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i agree with you on keeping Kakashi as Hokage for now, since it frees up Naruto to go out on mission and to save the world lol. Now i'm in thinking mode on how i'm going to continue this, How do You and Vishnu and even jericho Uzimaki keep coming up with new stuff. You guys are like the Energizer Bunny you keep going and going and GOING....Mad Respect for all you guys. |
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J_H, totally agree with the small toads, possibly the next generation of sage toads. They could be Ma & Pa toads for Naruto. My thing about it is that you have Naruto camped out in his ancestral land, gaining knowledge & hidden secrets over the 5 year period. So its all coming to ahead. I would say that villain wise there's a possibility of a twist associated with a Kage or form ally or something. A Vishnu type turn of events. So you are definitely going hard on this storyline.
J_H, looking forward to yours too my man. There is a monster battle taking place with the water god & Naruto/Sasuke training. Not to mention new Jinchurikki. So its on my friend. Can't wait.....
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*Scene opens with the masses from Kiri traveling by foot on a beach. Ao is seen leading them, with several Kiri Anbu bringing up the rear. Fast forward to night time, a huge campsite with numerous tents. Ao and the Anbu are gathered around a bonfire.* Anbu 1: What is the plan now, Mizukage-sama? Ao: First and foremost, do not address me as Mizukage. Second, we stay on course. *Karin walks to the middle of the group.* Karin: We should send word to Konoha ahead of us. Ao: Aye. Any volunteers? Karin stepping forward: I volunteer. Ao: And why should you go? Karin: During my time under Orochimaru, I became acquainted with these parts of the world. Once I get to the Wave Country, it will take me one day’s journey to Konoha. Ao: I’m sending someone with you. Karin shocked: Why? Ao: We may have lost the swordsman and the Mizukage. I know you’re relatively new to Kirigakure, but you are a part of our village. As acting head of the village, I can’t risk losing another shinobi. Not now. Karin: Aye. Ao: Rina… *A short, petite woman appears next to Karin kneeling before Ao. She has long pink hair wrapped in two buns on the side of her hair (think Princess Leia). She rises wearing an Anbu mask.* Ao: Protect her and aide in relaying the message to Konoha. We’ll be behind by two days. I’ll send word if there is any complications. Rina: Aye. Ao: Dismissed! *The two girls disappear, heading towards the Wave Country.* Anbu 1: We mustn’t be that far behind. What if they come after us? Ao: Mei… Mizukage-sama will never allow that to happen. *Scene switches to Kirigakure. The village is still flooded, but bodies are seen moving on the rooftops of villages. The panel focuses on top of the Mizukage office, showing Kabuto, Ryu, and Hachimon.* Kabuto: To think, this is what he would do… Hachimon: I can’t say that I am surprised. Ryu: Why did you not confront your uncle, milord? Kabuto: Because there was no need to. You have much to learn, my lieutenant. Hachimon: Plus, Suijin is not my quarrel. My cousins must die, then him *scene shows Amatsu having his way with Izanami in his throne room*, and then my father. Then I will be able to ascend and grant you all what you deserve. Kabuto: And are you sure she is in compliance with this? Hachimon: If she is not, she will meet her end. Kabuto: She knows about him. Hachimon: And I know about you. *Kabuto has a shocked face.* Hachimon: When I get what I want, I will help those who have helped me. *Hachimon disappears.* Ryu: How does he know? Kabuto: He is a god after all. I just never figured him to have any brains. Seems like we’ll have to be more discreet from here on out. Ryu: Do you trust either one? Kabuto: Once we fully understand how Rikudo was able to defeat the juubi, we won’t need to worry about either one. Ryu: And what of Lady Benten’s plan? Kabuto: She’s already taking care of it. *Scene switches to a tavern in Konoha. Team 10 and Team Gai are at a table drinking. Kiba walks in with Shino.* Shikamaru: AYYYYY, there’s more people to drink with us. Kiba: How long has he been here? Choji: We’ve been here for an hour. Shikamaru just doesn’t hold his sake that well. Shikamaru: So what?! I pay my tab. I want more sake! *Rock Lee knocks back a cold one.* Lee: You know… ever since Naruto knocked Hinata up, I haven’t seen either one of them. Tenten elbowing Lee: Use better language. *Neji toys with his shot of sake and then downs it.* Neji: Naruto hasn’t been seen in the village for three days now. Shino: So… Neji: He should be here to protect her in case something was to happen. Kiba: You’re worried about Hinata? Dude… we’re talking about Hinata here. The only woman to stop all of us here (referring to the guys) in a matter of seconds. Not to mention, she’s supposedly a seal guru now. Relax a little. Go get some pie. *Kiba notices a woman walk into the tavern with long red hair, wearing a purple kimono.* Kiba: Like me. Yo…. pretty mama! *Kiba walks off to the woman. The woman greets Kiba. Kiba begins to flirt heavily with her, and for once, the woman is flirting back. The two continue flirting so much; they leave, groping each other. Scene shows Choji, Shino, Neji, Lee, and Shikamaru all shit-faced.* Choji: You’ve got to be shitting me, maaaaannnnn! Shikamaru: There is no way that just happened. Shino: Tis a sign of the times. Lee: Good for him *Lee turns to Tenten and goes to kiss her, but Tenten pushes him away.* Tenten: Not when you have beer breath. Sober up and brush your teeth first. Lee: But baby… I’m the drunken master. Tenten blushing: Not now Lee. Ino staring at Tenten: What does he mean the drunken master? Lee: I’m not just a fighter… I’m a damn good lover too! *The rest of the group busts out laughing as Neji stares off into space. Scene switches showing Kiba with the woman back at his place, as the two enjoy each other’s company in his bedroom. Scene switches to a forested area. A shadowy figure is seen approaching the area. The figure sits against a tree. Another figure appears next to the tree.* Sitting figure: Wow!!! I’m starting to get the hang of this. Standing figure: Aye, you are. Sitting: So what’s next Raijin? Raijin: The final step to becoming the son of thunder. Bringing forth lightning and thunder from yourself, and not nature. But that will wait. I’m sure your wife misses you Sasuke. Sasuke: Yeah, you’re right. I miss her too. Any idea where Naruto and Fujin are? Raijin: Naruto is the son of wind. Sasuke: Yeah. Raijin: They’ve already entered his second phase of training. Sasuke: Yeah… how do you know that? Raijin: Because Naruto is not the first son of wind. And he will not be the last. Neither will you be the last son of thunder. Sasuke: Oh… Raijin: You’re first phase was learning to channel and control the flow of electricity within yourself to create bolts of lightning. Naruto’s first phase is easier than your’s, calling on the wind. His is more difficult, because of the vastness of his power, the power of the wind. His learning of the control of the wind is the second phase. And there’s only one way to do that. Sasuke: How so? Raijin: The wind is everywhere. Even you can create wind, just nowhere near the level that Naruto and Fujin can. But the fastest way to learn how to control that power is… well… it’s to become like the wind… like the air. Free and willing to go around certain obstacles, but smashing through and slicing others. Sasuke: I see… So because Naruto has probably became like the wind… air, he can’t be sensed. Raijin: Aye… and it doesn’t hurt him that he has already mastered senjutsu as well. Sasuke: Is there any way I could master senjutsu? Raijin: No. You do not have the right body to be a senjutsu master. But… you can be a sage. Sasuke: So there’s a difference between a sage and a senjutsu master? Raijin: Technically, yes. The toads’ way of teaching senjutsu, there is not. But you’re enemy uses a different method. Sasuke: What do you mean my enemy? I thought our enemy was the other gods. Raijin: You and Naruto, yes. But for your comrades and wives, no. The other gods have went in league with certain humans and a handful of sages. Sasuke: But I thought Naruto was the only Sage. Raijin: That is not the truth. There are three sages, but technically, only two are warriors. The toads, and the snakes. *Sasuke is shocked.