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Michi and Oita are sneaking upon Aya in the cave.

“She’s sooooo pure. And cute too.” Says Oita. Michi sighs, and open her mouth wide. Then three snakes comes out from her mouth.

“Disgusting.” Says Oita. After all three snakes come out from her, she looks at Oita with a devilish grin.

“I deal with her. You guard outside.” Says Michi. Oita shakes his head.

“No way. I want to deal with her.”

“Stupid. You’re a summoner. How we going to do this quietly if someone saw a giant panda around here.” Says Michi. Oita close his eyes and seems to be in deep thought.

“Maybe you are right. There is no way I’m gonna hurt such innocent beauty. So I just wait outside and terrorize the village.” Says Oita.

“Terrorize?” ask Michi. Oita nods and stands up and leaves the cave. Michi looks back at Aya.

“Now innocent beauty, you’re mine.” Says Michi as she licks her face.

As Oita is about to leave the cave explode, and in the smoke, Michi is standing eye to eye with Aya. “Your chakra is different then the Waterfall ninjas. Such evil and malice.” Says Aya. “She can sense chakra?” ask Oita. Michi licks her face. “What a troublesome ability. Seems we were right to get you first.” Says Michi. Then they heard commotion coming from the village and heading to their location.
“Reinforcement. I’ll take care of them.” Says Oita as he bites his thumb and do the summoning hand seals. “Summoning Technique: Cerberus.” Says Oita and a three headed dogs with fire inside their mouth appear. “It’s been sometimes since you summon me, Oita.” Says Cerberus. Oita jumps and stands on Cerberus middle head. “I know. I need to destroy a village quickly. And without mercy.” Says Oita. Cerberus grins. “Without mercy, I like that.” Says Cerberus and they runs towards the village.

“Stop!!!” says Aya, but she was block by a giant snake. She looks back at Michi. Michi grins and she launch 6 snakes from her sleeve towards Aya.

At SNA headquaters.

Tetsuo is about finish healing Raitei and Ino Shika Cho comes in. Tetsuo stands up and look into his crystal ball.

“Seems the alliance is still there.” Says Tetsuo.

“What you want to do?” ask Ino Shika Cho.

“The moment man devoured the fruit of chakra, he sealed his fate... Entrusting his future and fate to the chakras, man clings to a dim hope. Only with strength can one endure suffering and torment.” Says Tetsuo and he make a few hand seals.

“Celestial Judgment.”

At the battle location. The mist ninjas have withdrawn from the battlefield.

“Seems the Mist is in cahoots with SNA.” Says Blake. Everyone nods.

“Looks like the Mizukage has a lot to answer for. Maybe we can find that mist ninja who was fighting you Hiro-sensei.” Says Zig. Hiro shakes his head. “Shisio hates SNA as much as he hates me. He won’t work with them if it was the Mizukage’s order. I know Shisio. He is never truly loyal to the Mist. He is a hero, forever loyal to the flames of war.” Explain Hiro.

Nila looks up and saw the sky is turning red.

“Uhh…..Sensei, why is the sky red?”

All of them look up in the sky and saw something shining is falling down. Then Hiro realize what’s going on. “Everyone!!! Runn!!!!!!!” screams Hiro as countless fireballs are falling from the sky hitting the alliance army, causing mass panic and confusion as ninjas runs away from the battlefield. Hiro leads his units directly north while Ryu and Blake are carrying Shun. “Leave me.” Says Shun. Nila look back and Shun nods at her. She turns around and slaps Shun. “Konoha ninjas will never leave their comrade. Those who don't take of their comrades ... are lower than trash. That was father always teach us.” Says Nila. Shun gave a warm smile at Nila.
The fireballs keeps falling and they see countless ninja’s bodies lying across the battle field. Shun took a strange pill to increase his chakra and bites his thumb. He then proceeds with summoning jutsu where he summoned 2 giant eagles. “We ride the eagle. It’s much faster.” Says Shun and he climbs to one of the eagles and Ryu and Blake also climb the same one. Hiro nods and he climb to another eagle with his team. The eagles took off and flew away from the battlefield. Nila looks down and saw countless ninja screaming and running as the fireballs rains the battlefield.

“What happen?” ask Nila.

“A powerful jutsu.” Says Hiro.

At the second eagle, Shun is holding his chest in agony. Ryu looks at Blake who sighs.

“I knew it. That was the Akamichi clan pill wasn’t it. We must get him back to Konoha, fast.” Says Blake. Ryu nods as both eagles head towards Konoha.

Mist Village.

The Mizukage, Tank and Sakuya is waiting for the news on the battlefield. Then a mist ninja barge in and give a scroll to the Mizukage. She opens it and read the content and then looks at both SNA higher ups sitting in front of her.

“Seems calling back my troops is a good move. A meteor rain hit the area, and many ninja from various village are either dead or badly injured.” Says the Mizukage.

“We gave you the info. You must know we are sincere to work alongside you.” Says Sakuya.

“Maybe. But I still want to know what are you planning to do with the tail beast.” Ask the Mizukage.

“As I told you before. To unite the land as one.” Says Sakuya. Mizukage looks at them with suspicious in her eyes.

“I want to meet Tetsuo.” Says Mizukage.

“Denied.” Says Sakuya. She place her hand in front of Tank, afraid he might attack.

“He needs the tail beasts location.”

“And you need us, as everyone sees you as a threat. If we leave, you’ll have to face the wrath of all villages by yourself.” Says Sakuya. Mizukage bites her lips.

“Now how will this goes down, either you gave us what we want, or we leave you to fend yourself. The choice is yours.” Says Sakuya. The Mizukage shakes and bites her lips, until blood comes out. Her plan of using SNA has backfired and Sakuya looks at her with arrogance.
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An Ancient Rival Goal

Shisio could feel the bile rising in his throat. The Konoha scum had escape again, he had him in his grasp.

It seem that luck was on Hiro side, for now. As of this moment, he was a missing-nin of the Kirigakure, or so he had declare himself. Using his blade he strike his headband village symbol and there was only one thought in his head.

“It’s time to vent my frustration, Reika body will be in that river, if it’s the last thing I ---’’

The sky above is illuminated red, meteors can be seen rushing past overhead.

“Nooooooooooo, Hiroooooooooo, that bastard had better be out of ther….’’

Two giant eagles, glides up into the sky with companions on their back.

“Hehehe… the lucky bastard… that another fight for another day, as for now I can hear that river calling to be fill”

He turn and begins his journey back to Kiriga, his thoughts focus on one of his toughest mission yet, the assassination of Kirigakure Rokudaime Mizukage: Jigen Reika. There were rumours surrounding her rise to power, apparently she had defeated her predecessor, shortly before the fourth shinobi war, although it’s not clear how she had achieve this and exactly what happen to the Godaime body.

