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-Chaos, in this war torn climate, catastrophe just breaks out for the sake of securing authority and territory.

(Sasuke leads Gaara to a wide open plain as Sasuke lands he stops and faces Gaara, as he does the same.) “This is better, that way we aren’t cluttered from the other battles, wouldn’t you say, Gaara of the Desert,” said the grinning Sasuke. “That’s Kazekage to you, you’re no friend of mine,” said Kazekage.

“Oh, is that right Kazekage? Either way, you’ll lose your life tonight for being a mere stepping stone in my path to glory,” said Sasuke. (Kazekage makes an angry face as sand from his gourd pours out and pierces the ground and starts mixing more sand.) “How Naruto left you alive is nothing short of shocking,” said Gaara.

“DON’T YOU EVER BRING THAT NAME UP IN MY PRESENCE AGAIN,” yelled Sasuke. (Sasuke makes the Tiger Handseal.) “Fire Element: Great Dragon Fire jutsu,” yelled Sasuked. (Three giant dragon heads of fire come crashing in however, Gaara commands the sand to rise up from the ground to defend against the flame dragons.) “Fire is ineffective against sand,” said Kazekage. (Though, he notices that Sasuke is drawing near.) “So, those dragons were a distraction so that he could strike me off guard using body flicker to increase his speed,” said Kazekage. (As Sasuke gets closer, Sasuke notices that sand up from under the ground comes out of multiple places from the ground surrounding Sasuke’s location. Four streams of sand grab a separate limb. Sasuke is held from attacking the Kazekage.)

“Hmmm,” mumbled Sasuke. “I’ll break his arms and legs,” thought Kazekage. (Small bits of lightning starts to crackle around the sand; the sand starts to break apart slightly.) “What’s this,” thought Kazekage. “CHIDORI NAGASHI,” yelled Sasuke. (Bolts of lightning crackles around his body and breaks away the sand from his limbs as Sasuke begins making his three signature handseals; he prepares his signature jutsu.)

“So, his chidori nagashi can be used as a full bodied technique as well,” thought Gaara. (The small bits of lightning dissipate around Sasuke as he rushes forward with his jutsu in hand.) “From this range, there is no way he can avoid my full blown attack. CHIDORI,” yelled Sasuke. (As Sasuke nears within meters of Kazekage, the Kazekage claps both hands together, as large volumes of sand blocks Sasuke’s chidori and reforms into a huge, round, humanoid like sand creature that stands in front of Sasuke. Sasuke is shocked as he tries to withdraw his hand from the creature’s belly.)

“This is my ultimate defense; your chidori has the advantage over a lower degree of sand however, against this colossal defense, your chidori is nothing more than a flea bite,” said Kazekage. (Sasuke activates the Chidori to pull his arm from the Kazekage’s defense. Sasuke then cancels the chidori.) “Not bad, Gaara,” said Sasuke. (Sasuke’s eyes the turn into the Mangekyou Sharingan’s; the scene then switches to another battle field. Separated from the other disputes, Yuki and Sazx prepare to double team Shisio again as their battle is also distances away from the other disputes.)

“His frontal defenses are too good, but I’ll distract him, then you get him from behind again,” said Sazx. (Yuki nods.) “It won’t work,” said Shisio as he dashes forward. “JUMP,” yelled Sazx. (Yuki jumps far up into the sky. As Shisio prepares to downward slash Sazx with both palms on the hilt of his blade, a large douse of fire forms around Sazx’s fist as he prepares to strike the ground.)

“Fire Element: Explosive Fist,” yelled Sazx. “WHAT,” yelled Shisio. (A huge fireball of explosion erupts. Shisio jumps high out of the smoke as his clothes are damaged slightly and he suffers minor burns. Shisio lands on a wide open field and notices a crater left from Sazx’s attack. Sazx stands in the middle of the crater.) “Even though I’m not that damaged, to think that even evading it that much would leave me somewhat effected; that was one hell of an attack,” said Shisio. (Yuki slips into Shisio’s blindside, then she slowly slides to his right and spin kicks the blade out of Shisio’s right hand from behind as Shisio turns around trying to catch his blade.)

“AHHH, fool,” yelled Shisio. (Yuki uses her lightning speed reaction to catch the blade and try to strike at Shisio however, Shisio backs off and then goes into a striking stance.) “So, you slipped into my blind eye’s side and took my blade when I couldn’t react in time… Idiot you think a lass like you can wield such a weapon,” said the grinning Shisio. “Don’t underestimate me,” said Yuki. (As she grips the blade tightly, she is however, kicked from her side, as she drops the blade. She recovers by landing on the ground short distances away.)

“Ryu, so, you’re siding with them,” said Yuki as she holds her side as it aches from the blow. (Ryu picks up Shisio’s blade and tosses it to Shisio as he catches it.) “I thought you said you hated missing nin,” said Yuki. “This is my calling to life; I wouldn’t have things any different,” said Ryu. (Then Sazx rushes in and tries to attack Shisio with a flaming kick however, Shisio channels water into his blade and blocks with the flat side [causing steam] knocking Sazx backwards as Shisio chases after him.)

“Well, let’s get started rookie,” said Yuki. (Ryu activates the sharingan.) “An Uchiha, so you’re Sasuke’s kid… No matter, I’ll use a jutsu passed down from my father to end it; Tracking Fang Technique,” said
Yuki. (She slams an earth scroll on the ground, which summons dogs to emerge from the ground that attempts to bite Ryu from all angles however, Ryu escapes into the air while the summoned hounds disperse. Ryu then pulls out a huge Fuuma Shuriken, as he adds lightning element into it and then tosses it at Yuk as he lands back onto the ground.)

