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Old 09-07-2009, 03:24 AM   #46
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“I’m not training anyone. I’m just here to let you guys know what’s going on,” said The Hokage as he poofs. “Another shadow clone,” sighed Zig. “You know that is really getting old,” said Nila. “But what about my training,” said Laya. “Maybe you’re not worth it,” said Zig.

(He gets punched in the face.) “Even I saw that coming,” sighed Nila. (Dosa and Hiro smiles. Soon a shinobi lands in.)

“Who is she,” asked Nila. “Hmm… She’s kind of cute. She could definitely teach me a thing or two,” smiled Zig. “I guess she’s better than nothing,” said Laya. “Kids these days, no respect,” said Dosa.

“Rina, long time no see,” said Hiro. “Rina? Who is that,” asked Nila. “She was the third member of our squad,” said Dosa. “That means,” said Zig. “Yep, I was trained my Uzumaki Sensei and kept these boys in line. Now, which one of you bright kids do I get to take under my wing,” smiled Rina.

(Switch scene to another training field. Sarutobi is there with his three students.)

“Alright guys, get ready. If you guys can manage to pin me on the ground for 5 seconds, I’ll consider that you are ready to join with Hiro’s team on their next mission,” said Sarutobi. “How old-fashioned, though it will be an easy feat regardless. You know if I wasn’t sick around the time of the Jounin elections, I would have mopped the floor with Zig’s overly sickening grin,” said Taishi.

“Heh, you can’t even be me bro,” said Shitai. “Guys, relax. You two are twins in every since of the word. Your ninjutsu style, taijutsu, and even tracking,” said Midori. “Well, to tell you guys the truth. Only combined that you two stand a chance against Zig. Hell, separated you guys would barely win against Laya and probably tie against Nila,” said Sarutobi.

“Why you,” said Taishi. “Let’s get him,” said Shitai. (They wrestle Sarutobi down.) "WAHHH I didn't give the signal," yelled Sarutobi. “I guess that’s five seconds,” laughed Midori.

Next time: Training Begins. Team Sarutobi considers themselves rivals of Team Hiro. Sasuke begin to recruit and Aya goes wild.

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-Taishi and Shitai are a formidable team. Apart, they are good however, no where near amazingly spectacular. However, together they are a force to be recon with. It is said that they could stand a chance against Zig combined, which is a testament to their combined taijutsu and ninjutsu might. They dress exactly alike just wearing different color shirts. They where long sleeved blue or red shirts with the chuunnin vest. They have short bluish black hair that curls slightly. They both looks like a more mature Inori.

-Midori Is part of Team Sarutobi along with Taishi and Shitai. Her skill set is unknown. She has shoulder length wavy blond hair with a generic blond dangerous vixen look (Think Julia from Cowboy Bebop.) She wears a shirt skirt however, has purple stockins underneath. She has a chuunin vest on her short sleeved black shirt.
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Hope is looking at Nila and his team who are training at the fields. His face seems sad and regret. Then Hinata approach him from behind.

“Feeling guilty for hitting Zig?”

“Mom?” says Hope who seems surprise. “You didn’t feel my approach, my you really do feel bad.” Says Hinata.

“Yeah….”

“Why don’t you go there and say sorry?”

“What?? No way!!!!” says Hope. Hinata sighs. “Men, and their stupid egos.” Says Hinata. Hope looks at his mother with a weird expression.

“What does that suppose to mean……..”

At the Hokage office.

The Hokage receive a letter from the Earth Village that wrote:

“SNA and the Mist Village has destroys many of my men. This is your plan to ally us. You must be responsible for it.”

The Hokage looks at Shikamaru.

“How should I response to this.” Ask the Hokage. Shikamaru close his eyes and seems to be in deep thought.

"Man, The Earth Kage must have set the speed record for jumping to conclusion." laughs The Hokage.

"This is no joke, Naruto." says Shikamaru.

"I know. But this is my village. Yours too. The village where, Hiro, Nila, Hope and Hinata lives. I will protect this village. As a kage and as a father."

At the training field.

“I think I’ll take Laya. She seems feisty.” Says Rina. Hiro looks at Zig. “Zig, Nila both of you are talented ninjas. But we haven’t discovered your element.” Hiro pass a paper to each of them. The paper Nila hold is cut into two and Zig’s is burn to ashes.

“Well it seems I gotta train Nila.” Says Hiro. Zig looks at Dosa, but Dosa raise his hand.” I’m Earth. But he’s fire.” Says Dosa while pointing at Hope who stands at the edge of the field.

“You’ve got to be kidding me……” says Zig. Hinata looks at Hope and gave him a warm smile.

“Seems both of your fate is intertwined.” Says Hinata. Hope sighs heavily.

At Waterfall Village.

Aya is losing control of her beast and start shooting her rays everywhere and blast the giant snake, but it manages to dodge and went underground, and Aya blast the ground with her sunbeam. Suddenly small cracks appear beneath her and hundreds of snakes comes out from the ground and ensnare her. Michi appear before her and makes a few handseal. “Five Element Seal!!!!” says Michi and stab Aya with her sword. Aya falls unconscious and return to her human form. Oita jumps from the village with a scroll on his hand.

“What’s that?” ask Michi. Oita shows the scroll to the Michi and it’s the same Earth Nation scroll that was sent to the Hokage. Michi licks her face. “Lets go home.” Says Oita and they walk back to the portal near the village.

5 days later at SNA headquaters.

“Blank.” Says Tetsuo. The middle age man looks at Tetsuo. Tetsuo approach him and tap his shoulder.

“My friend, take this bomb and places it at Fire Nation Capital. The Market Square.” Says Tetsuo. Blank nods and Tetsuo create a portal and blank walk through it and arrive at the capital. He walks into the capital and head towards the market area. There he put the bomb under the steps of a bank. He then puts his finger at his left ear and using the long range radio he tells Tetsuo that he completes the mission.

“Good work, my friend. Now go home.” Says Tetsuo and he create a portal in the back alley, where Blank walks through it and return back to the Headquarters.

“Now, boom.” Says Tetsuo as he makes a ram hand seal.

At the market, the bomb shines and explodes so strong and powerful, 2/3 of the capital is blown to smithereens. Tetsuo who looks at the result with his crystal ball, smiles. He changes the scene from the capital city, to a Konoha ninja. “Now……” says Tetsuo. The Konoha nin nods and turns to his men.

“I just receive info that Earth Village have blew up the capital!!!!!!!” screams the ninja. His fellow ninja looks at him with disbelieve. “So the rumor of the Earth Village sending war threats to Hokage is true?” ask Ninja 1. “He thinks his village is the only one that suffers?” ask Ninja 2.

“We will attack, we are the border patrol will be the first wave to attack the Earth Nation. Blood for blood!!!!!!!!” screams the traitorous ninja. His fellow men reply and he led his team towards Earth Nation.

At SNA headquarters.

“What is your plan Tetsuo?” ask Oita.

“You know why Mizu lost the last war? Because they took on all village in their full power. I learn if we want to wage war against the world, we must weaken the 5 super powers, so they can be easy picking. That’s why I want them to kill each other. In the face of disaster lies opportunity for renewal.” Says Tetsuo.

2 hours later at the Hokage Office.

“WHAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!” shouts the Hokage, when he received information about the destruction of the capital. He looks at Shikamaru who was dumfounding with this information.

“Is it the SNA?” ask the Hokage. Shikamaru kneels and do his put his fingers together and close his eyes. Then another ninja barge into the office.

“Sir, I received info that the Earth Nation village near the border was attack, by Konoha ninjas.”

“You gotta be kidding me.” Says the Hokage. Then Hope walks into the office.

“Father, I want to go to the capital to investigate. I will take a scouter with me.” Says Hope. The Hokage nods.

“I Want Sarutobi and his team and Hiro and his team here. ASAP. Someone gotta check the borders. Hope walks out from the room and head to the armory. There a beautiful girl is waiting for him. She timidly tries to speak to Hope.

“HHHHH………..” mutters the girl.