There were also rumours of her power even rivalling Yondaime Mizukage; Yugara Tonkou, former host of the three tailed beast, who was notorious for his reign of terror and although little was known of her history, there have been rumours that she herself might be a jinchūriki host.

Shisio thoughts become even more erratic, he see visions of himself becoming village leader, immortalise by the thought of being, Shichidaime.

His thoughts are interrupted, he stops and looks around fully alert.

He was not alone, in fact he had suspect he was being tailed since his departure from the previous battle.

“Show yourself coward or I’ll come and get you”

A figure steps out the shadow of the trees, and stands still on the branch before him.

“Kirigakure; Mist Slasher; Shisio Akuma-Enmu, I’ve got a proposal to make” says Uchiha Sasuke.

“And just who might you be…”

“I’m Uchiha Sasuke!!!”

“That is a mighty strong claim there son, even if you are who you claim to be, I have no reason to listen or even converse with you. So if its all the same to you I’ll rather be on my way.. oh and I’ll only say this once”

Sasuke frowns and remain still.

“Alright have it your way.” Shisio runs into his opponent and grabs him by the throat, easily throwing him into the branches below.

His opponent continues to fall, he hits the floor and stay still. Shisio leaps from above and lands onto his opponent back.

His spine cracks and Shisio steps off.

“ Uchiha my ass… now to just find a riv—’’

Sasuke begins to raise to his feet, his spine snapping back into place. He looks at Shisio and smirks. A bone is protruding from the top of his spine, he reaches and pulls it out.

“ What the…”

He holds it in his right hand and unsheathes his Katana with his left. Moving in a blur, using his spine as a whip, he latches it onto Shisio mid-riff and pulls him closer, while charging his katana with lightning.



“Fūton: Atsugai”

This was one of the few Ninjutsu technique Shisio had mastered, a powerful gale force that crushes the opponent instantly.

The wind rushes towards his opponent who is just inches away from be-heading him.

It stops!!! The jutsu vanishes and Sasuke is left unharmed, with his Katana just within hairs width of Shisio neck.

He halts and Shisio collapses on his knee.

Shisio looks down as his waist there is nothing attached there, he is sweating and shaking.

“This doesn’t make sense… my chakra…my jutsu…gone!!!”

He looks up, they are back in the branches where he first encounter the shinobi claiming to be Uchiha Sasuke.

“Now are you willing to listen to my proposal, or should I finish the job?”

“What… Genjutsu, you bastard. I am the Infamous Mist Slasher no little punk can…”

Blood erupts from his right shoulder, Sasuke stands over him with his Katana drawn and Sharingan activated.

“Do you value your pride or your life?”

“A Sharingan, hehehe, I expected no less from an Uchiha, no wonder I was stop so easily.” Shisio slumps onto his back and glazes up into the sky, while drawing deep breathes.

“Well, what the last Uchiha doing out in these neck of the woods and offering me a proposal too I might add”

“I want to be Hokage and I’m recruiting!!!” replies Sasuke

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-The Origin of the SNA. A story that reveals the darkest secrets of the 4th Shinobi War.

(20 some odd years ago, a young man whose age range is between his early to mid-20s, stands near the gates of Konoha. He is dressed in the typical Jounin-Chuunin attire with a scroll secured on his back along with a huge bag containing supplies. He soon prepares to set out on an adventure which thrusts him into a series of events that chains to the fate of the shinobi world. As he sets out, many villagers hope for his safe return.)

“Alright, I’m off,” said Naruto. (The crowd chants their goodbyes and hopes for his safe journey. Some are sad, some are happy, and others simply want the young man to stay in the village. Soon a group of familure faces bids Naruto farewell. It is the old cast, the rookie 9 along with familure special Jounin, Chuunin, as well as genin, and several Anbu.)

“Naruto, you have grown into a fine shinobi. Don’t do anything reckless, after all, the Jounin have all put in their votes for the next Hokage. It would be a shame if anything happened to this village’s potential leader,” said Kakashi. “Don’t worry, I’ll be fine. It is just another one of those things I have to change for myself. After figuring out my mother’s homeland and the current state it is in, I need to go and bring peace to that land. But, it is not just blood that brings me back there. We need a place that will not give birth to a new Pain. The Whirlpool country is almost in the same state in which Amegakure use to be in, that is another reason why I’m going. A monstrosity such as that shouldn’t exist. And if I have to use power to make change, I’ll do it with a smile,” said Naruto.

(Hinata and Sakura rushes towards Naruto’s location. Hinata’s crying. Naruto embraces her and then gives her a peck on the lips.) “I’ll be back. It is a promise. And I never go back on my word, because that is what it means to be a shinobi to me. Even if my hands are broken, even if my legs are broken, hell even if my body is reduced to shreds… I’ll be back to see your charming face,” smiled Naruto.

(Hinata starts crying and tightly embraces Naruto back. Then Naruto slowly breaks away.)

“I have to go now,” said Naruto. (Naruto soon looks at Sakura.) “Naruto, you don’t have to go alone. Though you’ve gotten really powerful and have prestige beyond recognition from other lands. You are always part of Team 7. Even if you don’t want to be part of such an archaic ideal, count on me, because I’m your friend. If you need me, just let me now,” said Sakura.

“Right, Naruto, we are always here. Don’t face this alone. The whirlpool country has been in struggle with neighboring countries and villages for decades don’t take this all on yourself,” said Shikamaru. (Yamato places his hand on top of Shikamaru’s shoulder.)

“It is ok, he chose this choice himself. Let’s have faith in him. He’s the same man that restored this village to its former glory and strengthened ties with Kumo and Suna villages. Don’t doubt him, even for a second,” said Yamato.

(Kurenai is holding a young boy’s hand.)

“Mommy… who is dat,” said young Sarutobi. “Oh, ha, ha… That man is Uzumaki Naruto. He is perhaps the most gifted man in this village, and soon, he’ll be this village’s Hokage,” said Kurenai. “HO ka gay,” said the young boy. (Kurenai gently chuckles.)
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(Naruto rushes off into the vast unknown, looking to save his mother’s homeland, in order to prevent a new Pain. Night soon passes as Naruto traverses great distances. He climbed through trees, hiked through mountains, and crossed over great waters. Naruto soon sets up camp under a weeping willow type tree. He soon has a dream, which is actually a flash back to the past several years ago when he was just a mid-teenager at the age of 16; the locale is at a battlefield littered with battle scars. Naruto’s clothing is ripped however, he is sturdy while another figure, Sasuke, has collapsed on the ground. Naruto soon kneels down and converses with his former comrade.)

