Narut0360

Kid-J , I’m confused by your 1st question so you might have to ask it in a different way. The answer to your 2nd question is I just did not want Naruto to walk the whole way there while Sasuke and Hinata followed him, so the summoning was sort of my shortcut to get to the land of whirlpools faster, we the reader knows where Naruto was going but Sasuke and Hinata didn’t. So the summoning had no sneaky or hidden purpose other than my laziness lol. The 3rd question is a spoiler, but what I can tell you I wanted to show Yoko was an Uzumaki with the Red hair but show a little age on him with the white streaks. I have to say I am getting worried about the action that is to come, I’m good at story line twist and turns and even anticipation and sometimes dialog, but with action I suck lol.

Thanks for the questions

jekyl_hyde

The Fall of Konoha
*Scene opens with Naruto standing on a mountain peak looking down on a decimated Kumo. Tents and campfires are seen from above. Naruto notices that there are more than just Kabuto clones making up this army. He notices several shinobi with the Oto symbal on their forehead protectors. He even notices a few Iwa symbols as well.*
Naruto in thought: To think those bastards have reached out to Oto and persuaded some in Iwa.
Kurama: Does this surprise you?
Naruto: What do you mean?
Kurama: Naruto, you are the child of prophecy, destined to change the shinobi world. You have already done so.
Naruto: But I have not brought peace.
Kurama: That’s where you are wrong.
Naruto: Don’t patronize me Kurama.
Kurama: I’m not. You brought peace to me, and the other bijuu. Because of you, for two years, there were no conflicts between any of the villages in your land. However, you must realize that because of your kind… mankind… peace will never be achieved. The question for you to answer is, will you answer the call to try to bring peace. The day you stop, is the day you fail.
Naruto: So it’s going to be a never-ending fight?
Kurama nodding: Aye. For your yin, there will always be a yang.
Naruto sighing: Will I ever be able to lead a normal life with Hinata and my children?
Kurama: That is up to you.
Naruto: Well, first… I’ve got to handle this bunch.
Kurama: Alright. I’ll let you know if I sense any of the gods approaching.
*The panel zooms out to show Naruto in black pants, with a white shirt, wearing a new red robe with black flames at the bottom. He leaps down from the mountain top and lands where the front gates of Kumo used to stand. A siren rings out through the night as everyone gathers at their battle stations. Naruto takes one step, when he comes across a face that seems familiar. The scene shows a tall, big shinobi resembling a younger Ei.*
Naruto in thought: Impossible.
*Scene switches to Kabuto in Kiri smiling as he is kneeling, looking at the ground.*
Kabuto in thought: Let’s see how you handle this Naruto.
*Scene switches back to Naruto and the shinobi, as battalions surround the two. The shinobi resembling Ei begins to enshroud himself in a raiton armour.*
Naruto: Who are you?
Shinobi: Why do you want to know?
*Naruto now has a menacing glare at the shinobi.*
Naruto: If you won’t tell me, I’ll beat it out of you.
*Naruto beings to move into a front stance (tae kwon do), doing a palm thrust in the air. The shinobi is sent flying backwards, rolling and tumbling on the ground. The army begins to move in and attack Naruto. Naruto glances from left to right. He looks down for a moment, the looks up with sage eyes, with a smile on his face.*
Naruto: Let’s do this old school.
*A group of soldiers on each side is within arm’s reach of Naruto when he hits both groups with Oodama Rasengans, obliterating the Kabuto clones. Naruto then leaps high into the air. As he reaches the peak of his jump, he looks around, spotting the shinobi. As he begins to fall back to the ground, he gathers natural energy into his right fist, punching the ground just as he lands. A huge crater is created, forming a dust mushroom cloud. While the dust is coving the area, Naruto leaps to every non-clone member of the army, trying to incapacitate them before they can make any offensive moves. Once the dust has cleared, Naruto is standing, facing the shinobi, surrounded by hundreds of the Kabuto clones. Scene switches to Kabuto.*
Kabuto: So you managed to take all of them out. They are merely the front line anyway.
*Kabuto makes a handsign.*
Kabuto in thought: Reveal your name to him, but tell him nothing more. Have some fun, but return to me.
*Scene switches back to Naruto and the shinobi.*
Shinobi: You want to know my name?
*Naruto pauses.*
Shinobi: I am called Raiju.
