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Old 04-08-2012, 03:10 PM   #436
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So basically naruto has inherited vishnu's lightning powers right smh? nice read though, luking to the continuation
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well done vishnu.

me personally, not a huge fan of the direction you have the younger generation taking, but you are being concise and not leaving any loopholes. That in and of itself, makes this an enjoyable read.
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well done vishnu.

me personally, not a huge fan of the direction you have the younger generation taking, but you are being concise and not leaving any loopholes. That in and of itself, makes this an enjoyable read.
Actually i'm not so happy about his direction, but it's necessary, because i have decided not so long ago to make also a third part of the fanfic. The first one was the Beggining of the end, this one was the next generation and the last one will be the conclusion of the events. I changed it a lot, because i had some ideas at the beggining that could not be integrated in this part, but in the next one. Anyway, thank you for the critic, it's noted. I'm glad that you consider it an enjoyable read.
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I'm just hoping for Sasuke/Sakura and Naruto/Hinata couplings in your third installment.
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I'm just hoping for Sasuke/Sakura and Naruto/Hinata couplings in your third installment.
Well...who said it that this second part it's over yet? And anyway...it's not about hooking up.
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Well...who said it that this second part it's over yet? And anyway...it's not about hooking up.
I wouldn't say hooking up in a physical sense, but becoming actual couples.

I'm hoping that if anyone is to surpass Sasuke and/or Naruto, it would be their children (not the current younger generation). But I'm sure I'll be entertained by a talented writer.
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^I agree with u but then again that might too good to be true so lets just stick to the younger generation surpassing the older one theme.
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Surpassed Part 1
*Scene shows Naruto walking out of the conference room being followed by Shikamaru.*
Shikamaru: Naruto…. wait up.
*Naruto turns and looks around at Shikamaru and sees everyone else coming out towards him.*
Naruto smiling: Yeah, what’s up?
Shikamaru: You ok?
Naruto: Yeah… I’ve let that go.
Shikamaru: Then tell me….
Naruto: About what?
Shikamaru: Your plan.
*The rest of the Konoha 12 has surrounded Shikamaru and Naruto now.*
Naruto smiles: It’s time for some training.
Hinata: May I train with you Naruto-kun?
Naruto looks at Hinata: Hinata….. *Naruto sees the look on her face.* Sure.
Sai steps forward: Maybe we should all train with you.
Kiba: Yeah, we may not be at your level, but I want to do my damnedest to get there.
*The Konoha 12 walk off to a field. Scene switches to KillerBee sitting on a branch watching the younger generation train. Ei flickers in to sit by his brother.*
Bee: What’s goin’ on?
Ei: I wanted to see this boy train myself.
Bee: Me, too.
Ei: So who’s going to help him?
Bee: Them…. and him.
*Scene shows Kurama talking to Naruto about some of his newfound abilities.*
Kurama: Now that we have merged, you will have enormous healing abilities, with no drawbacks. All you have to do is think about it.
Naruto: Awwessssoooommmmmeeee!
*Naruto punches his fist in the air.*
Naruto: So I can heal others as well?
Kurama: Yes.
*Scene focuses back on Naruto and Kiba who are sparring.*
Kiba: Don’t hold back on me, Naruto.
Naruto: I kinda have to.
*Kiba tries his Beast Mimicry, Fang Over Fang jutsu. Naruto catches both Kiba and Akamaru and tosses them in the air like they are rag dolls. Once Kiba and Akamaru fall to the ground Neji and Hinata walk over to the trio.*
Neji: We should leave Naruto alone, he can’t train properly with us.
*Naruto looks Hinata.*
Hinata: We’ll leave you alone so you can train with him.
Naruto dumbfounded: huh….
Hinata: I can tell the kyuubi wants to work with you by reading your chakra. It’s different. I would say its disturbed, but seeing how the two of you work together now, this might be your chakra in harmony with his.
Kurama to Naruto: She’s good.
*Hinata walks up to Naruto, gets on her tiptoes, and kisses Naruto on the cheek.*
Hinata: Just make sure you don’t overdo it.