“Why don’t you finish me off,” asked Sasuke. “I can’t. If I do that, I’d be no better than a remorseful killer who is his haunted by the fact that he ended his best friend’s life and gave up on changing him,” said Naruto. “Fool. How could you still consider us friends? I tried to destroy the village. I will never change, as long as I still live, I will hold contempt for the people who enjoy their happily filled lives while the Uchiha were bound to suffer under the rule of the Senju. That contempt, I also, hold for you, Naruto. I… How you can live your live so cheery while I must endure the life of an avenger; I hate that about you,” said Sasuke. “I had no idea you thought that way,” said Naruto. “That is why we can never be friends. You say you understand, well I say in your entire life time you can never understand. How I live my life is completely different from yours,” said Sasuke.

“That may be true. But, if that’s your way, if that’s what it means to be a shinobi to you, then I’ll have to leave it at that. I chose not to kill you because I don’t want to live my life as a resentful, dark, and tormented soul. I fight for those I protect, and as long as there are those who stand in way of the happiness of those people, I will strike them down. If you try that again, I will no longer hold regret for ending your life, as you will be in the way of my people’s happiness. With that, I will out weigh the sacrifices. I leave you with that thought, Sasuke. Let it soak in so you never cause anymore atrocities that torment your soul,” said Naruto.

(Switch back to the current situation. Naruto wakes up immediately.)

“Will I continue to be reminded of him? Perhaps it is my punishment for being unable to save him… I have to get going nonetheless,” thought Naruto. (Naruto reaches the gates of the Whirlpool Country. He soon notices that reconstruction is underway.)

“It seems construction is going along nicely,” said Naruto.

(Soon two guards approach him.) “Who are you, and why are you in our village,” said Guard 1. “Which means, length of stay, purpose, and name,” said Guard 2. “I’m Uzumaki Naruto. I’m a messenger from Konoha. I would like to have word with this village’s leader,” said Naruto. “So, you’re Naruto. The up and coming talk of the shinobi nations,” said Guard 1. “Our leader is right on ahead. We’ll guide you to him, Fellow clansmen,” said Guard 2.

(Naruto smiles. As the two guards walk Naruto to the village’s leader, many people are in praise of the name Uzumaki Naruto, being proud that he carries the name Uzumaki and chanting the work he done what with the strengthened reunion of Konoha’s two allies. Some of the girls are quite taken with him however, many question whether he is worthy to stand in the light of Zane, the apparent village leader. Naruto reaches the top of a mountain like cliff. A young man, about Naruto’s age, has long spiky blond hair, and a facial structure similar to Naruto’s however, is mixed with a Genma facial tone as well. He turns around to face Naruto.)
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"Greetings, messenger from Konoha. You must be Uzumaki Naruto. Nice to meet you, I’m Uzumaki Zane,” said Zane. “Zane… I’ve heard great legends about you from the people of this village. It seems they have a lot of faith in you,” said Naruto. “Master Zane reclaimed this village from the war disputes with the surrounding countries. With his amazing ninjutsu and intellectual logistics, he managed to have done something the past leaders had not been able to do,” said Guard 1.

“That’s enough. You guys go along now. I have something to discuss with this young man,” said Zane. “Of course sir,” said Guard 1. (They both leave.) “Yes, actually I’ve heard about you from before. That is why I wanted to too see you and ensure that you keep up the good fight. There is another reason why I want this village to be safe, you see,” said Naruto.

(Zane smiles.) “I’ve done some research on you Naruto. How a man in Konoha carries the last name Uzumaki is indeed strange. But it appears my mother’s sister, met and fell in love with a splendid young shinobi, and they had a child together in Konoha. All traces were lost about my aunt, but I think that last trace may exist inside of you,” said Zane. “Really? Was your aunt’s name Kushina,” asked Naruto. “Yes, that must mean,” said Zane.

“She’s my mother,” said Naruto. “Oh… How wonderful, to think the amazing Naruto would be my cousin, it is such an honor. That is precisely why we need to stick together. Most of our clan lost their lives during grueling battles. It is nice to find someone such as you who has it all together and brimming with pure talent,” said Zane. (Small talk and jokes are over now.)

“Sure thing,” said Naruto. “But in all seriousness. Even though the village believes in me, I am unsure if we can continue the good fight. I’m powerful and feared on the battle, but that won’t stop smaller nations from invading. It is only a matter of time now. For months we fought long, harsh, and grueling battles, we’re tired. As the 5 great nations stabilized, many smaller countries surrounding our village, each had their own objectives.

Becoming a great nation; for that to happen, they had to gain territory, techniques, and admass men. We are caught in the middle. Our village is torn apart after each reconstruction. Money is short and famine is growing. All hope seems lost. An inevitable fate you’d save. It is like building a massive city on top of ground below sea level. Yet, the people smile with every victory that I lead, although the significance is short and the drawbacks are high. They chant my name and look toward the day in which we are liberated for this hell. I’ll never give up. Their safety is my direct concern. If I have to fight the world alone, I’d do it,” said Zane.

(Naruto has flashbacks of when he made claims about wanting to be the Hokage as a child and not giving up and what not. Then Naruto has a flash back towards when he fought Sasuke before they broke away for good. Back to Zane’s speech.)

“Fight the world. As long as there is breath is this body, I’ll continue to fight to preserve my people’s wishes, even if it is an inevitable fate. It is better to strive and die for the impossible with all year heart, then to give up and regret not trying,” said Zane.

(Naruto is moved.) “No. I’m not asking you the fight the world. Not by yourself anyway,” said Naruto. “Is there any other way,” asked Zane. “You’re speech has moved me. We really are alike. I spent the last few years strengthening ties with my village’s allies. Though I haven’t paid much attention to the smaller nations; you give me hope that inspires me to fight for the benefit of everyone’s satisfaction. What
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do you say? How about you ally yourself with Konoha,” said Naruto. (He sticks out his hand.)

“Hmm. Not a bad idea. Side by side with Uzumaki Naruto, the village will be in good hands,” said Zane. (He shakes Naruto’s hand.) “Smaller villages and nations should peacefully aid themselves with larger nations with treaties, not over take each other and result into more bloodshed. Power can cause greediness and callous behavior in regards to taking in account of people’s lives. You made me further believe in that ideal,” thought Naruto.