“Hei Tomoyo.” Says Hope. The girl’s face blush. She holds some sort of a cloth in her hand. “What’s that?” ask Hope. The girl timidly gives the cloth to Hope. He took and he looks a black cape, much like Akatsuki’s, just without the Red Cloud. “Nice is it for me?” ask Hope. She nods. Hope grins and he took his straw hat, his cape and Konoha jounin vest off and wears the cape. “Thank you.” Says Hope. Tomoyo timidly nod. Then Hope remembers something. “Tomoyo, you’re a scouter aren’t you?” ask Hope. She timidly nods. “Good I need you. We’re gonna go to the capital together. Think it, as a date.” Says Hope. Tomoyo blushes even more and falls down. “Well, see ya.” Says Hope. Tomoyo lying at the ground just mutters “Date, date date……”

5 days ago. At the Mizukage office.

“Your son?” ask Sakuya. The Mizukage nods. Sakuya stands up. “Tank follow me. Mizukage please show me the bathroom.” Ask Sakuya. She gave Sakuya the direction and Sakuya steps out from the room and went to the bathroom. She told Tank to guard the door and she went in. In there, she puts her hand at her ear and use the radio to communicate with Tetsuo.

“Tetsuo, it’s me.” Whisper Sakuya.

“Yes. What is it.” Ask Tetsuo.

“Have you ever heard of Kai?” ask Sakuya.

“Nope. Why?” ask Tetsuo.

“He suppose to be Mizukage’s son.” Says Sakuya.

“So?” ask Tetsuo.

“He’s the 8 tail host.” Whisper Sakuya. Tetsuo close his eyes. “I’ll look into it. Stay alert over there, Sakuya. “Understood.” says Sakuya. “This eight tail host, disturb me. Like I said, knowing is half the battle. Without proper info, I won’t let you guys go fight something unknown.” Says Tetsuo. He breaks the communication and walks towards a giant scroll. He opens it and does several hand seals and places his hand unto it and hundreds of paths of lights that looks like a circuit comes out from scroll and fill the whole building, and later the whole town. The circuits went underground
And heads towards each ninja village and connected to all of their scrolls inside their village.

“Connection completed.” Says Tetsuo who started to breathe heavily. Then he is surrounded by thousands of virtual scrolls and he went through all of it quickly as he’s looking for something. Michi and Oita walks in the room and saw Tetsuo.

“So he’s doing that jutsu again, doesn’t he know that jutsu required a very large amount of chakra and eat one year of his life span.” ask Michi. “That jutsu, can make him assimilate with all the scrolls in the world and learn any information in them. That’s why he knows every jutsu in every village. The Scroll Diving Jutsu, that jutsu that gave him the nick name, All-Seeing.” says Oita.

Tetsuo is busily reading through all the scrolls and suddenly he stops.

“So that who Kai really is………” says Tetsuo.


Scroll Diving Jutsu: yeah I got this idea when I saw Ghost in the Shell.

Tomoyo: An easily excited, shy girl who have a crush with Hope. And he knew it and usually tease her. Hope also likes her. Her scouting ability is mostly because she can sense chakra and can tell if that chakra is hostile or not.
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-The Training Session

(Team Hiro trains with Team Uzumaki in order to prepare for the upcoming trials. The young and coming shinobi, train fiercely for the next 5 days.)

“Yeah, I got wind chakra! Looks like I’m gonna be cool just like Hiro Sensei. And if I remember this right, during my studies, the books stated that wind chakra is the best for closest to mid-ranged battles. It suits me just fine, I’m a close ranged fighter anyway,” said Nila. “I wanted Hiro Sensei though,” sobbed Zig.

“That’s right; it is the supreme battle strength for fights in that range. You’ve done your homework,” said Hiro. “Always stealing what’s mine. I wanted to train Sensei’s girl, I should have known she’d have his chakra type,” said Dosa.

“Chop it up to bad luck I guess,” smirked Hiro. “Yeah, shut up,” said Dosa. (The team notices that Hiro and Dosa are argueing.) “Wow, I guess even these guys can’t keep their cool sometimes,” said Zig. “Hiro Sensei,” mumbled Nila. “Man... He is just like an older Zig, I swear,” said Laya. “What was that? How about I give you a doggie biscuit to shut you up,” said Dosa.

“How dare you,” yelled Laya. (Nila does a face palm while Zig busts out into a crazed laughter.) “Hah, hah, hah. This guy got under her skin with a flick of his wrist. This guy is great. He’s my hero. I guess he’s cooler than I thought,” said Zig. (Zig walks over and places his arm around Dosa.) “We can be great friends,” laughed Zig. (Dosa looks up slightly and quickly pulls away, much to Zig’s dismay.) “I don’t care how tall you are. Don’t touch me kid,” said Dosa.

"Ehh, I guess not,” said Zig. (Hiro and Rina look at Dosa with disappointed eyes.) “Hey, what did I do? She started it by comparing me to this wiener,” asked Dosa. “Wiener?! I’ll let you know that,” said Zig. (Nila and Laya start to secretly chuckle. Zig looks overly embarrassed.) “Damn it all,” said Zig. “She’s just a kid,” said Hiro. (Rina punches Dosa in the gut, causing him to kneel over in pain.) “GAAAH,” groaned Dosa. (Nila and Hiro both do a face palm. Laya chuckles secretly while Zig makes a sympatric look.)

“She’s my hero,” mumbled Laya. “For some reason I just got a déj* vu,” said Zig. “Enough of the games, do you know what we are up against?! (Everyone shapes up immediately. Team Hiro then pictures the battles that they’ve witnessed involving the SNA.)

We can’t waste anymore time. Uzumaki Sensei is really busy and is counting on us to provide results. Since you guys have talent, he wants you guys stronger so we can fend off the SNA. Hiro, Dosa, Shun, Uzumaki Sensei and the other nations had trouble with them. 3 of our strongest Anbu-ops died. So cut the bull shit, or nothing will get done and I’ll consider you guys nothing more than worthless heaps of meat,” said Rina. (Everyone looks down. And then straightens up.) “Alright, you hear that maggots,” smiled Hiro. (Everyone cheers up.) “My mother didn’t even talk to me that way,” said Zig.

“Fine,” said Dosa. “I’m ready,” said Nila. (She activates the Byakugan then pulls off her jacket {wind catches it and drifts it elsewhere}, which reveals the paper seals secured to her fish net all over her arms.) “Inokichi,” yelled Laya. (A red large wolf appears next to her after hearing her call. Laya then pops a food pill, which causes her to go into beast mode, sharper teeth, sharper claws, and messy hair.) “She looks even more like a mutt. Better not saying anything, at least when I’m not serious yet,” thought Zig. (He pulls his wrappings off his head. He makes a handseal, soon he draws on his chakra. A human sized dome of chakra envelops Zig’s body. Everyone takes notice.)

“Zig isn’t taking things lightly anymore,” thought Nila. “Show off,” said Laya. “I’ll show you why I’m the only Jounin in my class,” said Zig. (Team Uzumaki takes notice.) “Settle down Zig,” smiled Hiro. “Who is this boy,” thought Dosa. “My, my Hiro, I’m proud of you. Your students, you’ve raised them well. Their chakras are astounding for their age. But this boy’s just keep getting more intense,” said Rina. (The chakra soon dissipates around Zig; Zig’s forehead has veins all across. His sleeves burst off, which shows that veins appear all over his arms as well.)

“Now, it’s show time,” said Zig.

Next Time: Now that Team Hiro has shown why they are worth their praise, the real training begins.
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-Chakra manipulation.

(Team Hiro is ready to get down.) “First, we’ll work on natural chakra manipulation,” said Hiro. “Hey, Hiro, these kids aren’t snot nosed Gennin,” said Dosa. “Yeah, you think,” said Zig. “We should split up. We can’t train them to their full potential if they are all bunched up and have to worry about each other,” said Dosa. “You do have a point,” said Rina. “Sounds like a plan, Nila, get over here,” said Hiro. (Nila rushes over.) “Boy, you’re with me,” said Dosa. “Hmm,” smiled Rina. (Both Zig and Laya follows their trainers to separate locations.)

“Do you know that your father also was a wind elemental user,” said Hiro. “Really, that’s cool,” said Nila. “Yep, and when he found out that I had an affinity for wind like himself, he lit up. He took a quick likening to me and trained me like no tomorrow. I think he saw something special in me. In fact, looking at you, I think I know what he was talking about,” said Hiro.