*Scene switches to Bee and Ei as Hinata walks away from Naruto.*
Bee: My man is gettin’ some action.
Ei laughing: Oh that takes me back.
*Scene switches back to the field, showing Naruto walking over to Shikamaru.*
Naruto: Mind if I join you for a bit?
Shikamaru: Sure… what’s on your mind?
Naruto: This isn’t going to be normal training for me anymore.
Shikamaru: Yeah, I figured it would come to this. What… do you know… as far as your capabilities?
*Naruto sits by Shikamaru.*
Naruto: Well, now I can heal myself and others.
Shikamaru: That’s a huge advantage.
Naruto: I can also replenish others’ chakra as long as it doesn’t get rid of my own.
Shikamaru: Hmmm… shouts: Lee…. Neji…. come here real quick.
*Neji and Lee appear before Shikamaru.*
Shikamaru: I know how we can help Naruto train.
*Neji smiles while Lee does his traditional thumbs up.*
Shikamaru: I need you two to spar, going all out, but not killing one another.
*Neji and Lee look at each other.*
Lee: So which gate?
Neji: How far have you gone?
Lee: The fifth gate.
Shikamaru: Do it.
*Lee immediately goes to the fifth gate, while Neji enters a battle stance. As the two begin to spar, a crowd begins to join Bee and Ei. Last to join the group are Tsunade, Kakashi, and Gai.*
Gai looking out at Neji and Lee: What the…. wait a minute.
*Gai begins running towards them, only to be stopped by Bee and Ei.*
Gai: But those are my students.
Bee: And Naruto’s comrades. They’re helping him.
Kakashi: I get it.
*Gai has a dumbfounded look.*
Kakashi: He’s trying to master that already.
*Neji and Lee fall over from their sparring. Naruto gets up and walks to Neji, picking him up and carrying him over to Lee. As he lays down Neji, he kneels between the two, holding his hand over their chests. Naruto enters full Kurama mode*
Kurama: Now concentrate. You gave Kakashi just enough chakra so he wouldn’t die. This time you’re trying to heal them and give them chakra. Too much could be bad for both you and them.
Naruto: How so?
Kurama: Our chakras have melded together. They tolerate each other. My chakra is too much for them.
*Naruto begins to sweat because he is concentrating so much. Everyone is surrounding him now. Neji is the first to open his eyes.*
Neji whispers: I’m ok now Naruto.
*Naruto pulls that hand away from Neji and concentrates solely on Lee.*
Ei: Why is it taking so long for him?
Gai: Because he opened 5 of the 8 inner gates.
Ei: You Konoha shinobi… no wonder….
*Naruto is still trying to heal Lee. Lee grabs Naruto’s arm.*
Lee: I’m fine Naruto.
*Naruto stops and stands up. It takes Lee a while to get up.*
Gai: Lee?!
Lee: Gai-sensei…. I’m fine. I’ll just need some rest to recuperate my lost chakra.
Gai: Neji?!
Neji: I’m fine as well…. but I don’t need rest. I’m good to go, and then some.
Kakashi: Not quite there, but close. The fact that Lee was in the fifth gate for over 15 minutes… and just two minutes later, is walking around… *Kakashi gives Naruto a thumbs up.* Good job!
*Naruto disperses Kurama mode.*
Kurama: We need to rebuild our chakra as well. Plus there is more training to be done.
*Tsunade and Sakura walk up to Naruto.*
Sakura: You’ve gotten better than me.
Tsunade in thought: And me.
Naruto: I had some help.
Sakura: I’m really glad you’re ok… and you’re here… with us.
Naruto staring at Hinata: Me, too.
*Sakura looks over at Hinata.*
Sakura: You don’t….
Naruto: I will…. or I’ll die trying… that’s my nindo.
Sakura: But what about her? *nodding to Hinata.*
Shikamaru buts in: We’ve tried things our way, and it hasn’t worked. Let’s try it his way. You have our support Naruto.
*Hinata walks up to Naruto and takes his hand in both of hers.*
Hinata: And mine!