(-Over the next several years, the powerful alliance between Konoha and the Whirlpool Country, allowed Zane to increase his military strength and build up stronger barriers from the warring nations. Zane soon became known as a legend around the shinobi world, who had brought his village from the brink of destruction and restored its former glory. Zane was known as The Violent Torrent for his amazing whirlpool like water manipulation ninjutsu. He was a legend known and feared as a leader as well as a shinobi.

-However, as many years passed, Mizugakure formed an alliance with all of the rogue smaller nations and posed a threat to even the allied forces. It had secured locations of various Bijuu from using illegal spying methods on other nations. The land became too powerful. And with a large portion of the Bijuu at their disposal and the gathering of many small nations, the allied nations as well as some other small nations who were not part of the rebellion, used their most brilliant scientists and tacticians to secretly established the SNA. With the funding, and years of being underground, they managed to avoid Mizugakure’s superior spying agencies.

The organization was funded by Kumo, (reluctantly) Konoha, and Suna villages however, the Great countries’ Damiyou also were behind the funding of the project. The wars were getting too devastating, and the land was being exhausted. The great powers stated that they needed super shinobi to be able to fight and fend off against the Bijuu as well as Mizugakure’s powerful government. Each village that took place in the program, sent their most established and brilliant shinobi in order to make the project worthwhile. Many had no idea of the training kernel’s most severe affects, until it was too late. 10% survived, while only 5% were deemed successful specimens. The scene soon switches to The Hokage, as he readies his squad for activation. The squad consists of many Konoha shinobi, several familure looking faces such as Dosa, Hiro, and Shun.)

“The enemy has invaded the Whirlpool Country, our mission is to reclaim it and then set up a rest and recovery station. If we can do that, we would gain a strong hold against enemy forces,” said Hokage. “What about Zane, shouldn’t he be fighting back? We can’t aide a government who just laid down and died,” said random shinobi. “Zane is most likely gone… He’d never let this happen to the village while he would still be alive…. Those bastards will pay. The Renewed Whirlpool country was his dream and pride, yet they stripped it away from him. We will honor his last wishes. An honorable comrade who fought to
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the death,” said The Hokage. (They salute in praise of Zane.) “Where’s our super shinobi? We were promised with them,” said another random shinobi.

“Let’s go,” said The Hokage.

(Switch Scene to the not so distant past. Time zone is about 2 or three years before Mizugakure spread its power to Zane’s land. Zane walks down a dark and dank hallway. Zane thinks about his decision.)

“I wouldn’t dare send any of my men into this program. I’d fight and die for them. It should be fitting, that I go and undergo host body treatment. If, if I die, it just means it is as far as I was meant to go. I can’t give up, or I will always regret. If by some miracle that I survive, I’ll be a force that will bring the wrath down on those that wish my people harm. Hokage, friend… If I don’t make it, I hope you’ll carry on my will to save my village. Heh… Probably selfish of me to put it all on you old friend, but, it is the best and only thing I can do right now,” thought Zane. (Switch Scene to a lab, many deceased shinobi lay on tables and in tubes.)

“That is another failed specimen,” said Scientist 1. “ARRGGH,” yelled SNA specimen. “AAHHH,” yelled scientist 2.

(On the table a genetically mutated being goes wild. An assistant rushes over and injects it with something, causing it to die.) “That was too close,” said Scientist. “I guess it was an another failure; that makes no successful specimens so far. Out of 300, they’ve all either died during the sense enhancement or gone insane due to mental chemical imbalances when we stimulate the brain cells, membranes, and nerves for quicker, stronger, and more precise mental and physical outputs in regards to ninjutsu and in other high level forms of activation,” said Scientist 1. “Too much funding has gone into this, many skilled shinobi have perished. We need positive results,” said scientist 2.

“Come quickly,” yelled Scientist 3. (They rush over immediately.)”What’s happening now,” asked Scientist 1. “Another failure,” asked Scientist 2. “This host body hasn’t shown any negative side affects to the treatment. He looks normal and hasn’t gone haywire,” said Scientist 3.

(They look him over. He is deployed out of the tube by several aides and is laid on the table.) “You’re right,” said Scientist 1. “He is the specimen from the Whirlpool Country, Uzumaki Zane. So far, he is the first successful experiment of the SNA. We’ll need to wipe his memory otherwise he might go off and do as he pleases. He is the first success. First, let’s extract the genetic and biological information required in order to employ into the other subjects. Perhaps it is a gene in his genome that could allow us to implement the same data and results into other subjects’ genome,” said Scientist 3.

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“We have to test the effectiveness of the training kernel,” said Scientist 1.
(Zane is on the battlefield. Several rogue shinobi rush at him. Zane’s hair has now gone completely gray.)

“Who am I? Why am I at this god forsaken place,” said Zane. (They near his location. From the screen wired to a camera scouting the area, the scientists watches on.) “Move, what the hell,” said Scientist 1. “Don’t just sit there, attack,” yelled Scientist 2. “What waste, if he dies it will all be for nothing,” said Scientist 3.

(Switch Scene, they surround him. They question whether he can fight or not and charges on to attack him.)

“What’s this urge I’m feeling? Is it the desire to survive? Or the will to fight just for the sake of it,” said Zane. (He instinctively starts making handseals. Huge water bubbles surround him, he sends one down each throat of his opponent. He then tightens up his hands and each of his opponents drown in an instant and dies an awful death on land.)

“This power, it just appeared like a rushing thought in my head. I just began to think about the situation, an all of a sudden, my enemies lie dead at my feet,” said Zane.

(Switch Scene to the Scientists, as they are in awe of his enhanced abilities.)

“Yes… It seems with the enhancement, he can shape and bound microscopic water molecules within the atmosphere in order to create dense water particles used in water manipulation without even using his mouth. The project is a resounding success,” said Scientist 2. (They return to scoop up Zane.) “You too? You challenge me for the right to live,” said Zane. “No, of course not. We can help you discover who you are. Just come with us,” said Scientist 3. “My purpose,” said Zane.

(Zane is in a water prison. A few years later, the SNA are used in battle to aid the allied nations. Each of the major powers get a certain amount, and based off the war price, determines the amount as well as the skill level of the SNA deployed to each of Suna, Konoha, and Kumo and small nations allied with them. Since Tuschigakure has remained neutral in the war and didn’t fund the project, they receive no SNA aide however, a certain situation proves the opposite. The scene is at the outskirts of one of the Rock Village’s camps. Many Rock troops gather and defend the fort and fight in battle. Many are losing their lives to the Mizugakure troops. However, one man fights strong, one man continues to swing is blade in order to keep his home alive.

(A man dressed in black fights for his home.)