“Knowing that trick there are probably two of them, one hidden in the shadows, not to mention they’re probably wired,” thought Yuki. (She then lays flat on the ground to avoid the shuriken attack.) “So, she saw through it,” thought Ryu. (The Scene switches over to another battle. Mikoto is free from the wind prison as his body is a deep blue color.)

“He broke out of my jutsu. His body just turned into solid ice and withstood it,” said Scar. (Mikoto’s body returns to its original state. Kuja, Dax, and Scar then stand in front of Mikoto. Mikoto makes a handseal.)

“Ninja Art: Field Effect,” said Mikoto. “Be careful guys, he’s the most gifted of his clan,” said Dax. “Youngsters I’ll start things off with a different Fuuton, you kids then follow it up with your stuff,” said Scar. “WHAT THE HELL?! Look at his body,” said Kuja. (Mikoto’s body is now burning red. Soon, all three of them start to sweat from the heat.) “Is it my old age kicking in, or am I hot as grilled charcoal,” said Scar. “No, old man, it’s really hot,” said Dax. “Let’s back up and attack from long range,” said Kuja. (They shake their heads as Mikoto extends his arms.)

“Release: Microwave Oven over 50 ft Radius,” said Mikoto. (The three sand ninja notices Mirages created from the rising heat. They also start to sweat even more from the scorching heat.) “WE’RE GOING TO BE COOKED,” yelled Dax. “Let’s tunnel under the earth,” said Scar. “Good plan sir,” said Kuja. (They use an earth elemental ninjutsu to bury under the earth and resurface outside of Mikoto’s field effect; Dax tosses a shuriken at the rising heat waves to test it, which melts the shuriken into liquid metal.)

“We can’t get within 50 ft of him with that field effect on,” said Dax. “We’ll think of something, put those young minds to use and don’t let me, an old timer have to think of everything alone,” said Scar. (The Scene then switches over to Marine Squad vs. Teru, Take, and Kankuro. The sand team quickly gets into formation.)
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“It's about time we start sighning roles ehh Sensei,” said Take. (Shark rushes in and uses a jutsu against all three of them.) “Water Element: Wall,” yelled Shark. (Shark expels Water from his gullet as a tall wall of water crashes in to attack the sand trio however, Teru steps up and uses a jutsu of his own.)

“Earth Element: Wall,” said Teru. (A wall of Earth matching the water protects his allies from the attack. On the Marine side they formulate their plans.) “There’s definitely a high level Earth elemental user against us,” said Shark. “That’s bad for us, Shark you handle him. I’ll take Take and Dolphin will take the other puppet master,” said Orca. (They all agree as Orca tosses exploding tags at the Earth wall exploding it. The Marine Squad rushes forward.)

“Here they come, remember what we’ve discussed,” said Kankuro. (Shark rushes forward trying to take out Teru however, Teru touches the ground with his palm, causing a huge spike to come up from under Shark however, notices, jumps over it before the spike rose far enough to take him down. As he gets within range he tries to punch Teru however, Teru forms an earth protective dome around himself. A small opening in the prisim shows Teru’s face. Thin sharp spike like needles then circles around the front part of the prism. Then all of a sudden, they shoot out like projectiles from the front. Shark evades them as a battle between Dolphin and Kankuro erupts. Kankuro pulls out his Sasori puppet. It opens its head by leaning back.)

“Red Secret Technique • Machine Triangles,” said Kankuro. (Triangular like projectiles with small explosives tied to the end up them attempts to strike down at Dolphin’s position however, she makes several handseals before the projectiles strikes her.)

“Water Element: Rapid Liquid Bullets,” yelled Dolphin. (A large amount of small, thin bullets of water continuously rushes out of her mouth as she moves her head around and around to stop Kankuro’s rapid attack. The Scene switches to Orca vs. Take. Take summons his 10 puppets. They are short, 3ft tall skeleton like creatures with black cloaks on. They each hold steel bats with barbwire circling all around the hitting spots. Take then positions his hands outwards, as he gains control of the little devils.)

“Bash da shit out of em my little puppets from the underworld,” smiled Take. “How frightening,” said Orca. “Yeah I know. They pounds da shit out of everything mercilessly. You ain’t got no chance in hell you crazed motha,” said Take. (Orca makes a handseal and expels 9 large balls of water that hits the ground. They soon reforms into water clones of Orca.) “Water Clones,” thought Take. “Yes, not many can produce this many without water nearby, but I’m different,” said Orca.

“My lil devils gone have so much fun cavin yo shit in,” said Take. (The 10 puppets begin to move.) “As long as I stand within range of my clones, they shouldn’t disperse; so I should be able to maintain control over them throughout this clash,” thought Orca. (Night covers over Konoha as well, as the scene switches over to the barracks. All of the Jounin, Special Jounin, and Chunnin commanders are putting on body armor that resembles the armor The Sannin wore during the 2nd Shinobi war. The scene then switches over to a particular group Jounin. The group contains Hiro, Sarutobi, Lee, Choji, Kiba, Zig, Shino, and one other unidentified shinobi. Hiro is stuffing his hip bag with shuriken, smoke bombs, and other shinobi tools.)

[Shino just leans against a wall all cool like not even budging.]