* Raijin: The toads have mastered senjutsu as was meant by Lady Miyashi. The snakes on the other hand, have developed two types of senjutsu. There is the great white snake sage *panel shows Ryu in his 8 snake form*, and there is the great dragon sage *panel shows Kabuto in his cloak*. Sasuke: So Orochimaru… Raijin: Orochimaru couldn’t even master senjutsu as the white snake level. Kabuto however…. Sasuke: Mastered it. And he’s aligned with the other gods?! The other shinobi countries must know of this, especially Iwagakure and Kirigakure. Raijin: Those villages are of no concern to you, trust me. Sasuke: But…. Raijin: You’re responsibility is Izanagi’s two sons and daughter. They want to annihilate both you and Naruto, but you especially. Sasuke: Why? Raijin: Because… your powers were meant for them. The three main jutsus of the Mangekyou Sharingan: Amerterasu, Tsukuyomi, and Susanoo, were meant for them. Izanagi bestowed that power into Rikudo Sennin. After he did that, they promised vengeance on him, but have never had the power or opportunity to do so. Sasuke: And what happens when I kill them? Raijin: If you kill them, they become Amatsu’s servants. Sasuke: What… Raijin: You cannot kill him. The only weapon that can kill him, he wields. But even with that, if he has regained his power, even that may not be enough. Sasuke: Are you saying we can’t win? Raijin: No. You can win. Just not the way you are thinking about it. Come, we have conversed enough for now. I wish to see how my brother is doing. *Sasuke and Raijin vanish. Scene switches to Konoha. Sasuke is seen entering his home. Sakura is lying on a couch in an over-sized shirt passed out. Sasuke walks to her, picks her up in his arms, carrying her to their bed. Scene switches to a beach. Karin and Rina are seen running towards the ocean.* Rina: Why are you in such a hurry to get to Konoha? Karin: Because… I need to find someone, and the only person who can find him is in Konoha. Rina: Who are you needing to find? Karin: Someone important. Rina: And who is this person that only he or she can find who you are looking for? Karin: Uzumaki Naruto. Rina: You know the Great Toad Sage? Karin: Aye. Rina: Couldn’t he bring everyone to Konoha right away as well? Karin: Aye. If anyone can do it, it would be him. *Karin and Rina are running on the ocean now.* Rina: Then wait up a moment. |
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*Both women stop. Rina slams the water, summonging a large dolphin. Rina grabs on to the dorsal fin and grabs onto Karin. The dolphin swims in the direction towards Konoha.*
Karin yelling: Why didn’t you do this earlier? Rina yelling back: Because I didn’t know you were looking for Naruto. *Scene switches back to the Kiri camp. The sun is beginning to rise on the horizon. Ao has already awakened the camp and readied everyone for the day’s journey.* Ao: Ok, today we need to get to the Osiwa beach. Then we’ll be a day’s journey from the Wave country as soon as we get a boat. Fodder: Why Osiwa beach? Do you realize how far that is? Ao: Aye. And if you want to stay alive, you’ll keep up with the pace. *The camp beings to move out, with about a third of the Anbu forces in the lead with Ao. The remaining Anbu bring up the rear, looking back to make sure they are not followed. Scene switches to Konoha. Sasuke and Sakura are seen strolling through Konoha. The two meet Hinata at a breakfast stand.* Sasuke: Heard from Naruto? Hinata: No. Sakura: Where is he? If I were you, I’d be so pissed right now. Hinata: I’m not mad. He’ll return when he is ready. Sakura: But you’ve got twins on the way. Hinata: It’s ok. Sasuke: Besides, if it wasn’t important, he would be here. Cut him some slack. Sakura: If you were to do that, I’d beat the shit out of you. Sasuke: And then we wouldn’t have any more kids. Sakura: You want kids?! Sasuke: I never said that. Sakura: Fine. *Hinata giggles.* Sasuke: It’s not that I don’t want kids… just not right now. Hinata: It’s better for the two of you to wait a little while. Sakura pouting: O…k… *Scene switches to Suna inside a conference room. All of the Suna elders, along with Gaara, Kankuro, and Temari are there.* Elder A: Now that we have Shukaku back, we’ve increased our military power. Gaara: Let me make this clear. Not you or anyone else in here will use him as a tool for war. He is my partner, and mine alone for now. Now…. what news do you bring sister? Temari: It is believed by Konoha that the Ryun will not remain docile. While they have been doing other missions, Aburame Shino and Inuzuka Kiba have been gathering intel on the Ryun and the where-a-bouts of Yamato. Before the bijuu were discovered again, they had deployed a team of their top Anbu to Iwa to follow a lead on Yamato. Kankuro: So why is this wood user so important? Gaara: You did not fight Uchiha Madara. He used the DNA of Senju Hashirama, and his power increased. None of us Kage stood a chance against him. Now… our enemies are gods it seems. Baku: Why is it that we always end up with messes tied to Konoha? Gaara: This mess is not just Konoha’s, but everyones. Oonoki-sama told me about the stories he was told as a child of the gods. It appears they are true. And if they are, I’m not even sure any shinobi stands a chance. But…. we will rise and make our stand. After all, this time we have the bijuu with us. Temari: There is one more thing… *Everyone turns to Temari.* Temari: In six months, Kiri is scheduled to hold the chuunin exams. I think a motion should be made for extra security. Kankuro: It would make sense. If the Ryun are up to no good, that would be a prime target, what with all the kages gathered. Gaara: As our chuunin liaison, when are you scheduled to travel to Kiri? Temari: We have our first conference in a week. Gaara: Kankuro, travel with her until you get to Konoha. Give this to Nara Shikamaru. *Gaara hands Kankuro an envelope. Scene switches to Osiwa Beach at night fall. Panel zooms in on Ao looking around.* Ao: Dammit. We sure could use Rina and her summonings right about now. Fodder: How will we cross the ocean to the Wave Country? Wouldn’t it be smarter to travel on foot through the Fire Country? Ao: No. If they set a trap for us, this route is the least likeliest to face any resistance. That’s why the Mizukage chose this route. *An Anbu lands near Ao, whispering in his ear. Ao’s eyes go wide. Both flicker out of the scene. Scene switches to a beach on the other side of the island. A team of 4 Anbu stand, looking across the sea on a group of people on the beach opposite of them.