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Old 09-28-2009, 10:56 PM   #76
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(The scene starts out at the outskirts of Konoha. The Hokage and Hope are training on a wide open field. Hope has his right hand trusted out, as smoke is emitted from it. The Hokage is already in Sage Mode. They are like 15 ft apart from each other.)

“Now that’s pretty good! You were able to absorb Rasen Shuriken,” smiled The Hokage. “Whew! That stung,” said Hope. (The Hokage smiles at Hope’s composure.) “How about I turn up the heat,” smiled The Hokage. “Wait I’m not ready yet,” screamed the nervous Hope. (The Hokage forms two Rasen Shurikens, one in each hand. The area begins shaking from the chakra emitting from The Hokage. Winds then spiral around the area.)

“Father… Umm, maybe we should take a break. How would mom respond to my death,” said the worried Hope. “You mean our death, if you don’t absorb these, the resulting destruction will kill us both,” smiled The Hokage. “AHHHH, why isn’t he using his head,” yelled Hope. “It’s fine, you’re champ. NOW GET ON YOUR GUARD,” yelled The Hokage. “Dammit, I hardly the time to rest from the first one,” said Hope. (Hope braces himself for massive collision with The Hokage’s jutsu.)

“Senpou: Rasen Shuriken Rengan,” yelled The Hokage. (He tosses both Rasen Shurikens at Hope. Hope extends one hand.) “Here they come. If I use Shinra Tensei, I should be able to destroy one. If I activate the chakra absorption, I should be able to absorb the second. It’ll take a lot out of me though,” said Hope.

(Both the Rasen Shurikens reaches Hope, as they clash The Hokage makes two shadow clones.) “What the hell,” questioned Hope. “Just like I thought,” said The Hokage. (Hope gets rid of both of the Rasen Shuriken, all of a sudden two shadow clones, one on Hope’s east, the other on his west prepares to attack. Both carry regular Rasengans in both of their hands for a total of four Rasengans.)

“Senpou: Rasen Maruchipuru,” yelled The Shadow Clones. (Hope jumps high, straight up into the air to avoid the multiple Rasengan attack. This causes the shadow clones to smash into each other, which creates a huge orb of exploding chakra. Naruto sweats as his Sage Mode wears off.)

“Heh, heh. Not bad Hope,” The Hokage said panting. (Hope lands several feet away from The Hokage.)

“It’s time I use a technique I’ve been practicing on,” said Hope. “Oh,” questioned The Hokage. (The Hokage tosses a weirdly shaped Kunai at Hope, though he avoids it.) “What was that about? Banshou Tennin,” said Hope. (Hope thrusts out his hand while The Hokage smiles.) “Don’t think so,” said The Hokage. “What,” said the confused Hope. (All of a sudden a shadow clone appears behind Hope and then Judo slams Hope into the ground.) “So that Kunai was a transformed Shadow clone,” said Hope before passing out. (The shadow clone picks up Hope and brings him to The Hokage and then it disperses. Naruto then throws Hope on his shoulder.)

“He got quite a bit ways to go before he’s on Hiro’s level. Though, one thing is sure. Fighting him made me remember my battles with Nagato. Heh, the way he absorbed Rasen Shuriken yet without out a wasted effort, Hope used Shinra Tensei without a dely. Hmm, perhaps soon he’ll be even more gifted with the Rinnegan than Nagato was,” thought The Hokage.

(2 days go by, accelerating the progress of the story. Sasuke’s team is in a village in the Bird Country. The village is called The Air village. It is a high in the mountains.)
“Finally to the top,” sighed Ryu. “He better be here Sasuke,” said Shisio. “Let’s move,” said Sasuke. (They walk in the village however; they are immediately surrounded by sentries.)

“WHAT brings you to the villge of the Sa-mosutatto clan,” yelled Sentry 1. “WE have a policy unlike any other shinobi village. Intruders must die,” yelled Sentry 2. “You will not survive,” said Sentry 3. “Welcome to hell on earth,” yelled Sentry 4. “Hey, why isn’t anyone doing anything, I’m not gonna take that,” said Ryu. (He draws out his blade. Shisio places his hand in front of Ryu.) “Of all people; have you lost your nerve too,” asked Ryu.

“You idiot, these are the Sa-mosutatto. If it was one, or even two maybe, but against more than three of them; Kid you must be off your rocker if our small unit poises a threat,” said Shisio. (Yuki chuckles from Ryu’s apparent ignorance of those who can control temperatures around them.) “Then what do we do,” asked Ryu. “They must know about us,” said Sentry 1. “Let Sasuke use his illusion,” said Yuki. (Sasuke activates the Mangekyou Sharingan.) “MY BODY? WHAT DID YOU DO,” yelled sentry 2. “AHHHH,” yelled Sentry 1. (The guards all pass out. ALL of a sudden Sasuke’s team is suddenly surrounded by clan members.)

“Not good for us, unforunately,” said Shisio. (Then a lone man looking like Lu Kane comes crashing in; landing in the middle of the commotion, in order to meet the would be intruders.) “Mikoto Sama,” said troop 1. “Let us, don’t go out in the open, we’ll handle it,” said another one. (They all go in uproar.)

“Silence, all of you, let me handle this. You with the sharingan… Why have you come to my village Uchiha Sasuke,” asked Mikoto. “He knows Sasuke,” questioned Ryu. “Ah duh, he’s a missin nin and is known as a globally wanted criminal,” said Yuki. “I come to you because there are matters that need your attention,” said Sasuke. “You have three seconds before I turn each and every one of your cronies into bacon,” said Mikoto. “I want you to help me take revenge on Konoha. The people who ran your clan into hermits,” said Sasuke.

“Konoha hmm,” mumbled Mikoto. (The scene switches to Outskirts of Konoha. The Two Konoha Teams from the Rock village are arriving home.)
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“Home sweet home; though we enjoyed our stay at the Rock Village, it is truly good to see those Hokage statues,” said Sarutobi. “Funny how it was faster the way back,” said Zig. “Probably because we rested only once,” said Taishi. “I need to take a nap for sure,” said Shitai. “I can’t wait to see my mother, father, and big brother and tell them about the enemies I’ve killed,” yelled Nila. (Everyone is shocked by Nila’s morbid enjoyment to killing people.)

“Heh, heh. Maybe that’s not something you should say with just the flick of a wrist,” sighed Sarutobi. (They arrive at the gates of Konoha. The Scene then switches to Mizugakure, inside the main office, new beginnings are being established.)

“The village of Mizugakure is now ours. This is where we’ll house our main base for now on. Sakuya, how is the genjutsu application to all citizens of the village going,” asked Tetsuo. “Nicely, they are beginning to accept us as leaders. I still have a little ways to go before complete hypnotization of all citizens is established,” said Sakuya. “Good,” said Tetsuo.

“About the Ichibi,” asked Ino Shika Cho. “Done,” yelled Tetsuo. (Tetsuo opens a portal.) “I’ll go locate the host and bring him to you,” said Ino Shika Cho. (Ino Shika Cho walks through the portal.) “Boss, what about the other Bijuu,” asked Blank.”They’re nowhere to be found, it seems someone has already gathered them up. But at least we could secure the final host,” said Tetsuo. “Hey Boss! Half of our amassed army has been secretly escorted into this village’s barracks,” said Tank. “The rest of you without tasks, finish relocating our amassed troops into Mizugakure’s ranks. Once that is done, I will move the hosts here as well, and then we will merge them with the meteor,” said Tetsuo.

“We don’t even have more than half of the Bijuu,” said Oita. “It doesn’t matter. We have the hosts, this means the Bijuu we have, had grew and matured with their powers because hosts were able to tap into it and bring it out. Regular Bijuu are not as powerful as they would be without a host. Even if the others have fallen into our enemies’ hands, we still have the upper hand. We will use the mixture of chakras from the meteor once the bijuu are added in, then we will douse are ourselves in some of the meteor’s rays, extending our chakras beyond repute. We will also proceed unto applying the chakra mixtures into our SNA subordinates and the controlled Mizugakure troops; this will increase our military’s overall strength, far beyond that of any government’s.

Once that happens, Blank will capture Nila, that would draw The Hokage to our location, and all of our combined forces of the SNA will restrain him and, then, we’ll take the Kyuubi and then the other Bijuu in order to complete Bijuu fusing human extension project. My goal is not one of ignorance, like the Mizukage. I just want everyone who hadn’t the chance to have power, get power. The meteor will spread its chakra to all people in this world, giving them power to fight as shinobi and build their chakras in order to attain the attributes of those born naturally gifted to be ninja.

What they choose to do with their power is up to them. But isn’t it fair that civilians have the power to defend themselves from wars and senseless human disputes? Everyone will have power and unification. And if those who begin to dramatically upset the tide; with our higher, superior understanding of chakra and ninja skills, will put them to rest; The Mizukage wanted to start change, we’ll live through it and establish a new age of understanding,” said Tetsuo.

“There’s one problem. What about other shinobies? If they gain these powers they’d have an advantage over those who can’t properly use chakra, or mold chakra for jutsu,” said Blank. “Easy, we’ll end the way of the shinobi. That way the only ones with the power to upset unification will be us and our SNA organization. We, the proud police of the world, will create the world. From this day forward, we are no longer the SNA, Specialized Ninja Association; we are THE UHE, UNIVERSAL HUMAN EVOLUTIONARIES. THE WAY OF THE NINJA AND SHINOBI WILL BE NO MORE. The humans who led to our creation, has led to the development and furthering of human understanding and knowledge of the pure world in order to solve new discoveries foreign to mankind. Now, the rest of you besides Sakuya, facilitate the moving of our amassed troops into Mizugakure discreetly,” said Tetsuo.

(Tetsuo makes a portal; the higher up UHE members without tasks go into the portal to further their insurrection. The Scene soon switches to a remote jungle like area. The Tsuchikage’s words about stepping up to stop the SNA rings loudly in Daisuke’s head.)

“So what will you do,” asked the Black Lion. (Then Daisuke has a flash back to when he spoke of peace to the Tsuchikage.) “It seems I’ve sat idly by in this world for too long,” said Daisuke. “You’re really listening to the words of a typical human,” asked Black Lion. “I’ve been waiting, hoping for peace in this accursed world.

I was wrong. Regardless of us, Sages who have transcended beyond conventional human affairs, if we want peace, we have to make it happen; sitting here and not doing anything,
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is nothing but pathetically giving up and just obliviously denying the inevitable if we lack the courage to stand up to the evil and destruction. To think I needed him of all people to remind me of such common knowledge to us Sages,” said Daisuke. “Where are you going,” asked Black Lion. “To contact the remaining Sages, it is time we bring peace,” said Daisuke.

(The Scene switches to the Forgotten Peak, where the meteor expands to at least 10X the size of the previous one. It sits in mid-air above the clouds, high above the eye sight of humans. It pulses with green, blue, red, and yellow flashes.)

“FINALLY IT IS DONE! FINALLY; THE METEOR IS COMPLETE! Now I’ll seal this beautiful thing up and report to Tetsuo,” said Asura. (The scene then switches to a wide open plain. Reika, Orca, Shark, and Dolphin are rushing for some apparent reason not yet revealed. Reika has a small urn held tightly in her pocket’s grasp.)

“Why are we running? Why don’t I turn around and bite him,” yelled Shark. (Orca shakes his head.) “You fool, go, but you can’t handle him alone. Just wait until we reach the Bird Country, as it is a land that has no politcial ties to any shinobi nation,” yelled Reika. (Some distances behind, a huge tidal wave is drowning everything in its wake; a man in plate mail is surfing on an empty tortoise shell. He is apparently chasing after Reika’s team.)

“MIZUKAGE YOU DUMB BROAD. YOU THOUGHT YOU FUCKED UP BEFORE; NOW YOU’RE REALLY IN TROUBLE! BRING BACK THOSE ASHES NOW! AHHHHHH! OH MY GOD, YOU ARE SO DEAD WHEN I CATCH UP TO YOU. I GOING TO DROWN ALL YOU FOOLS,” Yelled Kyo.