“Sensei… But, shouldn’t you see that in Zig? I’m not like Zig. I see the way you look at him. When you heard he was promoted to Jounin, your eyes lit up. Me, I’m no one special. I’m just the daughter of the Hokage,” said Nila. “Don’t do that yourself. Zig is a fast learner, and yes, he can do things that a lot of older shinobi can’t. But there is one thing he can’t do,” said Hiro.

“His genjutsu is amazingly powerful and his ninjutsu it’s, it’s. To tell you the truth, I didn’t even think someone so young can be so talented. He’s even better than Teru,” said Nila. “I’m not talking about techniques. The one thing he can’t do; is be you,” said Hiro.

(Nila is shocked with Hiro’s statement.) “Be me,” questioned Nila. “Yes. That fire I see in you. Your will is perhaps greater than anything I’ve ever seen. You remind me so much of your father. Faced with adversity, you never give up. As long as you have the will, you can win over someone who is more skilled yet has less motivation. Will wins over skill any day. I know you haven’t forgotten what your father has told you,” said Hiro.

“Of course not, was just,” said Nila before being cut off. (He then uses a miniscule level of wind chakra to slice off leaves from a tree. He swiftly catches two of them and lands in front of Nila.) “Use your wind manipulation to cut this leaf like so (he instantly slices the leaf when he grabs it slightly). Though, even I struggled with this when I was training under your father as a boy. For you, this should be a breeze. First, start by palming it,” smiled Hiro. (He hands Nila the Leaf.) “Really, even you? I guess I’ll just have to give it a try, since you have so much faith in me,” said Nila. (She palms the leaf. The scene soon switches to Laya and Rina.)

(Laya has a leaf on top of one of her palms. She has trouble trying to make a nice sized water bubble on top of it.)

“This isn’t working,” said Laya. “Ohh. I guess not. Even with your chakra amplified with the pill. I guess you can’t hack it,” said Rina. “What,” yelled Laya. “Don’t take it to heart. It takes 6 months to master this step and several years before you can employ it in actual battle. If you would have started years ago, maybe, but it may be feat over your ability,” said Rina.

“If I can’t do it, what do you suppose we do? I don’t want to fall further behind Zig and Nila,” said Laya. “Hmm, I’ll think of something to keep you busy. Just give me a little more time,” said Rina.

(The Scene switches to Zig and Dosa. Zig is also having trouble. He starts to get a little angry.)
“C’mon kid! What happened to all that talent of yours? Burn the freakin leaf,” said Dosa. “AAAHH, Shut the hell up,” yelled Zig. (With his explosive chakra he blows up the leaf… Around him bunches of exploded leaves lie as a result of his insane chakra and inability to turn it into fire nature. He then picks up another leaf and tries it again.)

“Despite having such a large chakra pool, it seems he can’t convert it into nature. Though, his chakra manipulation skill is indeed impressive. If only he could control fire, he would be an unstoppable force. Though, at the moment, he’s just unsatisfactory,” thought Dosa.

(Another leaf explodes.) “Kid, why are you fuckin up? You have the talent, just do it. Or am I mistaken,” smirked Dosa. (Zig grunts then picks up another leaf. He tries again. Dosa walks over to him and places his hand on his shoulder. Zig is surprised.)

“Picture two rough bars of charka,” said Dosa. “What,” asked Zig. “Just do it. Use your imagination. I know you kids do it a lot. Imagine rubbing them quickly together back and forth until you generate heat. Once the heat grows strong enough, summon it to the surface using your chakra and then blow,” said Dosa. (Dosa sprays a small jet of fire out from his gullet and out his mouth.)
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“I thought you couldn’t do fire,” said Zig. “It is not unusual for Jounin to have more than two natures, though two is usually how many natures a Jounin typically has,” said Dosa. “Two hmm,” mumbled Zig. “Since you are using your fingers, just imagine creating friction in your fingers and use that heat to emit a small flame,” said Dosa.

(Time passes on, as the the scene switches to Nila and Hiro.)

“In your mind, picture two sharp pieces of chakra. Imagine using the large one to sharpen the smaller one into a thin sharper blade. Use that blade to slash through obstacles,” said Hiro. (All of a sudden Nila slices through the leaf.) “Hah. I did it. I did it! Look Sensei, I really cut it,” yelled Nila. “Great work. Your father would be proud. Only several hours! That’s faster than most geniuses,” said Hiro. (She rushes over to embrace him.) “It’s all thanks to you Sensei. You are as good as they say,” said Nila.

(Hiro then begins to smile.) “Actually, it probably has more to do with her ancestry. The Hyuuga are masterful chakra manipulators however, their strick teachings only allowed them to use it for their special taijutsu, besides a lightning or wind styled Hyuuga member is probably rare at best. Still, with the Byakugan, they can see the the fibers and specific energies used in chakra. Nila’s own ancestry probably allowed for her to pin point her chakra type and bring it to the surface with little trouble. With her being Uzumaki Sensei’s daughter, she must have adopted his natural affinity as well.

What a dynamic clash of bloodlines. She carries the blood of a royal Hyuuga as well, so her chakra manipulation in strikes should be high enough to support my idea. If she could implement wind element into the gentle fist, her taijutsu could be enhanced with her wind chakra, which means she could attack internally and externally at the same time to immediately collapse a shinobi’s physical structure… Only a feat a Hyuuga clan member can achieve with a wind affinity. Give me a few days, with her natural talent, I could turn her into a devastating Kunoichi,” Thought Hiro.

(As the Sun sets a little, the scene switches to Laya and Rina’s training zone. Inokichi is carrying Laya’s unconscious body as it is standing in a puddle.)

“It looks like I got it out of her. She sure is talented in the arts of artificial enhancements. Her being in the Inuzaku clan must have eased the stress and side affects they have on the body. I know the clan specializes in physical enhancement drugs, but a talented individual such as her is rare to come by. She was able to to endure three of them and not suffer extreme draw backs while most would succumb to muscle ruptures after a second one.

I hope she can take the experience she gained from using the pills to extend her chakra manipulation, she can’t keep taking three, and even she has her limits. Though, due to her lack of years of expertise in chakra nature manipulation, she’ll probably need to take at least one pill for her to enhance overall chakra manipulation, which would allow her be able to dig deeper and draw her nature to her chakra receptors for the meantime,” said Rina.

(Switch Scene to Dosa and Zig; Zig’s clothes are torn up. Dosa’s weapon is placed elsewhere.)

“You remind me of myself all those years ago. Your stubborn ass,” said Dosa. (Zig is panting.) “I’m plenty strong. I don’t need no stupid nature chakra manipulation. With my chakra, I can perform my own unique chakra based ninjutsu and genjutsu,” said Zig. “Listen here kid! You are alright. Now come at me again,” yelled Dosa.

“AHHHH,” yelled Zig. (He immediately rushes at Dosa. Zig continuously produce jab cross combos repeatedly, aiming at Dosa’s face and mid section. However, Dosa instinctively bob weave, slip his head, smack the jab, and duck defensive movements, disallows Zig to get much off on him. Dosa soon catches Zig’s elbow with his forearms. Dosa twists to the side, which throws Zig off balance. Dosa then does a side kick, which knocks him far and onto the ground.)

“He’s good,” said Zig. “Sorry kid. Taijutsu may work on your Chunnin friends, but against me, don’t push your luck,” said Dosa. “AAAAH,” yelled Zig. (His body is engulfed in a chakra orb again. He then speeds off towards Dosa’s location with a Kunai in each hand.)

“Shit, he’s fast,” said Dosa. (Dosa also parries with two Kunai however, they are shattered by Zig’s. Dosa then tosses a smoke bomb to break up the tension between.) “Hmm, where is he,” asked Zig.

(In the smoke Dosa formulates his plan.)

“He uses his chakra to increase his physical reflexes as well as his physical strength by charging his body with high degree of chakra manipulation through his muscles, nerves, joints, and brain signals that respond to his overall output. I have to gauge his technique,” said Dosa. (He rushes out of the smoke however he is soon tapped by Zig, which transfers all the chakra unto Dosa. Zig then backs off.)