* Anbu: We’re not sure if they are going to attack or not. *Ao flips up his patch and stares at the group. He begins to smile.* Ao: No need to worry. That’s our group. Anbu: But it’s a bunch of old people. Ao: Well, that’s Mei’s chakra signature, along with Choujourrou’s. *Scene switches to everyone on the opposite beach with the group. Ao and the Anbu approach the elderly people.* Ao: Please do not hide yourself from us. Old man: What do you speak of? Ao angered: I can read the chakra signature Terumi Mei, the Mizukage! Old man: Is that so? Ao: Release them! Old man: Relax. After all, they are not even there. *Ao and the Anbu look again, and the old man is the only one there. Mei and Choujourrou’s chakra signatures are gone.* Old man: Do not fret. They are ok. There wouldn’t happened to have been a long, red-haired woman wearing glasses with you? Ao: There was. Old man: Is she ok? Ao: What difference is it to you? Old man: I may look like I can’t do much… *Suddenly the Anbu have the old man in a water prison bubble. The old man just crosses his arms in the bubble of water. The group heads out back to rejoin the other evacuees. Scene switches back to Osiwa beach. Ao has all of the Anbu in one tent as the sun sets.* Ao: Release his head so he can talk now. Anbu: I’m surprised he isn’t dead. He’s been in there for over an hour. *The old man’s head now appears out of the bubble.* Ao: Who are you? And what have you done with the Mizukage? Old man: They are fine. They are where no one can harm them. Now please, release an old man, so that I might rest in peace. Ao: Bring the villages in, one at a time. We’ll see if any recognize you, and gather our intel from there. *Slowly, every villager is shown the old man in the tent, with everyone leaving stating they have never seen the geezer. Finally an elderly woman enters the tent and screams as soon as she sees the old man.* Old Lady: What are you doing here? Ao: You know this man? Old Lady: Yes!!!! You shouldn’t be here. That means…. *The old lady begins to weep. Ao goes to comfort the lady.* Ao scoffs: What have you done to this woman? *Suijin changes to his normal human form, and walks out of the water prison bubble. He pushes Ao aside and holds the old lady.* Suijin: I am sorry child. A true evil has arisen. And for the time being, Kiri must be sacrificed. But I promise to see it rebuilt. *Everyone stands in astonishment looking at Suijin.* Ao: Who is this? *looks for the old man* And where is that geezer? *Ao begins to add the two together, and pulls out his kunai, entering a battle stance. The Anbu follow suit.* Ao: Just who are you? Suijin: You would be wise to lower your weapon. I am the god of water after all. *Scene switches to the moon high in the sky. Ao and Suijin are around a campfire.* Ao: I’m sorry. I just… Suijin: Do not worry. I fully understand. Ao: So why didn’t you… you know… just lambast the Ryun army? Suijin: We elder gods have taken an oath. An oath to never try and kill another god or lesser being. In return, we have decided to entrust some our powers to other entities. We have called them the sons and daughters of earth, thunder, water, and wind. Ao: What about fire? Suijin: The fire god did not take that stance. He now rules the underworld. My father saw to that. Ao: So if Uzumaki Naruto is to be the son of wind, and Uchiha Sasuke the son of thunder, what about water and earth? Suijin: The daughter of water has been chosen already. As for the earth… since Jurojin has retired with father, and the original son of earth has passed, I’m not sure if we will ever see one again. Ao: And who is the daughter of water? Suijin: The unborn child of Uzumaki Naruto. Ao: What is it with this guy? Suijin: What do you mean? Ao: Well, he’s the toad sage, the kyuubi jinchuuriki, the son of wind…. and now the father of the daughter of water. That’s a lot. Suijin: Are you jealous? Ao: No… I’d say relieved that I’m not all those things. Suijin: That is wise. For every bit of power he has, he has made great sacrifices. Ao: One more question. *Suijin nods.* Ao: Do you think this is going to happen to Iwa? Suijin: No. The Ryun have become quite the political machine. And now they have military power. I’m not Hachimon, but I would guess that Kiri will now be their base of military operations. It would be easier to hit Konoha from the ocean than by land. Same goes for Kumo. Meanwhile, Iwa will probably be their recruiting ground. There is still some resentment towards the Allied Nations from the war. Ao: And that’s smart too. Put so much distance between the two… kinda like the right hand doesn’t know what the left hand is doing thing. Suijin: Exactly. Ao: So… since you won’t fight the other gods and the Ryun… Suijin: I never said I wouldn’t fight them. I will defend you humans against them. I will not take their life however. Now rest. Same goes for you. *nodding to several Anbu behind a bush* I need you all to rest. You’ll wake up in the Fire country. *Scene switches to a tavern in Konoha. Kiba and Might Gai are seen drinking.* Kiba: Yeah, this broad was smoking hot. And man… the things she did… and her long, red hair. I couldn’t get enough of her man. Gai: Be careful kiddo. You don’t want to knock her up do you? Kiba: Man the way she was… I never thought of that. Gai: Did you even get her name? Kiba: Nope. *The woman enters the tavern, and upon seeing Kiba, heads into his direction. Kiba is still talking to Gai not noticing her. She walks up behind him and gropes him. Kiba almost loses his cool at her touch.* Kiba: Heyyy!!!!!!!! Oh, it’s you. |
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*The two enter a sloppy kiss.*
Kiba: Where ya been babe? Woman: Resting. Kiba: For what? Woman: Round 2. *She cocks her eyebrow and Kiba gulps.* Kiba: Well, duty calls. *Gai shakes his head. Scene switches to Hinata asleep in bed. The moon can be seen through her window. A shadow is seen at her window. The window is slowly opened. Suddenly a crack of thunder is heard and window drops, crashing down and waking Hinata. She’s panting.* Izanagi: Do not worry. I am here to protect you. So is Raijin. Hinata: What was that? Izanagi: Nothing to concern yourself with child. The god of lightning and thunder scared him away. Hinata: I want Naruto! Izanagi: We have no idea where he is. Hinata: What do you mean? Izanagi: That is a good thing. It means he is mastering the wind. I promised not only Naruto, but Suijin that I would watch after you and your children. Raijin promised he would help when he could. *Scene switches atop the Hokage mountain. Two figures are seen, one being Raijin. Raijin is seen in his original form, orgish wearing lightning plated armor. He is holding a spear made of lightning.* Raijin: We knew someone would come after her, we just didn’t expect it to be you, Susanoo. Susanoo: Long time, no see Uncle. And who’s to say I was after that woman. Maybe I had come for father. I know after all, he doesn’t have it anymore. Raijin: You know once we enter battle, your other uncles will show up. You might be able to defeat me, but you can’t defeat all three of us. Susanoo: I wouldn’t dream of it, not yet that is. I can’t wait to kill your son of thunder before your very eyes though. But in due time. Just let father know, we know. Raijin: Answer me this then…. who returned the bijuu? Susanoo: The god of lightning and thunder doesn’t know. It’s all part of the game. *Sasuke appears next to Raijin.