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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Question. Does the creator have to exist in some form in your universe? Can he just die off and everything be fine?
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
No...because he has to keep the natural order, the world in balance. Without him, the realms of Hell, Heaven and Earth would simply be destroyed. It would be chaos.
@kiddjutsu: i'm still waiting for your opinion.
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The New Shinobi World
*Scene opens at the new main gate entrance into Konoha. A group of shinobi is approaching the gate. A close up shows Mei and Darui walking side by side into Konoha. Behind them is another group, with Kitsuchi walking in the middle. The next panel shows Gaara flying in the air on a disc of sand. All of the kages are shown heading towards the Hokage’s office. The next panel shows Naruto opening the door to his apartment. Jiraya and Mito look up and run towards their father. He grabs both, pulling them up into a hug. The children giggle as Naruto walks in, kissing Hinata on the lips.* Naruto: I’m back kids. Jiraya: Daddy, will you play with us and Tsunade? Naruto: Sure… *Naruto puts the two children down and goes and kisses Hinata again, this time lingering a little longer. He then joins the children in the living area on all fours as Mito and Tsunade crawl onto his back. He then chases Jiraya around on all fours. Scene switches to Hinata and Sakura in the kitchen.* Sakura: I never would have thought that Naruto would be…. like this. Hinata: Yeah… So how did you find out about Ino and Tenten? Sakura: Ino told me yesterday, and I saw Tenten today at the hospital. Hinata: You diagnosed her? Sakura: Yeah. Hinata: That leaves Temari now, because isn’t Matsuri due at any moment? Sakura: Yeah… and she’s stressing out over it, too. Hinata: How come? Sakura: She said that Gaara has been telling her that he’s going to be gone on a mission soon. *Hinata stares at Naruto at the mention of this, unbeknownst to Sakura.* Sakura: I mean, he’s the Kazekage for crying out loud. And no one has went outside the seal… except for Naruto as you said. Hinata in thought, staring at Naruto: What are you up to? Hinata: I’m sure it’s nothing. She just needs to calm down. We need to have another girls’ night out again. Sakura: Yeah, but Ino and Tenten aren’t supposed to drink now. Hinata: Then we need to have a luncheon then. Sakura: Ok, we could do that. *Both women realize how quiet it is in the apartment now. The look towards the living area where Naruto and the kids were, seeing the kids laying on top of a sleeping Naruto.* Hinata: Won’t you and Tsunade stay for dinner tonight? Sakura: Nah… I’ve got to get home and fix dinner for Sasuke. *Hinata nods her head.* Sakura: Is Naruto… ready? Hinata: For what? Sakura: You know… to take over as Hokage? Hinata: I remember when we were in the academy and that was all he could talk about. And now, he’s always saying he has something else to do before he accepts the title. Sakura: Yeah, but that’s Naruto for you. Hinata: Yeah. Sakura: He knows there is a dangerous task ahead. Hinata: And instead of sending someone else as a kage would usually do, he wants to go himself. That is my husband. *Sakura goes and picks up a sleeping Tsunade. She holds Tsunade in one arm and hugs Hinata with the other and then leaves the apartment. Hinata is seen still preparing the meal, now getting more meat out of the fridge for Naruto. Scene switches to the Hokage’s office, with all of the kages standing before Sasuke.* Sasuke: In three months’ time, the barrier will dissipate, and the gods will be allowed into our safe haven. At that point in time, our top safety priority will be Uzumaki-Namikaze Hinata. She can put the barrier back up at any moment. Darui: What are we going to do about the Ryun? Sasuke: Thus far, we’ve succeeded at keeping them at bay. But something tells me that they really haven’t tried to strike at us. Mei: How so? Sasuke: We know they are led by the Dragon Sage, Yakushi Kabuto. We also know of their general, Ryu. We also know that Ryu has assumed the powers that once belonged to Orochimaru. We also know that this army is clones, stronger clones than the Zetsu clones from the last war. Our forces are prepared, but considering how fast they destroyed Kirigakure, it leads me to believe that they’ve been holding back. And it worries me as well. Kitsuchi: That is understood, but why hold this meeting? Sasuke: Because several pieces of information have come about. Kitsuchi: Please, do share. Sasuke: It is known that Suna was destroyed almost 5 years ago, the same day as Kumo. It was believed that one of the gods did this atrocity like what almost happened in Iwa. But on that day, all of the gods were present in the land of whirlpools. Darui: Ok, tell us what we don’t know. Sasuke: There were three human beings at that time known to wield that power. Mei: You, Naruto… Darui: And my old man. So you think that Naruto or my dad had a hand in all of this? Sasuke: I doubt it was Naruto, because none of his jutsus leave the marks that were found on the bodies in Suna. But… Darui: My father would never do such a thing. *slamming his fist against the wall, knocking a hole through the wall*. Sasuke: I’m not making any accusations at this point in time, but there is evidence that makes this a possibility. Mei: Such as… Sasuke: Ei was supposed to be on the boat that was coming to get us from the land of whirlpools. We met him at the dock. That left a window of half a day. That’s enough time for the second fastest man to head from Port City to Suna and back. At his speed, he could get there in less than one hour. And we all know how powerful he was. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Darui is seen with a scowl on his face staring at Sasuke.*
Sasuke: Also, a bit of info that has not been released to any of you is… Baki and Tsunade had the same wound, right through the chest and heart. Darui: You’re saying my father…. he took down Suna and the Hokage? Sasuke: I’m not saying he did it. But we strongly believe that the two are linked. Kitsuchi: So you think we may have some traitors in our ranks? Sasuke: Knowing Kabuto, it wouldn’t surprise me. It also wouldn’t surprise me that this is all a rouse to drive us apart. Darui: So what do you recommend, Hokage? Sasuke: The only people to know the information that I have told you are my assistant, Shizune, Konoha’s lead jounin Nara Shikaku, and Hatake Kakashi. They’ve kept this secret over these years. We shall do the same. Mei: Agreed. Right now, we cannot afford dissension amongst our peoples. Sasuke: And finally… *Sasuke turns to Gaara.* Sasuke: Tell Naruto that before he leaves tomorrow morning I wish to speak with him… alone. Gaara smirking: Aye, Hokage-sama. *The kages begin to leave as Sasuke approaches Darui.* Sasuke: There is something I would like to speak with you about in person. *Darui stares at Sasuke coldly as the rest of the kages leave. Sasuke walks back to his desk and pulls out a picture. He walks back to Darui and hands to picture to him.* Sasuke: Did you see a mark similar to this on your father. *The scene shows the cursed mark.* Darui: No, why do you ask? Sasuke: I was hoping there would have been one. This would have cleared your father. Darui: What do you mean? Sasuke: Both Baki and Tsunade had a clean pierced hold in their chests. Clean, with the inside burnt a small bit. I can think of only one attack to be so precise, and only one man fast enough to do it. My question is why? Darui: What are you saying? Sasuke: This doesn’t add up. We all knew that Tsunade and your father were going to retire together and travel. Darui: So you think someone was controlling him? Sasuke: If it was him, yes. But I can’t prove it, and that’s what we’re going to need, is proof. Darui: So why did you think it had something to do with that mark? Sasuke: Call it a hunch. *Scene switches to a tavern. Shikaku, Choza, and Inoichi are all seen at the bar.* Shikaku: So you’re going to be a grandpa huh? Inoichi: Yeah. I don’t know if I’m proud or pissed off. Choza: What do you mean? Inoichi: There’s only one way a baby is made… Choza and Shikaku simultaneously: Ohhhh…. *Scene shows a table with Anko, Kurenai, and Kakashi sitting at it. Gai approaches the table with two pitchers of beer. A glass is poured for everyone. They’re all holding their glasses up for a toast.* Gai: To my friend Kakashi… and his new girlfriend. *Anko blushes. They all clink their drinks. Gai downs his, while the rest take sips.* Kurenai: So, you two are going public? Anko: Yeah. Kurenai: Why did you wait so long? Kakashi looking at Anko: I’ll let you answer that one. Anko: I had to finish sowing my wild oats. *Anko grabs Kakashi’s arm and cuddles up to him.* Anko: I’m just glad he waited for me. Gai: Yeah… now Kakashi is the only one on his team who doesn’t have a child or is expecting one. Anko: We can take care of that. Gai: Ah… the essence of youth. *Scene switches to Naruto and Hinata’s apartment. Naruto and Hinata are tucking in Jiraya and Mito and kissing them good night. The couple stands in the children’s doorway looking at their children. They then head to their quarters.