*Raiju instantly is covered in raiton armour, flickering to infront of Naruto, kneeing him in his gut, sending him back, tumbling over and over. Raiju takes this time to flicker out of Kumo. The next panel shows Naruto getting to his feet. He looks around, but doesn’t see Raiju. Realizing that the Kabuto clones around about to surround him, Naruto enters Kurama Sage mode.*
Naruto: It’s time to finish what I came here for.
*Naruto raises his hand, a FRS instantly forming in his hand. He begins to throw them one after the other, all over the battle camp. The next panel shows Naruto walking around in several craters, searching for any remains of the Ryun army.*
Naruto in thought: Surely they haven’t managed to do that.
Kurama: It wouldn’t surprise me. These two were able to obtain materials to summon Uchiha Madara. I wouldn’t put anything past these two.
Naruto: There’s another thing bothering me.
Kurama: I know, it is strange. You would think they would have showed up already.
*Scene switches to the koi pond, with all of the gods present.*
Benten: Everything is going as planned.
Amatsu: I admit, I didn’t think this would work. But allowing your subordinate to drive a wedge between the Sons of Wind and Thunder was brilliant.
Hachimon: That is not all. As we speak, the Son of Wind has annihilated our northern front line, but the Son of Thunder is about to lose his seat.
Benten: And once one of our subordinates hold that seat, the seal will be broken.
Amatsu: Then every single one of those damn shinobi will squirm before me.
Izanami: Are you going to kill the hapless humans, milord?
Amatsu: No… we will all need slaves.
Amatsu in thought: Those who will stand underneath me.
*Scene switches back to Naruto standing in a rice field, looking around.*
Naruto in thought: This is going to be easier than I thought.
Kurama: Even though you’ve defeated him before, you need to have a plan Naruto.
Naruto: I’m going to try to extract as much intel as I can.
*The panel zooms out to show Naruto standing before a small hut, similar to the hut of Jiraya, Konan, Nagato, and Yahiko in Amegakure. The sun is rising on the horizon. The scene switches to Konoha, showing Sasuke sitting at the Hokage’s desk. Gaara and the rest of the Kages enter the room.*
Gaara: Why have you summoned us?
Sasuke: I’ve summoned you all here for one reason.
*Shikaku enters to room as well.*
Shikaku: You summoned me Hokage-sama?
Sasuke: I hereby resign as the Hokage of Konohagakure.
*Everyone is shocked by this announcement except Gaara. Sasuke places a scroll on top of the middle of the desk and walks out of the room. Shikaku walks over to the desk, unraveling the scroll and reading it. The scene switches to Hinata’s apartment, with Hinata and Ugito sitting at the table eating breakfast. Jiraya and Mito are still asleep.*
Ugito: So you think Sasuke is going to actually do it?
Hinata: Yeah.
Ugito: Then who will be Hokage?
Hinata: Something tells me that after tonight, we might not have any more kages for the time-being.
*There is a thud on the balcony. Bee enters from the balcony.*
Bee: Balls in motion, gotsta get movin’ to the ocean.
Ugito: So it’s actually going to happen?
Hinata: Yes, it is.
Ugito: And what of Naruto-sama?
Hinata: He will sense us.
*The next few panels show various shinobi standing at all of the gates of Konoha, calling for all willing civilians and shinobi to relocate. The scene switches to the Uchiha district as Sasuke enters his home. Sakura is seen waiting for Sasuke.*
Sakura: So it’s done?
*Sasuke walks up to her, grabs her by her ass, picking her up and kissing her. The two continue to kiss for some time until small footsteps are heard.*
Tsunade: Daddy… what are you doing to Mommy?
*Sasuke looks at his daughter, smiling.*
Sasuke: We’re celebrating.
Tsunade: Celebrating what?
Sasuke: Well, we’re going to take a trip, a long vacation.
Tsunade: Is anybody coming wit us?
Sasuke smiling: Hopefully so.
*Scene switches to atop the Hokage office. All of Konoha’s jounin minus the Uchihas and Hinata are present. Shikaku stands before them all.*
Shikaku: As you might have heard, we no longer have a Hokage. Everyone is given the option of relocating with our former Hokage and his family. I know some of you wish to do so. Some of you must. Note, there will be no persecution against those who do relocate.
*The remaing kages flicker in beside Shikaku.*
Kitsuchi: For several years now, our homelands have been decimated.
Darui: It is time we leave your land to you.
Mei: But we will not drop the mantle of fighting the Ryun and the gods.
Gaara: So with that, I resign as Kazekage until my homeland is reclaimed.
Mei: I resign as Mizukage until my homeland is reclaimed.
Darui: I resign as Raikage until my homeland is reclaimed.
Kitsuchi: And I resign as Tsuchikage until my homeland is reclaimed.