* Sasuke: What game? *Susanoo laughes.* Susanoo: What human would understand a god? Sasuke: So you are the god Susanoo, the god of storms. Raijin: Be careful Sasuke, he’s too much for you. Sasuke: Answer me this… why not me? I mean you said you wanted to kill me before Raijin’s eyes. Susanoo: Don’t tempt me boy! Deliver the message Uncle. And be prepared. Your precious humans’ days are numbered. *Susanoo disappears leaving Raijin and Sasuke on the Hokage mountain.* Sasuke: So that’s what you really look like? Raijin: Shut up. And next time, don’t butt in. Sasuke: Why? Raijin: You and I alone are no match for him. I’m an elemental god, and in being one, I have the most powerful form of my element. But he… he’s not an elemental god. To some degree he has the power of the wind. That’s why we need Fujin and Naruto. Otherwise, we’re dead. Sasuke: Are we that weak? Surely not. Raijin: No. But he is the worst possible opponent for us. *Scene switches to the Tsuchikage’s office just as the sun is hitting the roof. Akatsuchi busts through the door.* Akatsuchi: We need to leave, pronto. Kitsuchi: Why? Akatsuchi: Just trust me. *Thunder cracks throughout the sky. Susanoo is seen walking on a road towards Iwagakure. Several villagers are seen running through the streets. The scene switches to Kiba’s apartment. The woman is seen getting up out of bed and putting on her clothes. She bends over and kisses Kiba on the cheek, who is still passed out.* Woman: I’ll have to remember you. *Kiba begins to stir.* Kiba: Leaving already? Don’t want to start round 3? Woman: I would love to, but I have to be somewhere. I’ll be back tonight. Kiba: I never got your name. Woman: My name… why do you want to know it? Kiba: Honestly, when I dream of you, I want to know who it is I’m dreaming about. Woman: Very well. It’s Benten. End. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
And it's up guys. Sorry that it took so long but i had to reasearch a bit. You will have a little surprise. New characters have been introduced. I hope that you will like it. And of course...as usually, more twists.
Naruto: Heaven, Hell and Earth. The scene shows Naruto's office. He is once again Hokage, and once again ready to fight his way through another war. Sasuke enters the room. Sasuke: We need to talk. Fast. Naruto: What happend? Sasuke: You know that the Uchiha clan has spies in the Hyuuga clan, right? Naruto: I do. And i told you that i highly disagree with it. Sasuke: Well, it seems that it comed in handy. One of our spies attended a meeting of the Hyuuga's last night. And he heard there something very interesting.* Naruto: I'm sure that Hinata would have told me if there was such a thing. Sasuke: That's the catch. Hinata wasn't at the meeting. They probably knew that she would tell you. Anyway...they belive that Raiden will leave...if they kill us. Both of us. Naruto slowly rises up. Naruto: Kill us? Are they out of their mind? They want to cause a civil war, or what? Sasuke: That's exactly their plan.* Naruto: Do the Uchihas know about this? Sasuke: They do. And they made an oath to protect you and me with their lives. Naruto: Dammit! At a time like this, all that we needed was a civil war!* Sasuke: We must stop this, otherwise the Hyuuga and the Uchihas will slaughter eachother. Naruto sighs: Well...i guess that we will have to step in and end this fight. Sasuke: And what do you mean by ending this fight? Naruto: I will stop the Hyuugas personally, without killing them. I don't want them to die, or the Uchiha clan. Suddenly a voice is heard. Unknown: I think that you got something else to do, Naruto. Naruto turns around only to spot a man dressed in blue with dark and red stripes on his shirt and pants. Naruto shocked: Q..Quintrix?!? Sasuke looks at Quintrix and he gets a strange look on his face.* Quintrix notices it. Quintrix: That's right Sasuke. I'm not here to help you. Raiden has something over me. I must follow his orders. I'm truly sorry guys... Naruto: What happend? Quintrix: He got me. Yama betrayed us. And they've made me come after you. I'm sorry Naruto, but i had to break. Otherwise they would have found out something that nobody alive knows. Something that will change the tide of this war. Sasuke: What?!? Quintrix: It's a location...where someone is sealed. I belive that Vishnu told you a story, about us, being The Creator's creations that went to the Earth in order to protect it. But...that doesn't mean that there aren't others out there. Besides us, there exists a place were heavenly creatures reside. Creatures that we used to be once. Only Vishnu kept that state of a superior being. Naruto: What kind of creatures? Quintrix: A human being has two sides: it's angelic part, and it's demonic side. Together they form your personality. The Creator separated himself from the Demonic part. Currently Raiden it's the most powerful man that you have ever met. And he only showed a fraction of his real power. So trust me guys...you're nowhere near his level at this moment. Naruto:But what about the Creator? Quintrix: The Creator wanders around on the Earth. That's all that we know.* Sasuke makes slowly two steps towards Quintrix. Quintrix: What are you doing? Sasuke: Well...you said that you are not here to help us...so..why are you here Quintrix? Quintrix: To recover one of the three treasures. I'm sorry... Suddenly he dashes towards Sasuke and draws a long sword. Sasuke parries the attack with his own sword and breaks Quintrix's. The former god smiles and jumps out of the office. Naruto shouts: Stay here Sasuke! I will go after him!* Naruto quickly jumps after Quintrix. He spots the god running at a very high speed, away from him. Instantly Naruto gets covered in Kurama's chakra and dashes towards Quintrix. Suddenly Quintrix stops, and as Naruto is closing in, the former god turns around and hits Naruto in the stomach. Quintrix: Shifting technique! A vortex appears around them and envelops them. A moment later, both Naruto and Quintrix are gone! The panel shows Sasuke a few days later. He is looking at the horizont as an Uchiha lands behind him. Random Uchiha: Sasuke-sama...it will start tomorrow night! Sasuke: It's too early. But they probably want to make use of Naruto's absence and get rid of me. Random Uchiha: That's what i thought too. Sasuke: Good. Go and prepare everything.* Random Uchiha: Aye, Sasuke-sama! The Uchiha vanishes and leaves Sasuke alone. Sasuke to himself: So it's finally starting... Itachi appears. Itachi: What's happening Sasuke? Where is Naruto? Sasuke: He is hunting Quintrix as far as i know...what's going on? Itachi: The Hyuugas will attack. With Naruto gone, you're in charge of Konoha. Sasuke: Dammit...he picked the best moment to vanish. Itachi: Aren't you worried about him? Sasuke: Neah...he is Naruto. He can take anything. The panel shows his actual concerned face, that he is trying to hide from Itachi's sight. Sasuke: Well then...go! Prepare everything
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The scene shows Sasuke standing in the Hokage office, at the window,alone. It's night. Slowly the door behind him opens. A man gets inside. Sasuke doesn't turn around.
