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Old 04-13-2012, 09:28 AM   #466
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i too was a little bummed by that ending, but i see the direction you're heading in.
i'm just hoping you bring naruto into the mix (i really like what you've done with him as the guardian of time).
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Old 04-13-2012, 10:22 AM   #467
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i too was a little bummed by that ending, but i see the direction you're heading in.
i'm just hoping you bring naruto into the mix (i really like what you've done with him as the guardian of time).
Well, Naruto will actually has to assume his role as the Guardian of time. It means that at a certain degree he will be constrained by Raiden to clash with Sasuke, who seeks to overthrow Raiden. Anyway, thank you man, and amazing job on your fanfiction.
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Chaos
*Scene shows Kumo’s main gate. In the distance you can see several small specs growing larger and larger. The sirens start going off.*
Fodder ninja: Battle stations! Battle stations! This is not a drill!
*Scene switches to the room with Naruto, Tsunade, Kakashi, Ibiki, Juugo, and Karin.*
Tsunade: Shit! Ibiki, get them out of here.
Ibiki: Aye.
*Ibiki escorts the two out of the room as Naruto, Kakashi and Tsunade leave the room. Scene switches to the conference room where Ei, Oonoki, Mei, Gaara, Shikaku, and the sensor group are at. Naruto, Kakashi, and Tsunade come running into.*
Ei: What's the situation?!
Ao: We have 8 very large chakras heading this direction.
Naruto: One is Madara.
*All of the Kages grimace.*
Oonoki: Could he be using the bijuu?
Ao: I doubt it. These chakras aren’t at the level of Naruto or Bee-sama. But they are close.
Ei: Summon the communication team here as well. Everyone else, move out.
*All of sudden there is an explosion and the earth shakes. Everyone but Naruto falls over in the conference room. Scene switches to Kumo’s main gate, showing that it is demolished. Scene switches to KillerBee who runs from his room to the outside.*
Bee: What the shit?!
*Scene switches to Naruto who flashes out of the conference room and to the main gate. Naruto looks at the devastation. He then looks out into the distance, seeing the multiple Gedo Mazos.*
Naruto: Unbelievable!
*Naruto flashes back to the conference room*
Naruto: We’ve got trouble.
*KillerBee runs into the room.*
Bee: What the fuck is goin’ on?!
Naruto: About 5 minutes away, Madara…. multiple Gedo Mazos.
Ei dumbfounded: Did you say multiple?
*Naruto nods his head.*
Ei: At least we have most of your civilians evacuated. We must evacuate the rest, immediately!
Bee: But where to?!
*The earth shakes again, as everyone falls over except for Bee and Naruto. Scene switches to Raikage’s office showing that it demolished. Everyone rushes outside and sees the horrific scene.*
Tsunade: Konoha is closest, but we’ve already evacuated the majority of our people, and we just don’t have the resources right now since we’re rebuilding.
Mei: We will help.
Bee: But that’s too damn far away!
Naruto: Gather everyone together!
*Naruto looks at Tsunade.*
Naruto: I’m going to need help!
Tsunade: Got it!
Ei: We’ll need to send squads to make sure they make it safely.
*Scene shows Omoi, Karui, Mabui, Sakura, Ino, and Hinata escorting everyone to a coliseum.*
Omoi: Right this way.
Karui: We should be with Bee-sama.
Mabui: These are orders from the Raikage! He wants us here!
*Scene shows about a hundred people at the coliseum.*
Mabui to Sakura, Ino, and Hinata: Thank you!
*All four bow to each other. Hinata, Ino, and Sakura start to leave as Naruto and the Hokage’s guards enter. Hinata grabs Naruto’s arm as they pass each other.*
Hinata: Be careful!
Naruto: I will.
Sakura: Good luck Naruto!
*The three girls leave as Naruto and group get at the north, east, south, and west extremities of the congregation. All four hold their hands up.*
Genma: So how is this going to work?!
*Naruto enters Kurama Sage mode.*
Genma in amazement: Ok!....
*The group vanishes in a second. Scene switches over to Killer Bee standing on a cliff looking up into the sky, seeing three more meteors heading for Kumo.*
Bee: So that’s how he did it.
*Ei appears next to Bee.*
Ei: To think, our village has been reduced to this.
*Scene shows the devastation of Kumo from an ariel view as the meteors continue to crash down. The rest of the Kages show up behind Ei and Bee. The remaining forces are at the front gate, led by the remaining generals.*
Bee: But we have hope. Go handle Madara while I stop those. *pointing at the meteors.*
*Ei flickers out and lands next to Shikamaru.*
Ei: So what now?
Shikamaru: I don’t know…. I didn’t know there were this many.
*The shinobi alliance stares out at Madara and the Gedo Mazos. Scene switches to Kagame and Sasuke.*
Kagame: Sasuke, can you hear me? This is painful isn’t it?
*Scene shows Sasuke in a drugged state with drool seeping out of the side of his mouth. The door creeks open.*
Kagame: I was beginning to think you weren’t coming.
*Kabuto walks over to Kagame.*
Kabuto: Sorry, but I had some side business to take care of.
Kagame: As was promised, here is my end of the bargain.
*Kagame tosses Kabuto a phial of pink fluid.*
Kabuto: And my end. Five Finger Disruption Seal!
*Kabuto hits Sasuke in his abdominal area with the seal.*
Kabuto: Now… You’ll hand him over when it is done?
Kagame: Yes. I knew Madara didn’t want to put the world under the genjutsu. I know he wanted to use the juubi to control the world. Now we’ll see the end of Uchiha Madara.