Kakashi: Obito, you would be proud!
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Surpassing Part 2
*Scene shows the sun rising on Kumagakure. Panel focuses on Naruto propped up against a tree, with Hinata in his lap. Naruto stretches as he wakes up and yawns. Hinata looks up at Naruto.*
Hinata: Good morning Naruto-kun.
Naruto smiling: Good morning Hinata.
*Neji walks up behind the tree.*
Neji: Your father wouldn’t approve of this Hinata.
*Hinata looks at Neji with a worried face.*
Neji: I won’t tell him under one condition.
*Hinata and Naruto look at Neji.*
Neji: You have to promise you’ll be there for her, Naruto. As I know she will be there for you.
Naruto: You got it.
Kurama to Naruto: You haven’t gotten this much action since your little tryst with Sasuke.
Naruto: Shadddyuuppp!!! *Naruto raising his fist at Kurama.*
Kurama: There are two techniques you need to learn…. your father’s jutsus.
Naruto staring at Kurama: Which two? I’ve already mastered the Rasengan and have taken it further.
Kurama: Yes, but you need to master the Flying Thunder God and the Death God.
Naruto: Aye…. that jutsu… I’ve already tried it, remember? We almost killed Jiraya-sama.
Kurama: You didn’t have what you needed then. You can get it now.
Naruto: How so…
Kurama: You need to talk to the Hokage… and leave for Konoha.
*Scene switches back to Hinata, Neji, and Naruto under the tree. Shikamaru has joined them now.*
Naruto: Where is Granny Tsunade?
Shikamaru: At HQ, why?
Naruto: I need to talk to her.
*Scene switches to HQ, showing all of the Kages at a table, joined by numerous Konoha jounin. Naruto busts through the doors with Hinata, Neji, and Shikamaru in tow.*
Naruto: Granny Tsunade…. *Naruto realizing who’s in the room.* What’s going on…
Tsunade: Uzamaki Naruto…. front and center.
*Naruto stands before the table and crowd. Shizune, Kakashi, and the rest of the Konoha 12 enter the room.*
Tsunade: Based on evidence provided and the circumstances we are facing… *Tsunade looks Naruto square in the eye.* I’m stripping you of the title genin.
Naruto: But….
Tsunade: And under the recommendation of Konoha’s jounin forces, as well as the other Kages, promoting you to special jounin.
Naruto smiles: Really?
Tsunade: Yes. Not a single person in this room can compare to you right now.
Naruto: Then I need to leave.
Tsunade with a questioned look: Why?!
Naruto: I need the Hokage scroll.
Tsunade: Figures… I’ll allow it under one condition.
Naruto: Yeah…
Tsunade: These guys accompany you.
*Scene focuses on Yondaime’s bodyguards.*
Genma: It was a privilege serving your father. It will be a privilege serving you, Naruto-sama.
*The three men surround Naruto.*
Naruto: Wait!
*Naruto rushes over to Hinata.*
Naruto whispers to her: I’ll be back as soon as possible.
*Naruto kisses Hinata and then runs back to the trio.*
Naruto: Can you guys keep up with me?
Genma: Same old Naruto.
*The trio get in formation and flash out to Konoha. Scene switches to Kagame looking down from a cliff.*
Kagame: It’s going to take at least 4 days uncle. We’ll have to let both the hachibi and kyuubi chakra manifest and grow before using them to complete the juubi.
*Madara walks up behind Kagame.*
Madara: And what of your candidate?
*Kagame points down on a path, where you can see Juugo, Karin, and Suigetsu walking.*
Kagame: He’s been following them now for some time.
Madara: And who are they?
Kagame: Orochimaru’s guinea pigs.
Madara: Why did you choose him?
Kagame: All the conditions were right. He had a talented brother, he was impressionable, and I knew we could mold and grow the hatred inside of him.
Madara: And his brother?
Kagame: The first to awaken the Mangekyo Sharigan since myself.