Neji: Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke: Neji Hyuuga. I see that you decided to hunt me personally? Neji: That's right. The rule of the Uchihas will end tonight. Sasuke: Rule? We don't rule anything. We are loyal to Konoha. Unlike you, it seems. Neji: We? Are not loyal? Watch your words Sasuke! That's exactly why we are doing this! To prove our loyalty! Sasuke turns around and throws at Neji a menacing glare. Sasuke: You call this loyalty? Your plan it's to start a civil war, in which the causalties won't be only from our side or your side!* Neji: Collateral damage... Sasuke: Hmpf...you arrogant prick! I fought gods Neji, Gods! That weren't so arrogant as you are.* Neji makes angered a step forward: Fuck you Uchiha! You will die tonight and you're trying to talk this out!You're just a coward! The panel shows Hokage's office from outside. A wall explodes, and the scene shows Neji getting throwed out by something.* Sasuke lands in front of him. Neji quickly gets up and faces the young Uchiha. Neji starts laughing: This is...just only starting Uchiha!!! Sasuke looks around and sees multiple pillars of fire erupting all over Konoha.* The scene it's switched. It shows Naruto in front of a giant golden gate. He spots an old man sitting at the entrance. He goes towards him. Naruto: Who are you? Unknown man: My God boy! Where did you came from? Naruto: I don't know! I was chasing after Qu... Suddenly Quintrix appears behind him, and lays a hand on Naruto's shoulder. Quintrix: He is with me, Peter. The unknown man that goes by the name Peter makes a few steps back. Peter: Quintrix!!! It's...it's that you?!? Quintrix: Exactly. Now...let me pass! Peter: But why are you here? I thought that you were on Earth! Quintrix: The things have changed...Raiden is making his final move? Peter confused: Raiden? Quintrix: The Morningstar you senile old man! Peter shocked: Morningstar? He is alive?!? Quintrix: He is alive. And he wants to come here. Now get out of my way! And summon everyone!Gabriel, Raphael... Even Michael! They will know what we have to do! The scene shows Sasuke looking at the flames that surround Konoha. Sasuke thinking: That's Dad's jutsu! Neji: The Uchihas will die tonight Sasuke... Sasuke grins and shouts: You keep saying that shit! You really think that you can win? You really think that Raiden will leave you alone if you kill me and Naruto? Neji instantly takes a battle stance and faces Sasuke. Neji: I will do whatever it takes to win!* Sasuke smiles: Get real, boy... Instantly Sasuke appears above Neji and delivers a kick. The Hyuuga blocks it and starts rotating, thus preparing his Kaiten. But Sasuke catches Neji's right arm and slashes it down. Neji makes a few steps back bleeding heavily. Sasuke: That was your right arm. Even with your Byakugan, you don't stand a chance against me. Not without missing your right arm. Neji smiles. Neji: I think..that you lost out of sight...what the Byakugan can really do...Sasuke. Sasuke looks confused at Neji. Neji instantly touches the place where his riht hand used to be, takes a bit of blood and puts it into his mouth. In a second, he starts leaking massive chakra waves. Neji: Hyuuga secret arts! Byakugan release range! Sasuke remains still as nothing happens. Sasuke: That's all you got? It's gonna take far more than this to kill me! He charges towards Neji and starts punching but the Hyuuga dodges all the punches. Neji is now several meters away from Sasuke. Neji points one of his fingers at Sasuke and a thin ray of chakra penetrates the young Uchiha's shoulder. Sasuke: What..what was that?!? Neji smiles: I augumented the range of my gentle fist. I can kill you without touching you. Sasuke: You still forgot something Neji...you can kill me in my base form. By...you cannot pass my Susano'o...SPIRALLING ETERNAL MANGEKYOU SHARINGAN! Instantly Sasuke gets enveloped in his Susano'o full form. But, Neji keeps on smiling. Neji: You see, Sasuke...actually...i can! Gentle fist pressure point! He sents another thin ray that goes straight through Sasuke's Susano'o and barely misses his head. Sasuke: What the...!?! Neji: You thought that only the Uchihas had a powerful doujutsu? Our Byakugan it's much more powerful than ypur Sharingan. It's the eye that gave birth to the Rinnegan!* Sasuke: How would that be possible? Neji: Simple. You take a regular Byakugan, infuse it with Juubi's evil chakra and you obtain a Sharingan. And...if you transplate another Byakugan... Sasuke: You get a Rinnegan. Neji: Exactly. That's why you cannot defend against me. You will die, Sasuke. Neji makes a spin and starts throwing several rays at Sasuke. The Uchiha manages to dodge them and dashes towards Neji. Sasuke takes out his sword and tries to slash the Hyuuga but he misses. Instantly Neji appears behind him preparing another strike, but Sasuke spins, catches Neji's hand twists it around and kicks Neji's legs throwing him on the ground. When the boy hits the groung Sasuke activates one of his Susano'o's arm and tries to get a hold on Neji. But the boy manages to release himself in time and jumps away. Neji lands on the ground and laughs. Neji: That's the best that the Uchiha prodigy can do? Sasuke thinking: I'm in the middle of Konoha...i cannot go all out..li have to use less powerful jutsus in order to kill him. Neji: It's time to end it...Sasuke... Sasuke as he gathers his chakra: Not so fast! Palm Kirin! He sends a Kirin straight from his palm, that hits Neji directoy, Sasuke: It doesn't have so much power as a normal Kirin bu it should be enough. The Kirin hits Neji at full force sending him a few meters away, but he quickly regains his posture.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Sasuke: Hmpf...you're a tough bastard.