“What the hell is this? My body is surrounded by an intense chakra aura, and my movement is slowed,” said Dosa. (Zig is panting while Dosa slowly moves forward.) “I can’t keep you stable for long because my chakra has gotten low. You’re probably able to move a little. I call this my Implosion technique. I release an enormous amount of chakra around my body, and then once I touch my opponent, the chakra is channeled around them. Then I use my technique to connect to my chakra around you like a remote since it is still my chakra, I can increase the frequency of the waves to crush you. It is a devastating technique to say the least. I’ll go easy on ya though,” smiled Zig.

“Damn brat,” said Dosa. (Zig makes a handseal.) “Ninja Art: Implosion,” said Zig. (The technique destroys a shadow clone.) “What,” yelled Zig. (Dosa comes from the back and chops him on the back of the neck, causing him to faint.) “Where does this kid get his techniques? His choice and chakra usages; almost reminds me of him,” Dosa said.
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(Night covers the sky as the scene is now switched to a camp out held by Team Uzumaki. Dosa carried Zig and tossed him unto a mat. Hiro carries Nila and gently lays her down. Inokichi is used as a pillow for Laya. They look at the exhausted students.)

“Ahh, man, I hope we didn’t over do it,” said Rina. “Nahh. I know my guys; they’ll be up in moving in no time. They’re troopers for sure. Why do you think they’re so scrappy? I whip them into shape. I don’t want to speak for the other Jounin squad leaders, but I feel as though they aren’t learning anything, until they give it everything they’ve got,” said Hiro.

(Shows a flash back to Hiro teaching the younger versions of Nila, Laya, and Zig how to walk on walls and on water. Zig gets both tricks first, while the others pick up. Then shows them learning how to throw shuriken and wield Kunai. The flash backs shows Zig bragging while having it easy, while Nila keeps on trying and encouraging Laya to keep going.

The scene cuts to them controlling chakra, using the ram handseal until they pass out, while Hiro watches them. Nila is the last one standing; she soon fades as Hiro carries all of them on his back. The scene switches to a more recent event when they were around 12-13 years old. The three attacks him however, the scene fades out and switches to after the battle, which shows that they are all lay knocked out cold by Hiro. Now, the scene is back to the present.)

“I guess you’ve shed your softness as you grew up and raised fine upstanding young shinobi. Just like Uzumaki Sensei,” said Dosa. “Dosa,” mumbled Hiro. “You guys,” said Rina. (She gets in between and hugs them both. Dosa makes a strange face. The trio all pictures themselves as young shinobi in each of Nila, Laya, and Zig. A flash back to a group image shows a younger Hokage standing behind and smiling joyfully behind his three child versions of his pupils. In the image Dosa and Hiro are at each other’s necks while Rina was trying to pull them apart. The Scene switches to Hinata’s room. She is glaring at a picture that has a younger Hope, Nila, Hinata, and The Hokage in it.)

“Why can’t we have a normal family? I just hate that all I can do for them is to pray for their success. Though, I’m probably being selfish. I knew I had to face this when I decided to marry Naruto, and I wouldn’t change a thing. (She smiles.) Nila, our little daughter, I hope the best for her, in whatever she decides to do. It is just when she came home all injured; I had to cradle her in my arms, even though she would probably throw a fit if I told her, she’s so rough. I just don’t want her to be seriously hurt,” thought Hinata.

(Hope appears behind her and places his hand on her shoulder.)

“Hope,” said Hinata. “Don’t worry mom, she’ll be fine. She has something special about her. Something in her that isn’t present among many,” smiled Hope. “I know. I believe in her ability to keep going. Despite being in such a poor condition and going out like that, I would normally be angry, but her sheer will and determination to over look the pain makes me a little envious. I wish I was more like that when I was younger,” smiled Hinata

“I guess I see why Zig did what he did. He couldn’t stop her. Not with that determination to go learn truths and see sights to broaden her horizon. Zig, I’m sorry. Perhaps in that sense, you were a wiser man that I,” thought Hope.

(Now, switch Scene to the Hokage’s office. He is analyzing the Forbidden scroll he secured when Shun was unable to seal up all of the meteor’s chakra. He then takes a break and looks at a picture of his family before kicking back and taking a nap.)
“Nila, be strong for daddy,” said The Hokage.

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-Over the past five days, the young adults became astounding.

(The scene switches to five days later in current time. Nila and Hiro are rushing towards each other. Nila has wind chakra enveloped around her hands and feet as the ground cracks as she races across it. She attempts to strike at Hiro with her sharpened hand however; he draws out one of his Mountain Cutters to parry it with the flat sight, to avoid hurting Nila.)

“I can’t afford to just avoid it now. Her speed and strength with the wind element has improved. It’s like she’s a whole new Nila,” thought Hiro. (Hiro smiles as he effectively parries Nila’s blow. Nila then smiles right back. The Scene soon switches to Laya and Rina’s location.)

“Show me that new technique you’ve been working on,” smiled Rina. “Sure thing. Let’s go Inokichi. (She takes a food pill and then gives one to her companion as well.) Beast Mimicry,” yelled Laya. “So, she’s using her pet as well. Not bad at all,” said Rina. (Two identical Layas make three handseals ending with the bore.)

“Water Element: Gushing Swipe,” yelled Laya. (Water expels from both of their mouths into twisting waves and then takes the form of two twin large claws of water that smashes into the earth as Laya and her double swings their hands.)

“Impressive. To think her pet was capable of it too. That takes extreme chakra manipulation. I guess with all that training I put her through, it is to be expected. Maybe I should contact Uzumaki Sensei and arrange to be a Jounin squad leader or something. The joy of teaching has inspired me,” laughed Rina.

(The Scene Switches to Dosa and Zig’s location. Extremely high walls of flames reaching 100 ft high and 300 ft wide torches the area and leaves nothing but ashes and burnt debris. Dosa’s Earth style wall, which was the same size as Teru’s, collapses and breaks apart like bridle cookies.)

“Unreal… This kid is too unreal,” laughed Dosa. “Heh,” smiled Zig from afar as he wipes his fingers across his nose to give off the hint that he was showing off. Though he kneels down and begins sweating extremely badly.

(Dosa is at his location immediately.) “You alright kid,” asked Dosa. “Yeah. Just don’t ask me to do it again, ok,” said Zig as he smirked. “He’s a genius for sure if I saw one. I just knew if he could take all that powerful chakra and turn it into a fire ninjutsu, it would be an attack beyond my wildest imagination. Hiro’s got some kid he does,” said Dosa.

(Time goes by as it is early afternoon and everyone is resting up just enjoying some nice rays. However, peace is interrupted as Shikamaru lands near Team Uzumaki. Team Hiro however, are still sleeping from their last training session.)

“The Hokage wants Team Hiro with Team Sarutobi to meet at his office immediately,” said Shikamaru. “Please can they recuperate? These guys need their rest. They’ve just got done with training,” said Rina. “It is an emergency. It involves the SNA. We need them on the border between The Fire and the Earth Countries,” said Shikamaru. “Sounds bad,” said Dosa.

“The mission we assigned them to complete was scheduled for a later date. I guess negotiations didn’t go so well after all. Alright, give us five. These guys will be prepared after they’ve gotten their gear together. I wish they’ve could have trained a little more to perfect their new skills. But what they have now should be more than suffice,” said Hiro. “Good. I’m off now to inform Sarutobi,” said Shikamaru. (He speeds off.) “Now it is time to put their training to use. These past five days has improved their abilities over and beyond what many could achieve in years by pushing their bodies to the absolute breaking point. It was a good thing they had natural talents already suitable for advanced nature chakra manipulation. Now, it is time for them to show those SNA bastards how to do it,” said Hiro.

“You aren’t going with them,” asked Rina. “I think these guys are more than ready to head out into the unknown,” said Hiro.

(The three students lay all sprawled up against each other. Zig has his foot kicking Laya in the face, while he has his head on Nila's stomach.)