* Hinata: So… when were you going to tell me about it? Naruto: About what? Hinata: Sakura told me Mitsuri said that Gaara has a mission for tomorrow. *Naruto sighes.* Hinata: So spill it mister. Naruto: We’re heading to Sunagakure tomorrow. Hinata: We? Naruto: Yeah, we. Hinata: Who is we? Naruto: All of us jinchuuriki. Hinata: Why are you taking all of them? I mean you can get away from anybody, but are you going to be able to protect everyone else? Naruto: Losing faith in me? Hinata sighes: No…. I just wish you wouldn’t keep things from me, that’s all. Naruto: No offense my love, but you’re not the best at keeping secrets. *The two enter their bedroom and begin to disrobe. Hinata is ticked off at Naruto’s last comment.* Hinata: What do you mean by that? Naruto: You were the one that told everyone you mastered the FTG. Hinata: So… Naruto: Baby… you’re just too honest. Hinata: Too honest?! Keep digging that hole mister! *Naruto is now in just his boxers while Hinata has just slipped on a nightie.* Naruto: But baby… *Hinata looks at Naruto with arms crossed, accidentally accentuating her busom.* Naruto: You have no idea how sexy you are right now. Hinata: I don’t care. You’ve pissed me off Naruto. *Naruto smiles and walks over to Hinata, who keeps her arms crossed.* Naruto: I won’t keep anymore secrets from you, at all. Hinata pouting a bit: You promise? *Naruto grabs her butt and picks her up, Hinata wrapping her arms and legs around Naruto.* Naruto kissing Hinata: Promise. Hinata in between kissing: Ok… I… trust…. you. *Naruto lays Hinata down on the bed as the two continue to make out. Scene switches to the Uchiha district. Sasuke is seen walking home. A Konoha anbu lands before him.* Anbu: Hokage-sama… Sasuke: Any news? Anbu: No sir. Sasuke: I know he’s going to make a move soon. Anbu: Why would he hide it from you? Sasuke: Because he knows something I don’t, or at least he thinks that. Anbu: What if he goes beyond the seal again? Sasuke: Other than Gaara, do any of the other kages know of this? Anbu: No sir. Sasuke: Let’s keep it that way. We can’t have word spreading that Naruto leaves the seal. Anbu: Do you still trust him after what we have found out? Sasuke: Aye, as should you. Anbu: I have never lost faith in him Hokage-sama. Sasuke: Then never lose faith in him. *The Anbu disappears. Sasuke continues home. Scene switches to Sakura and Sasuke’s house. Tsunade is shown sleeping in her bed next a big stuffed slug. Sakura is in bed propped up, writing down notes. Sasuke enters the room and begins to undress.* Sakura: How did it go today? Sasuke: Better than planned. Sakura: Guess what I found out today. Sasuke smirking: What? Sakura: Naruto has been going beyond the seal. Sasuke wide-eyed: How did you find that out? Sakura: Hinata told me. Sasuke: Have you told anyone else? Sakura: No, and I’m not going to. Have long have you known? Sasuke: For about a year now. Sakura: What do you think he is after? Sasuke: There is no telling. This seal is both a blessing and a curse. Sakura: None of our sensors can see past it? Sasuke: Aye. Sakura: But that is not what is bothering you, is it? Sasuke: I’m still trying to figure out how it happened. *Sakura puts down her notes, and crawls over to Sasuke’s side of the bed, hugging him from behind.* Sakura: You know, I can’t wait till Naruto takes over as Hokage. Sasuke: Why is that? Sakura: So my husband can come and have his way with me more often than he does now. *Sakura begins to kiss Sasuke’s neck, allowing Sasuke to relax more. The two then kiss, rolling over, with Sasuke on top of Sakura. Scene switches to a bedroom, with two people writhing on the bed. The person on top rolls over, revealing Anko. The next panel shows Kakashi’s eyes and the bridge of his nose only.* Anko: That was… Kakashi: I know. *Anko rolls over onto her side facing Kakashi.* Anko: So now that we’re public… Kakashi: What is it Anko? Anko: Is it too soon for me to ask to move in with you? *The shadow of Kakashi is seen sitting up.* Kakashi: I don’t know if we’re ready for that. *The panel shows Kakashi’s eyes looking at Anko.* Kakashi: Let’s sleep on it, ok? Anko half-heartedly smiling: Ok. Kakashi: Besides… we both live in cramped apartments. *Panel zooms in on Anko’s face showing her frustration and heart break. Scene switches to the Hokage’s office in the morning, with the sun beating down on the Hokage mountain. Naruto and Sasuke are seen inside his office.* Sasuke: How did you sleep last night? Naruto smirking: Pretty good. Looks like you had a good night as well *points to a hickey on Sasuke’s neck*. *Sasuke does a nervous chuckle while Naruto giggles.* Sasuke: I know Naruto. Naruto: You know what? Sasuke: That you’ve been going beyond the seal. I also know that you know Ei killed Tsunade and destroyed Suna. Why haven’t you told me any of this? Naruto: I have my reasons. Sasuke: Dammit Naruto, you’re supposed to be the Hokage, not me. There’s a reason why my face hasn’t been added to the mountain. I’m just an interim. Why won’t you take this job. Naruto: I can’t, just yet. Sasuke staring Naruto in the eye: I don’t know exactly what it is that you are after. Just make sure no one else knows about it. *Naruto flashes out as Sasuke sits at the desk. Scene switches to a park. Hinata, Sakura, Ino, Tenten, and Temari are seen. Matsuri is the last to enter the scene.* Ino: We haven’t done this in a long time. Sakura: I know. Temari: And we don’t have any booze either. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Hinata, Sakura, Ino, and Tenten all look at each other and smile.*
Matsuri: I can’t have any anyway, so I’m glad you didn’t tempt me. Hinata: Aren’t you due any moment Matsuri? Matsuri: Aye. Ino: So I’ve got a confession, ladies… I’m pregnant!!! *All the ladies gush and congratulate her.* Tenten looking at Sakura: I’ve got some news, too. I’m pregnant as well. *All the women squeal again and congratulate her.* Ino: So when are you and Shikamaru gonna have one, Temari? Temari: I’m not sure we’re ready yet. Sakura: So Ino, how has Sai taken the news? Ino: He’s happy. Sakura: Happy? Ino: Yeah. It’s just that he’s been busy lately. Sakura: So what about Lee, Tenten? Tenten: I haven’t told him yet. Ino: How come? Tenten: Are you kidding? Once he and Gai-sensei find out… All of the women: Ohh…. *Jiraya, Mito, and Tsunade come running over to all of the ladies.* Mito: Momma, do you think Sieta will come and play with us today? Hinata: Maybe. Jiraya: I want to play with Sieta!!! Tsunade: I want to play with Sieta!!!! Mito: I want to play with Sieta too!!!! *All of the women laugh as Kurenai approaches the group with Sieta.* Kurenai: Who would have thought… *Sieta runs over to the kids, then they go play.* Ino: So is it true what they say? Sakura: What do you mean? Ino: Does the sex drop off after you’ve had a kid? Sakura grins: That isn’t what has deprived mine and Sasuke’s. Ino: Oh… Sakura looking at Hinata: It’s her husband… not accepting the title of Hokage. *Hinata blushes.* Sakura: But we still have some good times. Tenten: When was the last time? Sakura: Last night. *All of the women giggle.* Ino: Spill the details. Sakura: I will not spill all of the details. Ino: Then spill some of them. Sakura: I don’t know if I should… Temari: Where’s Anko when you need her? Kurenai in thought: Probably trying to get at Kakashi. Sakura: Well… Let’s just say that I helped Sasuke go to sleep last night… and I helped wake him up… and I got a hefty serving of protein this morning. Ino: Oh my gawd…. no you didn’t. Sakura nodding her head: Yes, I did. Matsuri: Isn’t that degrading? Sakura: Think about it… you control his every whim… that’s power. *Ino and Sakura do a high five.* Temari: Hinata, how come you’ve never told us about you and Naruto? I mean, we all know something about everone else’s partner here. Shikamaru likes to… give me lotion for my breasts. Sai has a foot fetish. And Lee has opened the 1st gate one time with Tenten. What about you and Naruto? Hinata: It’s embarrassing. Ino: C’mon. It’s sex… and the two of you are married… sheesh… Sakura: Yeah, I mean surely he hasn’t made clones and you know… gangbanged you…. he hasn’t done that right? Ino: Whoa… a one man gangbanger… Hinata: No, he hasn’t done that… and at my request, too. Fine… I’ll give you one thing. Ino and Temari: What is it? Hinata: It’s more about me than Naruto… Tenten: Just tell us… I’m dying with anticipation. Hinata: Because I… nevermind. Sakura: C’mon, tell us. Hinata: Naruto has always finished inside of me, but not always in the same place. Sakura: That’s no biggie. That’s kinda like me and Sasuke. Kurenai: Yeah, even me and Asuma… Hinata: You don’t get it. Sakura: Sure I…. whoa… Hinata… you sly girl. Matsuri: What does she mean? *Ino goes shit-faced.* Ino whispers to Matsuri: Naruto has had Hinata in “every” single way. Matsuri: Oh…. Ohhhhh. *Hinata blushes.