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*The panel zooms out to show the entire shinobi forces have encompassed the Hokage office as roars and shouts of approval ring out.*
Shikaku: So… jounin of Konoha, what say you?
*Scene switches back to Naruto as he enters the secret room of the hut, looking around.*
Naruto: There is no sense in hiding Ryu. I know you are here.
*Ryu emerges from the shadows.*
Ryu: So the Toad Sage has come to take down a stronghold of the Ryun?
*Naruto flashes over to Ryu, holding him in the air by his throat.*
Naruto: Tell me what Orochimaru is after.
Ryu: How does it feel… to know the trust is staring you in the face, yet you can’t grasp it?
Naruto: What do you mean?
Ryu laughing: How long have you been searching for Orochimaru?
Naruto: What do you mean… answer me!
Ryu: All this time you’ve been searching for Orochimaru… and he was in Konoha all this time.
*Naruto goes wide-eyed. The scene switches back to Konoha. Sasuke is seen approaching the main gate with several followers including the former kages with their entourages. Hinata, Mito, and Jiraya are seen surrounded by the remaining jinchuuriki. Kakashi and Gai meet them at the gate.*
Kakashi: So this is it, huh?
Sasuke: Afraid so.
*Orochimaru walks up behind Kakashi and Gai.*
Orochimaru: Why don’t the two of you stand aside so the former Hokage can make his leave. He is no longer wanted here.
*Kakashi and Gai turn to face Orochimaru, ignorant to who he is.*
Kakashi: Excuse me sir, but he was my student. Allow a sensei to have a few words with his former student.
Orochimaru: I don’t think so Kakashi…
*Orochimaru kicks Kakashi in the chest, sending him flying into the crowd behind Sasuke. Immediately Gai tries a roundhouse kick, which is caught by Orochimaru, who flings him up in the air. Orochimaru leaps up behind Gai, mimicking his movement in the air, grabbing Gai and spinning him into the ground as the two crash. Once the dust settles, Orochimaru is seen standing before Sasuke.*
Orochimaru chuckling: Ku ku ku ku… I never repaid you for what you did to me.
Sasuke with a horrified look on his face as he is holding Tsunade: Orochimaru.
Orochimaru yelling: I have come to avenge Konoha. For you see, this once criminal is now leaving to abide with another criminal… Uzumaki Naruto.
*Sasuke hands Tsunade to Sakura, ordering her and everyone to leave without him. Everyone leaves excluding the jinchuuriki (minus Ugito).*
Orochimaru: 8 vs. 1. Is that a fair fight now Sasuke-kun?
*Everyone enters a battle stance.*
Orochimaru: Maybe you should have Naruto show up. At least it would be closer to a fair fight then.
*The panel zooms in to show Orochimaru has the rinnegan.*
Orochimaru: Several years ago, a shinobi showed up having powers resembling those of Rikudo Sennin. He decimated Konoha. But he did not have the powers of Rikudo Sennin. I do.
*Suddenly Bee transforms into full bijuu mode, firing off a bijuu-dama. Orochimaru holds up his hand and absorbs the blast. Orochimaru is seen smirking.*
Orochimaru: Surely you can do better than that. I mean, you were the original perfect jinchuuriki.
*Bee roars at Orochimaru, causing a shockwave. Orochimaru stands his ground. He looks at Bee, holding his hand up again. The bijuu-dama suddenly appears, only this time heading towards Bee and the group. The scene switches to everyone leaving heading towards the ocean. Scene focuses on Hinata and Sakura, who are each carrying their little girls.*
Sakura: Do you think they will be alright?
Hinata: Your husband is the Son of Thunder. Have some faith.
*Suddenly an explosion is seen in the background, that covers half of Konoha. The women stop, looking at the explosion.*
Sakura: I’m going back.
Hinata: No you’re not. You’ve got to take care of Tsunade. Have faith in your husband and our friends.
*Scene switches back to the fight, showing everyone blown away as Orochimaru walks towards them.*
Orochimaru: Where is your might, Son of Thunder?!!
*The next panel shows Sasuke standing up, with blood flowing over his right eye.*
Sasuke: Gaara, Bee, get everyone else out of here.
Bee: You for sure?
Orochimaru: You’d better listen to him. A couple of battalions of the Ryun army are waiting for your friends at the coast.
*All of the jinchuuriki are seen now, wide-eyed.*
Orochimaru: You people are so predictable. You’d better hurry up if you want to be in time to save your friends.
*The scene switches to a forested area. Only trees are shown, except for one figure walking towards some lit torches in the distance. The next panel reveals Kabuto, walking in his Dragon Sage form. Scene switches back to Orochimaru.*
Orochimaru: The only question left to be answered is, who will Naruto come to rescue: his friend, or his family?
Sasuke grimacing: You bastard.
Gaara: We’ll go ahead. Handle this here Sasuke.
*The next panel shows some rubble away from the fight. A piece of wall is moved, revealing Kakashi. He looks around at the devastation.*
Kakashi: It’s a good thing you made preparations Sasuke.
*Flashback scene to Shikaku sitting at the Hokage’s desk. After the former kages have left the room, Shikaku is seen talking to Inoichi, Choza, Kakashi, and Gai. A plan is devised to have all civilians evacuated before Sasuke leaves with his party which is made up of high level shinobi and their children. Kakashi and Gai would stay behind with shadow clones made by Konohamaru and clones made by the jinchuuriki. Once the Ryun had made their way to Konoha, Kakashi and Gai would flee. End of flashback.*
Kakashi: Now time to find Gai.
*Scene switches back to Orochimaru and Sasuke.*
Sasuke: You want to see my might?
*Suddenly the walls of Konoha are lit in the black flames of Amerterasu.*
Sasuke: Konoha will be our battlefield Orochimaru. You will die here.
Orochimaru: Is that so?
*Sasuke activates his EMS.*
Sasuke: Aye.
*Instantly Sasuke throws several shuriken at Orochimaru. Sasuke does several handsigns, allowing the shuriken to multiply. He then glares at them, causing them to be set ablaze with Amerterasu.*
Orochimaru: Child’s Play.
*Orochimaru summons the Rashomon gate, blocking all of the shuriken. Orochimaru leaps over the gate, coming down shooting thousands of snakes at Sasuke. Sasuke is seen with grin on his face. The next panel shows his left hand with a chidori in it, ready to strike. Sasuke punches his hand with the chidori up at Orochimaru, extending the the spear up into Orochimaru, stabbing him in the gut. Orochimaru is impaled on the chidori spear, dangling in the air. Sasuke releases the jutsu, allowing Orochimaru to fall to the ground. Scene switches to the jinchuuriki racing after the group.*
Mungo: Do you think that was a ruse?
Gaara: Even if it is, we must confirm it. Sasuke is the son of thunder, he can handle himself.
*Scene switches to the group as the front line of the group, the Inuzukas pick up Kabuto’s scent. All of the Inuzuka dogs begin to bark ferociously at Kabuto. Everyone has come to a halt, with Ugito coming to the front line. Kabuto smiles upon seeing her.*
Kabuto: So I see they sent a child to handle this job.
Ugito: I may be a child, but I can still kick your ass.
*Suddenly the SSM land infront of Ugito.*
Hiru: You made a promise to Uzumaki Naruto to protect his young. Continue on ahead. We’ll handle this.
Kazuka: Besides… we owe him one for destroying our home.
*Mei appears behind Ugito.*
Mei: Let us continue forward.
Ugito: Aye Mizu… Mei-sama.
Kabuto: Who says I’m the only one here?
*Suddenly Raiju appears next to Kabuto. The next panel shows a shocked Darui. Then several figures drop from trees landing next to the duo. The next few panels show younger version of Oonoki, a shocked Kitsuchi and Oonoki, Yagura, a shocked Ao and Mei, a younger version Hiruzen Sarutobi, and a shocked Konohamaru.*
Kabuto: And I’m sure you’ve met these guys before.
*Suddenly the Kabuto clones appear from the ground surrounding the group. Scene switches to Naruto and Ryu.*
Ryu: So what’s it gonna be Toad Sage? Me, Orochimaru and Sasuke, or your family and friends?
*Naruto is shown with a grimace on his face.*