Next Time: Now with Team Hiro’s new found abilities. They are prepared to duke it out with the SNA.
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-Team Hiro

Nila
Nin=3/Tai=5/Gen=3/Intel=4/Power=3/Speed=5/Chakra=3.5/Seal=2/Total=28

Laya
Nin=3.5/Tai=4/Gen=1.5/Intel=3/Power=3/Speed=3/Chakra=3/Seal=3.5/Total=25

Zig
Nin=5/Tai=3.5/Gen=4/Intel=3/Power=3.5/Speed=3.5/Chakra=5/Seal=3.5/Total=31.5


-Team Uzumaki

Dosa
Nin=4.5/Tai=5/Gen=3.5/Intel=4/Speed=4.5/Power=4/Chakra=4/Seal=4.5/Total=34

Laya
Nin=5/Tai=3.5/Gen=4/Intel=5/Speed=3/Power=4/Chakra=4.5/Seal=5/Total=34

Hiro
Nin=5/Tai=4/Gen=3/Intel=4/Power=5/Speed=4/Chakra=5/Seal=5/Total=35


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The Hokage
Nin=5/Tai=5/Gen=3.5/Intel=4.5/Power=5/Speed=5/Chakra=5/Seal=3.5/Total=36.5

Shikamaru
Nin=4/Tai=3/Gen=4/Intel=5/Power=3/Speed=3.5/Power=3/Chakra=3/Seal=5/Total=30

Shun
Nin=5/Tai=3/Gen=4/Intel=5/Power=3.5/Speed=4/Chakra=3.5/Seal=5/Total=33
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-Departure

(Tomoya and Hope are racing to their destination.)

“Umm. Ho… Hope, what are we going to do when we get there,” asked Tomoya. “From the information we’ve received from our village’s scouts via scrolls, there was an explosion using alien technology that the allied nations lack. We need to locate the artifact and or chakra used in it to be able to pin point or track the origin of the type of chakra or energy used within it. Perhaps, we can learn of some import info in regards to the kind of technology and jutsu the SNA employ. With my Rinnegan, I should be able to decipher the codes. I need you to watch my back by informing me of enemy presences as I gather the clues. I have a feeling that the SNA may send in reinforcements to secure the traces they’ve left behind, so I’m counting on you,” said Hope. (Hope smiles when he looks back at Tomoyo.)

“Right! I’ll give it all I’ve got,” said Tomoya. (She smiles back. The scene soon switches to The Hokage's office. Team Sarutobi, Shikamaru, The Hokage, Dosa, Hiro, and Rina are present.)

“Where is Zig,” asked Shitai. “He probably got cold feet,” said Taishi. “Please. Zig’s got way more class,” smirked Midori. “Shikamaru. Did they get the memo,” asked Sarutobi. “They’re fine. They are in the armory getting their gear together. They’ll be here in no time,” said Hiro.

“They’ve probably gotten so strong. I can’t wait to hear about their results,” smiled The Hokage. “Uzumaki Sensei, I’m worried about Shun. I’ll go check on him,” said Rina. “That’s nice. Give him our regards,” said The Hokage. “Sure thing,” smiled Rina. (She exits the building, while everyone starts to feel a little saddened about Shun.)

“Shun,” mumbled Sarutobi. “That guy was pretty cool,” said Taishi. “We wanted to be a Hokage Guard like him. So calm and precise. So brother and I looked up to him,” said Shitai. “Uzumaki Sensei. I’m about to get out of here. This emotional setting is starting to get to me. I don’t like it,” said Dosa. “Do as you please,” said The Hokage. (Dosa leaves too.) “What a jerk,” said Midori. “I’ll go deal with the paper work regarding this mission,” said Shikamaru.

“Alright, enough of this mood! Shun’s life includes works in the most dangerous of situations. This is to be expected. But he’ll be fine, worrying about him doesn’t make him get better,” said The Hokage. (They start to brighten up.) “Correct. It’ll do us no good then to mop around,” said Hiro. “Shape up you guys, it is almost time for the mission,” smiled Sarutobi.

(Shitai, Taishi, and Midori then each get serious. A little time has gone by as Team Sarutobi start to get drowsy and sit down in chairs and go to sleep. Sarutobi and Hiro are leaned up against a wall. The Hokage has his legs kicked up on his table. He slowly closes his eyes as the door flies right open and three figures with rapid speeds lands in the middle of the room. Laya is on top of Inokichi. The Hokage regains his senses and smiles. Hiro and Sarutobi wakes and Team Sarutobi turns around quickly.)

“Look who shows up,” smiled Hiro. “I like the new duds,” said The Hokage. “We have arrived! Let’s get this party started,” yelled Zig. (Midori smiles as she sees Zig.) “Gosh what a show off,” said Laya. “It is to be expected. He’s the Jounin leader for our squad for the moment,” said Nila. “WHAT,” yelled both Shitai and Taishi.

(Team Hiro has new outfits. Zig has a new hair cut, which includes the top of his hair being nicely sliced off. His hair is no longer spiky, being only two inches in length. He now wears a black tank top shirt, which shows off his toned muscles and upper body. He has steel forearm protectors on as well. He also wears black gloves. His pants remain unchanged. He no longer wears the typical Jounnin-Chunnin vest. He has small item bags secured to both thighs. For style, he wears nicely styled shades.

Laya now wears skin type purple pants as well as a long sleeved tight skin purple shirt that stops at her belly button. She has a medium sized item bag on around her waist that hangs off her right hip; she like Zig, no longer wears the Chuunin-Jounin vest. Nila has wrappings from her finger tips all the way up to her forearms. The wrappings are secured at the forearms by circular ring braces. She no longer wears fish nets. She now wears blue skin type shorts that reach her mid-thighs.

She now wears skin type, blue tank top shirt however, she has long-sleeved blue jacket on as well, which contains many pockets and slots for ninja gear. She ditched the many paper seals and only carries two now, one on each shoulder of her jacket; in which the jacket has been modified to hold all her Shuriken, smoke bombs, and Kunai that she used to carry on her person. Like Laya, she carries a medium sized item bag around her waist; the only difference is that Nila’s hang off her left thigh. The scene soon switches to Mizugakure. Tank and Sakuya are walking around the town trying to kill off time. The villagers question if they are the SNA and wonder why they are here in town. They scorn them for what they did during the war and give them evil looking eyes.)
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“Those are the SNA bastards. I hope they rot on the streets while maggots pick at their flesh when they lie dead in gutters,” said a man passing by. (Then an old man rushes toward Tank and hits him with a broom stick, breaking it across his head.)

“You son of bitch, because of you my son died,” yelled Old Man. (Tank turns around with an evil face.)

“You want to start something inferior insect,” asked Tank. “AHHH,” yelled the Old man. (He tries to run away however, Tank grabs him, chokes him with one hand and lifts him up into the air. Crowds of people surround Sakuya and Tank and are scared for the man’s life.) “Hah, hah, ha,” laughed Tank.

“Tank stop it now! Put him down. Do you want to make a scene,” said Sakuya. “Hmm,” groaned Tank. (He tosses the old man on the ground. Many people gather to pick him up and rush him away as Tank looks at them and makes an evil grin, which causes them run away. The old man then rushes to his family in his hut.)

“Grandpa,” said little girl. “Yes. I’m fine darling,” said Old Man. “Please don’t do that again. I can’t lose you too, now that my husband has lost his life seven years ago. How do you think my daughter would feel? She has to grow up without her father. Don’t let her lose you too, to more bloodshed,” cried Woman. (The old man starts to cry.) “He’s was my only son. And their organization killed him like he wasn’t even human. I hope those bastards get what’s coming to them. How could Mizukage let them in our village like it’s their home,” questioned Old man.

“We have to trust in the Mizukage. She saved us when many counted us good as dead. Please don’t lose faith,” said Woman. (The scene switches back to Tank and Sakuya as they near a bar.)

“Fuck it all. It has been five damn days of waiting for that tailed freak to come home from his mission. I’m freakin tired of looking at these people and these goofy looking houses. And this part of town is even more annoying than usual,” said Tank. “Stop complaining. The boss told us to stay as long as possible until Kai gets here. Right now, we’ll just have to wait it out. And even if we do come across Kai, we have to await orders from the boss before we approach him, as we don’t know anything about his abilities,” said Sakuya. “Ahh. I guess you’re right,” said Tank Reluctantly. (They want into a bar. Tank and Sakuya sits down. A fairly attractive bar tender polishes up a glass.)

“Hmm, it’s empty,” said Sakuya. “It’s the first empty joint we’ve seen in this town. Good, don’t have to deal with no pests,” said Tank. (They scout the area.)