* Ino: So… does he have a preference? Sakura: Ok, that’s too much Ino. Ino: What… Hinata: He does… and no, it’s not that one. Temari: Doesn’t it hurt? Hinata: It was weird at first, but we love each other. Plus, it wasn’t his idea, it was mine. Ino: Hinata, you seductive woman. Tenten: You want to know what… All the women: What? Tenten: We’re just as bad as Kiba. *Laughter breaks out amongst the group as everyone carries on eating and conversing. Scene switches to Suna, showing Naruto walking through the crevice in that is the only entrance into Suna. The rest of the jinchuuriki are following him.* Gaara: So what are we doing here Naruto? Naruto: Remember when we were both genin and we fought at the chuunin exams? Gaara: Yeah… but we technically didn’t have a match. Akatsuchi: I remember hearing about that. Isn’t that when Orochimaru attacked Konoha? Naruto: Precisely. And he did it under the guise as the Kazekage. Gaara: You don’t think he had a hideout here? Naruto: Orochimaru was known to have hideouts everywhere. Bee: I know the story is he died at the hands of Sasuke, but you really think he had control of Ei? Naruto: There’s no doubt about it. Problem is, we’ve got to find him before he does something like that again. Lin Mei! Lin Mei: Aye, Naruto… Naruto: You and Matsu will accompany Gaara to the Kazkage’s office and look for any evidence of the attack 5 years ago. **Matsu is grown man from the Iron country who is now the host for Choumei. Bee: Meanwhile, we’ll cover y’alls asses. Naruto: As planned. Remember, we all share a mental link now. Let’s use it instead of talking. If there is someone still here, we have to be careful. That goes double for you Ugito. **Ugito is a teenage girl who likes to talk. She is from Iwa and is now the host of Kokuou. Ugito: Aight… sheesh… *Everyone splits up as designed, leaving Naruto at the entrance of the village. Bee is standing on the north section of the wall around Suna. Akatsuchi has the south. Ugito has taken the west, with Mungo and Ushita taking the east (the entrance). Scene focuses on Gaara, Lin Mei, and Matsu.* **Mungo is a young man from Kiri who is now the host of Isopu. **Ushita is a young woman from Kiri who is now the host of Saiken. *Gaara and company have entered the office building through a huge hole in the side of the wall. It’s a post-apocalyptic scene with everything overturned or demolished.* Gaara: To think one man could destroy this village. Lin Mei: You weren’t here to protect it Kazekage-sama. Matsu: You should be proud of your shinobi for evacuating your village in time to not witness all of this carnage. Gaara: Naruto, there’s nothing here in this building. Naruto: Is there any other place that there could be any evidence? Gaara: Sure, there are plenty, but it’s going to take us some time. Naruto: What do you mean? Gaara sighs: None of us have a byuakugan to see every nook and cranny in this village. It’s going to take us a lot of time. Naruto: Alright. What’s it looking like up there? Bee: Nothing but wind and sand on this end. Akatsuchi: Same here. Ugito: Same here. Naruto: What about you… Mungo… Ushita? Ushita: I think I see something… or someone. Mungo: I see the same thing. Naruto: How far out? Mungo: About 5km. Naruto: Everyone, return to me. We’ve got to be careful. *All of the jinks on the wall leap down and head towards Naruto. Gaara, Lin Mei, and Matsu begin to run there as well. The scene focuses Naruto who is now in Sage mode, looking in the direction of the object. Bee lands next to Naruto.* Bee: Do you recognize this person? Naruto: Unbelievable. *Gaara and crew are near Naruto.* Gaara: Who is it? Naruto: It’s… Yamato… *Scene shows Yamato barely crawling towards Sunagakure, collapsing at the entrance. Naruto and the rest of the jinks rush towards him.* End. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
@jekyl: Good to have a chapter that doesn't involve gds for once. Can't wait for the next chapter, damn I wonder what's the mystery behind yamato. This just keeps on getting more interesting. One question what do you mean by naruto going beyond the seal? What seal and what is it for? and what does it do?
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When I started this arc, Amatsu and Izanami were sealed in their realm by Izanagi. During the first chapter of this arc, when Hinata made a seal for something that still holds a great deal of relevance (sorry, no spoilers on this), she altered that seal, weakening it. This allowed Amatsu and Izanami to break the seal and enter the earth realm. Naruto and Sasuke are the two most powerful shinobi in my fan fic. But Hinata, because of her knowledge and prowess of seals is a close third, just because of what she can do with them. She is now on Izanagi's level with seals (better than Minato). I'm not going to focus on the gods for a little while and build up the human-side of this story for you guys. I feel like I let that side slip during the battle arc a few chapters ago, and I killed off the ones who couldn't contribute to the story any further. Hope this clarifies a few things. |
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Yamato
*Scene opens with the jinchuuriki surrounding Yamato in Sunagakure* Gaara: What do you think this mean? Naruto: I have no idea. Bee: Question is, why was the foo’ heading here? Ugito: No one knew we were here. Naruto: That’s where you could be wrong. If Kabuto’s sage power has any resemblance to mine, he can sense us, just as I sense him. The problem is, he’s too far away. Matsu: How do you know that? Naruto: Everytime before I leave the seal, I check to see where certain people are. Kabuto was in the direction of Kirigakura. Ushita: That’s four days travel time for us, going nonstop at that. Gaara: Precisely, which makes this all the more strange. Akatsuchi: Naruto, maybe we should take him back. Gaara: I agree, as the Kazekage. Naruto: Fine… we’ll take Yamato back. Everyone head back. Gaara, summon a meeting of the kages. I’ll give you 12 hours. Gaara: That will be enough time. Ugito: Why aren’t you heading back with us? Gaara: We can’t alert the sensors. Should I have Hinata set us a seal? Naruto: Yeah… and summon Sakura as well. Might want to have Inoichi or Ino there as well. *Gaara makes a sand disc big enough to carry the rest of the jinks. They all hop on and ride towards the Fire country.* Ushita: So why is Naruto the only one staying behind? Bee: Yamato is a clone of the 1st hokage. Before Naruto learned to control the kyuubi, he helped him keep the beast in control. Gaara: Also, Naruto is not telling us something. Matsu: Like what? Akatsuchi: Unlike the rest of us, when Naruto is in his full sync form, he doesn’t take on the form of the bijuu. He also is able to sense negative emotions and feelings. Bee: That’s how he was able to have the 411 on my bro before he was killed. Mungo: Why is Naruto… different from the rest of us? Gaara: Naruto is a descendant of not only Rikudo himself, but his bride, Uzumaki Miyashi. Mungo: So Naruto-sama… You truly are a beast. Bee: No doubt! *Scene switches back to Naruto and Yamato. Naruto is now in his Kurama Sage mode. Yamato is stirring. Naruto grabs Yamato’s head, lifting it slightly so he can pour water down his throat.* Naruto: What are you doing out here? Yamato: Where is here? Naruto: You’re in what used to be Sunagakure. Yamato: Who did this… Madara? Naruto: Madara… he’s been dead for almost 8 years now. Yamato wide-eyed: 8 years??? Naruto: Yeah, we won that war. Yamato: So there’s another war, now? Naruto: Kinda… what do you remember? Yamato: Other than stumbling through the desert, the last thing I remember is Kabuto and some person resembling Orochimaru removing me, from this… contraption that made white creatures. Naruto: The Zetsu clones. Yamato: They took me to a lab… it had to have been in the north near the Iron country because of the snow. I must get to Lady Tsunade and report to her what I remember. Naruto looking down: Tsunade has been dead for about 5 years now. Yamato: What?! Then who’s the Hokage? Is it you? If not you, is it Kakashi? Naruto: It’s Uchiha Sasuke. *Yamato is stunned by this news.* Yamato: Does that mean Kakashi is dead? Naruto: No. He is not. Kakashi has chosen a different role, one that allows him to live his personal life the way he wants to now. *Scene switches to Kakashi and Anko walking down a street in Konoha.* Anko: So what are we doing Kakashi? Kakashi: It’s a surprise. Anko suspiciously: What… kind of surprise? Kakashi: One you’ll like. *The scene switches to the Hokage’s office hours later, with Gaara, Kitsuchi, and Sasuke in the room.* Sasuke: So he wants us to convey a meeting there? *Gaara nods.* Kitsuchi: What is this tablet room? Sasuke: It’s an old Uchiha hideout. One that has remained hidden for some time, and only I knew about it, until Naruto showed up one day. He had Hinata set up a seal to block our sensors when he and I were in the room together. Kitsuchi: So the two of you… Sasuke: Aye, there have been several times when we acted beyond Tsunade’s orders. Kitsuchi: Then how will we get there? Sasuke: I would say that Naruto would flash us there, but something tells me he won’t show up until we’re all there. *Gaara and Sasuke are staring into each other’s eyes.