The End.


I know this was a short chapter, but that's because there are going to be several fights in the next couple of chapters.

UzumakiUchiha

@Narut0360: Loving your predictions man, its just beautifully done; hope you keep them up on a regular basis.

@Vishnu: Man you just keep on throwing the hardcore suspenses are just epic. I like what you did with the 2 sneak peaks, the first one you made it as if sasuke dying and 2nd vishnu dying, and I am sure that isn't the case for both of them, there's a trick/twist in their techniques that will turn the tables around, well thats I think so.

UzumakiUchiha

@jekyl: Loved how you built up the fights and circumstances simultaneously, it feels like watcthing a movie. Cant wait for the conclusion of sasukes and orochimarus fight. A question: isn't it possible for naruto just to make few clones and send each one to all the locations to family, sasuke+oroichimar, kabuto etc? It seemed like kabuto reached them quite quick, so naruto should be able to as well since he can become the wind, he can be there in an instant right? or with flying thunder technique?

jekyl_hyde

The clone thing was my first idea. Naruto's version of the FTG was my second idea. I went with neither.

I'll give a bit of a spoiler alert. Naruto and Sasuke are the only two able to stand on somewhat equal footing with the gods. The remaining jinchuuriki along with Hinata and Sakura will be major supporting characters, but for the most part, everyone else left will be minor support. So these upcoming fights are to showcase their abilities.

KiddJutsu

J_H, I know you got the move and what not but damn man we gotta get at least a first level fight scene out of this. This thing is pretty damn fab. You and Vishnu really set the tone.

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Rikudou Sennin Gaiden final chapter: "Birth of a savior... death a rival".

(scene opens with Jubei the juubi gaining more and more nature energy to try and power up more to take down the sages)

White snake sage: "If this continues then we will be annihilated before hiraidama can even arrive..."

Kurotsuchi thinking: "Where are you hiraidama.."

*Hiraidama is moving at very high speed leaving small crater where he's using chakra to propel him which is destroying the ground on contact...*

(scene changes back the the juubi jubei finished gathering more nature energy, ready to attack)

Jubei: "this is where you end... you know nothing about me... or what I have gone through... I was meant for great things, my father told me so. I hda a special gift even among the Uzumaki... But, before I was finally able to show him... he died from a raid from mercenaries trying to gain supplies... All he ever did was try to protect me... believing that his love would power empower hm so he could protect me from anything...".