(As Reika rushes ahead, everyone is shocked as a Huge Axe nearly cuts off Reika’s head as she evades it cleanly however, strands of hair fly off into the air. The Axe man backs off and blocks the path.) “OHH, that was close,” said Reika. “Who is that man,” yelled Dolphin. “HE’s huge, gigantic,” said Orca. “Powerful, he looks powerful,” smiled Shark.

“MIZUKAGE………………..COME……………..WITH………………US ,” said Tabito. “We’re in trouble, The Sage in back will get us,” said Orca. “Don’t worry, end this giant’s life quickly, I’ll go on ahead,” said Reika. (All of a sudden three shinobi appear besides Tabito.) “Konoha Trackers that explains why we didn’t see, or sense them until later,” thought Reika.

“Nice work Tabito,” said Kou. “So, this is Mizukage and her Marine Squad,” said Mai. “That man with the scythe,” said Orca. “He fits some description doesn’t he,” asked Dolphin. “I don’t care, as long as he’s strong,” said Shark. (Dosa pulls out his Scythe swings it around his neck and then expertly catches it in his hand. He then cuts the air with a strong swing.)

“That was amazing,” said Kou. (Mai is laughing.) “……..,” Tabito says nothing. “Now I know. You’re Dosa, one of Konoha’s legendary prodigy upstarts from the last war. Konoha’s Reaper; hmm I guess my Shisio didn’t kill you,” said Reika.

(Shark makes an angry face.) “Let it go Shark,” said Orca. “Heh, you mean that lame swordsman? I’ll admit he’s pretty strong, but up against me, nahh,” smiled Dosa. (His nose slightly grows. All of a sudden huge tides of water rushes in.)

“He caught us,” said Reika.

“WTF,” yelled Dosa. “We’re gonna get swept away by some mysterious wave,” yelled Kou. “Shit,” said Mai. “BRACE……..FOR……….IMPACT,” said Tabito. “Bring it,” yelled Shark. “Prepare for the worst,” said Orca. “Our luck has run out,” said Dolphin. (As Huge tidal waves of water crashes in, everyone is shocked when they hear a loud, big voice.)

“FOUND YOU,” yelled Kyo. (The waves crashes and hits everyone. The entire area is now a kind of Lake. Everyone jumps out and on top of the water. Team Konoha on one side, Team Reika on the other; soon a man appear from the middle of the two groups and interrupts their intended battle.)

“That’s,” said Dosa. “Konoha shinobi. Leave Mizukage to me, you guys can go give The Hokage my regards,” said Kyo. “Oh my! Another of the legendary Sages; I never thought I’d see two of them at once,” said Kou.

“He’s quite respectful, that’s for sure,” said Mai. “……………..,” Tabito is silent. “I don’t care if you are the legendary Tortoise Sage. We need that woman, back off, or we’ll take it to ya,” said Dosa. “Umm, these are two Sages,” yelled Kou. “Despite Kou’s unneeded enthusiasm, he’s right, we can’t take on 2 Sages and her aides,” said Mai.

“Don’t give a fuck,” said Dosa. “…….Insolent……..Fool,” said Tabito.

(Dosa runs with his Scythe and rushes right passed Kyo.) “Poking his head into my matters, how dare he,” said Kyo. (Dosa automatically appears in front of Reika.) “He’s fast,” said Orca. (As he attempts to take her down, Shark grabs Dosa’s Scythe barehanded.)

“He’s strong. I can’t even budge him,” smiled Dosa. “AAAHHH,” yelled Shark. (He swings Dosa away, as Dosa lands near Team Konoha and slides across the water.) “Back I see,” said Mai. “Looks like I’ll get serious,” said Dosa. (Kyo turns around and faces Reika.)

“Summoning Jutsu,” yelled Kyo. (A Large Sea Turtle emerges from the Water. Kyo stands on top of it. Everyone is amazed.)

“There’s only one way. Summoning jutsu,” yelled Reika. (A large Crock emerges from the water, Reika and her Marine Squad stand on top of it.)

“Shit,” said Mai. “We should get out of here,” said Kou. (Dosa digs in his bag and pulls out a mini container holding blood in it.) “What the hell are you doing, these are two sages. Together, we might be able to take out one but now since they’ve summoned, it might be no good,” said Kou. “A container of blood,” questioned Mai. “It’s Uzumaki Sensei’s,” said Dosa. (He rubs his finger in it as he spreads it on his palm.) “…………..Summoning,” questioned Tabito. (As Kyo and Reika’s summons prepare to clash, they stop as a huge smoke blows across the area. As the smoke clears, Team Konoha is standing on top of Gamabunta. Dosa sweats heavily.)

“That’s Naruto’s summon,” said Kyo. “The Hokage’s Toad,” questioned Reika.

“Who the hell summoned me? Neither of you are Naruto. And why are two Sages and their summoning here? I won’t fight unless Naruto commands me to do so, otherwise it could be problematic fighting on behalves of weaklings,” said Gamabunta. “Oh, he pulled it off,” said Kou. “This must be the power of one of The Hokage’s students,” said Mai. “…………Impressive,” said Tabito.

“I SAID WHO SUMMONED ME? IF I DON’T GET AN ANSWER I WILL SQUASH YOU LIKE BUGS,” yelled Gamabunta. “Calm ya ass down! I’m Dosa Konoha’s Reaper. I use to be a student under Uzumaki Naruto. Please lend us a hand Boss, I didn’t waste all this chakra for nothin,” said Dosa. (Gamabunta draws out his dagger.) “Why didn’t you say so earlier? Though, you are not one linked to my species by fate, you are the student of my Master; therefore there is a bond locking us together. So I’ll fight on your behalf just this once,” said Gamabunta.

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At Sa-mosutatto village.

“Lord Mikoto!!!” scream a Sa-mosutatto guard. Mikoto and Sasuke look at the guard. “You must see this.” Says the guard as he give a telescope to Mikoto. He looks through the scope and see the battle between Reika, Kyo and Dosa. “I see a battle. Three ninjas. They summon a croc, a turtle and a frog. Not ninjas but sages.” Sasuke look at Mikoto. “A toad?” ask Sasuke. “Don’t worry. I confirmed Reika and Kyo, but whoever summon that toad isn’t Naruto.” Says Mikoto. He looks at Sasuke with a grin. “Let’s take a closer look, shall we?” ask Mikoto. “If Reika’s there, then I’m going. Her story about Amy’s death. When I dig around, there are some inconsistency.” Says Shisio. “Guess my opinion don’t count then?” sighs Ryu. Yuki just seem lost in thought.

Dream is standing at lake's edge with two beautiful woman, one with a long black hair, wearing a sexy blue ninja gi with fishnet and she have the sharingan and another woman with short black hair and wearing a white medical outfit with the byakugan.

"So what do you think of the Bird Country eh, Kakuya, Kimiko? The two girls look at around with awe.

"It looks nice." says Kimiko, the girl with Byakugan. "That fight is more interesting." says Kakuya, the girl with the Sharingan while pointing to the fight location between Reika, Kyo and team Konoha.

"Both of you see that guy with the scythe?" ask Dream. Both of the girls nod. "Kill him." says Dream. The girls nods and run through the lake towards Dosa. "This should get me on Reika good side." mumbles Dream as he picks a large crossbow and aim at Gamabunta.

On top of Gamabunta.

"Ok, let’s get the Mizukage!!!!" yelled Dosa. Before they can mounted any attack Dosa spotted a large fireball refelction from the lake and look behind him where he saw the fire ball is getting closer. "Evasive manuever!!!" yelled Dosa and he and the Konoha trackers evade the fireball. While Dosa on the mid-air, Kimiko emerged infront of him. "Gentle Fist!!" yelled Kimiko but Dosa parried her blow with his scythe. Dosa landed beside Gamabunta, while the Konoha trackers land a few feet away from Dosa. "Who the...." says Mai but before she can finish the Marine squad have surrounded them. “THIS.......IS......NOT......PART..... .O F......THE.......PLAN." says Tabito. "Now we are on the lake, this is our turf. You won’t walk out alive." says Orca.

Dosa look at the two girls who is charging at him. "Fuck you bitches." says Dosa. Kakuya makes a few hand seals and shoot a large fireball from her mouth. "Great Fireball Technique." says Kakuya. Dosa charges forward and cut the fireball in half with his scythe, but as the fireball disperse, another figure appear through the fireball remains and hit Dosa at his left shoulder. "What the....." says Dosa as he dodges back. Suddenly he can't felt the chakra from his left shoulder. He looks at his attacker, and it was Kimiko. “What do you think of our team work, SNA member?” ask Kakuya. “We are the anti-SNA ninjas created to counter any ninjas with SNA training. Do you think you can surpass the Sharingan and Byakugan combination?” ask Kimiko. “Fuck you bitches!!!!” scream Dosa as he jumps upwards and make a handseal. “Fire element: Fire Dragon Technique!!!” says Dosa as he shoots flames that resemble dragon at the sisters. Kimiko gets into a Hyuuga stance and use Eight Trigrams Empty Palm, concentrated force of chakra out of her hand, to violently push the flame away. Dosa was stunned that his attack was nullified and then realize that Kakuya isnt with Kimiko. Then he senses something behind him and as he looks back he notice Kakuya is inches behind him, with a short sword ready to slash his back. Quickly he uses his scythe to parry her blow and use his strength to knock her back and Kakuya lands beside Kimiko. Then they notice a large shadow, and they look up and see Gamabunta is swinging his word at them. Quickly they dodge the attack.

At lakes edge, Dream shoots his crossbow and the bolt flies quickly across the lake and hit Gamabunta’s front leg causing him to scream in agony. He looks at the bolt and notice there is a tag attached to it. “SHIT!!!! IS THAT, THE UNSUMMON TAG???” says Gamabunta before he disappeared into a puff of smoke. “Now that makes it even.” Says Kimiko. Kakuya sneers and she charged forward towards Dosa. “I’m so gonna teach your place bitches!!!” yelled Dosa as he charged forward also. Suddenly Kakuya takes out a few kunai from her backpocket and throw directly at Dosa. “Frontal attack? Do you think I’m that dense??” yelled Dosa. Then he realise that the kunais are rigged with explosive tag. Before he can evade, the kunai explode in front of him and he take cover behind a rock. When he looks up, his vision was blurred by the smoke and mist from the lake. He moves from the rock when suddenly Kimiko emerged and attack him from behind with Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms and Dosa scream and he falls down on his knees. “Mother fucking bitches. Attack like cowards.” Says Dosa as he tries to stand up. Suddenly Kakuya runs toward him and kick the scythe from his hand and punch Dosa in the guts and he falls down to his knees. Kimiko looks as Dosa’s scythe sinks into the water. Kakuya grabs Dosa’s head and thruts her right knee to Dosa’s face, breaking nose and blood gushing out from his nose and mouth. “Fuck. I never was beaten like this before. I can’t mold any chakra and my head is getting numb.” Mumbles Dosa as Kimiko grabs both of his shoulder and dislocated it. Dosa bite his lips to endure the pain. “Now there will be no surprises.” Says Kimiko.

At the other part of the lake the Konoha trackers are busily fighting the Marine squad. “Water element: One hundred Flying Water Dolphins of Death.” Says Dolphin and hundreds water release dolphin jumps from the lake towards Mai. She quickly makes a few hand seals and crystals emerged around her and protect Mai from Dolphin’s attack. “Crystal Technique: Crystal Wall.” “What? Crystal element?” ask Dolphin. “Long story short, my parents once serve the wrong master and now they make amends by serving Naruto-sama. And I inherit this kekkei genkai so that I will use this for my hokage.” Says Mai.

A few metres away from Mai and Dolphin.