* Sasuke: This is going to require a little stealth on our parts. Kitsuchi: How so? Gaara: We are to make bunshins of ourselves. Once we are all convened in the room, we’ll disperse the clones, except for one, remaining where we wish until we are done. Sasuke: Precisely. Kitsuchi: Then what about your wife? And Yamanaka Ino? Sasuke: I’ve decided not to have them come, for certain reasons. Gaara: You know this will not sit well with Naruto. Sasuke: Aye, but sometimes, things don’t go his way. Gaara: No one knows the two of you better than I. I’ve been down Naruto’s path, and now… You are walking down mine, Sasuke. Tread lightly. You of all people should know that Naruto is someone not to take lightly. Sasuke: I appreciate your thoughts Kazekage, but I will handle Naruto. *Scene switches back to Naruto and Yamato. Yamato is sitting up on his own accord, staring at Naruto.* Yamato: So… you finally synchronized completely with the kyuubi. Naruto smiling: That’s old news Yamato. Thanks to Bee and myself, all of the jinchuuriki have completely synchronized with their bijuu. But what you see before you now is a combination of senjutsu and Kurama. Yamato: Kurama? Naruto: Kurama is the kyuubi. That’s his name. Yamato chuckles: All this time… it had a name. Naruto: He… always had a name, yes. Yamato: Sorry. So has the village accepted you and… him? Naruto: I would say so. Yamato: So why are you not the Hokage? Naruto: I wanted to do a few things personally first, before I was considered properly for the job. Things just seem to keep popping up to keep me away from it. Yamato: Like what? Naruto: Hinata… Jiraya and Mito… our current situation. Yamato: What about Hinata? And I thought Jiraya was dead. Naruto smirking: Hinata is now my wife. Jiraya and Mito are my children. Yamato: You… you’re married?! And you have kids?! Naruto: Yeah… who would have thought that? Yamato: And what is the current situation. Naruto: The 4th Ninja war was ended by the god, Izanagi, and myself. We defeated Madara. But this brought about another situation involving other gods. Yamato: Don’t tell me… all those fairy tales about Izanagi, Izanami, Fujin, Raijin, and Suijin are true? Naruto: The gods are real, yes. Yamato: I’m sorry, continue on. Naruto: The elemental gods: Fujin, Raijin, and Suijin; along with Izanagi are at war with the other gods. Sasuke and I were chosen as the sons of thunder and wind. The other gods had aligned themselves with Kabuto and Ryu, the man who resembles Orochimaru. They have developed an army that has taken over Iwagakure and has annihilated Kirigakure. Yamato: They’ve destroyed two of the five great villages? Naruto: Three. They also took out Kumogakure after it was rebuilt after the 4th Ninja war. Yamato: Then who destroyed Suna? Naruto: I can’t tell you right now. But I was hoping that you could give me a little information on that. Yamato: I’ve told you all that I can remember. Naruto: So what are you doing out here then. How long have you been out here? Yamato: I don’t know. I just remember this voice saying to come here. And I remember an outline of a figure resembling what was told to have been the look of Rikudo Sennin. Naruto: Can you remember anymore? Yamato: No. I just know that I haven’t been out here that long, otherwise I would not have survived. Naruto: This is not good. Yamato: What do you mean? Naruto: If what I think is the case, we’re in some serious danger. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Scene switches back to Kakashi and Anko who are now walking down a street hand in hand.*
Anko: Are you serious? Kakashi: Yeah. My students have children now. I’m not saying that I’m going to settle down completely… Anko: I understand. *She jumps up and kisses Kakashi. Once the kiss is finished, they walk into a restaurant, with Anko bumping into a gentleman who is leaving the restaurant. The man looks at Anko awkwardly and Anko goes wide-eyed, with a small body shiver.* Kakashi: You ok? Anko: Yeah, I think so. Did that guy look familiar to you? *Kakashi turns to look at the man who is walking away.* Kakashi: No, not really. *The two are now seen sitting at a booth.* Anko: So we’re really going to move in together… in a new place. Kakashi: Why not? Anko: It’s just so exciting. Kakashi: I meant what I said last night. I don’t want you to move into my place… and I really don’t want to move into your’s. They’re both too small for the two of us. We need a bigger place. Anko: Just answer me this then. Kakashi: What? Anko: Promise to take your mask off every now and then. Kakashi: I don’t know about that. Anko depressed: Why not?! Kakashi: Consider the day I take off my mask for you to be the day I ask you to marry me. *Anko cocks her eyebrow at Kakashi.* Anko: We’ll see. Anko in thought: You’re going to be that way, two can play this game. *Anko slides her foot up Kakashi’s leg and begins to fondle his manhood with her foot. Kakashi looks at Anko straight-faced.* Kakashi: So it’s going to be that way. Anko: You haven’t seen… or felt anything yet. *Anko looks around, seeing no one is paying attention to the couple in the booth. Anko slides down under the table and is soon servicing her man. Kiba, Neji, and Shino walk into the restaurant. They see Kakashi in a relaxed position and walk over to his booth.* Kiba: Kakashi-sensei!!! *Kakashi jumps a bit, still being serviced by Anko.* Kakashi: Kiba, Shino, Neji… what’s going on? Kakashi in thought: Please God, don’t let Neji activate his byuakugan. Kiba: Not much. We just came back from a meeting. All the kages have been summoned for a meeting once again, so before we are to report as guards for the meeting, we thought we’d sit and have a bite to eat. Kakashi: Another meeting? *Kakashi shivers just a small bit. Shino notices and looks at Neji. Neji then looks at Kakashi.* Neji: You ok, Kakashi? Kakashi: Yeeaaaahhhhh….hhhh. *The next panel shows Anko putting Kakashi’s pants back with a huge grin on her face.* Neji: Ok… well, we’re going over to the bar. Shino: Gotta eat and run. Kakashi: Yeah. Before you leave, come back over here and fill me in. Kiba: We can do it right now. Kakashi: I don’t think that will be a good idea. Kiba: How come. Shino: She’s going to meet you here, isn’t she? Kakashi: Aye. *Shino grabs Neji and Kiba, pulling them towards the bar. Once all three have sit and placed their orders Shino fills them in on Kakashi and Anko. Panel switches back to Kakashi looking around.* Kakashi: You can come out now. *Anko slips up right next to Kakashi. A waitress just walks up and delivers their food to them.* Kakashi: Can you imagine what would have happened had Neji… Anko: That made it that much more fun and exciting. Kakashi: While I like your antics, I’m a high ranking shinobi of Konoha and of this alliance. I can’t be caught in these types of situations with you. Anko: Marry me then. Then we’ll just be a horny married couple. *Scene switches to Hinata and Hanabi sitting in a room, watching Jiraya and Mito play. Hiashi walks into the room.* Hiashi: Daughters… what is it that you wanted to see me about? Hinata: Dad… we’ve been thinking and talking… Hanabi: And we think it’s time. Hiashi: Time for what. Hanabi: For you to name a successor. Hiashi: I was afraid of this. Hinata: Why? Hiashi: Because I can’t name you. You didn’t marry a Hyuuga. And you… Hanabi… are you willing to marry a Hyuuga? Because the Hyuuga name will need to be carried on. Hinata: That’s what we wanted to talk to you about. Hanabi: We think it’s time. Hiashi: For what? Hinata: For the branches to be united, as one. Hiashi sighing: I have thought the same as well. Are you sure the rest of the clan will accept this? Hinata: They must. Hanabi: As the heirs to the head of the family, we won’t accept an alternative. Hiashi: Then who is the boy that you like, Hanabi? Hanabi: Udon… Hiashi: Udon… Hanabi blushes: Yeah. Hiashi: And what makes him special? Hanabi: I don’t know… he just makes me smile. Hiashi: You know the rule. The boy must come to me first if he wishes to date you. Hanabi: That’s it? Hiashi: That’s it. *Mito runs up to and jumps on Hiashi.* Mito: What about me grandpa? Does my boyfriend have to talk to you too? Hiashi: Do you want him to? Mito: It’s ok. I’ll just tell daddy he has to talk to you. *Hiashi, Hinata, and Hanabi bust out laughing. Scene switches to the Uchiha room, with the tablet in the background. The Kages are all looking at one another. Naruto then flashes in with Yamato. Naruto is staring at Sasuke angrily. The kages, excluding Gaara, are shocked to see Yamato.* Sasuke: Can it be? Naruto: Why aren’t Sakura and Ino here? Sasuke: Do you realize how hard it was for us to meet here? Naruto: That is of little consequence now. Mei: What do you mean? Sasuke: Naruto thinks that Orochimaru has entered the picture once again. *The next panel shows Naruto looking at Sasuke, with Gaara in the background.* Darui: But I thought that you defeated Orochimaru. That’s what the intel from Konoha said. Sasuke: It was all a lie. I didn’t defeat Orochimaru. My brother, Itachi defeated Orochimaru. But if Naruto is correct, then somehow, he has managed to survive. And if Kabuto is involved, he had a hand in it some way. Naruto: Tell them what you told me Yamato. *Yamato begins to explain his story to the kages. Several hours have passed after deliberation amongst Yamato and the kages.