*Jubei begins to shed what look like tears*

Jubei: "But he was wrong!"

*the tears disappear and begins powering up even more*

Jubei: "Strength cannot come from love... only from rage and fire of the very soul... My father was a fool and he died as a fool... unable to even protect himself... much less ME!".

*jubei charges phoenix sage, firing a fire ball at him... the phoenix sage easily evades the ball then closes in to land a lightning talon slash... but the attack lands doing nothing... as phoenix sage is in disbelief that his best slashing attack did nothing at all... juubi with the chakra arms of sasanoo snatches the sage up by the wings and feet...*

Phoenix sage: "What will you do... kill me, I will just revive and kick your ass anyw..."

Jubei cuts him off: "You will only revive if you have the chakra to do it... haha"

*juubei reaches his arm out of sasanoo and puts it on the phoenix sages stomach... then begins drawing all of the sages nature energy from his body causing the sage to lose chakra... more and more... until its all gone... without nature energy the sage cannot form his chakra for rebirth*

Phoenix sage : "Oh no... he knew about the secret to even phoenix senjutsu rebirth... damn you...".

*just as the phoenix sage struggles to break free... the frog sage leaps at jubei ready to pounce and save his comrade... but jubei senses the attack, looks directly at the frog sage... looks in his eyes... then cast Tsukuyomi, paralyzing the frog sage causing him to just crash to the ground head first, unable to move...*

WHite sanek sage: "Dammit... is the seal ready kurotsuchi... we need it now...".

Kurotsuchi: "No I need just a little more time, please...".

White snake sage: "there is no time, use it now before both the phoenix and frog sage are turned to ash by juubei black fire jutsu... No, I must..".

*just as the white sanek sage begins to charge the juubi jubei to save his comrades and the juubi jubei focuses his eye's on phoenix sage to scorch him with amaterasu... Jubei is struck from behind the head, causing his gaze to be off which catches a cliff on fire... meanwhile, the phoenix sage breaks free raw power after gathering some nature energy... then flies over, picks up the paralyzed frog sage and they fly over to the white sanek sage with kurotsuchi...*

Jubei: "Who did that... your dead...".

*jubei look over to a cliff to see Hiraidama with the traits of all three senjutsu's in his eyes... he is suprised*.

Jubei: "So that is where you have been... you actually learned how to use all three senjutsu's at once by balancing all five different forms of nature energy...*

Jubei thinking to himself: "You are always finding a way to surpass me in some way.. but no more, I am the new god of this world with the same power as you... but with a different nature to my own sage chakra that gives me the power of Doujutsu... my nine tomoe Sharingan... now you die".

*juubi charges hiraidama.... igniting amaterasu on the cliff where he stands... but hiraidama suddenly disappears as the flames ignite right in front of him... Jubei is looking around unable to sense him... until hiraidama appears directly in front of jubei... firing a blast of fire at him... which jubei shakes off... however, while he was distracted by the fire attack... hiraidama with fire in one hand and lightning in another... combines the two with a double palm thrust that hits jubei in the chest with high speed, creating a huge blast of energy that sends jubei flying into a bunch of giant spike made of hardened earth hiraidama created behind him while he was distracted... Jubei hits them causing rocks and dust to cover him and the area he is in*

Hiraidama: "How about that Jubei... I came a little earlier then I appeared... I wanted to study your attacks so I could formulate the proper counter tactics as well as chose what technique would be more effective...".

*as the smoke clears, Jubei is covered in the sasanoo cloak of pure chakra... he is unharmed... gets up, and stares at Hiraidaman with rage in his eye*

Hiraidama: "That sasanoo cloak made of chakra... I underestimated it, I didn't think it could protect you from that combo attack... doesn't matter, It will not stop what I have in store for you next".

Kurotsuchi from afar: "Its ready hiraidama... the rest is up to you..".

*Hiraidama Forms a hand sign with two hands of two figers together with two fingers up on each hand, but one hand is just higer then the other... Focusing his chakra, Hiraidama charges jubei... but jubei ignites amaterasu all around hiraidama trying to catch him with the flames... but jubei cannot keep up with his high speed movement even though his doujutsu can slow down movements of high speed to allow jubei to see as if the movement was slow...*

*Hiraidama as he is moving around the area and jubei with such high speed the light from his body is dragging yards behind him, making it look like his body is warping and streching forward as he moves*

Hiraidama: "I have already seen your illusion and black flames technique... both require that you be able to follow your opponents movements so you can focus to a point to ignite the flames or cast the illusion... Such techniques are useless against me when I have this kind of speed... and now, its over...".