Kabuto: What a fucked up family you have.
*Scene switches to back the Kumo.*
Ei: Get ready!
*Madara leaps down infront of the GMs. Genma and crew flash back to the battle scene.*
Tsunade: Where is Naruto?
Genma: Don’t worry about him. He said he would be here.
Tsunade: This is Uchiha Madara we’re talking about!
Genma: With all due respect Hokage-sama, this is Uzamaki Naruto, we’re talking about.
*Hinata and Sakura are shown smiling. The rest of the Konoha 12 are shown smiling or grinning.*
Madara in thought: Those smiles are about to be wiped away.
Bee shouts: Bijuu dama!
*Bee is fully transformed into Gyuuki and fires off the largest bijuu bomb he’s ever fired off. The next scene shows the jutsu obliterating the meteors.*
Madara in thought: Just a minor setback.
*Madara does a grand fireball jutsu and swings his fan to give it power, sending it towards the army. A puff of smoke appears, and the fireball disappears.*
Ei, Oonoki, Mei, and Gaara in unison: Amazing.
Genma: That’s our Naruto.
*Scene focuses on Hinata as she stares at Naruto’s direction in amazement.*
Genma: Our number 1 knucklehead ninja.
*Scene shows Gamabunta, Gamaken, and several other fodder toads. Fukasuka hops next to Tsunade.*
Fuka: Princess Tsunade, we’re here to help.
Ei: I’ve heard about you. So the boy is a sage.
Fuka: More than you know.
*The scene focuses on Naruto standing atop Gamabunta’s head. Naruto is in his Kurama Sage mode. The chakra cloak resemble that of full Kurama mode, but armour has been added to his forearms and shins. Naruto’s hair appears longer than Yondaime’s. Scene switches to Madara who stares at Naruto.*
Madara: You truly are the younger son. Let me show you why we, the elder sons are far superior!
*Scene switches to Shikamaru.*
Shikamaru: Now we have a chance.

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Hope
*Scene opens with a split panel, one half of Naruto, the other half of Madara.*
Madara: Kyuubi boy! Are you scared?
Naruto: No! Are you?
Madara: No…. just excited.
*Madara leaps down from a Gedo Mazo. Naruto leaps down from Gamabunta.*
Madara: Let’s go elsewhere… where we can really have some fun.
Naruto: Where did you have in mind?
Madara: The Hokage Mountain!
*Madara swirls away like Kagame does. Naruto turns and looks at the alliance army, specifically at the Hokage’s guards.*
Naruto: When Sasuke shows up, come and get me.
Genma: Aye.
Tsunade in thought: Jiraya, Minato, Kushina…. if you could only see him now. Hinata has quite the catch. *Tsunade blushes a little.*
*Naruto flashes out.*
Bunta to the other toads: Naruto-sama requested our aide tonight. Let’s make him proud.
All of the other toads: Aye.
*The alliance army looks on astonished.*
Ei: No wonder why none of us where able to defeat Konoha. Have you always held this kind of power?
Oonoki: You never met Hashirama-sama. He was real power.
Mei: But we’ve met Naruto.
Tsunade: If anyone can surpass him, it will be Naruto.
*Ei amps up, covering himself in his raiton armour. Bee (still in Gyuuki form) roars from the mountain side. Gaara gets on his sand discuss and floats up in the air, as Oonoki begins to fly behind Gaara.*
Fukasuka: We’ve heard the story of the war between the elder son and the younger son of the great sage. We have always stood by the younger sons. Tonight, we continue that tradition and honor it. *yells*: For Naruto!!!!!
The alliance army yells: For Naruto!!!!
*The Gedos charge at the cries, with Gamabunta launching himself in the air and coming down on a Gedo with his blade drawn. The Gedo catches the blade just in time and throws Bunta to the side, chasing after him. The Raikage rushes at one, hitting it square in the chest, knocking the Gedo down.*
Ei: That felt good.
*A Gedo comes crashing down on Ei with a hammerfist, sending Ei into the ground several meters. Two Gedos charge attacks (similar to a hollow’s cero blast) and send the blasts towards the alliance army. Gaara at the last minute sets up his ultimate defense, guarding the army.*
Shikamaru: NOW!!!!! The one at the two o’clock position.
*Might Gai, Kakashi, Kitsuchi, and Choujuurou head out towards that Gedo in formation. Gai enters the fifth gate and leaps in the air. Kitsuchi kneels down and hits the earth.*
Kitsuchi: Earth Style-Pillar of Strength!!!!
*A huge pillar of stone shoots up under the Gedo sending it into the air. Might Gai comes crashing down on the Gedo with a double hammerfist, sending the Gedo back to the ground. Kakashi and Choujuurou jump up and at the fallen Gedo, Kakashi with raikiri in hand and Choujuurou with sword in hand, coming down on two eyes of the Gedo. Both jump back off as the four stand again in formation. Next we see Darui to the side.*
Darui: Lightning Style: Black Lightning Laser!
*A black lightning bolt shoots straight at the fallen Gedo’s head, causing a huge cloud of smoke and dust. Kurotsuchi walks up behind Darui.*
Kurotsuchi: If that didn’t work, he’s not going anywhere.
*Scene does an instant flashback to before Darui used his jutsu, showing Kurotsuchi finishing her glue jutsu to contain that particular Gedo.*
Shikamaru: C’mon…
*The dust clears up to show no damage to the Gedo, only that it has lost three eyes. A collective sigh is heard from numerous shinobi.*
Tsunade: You’ve got to be kidding.