* Sasuke: So you saw all of that… sharingans, byuakugans, and several bodies in stasis? Yamato: Aye. Gaara: So what is the plan, Hokage? *Everyone turns to Sasuke.* Sasuke: With this new information, we can definitely affirm that they have not attacked us on purpose. We must try to figure out what it is they are planning. Naruto: There’s one more problem. Sasuke: What’s that? Naruto: I can sense Orochimaru’s aura, but I can’t pinpoint it. Darui: Can you at least tell from which direction he is in? Naruto: No, I’m afraid not. I can’t, because I sense him everywhere. Some places stronger than others. Darui: Such as? Naruto staring at Darui: The day Suna and Kumo fell. *Darui goes wide-eyed.* Darui: You’re saying this one man destroyed two the five great villages in one day? Naruto: No… but he had a hand in it. Gaara: What else is on your mind Naruto? Sasuke: Yes, you’re holding something back. Naruto: I sense Orochimaru about Yamato, but I do not sense an evil intention within him. Sasuke: Summon Ino and Inoichi. I want the entire deciphering squad on this case. *turns to Yamato* I apologize in advance, but you must understand… Yamato: I do. *Scene switches to Kirigakure, showing a Shaolin temple, with guards surrounding it, wearing the Ryun crest. The next panel shows Ryu walking in the water garden to a small island, with Kabuto sitting the middle, meditating.* Ryu: Any word, milord? Kabuto: Yes. Ryu: Should I go to Benten and Ryuden? Kabuto: Don’t be in such a hurry. Let’s let our opposition sweat this out a little. Ryu: So now they know? Kabuto: I’m sure Naruto does. Question is, will he share everything with the rest of them or not. Ryu: And what of Lord Hachimo? Is he aware of our plans? Kabuto: I’m sure he’s aware of it. But he thinks it is Benten’s fail-safe, not ours. Ryu: And Amatsu? Kabuto: Amatsu is powerful right now, but once he has lost the Amenonohoko, he will be no match for Orochimaru-sama and myself. Ryu: Then I await your command, milord. Kabuto: It’s time we started setting up our battle camps. You know what to do. *Ryu grins and flickers out. The panel focuses on Kabuto.* Kabuto in thought: You have no idea how close you are to the truth Naruto. *Scene switches back Konoha, showing Yamato in the deciphering corps main exam room, with both Ino and Inoichi at Yamato’s head as he lies on a table. The next panel shows the next day of Gaara, Neji, and Naruto searching through Suna. The next panel shows Kiba and Shino at a tavern, sitting at the bar having a few drinks. The stranger that bumped into Anko at the restaurant is sitting next to Kiba.* Kiba: You don’t get it man. I had my dream girl, and now she’s gone. Shino: How do you know she was your dream girl? You knew her for only a couple of weeks. Kiba: Yeah, so…. Shino: She hasn’t been around for almost 5 years man… move on. The stranger in thought: What a embicile. Stranger: Forgive my intrustion young man, but I agree with your friend. No woman is worth waiting 5 years for. Kiba: You don’t understand. She was so beautiful. I mean she had this smokin’ body, and she was smart, super smart. Stranger: What was her name? Kiba: Benten. Stranger in thought: The fact that neither he nor his comrade has made the connection shows how befallen the Konoha shinobi is. Stranger: I once knew a Benten. She was beautiful. She was also a lady who knew her way around the streets and villages. *The stranger gets up and leaves the bar with that last statement, leaving both Kiba and Shino staring at him. The panel shows the man walking down the street, looking up, and seeing Naruto staring out one of his windows, holding Jiraya.* Stranger in thought: This is going to be so much fun. End. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Darkness Rising
*Scene opens up after a week from the last chapter. The jinchuuriki are shown in a field, minus Naruto and Gaara.* Ugito: Bee-sama, why have we not seen Naruto or Gaara-sama all week now? Bee: Somethings are best left along Ugito. Dangerous times we be in… ya kno’. Matsu: But even Naruto would have sent a clone out by now. I don’t like what’s going on. Akatsuchi: It’s all politics. That’s all you need to know. Ushita: Politics be damned. What is going on?! *Bee jumps up between Akatsuchi and Ushita.* Bee: Calm down, everyone. Suchi is right. He and I have been near our kages’ sides for years. We both know the politics involved. Matsu: So both Naruto and Gaara are staying put for political reasons? Akatsuchi: Gaara, yes. I’m not so sure about Naruto. *Hinata flashes in next to Akatsuchi.* Akatsuchi: Hinata-chan, what are you doing here? Hinata: I come bearing news from my husband. *Hinata looks at all of them. She then turns to Bee.* Hinata: My husband is about to do something very drastic. Even I don’t know what it is, but tensions are growing in Konoha amongst the Leaf and the Cloud. Word is spreading Ei was the one who killed Tsunade, although that cannot be confirmed or denied at this point. *Scene switches to Naruto and Gaara in a small room with only a door.* Naruto: I don’t know, but word is beginning to spread. Gaara: Only us jinchuuriki, the kages, and a few Konoha shinobi know of the details floating about. Naruto: That’s not entirely true. I believe there is someone else. Gaara: Orochimaru?! Naruto: Aye, and something must be done before tensions boil over between Konoha and Kumo. Gaara: This is not all that troubles you? Naruto: I’ve sensed a growing presence in the Kumogakure. Gaara: So you think they are beginning to make their move? Naruto: Aye. Gaara: So what is your plan? Naruto: Technically, I’m already an outlaw. Gaara: As am I and the rest of the jinchuuriki. Naruto: But you can stand against the Ryun army. Ordinary shinobi will have a much more difficult time. Gaara: So you plan on breaking the law again. Naruto: Aye. It will ease tensions for the time being amongst Konoha and Kumo, even some blame may be put on me. Gaara: And if it is learned that Sasuke allowed you to break the law, surely he will be ousted as Hokage. Naruto: True. But you and I both know he will need to be on the front lines in the coming months. Maybe this is for the best for him and Sakura. Gaara: So what do you want of me? Naruto: While I’m gone, make sure that neither harm nor ill will is put upon Hinata, Mito, or Jiraya. Gaara: I will make sure of it. I’m sure there will be others who do the same. So, you’re heading to Kumo? Is it safe to assume you may head to Oto after Kumo? Naruto smiling: I’m not a gambling man, but if I were, I would make that bet. *The two friends smile at each other. Naruto flashes out, leaving Gaara, who exits the room. Scene switches to Sasuke who is walking with Shikamaru and Shikaku.* Sasuke: Has there been any intel on the rumors flying about? Shikaku: None. But there are suspicions that the Ryun are involved. There are thousands of ways to enter the country… we can’t secure them all. Sasuke: Any updates on Yamato? Shikamaru: Not yet. So far what has been found, we already knew about. Sasuke: Keep me updated. *Scene switches to Naruto and Hinata with Mito and Jiraya in a field, having a picnic. The next panel shows Naruto playing with Mito, while the next one shows him carrying Mito on his left shoulder, with Jiraya on his right shoulder. The next panel shows the group posing for a family photo, with Naruto holding Mito and Hinata holding Jiraya. The next panel shows the family back home, Hinata and Naruto just having tucked Mito and Jiraya into bed. Naruto and Hinata are standing in the doorway to the room.* Hinata: So how long will it be this time? Naruto: I don’t know. Hinata: I don’t want you to go. Naruto holding Hinata: But I must. I’ve arranged for you the and kids to be protected. *Hinata looks Naruto in the eyes.* Hinata: I know you’re not telling me everything. Naruto: Yeah. Here’s what I will tell you. I’m heading to Kumo. Hinata: But Sasuke has made in plain and clear, anyone who goes beyond the seal from here on out will be treated as a criminal. Naruto: I know. Hinata: So that’s you plan. *Naruto has a serious look on his face.* Hinata: You’re trying to alleviate some tension between Kumo and Konoha by becoming enemy #1? *Naruto nods.* Hinata: Then do my one favor. Naruto softly: What is it? *Hinata walks into their bedroom and returns with her (Yondaime’s kunai).* Hinata: Take this with you. Naruto: Why? Hinata: Because honestly, I’m pissed. Before they went into hiding, Suijin and Izanagi told me everything. About you and Sasuke… me and Sakura… I realize that we are who we are, but we are entitled to live as normal of a life as we can. And these assholes are messing that up for you and I. Naruto smiling: So you don’t want to save me? *Hinata punches Naruto in the arm.* Hinata: I don’t need to save you. But I don’t want these punks to feel some of my wrath. Naruto: Baby… that would mean that you would be an outlaw too. Hinata sulking: So. Naruto: Besides… Someone has to protect our home on this front as well. It might as well be the second best shinobi in the world. Hinata: I’m not the second best Honey… I’m the best. *Both begin to laugh as Naruto picks Hinata up in his arms. The two begin to kiss, falling onto the couch. The next panel shows a shirtless Naruto now holding Hinata with her legs wrapped around his waist, her being completely naked. The next panel shows the two writing in bed under a few sheets. The next panel shows the two lying in bed as the sun beams through the window. Naruto begins to stir as Hinata is seen kissing Naruto on his neck.* Naruto: Baby… not now… what about the kids? Hinata in between kisses: They’re not up yet. Plus, I’ve already asked Kurenai to come and get them so they can play with Sieta. *There’s a knock at the door.* Hinata: And on time, too. Go get the shower ready, I’m not done with you. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Hinata gets up to go answer the door. Naruto is seen stumbling to the shower, starting it, creating a lot of steam in the bathroom. The next panel shows Kurenai holding Jiraya, with Konohamaru accompanying her and carrying Mito. Hinata makes a mad dash back to the bathroom, to find Naruto in the shower. She removes her clothing, as her ample curves are viewed from her back. The next panels show several silhouettes of the two in various positions in the shower. The last panel shows the two wrapped in towels, standing before the bathroom mirror getting ready for the day.*