“Not, until they’re all gone. I’ll happily give my life in order to protect my land,” said Blake.

(He wields his blade effortlessly and takes out many troops as possible. He also defends his comrades however, he soon takes a blow to the stomach, which causes him to kneel over. Others begin to lose their morale as their best agent is injured and is about to get surrounded by vast amounts of shinobi forces however, a lightning bolt from the sky cleanly clears the battle field of most opposing forces. Soon a female shinobi lands in front of Blake.)

“You should thank that the allied forces for saving your ass. If it wasn’t for them sending me here, your stubborn as Kage would have met his eventual end,” said Ratie. (The surviving mist shinobi look on as Raitie effortlessly killed their comrades.)

“NO, I’m going in there,” yelled Mist Shinobi. (Another mist shinobi grabs him.) “Don’t. That’s the Lightning Succubus. Said to be able to channel lightning of judgement from Zeaus himself. She is an SNA agent sent in to wipe us out. It is best to leave right now,” said Shinobi 2. (They begin to cower and fear and soon run for it.)

“Not so fast,” yelled Raitie. (She controls lightning bolts from the heavens and strikes down on the troops, killing them all.)

“SNA hmm? They are worthy of their praise. Maybe our government should have enlisted them after all,” said Blake. “AMAZING,” said Rock shinobi. “Wow, the SNA are extremely powerful,” said another. “Did you see those lightning bolts,” said Rock shinobi 2. “She’s not bad looking either,” said Rock shinobi 3. “She’d kick your ass,” said Shinobi 4.

“Your name… What is it,” asked Blake. “Though it is of no importance that you know, I’ll tell you anyway, so you can remember who it was who saved your pathetic asses. Remember, the SNA that served your government in time of need. I go by the name of Raitie,” said Raitie. (Soon a bolt of lightning strikes her position, she vanishes. Everyone is in awe.)

“Raitie, hmm,” mumbled Blake. “What is it sir,” asked another shinobi in his unit. “It is nothing, I just think that one day, we’ll meet again, on the battlefield,” said Blake.
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The Scene switches to the outskirts of one of Mizugakure’s camps. Shisio is escorted in from his battle with Hiro by his Devil’s army. They are worried about his condition. He is placed into a tent, while they leave, Shisio gets a visit from his second lieutenant.)

“Commander, you need to rest for a bit. You can’t keep battling with Hiro. Though you guys are evenly match, point for point. But give it up, it is over, and you are an important aspect to this village. Once being a member of the Sevenmist swordsmen however, your desire to follow your own path, resulted in you creating your own specialized unit that perhaps even surpasses the seven mist swordsmen due to your amassed troops,” said Aito.

“As long as Hiro is on the battlefield, I will go. Mizukage stated I was the only one that could take him. And it is true. No one stands a chance,” said Shisio. “Thankfully Konoha has finally pulled out. You don’t have to worry about that anymore. We’ve lost. But we still have our pride. The Hokage has led the allied nations to win the war,” said Aito.

“I gave Hiro a wound he won’t forget. Yes, he got my left eye, but, I don’t expect him to roam the battles for a while. If he still poses as a threat, I’ll take him out. Right now, it is a stalemate, he wouldn’t dare approach me in his current status. Now that it is settled, I’m satisfied with at least injuring him that much,” said Shisio. “Please don’t do anything rash. With the SNA still at large, it is dangerous even for us to step out in the cold. We’ll await further orders from Mizukage,” said Aito.

(Amy, a familure name enters the tent. She is Shisio’s first lieutenant.)

“Mizukage issued us, our army to defend against the last of the enemy’s raid. Since we are the most active and abled on the field, we have to be there,” said Amy. (Shisio tries to get up. While Amy places her hand on his chest to keep him down.)

“No. Not you. The village needs you at a time like this; and in your condition, you might be unable fight to your best. Rest. Please. I’m… Not just saying this because you’re my commander. I’m saying this because you’re really important me, no strings attached,” said Amy. “Amy… Fine. You’re the boss right now. Lead them as I would. Watch your asses out there,” said Shisio.

(He grabs Amy’s hand and holds unto it tightly before slowly letting go. The scene is switched to a barren waste land. Six SNA troops are exchanging information with seven mist swordsmen. The sevenmist swordsmen take off.)

“I guess it was a good idea I didn’t shatter their faces after all,” said Tank “Win through compromise I always say,” sighed Sakuya. “About the Mizukage’s morale, why would she betray her troops like this,” asked Ino Shika Cho. “Yes, the tip was unexpected. Definitely,” said Oita. “OH well, we still have to pay Mizukage a visit since, Konoha, Kumo, and Suna are paying us so well,” said. Michi. (She licks her face.)

(Tetsuo looks through a crystal ball.) “Faced with undefeatable odds, even the most grizzled war veterans must bend the rules to survive,” said Tetsuo. (All of a sudden about 100 troops, the Devil’s Army begin to raid however, they notice it is only six shinobi.)
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“What is this? How come there are only six? I was told there was a whole unit by the passing Mist swordsmen,” said Amy. “Well if it is only six, then, we have nothing to worry about,” said Aito.

(They near the location. Everyone is shocked by the sight as they stand above a cliff and scout the area from high ground.)

“Commander. It is the SNA,” trembled Army member 1. “Impossible. The SNA? We were never told about any of this,” said Aito. “Mizukage wouldn’t put us up against the SNA with such a small group. Shit, the more recognized members are here. They are said to individually be able to kill 100 men each,” said Aito.

(Switch Scene to SNA operatives, Tank starts to move. Sakuya places her hand in front.)

“No,” said Sakuya. “What is it now,” asked Tank. “Not yet. We strike soon, but not now,” said Tetsuo as he looks on in his crystal ball.

(Back to Devil’s Army.)

“That’s just a myth, it is not possible that there can be people that powerful,” said Member 2. “Yeah, let’s not be worried,” said another. (They start screaming hopes of victory.) “Silence,” yelled Amy. “Guys, stop acting ridiculous. Pay attention and brace yourselves. Pull out your binoculars, everyone,” said Aito. (They all do what he says and scout the area.)

“The giant bald man is known as The Iron Fist on the battlefield. His skilled taijutsu is beyond reproach. Face him at long range with ninjutsu. If he catches you, even once, it is over. The man with the long silver hair is master summoner. He can summon creatures from the darkest depths. He we call him The Conjurer. The Fat man over there, during his activation stage, he was enhanced with trade mark skills from three powerful clans from Konoha. He can manipulate shadows, animals, people, and crushes his opponents with enlargement ninjutsu.