“A, bitch! Whip me up somethin expensive and make it snappy,” yelled Tank as he places his leg on the table and stretches out. “Tank,” sighed Sakuya. (The bartender looks back at him.) “Sorry, I don’t serve cocky arrogant jerks with no manners,” said Bartender. (Tank’s eyes go blood shot while the bartender look disturbed.)

“Sorry miss. It has been a tough day. Please don’t mind him. We’re kind of restless. We’ve been all over the place as of late,” said Sakuya. “You don’t look like the average tourists. Are you guys travelers by any chance,” asked Bartender. “Travelers my ass,” said Tank. “Tank please! Of a sort yeah, we just need to unwind a bit. We pay well. I know you’d understand,” said Sakuya. “Why don’t I just kill the bitch instead,” whispered Tank.

(She brings them drinks. Tank notices something bubbling in the drinks. As Sakuya prepares to drink it, the unthinkable occurs.)

“BITCH WHO THE HELL ARE YOU,” yelled Tank. (He punches the end table, causing it to shatter.) “They’re good,” said Bartender. (Sakuya looks at her drink, she trashes it and then tosses shuriken at the bartender’s face however, she pulls out a Kunai from under her apron and effectively parries them.)

“So, you’re not the average bartender. Tank, good call,” said Sakuya. “I’m under obligation’s to kill you guys,” said Bartender. “DID MIZUKAGE ORDER THIS,” asked Tank. “Maybe, maybe not, either way, I have my own personal reasons for wanting you dead,” said Bartender. (She rips off her wig revealing a medium length purple hair. She proceeds to remove her apron revealing a shinobi in a Jounin-Chunnin attire.)

“You’re the Hidden Mist Alchemist. Also goes by the name of Thorny Rose, said to mix the deadliest of poisons that could drop even the largest of opponents within seconds of contracting,” said Sakuya.

“In other words, she’s Ms. Misa. I guess we over looked this one during the war,” smiled Tank.

(She pulls out two .45 caliber pistols from holsters on her thighs.) “I’m glad that my name reaches you bastards. After all, I’ve had my fair share of killing your specialized asses back in the 4th shinobi war. These weapons of mine fires out bullets that explodes upon being injected into their targets; once exploded, they release massive amounts of deadly substances strong enough to drop a powerful summon in one blow within minutes. Just imagine what they’d do to smaller specimens such as humans,” smiled Misa.

(Switch Scene to the Mizukage’s office, a mist shinobi arrives to immediately inform of something important.)

“It’s Misa. She’s attacking the SNA duo in town,” said Mist Shinobi. (Mizukage gets angry.) “Damn it! Not yet. I told her not to approach them. Watch over the office. I’m about to stop Misa from ruining everything,” said Mizukage.

(The Scene switches to a forested area. The two teams consisting of Team Sarutobi and Team Zig, are converging to their destination. Nila is in the front with Laya while Inokichi is traveling from the back, listening and smelling for interferences. The rest are lined up horizontally in the middle. The scene switches to the recent past, both teams are outside the gates of Konoha with Hiro, The Hokage, and Shikamaru.)
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“Why does Zig get to be a captain of his own team while we have to follow Sarutobi Sensei,” asked Taishi. “Yeah, he’s not better than anyone of us,” said Shitai. “Oh, please,” said Midori. “Oh brother,” said Laya. “Don’t be mad,” said Zig. “Gosh, he’s living it up,” said Laya.

“Hiro believes that Zig has what it takes to lead a team. And since he’s a jounin, he is a very important person in this village. Due to the tension going on right now, we can’t afford to have that many Jounin leave out, as if someone were to strike, our Jounin would be out on missions. That’s why Hiro must remain in Konoha. How’s that for an answer Hokage,” said Sarutobi. (Shikamaru nods his head.)

“That’s exactly right. Just have faith in Hiro’s choice. He wouldn’t give him such a task if he weren’t up to it. Right Hiro,” smiled The Hokage. “Do your best Zig. Do your best Nila and Laya,” said Hiro. (Nila and Laya look back at the smiling Hiro.)

“Sometimes he can be such a dork,” sighed Nila.

“Have you guys nailed the location into your heads? Follow the maps we marked to avoid potential hotspot that may be SNA hideouts,” said Shikamaru. “I guess it really isn’t safe out there anymore. Shun and I noticed that when we were ambushed, perhaps we walked into hostile territory,” said Nila.

“Good deduction Nila. Do your best, I’ll tell your mother only good things,” smiled The Hokage.

(The Hokage hands Sarutobi a scroll.)

“Give this to the Tuchikage. After you guys secure the borders, ensure that he gets this. He needs to know the truth,” said The Hokage.

“Why can’t we just send in a messenger pigeon,” said Taishi. “The Earth village probably suspects us of foul play, they’d probably ignore it without showing proof after what just happened. That is why the Hokage is sending you guys to take care of border patrols. It seems we’ve been infiltrated,” said Shikamaru.

(Scene switches slightly ahead into the present however, behind the current time they are somewhere in a forest. Zig proposes something.)

“Sarutobi Sensei, shouldn’t we use the reverse Eagle Formation,” said Zig. “What the hell is that,” asked Shitai. “Pulling shit out ya ass again Zig,” questioned Taishi. “If you’d shut up, perhaps you’d learn something,” said Zig. “This kid is sharp,” thought Sarutobi. “Midori, how do you deal with these idiots,” asked Laya. “Hey,” yelled Shitai. “What was that,” Taishi curtly replied. “They’re teammates, so I manage to put up with them. Zig is really amazing isn’t he,” said Midori. “He’s definitely something,” said Laya. “Zig is Zig,” said Nila.

“Guys, listen up so he can explain. I’m tired of teaching at the moment. Listen to him, he’s the teacher right now, so show him respect,” said Sarutobi. “Alright, when there are three or at least two trackers as well as highly experienced shinobi (Shitai and Taishi smiles when they hear that. Midori snickers after looking at them.) as well as inexperienced shinobi ,” said Zig as he looks over at Shitai and Taishi.

“Hey, what do you mean by that,” said Shitai. “Arrogant fool,” said Taishi. (Midori starts smiling.) “If you guys are done,” said Sarutobi. “Thanks. Anyway, the weaker shinobi stay in the middle while the stronger ones stay on the outside to protect the inside and back up the rears of the scout which is in front. The Scout in back notifies what goes on from checking what goes on behind the backs of the entire troop. The shape for the formation, gives an Eagle shape,” said Zig.

“But you called this a reverse Eagle formation,” said Taishi. “It is because we have three trackers if you count the dog, and since the dog can’t communicate as effectively as a human in regards to distances and positions up ahead, it goes in the back. (They all agree besides Laya with that previous statement in regards to the competency level of her pet, Inokichi.)

Nila and Laya are excellent trackers; they go in the front, which forms the tail instead of the head due to their positions lob siding the formation, which makes the dog as the head, though it is positioned in the back. In movement, it appears as though the Eagle is moving backwards from top view. That my friends is why it is called a reverse Eagle Formation,” said Zig.

“Nice work Zig. The Eagle formation is used by dual teams with trackers and strong shinobi to effectively avoid upcoming threats as well as defend accordingly if an ambush is coming and is unavoidable. The survival rate is 30% higher than just running around all confused and cluttered because it takes into account of the team’s skill set and abilities to preserve each others’ lives during an ambush. I’ll guard the far left and Zig will guard the far right. Nila and Sakuya will go in the front, while Inokichi will go in back, and the rest of you guys go in the middle and I swear to God if I hear just one complaint about positions,” said Sarutobi. “Fine, hmm,” said Taishi. “Ehh,” groaned Shitai.

“I’m fine as long as Zig can protect me. Isn’t that right,” mentioned Midori as she winks. (Zig blushes.) “Not only does he gets to be a squad leader, he is on a team with two girls,” said Taishi. “Heh, he even bagged Midori, the unapproachable witch,” said Shitai. (Midori bloodies Taishi’s face as she turns around.) “WRONG ONE. AHHH,” yelled Taishi. “Some brother you are didn’t have to sacrifice us both! NOOO AHHH,” yelled Shitai. (Midori bloodies his face too. They both look extremely pathetic. Everyone sighs.)

(The Scene switches back to the present. They continue to rush across the plains in the Reverse Eagle Formation.)