*Scene shows flashback of when Kagame aided in Tobirama’s death, thus gaining his MS.*
Kagame: Even though he was a Senju dog, he tried to raise me after father passed and you left.
*Madara looks at Kagame.*
Madara: So how are you sure that Sasuke will not fail like Nagato?
Kagame: Because he is an Uchiha, and he can’t stand Uzamaki Naruto.
*Scene focuses on Karin. We see her shiver and go cold faced. Juugo straightens up as well.*
Suigetsu: What is it?
*Sasuke jumps out infront of them.*
Sasuke: Me!
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Surpassed Part 3
*Scene focuses on the Hokage’s Office. A cloud of smoke appears and dissipates revealing Naruto and crew.*
Naruto: Wow… was that…
Genma: Yes, that was the Flying Thunder God.
Naruto: Awesome.
Genma: So why are we here? If you’re looking to learn the FTG, we could teach it to you.
*Naruto suddenly knocks out all three men.*
Naruto: Sorry guys. But I know none of you would allow me to do this.
Kurama: Shouldn’t you have let them help you with FTG first?
*Naruto looks at all three.*
Naruto: Yeah….
Kurama: Let’s go. We need to hurry.
*Scene skips to Naruto in a file room, walking up to the scroll. Scene switches back to the Allied Forces HQ.*
Shikaku: Hokage-sama, was it wise to let Naruto have the scroll?
Tsunade: Wise or not, he would have done it had I not allowed him.
Shikamaru: She’s right dad.
Ei: And none of us can stop him either.
Shikaku: What do you think he wants there?
Tsunade: Knowing Naruto, who knows? in thought: I just hope it’s not that jutsu that he is after.
*Scene switches back to Naruto reading the scroll.*
Kurama: You can’t practice this jutsu like all the others you have done, Naruto. This one will take your life. *Scene shows a troubled look on Kurama’s face.*
Naruto: What’s wrong?
Kurama: You will know, if you ever meet him.
Naruto: Meet who?
Kabuto: The shinigami! *Scene shows the Death God.*
*All of a sudden several steps are heard, and Naruto puts the scroll back. The door to the room is opened and in walks Koharu and Komaru.*
Koharu: This door wasn’t locked…. odd.
Komaru: Someone’s been here.
*Naruto manages to sneak behind them, slamming the door shut.*
Naruto: It’s time for some answers.
Koharu: What is the meaning of this Naruto?
Naruto: I know the secret about the Uchiha massacre.
*Both Komaru and Koharu look at each other.*
Naruto: I heard the story from the masked man.
Koharu looks down: It’s true. Danzou provided proof of an Uchiha uprising. Hiruzen tried to reach a compromise. But Danzou wouldn’t have it. That’s why he choose his best warrior, Uchiha Itachi, to take on that mission.
Naruto: Because of you, Sasuke has sworn to come here and destroy Konoha, and the two of you.
Komaru: Who else knows of this?
Naruto: I’m not the ony one, and that is all you need to know.
*Naruto opens the door and leaves the room as Komaru and Koharu look at each other.*
Koharu: We should prepare then.
Komaru: For what?
Koharu: Our fight with Uchiha Sasuke. He’s already killed Danzou.
*Scene switches to the Hokage’s Office. Naruto walks in and tries to wake up the three men.*
Naruto: Sorry about the guys… just go so excited.
Genma: What the hell happened?
Naruto: So… can you guys teach me the FTG?
Genma: I’ll try.
Naruto: You?
Genma: Yeah, those two have orders.
*The other two leave.*
Genma: Let me start by explaining. The FTG is not a teleportation jutsu. It’s actually a summoning jutsu.
Naruto: Like a reverse summon?
Genma: Yeah… in thought: This may not be that hard after all.
Naruto: So who summons me?
Genma: No one does. The FTG uses seals. The seals are marked with your chakra, kind of like a homing device. You just let your chakra reabsorb, and in doing so, you’re pulled to that direction, that instant.
Kurama to Naruto: But we won’t use it the conventional way they have. They need it for close range fighting. You don’t.
Naruto: I got it. Can we head back now?