“Hiro sensei,” said Zig. (He places his arm on his shoulder.) “They’ll pay,” said Hiro. “You alright man,” asked Lee. “DO I FUCKIN LOOK OK,” yelled Hiro. (Everyone is shocked.) “Hey, just leave him alone right now, he just lost his teammate,” said Kiba. “He was more than just a teammate,” said Hiro. (He walks off somewhere.) “Dosa, he was a pretty amazing guy, especially so if Hiro sensei is so down like this, and if it wasn’t for him, I wouldn’t be nearly as strong,” said Zig. “This atmosphere, definitely, we’re going to war,” said Sarutobi. “Yeah, I don’t like this feeling,” said Choji. (Choji slides his chest plate over his neck.) “War, I can’t believe it… I’m so nervous,” said Kato. (Sarutobi places his hand on Kato’s head trying to get him to focus, Sarutobi then takes it off.)

[Notice Shino remains completely quiet and cool looking as he leans up against a wall throughout the scene.]

“Show your father, Sai, that you’re ready for this,” said Lee. “But I’m so young, I can’t possibly,” said Kato before being cut off by Zig. “You’re the hot stuff from last year. Don’t let me down, otherwise I’d lose my respect for you,” said Zig. “Alright that’s enough talk, continue to equip yourselves before The Hokage speaks with us regarding our target,” said Sarutobi. “Shino! What the Hell ARE YOU DOING? Move your ass,” yelled Kiba. (Neji walks into the room as The Scene switches to a hallway somewhere in the barracks. Hiro is sitting on a bench as tears fall from his face. He soon clears his face as Hope and Shun walk into the area via a door in front of him.)

“Shun, you’ve recovered,” said Hiro. “Don’t worry about me, I want to know how you’ve been feeling, have you talked with Rina,” asked Shun. “I’ll leave you two alone, I don’t want to impose on such a delicate matter; I’ll go equip myself and get prepared,” said Hope. “Thanks Hope,” thought Hiro. (Hope walks into the Barracks via another door down the hall.) “So, have you seen Rina,” asked Shun. “I can’t face her like this; I don’t even know what I’d say. And to think I’ve heard she’s taking it worse than all of us, even more so than the Hokage,” said Hiro.

“We’ll go together, we’ll see her together. I’ll lend you to strength to give her comfort in this miserable state,” said Shun. (Hiro starts to tear up.) “Are you crying man,” asked Shun. (Hiro quickly wipes his face.) “I’m not crying! And thanks, Senpai,” smiled Hiro. “Ahh, man, don’t call me that; it makes me sound old,” said the grinning Shun. (Hiro wraps his arm around Shun’s neck.) “Alright old pal,” said Hiro. “We’ll get those bastards together,” said Shun. (The Scene switches to the Hokage’s office.)

“Shikamaru, you’re going to be the general of the Konoha and hold the fort while we’re out,” said The Hokage. “What!? You’re going to be on the front lines without me buddy,” asked Shikamaru. “Yeah, I’m going to lead the main platoon with Kai as my lieutenant,” said The Hokage. “Yes, Hokage,” said Kai. “Daisuke, you will be in my squad as well,” said The Hokage. “Very well, if that’s what you wish,” said Daisuke. “Just be careful Naruto, you have a wife and kid to go back to,” said Shikamaru. “But of course,” said The Hokage. (Sai then walks into the room.) “Sai, have all of the clan Leaders been ordered to the barracks,” asked The Hokage. “Naruto, your daughter, Nila have also been given word,” said Sai.

“What are you saying? I only asked for the Chunnin commanders, not the regular Chunnin,” said The Hokage. “Haven’t you heard, Nila is now the Head of the Hyuuga,” said Sai. “You’re kidding me,” said The Hokage. “Hmm, strange,” said Shikamaru. “You’re daughter is very accomplished for her age,” said Daisuke. “How come I wasn’t told of such development? Could this be Inabi’s work,” asked The Hokage. “Beats me, so what are you going to do about it,” asked Shikamaru. “I’ll see to that matter once I report back to the barracks,” said The Hokage.

“So, how should my unit have a stake in this,” asked Sai. “You’ll be our recon and information gathering sector. Don’t worry, I’ll have all the squads organized for deployment before we set out in the morning. We’ll go over the circled hotspots on maps and any other areas of interest asap with the army. Now, the rest of you, follow me, It is time I discuss our plan of attack. I kind of left them hanging with all of the reeling thoughts. I’ll provide in detail how we should approach this. Everyone, follow me, it is time we arrange for Konoha’s first blow,” said The Hokage.

Next Time: Konoha Sets out for war in the morning, The 5th Shinobi War begins as Konoha’s Military Marches Forward.

-Background Information

Kato: He is the one and only son of Sai. He is 16 years old and is the spitting image of Sai from the current series of Naruto that is currently underway. He also dresses the same. Unlike his father was when he was younger, he is aware of his comrades emotions although, he gets nervous and apprehensive more so than usual. Though, he is extremely gifted for his age and just like Zig, he is the shine of his age group. Though, he is last years’ big shot, so he is a year above Zig’s class. He is also Jounin with a skill set similar to that of his father however, Kato is more specialized than his father was at his age, which makes him quite remarkable. Zig respects Kato for his strength though how Kato matches up with either Zig, or Hope in terms of skill level is yet to be determined.
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“Do your young minds have any plan?” ask Scar. Kuja and Dax shake their heads. “Youngsters.” Scorn Scar. “Kuja used your sound to create a genjutsu.” Says Scar. Kuja nods and he makes a handseal. “Ninja Technique: Blissful Sound Illusion.” And he shoots sound vibration towards Mikoto. Suddenly Mikoto stops moving and the tempature around him are going down. Mikoto looks around him and sees endless blissful green garden with flowers blooming. “I can’t believe I fell for a genjutsu.” Says Mikoto and he bite his lips. Then his senses are back to reality and he sees Scar inches from him. “Typical.” Says Mikoto and he unleashed the “Release: Microwave Oven over 50 ft Radius.” And the heat wave spread across with such speed that Scar couldn’t avoid it. “AAAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!” yelled Scar before he was cremated by the wave. “Old man!!!!!!” yelled Dax while Kuja is speechless. Teru looks towards and is shock by his sensei’s death. “SENSEIIII!!!!!!” scream Teru. “Gotcha kid!!!” yelled Shark and he aims the water sword on Teru’s chest. Teru manage to avoid the blade from hitting his chest, but his left shoulder was stabbed. Teru jumps away from Shark and his right hand is holding his wounded left shoulder. “Your blood taste nice.” Says Shark while licking his water sword. “TERU!!!” scream Kankuro. “They are distracted. NOW!!!” yelled Orca and the marines’ squad stand side by side and make the same hand seal. “Water Release: Sea God!!!” says the Marine Squad and they shoots water from their mouth and a large figure made of water appears from the water and slams into Kankuro, Teru and Take, sending them flying and crash into the Sand Village wall.