Shark and Tabito is charging at each other and Tabito use his axe on Shark but Shark blocks it with his hand and effortlessly push Tabito away from him. He then makes a hand seal. “Water release: Double Shark Missle.” Said Shark and Tabito sees two fins racing through the lake towards him and he evades them by jumping upwards and the two sharks explode beneath him. “You look kinda familiar.” Says Shark. “……..” says Tabito. “I remember!!!!!! You’re that stupid ninja from 2 years ago that leaves Ada Village to answer a distress call from some fellow konoha ninjas.” Laughs Shark. Tabito look shock at the mention of that village name. “You left that village and only to return seeing it in rubbles. But that villagers from that village is your friends too right? If I so remember, very tasty too. HAHAHA!!!!” “YOU…….” Says Tabito. “What, losing some friends makes you talk like a retard? It’s your entire fault!!!!!!!!” Yelled Shark as he makes another hand seal. “Water Release: Shark Teeth Bullets.” Says Shark and countless fast projectiles flies straight towards Tabito and multiple projectiles hit him, and he fall down into the lake. Shark sneers. “That was easy.” He said and he turns his back when a voice stops him. “WAIT……MURDERER…” says Tabito as he gets back up. Shark grins and he use the lake’s water to form a sword. “Water Release: Water Sword. Now Konoha ninja,entertain me.” Says Shark.

In the other side of the lake

Kou is charging towards Orca. He pulls out a scroll and a giant shuriken puff out of it. Kou throws that shuriken and makes a hand seal. “Ninja Art: Giant Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique.” Says Kou and the giant shuriken multiply and spinning towards Orca. Orca quickly makes some handseal, “Water Release: Sperm Whale Slam, and a humongous whale, the size of a small island, comes out of the lake and slam into the multiple shuriken and Kou. Kou quickly dodge to avoid the whale and jumps towards Orca with his kunai. Orca pulls his own kunai and they parried each other with their kunai and they jumps back, away from each other. “Your ninjutsu and taijutsu is very excellent.” Says Kou. Orca sneers and he makes another handseal. “Water Release: Black Mist.” Says Orca and blows a black mist from his mouth towards Kou and it soon enveloped Kou. “What a strange mist. It’s so dark, I can’t see anything.” Says Kou. Suddenly hundreds black arms comes from under him and beginning to pull him in. “What the…..this whole mist is a genjutsu.” Says Kou as he struggle to get himself free. He bites his lips to free himself from the jutsu and quickly jumps upwards until he is out of the mist. Orca just look at him jumps away from the mist and landed behind him. “So you escape my genjutsu, this fight gonna be a long one.” Sighs Orca.

In the middle of the lake a crocodile and a turtlr is fighting each other as their summoners use both nijutsu and taijutsu to defeat their opponent and in the distance Sasuke, Shisio, Yuki, Ryu and Mikoto is heading towards the battle side.

“Dosa…..” whisper Yuki.
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Kakuya: The hot head elder sister of the anti-SNA twin. Unlike other SNA members, she was artificially created by Dream as a counter measure against SNA. Dream combine the DNA of an anbu and an uchiha which given her the ability of an uchiha combine with a deadly skills of an anbu. With Anbu skills in assassinations, tracking, surveillance and battle plus with her sharingan, she can took down any opponent with highly precision.

Kimiko: The younger sister of the anti SNA twin. Unlike other SNA members, she was artificially created by Dream as a counter measure against SNA. Dream combine the DNA of a medical ninja and a hyuuga which given her ability of a hyuuga combine with skills with medical ninja and knowledge of the human body, she can target any place in the human body with the combination of the medical ninja knowledge and the hyuugas gentle fist.

Together they form the anti-SNA twin, a pair of ninja working side by side using their cunning,skills and kekkei genkai and strategies to take down powerful foes either they are SNA or not. By combining the sharingan and byakugan they can make sure they can trap any opponent without given them any chance to fight back.
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-A Hero’s farewell/Yuki’s true motives

(Team Sasuke arrives near a cliff overlooking the battle over the lake, Yuki notices Dosa while Sasuke takes notice at Yuki’s concern.) “Is that Konoha’s Reaper? With him dead our infiltration into Konoha would be much easier,” said Shisio. “Opps! I can’t believe I fought on that guy’s side during the SNA invasion,” said the sighing Ryu. “Anyone you know,” asked Sasuke. “Well,” said Yuki before getting cut off. “Leave it, you’re no allies to the leaf,” said Sasuke. “Sasuke is right, you sold your soul to the devil the moment you tipped me off on one of The Hokage’s camps 7 years ago,” said Shisio.

“Then why did you come with us to scout this area? You said you a have matter to settle with Mizukage? Aren’t you being tied down to old village ties by trying to get revenge on someone who may have caused your lover’s death,” yelled Yuki. “Gotcha there man,” said Ryu. “I have no more ties to Mizugakure, this is a personal matter that extends beyond my former ties to that god forsaken place,” said Shisio. “Are we all even sure we want Konoha’s destruction? Sasuke I refuse to help if you can’t keep your team’s morale in check, as this is a serious operation that has our very lives on the line,” said Mikoto.

“We are all missing nins acting on behalf of something greater,” said Sasuke. “Not so fast Uchiha! I never said I was a missing nin,” said Mikoto. (Sasuke activates the sharingan, while Shisio draws out his blade.)

“WTF,” questioned Ryu. “I didn’t say I wouldn’t help you, I’m just saying I’m loyal to my village as its leader and military commander,” said Mikoto. “You can’t, you’re under my control now,” said Sasuke. “Fool! You don’t run everything. I’ll tell you want I want,” said Mikoto. “Hmm,” mumbled Sasuke. (Shisio withdraws his blade.) “I want half of all the assets you manage to secure from Konoha; you see my village want stake in this after Konoha ruined its reputation; after all, my village needs more power, and if you take my plea, I’ll gladly have my army on your side,” smiled Mikoto.

“Ohh,” said the laughing Ryu. “Political matters are bitch aren’t they? That’s why I’m fed up with them,” said Shisio. “Should we trust him,” asked Yuki. “Shit… Fine, we might need the man power anyway,” said Sasuke reluctantly.

(Yuki thinks things over.)

“Though, I never counted the possibility that Sasuke would plan on still attacking Konoha. With Shisio here and Mikoto, this changes things drastically, even more so with the Sa-mosutatto clan at the ready. Though, I gave up on the way of the shinobi years ago, my promise I made to The Hokage still runs strong, and as long as that promise holds, I have honor to it… I never broke a promise before, and I don’t intend on it either… Dosa… I have to come into contact with the Konoha trackers somehow,” thought Yuki.

(The scene switches back seven years ago to the past. Yuki is in a small establishment room, conversing with The Hokage; the locale is somewhere on the outskirts of some country. While everyone is sleeping, Yuki brings up a serious point.)

“Hokage, to tell you the truth, I’m fed up with it,” said Yuki. “The War; well things are finally falling into our favor. Just hold out a little longer, just until we rendezvous with the sand and cloud’s liberation forces,” said The Hokage. “No, the world of the shinboi, its disputes, I’m just tired of what the shinobi lifestyle exhausting the world’s natural resources. I constantly hate the idea of losing more of my family and friends; therefore I’m thinking about leaving. If I break my ties to everyone I care about, when another war arrives, I won’t have to risk my life saving those I don’t care for. If I feel nothing for them, it can’t hurt if something happens to them,” said Yuki.

“Never knew you felt this way… So, are you trying to be a missing nin,” asked The Hokage. “If you are trying to avoid the pretty words, then yes,” said Yuki. “If you leave, I’ll have to kill you unfortunately. After the age of the Akatuski, missing nin are absolutely held in contempt on sight globally. It is an agreement the allied nations came into a head on as Akatuski was made up of missing nin from the five great nations. They set precedent for all missing nin to be exterminated, as they lack motives unclear to a village; and to erase all suspicions, missing-nin are automatically tracked and information is promptly sent to the allied forces so we could eliminate them upon sight,” said The Hokage.

“That’s nothing different from the old days, as missing-nin were still hunted,” said Yuki. “No, the world at large back then made it appear as though they were getting hunted, but fact is, is that some were important aspects to individuals in villages and due to whims of previous Kages, they had gone undiscovered for the most part,” said The Hokage.

“Must I endure this life of turmoil,” questioned Yuki. “I’ll make you a deal. I will grant you stay outside Konoha’s walls under one condition,” said The Hokage. “Really, it’s that simple,” asked Yuki. (The Hokage smiles.)

“You must stay true to your word, and not come into contact with Konoha again, as the mission will fail,” said The Hokage. “I said I’m done with missions,” said Yuki. “It’s the only alternative, either that or, nothing… You will stage a betrayal, tipping our location to one of Mizugakure’s attack squad leaders,” said The Hokage. “But, wouldn’t that put you in a compromising position? And even though I want to break away, you can’t expect me to cause my former homeland trouble,” said Yuki.

“Do you really want to leave Konoha,” asked The Hokage. (Yuki is stopped in her tracks. She then looks down and starts to cry as she takes off her headband, scratches it, and then puts it away in her bag.) “She must really be serious about this,” thought The Hokage. “I’ll do it, just tell me what to do,” said Yuki. “Eventually, Sasuke may pick up that you hate Konoha, if that happens, he’ll ask for your help in destroying it. Report of any details about Sasuke to me when you can; don’t worry, the villagers and shinobi may believe you are a missing nin, but I will inform the Kages not to touch you, as this is a top secret investigation. However, what trouble you do get yourself into, don’t expect me to bail you out, that is all,” said The Hokage.

(The scene switches back to the present.)

“Since I’ve been with Sasuke 24/7 as of late, I haven’t been able to relay any messages; have I failed; and Sasuke is planning on heading towards the village at any minute,” thought Yuki.

“We’re preceeding with the operation,” said Sasuke. “I don’t think so, I got a debt to repay to Reika,” smiled Shisio. “Whew… It’s a small break, but I’ll take it,” thought Yuki. “I'll call what goes on in this ship,” said Sasuke before getting cut off. (Yuki rushes off.) “Sasuke, you can’t control your squad after all,” said Mikoto. “SHIT,” yelled Sasuke. “There she goes,” said Ryu. “Everyone after her now,” yelled Sasuke.

(Yuki is rushing towards Dosa’s position.)

“I said I broke my ties with everyone in Konoha; why is my body just moving on towards his location, could it be that I still,” questioned Yuki.

(The scene switches to Dosa’s demise. Kakuya is clinching Dosa’s broken body by the neck as she is lifting him in the air.)

“AHHH… Why don’t you just kill me bitch? I hate sadists more than anything else,” smiled Dosa. “Just because you said that, I’ll make it more painful for you,” grinned the devilish Kakuya. (Kimiko lands near the awful scene.)

“Sister, just end it,” said Kimiko. “Silence! It’s rarity that I see such fine SNA adversaries,” said Kakuya. (Dosa remembers back to when he was was chocking Raitei then he snaps back to reality.)

“Heh, chocked out by an arrogant bitch; I remember saying I’d do the opposite,” smiled Dosa. “Why you,” said Kakuya. (She squeezes his neck tightly, this causes more blood to gush out of his mouth. She then punches him in the face, causing more blood to pour out of his nose.) “ARGHHGH. You’ll warrant your own death by killing me. The Hokage will never GAAGKGK,” seemingly croaked Dosa. (Blood gushes out his nose and mouth, as Dosa’s eyes role back into his head. A disfiguringly awful gag from Dosa’s body erupts.)
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“DOSAAAA,” yelled Yuki. (Kakuya tosses Dosa’s assumed corpse across the area, before it hits the water, Yuki catches it and cries.)

“Dosa,” mumbled Yuki. (Dosa slightly opens one eye.) “Arguark,” mumbled Dosa (More blood rushes out of his mouth). “Damn, my throat is clogged up with blood as I can hardly breath, she's quite the strangler… Looks like this is it… But, who is this vixen looking down at me with such worry? Looks like Yuki. Ha, hah… No way, she betrayed me; must be my mind playing tricks on me. God sure has a sense of humor,” thought Dosa.