Genma: No, we’ve got at least an hour.
Naruto: Then it’s time for some ramen. My treat.
*Naruto and Genma walk off to get ramen. Meanwhile Kurama and Naruto have a conversation.*
Naruto: So if I won’t need the FTG for close range combat, why do I need it?
Kurama: Naruto, you’ve seen the destruction that Madara and that masked man can do. You are the only one who stands a chance against them. But your friends will still try to help you. This jutsu will help you protect them by keeping them away from Madara.
Naruto: But I’m fast enough already.
Kurama: True, but this does not require the amount of chakra.
*As Naruto and Genma are eating ramen, Naruto gets the “light bulb” look on his face.*
Naruto: So I can do this without your help?
Kurama: Yes…. and with my help, we can increase the distance.
Naruto: So that meteorite attack….
Kurama: Exactly!
*Scene fast forwards back to the Hokage’s Office with all four in it.*
Naruto: So you said it is done by seals…. do you place the seals where you want to go.
Genma: Yes.
Naruto: Is there any way that you can give me a seal…. I want to try something.
Genma: Try what…
*Naruto looks at him with Sage eyes.*
Genma: Ok.
*Genma hands him a piece of paper.*
Genma: We’ll give you two minutes. If you haven’t showed up by then, we’ll come get you.
Naruto: Thanks.
*The trio gets in their places and vanish*
Naruto: Here we go.
*Naruto vanishes. Scene switches to Mount Myouboku. Naruto sees Gamabunta and runs to him.*
Gamabunta: Naruto…. how’s it going?
Naruto: I don’t have much time. But you need to get everyone ready for battle.
Gamabunta: What do you mean?
Naruto: The 4th Great Ninja War has started, and we’re fighting Uchiha Madara. I must leave now.
*Naruto vanishes. Gamabunta orders a fodder toad to make preparations and notify everyone. Scene switches to AFHQ. Naruto puffs into the room.*
Genma: Took you long enough.
Naruto: Yeah, well…. I’m new at this.

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Great job Jekyl. It's a pleasure to read it. Anyway, i just wanted to let you guys now, that the last chapter of " The next generation" will be posted tomorrow. I almost finished it. And as i said, i have decided on a third part, that will continue the events in the first two parts and end it. After i will post the last chapter, i will post also a wuick plan about what to expect in the third part, of course...if you guys are willing to give me your time and to read it. I will wait for your answers. Thank you, everyone for your support until this moment.
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I've honestly given up on the manga I prefer these predictions :P well done Vishnu as always and Jekyl <3 you both
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Thank you smart. Anyway you won't be disappointed i hope, by the last chapter. Anyway, the last part will have a much darker theme to it. I intend to get back as much as possible the shinobi life in this one.
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The Low Life Genius
*Scene focuses on Sasuke standing infront of Suigetsu, Juugo, and Karin.*
Sasuke: Karin… You look like you’ve seen a ghost.
*Juugo steps infront of Karin with a determined look on his face.*
Sasuke: Relax Juugo.
Suigetsu: Sasuke…. *Tosses him the scroll.* I’m in.
*Sasuke looks at the scroll and then at Suigetsu puzzlingly.*
Sasuke: What’s this?
Suigetsu: A little gift from Orochimaru.
Sasuke: Hmm… in thought: I know he can see me. How do I get away from him?
*Scene shows Kagame looking down on Sasuke and crew.*
Kagame in thought: So you have it now.
*Scene shows a flashback of Kagame reading Izuna’s personal notes.*
Kagame in thought: So this is your and uncle’s wish?
*Danzou walks up.*
Danzou: Come on Kagame. We have to get ready for our first mission.
*Scene switches back to Sasuke and crew.*
Suigetsu: He’s alive.
Sasuke: Who?
Suigetsu: Orochimaru!!
*Sasuske switches to EMS.*
Sasuke: You’re not lying?!
Suigetsu: It’s all in there. *pointing at the scroll.*
Sasuke: Let’s move.
*The group starts walking down the path, trying to find some seclusion. Scene switches back to the small shack in Amegakure.*
Kabuto in thought: Almost there….