“Crap.” Says Kuja as he dodges away from Mikoto while Dax transform his arm into the shape of a gun and shoots Mikoto from a distance but his bullets melts as it enters the microwave area surrounds Mikoto. “We can’t do anything against this guy.” Says Kuja and he look at the battles. Kankuro is calling for a medic to attend Teru while Take is guarding both of them with his ten puppets. He moves his hand and the puppets began to transform and merge with one another and become a huge puppet that looks like skeleton wearing samurai armor. The puppet backs open and Take climb inside his puppet. “My ultimate technique. Ninja Art: Skull Shogun Puppet Show.” Says Take and the puppet open its mouth and shoots blue flame towards the marine squad. The squad avoids the flame and Dolphin makes a hand seal, Water release: Water Cannon.” And shoots continuous water projectiles towards the flame but the flame didn’t go out but it become stronger and its fire burns the water and catch on Dolphin water jutsu and rushes towards her. Dolphin cancel her jutsu moments before the fire reach her but the fire explode in front of her and knocks her out. Orca quickly grabs her sister before she fells to the ground and looks at Take with anger in his eyes. “What? You got a problem with me trying to burn your sister?” ask Take. “In one hour, I’ll make sure you will dance with the devil in hell.” Says Orca. “Sorry. Done that. By the way, the devil says your Uchiha boss is gay.” Laughs Take.

“It seems there is some commotion over there.” Says Sasuke. “No matter, my village won’t surrender even at their last breath. And that includes me.” Says Gaara as his sand attacks Sasuke. “You are crazy if you think those attack will defeat me.” Says Sasuke as he dodges Gaara’s sand. “Who says this attack is to defeat you?” ask Gaara and he clasped his hand together. “This one will. Ninja Technique: Desert Eater.” Says Gaara and a huge mouth look like Shukaku appears behind Sasuke and swallow him. Gaara makes another hand seal and the figure went underground. “Ninja Art: Desert Coffin.” Says Gaara and the sand inside is pressurize. Suddenly Gaara spotted some black flame coming from below ground and he quickly used the sand to make himself float in the air. Then the sand below him is covered with black flame and Sasuke jumps out from sand. “You think that attack will kill me?” ask Sasuke. “Nope. I was hoping to defeat you so you will resort to your Mangekyou Sharingan. You have been using it many times from the last war. I just want you used it a few more until you go blind.” Explain Gaara.

Yuki and Ryu stand looking at each other. “Reconsider Ryu. Is this what you want? Become like him?” ask Yuki. Ryu looks down. “It’s not too late. You maybe his kid, but that doesn’t mean you must follow his footstep.” Says Yuki. “I’m an Uchiha…” says Ryu. “So what? You were raise at Cloud. They know you’re an Uchiha. But do they treat you differently? Will you lose everything you built because of him? Think Ryu, please.” Says Yuki. Ryu looks down silently. Near them Sazx is on his knees after all of his attack is deflect by Shisio. Ryu looks at Shisio. “That’s your problem kid. But remember. In this world, we forge our own legends and legacy.” Says Shisio and he look at Sazx. “Round two?” ask Shisio.

Hope looks at the weapon selection and saw Mai enters the barracks and walks to the weapon racks. “Are you going?” ask Hope. “I will. I must.” Says Mai. “ Just take it easy.” Says Hope. Then Nila enters the barracks. “I thought you wear some Hyuuga clothing?” ask Hope. “Nah. Maybe later.” Says Nila.

Inside the Konoha barracks Nila is waiting for her father while Inabi is watching her from afar. “Many clans have make a wrong turn and extinct. That’s why we are too cautious. Your father may change us a bit, but our fear still lurks. Maybe its time for us to move forward again. Nila, soak it all. The pain, joy, the knowledge and strategy, everything so that when you return to us, you can direct the Hyuugas where to turn next.” Says Inabi.
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-Abort Operation/New Game plan. The Tides of War changes like the direction of the wind.

(Mikoto stands proudly with his field effect on as the skin of Kuja and Dax have now become shades darker. Several meters away, Kuja and Dax are sweating terribly and are exhausted as they stand in the field of heat that emits from Mikoto’s person. They both slouch down, as Mikoto begins to walk forward.)

“We can’t stop him,” said Kuja. (Dax falls to his knees as he vomits, soon Kuja does the same as the heat increase in magnitude as he walks closer to them.) “Argghg. He’s just toying with us, he lets down the intensity of his effect then increase it, but just enough to keep us barely alive…,” groaned Dax. “At this rate we’ll die of heat strokes,” said Kuja. (Kuja falls on his back.) “Kuja… Kuja ahh. Why, why don’t you just kill us already,” yelled Dax. (He falls on his face. Vomit pours from his nose and mouth as Mikoto stands just feet from the collapsed duo.)