“Who is she,” asked Kimiko. “Have no idea; she isn’t our target so,” said Kakuya. “Dosa, I’m here don’t,” said Yuki. “It seems the blood from my mouth and nose had recessed and drained into my sinuses; I can’t even hear a word she’s saying. Pretty strange life I've had. Constantly outshined by Hiro’s light and eclipsed by the others’ wills that have done all they could to keep the village standing. I was just a ruffian, scrappy and belligerent not giving a damn about how I came off. But, I wanted the same attention as Hiro and be trusted with something; something I can say I accomplished on someone’s behalf other than my own.

(Flash back shows Dosa knocked out by Hiro when they were like 12-13 years old. Another flash back shows The Hokage patting Hiro on the head while he scolds Dosa in another panel. Dosa then has a flash back of him blindly attacking a group of troops despite being told to wait by Rina and one of the Anbu ops seven years ago during the mission extermination episode.)

Looking back, I’ve always put my team and Uzumaki Sensei into a lot of trouble by getting gung ho and wanting to show off. Heh, heh. I hated Hiro, I pushed my body to the breaking point, and then during the war, I showed what I could do. But I was still treated as low down scum for my personality and reckless tenacity; no wonder why Uzumaki Sensei couldn’t trust me, I was hazardous… A few years later, I had grew aware of my wrongs and asked Uzumaki Sensei to allow me into the SNA training kernel, though deep down in my soul, I only did it to surpass Hiro, but when I saw him again after all those years, and seen him fire off against Shisio, it no longer mattered; our strengths were still separated by a gap.

(Flash back of when Hiro appeared and challenged Shisio as winds blow around the entire area.)

I felt like a fool for undergoing the program because I became almost inhuman yet ironically still humanly weaker than Hiro. Then later I felt like a larger fool for only taking the program serious enough for such a ridiculous dream such as surpassing Hiro, a fellow village companion. It tore me up inside to think my insignificant goals weighed more than the village’s in my mind. Maybe that was why I decided to help train Hiro’s kids, as a way to make it up to the unjustified hate I had towards him and the lack of motivation in regards to the village’s well being. Back then I never worked properly with Hiro on missions and didn’t accept the fact that Hiro was more talented, so I did not use his abilities to complement my own in battle, in order to increase our chances of success. That alone made me come to the conclusion that I was such a dick.

(Dosa has a flashback of Team Hiro as they slept from their training.)

Maybe the best thing I’ve ever done was help make the next generation stronger for the trials ahead. That is the only positive thing and most important aspect of my life in my opinion. That Zig kid, reminded me a lot of myself, but what I lacked was his teamwork and cooperation with his allies when I was his age. In time, not only will he be more skillful than myself, he’ll know what it really means to be a Konoha shinobi carrying the will of fire.

(Dosa then has a flashback of teaching Zig how to use the fire element.)

Still, I did some dark stuff that’s for sure. Being with the SNA even if it was just a ruse, I was forced to do some dealings that I’m not proud of. It seems Konoha will remember me for being the lowest of the low down wet work operator.

Oh well, at least I went out with a bang. Despite losing to a cocky bitch, this is how a dark and gloomy shinobi like me should die, like a cold blooded dog. Though, not so cold I guess; I feel the warmth of a cute little honey that resembles the perky and giddy kunoichi I once knew, before I fade into an endless pit of cold darkness. After all the things I’ve done; I ain’t going to heaven, but this warmth at least gives me some respite before I take my final plunge into the dark depths,” thought Dosa as he closes his eyes a final time.

(Automatically Sasuke team lands in to retrieve Yuki.)

“Yuki,” said Sasuke angrily. “Reinforcements,” questioned Kimiko. “I don’t think so; more like simple interferences; they would have attacked us on spot if they were after us,” said Kakuya.

(Dream spots Team Sasuke from afar.)

“OOO… Lookie here,” smiled the devious Dream.

(All of the Trackers take notice of Dosa’s death. The scene switches Tabito vs. Shark; Tabito’s axe crosses with Shark’s water blade, as Shark slowly over powers him and knocks him back, as Tabito does a flip and lands on the water’s surface.)

“……He’s………..Gone,” said Tabito. “Looks like your buddy bit the dust, now you will too! Water Element: Twin Shark Teethed blades,” said Shark. (He now has two blades however, the water sticks out from all angles on the blades and takes the shape of jagged shark teeth that sticks outwards.)

“Now you die,” yelled Shark. (He is rushing towards Tabito’s location. Tabito tosses his axe in the air and makes a handseal.)

“….Earth Element:………….Hardening,” said Tabito. (Tabito catches the axe with one hand, he then palms the handle with two hand; soon the axe is engulfed by a thick stone layer that covers the blade. As Shark prepares to strike with both blades, Tabito swings his axe horizontally, which shatters the blades as Shark is stunned and knocked back.)

“He used an earth element? Damn, my water blades are weak against earth,” thought Shark. (Tabito then positions his axe vertically and attempts to slice downward. Shark evades by backing up with a jump. As he lands, blood drip down from his forehead, as Tabito managed to get a small slice off on Shark’s forehead.)

“You never cease to amaze me… But games’ over… Water Mutation: Gills,” said Shark. (Shark forms gills on each side of his face.)

“…His……Chakra,” said Tabito. (Shark dives into the water. The scene then switches to Mai vs. Dolphin. Mai is engulfed with a crystallized armor. Think of Siegfried’s armor from Soul Caliber IV. )

“Given the circumstances I can't hold back anymore. This is my full bodied crystalline technique… To think you guys were strong enough to kill one of The Hokage’s students. I don’t know if I can win, but we won’t just let Dosa go out and die with us just sitting around,” yelled Mai.

“Hmm; Water Element: Recomposed Dolphin,” yelled Dolphin. (A huge water constructed Dolphin appears, as she jumps on top of it.) “AHHHHH,” yelled Mai as she rushes and prepares to clash with it. (The scene switches to Kou vs. Orca. They are standing quite distances from each other.)

“You’ve backed off; what happened to your aggression,” asked Orca. “Dosa and by the looks of it, more back up…,” mumbled Kou as he tilts his head down. “You must be frustrated from what happened with your squad member,” said Orca. “Don’t act like you care,” said Kou. “You’re right, I can’t care, but you’ll die by not focusing on the task at hand,” said Orca. “Heh, maybe he’s right,” thought Kou.
(Orca then melts into water and mixes with the water. Kou begins making handseals. His eyes then turn a deep crimson color. Large palms of water tries to clap Kou, however Kou evades it and then jumps onto the water’s surface. Orca resurfaces from his technique and compliments Kou.)

“So, you were able to tell where I would strike; how did you do it when my hydration hides my chakra within the water,” said Orca. “My thermal eye technique is an advanced tracking ability that allows me to see your heat source. The moment you prepared to attack, was the moment I saw your body heat appear. With this technique, hiding one’s chakra is meaningless, as one can’t hide their body’s natural heat source,” said Kou.

“What an interesting ability; it seems I’ll have to try a different approach,” said Orca.

(The Scene switches to Reika vs. Kyo. The Crock attempts to tail whip the sea turtle however, the sea turtle turns to its shell to block the attack. Both of the huge summons lands back on the water. The Sea turtle then jumps and clinches the neck of the Crock, dragging it into the water, Reika and Kyo both off of their summons and rushes to a safer location while the summons go at it, creating swirls and tides of water. Reika and Kyo both make hand seals and say the following.)

“Water Element: Explosion jutsu,” yelled Kyo and Reika. (Large tunneling tubes of water collides as water sprays all across mid-air. The Scene switches to The Hokage’s office, The Hokage stretches out however, he leans back too far in his chair and falls, the impact causes a picture of The Hokage when he was younger, that also contained images of his child students, to fall. The Hokage picks up the picture and notices it has a crack over Dosa’s image.)

“……,” The Hokage says nothing.

Next time: How will Konoha respond when it finally recieves word of Dosa's death?/Enter Team Sasuke.
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“You betray me, Yuki. I should expect that, since Kakashi is your father.” Says Sasuke. Yuki looks at Sasuke and the rest of his team. She turns her back on them and put Dosa corpse on her shoulder and makes a hand seal. “Lightning Element: Lightning Speed.” And she runs through the lake to the direction of the Sand Village. “You lost her.” Sneers Shisio. Sasuke activate his Sharingan and look at his team. “I’ll make sure Reika defeat Kyo. The rest of you, make sure the trackers never leave this lake alive.” Says Sasuke and he jump towards the sages battle. “You heard the boss.” Says Shisio and he unsheathe his sword.

At the UHE tower.

Tetsuo is meditating when he suddenly open his eyes. “Mizukage has gained a new ally.” Says Tetsuo. The rest of UHE is looking at him. “Uchiha Sasuke.” Says Tetsuo. “What is your plan?” ask Oita. “We wait. Wait until they meet the kages in the battle field, then we unleashed the meteor on them.” Says Tetsuo. The other nods. “Now Blank, go and fetch Nila for us, Oita, Michi. You guys will accompany Blank. Your mission is to draw the 8 tail from Konoha.” Ordered Tetsuo. Blank, Michi and Oita nods.

At Konoha.

Hope meets the team that returns from Rock Village. “It seems it went quite well.” Says Hope. Sarutobi nods. “Yeah, but I can’t shake this feeling something bad gonna happen.” Says Sarutobi. “Big bro, you must what I did on that mission!!!” says Nila happily. Hope give Nila a warm smile and then looks at Zig. “Thanks, for looking after her.” Says Hope and he offer a handshake. Zig shakes Hope hand.

Near the border of Wind Country.

Yuki puts Dosa body down and she put her ear on Dosa chest. “No heartbeat. But his body still warm.” Says Yuki and lightning cracks from her palm and she put both of her palm on Dosa chest and lightning went through his body. “C’mon Dosa, you aren’t the man that give up easily. C’MON!!!!” yelled Yuki. Suddenly she heard a heartbeat. “HAAAAAA!!!!” gasped Dosa. “DOSA!!!!!!!!” scream Yuki and she hugged him. “OWWW!!!! That hurts!!!” scream Dosa. Yuki release the hug and took out a scroll and a medic kit puff out of it. “Yuki?” ask Dosa. Yuki didn’t answer him. She took out iodine with some cotton and bandages. “Why you betray me?” ask Dosa. Yuki stop moving and she looks downward. “I’m sorry.” Whisper Yuki. “C’mon Yuki, tell me.” Says Dosa. “I’m tired. Tired of war, killing, spying. I lost so much because of the way of the ninja.” Says Yuki. “And then you tip the Mizukage about our forces?” ask Dosa. “The Hokage said that’s the only way I can left.” Says Yuki and she looks at Dosa. “You think I’m lying do you?” ask Yuki. Dosa shakes his head. “Nah, I believe you. You’re the worst liar back then, and you are even worst now. I’m just glad I see you again,Yuki.” Says Dosa. Yuki smiles and she patch some of Dosa’s wound.

“So when are we going for a date again?” ask Dosa.

“WHAT? You almost die and you ask me out?”

“Well, this seems the best time…” says Dosa.

“Well, you never change do you?” ask Yuki.

“What? I almost die and you’re patching me. It’s not a date, ARRRGHHH!!! My chest…..” scream Dosa. “You’re not fully healed yet. Konoha is too far away. Only the Sand is close enough.” Says Yuki and she carried Dosa to Sand Village. “So will you.. Say yes?” ask Dosa. “This is not a good time, Dosa.” Says Yuki as she carried Dosa on her back. “I’m dying here….” Says Dosa. “Ok, yes I will.” Sighs Yuki. “Cool. Those mother fuckers going to be so jealous. So will you come back to Konoha?” ask Dosa. “Ok, that’s too much.” Says Yuki.

At the battle site.