*Scene focuses out on Anko’s body lying on an operation table, strapped down.*
Kabuto: kukukukuk… but before I can bring you back… I have some loose ends to take care of.
*Scene focuses on Kabuto’s face, and in the reflection of his glasses, the Uchiha tablet. Scene switches to AFHQ.*
Naruto in thought to Kurama: Kurama…
Kurama: Yes Naruto?
Naruto: I know you’ve said that if I die, so do you.
*Kurama looks at Naruto with intent.*
Naruto: Just forget it.
Kurama: What is it Naruto?
Naruto: Nothing.
Kurama: I’m with you to the end Naruto.
*Naruto looks at Kurama and smiles. Back to reality, Sakura walks up to Naruto.*
Sakura: Naruto…
Naruto: Yes, Sakura-chan?
Sakura: You really like her, don’t you?
Naruto: Yeah… I do.
Sakura as a tear goes down her cheek: Don’t let it go.
*She kisses Naruto on the cheek and walks off. Scene switches to Sasuke and crew beneath a grove of trees.*
Sasuke: That low life. How did he know all of this?
*Suigetsu shrugs his shoulders.*
Sasuke: This changes things.
Suigetsu: So what’s our move?
Sasuke: Your move is to stay put. My move is to go back to them.
Suigetsu: Why are we splitting up again?
Sasuke: Because you are too weak.
*Suigetsu develops a scowl on his face. Karin looks down and sighs a sigh of relief.*
Sasuke: Juugo… tell me more about your clan. in thought glaring at Karin: I know you’re an Uzamaki. Your time will come.
*Scene switches back to Kagame and Madara.*
Madara: Is everything ready to go?
Kagame: We’re on schedule. in thought: I know you killed my father, uncle. Your time will come just like everyone else’s.
*Madara looks at Kagame and walks off.*
Kagame in thought: That’s right. My father left notes for stating he was suspicious of you and our clan. But he knew he couldn’t beat you. But I will succeed where he failed.
*Scene flashes back to Sasuke and Juugo underneath a tree. The moon is almost full with not a cloud in the sky.*
Sasuke: Don’t let them come after me, and neither should you.
Juugo: So this is it?
Sasuke: The next time we meet, I might have to kill you.
*Juugo goes wide-eyed. Scene switches back to Kumagakure, showing a room with the Konoha 12, Sand siblings, and Darui. Naruto enters the room.*
Shikamaru: Naruto… come on over here. *motioning for Naruto to join the group.*
*Naruto walks over and sits next to Shikamaru.*
Naruto: What’s going on?
Shikamaru: Just a little R&R.
Naruto: Oh….
Shikamaru: Why so down?
Naruto: It’s nothing. *He looks at Hinata and smiles.*
*Hinata returns the smile. Gaara and Darui have stone faces looking at Naruto.*
Darui: Naruto…
Naruto turning to Darui: Yeah…
Darui holding up his mug to Naruto: This one is for you.
*Darui downs the drink, and laughter breaks out in the room. Gaara keeps his stone face, crossing his arms.*
Temari: I can’t believe everyone is acting like this.
Gaara: Calm down. As long as it doesn’t get out of hand, this is good for the morale.
Temari: You’ve got the possible next Raikage getting drunk, and the strongest shinobi since shodai hokage having puppy love.
Gaara: I’ve seen the same looks between you and Shikamaru, Temari. Lighten up a bit, go talk to him.
*Temari looks at Gaara stunned.*
Gaara: Go! in thought: For this may be our last night together like this.
*Naruto gets up and leaves the room as Temari walks over to Shikamaru.*
Temari: So Shikamaru….
*Scene switches to Naruto out on a street, with Hinata walking up next to him.*
Hinata: So how was your trip?
Naruto: Insightful.
Hinata: Really?!
Naruto: Yeah.
*Gaara walks up to the coule.*
Gaara: Can I speak with Naruto for a moment, Hinata?

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jekyl_hyde MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE pleaseeeee!!!!
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