*The remaining Gedos all charge the same blast aiming at the alliance army. All of them fire at the same moment. At the last moment, Gaara raises his ultimate defense again and you see a puff of smoke. As the devastation and picture begin to focus, you see Gaara’s sand wall with two huge holes in it. The picture then focuses on the shinobi who were hit by the blast. You see small Katsuya slugs on all of the shinobi.*
Tsunade: Was I in time?
Katsuya: As far as deaths, yes. But there are many in critical condition.
*Scene focuses on Neji and Kiba, who are lying in rubble, motionless.*
Tsunade shouting: If you can help those hit, evacuate them from here. We need to clear this area!
*Scene focuses back on Gedo glued to the ground. Scene shows a split panel of Oonoki and Bee.*
Oonoki: Dust Element – Partical Disintegration
Bee: Bijuu-dama
*The scene shows the Gedo getting hit by both jutsus at the same time. As the dust and smoke clear, the head was annihilated by Oonoki’s jutsu, while Bee’s bijuu bomb destroyed more than half of the body.*
Bee in thought: I don’t know if I can do that more than 5 times.
Gyuuki: We must give it our all.
Oonoki: That one down, nine more to go.
*The next panel shows a Gedo swinging it’s fist, and knocking Oonoki across Kumo.*
Fukasuka: C’mon Bunta-boy. Are you going to let that thing whip you like a tadpole?
Bunta: NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
*Bunta rushes the Gedo that knocked Oonoki out, tackling the Gedo.*
Bunta: NOW!!!!!!
*Three of the toads that were brought to Kumo leap in the air, all bearing their blades. As they are about the crash down on Bunta and the Gedo, Bunta rolls over as the toads decapitate the Gedo.*
Fukasuka: That’s how we do it boys!
*Scene switches to the Hokage Mountain. Madara is shown waiting on Naruto. Naruto flashes in.*
Madara: Took you long enough.
Naruto: Yeah… wel….
*Madara flickers over to Naruto, hitting him with a side kick to the gut. The kick knocks Naruto back a little.*
Madara: If you can’t handle that, I’m wasting my time with you.
*Naruto looks at Madara holding his stomach. Naruto flickers to Madara trying a straight punch to the chest that is knocked to the side by Madara. Madara follows it crossover hook punch, which Naruto ducks and elbows Madara in the ribs. Naruto then kicks Madara and gets him down to one knee. Madara then tries a leg-sweep kick, which Naruto evades by jumping over, allowing Madara to put some distance between themselves.*
Madara: That’s more like it. I’ve got to hand it to that Kabuto. If he hadn’t given me his dna *pop up panel of Hashirama’s face*, that could have killed me. You truly are a Sage, but you’re not him.
*Both enter into a battle stance.*
Madara: Fire Style – Grand Dragon Blaze!
*Madara looks on with intent and an evil grin.*
Madara in thought: The only people to survive this attack where Hashirama and Tobirama, the two best suiton users.
*Naruto looks as the jutsu is coming at, seeing the Flamed Dragon searching for its mark. Naruto points his finger at the jutsu.*
Naruto calmly: Fuuton Senjutsu Rasenshuriken.
*A small rasenshuriken, similar to the one that destroyed the Zetsus earlier, is fired right at the dragon. Suddenly, the rasenshuriken expands a small bit, then becomes like an arrow, shooting through the dragon. The wind from the jutsu overtakes the fire, dissipating the jutsu.*
Madara: Well done, kyuubi boy. Before you, only two people survived that attack. You’re in good company.
Naruto: I don’t care about that.
Madara: You should. Those two were the ones who we’re standing on.
*The scene shows Madara on Hashirama’s head, with Naruto on Tobirama’s head.*
Naruto: How about we end this?
Madara: But the fun has just begun. How about we turn up the heat? Amerterasu!!!
*Madara shoots the black flame at Naruto.*
Naruto in thought: I grow weary of this.
*Naruto begins to gather chakra into hand.*
Naruto: Senjustu Rasenshuriken.
*Naruto throws this rasenshuriken that expands right as it encounters the black flames, opening a hole in the flames. Right after throwing the rasenshuriken, Naruto take a kunai, charges it with wind chakra and throws it right behind the rasenshuriken. The kunai goes straight through the hold, striking Madara in the chest, but on the opposite side of his heart. The Kunai goes straight through Madara leaving a small gash the size of the kunai. As amerterasu reaches Naruto, it passes through him as if he wasn’t there.*
Madara: Impossible! *coughing up blood* How did you do it?
*Madara then swirls away, vanishing from Konoha. Naruto looks around and sees Konoha progressing in its rebuilding process. He vanishes out and back to Kumo. Scene switches to Kumo focusing on Naruto.*
Naruto: What happened?!
*Naruto sees about twenty shinobi still fighting the Gedos with Bunta and Fukasuka. Bee is gathering injured shinobi and rushing them to a safe place. There are 7 Gedos destroyed.*
Shikamaru: Naruto!
*Naruto rushes over to Shikamaru.*
Naruto: What happened?
Shikamaru: There were too many.
Naruto: Where is Granny Tsunade, Sakura, or Hinata?
Shikamaru: They’re all treating the wounded.
*Naruto sighes.*
Shikamaru: We’re in some serious trouble. Sasuke and masked man have even showed up yet.
Naruto: Good. Round everyone up. I’ll put an end to these Gedo Mazos.
*Shikamaru yells at the remaining alliance forces to gather around him. Naruto enters the battlefield against the Gedos.*
Naruto: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!