*Hiraidama has led jubei inside a canyon... suddenly, he blitzes in front of juubi landing a barrage of strikes by using his super speed to jump against the canyon walls and ground, hit, land then jump and attack again... moving so fast that Jubei is immobilized due to him being attacked from all sides at such a high speed its as if he is being attack simultaneously by multiple people... and just as jubei's sasanoo cloak has been beaten down to the simple bone from from continuous high speed attacks... Hiraidama stops, placses his hands on the ground then uses his earth control to thrust tons of spikes from each side of the canyon which get through sasanoo, piercing jubei all over his body..

Hiraidama: "Now its time to finish you".

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People live relying on they're Knowledge and Perception, and thus are bound to them.....
Those Boundaries are what they tend to accept as "Reality".....
However..... Knowledge and Perception are both ambiguous....
so "Reality" could be nothing more....
then an illusion....

ITACHI UCHIHA

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Continued....

*Jubei pierced with tons of hardened earth spikes looks in fear as hiraidama places his hands together and begins to rip the portion of earth with the spikes on each side of the canyon with jubei between them... Hiraidama struggling... pulls the entire huge portion of earth spikes immobilizing jubei... floats them and jubei over to kurotsuchi and the sages who have set up a huge seal on the ground where they were... Jubei with the canyon portion of spikes immobilizing him is dropped on the seal*.

WHite snake sage: "Jubei... you cannot be allowed to exist in the world any longer... you have become the ultimate threat to peace and life itself... you will be sealed in an alternate dimension where there is no nature energy for you to draw upon, thus you will be powerless... unable to use senjutsu, you will be trapped forever...".

*as jubei looks in horror.... the sages place themselves at the three points of the seal, then activate it... but jubei starts to break lose from the spikes that have pierced him... as well as instantly regenerate the places he was pierced... suddenly HIraidama blitzes over right by the seal placing his hands on the ground and sending a huge current of lightning into Jubei Immobilizing him so the sealing could be finished... SO with Jubei imobilized and unable to stop the sages... the seal is activated, drawing jubei into a void created by the seal... he disappears in it... and the seal closes... everything is quite..*

Kurotsuchi: "Is it, Is it really over... Haha, hahahahaha... yea!".

*the sages sit down exhausted from the battle, gloating at their victory... The frog sage asks Kurotsuchi what kind of seal that was*

Kurotsuchi: "I originally came up with the idea of the seal... but it was Hiriadama who figured out how to create it and apply it...".

White snake sage: "Really, to think you have even been able to maaster seals to such a level Hiraidama... is there anything you cannot do..".

Hiraidama: "I guess not, Lol... As kurotsuchi said... He came up with the idea, but no way to actually create a practical version to actually use... Until I realised something about chakra and its form... its a combination of two energies.. physical and spiritual... like a balance of Yin and Yang itself for the creation of a single energy... I then though about how to achieve a single nature from chakra... as opposed to the simple nature of chakra itself which is neutral... I did experiments with alternate forms of energy and came to find that the mental energy of applied imagination is extremely similar to that of spiritual energy.... and that the human Life force which we uzumaki have so much of... is extremely similar to Physical energy of the body...
After much research and experiments... I came up with the formula to create chakra that was YIN in nature from the combining of mental and spiritual energy... it offered the user the power to create shape and form out of nothing at all... like creating a live dream...
Next i was able to come up with its counter part... through the combining of life force and physical energy which became Yang in nature... its power is amazing... it gives the user the ability to give life to almost anything...".

Frog sage: "Amazing... hiraidama".

Hiraidama: "I know... with these new forms of chakra... I was able to create the power kurotsuchi had been imaginaing for so long... Banbutsu souzou... kurotsuchi and I put it together in order to make a technique capable of creating a new, better world... However, banbutsu souzou was nothing more then an outline and foundation for a power neither of us were capable of producing... Although the new form of Yang nature chakra was how we created the very seal we just used to create a very dimension within this dimension to hold jubei... Still, we do not have the ability to create the Yin nature chakra without such mental energy with spiritual energy as well... As uzumaki, we have powerful physical and life force energy which we can use to create Yang nature chakra.. but we are still limited to it alone...".

kurotsuchi: "We will discover someone whom we can use as means to help us with our technique and create Yin nature chakra to use with Hiraidama's Yang nature chakra...".

Phoenix sage: "Well then.. I guess its time for us to part out ways...".

*just as the phoenix sage starts to say his goodbyes... he busts into black flames... the others are horrified and surprised... Suddenly Hiraidama is grabbed up from below the earth in a hand of sasanoo... Then from below a chakra sword pierces through the frog sage and cutting the snake sage in half... Kurotsuchi runs as jubei bursts from under ground with Hiraidama in hand, sending kurotsuchi flying into a rock face, then covered with a ton of rubble...*

Hiraidama: "But how.... We sealed you and there was no nature energy to power you, so you had no way to escape...".

Jubei: "Who said I escaped... Its because of you I am here, lol...".

*suddenly hiraidama has a flash back of his lighting attack he used to immobilize jubei... Jubei is seen with a smile on his face*.