Naruto: If I didn’t know any better, I could have sworn that you are trying to get pregnant again. Hinata: If it happens, it happens. But if my man is going to be gone for some time, I’ve got to get the getting while it is good. *Both laugh at this statement.* Naruto: So what are your plans for today? Hinata: The girls are getting together; we’re going to plan a shower for both Ino and Tenten. Naruto: That all? *Hinata turns towards Naruto, pulling him in for a kiss.* Hinata: Nope, I think the getting is still good. *The panel shows the view from behind Naruto, showing both towels drop to the floor as Hinata wraps her legs around Naruto once again. The scene switches to Naruto and the rest of the jinchuuriki outside of the main gate of Konoha. Bee holds out his fist, which Naruto bumps.* Bee: Aw shiyat maaaaan! *Naruto grins.* Ugito: What’s going on? Bee: Uh… nuthin’. Akatsuchi: It’s probably best we don’t know. Naruto: Agreed. Matsu: Long time no see… Naruto-sama. Naruto with a serious look: And it’s about to be longer. Ushita: What do mean? Naruto: I’m going on a solo mission. All of you will need to stay here and protect everyone else from what might arise. Bee: Understood brah. Lin Mei: Can we at least accompany you, even if it is for a little while? Naruto: Sure. Gaara: I’m going to stay behind. Ushita: C’mon Gaara, come with us. Naruto: It’s best he stays. *Gaara and Naruto shake hands as the two turn and head in different directions.* Ugito: What is that all about? Naruto: We’ll discuss it as we walk. *Scene switches to Sakura, Ino, Tenten, and Hinata all sitting at a large table at a café.* Sakura: Do you know when Kurenai is going to show up? Hinata: She won’t be coming. She watched Jiraya and Mito for us this morning. Ino: Somebody got some action already I see… bow chick-a-wow wow. Hinata blushing: The getting was good. Sakura: So that’s why you’re smiling as such and have this air about you. *Hinata nods, still blushing.* Sakura: Temari told me she would be running late. Anko and Kakashi are still moving in, so she’ll be late. Matsuri is going to be late, because she has still not delivered. Ino and Tenten together: You’ve got to be kidding! Hinata: Bless her heart. Sakura: She said she would try to make it unless she goes into labor. Ino: Think about it girls. We all knew how Naruto, Sasuke, and Gaara were ten years ago. And within a couple of days… all three will fathers. *Matsuri enters café, waddling over to the table.* Matsuri: Who will be fathers? Ino: We’re just a talking about Naruto, Sasuke, and Gaara. Matsuri: Oh… well, I wish this one would just pop out already. The doctor told me that if he hasn’t come within the next few days, he’ll come by c-section. *Matsuri sees Hinata blushing.* Matsuri: So what did the two of you do? Hinata laughing: Is it that obvious? Matsuri: You’re pinker than… Ino laughing: Oh my gawd…. Matsuri: What?! Tenten: It’s confirmed, we’re worse than Kiba. *The entire group busts out laughing now as Anko and Temari enter the café.* Anko: What’s so funny? Sakura: According to Hinata, the getting has been good with Naruto. Anko smirking: It’s been good for me too. Matsuri: This is not fair! Anko: What? Matsuri: You and her *nodding at Hinata* can go be with your men, but I can’t because of this baby. *Everyone laughs again, including Matsuri.* Matsuri: I swear once this baby has been born, and I’m given the ok by the doctor, Gaara won’t know what happened to him. *Everyone keeps on laughing.* Sakura: Ok girls, time to get down to business. No more sex talk. Ino and Anko simultaneously: But it’s fun. Sakura: Let’s at least take care of business first. *The next few panels show the women eating and talking. One panel shows Temari feeling the baby move in Matsuri’s abdomen.* Anko: Ok, business is done now. I want the details Hinata. Hinata blushing: Let’s just say I haven’t have a 12 hour span like that… ever. Anko flabberghasted: 12 hours?! Hinata nodding: Yep! And it was worth it too. Ino: I don’t know. Hinata: Well, we did have a few naps here and there, but waking him up… him waking me up…. the shower…. well worth it. Anko: How many times? Hinata smirking: How many what? Anko: Who climaxed the most? Hinata: I’m not entirely sure… I lost count after no. 5 for me. Sakura: So how are things between you and Kakashi-sensei, Anko? Anko blushing: Great… we just bought a place together. We’re going to move me out first and then him. I’m so excited. Ino: So no ring yet? Anko frowning: Nope. But he did promise me one thing. Tenten: What’s that? Anko: Who would take off his mask for me when he’s going to propose. Temari: You haven’t seen his face yet? *Anko shakes her head.* Temari: You mean you’ve slept with him, and he kept the mask on? Anko: Yeah, so… *Everyone but Anko is laughing.* Anko: Think about it for a moment… it adds a bit of flare. I mean this mysterious man, whom I adore, is taking me… it drives me wild just now thinking about it. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Scene switches to Naruto and the other jinchuuriki walking down a road.*
Matsu: So why are we walking? Why not just flash us wherever? Naruto: I have my reasons. *The group approaches a sentry tower that can be seen from distance.* Bee: So that’s your plan? Naruto: You figured it out, huh? Matsu: What is it? Naruto: I’m going to Kumo to delay the forces there. Who knows, I might be able to stop them completely there. Lin Mei: There are forces in Kumo? Naruto: Aye. Lin Mei: Then I’m coming with you. Naruto: No you’re not. I need you, all of you to stay behind. The seal is good for only several more weeks. The SSM and the Mizukage have already had a tough time with this army. If for whatever reason I’m not able to handle this, you must stay here and protect everyone. Lin Mei sighing: Fine. Akatsuchi: What about those in the neighboring countries? Naruto: Hopefully I’ll gain some intel as to why Iwa has been allowed to stand and why other smaller villages stand as well. Akatsuchi: So are you going to Iwa after Kumo? Naruto: I doubt it. Bee: So how long you gonna be? Naruto: I don’t know. Gaara knows of my plan. That is why he stayed behind. You should all return to Konoha. After what I’m about to do, there will be a meeting tonight, I’m sure of it. Matsu: So you’re going to openly break the law now? *Naruto nods.* Ugito: I get it Naruto-sama. I promise to protect Jiraya and Mito for you. Naruto smiles as he places his hand on her shoulder: You’re growing up Ugito. Just don’t grow up too fast. Bee: So this is it then? Too bad, cuz I was gonna run over my new rhymes with ya. Ushita: Be careful Naruto-sama. If you don’t come back I’ll hunt you down for Hinata-chan. Akatsuchi: As will I. *Naruto smiles at the group. He bumps fists with everyone and then starts walking towards the sentry tower.* Bee: C’mon, let’s head back. Mungo: Things are about to get interesting, huh? Akatsuchi: You have no idea. *The rest of the jinchuuriki head back to Konoha. The next panel shows Naruto approaching the sentry tower. A shinobi is standing at the base looking at Naruto, while another is up at the top, looking out for any movements.* Base shinobi: Naruto-sama??? Is that you? Naruto: Yeah. Shinobi: What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be back in Kono… *Naruto punches the shinobi in the gut.* Naruto: No hard feelings. *Naruto grabs the shinobi then flashes to the top of the tower. He lays the shinobi down, looking at the other shinobi.* Naruto: I think you know what to do. *Naruto flashes back down to the road and walks beyond the seal. The shinobi at the top grabs a scroll and begins to write information on it. He ties it to a hawk and sets it towards Konoha. He then tries to revive his comrade. The scene switches to Naruto walking towards Kumo by himself as the sun is now at high noon. The scene switches to a room with Sasuke and Inoichi.* |
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Sasuke: So what intel where you able to retrieve?