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*Three clones appear of Naruto.*
Naruto: You know the plan. I want one to be a reminder.
Clones: Aye!
*One of the clones goes after the Gedo that is fighting Might Gai and Kakashi. He hits it with the fuuton senjutsu rasenshuriken, annihilating its head. The clone disperses.*
Gai: What a relief…. and what the hell was that.
*Kakashi bumps Gai in the chest and points to Naruto.*
Kakashi: The calvary has arrived.
*The second clone flashes all around the Gedo fighting the Raikage, hitting it with a barrage of Kurama Sage punches, each creating craters in the Gedo. Finally, Raikage does a horizontal chop in raiton armor to severe the head. The Gedo comes crashing down.*
Ei: Thanks.
*The scene converges on the last Gedo being fought by Bunta, Gamaken, Rock Lee, and Sai.*
Naruto: Your end is now.
*There a three way split panel, showing a clone coming behind the Gedo with an two rasengans, one in each hand, a second clone crashing down from above one the Gedo with an Oodama rasengan, and the original Naruto throwing a fuuton rasenshuriken at the Gedo. As the three converge, the earth quakes as a huge dust cloud arises. Once the dust settles, the only thing left is the Gedo’s feet. Naruto returns to the group of shinobi.*
Naruto: How is everyone?
Kakashi: We’ll be ok.
Fukasuka: Raikage, Naruto…. this is no longer a place to hold your army, especially those injured.
Ei: What do you recommend elder?
Fukasuka: I’ll never hear the end of it, but at Mount Myouboku, we can offer some type of shelter.
Ei: But how will we get there?
Naruto: Leave that to him.
*Naruto flashes out and over to the medic tent. He disperses Kurama Sage mode. Naruto looks around for his friends. Hinata walks up behind Naruto.*
Hinata: Naruto…
*Naruto spins around and hugs her.*
Naruto: I’m glad you’re safe.
Hinata: I’m glad you’re safe. We can’t stay here.
Naruto: I know. *yells*: Everyone, pack all medicines and rations. We’re getting out of here.
Tsunade runs up: How?! You can’t move this amount of people, and where will you move them to?
Naruto: Mount Myouboku.
*Tsunade’s facial expression turns to shocked. The scene shows all the remaining shinobi alliance gathered in the medic area.*
Ei: I can’t believe this.
Bee: We’ll return… and rebuild.
*Ei grimaces as everyone gathers.*
Fukasuka: Everyone gather around.
*The sun rises on the group.*
Naruto and Fukasuka in unison: Kuchiyose no Jutsu!!!
*A puff of smoke appears, and then dissipates, showing an empty area.*

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Great freaking JOB! MOAR!!!!
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Sanctuary
*Scene shows all of the shinobi alliance army in a large theatre area on Myouboku. Fukasuka is in front of everyone.*
Fukasuka: I apologize for the inconveniences. But for now, this is your home.
*Ei looks down and growls. Bee puts his hand on his brother’s shoulder.*
Bee: Calm down. We’re gonna rebuild Kumo, bigger and better than it was.
Fukasuka: Naruto!
*Naruto walks up to Fukasuka.*
Fukasuka: The Great Elder wants to speak with you.
*Scene switches back to Kumo and the devastation. A figure is shown walking through the middle.*
Kabuto: Now that I have this *holds up the phial of pink fluid*, not even the great Uchiha Madara can stop me now.
*Scene switches to Madara sitting in a room, with bandages on his chest. Kagame walks in the room.*
Kagame: What happened?
Madara: The kyuubi boy is more formidable than expected.
Kagame: Maybe next time you shouldn’t toy with him????
Madara snarls at Kagame: Shut the f^ck up!
Kagame in thought: You underestimated him, and you underestimate me. You’ll see when you try to control Sasuke.
*Kagame leaves the room to go check on Sasuke.*
Kagame: How are you feeling Sasuke?
Sasuke: I’m ready to see someone’s blood spill.
Kagame: You know he will try to control you.
Sasuke in thought: Just as you will try, but you’ll both fail.
Sasuke: Then why are you helping him.
Kagame: You want revenge for your brother. I want it for my father.
Sasuke: Don’t forget… I know you helped kill our clan.
*Sasuke looks at Kagame with his EMS.*
Kagame in thought: You haven’t reached the final step. Know your place boy.
*Scene focuses on Kagame’s Rinnegan eye. Scene switches back to Myouboku with the Great Elder Toad and Naruto.*
Elder: What’s your name again?
Naruto: Uzamaki Naruto.
Elder: Ah…. yes, I remember you.
Naruto: What is it you have to tell me that not even Fukasuka can hear it?
Elder: I’m an old toad, Naruto.
Naruto: How old?
Elder: I knew him.
Naruto: Who, the younger son?
Elder: Him, too…. I’m talking about the Rikudo Sennin himself.
*Naruto stands at attention with hearing this.*
Elder: Let me show you something.
*The Elder Sage does a handsign, and an old scroll pops up, unraveling itself.*
Elder: This is my personal summoning contract. I was one of three summons for him.
*Scene does a flashback to a younger elder toad sage, a slug sage, and a snake sage.*
Elder: The elder son thought he had enough power that he didn’t need our help. The younger son thought otherwise, and did contracts with Fukasuka and Katsuchiayo. Ever since, we toads and slug have fought for the cause of the younger son and his descendants.
Naruto: What about the third summon?