“You’re right, like how I eradicated that old man,” said Mikoto. “Arrggh. Bas… Basstard,” mumbled Daxter. “I only kill what’s a threat to me. At that moment, the old man almost had me, so I erased him from existence. You two are not even worth to die by my hand, though take this heat as punishment for your disappointment in comparison to my ability,” said Mikoto. “AHHHHHHH,” yelled Dax and Kuja until the sounds run silent as they pass out. Mikoto lets down his field effect as his skin returns to its normal color.)

“I have no interest in killing those who poses no threat to me,” said Mikoto. (Mikoto rushes over to a high ground overlooking the battlefields. He pulls out his binoculars and looks over to the battlefield involving Shark and Orca vs. Take’s Skull puppet contraption. The image shows Shark and Orca standing several feet across from Take’s Skull puppet, the scene pulls back to Mikoto.)

“Where’s the other two sand shinobi that were tackling the Marine squad earlier? Have they fled, or just have called for backup? Let’s see how Shisio is fairing,” said Mikoto. (He looks through the scopes lens and describes the situation.) “Looks like the situation’s under our command; I should proceed with turning the sand into the snow. I got interrupted before, so the natural temperatures of this area undid everything that I had planned. It’ll take me an hour, I shouldn’t have wasted my time with those fools,” said Mikoto. (Mikoto makes a handseal as the scene switches over to Shisio vs. Sazx. Sazx is lying on his back as he is beaten. Shisio puts his foot on Sazx’s chest [Flame aura is not on], as Shisio pulls out his blade and points at him.)

“Hah, it seems the nationalized SNA isn’t nearly as powerful as the former Globalized SNA,” smiled Shisio. “How dare you say that,” said Sazx. “Well it’s true. During the war I’ve fought up against both types of SNA specimens. I can honestly say, the globalized organization was way more challenging to go up against,” said Shisio. (Shisio presses harder with his foot.)

“AHHH,” groaned Sazx. “Village SNA waste, you don’t even compare with the others,” Shisio. “Don’t you dare compare us to those monsters,” yelled Sazx. “If SNA’s in your name, that’s your game reject,” said Shisio. “There’s a major difference! Each of the 5 great hidden villages have their own secret SNA organization that many don’t know about however, we’re in no way connected to those global fools… We are home grown naturally without any genetic or morbid enhancements. Hiro is more than likely the same as me! So don’t you dare compare us to those crazy ass mind fucks,” yelled Sazx. “Shimizu Hiro was the exception to your kind, but DON’T PUSH YOUR LUCK,” yelled Shisio.

(Sazx grabs the foot of Shisio that is on his chest with both hands.) “Got you right where I want you,” thought Sazx. (Shisio notices that his foot is caught.) “I’ll kill you,” yelled Shisio. (Shisio tries to stab by bending down however, Sazx twists his ankle with both hands.) “BITCH, you broke it,” said Shisio. (Sazx with both hands on Shisio’s foot, stands up, and is swinging Shisio around in circles. Sazx then smashes him into the ground over and over, then he lifts Shisio’s body up in the air while he is still holding on to the foot.)

“AHHHH! DAMN YOU,” yelled Shisio. “FIRE ELEMENT: HUMAN TORCH,” yelled Sazx. “My ankle’s burning. But I won’t die, not today… Looks like I’ll have to do something drastic,” thought Shisio. (As the fire now engulfs Sazx’s body, Shisio quickly tosses his sword at Sazx’s left arm, as it spins quickly in vertical spin. Sazx couldn’t react in time, so he ends up losing his entire left arm. Shisio’s body hits the ground as Sazx loses the strength to hold Shisio. However, Shisio is hurt as well from the earlier barrage. Blood sprays everywhere as Sazx holds where his left shoulder use to be; he screams out in pain.)

“AUGUGHGHGH,” yelled Sazx. (Sazx rolls over as blood continues the flow.) “MY ARM! YOU GOT MY DAMN ARM. OUCH! NO! FUCK IT ALLL,” yelled Sazx. (Shiso, who is also in a bad state, reluctantly sits up, then he lean back down on his back.)

“Ha, ha, ha! I guess I underestimated you, but the water blade came in handy,” said Shisio. “To think I’d get it like this! My back is killing me. But that’s the least of my worries. My left ankle is busted, but I’m in better shape than you,” said the laughing Shisio. (He then sits up completely and looks over at Sazx.) “AhhhhhH. OHHHHH. The bleeding, must stop the bleeding,” yelled Sazx. “In your condition you can’t afford to fight me,” smirked Shisio. (Sazx’s vision starts to go blurry.) “Too much blood, I’m losing too blood,” said Sazx as he faints.)

“Looks like I win, now, to go burn that arm when I grab my blade,” said Shisio. (He tries to stand up.) “ERRRRTT,” yelled Shisio. “It’s only a few broken bones. But it seems my back isn’t in good shape either from hitting the ground so many times. But my foot, this is going to hurt like shit when I walk on it,” thought Shisio. “ERRRRR,” yelled Shisio. (He stands up completely as he limps to Sazx’s arm and picks it up. He then limbs to his blade, which is 15 ft away. He continues to limb forward.)

“Almost most there,” said Shisio. (He bends down to pick up, as a cracking sound from his muscles and bones erupts.) “AHHHHH,” yelled Shisio. (He picks up his blade then slips and falls on his ass. He channels the fire element into his blade and toasts the arm of Sazx to prevent it from being reattached.)