Inoichi: We are in a much dire situation than estimated. Sasuke: How so? Inoichi: Orochimaru lives. And he’s obtained a power that rivals Naruto’s. Sasuke: What makes the situation so dire? I expected the news of Orochimaru. Inoichi: Orochimaru is in league with the god, Hachimon. He is also after some weapons. Sasuke: What weapons? Inoichi: Rikudo’s weapons. The ones used to defeat the juubi. Sasuke: And who else is aware of this intel? Inoichi: No one yet. Sasuke: Good. Don’t tell anyone, especially Naruto. Now we must find out who is spreading the rumors of Ei murdering Tsunade. Inoichi: That’s another thing. Sasuke: What? Inoichi: Yamato’s subconscious heard Kabuto and Orochimaru talking about him subduing the Raikage. Sasuke: But how? Inoichi: That I cannot confirm. Based on what I was able to find out, what he heard was still in the planning stages. But I can lay it out for you as I was able to uncover. *Scene switches to a small village outside of Konoha. The stranger from before is seen walking through the village. A random person approaches him.* Person: Have you heard the news? Stranger: And what is that, pray tell. Person: That Lady Tsunade was killed by the former Raikage himself. Something ain’t right about them Kumo people. Stranger: Is that so? Person: Yeah. And now the word is that Naruto-sama knew of this, and told no one. Stranger: So this Naruto… maybe he’s not who you thought he was? Person: I don’t know. Naruto-sama, he’s saved us before. And word is, his wife set up some barrier to protect us from them gods. It just don’t add up right. *The stranger makes a handsign, causing the person’s facial expression to go blank.* Stranger: Naruto and Hinata harbored a known murderer, the former Raikage. It was the Ryun who took that murderer down, not Naruto or Sasuke. Now tell me, who is Konoha’s savior… or avenger in this case. Person in a monotone: Well, the Ryun. Stranger: And now that word is leaked out about the former Raikage, and soon the connection to Naruto will be drawn, what if Naruto runs away? Person: That will prove his guilt. Stranger: If you say so, you feeble mind. *The scene switches to show a hawk flying into Konoha. The next panel shows Sasuke in his office, slamming his fist down onto the desk.* Sasuke: What the hell was he thinking? *Scene switches to later that night, with Sasuke infront of a group of people outside of the main gate of Konoha.* Sasuke: Uzumaki Naruto is now a wanted criminal of the Shinobi alliance. If you see him, flee and inform any jounin of any village that you see. The rest of the kages and myself are working together to bring Naruto to justice. Person who spoke with the stranger earlier: I don’t trust the shinobi of Kumo. Their Raikage killed Lady Tsunade. Sasuke shouting: That has not been confirmed! Person: Word is Naruto left so he wouldn’t be prosecuted. Hunt him down. Sasuke shouting: We can’t! We can’t go beyond the seal. Person: Then who’s going to seek Naruto and bring justice?! *The crowd roars in approval. The panel zooms out and shows the stranger amongst the crowd, smiling.* Stranger in thought: So by leaving you thought you could thwart our plan. You may accomplish annihilating that battalion, but you’ve left your precious friend alone in Konoha, defenseless. Sasuke yelling: Calm down and go home. Just know that if you see Naruto, flee and notify any official. *Sasuke is shown leaving the scene, with guards closing all of the gates to Konoha. The next scene shows all of the Kages in a large room, with select jounin from each village. Sasuke is in the middle of the room.* Sasuke: As I’m sure that you’ve all heard by now, Naruto has went beyond the seal again. These rules are put in place to protect not only yourself, but the person next to you and the ones who are out there. Naruto has endangered not only himself, but us as well. Once you have been notified, seek out any kage or jinchuuriki. That includes you, Hinata *Sasuke looks at Hinata*. Dismissed. *The scene switches to Naruto and Hinata’s apartment. All of the Konoha 12 are there, including Sasuke. There is a knock at the door. Kiba goes to answer the door, and in walks Gaara, Kankuro, and Shikamaru. Gaara walks to the middle of the room, and looks at everyone.* Gaara: I was the last person to speak with Naruto. I will not reveal on conversation. But I will tell you this. *He looks at Hinata* He knew he would be leaving, yet he has promised to come back. *Hinata smiles at this.* Gaara looking at Sasuke: And he knows what you face as Hokage. What happened tonight at the main gate is only the beginning. *Sasuke looks down.* Gaara: The title of Kage has not been bestowed upon him… yet. He is doing something that only he can do. *Sasuke stands up.* Sasuke: I’m the son of thunder, as well as the Hokage. Gaara: And as the Hokage, you cannot go beyond the seal, breaking the law, and fight the enemy. Neither can I as the Kazekage. But he can. I recommend to all of that you treat Naruto the way that Sasuke has stated. As shinobi, we must aid in the enforcement of the law to protect those who cannot protect themselves. *Sasuke begins to walk toward the door. Gaara grabs his arm as he tries to walk past him.* Gaara: You’re not alone in how you feel. We all feel the same way. *He turns to Hinata* Naruto anticipated such events as tonight at the main gate. And fearing that they will get worse, Naruto asked us to make sure that you and the children were protected. Hinata: Us? *Gaara nods towards the window. Everyone turns to the see the rest of the jinchuuriki standing on the balcony. Hinata goes to open the door so that they can enter the room.* Bee looking at Sasuke: I know how you feeling. You handle yo business, cuz he’s handlin’ his. Ugito: I promised Naruto-sama personally that nothing would happen to you or Mito or Jiraya. *Hinata smiles at Ugito.* Gaara: We all must retire for the night now. Darkness approaches. *The scene switches to the stranger walking down the middle of street and entering a tavern. He sits at a table with another gentleman sitting there already.* Stranger: Odd to see you here. *The other person leans forward to reveal the face of Ryu by candlelight on the table.* Ryu: So Naruto is heading to Kumo. He’ll annihilate our forces there. Stranger: Yes. But they are nothing more than fodder. Ryu: Lord Hachimon says to move along to the next step. Stranger: I will, once I have his… I mean my weapons. Ryu: I swear Orochimaru… if Hachimon doesn’t watch his back, you’ll own him one day. Orochimaru: So what will you do now… son? Ryu: Son? Orochimaru: You are my clone. Ryu: What would you have me do then… father? Orochimaru: I’m going to stay here for a bit longer. I think you should head to Oto, and make sure certain places and items are not found. Ryu: You think he will head to Oto once he’s done in Kumo? Orochimaru: I know he will. But I’m not worried about him. Ryu: That’s right, it is beyond the seal. Orochimaru: Precisely. End. Feedback is appreciated. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
I offer the Rikudou Sennin Gaiden.... chapter#1: creation of a sennin and birth of a bijuu....
(Scene starts with a grey haired young adult named Hiraidama meditating under a tree being watched over by a white snake) Hiraidama: "Are we done yet, I have a lesson with katonkami later and I want to practice... WHite snake: "Katonkami you say... be careful hiraidama, the dragon sage is very hot headed. So no messing around..." Hiraidama: "I know... today I finally get to learn dragon sage mode". *a large man with a bulky figure and long red hair named jubei comes over along with a female that has white pupils and black long hair named kimiko* Jubei: "Good afternoon sage sensei, Hiraidama..." *Jubei looks at Hiraidama with resentment..* Jubie: "So you actually have a lesson with Katonkami to learn dragon sage tranformation huh... Hiraidama". kimiko: "Thats good news hirai... I knew you always had it in you...". Hiraidama: "I actually do... jubei... looks like I will finally surpass you as Ryuchudou's first human dragon sage". Jubei: "Huh... even as a dragon you could never hope to surpass me... I can increase my size to become a leviathan... with the power of chakra that is...". Hiraidama: "I am well aware of your leviathan technique... and the power of chakra... I am the one who showed you how to create chakra after all..." White snake: "ENough... Jubei... go meditate and hiraidama, its time for your lesson... off you go children". Kimiko: "Ok... see you later hirai... good luck". Jubie thinking: "I will surpass you Hiraidama... No matter what it takes". (scene switches to Hiraidama focusing his nature energy in a cave) Hiraidama: "Haaaaaa, rrrrrrrahhhhh". *Hiraidama's transforming into a monster slowly as a giant dragon speaks* Katonkami: "Take control of the nature energy boy.... without control you will never be able to reach the power level of a dragon while becoming this igly beast creature that is merely a generic form of dragon sage mode.." *Hiraidama begins to transform back into a person... his eyes take get black tomoe around them as his eyes become slanted like a dragon* Katonkami: 'that is the way... your doing it... now focus and complete the transformation". *Hiraidama slowly grows two horns then he suddenly goes back to normal lossing his sage mode* Hiraidama: "Ahhhh.... its so hard... I neer imagined the kind of fucus it would take... but the power... I have never felt anything like that before". Katonkami: "We will finish this tomorrow boy". Hiraidama: "You mean I can come back..." Katonkami: "Yes... just practice so you can get it tomorrow... or am I wasting my time". Hiraidama: "No lord katonkami... I will be the first dragon sage of the human... believe it..." *in the darkness... a person with red eyes and tomoe on them.. wacthing... learning* (SCENE CHANGES TO HIRAIDAMA WALKING INTO HIS VILLAGE, ARRIVING AT HOME) Hiraidama: "I'm home... its time to rest...." *Hiraidama looks at a painting of his father and mother* Hiraidama: "It will be two years tomorrow they died... I will leave flowers for you.. mom... dad...". *hiraidama falls asleep and has a dream about the monster who invaded his village, destroying it and killing his mom and dad...* Hiraidama awakes in a cold sweat: "Ahhhh, why must I dream about this every night... I promise... I will become stronger and defeat that monster if it ever comes back...". (scene changes to another village peacefully slumbering until a horned moster enters... destroying everthing in its path... a couple villagers look into its eye... its red with tomoe.. the villager flee in terror) *Hiraidama awakes, eats then leaves the village to go practive his new sage mode... however, the white snake sage and Jubei meet his at the exist of the viilage* Hiraidama: "What are you guys doing here?" Snake sage: "The copper village just a mile from here was attacked by a monster... many people were killed... we have to investigate". *Hiraidama has a flashback of the monster who attacked his village killing his parents* Hiraidama focised with rage: "Lets go... now..." *the three go to the village to find it completely destroyed...* White snake sage: "such destruction... and judging by the reports of this things appearance... only one being could have done this... an incomplete dragon sage...". Hiraidama: "What... an incomplete dragon... sage... but who snake sage...". Snake sage: "Unfortunately... there is only one person under going dragon sage training to use such power... I am sorry Hiraidama.. you need to come with me and await punishment for your misuse of your sage abilities". *Jubie and hiraidama are in shock* Hiraidama: "What... no... it was not me... I did not do it... That beast killed my parent so it could not of been me...". Jubei: "I agree, hiraidama is not strong enough to do such a thing... not to mention I believe him... he is my rival and i know his best...". Snake sage: "Be that as it may... you will come and await the dragon sages ultimate judgment...". *Hiraidama runs off trying to escape... but jubei cuts him off and grabs him with a huge hand* Jubei: "You must not run... I will get to the bottom of this... come with us or you will make it worse then it already is..." Hiraidama: "I am being set up... NO! I will find this beast and destroy it myself". *hiraidama breaks out of jubei large hand and goes into snake sage mode... Jubei does the same, but attacks hiraidama with a large fist attack... however, hiraidama spins, redirecting it the attack then countering with a spin kick to jubei head... knocking him back* Hiraidama: "I cannot give up... I have to find this beast and destroy it for what it did to my family..." *Hiraidama tries to go dragon sage mode, but turns into the monster again..* Hiraidama: "Hrrrrrahhhhhhhhh! out of... my way...." *Jubei transforms himslef... increasing his size to such a level he is the size of a boss summon* Jubei: "Leviathan technique... I will crush you hiraidama... give up or die..." *Jubei stomps on hiraidama, but his foot misses... hiraidama counters by injecting his chakra into the ground, controlling it to make a wave, throwing jubei off balance...* Hiraidama: "earth transmigration..." Snake sage thinking: "So hiraidama can already use the dragon sage modes transmigration abilities... I wonder if he can use the other abilities of a dragon sage in such an incomplete form". *As jubei hits the ground... Hiraidama jumps onto his chest to attack, but is punched... sent flying high into the air... but slips out of his old skin... using it to arc himself back at juebi.... then with lightning inone hand and fire in the other... hiraidama combines the two, putting his hands together for a double axe handel thrust that explodes on impact of jubei sending pieces of flesh everywhere... but jubei hid under ground and came back up... creating a replacement from his old flesh* Snake sage: "So hiradama can use body replacements and instant regeneration... but jubei can too... this will last too long.. its my turn". *Hiraidama runs head on to jubei to land a pnuch as he comes out from under ground... but suddenly jubei eyes turns red with tomoe and hiraidama is frozen with a powerful vision of his death... giving the snake sage the opportunity to expand and capture hiraidama... draining his sage chakra to make himnormal again* Snake sage: "I will bring hiraidama to the dragon sage for judgement... you head back to his village to explain everything... OK jubei". Jubie: "Yes snake sage...". *as jubie shrinks back to normal and heads to hiraidama's village... the snake sage has a flashback of hiraidama's actions... freezing in place* Snake sage: "What happened... it was if hiraidama was frozen with fear... and that energy jubei gave off at that moment... it can't be... jubei knows nothing about dragon sage chakra....". (scene switches to hiraidama tied up in the cave of katonkami... the dragon sage...) Hiraidama: "What happened... I remember... it was a huge red eye with tomoe... it froze me...". Katonkami: "Why did you use dragon sage mode outside this training area of ryucudou? You know its forbidden... and you lost control killing many innocent people as well... what do youhave to say for yourself?" Hiraidama: "It was not me... I dedicated my life to protect those innocent people... and to avenge my families killer... that beast... Why would I be that beast if I am its enemy? This is all a big misunderstanding... And I felt something from jubei... I think he knows dragon sage mode as well...". kimiko: "I blieve hirai lord dragon sage... he has never lied to me... or shown any reason to... I think..." Katonkami: "ENough... Lies will not get you anywhere... it is my decision to place a seal to block any use of nature energy... you will never be a sage again hiraidama....". *Hiraidama and kimiko are in shock as the dragon sage cuts hi finger and places his heand over hiraidama's stomach activating a five element blood seal to block the use of nature energy* Hiraidama as he passes out: "But... I can't... give up...". (scene switches to hiraidama's village... as a beast starts destroying it... it has one red eye with tomoe... in dragon sage incomplete form... its Jubei) Continued later...