Elder: Ryuden thought the younger son was too naïve. But he also knew the elder son despised him. He set out on his own
Naruto: So who is Katsuchico… whatever her name was?
Elder: He… is now the Elder Slug Sage.
*There is a long pause.*
Elder: Naruto…. do you know how you are a descendant of Rikudo Sennin?
Naruto: I don’t know, but Madara and the masked man have said I am.
Elder: Naruto… how could RS have had two sons?
Naruto: Probably because he got married or settled down with someone…
*A shocked expression comes across his face.*
Elder: Her name was Miyashi… Uzamaki Miyashi. You have more ties to RS than you know.
Naruto: No way….
Kurama in thought: I haven’t heard that name in ages.
Naruto: You knew her?
Elder: If you want to know more about her, talk with the Kurama.
Kurama in thought: Even he remembers.
*Scene switches to Tsunade, Sakura, and Shima.*
Tsunade: Thank you for everything Shima.
Shima: Don’t worry Princess Tsunade.
Sakura in thought: Who knew there were so many?
*Naruto enters the area and walks up to Hinata and hugs her.*
Hinata: Naruto!
*She hugs him back tightly. Shima is looking on.*
Shima: So, someone finally tamed that wild heart of his?
Tsunade: Seems so.
Shima: He reminds me so much of Jiraya boy.
*Tsunade looks down.*
Shima: Oh, I’m sorry dear.
Tsunade: It’s ok.
Shima: Why didn’t you ever hook him? Heaven knows he was after you for ages.
Tsunade: I know…. It…. it would have been weird.
Shima: It’s always weird at first.
*Shima looks at Sakura.*
Shima: And don’t you worry either. If anyone can find your love, it will be him.
*All look at Naruto and Hinata embracing. Scene switches to Ei, Bee, Shikaku, Shikamaru, and Fukasuka.*
Ei: How are we going to fight from here?
Bee: We’re not.
*Ei looks at Bee.*
Fukasuka: Raikage-sama… There is only one person who knows how to get here now, and that is Naruto. Not even Madara knows how to get here. So there won’t be any fighting from here?
Ei: Then where?
Bee: We’ll have to trust in Naruto for that.
Shikamaru: Naruto and him brought us here, surely they can take us to any battlefield we choose?!
Fukasuka: I can’t. We reverse summoned you here. And I don’t know at what level Naruto can take anyone to a battlefield, but I wouldn’t be surprised if he was able to take all of you.
*Scene switches back to Tsunade, Shima, Sakura, and Hinata.*
Shima: So you’re in love with Naruto?
*Hinata blushes.*
Sakura: He’s a great guy Hinata.
Hinata: Yeah, I know.
Shima: You break his heart, I’ll break you, you hear me?!
*Tsunade and Sakura bust out laughing while Hinata looks worried.*
Tsunade: You don’t have to worry about that Shima. She’s been smitten with him for some time now… at least that is what Kurenai told me.
Hinata: How is Kurenai-sensei? She should be set for delivery any day now.
Shima: Well, it’s dinner time. I’m fixing my specialty. Naruto loved it, so hopefully you will too.
*Scene shows the buffet of bugs and worms. All three women have green faces, holding back from puking. Scene switches back to Fukasuka and Raikage.*
Ei enraged: I will not calm down. My village was destroyed. And I can’t fight the bastard who did it?!
*Naruto enters the room and walks up beside Ei. *
Naruto: So you want revenge?
Ei: Of course.
*Naruto looks at Bee.*
Naruto: Is that what you want?
Bee: No….
*Ei looks at Bee shocked. Bee turns to Ei.*
Bee: I want to rebuild Kumo. We were able to evacuate all the people before any real damage was done brotha.
*Bee turns to Naruto.*
Bee: When you leave to fight, I want to come along.
*Naruto smiles and nods at Bee.*
Fukasuka: Naruto… this time we won’t be able to help so much. We have our own wounded.
*An explosion is heard outside. Everyone races to see what it is.*
Unknown: I’m coming this time.
Naruto: Is that you… Gamakichi?
*Scene shows a toad the same size as Gamabunta.*
Kichi: The one and only!
*Another huge toad lands beside Gamakichi.*
Naruto: Gamatatsu?! Awesome!!!!
Tatsu: We’re both coming this time.
Shikamaru looks at Shikaku: How come we don’t have any summonings like that?
Shikaku: Do you realize how much chakra it would take to summon those two?
Shikamaru: You have a point dad.
Ei: Shikaku and Shikamaru… come up with a strategy for us.
*The two look at Ei.*
Shikamaru: But Raikage-sama, we don’t know the number of the enemy.
*Naruto turns to them.*
Naruto: The number won’t matter. Just focus on Madara, the masked man, and Sasuke.
*Naruto turns to Bee.*
Bee: We’ll take care of the number.
Shikamaru in thought: What a cheesy line.

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The Eve of Armageddon
*Scene shows Ei walking with Bee through Myouboku.*
Bee: You know you can’t beat him.
Ei: Yeah…. And that is what makes it worse.
Bee: Don’t worry about it. You’ve got to let Naruto handle this.
Ei: And what if he can’t. What if even he can’t beat Madara? Madara toyed with us like we were his lap dogs.
Bee: Naruto returned from his fight with Madara. That’s gotta say something.
*Scene switches to Naruto with Fukasuka and Shima.*
Naruto: Thank you for allowing us to stay here, but tomorrow, we won’t intrude any longer.
Shima: Don’t worry about it Naruto.
Fukasuka: What is your plan?