Neji with minor burns on him: You don't get it, Sasuke? My power, comes from the gods! Sasuke: To hell with that, i killed some of those gods of yours. Neji smiles: Not these ones Sasuke. Not these ones! Neji lashes out and sends another array of beams towards Sasuke. Instantly the Uchiha dodges all, but one beam hits him in the right leg. He falls on the ground. Neji goes slowly towards him. Neji: You are going to die...Uchiha Sasuke. Suddenly a woman lands near Neji and delivers a heavy punch. The Hyuuga gets throwed into several buildings. Sakura goes fast near Sasuke and starts healing him. Sakura: Sasuke! What's going on? Sasuke: The Hyuugas...are preparing a civil war. Sakura: A civil war?!? Sasuke: Yeah...they are planning on killing me and Naruto. Sakura: But why?!? Neji's voice is heard. He is right behind Sakura. Neji: Because it will release us from the evil. He lands a powerful palm hit on Sakura that knocks her out. Instantly he gets pushed back. By chakra. Dark chakra. Intense and dark chakra. The panel shows Sasuke standing on his two feet, and slowly getting enveloped in his dark chakra armor. Sasuke with a menacing voice: Screw Konoha...i am going to kill you...right now... Neji smiles: That's right...succumb into the darkness...you will just make it easier for me... Sasuke is now enveloped in his full dark chakra armor. Only his Spiralling EMS eyes are seen and his hair. He is holding a dark energy made sword. He prepares to make a slash, but instantly a man appears next to him in a yellow flash and catches his hand. Minato: Stop this Sasuke! You will kill half of the people out there if you release such a jutsu! Sasuke: I will kill him! Neji: Do it! Do it Sasuke! Sasuke looks at him and he suddenly releases the dark chakra, reverting to his regular state. Sasuke: No. To hell with this. I'm not going to kill innocent people just to defeat you.* Neji smiles. Neji: Too bad then... He swings his hand and Minato gets throwed away, just like Neji used a Shinra Tensei. Neji makes instantly a handsign. Neji: Byakugan release! Shattering eye! He releases a huge burst of chakra and slowly his Byakugan starts changing. Instead of being the white regular eye, the eye wents completly black. Sasuke: What the..!?! Neji: The Shi Byakugan( Death Byakugan). Did you thought that you, the Uchihas, were the only ones able to achieve another stage of their doujutsu? Well Sasuke...YOU WERE WRONG!!! Instantly Neji appears above Sasuke and tries to strike him. Minato blocks the attack and Sasuke jumps a few steps back. Minato tries a side kick but Neji blocks it easily and throws Minato away. Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Amaterasu! He launches *black flames towards Neji, but the flames vanishes as soon as they are *close to the Hyuuga. Sasuke: What.. Neji instantly appears in front of Sasuke and thrusts the Uchiha's chest with his right hand. Neji: You...are dead...Sasuke... Sasuke coughs blood. His lungs were perforated by Neji's hand. Slowly he starts fading. Neji impales him again, this time below his ribs. Neji: Uchiha Sasuke. No man ever survived this eye. Only the founder of our clan had this eye, and now me. It's more powerful than the Sharingan, the Mangekyou and the Eternal Mangekyou. It's not more powerful than your special Sharingan, but your care for Konoha didn't let you go all out. That was a mistake. And you will die now. Sasuke's eyes slowly revert to the basic Sharingan. Just when he is about to fall on the ground he manages to make a handsign. Neji: It's useless...you're dead Sasuke. Sasuke's body falls on the ground dead. Neji turns around to walk away, only to face an unharmed Sasuke in front of him. The Uchiha swings his sword and impales Neji right in the heart. The Hyuuga prodigy falls down on his knees. Sasuke takes the sword out, makes another swing and decapitates Neji. Sasuke looks at the dead body of Hyuuga Neji. One of his former comrades...His left Sharingan eye slowly starts closing...forever.* Minato recovers and lands near Sasuke. Minato: How did you survived? I was certain that he killed you! Sasuke: A technique forbbiden in our clan...Izanagi... Minato: And your eye? Sasuke: The user of the Izanagi will lose the light in his eye. But don't worry. I won't be blind! Minato looks at the flames. Minato: Wat's with those flames? Sasuke: Don't worry. It's my dad. We will go help him..but first.. Sasuke makes a couple of handsigns. Sasuke: Damonic ways! Hellfire release! Restoring process! From the ground a flame emerges and hits Sasuke in his left eye. When the flame vanishes the panel shows him slowly opening his eye. He has both of his eyes again. Minato: How did...!?! Sasuke: Well...i used... He suddenly stops and gets a shocked expression on his face. In the next moment he completly vanishes from sight in a burst of black flames. Minato looks confused around, but Sasuke is nowhere to be seen. Minato shouts: Sasukeeee!!!! The scene shows Naruto in a council room. At a table around him are several people. A tall, short haired with black hair, man gets up. Unknown man: Uzumaki Naruto. Host of the Kyuubi. Sage of the Natural Energy. Do you know who am I? And where are you? Naruto: Not exactly, no.* Unknown man: My name is Michael. I am an archangel. These are Gabriel ( a short blonde hair man) and Raphael ( a short long black hair man). They are archangels like me.* Naruto: Wait a moment...archangels? Angels are real? Michael: We are real. And we cannot ignore anymore the threat that Morningstar is. Naruto: Morningstar? Michael: His real name is...Lucifer. Or how you call him..Raiden. Naruto: Raiden? Your brother? But i thought that he was a part of the Creator! Michael: He is. We all are. I represent the justice. Gabriel represents the Sincerity and Raphael the punishment. Lucifer...was the redemption. Naruto: Was? What happend?* Michael: Let me start with the begginnig.At first...it was the Creator. He made us, the Angels. Then...the Earth. Initially we were more archangels. Some of them, you have met. It was me, Lucifer,Gabriel, Raphael, Nirriti, Livontes, Brahma and the most important...Vishnu. Those four chosed to leave the Heaven and guard the Earth. Actually, the Creator ordered them to do so. He wiped out their memories of being former angels and sent them to the Earth. At a certain point he revealed to Vishnu his true nature. He was the only one to know his identity. Anyway...not too long after that, Lucifer rebelled against our Creator. He was banished *to the Earth and stripped of his powers.That's the point when our Father decided to inform Vishnu of his legacy. But he didn't told Vishnu the reality. That Lucifer rebelled. We never thought that he would actually go so far to regain his former status. In your time, Lucifer became more active. He started his plan. We decided to let Vishnu handle the situation. And that's when the disaster happend. Naruto: Disaster? What disaster? Michael: Exactly when you escaped Lucifer in the other dimension..lthe Creator disappeared from the Heavens. We don't know where he is. So...after long debates we decided to interfere. We will help you defeat Lucifer, in order to find our Father. We know that he is somewhere down there on the Earth...but we don't know how to find him! Naruto shocked looks at them, not believing what he just heared. Quintrix: Now..on the urgent matters. I think that i discovered the connection, the link, between the Uchiha boy and Lucifer. Naruto: Connection?!? What connection? Quintrix: Michael...Vishnu was suspecting that Sasuke drains his powers from the darkest corners of Hell. And when he saw a portion of the boy's power he knew for sure. He tried to break the tie between him and Lucifer but he failed. Nobody can break it except for Sasuke or Lucifer. We know for sure that Lucifer won't break the bond. And Sasuke lacks the power to overcome Lucifer's will. I'm afraid that the young Uchiha is held in a tight grip by Lucifer. He knew that Naruto's weak spot is Sasuke. They are like brothers.* Michael: And what purpose does this connection serves to Lucifer? Quintrix: It's simple Michael. Lucifer...cannot break some of thr archangel's rule. He cannot destroy a soul.* Michael: That's right. It would kill him if he does it. So? Quintrix: How do you augument your powers? By devouring souls. He cannot devour a soul, because he will die. But...Sasuke does. With every use of his eye powers that were given by Lucifer...he devours countless souls from the Hell. And with his link with the boy.. Naruto: He takes the souls that Sasuke devours and raises his power levels.Michael: And how does that connection affects our plan to kill Lucifer? He was already powerful to begin with. He quickly recovered his powers after the banishment. It would just take more power. And as you know, the Heaven has at it's dispose unlimited powers. Quintrix: It does affect everything. Vishnu researched everything. We found out that the only way to eliminate Lucifer...it's by severing the connection between him and Sasuke.* Naruto: I thought that you said that nobody can do that. Quintrix: Well...there is only one way to secere something like that. Naruto: What way? Michael with a grave voice: To kill...Uchiha Sasuke!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The panel shows Sasuke. He is inside an endless space. Dark space with rivers of blood, bones on the ground and lava eruptions at the horizont.