Sasuke watches as Reika is putting on Kyo’s armor. He then looks at Shisio. “The trackers?” “Sleeping with the fishes.” Says Shisio. Suddenly the lake water becomes lower and soon the lake is gone. Sasuke looks at the three corpses near Ryu. “We must get Yuki before she reach Sand Village.” Says Sasuke. “That’s your problem.” Says Shisio and he put his sword on Reika’s neck. “Tell me, who kill Amy.” Reika grins. “The SNA. Why? Serving this Uchiha makes you stupid?” ask Reika. “I serve no one!!!” yells Shisio. Reika looks at Sasuke. “It seems we are fated to join forces, eh Uchiha Sasuke?” smiles Reika. Sasuke look at her with his Sharingan. “Orca, Shark, Dolphin. Assist Mr.Sasuke on finding this Yuki.” “I never ask for your help.” Says Sasuke. “Well you need. If Yuki arrives at Sand Village, your plan is jeopardized.” Says Reika. “Well I’m leaving. Nice working with you Sasuke.” Says Shisio and he turn back heading to Konoha. “You’re not leaving. If you still insist, I will kill you here and now.” Says Sasuke. Shisio looks at Sasuke. “You just got a freaking sage and her three mermaids. Why you still need good old me?” ask Shisio. “You know too much. And your skill may needed, so stay.” Says Sasuke. Shisio glares at Sasuke. “You just enter my top five list, Sasuke.” Says Shisio. Sasuke signals his teammates and all of them leave the area heading towards Sand Village and Dream and Reika headed towards the Rain Village, where she will be posing as Kyo.

One hour later.

A man riding a lion is heading towards Rain Village when he spotted 4 bodies lying on the ground. He walks towards the bodies and examine them. “Konoha trackers.” Says Daisuke. The he heard a soft moan. He looks at Mai and saw her finger is twitching. “We have one survivor. Summoning Technique.” Says Daisuke and a lioness wearing a nurse hat appear before him. “Heal her.” Says Daisuke and the lioness put her front palm on Mai and began to heal her. Slowly her wounds heal and she began regaining consciousness. “Where…..Tabito, Kou?” ask Mai and she began shaking her comrades body. “I’m sorry. They are dead.” Says Daisuke. “NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!” scream Mai. “I will kill them!!!” yelled Mai. “Stay calm and tell me what happened here.” Ask Daisuke. Mai look at him and the lioness. “Great more sages.” Says Mai and she tell Daisuke about the Jigen Reika, her Marine squad and Sasuke intervention. “I see. So that man is Kyo.” Says Daisuke. “Will you help me, avenge my friend?” ask Mai. Daisuke looks at her with pity. “First lets bury them.” Says Daisuke. Mai nods. “Then we go to Konoha.” Says Daisuke. “But……” says Mai. “ Those people must be stopped, and you need a rest.” Says Daisuke. “Revenge will blacken the soul. Uchiha Sasuke is the living proof. What will yor friends say if you follow his foot steps?” ask Daisuke. Mai looks down. “Let’s bury them, and then we report this to the Hokage.” Says Daisuke. “Earth Element: Soil Splitter.” Says Daisuke and the earth opens before him. Then he and Mai place Tabito Kou and Kyo’s corpses inside the earth and Daisuke make another hand seal and the earth closes back. Mai places a wood on top of their graves. Daisuke open a sake bottle and pours the sake on their graves.

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-The plans that are in motion

(The Scene starts off at Mizugakure; inside the main office Tank and Sakuya approaches Tetsuo while he is meditating.)

"I wonder why boss has had the others leave for Konoha without him opening the portal. It takes 3 days to travel between Mizugakure and Konoha on foot as they have to cross the ocean; ahh I just hate waiting," said Tank. "Deal with it, the boss has to meditate in order to gather the appropriate chakra required for fusing the bijuu within the meteor. Not to mention the meteor has to actually be used in the upcoming battle; that alone takes a considerable amount of chakra," said Sakuya.

"SO WHAT! Like opening space-time transfer portals uses that much chakra," said Tank. "You fool, if they made it to Konoha too soon, our plans would be shot before execution. The boss isn't just meditating, he is also mentally opening up several viewing angles all over the world, in order to pin point what's going on. He can't see everything, but he is getting a general idea of what is going on," said Sakuya.

"Oh, I guess the boss has it a little difficult," said Tank. "Just a little," said the sighing Sakuya. "Tank, Sakuya," said Tetsuo. "Sir," yelled both Tank and Sakuya. "Help me with the chakra gathering, it seems I need to muster more at a sooner interval," said Tetsuo. (He sweats slightly.) "Ehh, I'm not sure about that chakra gathering, sounds kinda fluffy if you ask me. I'm good with my fists, I don't mold chakra for too long," said Tank.

"TANK! We'll gladly help you sir," said Sakuya. "Asura will arrive here in two days time with the meteor's scroll, so help me gather as much chakra before he gets here. I plan on using the spare day to be completely immersed in the act channeling the required amount for challenging the allied forces," said Tetsuo. (Tank and Sakuya sits next to him and helps him gather the chakra.)

"What about Ino Shika Cho," asked Tank. "He's on his way, I estimate that he's at the wave country, it should take him at least a day to arrive," said Tetsu. (Tank opens one eye after hearing that.) "How long do you suppose we sit here meditating," asked Tank. "Probably a day," said the sighing Sakuya. "WHAT! WITH NO GODDANM FOOD," yelled Tank.

(The Scene switches to the outside of the Great Naruto Bridge; Ino Shika Cho is carrying a teenage girl with back length red hair. Her face isn't shown however, she is wearing a two piece skimpy bikini that is red.)

"I'm shocked I was able to sneak by without too many complaints! Ahh, so sad bad that a nice looker like herself has to be ensnared by my shadow possession; Didn't even give her the chance to go into her bijuu. Dang it, Tetsuo didn't open the portal and I'm starting to get a little drowsy though, looks like he needs the chakra probably," thought Ino Shika Cho. (Ino Shika Cho notices The Hokage's name across the bridge's label.)

"The Great Naruto Bridge hmm? Something about that just seems ominous for me, I don't know signs just might be in my nature," thought Ino Shika Cho. (He begins racing across the bridge with the Ichibi's host over his shoulder. The Scene then switches to Asura’s position; he is rapidly hopping and rushing across mountainous terrains; soon the scene switches to the barracks in Mizugakure. Raitie walks in front of the gung ho troops and opens up with a speech.)

“We of the new organization under The UHE will be willing to lay down our lives for a greater purpose in this world,” yelled Ratie. “YEAH,” yelled random UHE member. “LONG LIVE LORD TETSUO,” yelled another. (They all cheer as the blood for battle rushes strongly through their veins. The sun set begins over a different locale over looking Yuki, as she rushes with Dosa, who is given a piggy back ride due to his apparent injuries.)

“Hey babe, not so rough, the impact hurts, hah, hah,” said the smirking Dosa. “I’m sorry, but you’ll just have to deal at the moment, you see the guys I was with are tracking me, and they’re a dangerous group. We still have until day break before we reach the outskirts of the sand, we can’t afford to slow down now,” said Yuki.

“Hah, more poor saps whom you enticed and left behind,” said the smirking Dosa. (Yuki starts to giggle.) “Hah, hah, hah… In a matter of speaking I guess you might say that,” said the grinning Yuki. “You haven’t changed at all you conniving brad,” said the joking Dosa. (Dosa winks as Yuki looks back.) “And you haven’t changed either, reckless in battle and fighting like a mad man whom lost sight of rational combat behavior,” said Yuki. “Not funny,” said Dosa. “Though, that was the man I admired and looked up too when I needed the motivation to combat any adversary, regardless of size, or shape,” said Yuki. “Is that so,” asked Dosa. (The sun sets completely as the Yuki is rushing while still carrying Dosa. Yuki notices that he’s asleep however, he soon opens his eyes.)

“Tell me somethin Yuki,” whispered Dosa. “Dosa, you should really think about resting at a time like this, but go ahead,” said Yuki. “The tracker squad I was with; what happened to them,” asked the sorrowful Dosa. “….,” Yuki is silent as she is unable to say a positive statement in regards to their assumed conditions. “Just hold on until the morning, just hours away, we are almost there; don’t worry about any other things besides living, or you’ll jinx your life,” said Yuki. “I see, so that’s how it is,” said the seemingly disappointed Dosa. (The Scene switches Konoha; night falls over Konoha skies as well. Nila is in her pink heart covered pajamas with frog slippers lying near the foot of her bed. She lies asleep in her bed; soon she wakes up as she hears a knock on her window.)

“Hmm? Hah, probably Zig just being an idiot again,” said the sighing Nila. (She sits up and opens her blinds and notices no one.)

“You fool,” said the sighing Nila. (She opens the window and says the following.)

“Zig if you don’t come out of here I’ll tell my father that you’re bothering me again when he gets home,” said Nila. (Automatically, quick dashes of wind rush into her room from the open window.) “Quiet down madam, or you’ll wake your mother,” said Inabi. “Aunt Inabi? What are you doing here at this time of day? It is too late for those secret training lessons my mother doesn’t approve of,” said the smirking Nila.

“I’ve been watching you train with Shimizu Hiro and to say the least I am very impressed,” said Inabi. “I know right,” said Nila. (Inabi sighs.) “It seems modesty isn’t in her nature,” thought Inabi. “I’ve also heard good things about you from the villagers. Your bravery, impressive willed motivation, courage, leadership qualities, and strong trusting relationships with your teammates in missions, are that of a highly specialized jounin. Perhaps you do indeed deserve to be a jounin just like Zig; you’d certainly get my vote. With that being said, you are one of our blood, so just maybe,” said Inabi before being cut off by Nila.
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“That’s great and everything, and I would love to sit hear all night with you complimenting me, but it is not like you to approach me without a reason,” said Nila. “She’s sharp,” thought Inabi. “Well,” said Nila. “Considering that I’ll be stepping down from my head position as Hyuuga count,” said Inabi. “I heard, my father and the other clan leaders were talking about you wanting to take a break from the heavy Business, and primarily specialize as an aide for the new Head Leader because you want to spend more time with your child; fair I guess,” said Nila.

“However, I need a replacement for myself and my boy’s too young,” said Inabi. “What about Neji,” asked Nila. “I’m not sure the clan would accept him as he has broken away and also holds the seal on his forehead. Though, tensions between the head and branch families have lessened, Neji’s seal is a remnant of dark history that might be taken into consideration during elections,” said Inabi.

“It shouldn’t have to come to that, my father isn’t an average man either, he is a host; the perfect example of dark history at its best. Yet he still is treated with the utmost respect; I think the clan needs a clearer view of tolerance,” said Nila. “Spoken just like I’d expect, of course my father, who is your grandfather, Elder Hiashi, wouldn’t mind Neji being the Head Leader however, Neji is off doing his own thing as the commander of the police corp.,” said Inabi. “What are you telling me all this for then,” asked Nila.

“Because I want you to serve as the Head Leader of the Hyuuga clan,” said Inabi. (Nila is shocked from hearing that.) “But… I don’t know anything about political dealings or, how to run a clan… Besides, I’m much too young, and all the information on the Hyuuga only came from vague meetings with you,” said Nila.

“You’ll do fine, with the qualities and benefits you hold as an individual, perhaps the Hyuuga clan can take a larger leap in the right direction; the direction your father intended,” said the smiling Inabi. “I can’t, I don’t know anything; and my mother already don’t approve of you seeing me,” said Nila. “Your mother is another issue we’ll have to work around but even if you don’t know much about running a culture, or dealing with politics, I’ll serve as your aide and help you in your leadership. All I need from you is your iron will and equally fair and just judgmental actions on your part. Think of how proud your father would be and how the village as a whole would regard you,” said Inabi.

“I don’t know, being a head member means I won’t be able to go out on many missions with Zig and Laya, and or spend time with them and other friends; also it seems like a very dedicated position, I’d probably get distracted with other things that kunoichi and shinobi do,” said Nila. “There are more important things than playing shinobi in this world. You have to grow up and face what’s more important, like your clan’s history and how it is viewed by Konoha and the other nations. Meet with metomorrow in the secret temple at noon, the Hyuuga council will discuss the current scenario; don’t let me, or your fellow clansmen down,” said Inabi. (She quickly dashes out of the window. Nila sighs as she closes the window.)