Naruto: Madara will begin to search for this place. I’ve actually put you in danger already. This is our fight. I’ll take them to a safe place. Then we’ll fight them.
Fukasuka: Naruto…. if you feel like that is what you must do…
Shima: But fuka…
Fukasuka: He’s made up his mind Shima.
Naruto: I’m going to call a meeting for everyone.
*Scene switches to a meadow, with everyone standing around. Panel focuses on Hinata walking up to Naruto.*
Hinata: What’s going on Naruto?
Naruto: We’re leaving.
Hinata: But so soon?
Naruto: Yeah.
*Gamabunta crashes down in the meadow infront of everyone. Everyone goes silent.*
Bunta: Naruto-sama has a few words for you.
*Naruto walks infront of everyone, pulling Hinata along by her hand.*
Naruto: It’s time we left. A few things have been revealed to me… and…
*Naruto looks at Hinata.*
Naruto: It’s been made clear to me what needs to happen.
*Ei starts to walk towards Naruto, but Bee stands infront of him.*
Bee: Hear him out.
Naruto: I’m going to take those who are wounded to Kirigakure. The last remaining will come with me back to Konoha.
*The crowd goes shocked.*
Ei yells: Why Konoha?
Naruto: Because, it’s the closest to the battlefield.
Tsunade: Are you sure about this Naruto?
Naruto: Yes.
*Scene switches to Amegakure, with Kabuto walking into the shack.*
Kabuto: I knew he would come, but I didn’t expect this amount of damage.
*A figure is seen moving in the shadows.*
Kabuto: And who are you?
*The figure steps from the shadows.*
Figure: Why, it’s me!
*Scene shows Suigetsu, with a long snake-like tongue.*
Kabuto: Orochimaru-sama…
Orochimaru: What happened to Sasuke?
Kabuto: He… in thought: So Suigetsu found the scroll.
Kabuto: It doesn’t matter. What matters is that you are back.
Orochimaru: So… how have things progressed in my absence?
Kabuto: I’ve done it?
Orochimaru: Done what?
*Kabuto holds up the phial of pink fluid. He tosses it to Orochimaru.*
Orochimaru: So I guess our arrangement is complete then?
Kabuto: Seems so.
Orochimaru: Where will you go?
Kabuto: Here and there? You?
Orochimaru: I’m going to let this war end. And then make my move. But first I must rebuild my ranks and Otogakure. Sure you don’t want to help.
Kabuto: No… but I’ll consider being a hired gun at times.
Orochimaru in thought: Just what have you done in my absence?
Orochimaru: So long… Kabuto-sama.
*The scene shows both men going their separate ways. Scene switches back to the alliance forces that are now in Konoha.*
Ei: So what’s your plan Naruto?
Naruto: There’s going to be 3 divisions. I’ll let Shikamaru explain the rest.
Shikamaru: Our 3 divisions will consist of an attacking group, a support group, and a defensive group.
Oonoki: Why only three?
Shikamaru: Because only a handful of people are going to be in the attack group. The support group and defensive group with have several sub-divisions. The attack group will consist of Raikage-sama, Tsuchikage-sama, Kakashi, Might Gai, Darui, Rock Lee, Killer Bee, and Naruto. The support group will consist of Shizune, Sakura, and Hokage-sama. Myself, Ao, and Yamanaka Inoichi will also be a part of the support division. Rounding out the support division will be all of our long range fighters. The defense division will be everyone else, led by Kazekage-sama and Mizukage-sama.
Ei: Any objections?
Naruto: Me and Bee will actually be infront of you and the rest of the attack group.
Oonoki: So this it then? Our last stand.
Naruto looks at Oonoki: Hopefully it won’t be your last.
Oonoki: Why are you so worried Naruto?
*Naruto looks down. Scene switches to outside of the meeting hall after the meeting is over. Panel focuses on Shikamaru and Naruto.*
Shikamaru: What’s bugging you, man?
Naruto: Let it go.
Shikamaru: Naruto… you’re more than my comrade, you’re my friend. I’m ready to go to hell with you if that’s the case.
Naruto: I won’t let you.
Shikamaru: Dammit Naruto, you’re not alone. Not anymore.
*Both turn and look at Hinata.*
Shikamaru: Whatever it is that you’re thinking about, promise me you’ll have a way to come back to her. It’s tough enough seeing Sakura go through it.
*Naruto looks down. Temari walks up to Shikamaru and Naruto.*
Temari: Shikamaru, can I speak to you?
*Shikamaru looks at Temari.*
Shikamaru: Sure.
*Temari and Shikamaru walk off as Shikaku walks up to Naruto.*
Shikaku: Naruto… I can tell you are bearing a heavy burden. Just remember, your father knew he didn’t have to do things alone. Shikamaru wants to walk with you. Hell, all of Konoha wants to walk with you. If we have to do it against your will, we will.
*Naruto smiles at this.*
Naruto: Thanks Shikaku-sama. Shikamaru sure is lucky to have you as a dad.
Shikaku: He’s even luckier to have you as a friend.
*Shikamaru walks back to Naruto and Shikaku.*
Shikamaru: Can you believe that?
Shikaku: What is it son?
Shikamaru: She wants a date after all of this. She even said that she would think about moving here for me.
Shikaku: Looks like you’ve found your woman boy.
Shikamaru: What a drag.
*Tsunade walks up to Naruto.*
Tsunade: I have something for you Naruto.
Naruto: What is it?
Tsunade: I’m not giving it to you until after this battle. But it is something you’ve earned.