The normal looking female over there, we haven’t seen her in battle, but be on your guard. The female with short hair was once a young shinobi from Konoha. She was injected with cells from Orochimaru’s corpse which was locked away in concealment after Kabuto was discovered. Finally, the young man over there. He is to be feared the most. Our information was gained from allies who were near death, yet with their last breath of air, they spoke of his terrifying ninjutsu,” said Amy. “What is his strength,” asked Army member.

“It is best you don’t know. We can’t be apprehensive. Now remember what I’ve told you all. Good luck and whatever happens, we are still the Devil’s army,” said Amy. “Let’s go,” yelled Aito.

(They attempt to flank. The SNA are surrounded. Tank cracks his knuckles.)

“Water Element: Slippery surface,” said by two shinobi. (Tank smiles. With his physical strength, his feet breaks through the earth and defeats the watery ground and with that, he retains footing as he tramples across the area. Immediately, he is chocking both of his attackers, be breaks their necks instantly.)
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"Like pretzels,” laughed Tank. (The Devil Army is being attacked viciously. Soon a large shadow ensnares dozens of shinobi. They all scream in terror.) “No, NOOO,” yelled Army Member. “I can’t move,” said another one. “Oita, follow it up,” said Ino Shika Cho. “Summoning Jutsu: Smash,” said Oita.

(A large Whale materializes and falls from the air. The shinobi trapped by the shadows screams in terror as a monster of the sea prepares to flatten them all. The Whale lands on them, silencing them for good. From Ino Shika Cho’s backside, several shinobi attempts to attack from behind using short swords, however, immediately they fall to the earth, as Michi wields Orochimaru’s famous blade.)

“I didn’t need your help,” said Ino Shika Cho. “Nah, I’m just having fun,” said Michi. (Cuts to Sakuya. Many shinobi attempts to attack her while they prepares handseals. She makes quick hand seal and dark wave of chakra blinds their faces.)

“Hell of Endless Horror,” said Sakuya. (The dark chakra fades and the shinobi fall to the ground. In their minds they envision themselves being strapped down without any equipment to defend themselves. They are on tables in pits of hell. A devil looking butcher with a pick axe dissects a screaming shinobi alive.)

“When I’m done, with him, I’ll move unto the next and continue to torture you all for all eternity! In this hell you can live nor die, enjoy an endless life filled with extreme terror,” yelled Devil butcher. (They all sceam and squeal. Switch back to the battle field. Aito and Amy stand back to back. They are the only members of The Devil Army alive. They stand back to back and look on as everyone else is dead. They then focus on Tetsuo.)

“They’re all dead… It must have been a trap set up by Mizukage to get us,” said Aito. “Why. These guys… She knew we couldn’t handle them. Why. WHY,” yelled Amy. (Tetsuo is near them both.) “Those as yourselves are only reliable as sacrifices,” said Tetsuo. (Switch Scene to Tank.)

“Those guys over there are a little stronger than the rest of them. I’ll back up Tetsuo,” said Tank. (Sakuya places her hand in front of him.) “No, this is his battle. You’ve had your fun,” said Sakuya. “Errrr,” groaned Tank.

(Switch Scene to Tetsuo. He has his arm extended frontwards. He obtains control over Aito’s body.) “Ahh!! You, have to live on and tell Shisio,” yelled Aito. (His body explodes, his scraps hit the ground.) “Aito… AITO!!!,” yelled Amy. (She reaches out her hand to the blood filled ground, in which her comrade once stood.)
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“I overflowed his body with my chakra by constantly injecting it into his body through is pours, he couldn’t even feel it. Then at the last moment, I turned it into an explosive discharge, which destroyed his body from the inside out,” said Tetsuo.

(She tries to run away, yet her body can’t move.) “Is this as far as I go? Mizukage, you bitch. How… We fought for you. We bled for you. Yet you, you. Shisio. Don’t let her control, don’t her succeed in her plan. My greatest regret, is not being able to tell you that I,” said Amy as she soon suffers the same fate as Aito. Switch Scene to Mizukage’s location. The seven mist swordsmen are there with her.)

“Good. Now the ball’s in motion. With our rule over the world now fading, no one would believe that we’d drop another bomb shell. Shisio will never forgive Hiro, if we told Shisio that Hiro destroyed the Devil Army. I’ll tell Shisio that before the mission I specifically changed Amy’s mission and say, I sent her out to scout the SNA in order to reach an agreement to increase our forces however, their hostility caused her death, though he'll probably not trust me, and assume Hiro done it.

The Army of the Devil is too speculative and supportive of a traditional government, they must be dealt with. However, Shisio is not expendable. Though, he and Hiro are fierce rivals. He respects him as a man and as a war hero. He already knows that Konoha has pulled out due to them securing victory, but If We tell Shisio that Hiro attacked with is unit despite Konoha gaining victory, he’d consider Hiro as nothing more than a dog who disregard all forms of conventional war like behavior by disobeying his village’s order in order to seek revenge out on him. It would be as though Hiro back stabbed him,” said Mizukage.

(Switch Scene to Shisio’s tent. Mizukage is there to tell him about the so called mission.)

“What is it? How did it go,” asked Shisio. (From there the Mizukage fills Shisio’s heart with hatred and contempt for Hiro. Switch scene to the outskirts of Kumogakure. Mizukage is there with a young man named Kai.)

“Kai. As the Eight Tailed host, you are perhaps one of the most powerful entities in the shinobi universe. Though The Hokage is also powerful as he’s the Kyuubi’s host, he doesn’t rely specifically on the power of his Bijuu. You were trained since day one as powerful host. Your father gave his life for you to succeed him. He fled from his home village of Kumogakure and started a new life as a refugee. I promised him that I’d protect you from the lands. He sealed the bijuu from himself into you so that you could fulfill your purpose. Now, my son… Destroy Kumogakure’s army over there,” said Mizukage.

(A young mixed with yellowish skin man with a light curly fro that is in a pony tail, goes into the tailed states and destroys the armory with a chakra blast. He then reverts.)

“Now, leave and hide yourself back at the village. We can’t afford to have you discovered,” said Mizukage. “Understood,” said Kai. (Mizukage quickly places a SNA headband near the ruins.) “With this, the allied nations will be forced to attack the SNA. They will believe the experiments caused them to go haywire and mad. Then I will ally myself with them and build up quite the resistance,” said Mizukage.

(Over time, a Kage meeting is held. Their plan is to exterminate the SNA, due to their amazing and dramatic abilities. Many are hunted down, the project is shut down. Soon images of the SNA being cornered and attacked are shown. The lab is now destroyed. The scene switches to the ruins of the SNA lab. Many of the surviving members as well as the six strongest members come across Raitie and Asura.)