“Heh, smells like chicken,” said Shisio. (The ashes float in the air. He then sheathes his sword as he continues to sit sit in his position.) “I’ll just sit hit here until everything is wrapped up,” thought Shisio.

(The Scene switches over to Yuki vs. Ryu. Yuki is rushing toward Ryu with two Kunai as Ryu is rushing as well using his chidori charged katana. At the last minute Yuki channels lightning element into her two Kunai. With his sharingan, he notices Yuki’s speeds.)

“Her lightning speed flex skill is superior to my body flicker therefore,” said Ryu. (As they begin to clash, he throws a marked kunai with a rite some distances behind as Ryu completely vanishes.) “So, he’s using the legendary Flying Thunder God jutsu,” said Yuki as she strikes air. Several meters behind her, Ryu stands. He then activates body flicker to draw closer towards Yuki. As he gets within three feet of her, she smiles as smoke appears all over his location. Growling sounds can be heard as Yuki turns around.)

“AHHHH,” yelled Ryu. (As the smoke clears, the hounds from earlier are biting on Ryu’s body from various angles; the hounds are holding him still by his hands, arms, legs, and feet.) “But how? When did you get the chance? How did they get the chance to track me,” asked Ryu. “Easy, earlier I set up a scroll trap sensing/summoning mechanism,” smiled Yuki. “Don’t play stupid with me! With my sharingan I should be able to determine if it was camouflaged,” yelled Ryu.
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“It wasn’t,” said Yuki. “WHAT,” yelled Ryu. “I set it up underground sometime earlier, it is a similar scroll I used to summon the tracking fang squad however, I set it up so that if chakra passes over it that does not match have a match to mine, the summoned dogs would appear and latch on to your body within a split second. My goal was just leading you over the trap, and it seems you fell right for it! AWW, is little baby Ryu all mad because he lost to a bad bitch like me! Tss, tss, tss. That’s why kids shouldn’t meddle in grown up affairs,” smiled Yuki.

(She walks closer to him and gets in his face.) “Why you,” yelled Ryu. “If you promise me to be a good boy and leave my sight and return to your village, I’ll make sure my doggies don’t rip ever inch, and I every inch of you into shreds,” grinned Yuki. (The dogs growl as Ryu gulps. She gets even closer as he sweats. She then kisses him on the cheek, which causes him to blush.) “Promise to leave these goons alone and I’ll spare your life, just say promise now,” smiled Yuki. (Ryu is still frozen up.) “My dogs will treat you like chewing bones,” smiled Yuki. (Ryu then snaps back to reality.) “FINE I PROMISE,” yelled Ryu.

“Good, you made the right decision,” said Yuki. (She makes a handseal as the dogs disperse; Ryu then looks over at Yuki blushes and remembers to when she kissed him. Yuki looks back.) “Better get going,” said Yuki. “Umm,” mumbled Ryu. “What boy,” asked Yuki. “Can you… Be my… Will you go out with me,” asked Ryu. (Yuki smiles as Ryu blushes.) “Kid,” said Yuki in a voluptuous voice. “Yes,” said Ryu in an attempt to make his voice sound deeper, yet in a passionate tune. “GET LOST OR I’LL KILL YOU,” yelled Yuki.

“AHHHHHHHHH,” yelled Ryu. (He activates Body flicker as he is rushing for his life.) “DAT BITCH’S CRAZY,” yelled RYu. (The scene switches back to Yuki.) “At least there’s one problem down. Good luck kid, and I hope you never get caught up in your father’s games again. I should send a scroll to the cloud to let them know what’s up. Raikage knows about me through the Hokage, so it should be fine. But that’ll have to wait, I need to assess the situation,” thought Yuki.

(She rushes over to where Shisio and Sazx were fighting. She notices that Sazx has passed out and that his arm was severed from his shoulder, she also notices that Shisio is sleeping sitting down from his injuries and exhaustion from the battle.)

“Gosh, what a battle this must have been. Looks like Shisio won, but he’s not moving in that condition. But Sazx, and that arm; the air spells like malice, I bet Shisio burnt it to discourage him from recovering. I’ll have to check Sazx’s his condition and make sure if he’s alive; at the very least, I can stop the bleeding if he’s still breathing,” thought Yuki. (She walks over, knees and feels for a pulse.) “He’s alive,” said Yuki. (She pulls out some bandages from her bag and carefully wraps Sazx’s shoulder; several minutes go by as she finishes wrapping his shoulder.) “He’s a big guy, I can’t. I’ll have to summon bull,” said Yuki. (She makes some handseals and summons one of the larger dogs from earlier.) “Here, take him to safety,” said Yuki. (Bull uses his head to lift Sazx’s body onto his back, and the hound rushes to the village, the scene switches over to Mikoto, his eyes are closed as he sits down with his legs folded as he has the dragon handseal in effect. Soon, Sasuke flickers behind him and replies with a curt response which breaks Mikoto’s concentration.)

“It’s time to go, everything has changed,” said Sasuke. (Mikoto opens his eyes.) “30 more minutes and the village will be beyond savable,” said Mikoto. “My eyes I didn’t expect them to be going out this fast… I used up all the antidote which was sealed away in a special container that kept it from drying out over the years. It was discovered under the Uchiha shrine, but now there’s none left. If I had to guess, my vision is 20/80 in both eyes right now, and it is decreasing as we speak. So, we need to see a highly expert geneticist, I believe the marine squad has connections to one of the great scientific minds left over from the Global SNA’s experimental lab. He studies genetic compounds within many specimens. We need to go to the Rain village and seek him out, as our attack on Konoha will not work while I’m in this condition,” said Sasuke.