“Is she for real,” said Nila. (The scene switches to a bar somewhere in Konoha. Hiro, The Hokage, Shikamaru, Kai and Kiba are all enjoying nice company at a familiar table to them. Alcoholic bottles, glasses and glasses of shots and cups sit around the table as well as poker chips and cash just littering the area. Apparently, The Hokage had the most drinks. The barkeep hides behind the counter. He is a little old man who is scared of the group of friends’ crazy behavior.)

“They scared away all the customers! Shoot, I better get out of here before things get really crazy,” yelled Barkeep. (He secretly sneaks out.)
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“Never knew Konoha’s Hokage was such a party animal,” said the shocked Kai. (Kiba wraps his arm around the new comer. Kiba is apparently wasted; Kai sighs as he gets a whiff of Kiba’s rancid alcoholic breath.)

“HEY! Don’t worry, be HAPPY! RIGHT NAUTO,” yelled Kiba. “WOOOO,” yelled The Hokage. (He takes a huge spill on the floor as he leaned back in his seat too far.) “Sensei,” mumbled Hiro. “FUCK the sensei calls me Naruto,” yelled The Hokage. “HEY KID. Why you drinking red wine? Drink some strong stuff and get messed up,” said Kiba. “Well I,” mumbled Kai. “You must not like to party hardy! You all shy en shit! Kinda like a little goodie two shoes. You ever been with a woman,” whispered Kiba.

“HEY,” yelled Kai. “YOUSE WANNA START SOMETHIN,” yelled Kiba. (Hiro sits Kai down.) “THAT’s better,” yelled Kiba. “Don’t mind him, he like Uzumaki Sensei gets a little wacky when they drink,” said the sighing Hiro. (Shikamaru whispers as he talks to Kai.) “This guy called Lee, serious fiend. Honestly when that guy drinks I have to use shadow possession because he wants to go all drunkin fist on our asses; because of that he doesn’t hang out with us when we decide to have a little get together. And Choji just drinks everything up, so yeah; that was a no go. What a big mess of friends we have huh,” whispered Shikamaru. “HEY SHARE THE GOSSIP, AND JUST LET LOOSE. RIGHT BIG BOSS,” yelled Kiba. “CALL ME NARUTO! OOOOO! Oh, and ah Shikamaru buddy, can you pour some sake down my throat? My head hurts too much to get up and do it myself,” said The Hokage. (Shikamaru gently sips a small cup of Sake.) “Ahhh, what a drag… I’ll just get a hangover in the morning and hear it from that nut of a wife of mine… Why couldn’t conservatives like Sai, Sarutobi, and Neji join us this time. At least with them the conversations wouldn’t be so you had to be drunk to understand them,” said Shikamaru.

“Forget those lames! Right Naruto pal,” yelled Kiba. “OOOOOOO! Oh and the sake, in my mouth right now! The bottle please,” smiled The Hokage. (Shikamaru sighs and pours some of the sake in his mouth and then drops the bottle on top of The Hokage’s head.)

“AHHHH,” said the relieved Hokage. “That’s more like it! By the way, what happened to that hard time partier, you know the kid with scythe; one of Naruto’s boys; though I much rather kick it with that Rina,” said Kiba. “Dude you’re freakin married watch what you are saying. Your daughter Laya and her is only 10 years apart; I swear to God that I hope that’s the booze doing this to you,” said sighing Shikamaru. “WHAT,” yelled Kiba. “Anyway, he’s on a mission,” said Hiro as he takes a small sip from a small cup. “DOSA! DOSA,” yelled The Hokage. (Everyone is shocked, the Hokage gets up out of his pocket he takes out a picture of his team with a crack over Dosa’s face and places it on the table.)

“Sensei, what are you saying,” asked Hiro. “Crack on Dosa’s image. I don’t believe in coincidences,” said The Hokage.

“Naruto, you’re not one for superstition,” said Shikamaru. “What time,” said The Hokage. (Hiro pulls out a pocket watch.) “It’s 12:00 A.M.,” said Hiro. “Thought so, No respond… No communication scrolls for way over two days, almost three when this night passes over. I’m out, I need to get some rest,” said The Hokage. (The Hokage walks out of the bar.) “That might explain why he’s more wasted than usual, trying to wash his troubles,” said Shikamaru. “Though, could something really have happened to Dosa,” asked Hiro. “I’ll go and check on the Hokage,” said Kiba. (He seemed to have sobered up.) “No, just leave him, it is not wise to confront a drunk and angered Naruto,” said Shikamaru. “No, something’s wrong. My mother is a fierce combater being a Sage, but the best tracking squad from Konoha’s root along with Konoha’s reaper should have been suffice for capturing her… Something’s up and I don’t like it,” thought Kai.

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“Isn’t she just use a lightning speed jutsu?” ask Ryu. “Yes. But that jutsu can’t be used at all time, or the body will collapse. She won’t use it again. She need to get to Sand Village.” Says Sasuke. “And why does this mermaids following us?” ask Shisio. “These mermaids are Mizukage must trusted ninja, unlike you.” Says Orca. “You got something to prove, mermaid?” ask Shisio. “If you guys quarrel again, I’m gonna burn both of right now.” Says Mikoto. “Stay focus on them mission. If they get to Sand we in deep trouble.” Says Sasuke. “And if they reach?” ask Orca. “We will destroy the village.” Says Sasuke. “Hah, you and what army?” laughs Shisio. “Us.” Answer Sasuke. Shisio looks at Ryu. “Next time I let Sasuke have his way, punch me. Real hard.”

Near the border of Fire Country.

Daisuke and Mai is riding the black lion to Konoha when the saw a tea shop. “Max. Stop here.” Says Daisuke. The black lion stop in front of the shop, causing the customers cowers in fear. “Don’t worry people, he wont eat you.” Says Daisuke and he sit down. “I would have a green tea please. How bout you Mai?” ask Daisuke. “….” Says Mai. “C’mon you need to drink something.” Says Daisuke. “Why aren’t we following them?” ask Mai. “Because it’s stupid. I’m just a sage not a God. There is no way I can fight them alone. And you need to clear your mind. So what do you say about green tea?” says Daisuke. Mai nods. “And you Max?” ask Daisuke. “Coffee, Cream and 57 sugars.” Says Max. Daisuke, Mai and the shopkeeper look at him incredulously. “Really.” Says Max.

“Daisuke-sama. What do you know about the Mizukage?” ask Mai.

“She will tap into your deepest desires, and dangle them like a carrot in front of your nose. She will give you everything you dream of - but only until she gets what she wants.” Says Daisuke.

“You learn it from experience or information?” ask Mai. Daisuke grumbles.

“Don’t say I didn’t warn you.”

“She and Sasuke may have hidden from me, but I will never rest until both of their souls burns in the Eternal Pit.”

“And I thought Shino was creepy.” Mumbles Daisuke. Then the shopkeeper comes with their drinks.

Near the Sand Village.

“Man, its hot.” Complain Dosa. Yuki runs through the desert ignoring the heat from the sun. “Let’s take five.” Says Dosa. “No, I’m good.” Says Yuki. “Yeah right. Your knees are shaking. C’mon girl. Take five.” Says Dosa. Yuki gave in and they rest beneath a date tree. “How are you holding up?” ask Yuki. Dosa look at her at sneers. “How about you?” ask Dosa. “I’m good.” Says Yuki. “Yeah right. HAHAHAHA” laughs Dosa. Yuki looks at Dosa and she laughs too. “I never laugh like this for years.” Says Yuki. “That because you left us.” Says Dosa. Yuki looks down. Then they heard something and they look to left and saw three kids. “Kids?” ask Yuki. “Nah. More like Sand Genins.” Says Dosa. Slowly the kids approach Yuki and Dosa. “You are from Konoha right? Sand’s allies?” ask a red hair kid. “Yeah and you brats are from Sands?” ask Dosa. “We’re not brats. We’re ninjas.” Says a black hair genin. “Yes, I’m not blind.” Says Dosa. “Where are your jounin teacher?” ask Yuki. “Over there sleeping.” Points a girl with blue hair. Yuki stands up and walks towards another tree when she spotted a blonde Sand Jounin wearing a cowboy hat and a long trench coat and a tight jeans is snoring and sleeping under a tree. “What you guys doing here?” ask Yuki. “Sensei asks us to climb the tree using our feet with chakra.” Says the red hair boy. “And we can do it.” Says the black hair boy and all three climb the tree effortlessly. “Well you can tell your sensei about it.” Says Yuki. “It’s hopeless. He sleeps like a rock.” Says the blue hair girl. Yuki kneels next to him and start poking on the jounin. “Hey wake up, hey wake up, sleepy head.” Suddenly he hugs Yuki and Yuki screams and Dosa try to look while the genins just look. “What the fuck happen over there?” yelled Dosa. The red hair kid looks at Dosa.

“I don’t know. Maybe he’s doing to her what adults do.” Says the red hair boy.

“What the fuck that suppose to mean!!!!!!” yelled Dosa.

“I read in sensei’s book that couples do this when they are in love.” says the black hair boy.

“EWWWW……….” Says the blue hair girl. Dosa mouth is wide open.

“What the fuck. LET GO OF MY GIRL YOU MOTHER FUCKING PERVERT!!!!” yelled Dosa.

Yuki still screams.

“You stupid, ignorant, pathetic excuses for ninja, I’m really gonna kill you!!!!!” yelled Dosa. Suddenly Yuki stands up and kick the Sand Ninja’s groin and looks at Dosa.

“Did you just use the F word?” ask Yuki. Dosa looks up. “No.” whisper Dosa. Yuki glares at him.

“Who the fuck disturb my sleep!!!!” scream the jounin. Yuki glares at him. “What, bitch?” ask the jounin. “Did you just use the F word?” ask Yuki. “Yeah so, fuck fuck fuck, got a problem?” says the Sand jounin. “Oh boy, hey kids, you better hide if you want to have a better future.” Says Dosa and he close his eyes. The genins quickly hide behind Dosa. Yuki grabs the ninja’s collar and smiles mischievously. Then they heard some loud noises and some clangs, and then suddenly it’s quiet again. Dosa slowly open his eye.

“Is it over?” ask Dosa. Yuki nods and smiles while the Sand ninja is shaking. “Next time, don’t swear in front of her.” Says Dosa and the Sand ninja nods. “Ok, take us to Sand Village.” The ninja nods. “My name is Take. This is my genins, the red hair is Falcon, the black hair is Mar and the blue hair girl is Nyx.” Says Take. Dosa look at him. “Take, the foul mouth puppet master. I heard of you. Seems you wont be so foul mouth now.” Giggles Dosa. “What you this bit..” says Take before he looks at Yuki. “I mean this fine woman is a very talented ninja.” Says Take and he signals the group to follow him. “You really have no sympathy.” Whisper Dosa. Yuki grins at him.

Take: A famous puppet master from Sand Village and the best after Kankuro. He commands ten puppets that he called ten pale puppets. But his reputation as a foul mouth ninja even exceed Dosa. And he is a pervert too.

Falcon: The red hair genin from Take’s squad. He wears a red shirt and black shorts. He’s the typical all round genius genin that excel in everything. His wind skill is very excellent as a genin goes. He’s quite the foul mouth and he looks up to his sensei and thought he use his foul words to distract the enemy. (Which is not)

Mar: The black hair genin. He always stole his sensei adult book, even Take realize it he does nothing about it, as he taught that the best way a kid can appreciate woman. He’s as pervert as his teacher and have one puppet, Karasu that was used by Kankuro. He wears a black shirt and white shorts.

Nyx: The blue hair girl. She spent so much time with this group; she started to learn some foul words. She learning to be a medic but her skills isn’t that great right now. She wears blue sleeveless cheongsam and a white skirt.
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-Countdown to showdown! 1 day down, 2 to go until Tetsuo's plan kicks into gear.

(The scene starts off at UHE's headquarters; Ino Shika Cho walks into the room while he is carrying the beautifully assumed shank, he then tosses her on the floor. Her face is still not seen as her hair falls in front of her face as her body hits the ground. She moans as she lay there sprawled across the floor. Tank, Sakuya, and Tetsuo are still meditating even after he barged into the room.)