Sasuke: What the...?!? He spots powerful red lights far away from him. He decides to walk towards those lights in order to find where he is. In his way, he sees several atrocities. Half humans half animal creatures screaming in pain, people tied to trees and burning, dead people all around him.* Suddenly a hand grabs his ankle. Instantly Sasuke turns around with his sword in his hand, preparing to slash the one who grabbed him but he stops, having shocked eyes. A woman missing a half of her body, drenched in blood, with one red eye and several cuts on her body looks at him terrified. Woman barely whispering: Save...me... Sasuke tries to release himself from the grip, but the mutilated woman holds him with unhuman power. He sighs, makes a swing, and severs her hand. Instantly the woman tries to scream, but she chokes in her own blood. Her head falls on the ground. She died. Unknown voice: Unpleasent scene...aye, Sasuke? The young Uchiha turns around and spots a black dressed Raiden looking at him. Sasuke: You!! What's the meaning of this? What is this place?!? Raiden: My personal creation. It's Hell. Do you like it? Sasuke shocked: Hell...?!? I don't understand?? Raiden: I brought you here, Sasuke...to show you something. I was able to do it when you used that jutsu. To think that you will access the powers of Hell to heal you...it aas all that i needed. Now... Do you see what's happening around you? The pain, the misery, the suffering? The Death lingers in the air kid. Sasuke: You monster! Raiden laughs: Maybe...but you're also a monster Sasuke. Sasuke: What do you mean?!?* Raiden: Where do you think that all that power of yours comes from? *The Demonic ways, the Phantom release, the Darkness release...all the powers that your Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan has...comes from this place! Sasuke makes a step back confused. Sasuke: I don't understand... Raiden: Of course you don't. Your eyes, drain all that power, from the souls that are trapped here. You use that power. And by using it, those souls...well let's say that Hell it's just a child's play compared to what they feel when you use a Demonic release. You tortured them with every attack coming from your Mangekyou more than I ever did...Sasuke...so you see...you're the monster.* Sasuke shouts: You gave me these eyes! Raiden: Exactly. That's where i wanted to take this conversation. Have you ever wondered...what gives me power? What allows me to continue despite the constant attacks from your side? How i survived so many fatal blows? It's your fault, Sasuke...your fault. With every soul that you torture my power grows. So... Sasuke: So with every Spiralling Mangekyou attack... Raiden: You gave me more power! That's the connection that your so called gods failed to see. That's the link between us!* Sasuke falls down to his knees devastated by the news. Sasuke: And...why have you brought here? Raiden smiles: To keep you safe of course. Naruto went with Quintrix...somewhere where i cannot reach them for the time being. Sasuke: Where are they?!? Raiden: Quintrix took Naruto to the higher-ups...in the Heaven. There...they all plan to eliminate you in order to kill me. The only way to defeat me it's by killing you...Sasuke! And so...you will spend the rest of the eternity...here...in Hell! Sasuke slowly gets up and draws his blade. Sasuke: Not so fast Raiden. You won't get me that fast. Not yet. NOT NOW!!! He dashes furiously towards Raiden preparing to strike him down. But suddenly he falls on the ground, as Raiden watches the whole scene smiling. Sasuke looks behind him and sees that multiple hands emerged from the ground and caught his legs. He starts slashing them, but more and more appear. Sasuke shouts desperatly as the hands slowly drags him in the earth. Raiden approaches the boy. Raiden: Don't worry, Sasuke. You won't die. But after i'm done with you...well...let's just say that you won't be alive either. Sasuke tries to grab the ground in front of him with his hands to keep him from being dragged underground. Hands of the inhabitants of Hell are covering him right now above his waist. Slowly they are reaching his face. Raiden laughs and steps on Sasuke's fingers, breaking them. The boy has air for one final scream and he gets dragged into the depths on Hell! The panel it's switched. It shows Konoha's battlefield. Uchiha and Hyuuga bodies are all over the place. The scene it's focused on the battleground between the two clans. Two men are standing and facing eachother. The leaders of the clans. Fugaku: Why are you doing this, Hiashi Hiashi: Isn't it obvious? We, the Hyuugas are tired of your dominion over Konoha. We are a prideful clan who won't bow to the Uchiha dogs. Fugaku: Get real Hiashi. Your Byakugan is powerful indeed...but we currently have two Mangekyou Sharingan users...and Sasuke. They are above your military power. Hiashi: Well, about that...the only threat to us is Sasuke. And right now, Neji is handling him. Fugaku: Neji cannot defeat Sasuke. Nothing can overpower his Sharingan. Hiashi: Actually, Fugaku...the Sharingan it's not the sole eye that can evolve. Neji aquired the next stage of the Byakugan. The Shi Byakugan...it was a legend. But Neji made it true. And he will kill Sasuke. Then...Naruto. Fugaku: You don't really think that you can kill both of them. Be careful, Hiashi...if Sasuke dies...not only that the Uchiha clan will hunt you down until we kill every single one of you...but the Hokage, Uzumaki Naruto...will decimate you! Hiashi: Well...he won't. Because we have something that will restrain him. Fugaku: Nothing can restrain Naruto. Hiashi smiles: Hinata can. My daughter can. Fugaku surprised: You..you are using your own daughter in order to make Naruto fail? Hiashi: I'm not using her. Fugaku: Well, i know Hinata. And i'm sure that she doesn't do it out of her own free will. Hiashi: No she doesn't. If Naruto doesn't surrender...i will kill her. Fugaku: You would kill your own daughter just for this?!? Hiashi: You gotta understand Fugaku. It's for Konoha. If those two boys die...Raiden will spare our lives. Fugaku remains silent...and he slowly starts gathering his energies. His chakra shapes itself into the form of red fiercy flames. Hiashi shocked: What the...!?! Fugaku: You want to know why i have been chosen the clan leader? I'm about to show you bastard! Several giant flames erupts around them, surrounding the pair. Hiashi smiles and activates his Byakugan. Hiashi: Prepare yourself...Uchiha. Fugaku instantly makes a couple of handsigns. Fugaku: Fire release! Emperor's wrath! The giant pillars falls down towards the ground, precisely towards Hiashi. The Hyuuga smiles and makes a single handsigns. Hiashi: Chakra points opened! Rotation!!!! Hiashi rotates at an incredible speed while the flames hits the shield that he made. The two attacks clash and a giant explosion occurs. As the smoke clears out the panel shows a heavily burned Hiashi barely standing. Fugaku, who is unscathed approaches him. Fugaku: You're dead Hiashi.* Hiashi coughs a bit of blood and smiles. Hiashi: I'm not going alone Fugaku...Gentle fist single hit! He instantly points his index finger towards Fugaku and shots a thin chakra ray that penetrares the Uchiha's chest and exits through his back. Fugaku has a shocked expression as he also falls down on his knees near Hiashi. The attack impaled Fugaku directly in the heart. The clan leader of the Uchiha clan falled dead on the ground. Hiashi tries to laugh, but he coughs a lot of blood and falls down also. He died. The two leaders of the most prestigious clans in Konoha killed eachother.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The scene shows Naruto in Heaven.