“What a waste, and after all that time I wasted in preparing the technique; you’re a piece of work Uchiha,” said Mikoto. “We have to hurry, the Kazekage is on his way,” said Sasuke. “You couldn’t kill him,” asked Mikoto. “I was close, but he caught on to my weakness, we need to hurry and gather up Shisio, and the Marine Squad, Yuki will meet our wrath at a later date,” said Sasuke. (The Scene switches over to Marine Squad vs. Take’s Shot Gun puppet contraption. Shark is holding the collapsed Dolphin on his shoulder short distances away.

Orca is inside a huge Killer Whale mold made of chakra. He sits inside the brain of the beast. As the Killer Whale is sliding in, Take makes his puppet pull out long twin samurai swords with jagged edges. Right before they clash, Susanoo appears in the middle and blocks both attacks from both angles pushing them back with its hands. Susanoo vanishes as Sasuke, Mikoto (with Shisio wrapping his arm around Mikoto’s neck while Shisio has his left foot suspend in the air to keep from touching the ground) are standing in the middle of the commotion.

“Orca and Shark, it is time we report back to Reika,” said Sasuke. (Shisio groans.) “I won’t let you escape with your lives,” yelled Take. (As Sasuke begins to say something, Mikoto interrupts.) “I’m sure you’re aware that I killed the old man, and the other two sand jounin are near death, if you have the time to face us, you certainly have the time to rescue them,” said Mikoto. “Fuck you,” said Take. (Take releases his technique, as he pulls back his 10 puppets into his scroll which he slides onto his back. He rushes off to save his comrades.)

“I’m shocked you aren’t throwing a fit. I would have given you a turn,” said Orca. (Shark looks to his right shoulder as a tear comes down his face.) “Our baby sister is hurt, we need to seek Dream,” said Shark. “It seems he’s a ferocious beast in battle, but he cares dearly for us, not too peculiar I guess,” thought Orca. “We need to go, something drastic has happened, our attack on Konoha will have to wait,” said Sasuke. “I see,” said Orca. “This of course will make us an enemy to the sand, are you sure we should just run away,” asked Mikoto.

“It is for the best, and once my eyes are better, we’ll join Reika’s forces. I fear the SNA are after blood as well,” said Sasuke. “It seems that you forgot about Yuki… Oh well, can’t worry over spilled milk. But that Ryu kid is gone too,” said Shisio. “And you just let him go,” asked Sasuke. “I was dealing with Sazx, I didn’t have time to baby sit, he’s your boy and if you wanted to do something about it, you should have, so don’t get all cocky and self righteous on me Uchiha,” said Shisio. “Psssft… Whatever, just know I asked Mikoto to save your ass, I will not have any qualms about leaving you behind cripple,” said Sasuke.

(Shisio smiles.) “Heh, and I thought you needed me. Besides, I know your eyes are weakening. That last Susanoo probably is the last time you’ll use Mangekyou, or even the sharingan again until you receive aide. You have no right to threaten me. One foot and all, I’ll still kick your emo presence and dump your semi blind ass into a nearby river,” said Shisio. (Mikoto, Shark, and Orca chuckles from Shisio’s ballsy statement.)
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“Whatever, let’s go, I left Kazekage in the dust, but he shouldn’t be too far away now,” said Sasuke. (They begin to move as Shisio’s arm tightly squeezes Mikoto’s neck.) “Ouch,” yelled Mikoto. “Don’t drop me,” said Shisio. “Sure, but hop on that right foot and keep up the pace,” said Mikoto. “But of course, I’m a man, I can do this,” said Shisio. (They rush off towards the Rain village. The scene switches over to Yuki as she is hiding in a bush. She emerges from the bush and notices that the Kazekage has just landed in next to her.) “Where’s Sasuke’s team,” asked Kazekage. “They’ve escaped, it seems we’ve weakened them, but there are more important things that we have to take care of,” said Yuki.

“Yes, I’m quite aware of that miss Yuki. The village appears to be intact by the way as the snow is beginning to melt around the village walls. Mikoto must have been interrupted. At least, their attack on Konoha will have to wait,” said Kazekage. “What happened to Sasuke,” asked Yuki. “His vision is fading, I managed to exploit it, that is all,” said Kazekage. (Soon Take rushes in.) “Kazekage Sama, it looks like Kuja and Dax are going to be alright, they’ve been sent to intensive recovery stations,” said Take.

“WHAT about the others,” asked Kazekage. “Well,” mumbled Take. “Sazx will live, I sent one of my summons to take him to the medics. He lost his left arm and a lot of blood, but he’ll live. His opponent was Shisio after all, he’s lucky he just got off with a missing arm,” said Yuki. “Must have been a struggle beyond comprehensible magnitude… I want to thank you Yuki from Konoha for all your assistance from the deepest depth of my heart,” said Kazekage. “Just Yuki would be fine,” said Yuki. (Take looks at the Kazekage, and then sighs.) “There’s something you’re not telling me, so how’s everyone else,” asked Kazekage. “Kankuro is absolutely fine however, Teru was a little shaken up in combat. But Kankuro taken him to a medic, he’ll be back in fighting shape in no time,” said Take.

“I’m about to go check on Dosa,” said Yuki.

“That’s fine,” said Kazekage. (She rushes off towards the village.)

“I can’t believe it our bests hurt this badly. Then again, that Uchiha has some frightening partners, though wounds can be healed, at least everyone made it out despite such hardships,” said Kazekage. “But the Gramps had,” said Take before getting cut off. “What do you mean? What happened to Scar,” asked The Kazekage.