“How could they, we fought for them, we gave up our lives as citizens to become what we are,” said Asura. “Hmm, revenge. That is the only thing that crosses my mind,” said Raitie. (Immediately Tetsuo is in front of them.) “Then join me. They fear us, that is why they want us dead. United we stand, divided we fall. Unless we stick together, we’ll never have enough strength to defend ourselves against the will of the allied forces,” said Tetsuo.

(The other 5 members appear behind him as well.) “Guys. Wait here for a second,” said Tetsuo. (He spots a lone SNA troop with long spiky gray hair. He is sitting on top of a cliff.) “I’ve never seen you before,” said Tetsuo. “After the lab fell, my containment capsule shattered and here I am. I don’t remember anything of my passed life,” said Unknown. “I’ve heard about you. So, you’re the only one whom had their memory wiped. Subject Blank the first to survive the treatments, I’ve only heard legends about you,” said Tetsuo.
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“My name, what is my real name,” asked Blank. “That doesn’t matter now. You can shape your own name under my rule. You’ll learn what it is to live and die as a man of unbelievable expectations,” said Tetsuo. “Whatever. As long as I have a purpose, a raison d’e tre, I’ll give this nameless body of mine something to strive for,” said Blank. (He turns around and walks away from Tetsu. As he walks, a dog tag falls from a slot in his coat pocket. Once Blank walks away, Tetsuo picks it up and reads it.)

“Uzumaki Zane. The Origin whom set precedent for the SNA; what a brilliant specimen to add to my list of higher ups,” said Tetsuo.

(The SNA’s dark history has been revealed. Their beef with the allied nations, and Mizukage’s heinous plot to screw up everyone’s lives and shape them to benefit her own, has all be orchestrated, seven years ago.)

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(Sasuke makes a startling statement.) “I would like to reclaim Konoha for myself and I need able bodied supporters. Will you aid me,” asked Sasuke. “Join you? Heh, ha, hah,” Shisio busts out in a dramatic laughter. “The thought must amuse you. What is your damage,” asked Sasuke.

“Konoha? I want nothing to do with that hell hole,” said Shisio. “Hmm. Difficult aren’t we? Fine, I’ll have Hiro face you once again,” said Sasuke. “You think it is that easy. I only want Hiro’s death, that is all. I won’t serve you or anyone else,” said Shisio. (He sits down and smiles.) “I’m tired of being tossed around. It is time I live for myself. Your dreams of conquest does not interest me. I exist only to exact my revenge out on Hiro. Anything else is nothing more than a hindrance. Friendship, cooperation? To hell with it all,” yelled Shisio.

“I see,” said Sasuke. (Scene switches to Konoha. Blake and Teru return to their respective villages. Shun is rushed in on a stretcher. Everyone is outside the room hoping for his safe recovery. The Hokage, Team Hiro, and Dosa stand outside the room and is soon escorted out.)

“He’s a strong man, he is sure to pull through,” said Dosa. “Yeah, though he’ll be in there for a while. He completely exhausted his chakra supply and fractured bones in his arms and feet, yet he used the pill to go beyond his physical and mental capabilities. It won’t be an easy recovery,” said The Hokage.

“Well, I’m off to the recovery as well, I need to rest up just a bit, how about you Dosa,” said Hiro. “Fine, sure whatever,” said Dosa. (They rush off into the recover chambers. The Hokage smiles as he remembers when Dosa and Hiro were young boys goofing around.)

“Nila, I’m impressed. But don’t think you’ll get off easy. When you return home I’m sure your mother will be quite taken with you,” said The Hokage. “Yesss daddd,” said Nila. “I need to go prepare somethings, you guys also get ready for bed. I got big plans for tomorrow,” said The Hokage as the shadow clone poofs.

"I wonder what dad has for us," said Nila.

“Sigh, does he ever not be extreme,” sighed Zig. (The Three students walk outside the hospital. It is in the morning. They walk a few ways toward Nila’s house however, Zig is immediately hook in the face by Hope. Zig hits the ground hard. He gets up slides to the ground and spits up blood, while he slowly regains his senses he spits up blood.)

“ZIG,” yelled Nila. “DAMN,” yelled Laya. (Nila rushes over to Zig’s aide.) “Hope, what the hell? How could you. Look at him,” said Nila. “Just paying back the favor. Boy you never do anything stupid like that again,” said Hope. (Zig gets up and tries to punch Hope back however, Hope slips his head out of the way and knees Zig in the gut, causing him to cough up blood and spit and kneel over.) “ARRGGH,” barfed Zig.

“That’s it, enough. I’m sorry it was my,” said Nila before getting cut off. “GO HOME,” said Hope. “But,” said Nila before getting cut off. “I SAID GO HOME,” yelled Hope. (Laya rushes off wailing her arms all crazy like while Nila is surprised at Hope’s demanor.) “Zig, I’m sorry. Just stop it already. It is all my fault, just leave him alone right now,” said Nila. (Hope look eyes with Nila this causes her to cry a little as she dashes home.)

“You got some nerve kid. You know damn well how Nila is, yet you took her along trying to be some hero. What would you have done if she got seriously injured or worse,” said Hope.

(Zig looks down.) “You know I really expected more out of you. I thought you told me you wanted to protect her, yet you put her in danger. This is the real world don’t get all big and cocky because people start to know who you are. Now get out of my sight,” said Hope.

(Hope turns around as Zig tosses a smoke bomb near Hope.) “Kid, learn to know your place,” said Hope. (In the smoke Zig touches both of Hope’s arms.) “Ninja Art: Bone crusher,” said Zig. (However, he notices that nothing is happeneing so he backs out of the smoke. Hope does as well. They stand face to face, probably a few yards from each other..)

“So, your body absorbs chakra, not bad. That was one of my special techniques. By force I constantly apply insane levels of chakra to my opponents body, this causes the bones and internal organs to collaspe. I was going easy on you though as I went for your arms, but to think that either way I would have been uneffective with it. Let’s see if you can withstand this technique. Still. I don’t care how strong you are. I’m not going to let you get away with kicking my ass in front of women,” smiled Zig. “Kid, it seems your lesson hasn’t been learned yet,” said Hope.

(Zig begins making handseals. Hope thrusts his hands out as it preparing to do shinra tensei.)

“Ninja Art: All Around Compression,” smiled Zig. “Shinra Tensei,” said Hope.