Naruto: You won't kill Sasuke! Michael: Naruto, if we don't do it...Lucifer will win. Naruto: Will win exactly what? I understand that his goal is to became the Creator but... Quintrix: That's not his only goal. He plans on destroying the Heavens. And if the Heaven falls...the world will be destroyed, Naruto. Michael: Try to understand...it's one life...for the entire world! Naruto makes a few steps back realising something. Naruto: Wait a minute. You're just as powerful as Vishnu was, right? Michael: Exactly.* Naruto: So...if it's only a life...why don't you just kill Sasuke? Why did you brought me here for?* Quintrix: Well...we wanted you to adapt with the situation...i know that it's hard... Naruto: Cut the crap Quintrix. I realised the truth. None of you can do it actually. You need me to kill Sasuke, so you can take care of Lucifer. Michael: That's not.. Naruto: I won't do it. I won't kill Sasuke. Quintrix: Naruto, try to understand please! Naruto: No. I won't kill him. I don't know why you need me to do it, but i won't. Instantly a powerful white light is seen and Naruto gets raised in the air. Michael holds him by his throat. His eyes are leaking white flames and the whole room it's violently shaked. Michael: You will kill Sasuke. You will obey to the will of the Heaven! Naruto smiles: Go ahead, Michael. Kill me.* Michael only looks at him. Naruto: That's right...you can't. You need me to save your ass. You won't have my approval. Never. Michael lets him down and smiles. Michael: I will get it, Naruto. Trust me. Naruto turns his back and walks away: No you won't. Now...if you don't mind i want to return home. Michael: Well...Naruto...you won't leave this place anytime soon. Naruto turns around and starts leaking massive Kyuubi chakras. Naruto: Say again? You think that you can hold me here? Michael: Lash out if you want. You won't even move me brat, not even with your best shot. Naruto: Really? He instantly makes a couple of handsigns and releases his chakra. Michael keeps on smiling. Naruto shouts: Light release! Kurama Sage art Raseeen!!!! He sends his most powerful Rasen from his palm towards Michael. Just when the attack it's about to hit Michael, it vanishes. Naruto shocked: What the...!?! Michael: Every jutsu draws it's power from somewhere. The elemental jutsus from the elements, the Sage Mode from the Natural Energy and so on. Sasuke Uchiha draws his powers from Hell. You, my boy...you have your powers from the Heaven. They are related to us. So...you cannot use anything against me here, Naruto.* Naruto: Dammit... Michael instantly appears behind him and hits him in the back of his head. Naruto falls down on the ground, knocked out of his senses. Michael: We will keep him here until he changes his mind. Uzumaki Naruto...it's our prisoner! The panel shows Quintrix and Michael talking. Michael: You have done well, Quintrix. You have been the best spy that the Heaven ever had. Quintrix: Thank you, Michael. Michael: Now...we need the three treasures.* Quintrix: Lucifer intends to use them. From what i've saw he already started his last plan. Michael: What do you mean? Quintrix: He placed a jutsu on the treasures. When Naruto, Sasuke and Hyuuga Hinata touched them, the treasures absorbed a portion of their chakra. Michael: Hmm...the three great eyes. Quintrix: Exactly. Lucifer wants them. Also...the Death betrayed us Michael: Yama betrayed us? Quintrix: Yeah...he thought that he could subdue me. I tricked them and went after Naruto. Michael: And..what about his powers? Quintrix: His powers are increasing. At an alarming rate. Soon he will be able to defy the Heavens. Michael: Everything it's crumblimg...and with God gone... Quintrix: We will find him Michael... Michael: Hmpf...We need Naruto to consent to kill Sasuke as fast as possible! Quintrix: It won't be that easy, Michael. The kid it's stone hard.* Michael with a menacing look: Well, Quintrix...even the stones can be broken! The panel shows Raiden standing on a cliff and looking at the horizont. Raiden: Everything is ready...master... The wind responds him with a demonic voice. Demonic voice: Good Raiden...well done...Quintrix fell into your trap? Raiden: As we speak. He went to the Heavens, master. Demonic voice: Excelent. And Sasuke? Raiden: He is in our possession.* Demonic voice: And...that Zero boy, Raiden? Raiden: Something it's strange about him, master. He repelled me once with some attack that i have never seen before. Demonic voice: Interesting...and you say that the Creator is missing from the Heavens? Raiden: Exactly. Those are the rumors. Demonic voice: Excelent...excelent...indeed...something it's strange...well Raiden...mark my words...the Heaven will fall. And we will kill every living creature on Earth. Soon...I...will return...and i will seize back everything that they took away from me! The end. Next chapter: Sasuke and Naruto prisoners in Heaven and Hell. Chaos in Konoha. Angel's story.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Damn dude where did you find the energy to do all this .. I bet when you got it allout you were exhausted
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Not really. Once i had in my mind the general plot, i've done it in an hour or two. Anyway, tell me what you think man.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
at first i wasn't sure how you would handle the "other" gods storyline, but you did a good job with the transition.
if God and Lucifer are Raiden and the Creator... who is more powerful than Lucifer/Raiden? and dude, you gotta bring Hinata in at some point with this civil war. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
I would have to agree Hinata needs to have a role in this as the bridge piece
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