“It has been several hours since we’ve set out. Let’s set up camp here,” said Sarutobi.
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(Switch scene to Shisio and Sasuke’s location. They are in the trees stalking an individual walking through the forest.)

“Hey, that’s that kid from the Lightning country. The one I was about to waste and dump into the nearby overgrown pound to feed those overgrown fishes,” said Shisio. “Really, I guess I’ll have to apologize to him when I have you beat the snot out of him and force him to join me. He’s the first on my list of recruits,” said Sasuke. “I’m not feeling especially generous but even if I do decide to kick his ass, what makes you think he’d help you become Hokage,” said Shisio.

“Once I tell him about Konoha’s history and how the Uchiha were treated and the role my brother had to play in order for me to live, he’d most certainly lend a hand. But first, rough him up a bit,” said Sasuke. “You talk as though he’s part of the same clan as you where. What is the connection between you and this boy,” asked Shisio. (Sasuke smiles as the Scene switches to Ryu who is walking down a dirt road in a forest back home from a mission.)

“The Raikage lied to me, there weren’t any girls there. Probably just a pathetic excuse for me to save some sailors whose ship got raided by pirates out at sea. Damn C-rank mission… C’mon who does she think she is giving me such child’s play,” sighed Ryu.

(Switch Scene to the Headquarters of the SNA, Aya is trapped within an immensely huge and powerful cube of chakra which is stationed in a confinement hall down the corridors of the building on the last floor of the fortress. She then bangs louder and louder.)

“Damn it. I can’t disturb this chakra around me. The last thing I remember was fighting that weird snake girl, then all of a sudden my chakra locked up and I fainted. Everyone, I’m sorry,” said Aya. (She lifts up her shirt, which shows a seal that is causing her chakra to go unstable. She makes a handseal, her eyes go demon like for a moment, then shortly reverts back to her normal eyes.)

“It’s no use with this thing they’ve branded me with. What are they going to do to me? I’ve heard in the past that the hosts had their bijuu extracted from this one organization, but that caused their death because it severed soul link that establishes life… Is that, my fate,” questioned Aya.

(Switch Scene to Blank and Tetsuo’s location.)

“While we wait for Tank and Sakuya, I want you to capture the 4th tailed beast in the meantime. It is a powerful being and has a unique ability. In Bijuu forms it uses lava chakra manipulation which is a mixture of fire and earth, that melts through most steels. Though, with your high forms of water elemental ninjutsu, it shouldn’t be a difficult feat for you alone,” said Tetsuo.

“Understood, just prepare the portal,” said Blank. (Blank walks through the portal. The scene switches to the Fire capital. It is in complete ruin. A crater has developed around the entire area. Hope and Tomoyo closes in, then they hide behind trees.)

“The amount of destruction is hard to fathom,” said Tomoyo. “Tomoyo, be sure to turn on your radio, I’m going to check the ruined structure I call you when over in 10 minutes time. Use that to check the area,” said Hope. “Bbb, but,” said Tomoyo. “I’ll be fine. We can’t be at the same location at the moment, or the scouting won’t be effective from further ranges.

“Yes, I understand. I’ll check the animals if I have to,” said Tomoyo. (Hope smiles.) “Over the radio contact me of any chakras that are approaching from whatever distances and from whatever directions. If you need backup, I’ll be there immediately so don’t worry,” said Hope. (He looks at her, she looks down, so he hugs her, which causes her to blush and brighten up.)

“It’ll be fine. I’m counting on you,” said Hope. (He rushes off to check the ruined area. Then 10 minutes pasts by.)

"How's the situation," asked Hope. "It's fair, no hostile chakras," said Tomoya. "Good, meet back up with me," said Hope.

Next Time: Blank approaches the 4th tailed beast, while the Mizukage tries to clear up the confusion with the SNA.
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Misa: She is known to be an extremely deadly Kunoichi and his highly respected in her village. During the 4th Shinobi war, she fought brilliantly and bravely against the SNA troops that threatened her home town. The SNA particularly had problems with her therefore, she is still alive today. Like Shisio, Mizukage considers her a valuable aspect to the village. However, of recent she attacked both Tank and Sakuya and attempted to poison them by spiking their drinks. Due to Tank’s perceptive eyes, he caught the trick in the act, which forced her to reveal her identity to them. Despite being loyal to the village in the past, the Mizukage never ordered a hit out on the SNA duo, and once she found out about it, she rushed to the scene. Misa’s actions hints that she is either from a different source, or she has objectives of her own, considering that Mizugakure is trying to strike a deal with the SNA, or at least use them without huge commotion.

Misa is known as the mists Alchemist due to her having the innate ability to instinctively mix compounded poisons into even more deadly substances. She is a shinobi who relies on deadly toxins to kill her opponents as it is rumored that her weapons are drenched in toxins. Though, she is still skilled in the arts of assassination. She may carry anything from pin needles to short blades that has been drenched in toxins, to poisonous gas bombs. Her trade mark weapons are two .45 caliber pistols that fire off bullets that explode and release deadly toxins that spread into the body. She said a single blow could kill a powerful summoned creature in minutes. For the past 7 years, she has traveled the world in search of the most deadly ingredients to add into her arsenal. She is however, immune to her own toxins.

This has something to do with her creating vaccines to every toxic enzyme she creates, and tests it out on her body to strengthen her anti-bodies and build u her natural immune system. She does this as a fail-safe, so that the enemy doesn't try to poison her with her own tricks.Her face is cute but devilish, think of Karin’s face, just more mature.
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-Tank and Sakuya vs. Misa

(The Scene is at Mizugakure. The view is set above a tavern. All of a sudden, Tank burst through the roof, followed by Sakuya. They both land on top of the structure. Misa comes out as well however, lands across from them on the other side of the hole Tank created.)

“Not many are able to evade my .45 caliber bullets from such a close range. You guys’ ability to control and fuse substitution and clone jutsu into replicas that are not stagnant and move fluidly is stuff of the legends. Only Uzumaki Naruto is capable of such displays, though you guys aren’t him, so I’m not
worried,” said the grinning Misa.

(Tank grunts from hearing that statement. From below, many citizens chant Misa’s name which causes her to look a way for a few brief moments. Many of the people are crying tears of joy.) “Yeah, Misa, give it to em,” yelled a random fan. “Hey, that’s the old man chocker up there. Rip out his fuckin throat,” yelled a bum. “Kill those bastards, end their lives. Make them pay for what they’ve done to our people,” yelled a random male. (The Old man from before, with his daughter and law and his granddaughter appear from the crowd.)

“Achieve revenge for my son. Avenge Namu,” yelled Old man. (The crowds scream at the top of their lungs for Misa’s victory. The scene switches back to on top of the cavern.) “It seems like you have many fans,” said Sakuya. “Isn’t that cute? Can’t wait for them to witness the despair of losing such an honorable hero,” said the laughing Tank.

“This is my village, and you guys aren’t welcomed. Before I kill you I will ask you a question. What do you hope by allying yourselves with the Mizukage,” asked Misa. (Misa looks at them however they both show no signs of yielding.) “Sakuya, even I know if we rush in, we’ll probably be killed… I’ll distract her long enough for you to do one of those weird illusion thingies,” said Tank. “Heh, I’m shocked, never thought you had a rational bone in your body,” said the smirking Sakuya. “If it wasn’t for my impulses, you’d be dead already,” said the laughing Tank.

(Sakuya smiles, she tries to utter thanks for saying her life, but she couldn’t form her mouth to the words. On the battlefield, displays of such emotion are illegal, like some form of unwritten rule. It was something she and Tank knew all too well, as it would cloud their judgment and make them complacent. Sakuya notices Tank rushing in and prepares as she prepares handseal meanwhile Misa draws out her pistols.)

“I guess they’ll rather die without explaining, fine by me. Draw,” yelled Misa. (Tank makes a handseal, this causes the chakra around his hands to form a slight, thin layer of chakra.)

“He’s planning to pull out all the stops. I won’t let you die out there alone Tank,” said Sakuya. “His chakra, he extended a layer around his fists, he plans to counter by .45 caliber bullets. What a laugh,” said the smiling Misa. (She begins firing; close up on Sakuya shows a worried woman. The scene zooms in on Tanks’ person, he opens his eyes.)