*Tsunade looks at Shikaku and winks her eye. Shikaku smiles.*
Naruto: Ok.
*Tsunade walks off.*
Shikamaru: What was that all about?
*Naruto sees Hinata again and walks over to her.*
Naruto: Will you come with me?
Hinata: Always, Naruto-kun.
*Naruto grabs Hinata and flashes out of Konoha. They land in Kirigakure, next to Neji’s bed. Hinata sees Neji and grabs his hand.*
Hinata: How are you Neji-sama?
Neji: Just a little sore.
Naruto: Think you can make a little trip?
Neji: I guess so.
*As Neji sits up and then tries to stand up, he groans. Naruto grabs Hinata again, and then Neji, flashing out. They flash to another medic tent.*
Hinata: Father….
Hiashi: Hinata… Neji…
*The three hug.*
Hiashi: What are you doing here Hinata?
Hinata: I’m not sure.
Neji: Why don’t you come with me Hinata.
*Neji and Hinata walk off towards Sai and Kiba as Ino and Tenten wait by their bedsides. Tenten upon seeing Neji rushes to him and hugs him.*
Naruto in thought: Thanks Neji.
Hiashi: What is it Naruto-sama?
Naruto taken aback: I…
Hiashi: Yeah…
Naruto: If I return from this war, I want to marry your daughter.
*Hiashi chuckles and smiles.*
Hiashi: I’ll allow it under one condition.
Naruto: Yeah…
Hiashi: You will return from this war.
*Naruto bows before Hiashi.*
Hiashi: Question is, will she marry you?
Naruto: I sure hope so.
*Naruto runs over to the group, pulling Hinata away.*
Naruto: We need to get back for tomorrow.
Hinata: Ok… can I say goodbye to them.
Naruto: Yes.
*Hinata goes to say goodbye and then goes to her dad and give him a hug. She runs back to Naruto and they flash out.*
Neji: So, you’ll allow it.
Hiashi: Yes.
*Scene switches back to Konoha, as Naruto and Hinata flashback on top of Yondaime’s head on the Hokage Mountain. Naruto gets down on one knee before Hinata.*
Naruto: Now that I know what it’s like to have you actually in my life, please don’t ever leave. And I promise to never leave you. Marry me.
Hinata as she tears up: Of course.
*Naruto jumps up holding Hinata close in excitement. Off in the distance you can see Tsunade, Sakura, Shikamaru, Shikaku, Kakashi, Might Gai, Rock Lee, and Shino.*
Kakashi: We really should give them some privacy.
Might Gai: Ah, the power and essence of youth.
*Sakura hits Gai on the head.*
Sakura: What a perverted thing to say. I’m glad for both of them.
*Tsunade walks up to Sakura.*
Tsuande: Don’t forget… Hinata has his heart, but Naruto will always have his word.
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jekyl_hyde Sanctuary was my fav so far, when i did predictions i could only do one a week im so envious of u and everyone else who can just keep going and going. so keep going and going and going please bcuz it is Awesome to read.........

OK you made me edit this post and i hate editing my post but jekyl_hyde you did it again bcuz that was better than Sanctuary

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**Alert, this chapter has some adult themes, but mainly in humor.

The Weight of Words
*The scene opens with Naruto spinning around with Hinata in his arms, both smiling.*
Naruto: I’m so happy!
Hinata: Not as much as I am.
*They kiss (like first real kiss with tongue).*
Kurama in thought: Dammit, there goes the whole Sasuke kiss now.
*Scene focuses back on Naruto and Hinata kissing.*
Hinata: Naruto…
Naruto: Yeah.
Hinata: Promise me you’ll bring back Sasuke… for Sakura-chan.
Naruto: I will.
Hinata: Promise me that you won’t kill yourself or Sasuke.
*Naruto looks down. Hinata picks up his chin.*
Hinata: I want to spend the rest of my life with you. But my heart breaks for Sakura-chan when her love never acknowledged her. If something happens to Sasuke, or you… I will go to Hell and back.
*Naruto smiles.*
Naruto: Shikamaru said the same thing.
Hinata: We all feel that way, honey.
Naruto smiling: You called me honey.
Hinata: Yeah….
Naruto: So Konoha’s Orange Hokage can’t be called honey.
*Hinata looks at Naruto surprised.*
Hinata: You’re not Hokage yet…. honey.
*Hinata kisses Naruto again. Scene switches to Sasuke sitting on the cliff that is on the side of Madara’s statue at the Valley of the End.*
Sasuke in thought: So this is the power you’ve felt Naruto. It’s exhilarating! Once I’ve killed you, Kagame and Madara are next, then Konoha!
*Sasuke stands up looks in the direction of Konoha. Kagame walks up behind him.*
Kagame: There is something you should know Sasuke.
Sasuke: What is it, worm?
Kagame: Naruto wounded Madara.
Sasuke: Yeah, so…
Kagame: Nevermind then.
Kagame in thought: You benevolent little twerp. Once the juubi has destroyed you and is under my control, Madara will die and the world will suffer at my hands.
*Scene switches to Madara standing outside of Kumogakure.*
Madara: This is what I did, and you still stand against me. Once I have the Juubi, no one will be able to stop me. But it will be nice to take a trip down memory lane.
*Scene switches back to the Valley of the End.*
Kagame: Word of advice Sasuke.
*Sasuke glares at Kagame.*
Kagame: I wouldn’t use the juubi right away.
*Sasuke turns around wondering what Kagame is meaning. Scene switches to a mysterious mountain. A shadowy figure is walking down a path.*
Figure: Ryuden-sama, what is it that you wish?
