooo vishnu.... you shouldn't stop the story at such cliffhanging moments!! :P
As usually, you built the story well. will be looking forward for the coming chapters...

Vishnu

Of course that they story should be stoped as such cliffhanging moments It would lose it's "touch" if i would stop it randomly. Anyway thank you for the good critic. I'm sorry again that it took so long to make this one, but the next will be up shortly. I'm already working on it and the plot goes wonderful.

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!