(The Hokage comes in the middle of them both, which causes them to stop their attacks.) “Yougin get out of here,” said The Hokage. “Ahh, sure thing,” said Zig. (He rushes off.) “Hope. Come on, he’s just a kid. You are five years older than he is, don’t be sucked into his little games,” sighed The Hokage. “Yes, I know. I’m sorry father. It is just that his behavior of his. He could have gotten Nila into some serious danger,” said Hope.

“You realize that boy has a thing for your little sister. Just don’t be so hard on him. He’s just a boy after all. Please try to understand,” said The Hokage. “Yes, I understand father,” said Hope.

(Switch Scene to Sasuke and Shisio. Shisio is taking a stroll while Sasuke follows him.)

“Dude, will you stop following me? You’re beginning to piss me off,” said Shisio. “How about this? I don’t need you as my ally. Just take out Hiro for me. The less nuisances the better,” said Sasuke.

(Shisio quickly turns around and grabs Sasuke by his collar.) “Fine. I’ll do it. But only because I really what Hiro out of the picture and you are starting to drive me insane, after that I’m gone. You’ll never see me again, you got that,” yelled Shisio. “Nice, now I’ll go gather more recruits,” said Sasuke. “What was that,” said Shisio.
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(Switch Scene Mizukage’s office.)

“I’ll say it one more time… What will it be,” asked Sakuya. “I’m real sick and tired of you dodging us woman. Sakuya, let’s get out of here before I kill this broad. We’ll just search this village and kill anyone who won’t speak to us about the tailed beasts,” said Tank. “Fine. My son, Kai. He is the new eight tailed host. He is a very skilled individual. I recommend not doing battle with him,” said Mizukage.

“The Eight tails hmm. What ever happened to Killer Bee,” said Tank. “Well he,” said Mizukage. “No, need for a back drop. We’ll just wait for the perfect opportunity,” said Sakuya. “He should be returning home from a mission soon. He usually stops by to speak to me once he finishes up,” Mizukage. “Then we’ll wait for then,” said Tank. “Hmm. Kai. It is only a matter of time,” thought Mizukage.

(Switch Scene to SNA headquarters. Raitie awakes.)

“Where am I? I’m back here,” said Raitie. “Welcome back,” said Tetsuo. “Boss. Damn, that Dosa character. Fuck, had no idea he was powerful. I underestimated him,” said Raitie. “Don’t worry about that. I want you and Ino Shika Cho to go find Asura. Bring him back here. I fear he is hiding something from me,” said Tetsuo. “That fool, fine lets go,” said Raitie. “Farewell,” said Ino Shika Cho.

(Tetsuo activates the portal and they leave.) “Blank, after everyone has returned from their objectives. I want you to capure Nila, whom is The Hokage’s daughter. By doing so, we can draw him near. Don’t leave yet. Wait until everyone has completed their missions. It will probably take several days perhaps a little longer, but hold firm, your time will come,” said Tetsuo. “Yes, boss,” said Blank.

(Switch Scene to the Waterfall Village Michi continues to fight with Aya. The village is in ruins. Oita sits on top of the ruins and watches the battle. Aya stabs Michi with a Kunai, that causes her to revert into a mud substitution.)

“A substitution,” said Aya. (She turns around and barely escapes Michi’s blade, which is Orochimaru’s trade mark weapon, by leaning back, Aya goes into a back bend and sticks her legs up, kicking Michi in the face.)

“Hell yeah, my baby got it! Oops. I shouldn't be cheering for her,” smiled Oita. “You’re strong and got fast reflexes,” said Michi as she recovers. “My village. All the people. With the sun shining, you have me in the worst possible situation for yourselves!,” yelled Aya.

(Her eyes grow demonic.) “That’s the way,” said Michi. (Aya begins making seals the sun comes out more strongly and glares intensely. Then a concentrated lense of chakra forms in the air above the battlefield.) “Ninja Art: Sun’s Ray,” yelled Aya. (Soon a ray of the sun’s blast tourches Michi.) “AYYYAA,” sreeched Michi. “Oh shit. She can intensify the sun’s rays and control it,” said Oita.

(Michi’s body is toasted.) “Now, unto the other one,” said Aya as she glares at Oita. (All of a sudden the shell around Michi’s torched corpse cracks, which soon reveals a newly refreshed Michi.)

“Pesky brat. Causing me to use my stronger substitution. Can’t allow you to do that to me again,” said Michi. (She begins making handseals and hundreds of snakes come pouring out of her mouth. Then she summons one large one, on caliber with Manda. She jumps on top of the monstrous serpent which also creates a blade that expels from its mouth.“This time, I’ll shut you up,” said Michi.

(Aya’s teeth grow sharp and her body begins to spew green chakra all around her. The scene soon switches to the training field at Konoha. It is eary in the afternoon. Zig, Laya, and Nila are out in a field. They are soon greeted by Hiro, Dosa, and The Hokage, the three most powerful shinobi in the village.)

"Hot damn Zig. Hope sure wopped ya ass didn't he," laughed Laya. (Nila rubs Zig's face. He has bandanges around his head. Nothing to major.) "Are you fine. Hope shouldn't have done that. I'm really sorry for what happened," said Nila. "No it's fine. Don't worry about it. He just caught me in a off mood," said Zig.

"Attention," yelled Hiro. (The team straigtens up.)

“Due to certain circumstances, we need you guys to get stronger for the upcoming events. That is why I arranged for you guys to undergo extreme training,” said The Hokage. “No foolin,” said Nila. “I’m plenty strong as is,” said Zig. “Don’t be like that, these guys are the best you can learn a thing or two about modesty you jack ass,” said Laya.

"Sometimes I wonder why I don't just stick my fist in your mouth," said Zig. (Nila pulls Zig's pants leg to calm him down.)

“Each of us got to choose one of you brats to improve,” said Dosa. “Right. Zig, you are like you said plenty strong,” said Hiro. “Yeah I know,” said Zig.

(They all sigh.) “Therefore you will be doing nothing but sparring with Hiro, as you are the only one out of anyone in your age group whom can effectively train with Hiro,” said The Hokage. “Yeah, I’m going to train with father,” lauged Nila.

“Actually, you’ll be training with Dosa,” said The Hokage. “What? Why am I left with this loser,” said Nila. “Loser, you fuckin bed wetter,” said Dosa. (Zig and Laya chuckle.) “Oh you,” groaned Nila. “Nila, Dosa is a brilliant shinobi, don't be mean. Besides, you need to learn how to brawl and really take a punch and become more ruthless and relentless in combat. My training method isn’t something you kids should try to learn. Wait until you are a little older,” said The Hokage.

(They all take notice.) “Yeah, that mean I get you right,” said Laya. “Kids these days, do they ever pay attention,” said Dosa.
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