Ryuden: Kabuto…. So those damn Uchiha fell for it.
Kabuto: Aye.
*Ryuden slithers behind a grove of trees, with only half of his body showing, but he is still taller than the forest.*
Ryuden: Good…. *slithers his tongue* And Orochimaru?
Kabuto: He’s returned. He said he’s going to rebuild Otogakure.
Ryuden: I am pleased to hear this.
*Ryuden looks at Kabuto.*
Ryuden: What is it my student?
Kabuto: I wish to retrieve Sasuke’s corpse and annihilate Uzamaki Naruto myself.
Ryuden: Do as you please… *slithers his tongue* But be careful. Haven’t you noticed?
Kabuto: Noticed what?
Ryuden: You’re not the only sage…
*Kabuto has a shocked look.*
Ryuden: But I guess you wouldn’t know since you were the second of the two.
*Scene focuses on Naruto asleep in bed with Hinata. A pile of clothes is seen next to the bed. The panels show all of the Konoha 12 sleeping in beds or on makeshift couches. The 5 Kages are holding a candlelight meeting.*
Oonoki: To think that boy….
Tsunade: Leave him some privacy Tsuchikage.
Oonoki: I’m just saying…
Ei: They could have been quieter.
Oonoki: Thank you.
Gaara: I’m proud of him.
*The rest of the Kages look at Gaara shocked.*
Gaara: None of us have a mate like he has now.
Tsunade smiles: Well said Kazekage.
Mei in thought: Someone change the conversation from this marriage talk.
Ei: So do you think this plan is going to work? I mean we all know Naruto is going to do something about Sasuke.
Oonoki: What can we do? None of you can compare to him. He’s faster and stronger than you *looking at Ei*. His healing abilities exceed yours *looking at Tsunade*. He’s “the” perfect jinchuuriki *looking at Gaara*. He’s mastered the Flying Thunder God and fought Madara and lived to tell about it. Do you know how many are able to say they’ve done that?
Tsunade: Not many.
*Tsunade grabs a box.*
Mei: What is that Tsunade-sama?
Tsunade: I was going to give it to Naruto when he returned, for his coronation. But I think I’m going to give it to him tomorrow.
Mei: So you’ve decided then…. he’s your recommendation for the next Hokage?
Tsunade: And the jounin of Konoha have already voted on it.
Ei: What is it that you’re going to give him?
*Tsunade pulls the cloak from the box.*
Tsunade: His father’s jacket.
Oonoki: It is well deserved, that’s for sure.
Ei: Back to the plan people. What if Naruto can’t handle the masked man, Madara, or Sasuke? I mean look at what 10 of those damn statue things did to my village. We don’t have the toads of Myouboku anymore.
Gaara: We won’t have all of those that were in Kumo. A couple still promised to show up for us.
Ei: What if it’s not enough? You people are hanging on to the hope of words, from a teenager mind you.
Tsunade: We have to.
Ei: That’s it? My village was destroyed!
Tsunade: And so was mine. But we’ve rebuilt it to this point, and we will continue. Naruto’s individual will of fire might outshine mine or any other Konoha shinobi’s, but his will is not brighter than our collective will.
Oonoki: Raikage-sama, maybe we should rest before our tempers get the best of us.
Gaara: Before we leave for our tents, let me say this. Tsunade-sama is the only one who has chosen a successor here. Nobody else has. Tomorrow, if it is required, I will lay down my life for Naruto and for you. I will forsake my village for him, because he’s possibly forsaking his life and happiness for us.
*Scene switches to Shikamaru’s tent, with Temari lying next to him.*
Temari: Could they not be any louder?
Shikamaru laughing: Given the circumstances…
Temari: What circumstances?
Shikamaru: I’m sure that it was both their first times, and the fact of what is happening tomorrow…
*Both Shikamaru and Temari look each other in the eyes.*
Temari: I want more than a date Shikamaru.
Shikamaru: But I’m sleepy.
Temari: Not that…. sheesh! I want what they have.
Shikamaru: I can’t promise that.
Temari: Why?
Shikamaru: Because… I’m ready to go to Hell with Naruto.
Temari: What about me.
Shikamaru: I’m sorry, but…. he makes a better shinobi…. a better man. He’s still holding on to a promise to Sakura from almost 4 years ago. Hell, it’s part of this whole damn war. I want to be like that. I want to make a promise, and feel the way he does until that promise is fulfilled.
*Temari rests her head on Shikamaru’s chest.*
Temari: Then I’m coming to Hell with you.
*Scene switches to Ei and Bee in a tent.*
Ei: How can you have so much faith in that boy?
Bee: Honestly, I didn’t at first. I mean it was cool helping him with the kyuubi and all, but…
Ei: But what?
Bee: Eight-o has faith.
Ei: So what about that bijuu.
Bee: That bijuu save you, me, and many lives last night. He’s put his life on the line for me, you, and Kumogakure many times. Never have you thanked him!
*Ei looks at Bee in shock.*
Bee: Eight-o has been around. He’s told me Naruto is legit. Hell, if something were to happen to me, I would want Naruto to be his jink.
*Scene switches to VotE as Madara flickers in. The sun rises, beaming off the face of the Madara statue.*
Madara: Playtime is over boys.
*Scene shows Madara with the rinnegan, Kagame with his EMS and rinnegan, and Sasuke with his EMS, shrowded in a dark chakra cloak.*

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Good job Jekyl. Damn man, you're pushing me to do my best for the new fanfic.
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