"Uhhh," moaned the Ichibi Host. "I brought the final host here Boss," said Ino Shika Cho. (He kicks her in her stomach to shut her up.) "Uhh," moaned the Host. "Shush it, you don't want to disturb them. To think I went easier on her; maybe I should have beaten her within an inch of her. She's cute, maybe that's why I got distracted," said Ino Shika Cho.

(Tank opens both of his eyes.)

"SHUT THE HELL UP! WE ARE CONCENTRATING; WE DON'T NEED TO HEAR YOU TALKING LOVE TO A HOST! PATHETIC," yelled Tank. (Tetsuo and Sakuya opens both of their eyes upon Tank's outburst, as Tank was the actual cause of them falling out of sync instead of Ino Shika Cho.)

"I didn't think they could hear me in that state of theirs," thought Ino Shika Cho. "Ino Shika Cho don't mind him, you weren't distracting us at all. It was his big loud ass that broke the concentration. Damn it! For once have some freaking tolerance," said Sakuya.

"Hmm," groaned Tank. "I guess I should have knocked first," said Ino Shika Cho. "It's fine; we'll just get started again. If we start right away, the feeling from the meditation will come back, so we didn't completely lose the knack from gathering the chakra; thus, the chakra is still in our bodies somewhere. Let's get back to work immediately," said Tetsuo.

"Should I help too," asked Ino Shika Cho. "No, since Michi isn't here right now, we can't apply the 5 element seal to disrupt the Bijuu's chakra, therefore if we put her in the containment with the other hosts, she might cause an upstart and free the hosts. So, you must use your shadow possession and keep her restrained," said Tetsuo.

"Alright boss, when do we strike," asked Ino Shika Cho. (Tank and Sakuya closes their eyes again and forms handseals.) "In two day's time; once Blank, Michi, and Oita reaches Konoha and captures Nila, by then I'll have the portals opened in order to bail them out of there. Tomorrow Asura will make it here with the meteor. We will connect to the Meteor via our chakra channel.

Once we do that, I will order the Hosts to be thrown into the meteor; a small portion of the chakra will be split among us all, giving us the chakra to fend off the allied nations and any other threats. Another porption of the meteor will be used on the Kages to defeat them. The final and last portion of the meteor will be used on the average civilians in order to strengthen them, leading to further our plot once we get hold of the remaining Bijuu; Mizugakure will be our nation to house our military for a grueling war for understanding," said Tetsuo.

(Tetsuo then closes his eyes and makes a handseal, as he continues the meditation with Sakuya and Tank. Ino Shika Cho makes a handseal and forms the shadow possession; this connects to the host’s body on the floor. The Scene switches to outside the gates of Suna.)

“It’s fine, I can walk like a man now,” said Dosa. “Are you sure? Don’t be acting hard in front of kids now,” said Yuki. (She let’s Dosa down however, as he slightly falls, she grabs him and he throws his arm around Yuki’s neck.) “I told you,” said Yuki. “Whatever, at least my feet and legs can build up strength,” said Dosa. (Take looks at Yuki and Dosa all embraced like.) “Sensei,” said Mar.

(He pulls Take’s pants leg to draw his attention.) “What is it,” asked Take. “Look at them. The picture reminds me of an image in one of your books,” whispered Mar. “AHH, so content and in love they are. The war hero loses his allies in battle, yet is saved from an awful end as his love comes in to scoop him from certain death. Man I love dat shit! I need to get fuckin laid now,” said Take.

“Laid? That must be what grownups do,” said Falcon. “What’s laid sensei? Sounds cool, I want to try that,” said Nyx. “No you don’t! Stop buttin into my dialogue you snot nosed brats,” yelled Take. “Guys, we can hear everything you say. Please, at least try to be discrete with your silly shit,” said Dosa. (Yuki starts to giggle.) “See you brats, shut yer yaps,” yelled Take. (They all cower and fear and hide behind Dosa and Yuki’s legs.) “Brats! Anyway, I’m going to escort you two to the recover station, follow me,” said Take. (He moves in front of the group.)

“Hey, I need to talk with the Kazekage,” said Dosa. “Dosa, you really need to rest and think about everything else later,” said Yuki. “No, this is important, Kazekage needs to know what happened with Mizukage, at the very least, Uzumaki Sensei needs to know, and Kazekage isn’t just some ally, he’s a child friend of Uzumaki Sensei,” said Dosa. “I guess you’ve really thought this through. There’s something The Kazekage as well as the Hokage needs to know too about my pursuers as well,” said Yuki. “Hmm,” mumbled Take.

(The Scene switches outside the Kazekage’s office.) “Kids, go play with Teru at the meantime, it is time for grown up business,” said Take. “BUT,” yelled all three kids. “Fine, I’ll teach you all a sweet ninjutsu skill if you play with Teru for the meantime,” said Take. “K,” yelled the students.

(They rush off. Dosa and Yuki nods, as Take pushes the door open. Kazekage is in the middle, while Kankuro, Temari, and other advisors sit surrounding him in a circular desk.)

“Take,” said Kankuro. “Sensei,” said Take. “Why are ninja from a foreign land here,” asked old man with a long beard and bald head. “Gaara, isn’t that man with the limp,” said Temari before being cut off. “Yes, it seems he’s one of the Hokage’s students who participated in the war. And if I’m not mistaken, the lady holding him up is also one of high recognized title. The Hokage has told us not to mess with her; she must still be connected somehow,” said Kazekage.

“Take, why did you bring them here, especially the injured one,” said skinny man with a long head and thin mustache. “These folk wish to speak with the Kazekage,” said Take. “We won’t allow it without prior consent from Hokage if they are indeed Konoha ninja,” said a man who is covered head to toe in a robe and scarf. (Dosa lets go off Yuki and walks forward on a limp.)

“You have to listen! Mizukage had,” said Dosa before being cut off by the Kazekage. “No need to explain, I’ll hear you out unlike what the other council members state. The Hokage is my friend, I don’t need persuasion, or traditional law if an old time friend needs help with whatever it is,” said Kazekage.
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“Hmm, the Kazekage is a generous man,” thought Yuki. “Are you sure about this Kazekage; without the proper proceedings,” said man who is cloaked. “Listen to the Kazekage for once,” said Kankuro. “Now, from the beginning, tell me what happened you two. Were you tracking Mizukage,” asked Kazekage.

(The Scene switches to Konoha. Mai is walking now, as she is escorting Daisuke and Max to the Hokage’s office. People around them take notice, soon Neji approaches Mai.)

“A Sage,” thought Neji.

“Welcome home. Where’s the others and why is Daisuke of the Lion here,” asked Neji. “They’re… I’m sorry it was tough ride, we were defeated; and I was the only one left. Daisuke saved me and put me back on my feet,” said Mai. “Impossible, what the hell did you guys face? And where is Dosa? I can’t help but think something like this would be avoided with his help,” said Neji.

“He was nowhere to be found, besides, his chakra faded before I was knocked out,” said Mai. “Nooo… The Hokage will be disheartened to discover that,” said Neji. “No time! I need to speak with The Hokage immediately! Serious matters are to be taken into consideration. I’m talking about the SNA,” said Daisuke.

“I see, a Sage contacting a Sage, must be urgent. Right, just this way, I’ll lead you. Mai, please contact Sai and let him know you survived. And Mai,” said Neji. (Mai looks saddened.) “Please, it’s alright, I need to tell The Hokage about what we were up against,” said Mai. “I see, then I won’t stop you,” said Neji.

“Shall we be moving,” asked Daisuke. “Yes, follow me,” said Neji. (They rush off to the Hokage’s office, as the scene switches over to inside the main temple of the Hyuuga clan’s establishment. Nila is dressed in a white robe with a yellow wrap going around her waist to hold the robe steady. She has no shoes on as well. Her hair is pinned up into a bun. She is soon surrounded by many Hyuuga clan members, 5 on each side. There is a chair in the middle of the room. She sits down.)

“Nila, welcome to the family,” said Elder Hiashi. “Thank you sir,” said Nila. (Nila looks over to Inabi, as Inabi smiles. Nila soon has a flash back to last night; moments after Inabi left her room. Hinata opens the door much to Nila’s shock.) “M, Mother,” mumbled Nila. (Hinata walks over to Nila.) “I heard, you know I’m not a light sleeper. So, what will you do,” asked Hinata. “Mom, if you are strongly against it I swear I wouldn’t,” said Nila. (Hinata quickly embraces Nila and draws her closer.)

“Mom,” mumbled Nila. “If this is what you want, then I won’t stop you. You’re becoming an adult with her own dreams and motivations. Every time I look at you, slowly remind me of your father. The motivation to make change and branch out from the usual way of thinking, I’m just afraid you’d break away too soon, and I might not see you as often. But now, I came to the conclusion that it is time to let go,” cried Hinata as she lets her go.

“Mom,” mumbled Nila. “So, what is it that you desire,” asked Hinata. (Nila smiles.) “I want to do things on my own for a change. I want to be known for my own talents, not just known because I'm the Hokage's daughter. That is my mission, and if I have to be the head of the Hyuuga clan to realize that, then so be it,” said Nila.

“Good,” smiled Hinata. (The Scene switches back to the present. Inside a hospital room, Shun wakes up as he sits up. He is wrapped in bandages and his dawning a blue hospital coat. Shun unwraps his bandages on his face revealing his face free from scars. He then proceeds to unwrap his hands, afterwards, he rips out the IV tubes that are connected to him. He then notices flowers, balloons and get better cards from his fellow villagers and friends. He picks up one among many that are left near an end table near his left.)

-Dear Mr. Shun, I just want to thank you for all of the help, especially when I decided to let you tag along. (Shun stops reading there and tosses the note to the side and sighs.)

“What? She was the one who meddled; just plain insanity! I’ll at least look at that crazy Hokage’s note,” said Shun. (He picks up the Hokage’s after shuffling through the others and begins to read it.)

-Hey Big guy! I appreciate you taking good care of my baby girl. How about after you get all patched up you, and our gang go for a drink and poker, just like the old days. (Shun stops right there and sighs.)

“Like I should have expected something more from that goon of a Kage… Heh, if Lee, Kiba, or Choji are there at our supposed hang out, they can count me out of the loop,” thought Shun. “Wow! How long have I been out resting,” asked Shun. (Shun looks at a calendar that is on the right side of his bed, which sits on an end table.)

“WHAT! I’ve been out for roughly 2 weeks! Man, anything could have happened when I’ve been away in this coma,” said Shun. (He gets out of bed, yet his bones in his feet are bothering him, causing him to sit back down on his bed.) “Dang! It seems I haven’t completely recovered from the red’s pill adverse effects. I'll probably need a day or so before I fully recover though, Choji did warn me that since I wasn’t part of his clan, the effects would be worse on my body, especially so if my body was weakened prior. (Shun rubs his head.) I still have quite the headache from the pill lessening the brain's response to pain receptors.

Though, I can’t just sit here, I have to know if everything is alright, I can’t just sit here complacently,” said Shun. (He gets up and starts walking out of the door. The Scene switches to the Hokage’s office. After Daisuke and Mai told them everything that had transpired, The Hokage uses Rasengan to destroy his desk in anger.)

“DAMN! How Could I let something like this happen?! Damn it, damn it, damn it! What kind of a Kage am I? Sai’s best unit, Dosa! He was my student, just like family! He, fuck it all,” yelled The Hokage. (Tears start to run down his cheeks from both eyes, Shikamaru puts his arm around him in order to comfort him.)

“Ahh man Naruto, but destroying the table is making you out to be irrational in front of a fellow Sage,” said Shikamaru. “Mai, go inform Sai of what just happened and tell him to report to me ASAP,” yelled The Hokage. “Yes sir,” said Mai. (A tear rushes down her face as she rushes off. She has a flash back of Kou, Tabito, and then finally Dosa. She gets to the hall and falls to her knees, and then she starts to emotionally break. The Scene switches back to the office.)