Jubei: "Thats right... the lightning nature energy is how phoenix rebirth is done... and you gave me plenty enough to use for my own rebirth... all I has to do was rebirth myself then use my earth abilities to absorb myself into the round before anyone could notice... ahaha... and now, now I have you where I want you... In my hands where you cannot use that super speed of your...".

Hiraidama: "I was careless... Forgive me masters... family...I have failed you".

Jubei: "Yes you have... hahaha... now let me pay you back for that barrage you gave me earlier...".

*jubei throws the frog sage off his sasanoo sword, sending him flying into the ground, motionless... Jubei then uses all four arms to grab hiraidama and squeeze him, crushing him... Hiraidama screams in pain... Next, Jubei charges his sasanoo arms with lightning electrocuting hiraidama... and while he is being electrocuted, Jubei spits a huge barrage of fire at hiraidama as well...*.

Jubei: "You used lighting and fire on me... as well as earth element... But I do not care for it much for earth element... How about I just crush you under the weight of my foot.. into the same earth you tried to use to defeat me... AHhahaha...".

*jubei opens the sasanoo hands, dropping HIraidama who is seriously injured from jubei's attacks... Hiraidama slams into the ground with allot of force... He regains consciousness*

Hiraidama thinking: "So this is it... I will fail like this, but I was supposed to be strong enough, with the spirit of a warrior.... I cannot fall to the monster that killed my family and now my masters... I remember Mother, you said I had a powerful spirit which shined through my eyes...".

*hiraidama has a flash back of his mother explaining she could tell how strong he is by looking in his eyes... Hiraidama did not understand... but his mother explained that the eyes are the window to the soul... they show the very spirit of the person by the color of the pupil... and your spirit burns as red as pure fire.... Suddenly, hiraidama has a realization...*

Hiraidama thinking: "The eyes are the windows to the soul... showing the power of the spirit through the color of the pupil... The power of spirit comes through the eyes... Jubei has such a red eye with all those tomoe... as if the power of his spirit is shines out... Thats it...".

*Hiraidama has a flash back of the discovery of Yin and Yang nature chakra... the idea and formula of Banbutsu souzou and the fact he has the most powerful of Yang nature chakra... but no way to access any Yin nature chakra...*

Hiraidama laying in a small creater where he landed: "Yin chakra offers the user the power to create shape and form out of nothing... and even the ability to create more shape an form out of something that already has shape and form... Jubei's eye is capable of creating a paralyzing illusion which is from nothing... while aslo being able to create a demon claok defense out of his pure sage chakra... His eye so red must have such powerful spiritual energy along with the powerful mental energy to create such and apply such things as his illusion and sasanoo... To think, What I need is right befoe me... but, I am hurt, with no way to take that power... Unless... Unless..
Unless I can finally go into Dragon sage mode and sustain it with my other two senjutsu forms... I have to try....".

*hiraidama starts to turn into the incomplete dragon sage form from before... Jubei notices, then tries to crsuh hiraidama by stomping him into the earth*.

Jubei: "I will not let you use any form of dragon sage mode... I am its only user now... die!".

*Hiraidama is stepped on with a ton of force... crushing him into the ground... But Jubei is confused... hiraidama is starting to push back on him... Just as Jubei tries to apply more pressure to his stomp, he is blown off of hiraidama and into the air, slamming on the ground behind him...*

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People live relying on they're Knowledge and Perception, and thus are bound to them.....
Those Boundaries are what they tend to accept as "Reality".....
However..... Knowledge and Perception are both ambiguous....
so "Reality" could be nothing more....
then an illusion....

ITACHI UCHIHA

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Continued....


**In the smoke, a form can be seen... with horns, flowing hair and shining blue eyes... the smoke clears to reveal Hiraidama in a perfect dragon sage mode, perfectly balanced with his other sage forms... Hiraidama's eye's are blue with a three circle pattern on each pupil... Just as jubei gets up... he looks over to see Hiraidama in dragon Sage mode, with a completely new doujutsu in his eyes...**

Jubei: "What in the world is that... thats not the SG I created from the nature of my chakra... Ahhhhh, the bastard used his dragon sage mode to absorb my own chakra and make it his own... his Yang nature will give life to the chakra he took from me, allowing him to increase and use as his own, for now on... the bastard... he will not, cannot surpass me...".

*just as Jubei tries to get up.... Hiraidama extends his hand out and draws Jubei up of the ground to him just as he launches a high speed punch to jubeis face, knocking blood from his mouth, postioned just above him... immediately followed by a huge devine push that drives jubei into the ground so hard a huge crater is created...*.

Hiraidama: "You no longer can be allowed to live in this world... the nature of your dark energy will swallow you whole, losing yourself forever... when that happens... you will be nothing more then a mindless beast with unparalleled power capable of destroying the entire world... As this worlds protector... I will Inprision you in the only place I can keep you under control... WITHIN ME JUBEI.".