“Art of Infinite flow of strikes: Gatling gunner,” yelled Tank. (Automatically three bullets lie on the ground near Tank’s location. The scene switches to the people and are question why he is still standing. They say she’s just warming up, but Misa is amazed. The scene switches back to her, where she demonstrates her amazement.)

“I didn’t even see his fists move… What the hell is going on here,” asked Misa. “That’s Tanks special taijutsu, he sends thin layers of chakra around the areas he wants to strike with, to defend against sharp objects while he attacks, while at the same time, he uses chakra to increase the flow of movement in his strikes. His reflex timing is difficult to read,” said Sakuya.

(Sakuya makes another handseal.) “You better start firing again, before I fire off at you. And trust me, don’t miss a beat, or my punches will make bigger bullets holes than your pee shooter can,” said Tank. “Why you… He’s rushing at me,” said Misa. (This time she continuously fires off bullets from both pistols, Tank uses his fists to smash and knock the bullets aside. His rapid jab cross, hook-hook, upper cut-upper cut punching continuously defends against the bullets. She keeps firing for at least 30 seconds, eventually, she runs out.)

“Damn it,” thought Misa. “Fuck it, I don’t need Sakuya’s help,” said Tank. (As he rushes closer, Sakuya notices something about Misa.) “Tank she’s sneaky,” yelled Sakuya. (Misa smiles as she pulls out multiple pin-needles from her compartments. She does a kick off the ground to accelerate into the air {to avoid Tank’s barrage} then she tosses the pin-needles.) “I’d like to see you block those,” said the grinning Misa. “Tank don’t touch them, they’ll pierce through your flesh. Remember the toxins,” yelled Sakuya.

(Tank groans as he pulls out Shuriken and knocks the pin-needless of course, which causes Misa to groan. She then digs in her pocket for a poisonous gas bomb while she continues to accelerate into the air.)

“It has been fun SNA. But your reign ends here,” yelled Misa. “Hmm. I can’t evade in mid air,” said Tank. (Tank looks back at Sakuya to see if she finished preparing the genjutsu for the hitter quitter. Sakuya finishes the third handseal then makes the dragon seal.)

“Tank I’m coming,” yelled Sakuya. (Chakra from her feet accelerates Sakuya’s body flicker.) “Took your ass long enough,” said Tank. “She wants some too I guess,” said Misa. (She pulls out a second gas bomb.) “You won’t get the chance, Chaos for the Dark Abyss,” yelled Sakuya. (She yelled her genjutsu command as she launches into the air.) “Whatever you are planning it won’t work,” said Misa. (She tosses her gas bombs. Everyone is up on their feet watching to see the end to such a climactic battle. Automatically, the battle is interrupted.)

“Water Element: Aquatic Splash,” yelled Mizukage. (Immediately a large, wide spread, blanket of water disrupts all the attacks as the Mizukage seemingly floats above the attack, as the three fighters are thrown all over the place and their attacks stopped before they could execute effectively. Sakuya and Tank are swept into the audience while Misa is knocked into an ally way just short distances away from the crowd, as she could still look up at the sky and see the Mizukage falling down to her position.)

“Hey, it’s the Mizukage,” said a shinobi. “Did she protect Misa, or the SNA,” asked another. “That I don’t know it was a very close fight,” said the first shinobi. (The crowd is all in uproar.) “So, that lazy bitch comes off to stop the fight,” said Tank. “Misa must not be working alongside her,” said Sakuya. (The Scene switches to Mizukage, as she lands near the prone Misa.)

“I believe you have some explaining to do,” said Mizukage. “Tst,” sniggered the seemingly annoyed
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Next Time: What becomes of Misa’s betrayal of the Mizukage?
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At Lightning Country.

Shisio is holding a battered and beaten Ryu by his throat. “If this just me, I’ll throw your corpse at the nearest river.” Says Shisio and Sasuke appear behind him.

“That’s enough.” Says Sasuke and Shisio drops Ryu on the ground. Sasuke comes up to Ryu look at him with his Sharingan and then he changes it to Mangekyou Sharingan. “Now let’s talk about our clan.” Says Sasuke. Ryu sighs.

“But I will be emotionally distraught by the turn of events that havebeen bestowed upon our clan.”

“By the way Sasuke, how damaged is your eyes?” ask Shisio. Sasuke looks at Shisio with his Mangekyou Sharingan then turn his attention to Ryu. “If you want someone to help you in this quest, I know a girl that will help you. She’s a thief and a missing nin from Konoha. Sasuke eyes turn back into the normal Sharingan and he looks at Shisio suspiciously.

“You know her too?” ask Sasuke.

“I know her during my travels. An exciting, seductress woman and have a very deadly set of skills too. We pair together several times. But do you want her for her skills, or her impact on the Hokage?” ask Shisio. Both of them glare at each other. “I have a feeling, if I let my guard down on you, you wont hesitate to cut my head off.” Says Sasuke. Shisio grins and walk away. “It’s summer time. I know where The White Bandit is at this season.” Ryu looks at them with a dumbfound expression.

“To be united by hatred is a fragile alliance at best.”

At a village near the border of the Wind Country.

A man gloats about his jinchuuriki to Michi and Oita.
“I am the Two Tail Jinchuuriki and I wont let evil go away unpunished, your corpses will be sold to the black market and I can sit back in the wealth I gain from it. I control black flame and women beg to be with me. What chances do you have against me weaklings!!!” says the two tail Jinchuuriki. Michi and Oita looks at each other.

“I'll take this stupid one, who decided to threaten us rather than attack us when he had the chance.” Says Oita.

At the fire capital.

Hope and Tomoyo arrives at the capital that was turn into a rubble. There, hundreds of medics ninjas, samurais and monks are doing their best to save as many survivors as they could. Then a pink hair ninja approach them.

“My name is Sakura, I’m the lead medic in Konoha. Long time no see Hope, Tomoyo.

“Hello.” Both Hope and Tomoyo reply to Sakura.

“Both of you aren’t doing rescue mission right?” ask Sakura. Both of them nod. “Well the Hokage did sent me and my squad, along with my husband and his squad.” Says Sakura.

“HEEEEEIIIIIII I found another body!!!!!!!!!!!! That makes 12 bodies I found!!!!” scream a ninja at the highest rubble. Hope, Sakura and Tomoyo look and see Rock Lee is laughing happily about his finding. Sakura sighs. “Y-Y-You’re husband is er…..really enthusiastic about this mission.” Says Tomoyo. “I keep telling him this is a rescue mission, not a find them all training session.” Says Sakura. “So we will be in our way, doing our job.” Says Hope and he pull Tomoyo away from Sakura and head towards the place where the market stands.

“Let start the mission.” Says Hope. Tomoyo nods.

At a house in front of lake, a white hair woman is sleeping on her rocking chair and suddenly Shisio, Sasuke and Ryu appear before her. She opens her eyes and reveal two sets of red eyes looking back at them.

“Enigma's overrated - especially during the summer. You could've knock.” Says the woman.

“It's been awhile Hatake Yuki.” Says Shisio. Yuki smiles and look at Sasuke. "From the looks of it, your not here to mate arent you?" ask Yuki. Ryu looks at Yuki with his mouth wide open.

“Close your mouth kid. I'm gonna topple the current Hokage. Want to join me?” ask Sasuke.

“I want the First's Scroll. Deal?” ask Yuki. Sasuke nods. Yuki looks with seductress eyes at Ryu.

“I’m deadly kid. Can you handle me?”

“Haba-Haba………” mumbles Ryu.

Yuki walks into her house and look back at Ryu and gave Ryu a blow kiss. Ryu smiles wide open.

“What is she doing………..” ask Ryu.

“Flirting.” Says Shisio.

“Cool….I mean hot……..” says Ryu.

Hatake Yuki: Hatake Kakashi only daughter and one of the best ninja of her time. But by the end of the war she abandon Konoha and start to become a thief. No one knows why but she once said she is tired by the way of a ninja that she says nothing more then wars, lies and murders and there is nothing romantic about it. She want to find a new path. The Hokage blame himself for her defection.

She have long white hair, red eyes. She wears a black top and a sleveless red coat. She wears a very short black skirt and a long black socks and a typical ninja shoes.
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