“I’m sorry, Hokage, but there are more pressing concerns, such as the SNA,” said Daisuke. “I know, you contacted me for that, unfortunately Kyo was killed in battle, and Mizukage has allied herself with her old squad, and met up with Sasuke and his new dangerous group of characters. Is that right so far based off Mai's intepretation of the facts,” asked The Hokage. “Yes, though the SNA is the most dangerous at the moment,” said Daisuke. “I concur, that is why I have the 8 tails with me, who has three of the Bijuu sealed within scrolls. We can put up quite the defense with you on our side,” said The Hokage.

“It seems the Hokage has taken the appropriate steps,” said Max. “Shikamaru, signal the siren,” said The Hokage. “You don’t know mean,” questioned Shikamaru. “Yeah, call in all of the Jounin, Special Jounin, and Chunnin commanders to the Barracks! I will talk with them soon, and while you are at it, arrange for the transcript for the Kages, let them know that we are attacking first! It is time we put an end to this strife. From this day forward until otherwise, mark this as the 5TH SHINOBI WAR! The allied Nations, Mizukage’s forces which now includes Sasuke’s gang, and SNA are all competing for the culture and politics that govern this world,” yelled The Hokage. “A three way battle it appears,” said Daisuke. (The scene switches to the office of Amegakure. Reika posing as the leader receives a special greeting from Dream, as he is escorted by Kimiko and Kakuya.)

“My lord, the 100 Kakashi clone project is ready for deployment,” said Dream. “Good, now I will command control over this village from the curtains,” said Reika. “Are you joining this strife,” asked Dream. “I aide with the strongest in the meantime, so whatever side falls, I will be against; remember I will be poising as the leader of this village, it would be wise for me to lay low unless we are attacked,” said Reika.

“One problem, I forgot the corpse of Kyo,” said the sighing Dream. “YOU WHAT,” yelled Reika. “I actually forgot it myself,” thought Kimiko. “FOOLZ! If they discover his corpse and try to contact this village of the news, my identity would be blown. The only reason why I agreed for you to come, Dream, was because I told you to use the corpse sealing method to erase all traces of his body,” yelled Reika. “Heh, heh,” mumbled the frightened Dream.

(The Scene switches to the outskirts of the Sand Village. Sasuke’s team approaches the Sand village as the sun glares intensely; apparently, it’s the afternoon. The Marine Squad is already ahead of everyone else.)

“Marine Squad, fall back, let’s approach this from a different angle,” yelled Sasuke. “Acting like he’s the boss,” said Shark. “Reika put him in charge Shark, so we have to obey,” said Orca. “Hmm,” groaned Shark. (They rush back to the group.)

“So, you’re not just attacking the Sand because of Yuki hmm,” said Mikoto. “Correct, the Sand is the strongest ally to Konoha; it almost slipped my mind, so taking them out first would be suffice; also, Yuki may have the Kazekage informing The Hokage of our arrival; we have to make sure she is stopped,” said Sasuke.

“Suppose we do once we finally attack he village? Will we attack from various angles via radio communications,” asked Shisio. “An attack on the village with our low numbers wouldn’t be easy,” said Ryu. “Mikoto, how’s the temperature feeling,” asked Sasuke. (Sasuke smirks.) “So, that’s his game,” said Shisio.
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“What the hell, it’s obviously hot,” yelled Shark. “Just watch, we’re about to see the Sa-mosutatto at its finest,” said Orca

(Shark and Orca look confused.) “Heh, I’m sure they’re used to the blistering heat. How about I make it -360 degrees below zero and cool em off,” smiled Mikoto. “He could do that,” questioned Dolphin. “You guys better do something to protect yourselves, or you’ll be human pop sickles,” smiled Mikoto. (Everyone start to get a little nervous.) “I’ll use Susanoo, just stay within range when we reach inside the gates of the Sand,” said Sasuke.

Next Time: Urgency! The Shinobi world has now become an unstable climate with wars soon raging from three parties!
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Night time at the Sand Village.

Dosa is lying on the hospital bed and Yuki is sleeping on the chair next to him. He looks at the window and notice snow is falling. He then wakes up Yuki.

“Hei Yuki, is there snow at Suna?”

“Are you joking? Is a freaking desert. There is no snow here.” Mumbles Yuki.

“Then what’s that?” ask Dosa. Yuki looks at the window and saw the snow start to falls heavily.

“Mikoto.” Says Yuki.

At the Kazekage Office.

“What do you take of this snow Dak?” ask Gaara. The fully masked ninja looks at Gaara. “It’s cold?” says Dak. Gaara gives a small laugh. “These snows have Sa-mosutatto sign written all over it.” Says Gaara. Gaara looks at the window. “Do you think Sasuke and his friends allied with SNA?” ask Gaara. “If he is, then we got a serious problem.” Says Dak. Gaara looks at him. “Cause he is harder to kill than a cockroach on steroids.” Says Dak. “Gather the jounin. We will engage them before they enters.” Says Gaara. Dak winks and jumps to the door. Gaara makes a hand seal.

Outside Sand Village.

“How is it, Mikoto?” ask Sasuke. “Good. In an hour Sand Village will be Snow Village.” Says Mikoto. “I’m bored.” Says Shark. “Just wait a little longer.” Says Orca. On top of them an eye is looking down at their activities. Back to the Kazekage office. Gaara opens his eye and he went straight to the jounin building. Inside the jounins are waiting for their and Gaara enters the room. “Dak, all jounin are here?” ask Gaara. “All 65 jounin are here including that snot nose brat Teru.” Says Dak. “HEIII!!!” yelled Teru.

“Alright calm down. Sasuke from Konoha, Shisio, Orca, Shark and Dolphin from Mist, and Mikoto from Sa-mosutatto are trying to cripple us.” Says Gaara. “So? We kill them. Problem solves.” Says an old scarred face ninja. “I’m not a violent man, but Sasuke isn’t a reasonable man. Scar is right we have to kill him and his associates.” Says a dark skinned ninja with afro hair. “Mikoto and Sasuke are the biggest threat, but the others, especially Shisio is considered S-level too.” Says Teru.

The jounins looks at a huge man wearing a snow cap, a white jacket and have a small goatee that is standing at a far corner of the room. “What?” ask the big man. “You’re a former SNA. Maybe you can take care of Shisio.” Ask Teru. The big man took out a cigarette and lit it with the fire on his fingertips. “Among the elementals of SNA, only Hiro manage to go toe to toe with Shisio. I may need someone to back me up.”

“And you got me.”

Sazx looks at the door and saw Yuki. He then looks at Gaara. Gaara nods. Gaara looks at Kankuro. “Me, Take and Teru can take care of the Marines Squad.” Says Kankuro. Gaara looks at the jounins. “Ok. Scar, Kuja and Dax will take care of Mikoto.” Says Gaara and the scarred face ninja and the dark skin afro ninja nods. “Kankuro, Take and Teru will attack the marine squad. Sazx and Yuki will take care of Shisio. Sasuke is mine. The rest will split in three team. One team will make sure the enemies don’t infiltrate the Sand. The second team will create a perimeter to make sure there is no more uninvited guest. The third team will support the attack team in battle.” Says Gaara. Kankuro looks at Gaara. “Maybe its good Temari went to Konoha this morning.” Says Kankuro. “Yeah, but when she hears of this, she going to be one piss off ninja.” Says Gaara.

Teru looks at Scar. “Sensei will you be alright?” ask Teru. I maybe one cranky old man. But I’m a cranky old man with skills!!!” yelled Scar and his false tooth comes out from his mouth. Teru looks at his sensei false teeth on the ground and Scar quickly grab it and put it back in his mouth.

At the lab under Rain.

“Reika was mad because you forgot about the corpse.” Says Kakuya. Dream grins and look at her.

“Do you think I left it there because I forgot?”

“You mean your doing that on purpose?” ask Kakuya.
“Yes.” Says Dream. “Why?” ask Kimiko. “The Hokage have declared war against her. Just as I planned.” Says Dream. Dream Kakuya and Kimiko walks along hundreds of tubes fill with Kakashi and they reached a door and Dream uses his key to open it. Inside there are rows and rows of giant tubes fill with humanoid creature and in the far corner a giant tube with a large head floating in it. “What is that?” ask Kakuya. “Jyubi’s head. And what ever pieces of it I manage to collect.” Says Dream. “What is your plan?” ask Kimiko. “Immortality. And then reshape the world to my liking. But first I must get rid peoples that can stop me.” Explain Dream. “That’s why you put SNA, Reika, Sasuke and the villages in a collision course.” Says Kimiko. Dream grins.

Outside Sand.

“We’ve got movement.” Says Orca and a dozen of ninja appear and surround them. “Gaara.” Says Sasuke as he looks at Gaara who stands before him. Shisio looks at Sazx who’s body is covered in flame armor and Yuki stands next to him. “Sazx. The fire elemental taijutsu user and Yuki, long time no see.” Says Shisio. “You hated Sasuke too right. Why join him?” ask Yuki. “True. I never liked him. And I don’t give a crap what you want to do with him. But I need him so I can get Hiro and cut him into pieces, like what he did to Amy.” Says Shisio. The flame on Sazx feet intense and it shoot him at towards Shisio like a jet propulsion. “Flame Fist!!!!” yelled Sazx and tries to punch Shisio but was block by Shisio’s blade. “Flame armor is different from Raiton Armor. It doesn’t have speed like Raiton but its flame can create a jet propulsion to give instance speed, but only in straight line. But it offensive power is stronger than Raiton.” Thinks Shisio while parrying Sazx attack. Yuki appear behind Shisio with her kunai on Shisio’s neck. “Do you think Hiro will do that?” ask Yuki. “War change people. You should know that better then anyone.” Says Shisio and an aura emerge from him and push both Yuki and Sazx from him. “Now do both of you back down, or should I throw both of your corpses to the nearest oasis?” ask Shisio.

In front of Mikoto, Scar, Kuja and Dax are standing before him.

“Mikoto old pal. I haven’t seen you since…. We never met before right? Ypu should get out more.” giggles Dax. “You dare challenge me?” ask Mikoto. “Dare? No we don’t dare challenge you, we guarantee to kill you!!!” yelled Scar and Kuja puts on two porous metal device located on each of his arm. “Ninja Technique: Sound Vibration!!!!” yelled Kuja and sound wave comes out from his metal device and knocks Mikoto backwards. “Sound?” ask Mikoto and then he realizes Dax is behind him. Body alteration technique: Arms blades!!!” says Dax and both of his arms turn to into blade and tries to slash him but Mikoto avoided his attack. “Wind Element: Wind Prison.” Says Scar and a sphere surround Mikoto. “Now, I will decreased it size and the wind will cut you to shreds.” Says Scar. Mikoto sneers.

Shark, Orca and Dolphin are surrounded by Kankuro, Teru and Take. “What’s the plan?” ask Dolphin. “Just like Reika’s order. We will assist Mr. Sasuke.” Says Orca.

Scar: The cranky old coot from Sand. Back in his glory days, Scar was a skilled Sand ninja. He was one of the best of the best. He eventually became old and went to the academy, where he would teach and watch over the next generation and study their progression for many, many, many, many, many, many, many years and the last student he teaches seriously is Teru. He is very old and does not move very well but he knows most jutsu from Sand Village.

Kuja: The dark skinned afro ninja who is skills in sound manipulation. He used his porous metal device just like Dosu from Sound Village but he studies it more and expands the sound technique to a point he can create a vibration that can shatter rocks and use sound to create genjutsu. He creates a sound division in Sand Village.

Dax: Have the kekkei genkai to transform his body into various offensive and defensive weapons. Dax is usually laid back and energetic and doesn't appear to be serious most of the time, making it difficult for some to believe he is one of the aggressive Sand ninja. Despite his laid back attitude, he is a skill taijutsu user with impressive speed, agility, and dexterity suit with his kekkei genkai.

Sazx: The Flame of Fury. He is a taijutsu brute who enhances his ability with his flame armor. One of the SNA elementals along with Hiro and Raitei. He is the master of fire elements and uses it to enhance his taijutsu to scorch and burned his opponent and his surrounding.
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