*jubei is shocked... He picks himself up from the crater he is in... dawns himself in his sasanoo cloak... then looks in hiraidama's eyes... Tsukuyomi... But nothing happens... HIraidama is completely unaffected... Letting his rage take him over.... He explodes with a huge amount of chakra sending everything around the area flying... However, the dust clears to reveal Hiraidama still in the same place... Overcome with even more Rage, Jubei's voice begins to deepen... and what was words have become nothing more then a wild growl of a beast... Jubei uses a ton of power to cover the entire batle feild in amaterasu, igniting everything in black flames... Jubei thinks he has won, growling at the sky as if it master... However, the battle field of black flames are disappearing, being absorbed and sealed by Hiraidama....*

Hiraidama: "Then this is it".

*Hiraidama draws jubei in again, jumps to touch the center of sasanoo... then absorbs and seals jubei chakra that forms sasanoo.... in mere seconds... Hiraidama has completely absorbed Jubei's sasanoo leaving him open to attack... Then just as jubei tried to throw a strike, Hiraidama flies in to touch Jubei's chest... and with a huge upsurge of chakra hiraidama gathers... He snatches Jubie's spirit from his very body.... then forms bloody hand sign, placing his palm on his stomach then sealing jubei's soul in his own body... leaving the a seal mark on his stomach....
Not wanting Jubei's body just left around.... Hiraidama draws upon the huge power of Jubei's juubi form and creates a huge black ball of energy that sucks up huge pieces of land, along with the juubi body of jubei, forming a ball of earth the size of a country... Hiraidama pushes the ball into space far away enough from the planet so it will have less effect on the planet...*

*With the juubi jubei sealed... Hiraidama summons a large emma head surrounded by black flames... it opens its mouth to reveal the white snake sage, frog sage and kurotsuchi healed and in one peice... But they are still dead... With a couple hand signs Hiraidama draws three blue energy balls from the emma's mouth which enter the sages and kurotsuchi... they wake up to find a battle field in ruins with Hiraidama in dragon SM with a new doujutsu and no Juubi Jubei*.

*hiraidama explains what happened to the sages and Kurotsuchi... that because the phoenix sage was burned to ash, he could not be healed and revived... *

White snake Sage: "I feel bad for tobi...".

Hiraidama: "WHo is tobi sensei".

White snake sage: "He is Jubei's Son... and likely to inherit his fathers eyes and their nature as well...".

Hiraidama: "Jubei had... a son... *sighs*... then I will take him in and raise him as my own... One day, he and my own son can be true brothers and friends like I wanted me and Jubei to be... Perhaps maybe Kimiko will be my... anyways.... we have to go Kurotsuchi."

*The sage's thanks Hiraidama.... Kurotsuchi and him head off back to the village... they are stopped at a village with a priest who is wondering what Hiraidama is...*

Hiraidama: "I am the savior of this world... All of this war and hate will soon be gone and new world, a better world will begin...".

Priest: "You have such a presence, I really believe you will make a better world with this power you chakra... as a priest, you should take my staff of six paths... its proof of your title as a true priest Hiraidama..."

*hiraidama and Kurotsuchi leave the village, thanking the priest... They end up at the top of a mountain, looking out onto what looks like an entire world... Holding the staff of six paths, with his fathers sword on his waist... Hiraidama promises to spread the word of chakra... to teach those who have no way to defend themselves... a way through the ninpo of chakra...*

Kurostcuchi: "you know HIraidama... kimiko is going to be really impressed by your new power... you think ya'll will.. Hunh....".

Hiraidama: "No no no... we do not need to talk about that... I believe its time we finished what we started so we can build this world we are thinking of... through banbutsu souzou's formula... with this yin/yang chakra I have with my doujutsu.. I think I can really make a technique of creation... a technique I want to... Called Izanagi...".

(The Gaiden ends with the Rikudou looking out onto the world from the mountain... he has so much work ahead of him... But he has the power to change it for the better...).

Rikudou Gaiden END........

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People live relying on they're Knowledge and Perception, and thus are bound to them.....
Those Boundaries are what they tend to accept as "Reality".....
However..... Knowledge and Perception are both ambiguous....
so "Reality" could be nothing more....
then an illusion....

ITACHI UCHIHA

KiddJutsu

KYF - This is where you excel bro. That sh*t was righteous. Looking forward to more fanfic soon and predictions as well. Great stuff man...

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Narut0360

i should have my next chapter up by 2nite, if anyone wants to know.

KiddJutsu

Good deal. Been looking forward to it my man. You left the last chap at a really good place too with the village in the trees, Gramps, training, Sasuke/Naruto sparring, and new abilities on display for Naruto. Not to forget the two sage toads ta boot.
We'll lookout for it sir.

And KYF - got more fanc fic/predictions in you bro?
These last few bunches have been pretty outstanding.

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Narut0360

Chapter is a continuation from page 62

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Continuation from page 63