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Rikudou Sennin Gaiden Chapter#2... Birth of a bijuu.... the three calns of sages are called to arm in order to battle the worlds greatest threat...
(scene starts with Hiraidama in the seat still tied up with the five element seal on his stomach.... Kimiko is upset and katonkami leaves the area to go to a different part of the cave...) Kimiko: "Ohhh Hirai.... I am truly sorry... I could not convince the dragon sage of your innocence... forgive me". Hiraidama in despair: "Its not your fault Kimiko... If I had mastered the training... I would not of been suspected and in this position... Its my weakness that got me where I am, not you... it seems... It seems I will never have the power to avenge my parents now... I should just die". Kimiko upset: "How can you say such a thing... Why would you want to cause me so much pain by dying?". Hiraidama confused: "What do you mean... its not like you care about me like tha....." Kimiko interupts hiraidama: "But I do... and you cannot see it because all you see is revenge against the monster who killed your family... If only... If only you could see me the way I see you". Hiraidama: "You are right, all I see is vengeance because its all I want to see... But I do see you... however, its only as a comrade as a fellow senjutsu practitioner... I will find a way to use nature energy again... Believe it!". Kimiko: "I see... then here, find your new senjutsu and get your revenge... then maybe you can finally see me as I am...". *kimiko frees hiraidama from the seal he is bound to... Hiraidama is angry though, storming out of the cave* Hiraidama: "I have to find kurosuchi... he is the only one who can help me counter this seal so I can use nature energy again". (scene switches to white snake sage running into the area of the cave where kotonkami is, panicking) Snake sage: "Katonkami... it seems hiraidama was telling the truth... the beast is attacking his village and Jubei is nowhere to be found...". Katonkami: "What... Jubei... But he is only a snake sage. How could use a form of dragon sage mode... unless he has been spying, learning bits here and there about dragon senjutsu... that snake...". *katonkami goes to the area hiraidama was, but he is gone and kimiko is crying inthe corner... Katonkami then flies out of the cave at high speed in a rage... towards hiraidama's village* Katonkami: "that brat, if he would have stayed out I could have taken away that seal I placed due to his innocence... Now I may never be able to if something happens to me... you fool, HIraidama". (scene switches to hiraidama entering his village to find it in ruins... screams coming from everywhere and a mysterious black flame that is turning everything to ash) Hiraidama: "What is going on here... Its him, hes here... fuck!!! I have to get this seal released so I can destroy him and put my family at peace... I must find Kurotsuchi...". *Hiraidama is looking all around, but runs into the beast getting ready to attack Kurotsuchi.. Hiraidama picks up a sword and runs over to slash at the beast, but it brushes him aside like nothing... then just as it was about the strike at hiraidama... Katonkami comes flying in a knocks the beast back into a hut, leveling it...* Katonkami: "You should have stayed put... now you will have to wait for me to finish this before I can unseal your senjutsu boy... now stand back, here he comes...". *The beast busts out of the hut with explosive speed coming at katonkami... but the dragon sage avoids the beasts attack then slams it with his tail... sending it flying into another hut...* Katonkami: "So this is the extent of your power beast... your incomplete form of dragon sage mode is even more pathetic then I thought... This will be over quickly... Jubei". *hiraidama helping kurotsuchi up hears the dragon sage refer to the beast as Jubei and is in shock* Hiraidama: "What!!! It was you this whole time... but why jubei... we are friends". *the beast regresses back to human form to reveal Jubei, confirming the dragon sages claim...* Jubei: "What do you mean... why...? I am your rival after all and senjutsu warrior... In order to gain power, to surpass you... to surpass everyone to become the most powerful being in the world... I have merely made you believe we were friends while I studied your abilities... I have traveled to every other senjutsu master and learned from copying their methods of senjutsu...I even studied the dragon sage and your lesson yesterday... it was how I was able to complete my dragon sage mode even more then two years ago...". Hiraidama: "Wait... it was you two years ago who attacked and killed my family...!!" Jubei: "Hahaha, but of course... I tried to kill you, you ignorant fool... Luckily I get another chance... however, this time I will not fail... and even you katonkami... even you will fall before my might...". Hiraidama enraged: "you son of a bitch... I will kill you...". *katonkami stops hiraidama from attacking jubei by flying in front of him...* Jubei: "hahahaha... wait your turn fool... First is this pathetic excuse for a dragon... Now witness the ultimate power... the greatest senjutsu form ever created... the power of all three senjutsu in one.. that along with my leviathan form will make me this worlds ultimate warrior and its master". Katonkami and hiraidama: "All three!?!?!" *Jubei grows to a huge size with his leviathan technique... then gathers nature energy becoming a monstrous creature with frog-like legs... spikes all over its back... tails sprouting all over and he grow one big red eye with nine tomoe around the pupil...* Katonkami: "This energy level.... its just not possible... its 100X more then I can produce... and he has a sharingan... Hiraidama, take kurostuchi and get out of here now... then relay the message to white snake sage... tell him its time to take up arms... a threat of ungoldy magnitude has arised and we need everyone help..." Hiraidama: "But I cannot leave you here to do this alone... And what about my seal...?" Katonkami: "You can and you will now go, relay my message...". Katonkami: "Now go boy...". Jubei: "Not so fast". *ultimate sage form jubei looks at hiraidama and katonkami...* Jubei: "TSUKUYOMI..."... *Katonkami and hiraidama are paralyzed... unable to move jubei lets off a huge wave of energy sending both flying... and as the dust clears with hiraidama on the ground paralyzed and katonkami unable to move, but still on his feet* Katonkami: "This power... the nature energy of all three senjutsu systems has increased the quility of his spiritual energy that it has manifested in his eye... and it seems the dragon senjutsu allowed for a tomoe seal to keep the spiritual energy under control... This is bad... there is no telling what else jubei is capable of with the nature energy of all three systems of senjutsu.." *Jubei shoots pure energy from his spikes directly at katonkami and hiraidama on the ground... but katonkami uses dragon senjutsu, earth transmigration, to control the ground around him in order to put up a wall for defense... but the defense is blown to pieces by the energy attack...* Jubei: "transmigrating his chakra into the ground to completely control it huh... Let me try that on for size" *Jubei controls the ground and makes it crash around katonkami and hiraidama... however, katonkami is finally able to move again, grabs hiraidama and kurotsuchi then avoids the attack by flying above it...* Jubei: "That dragon SOB managed to transmigrate a huge amount of chakra into the ground then have it transmigrate back into him at the same time he released a another large amount of chakra within himself... the effect allowed my tsukuyomi to be canceled and katonkami to regain control of his nervous system.... Ha... then how about this". Continued...VVVVV
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