(The Scene switches over to Dosa’s recovery room; he has neck brace on, bandages on both arms, and is wearing a hospital coat. He sits up as he is in his bed as he looks through the window in the door that’s straight in front and sees multiple people being rushed down the hall on stretcher beds one at a time.) “Must have been quite the battle; that Yuki better not had died on me; I wonder if I’ll ever see battle again... I can still feel that my blood thirsts for the defeat of those who supposedly killed me and the squad I was with... What am I thinking? I’m stuck up in this hospital bed, I should be thinking of the easy life for now… Though, I can’t help but come to the conclusion, that I’m slowly feeling complacent towards the idea of not going back out in the thick of thing things.

I can’t feel my scythe anymore, probably lost somewhere on the barren wastelands of that god forsaken battle field… I’ve never been so far apart from that weapon, or battle; something about me died back there. So many things about me were left behind on that battlefield. Oh well, I’ll just say one thing, I hate feeling so weak, regardless of what it is that is going on. But, with Yuki, all of a sudden none of that shit matters… Have I lost who I was because of that woman,” thought Dosa.

(The Scene switches over to Konoha’s barracks; Hope and Nila are getting fitted with gear.)

“Have you spoken with mother about all of this,” asked Hope. “She said it was fine about me being the head leader of the Hyuuga, but war would give her a different opinion, I don’t want mom to interfere. Besides, I got you, father, and Zig to watch my back. I also have several Hyuuga patrols under my command. And since I’ve been studying battle field positions and troop advancement in war like scenarios for the past day or so, I got a pretty good handle on how things work,” smiled Nila.

(Hope sighs.) “This is war Nila, I hope you understand this isn’t a time to be exploring, we’re going to be living and dying out there for as long as it takes! If you act like a kid, you should stay home and be with mother,” said Hope. “I understand exactly what’s going on. I’m a shinobi of this village, which means I am suppose to protect this village at all costs. Now that I’m a head leader of a clan, protecting infant lives should be my top priority, as they are the closest thing to change in my clan; and not just from my clan, I will use my connections in the Hyuuga to protect all those in this village. This is what I was born to do, protect those that can’t help themselves by being their shield and sword. The children of this village are the future of the shinobi world, I will serve as the wind that brings stronger blaze for their fires to burn for a better tomorrow.

I’ve been training my butt so that I could finally live up to the standards set by my father! Don’t look down on me now just because you think I’m a kid!

I know what we’re up against! I’ve looked at all of the data pertaining to the SNA of this village as wells as the SNA of the global government; I’m a little scared, but I can deal with the worst and come out with my head held high, that’s why Hiro Sensei believes in me so much. Please, trust me and have faith. I know what it means to serve as a shinobi in this village. I know what it is to have the will of fire. I know now what I’m capable of. This is where I belong,” yelled Nila. “I won’t die! And I will return home alive! My father said his way of the ninja is never going back on his words, well mine is that I will never die, no matter what hell I’m put through!

I will survive through any adversity! If I lose both legs, I will use my hands to crawl home and chant victory! And if I lose both arms too, I will use my head and teeth as hooks to clinch the ground and make it home to chant victory! I can do this,” yelled Nila. (She has a flash back to when she was facing off against several SNA troops and managed to survive while she hid in a bush, the scene switches back to the present as she walks out into the wide open room where the Hokage is supposed to be delivering his speech. Hope smirks.)

“She passed the test, I have nothing to worry about,” thought Hope. (From the hallway Hiro, The Hokage, Shikamaru, and Shun approach Hope.) “Is she prepared,” asked Hiro. “Yeah, she is ready,” said Hope. “You say that like you’re sure, are you just saying that because she’s like your sister,” asked Shikamaru. (Hope smiles.) “Hope is most certainly sure. I had a talk with Nila myself, it seems my baby girl is ready for this operation,” said The Hokage. “She’s still just a kid though, I have to side with Shikamaru here, someone so young shouldn’t be exposed to such harsh conditions such as war, especially since we’re up against the SNA and potentially a new collaboration that’s nothing but bad news for us,” said Shun.

“Pal, Nila is one of my students, if she was able to handle my training, she can endure a lot more than we would normally assume. I actually think she’s a genius,” said Hiro. “You can’t seriously mean that ungrateful girl with that curiosity killed the cat attitude,” said Shun. “She’s different for sure, but when I looked into her eyes, I saw something I haven’t seen in anyone else besides maybe Uzumaki Sensei here,” said Hiro. (The Hokage smiles.) “It is the fire to carry everyone else’s flames on her back, she has that potential,” said Hiro.
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“I agree 100 percent with Hiro, but in battle I’ll be looking for both Hope and Hiro to keep an eye out on her for me. Just in case her unit doesn’t hold through. I know I can count on you guys if the worst case scenario occurs,” said The Hokage. (Hope and Hiro shake their heads.)

“I see, so I wonder I I’m left guarding the Hokage’s body as usual,” asked Shun. “Is Rina Senpai going to be joining us too,” asked Hope. (Hiro shakes his head.) “She will remain behind with Shikamaru, as we also need to be able to protect the village when we’re out, don’t worry, I’m about to explain everything shortly,” said The Hokage. (Time goes by as the scene switches over to the auditorium room inside the barracks. The scene drops off over near Nila’s location, she is surrounded by many of the Hyuuga guardsmen. Zig, looks over and spots Nila.)

“HEY, NILA, what are you doing over there,” yelled Zig. (Nila talks with her squadron before moving over the greet Zig.) “I’ll be back,” said Nila. “Yes lady Nila,” said unidentified clan member. (Nila meets with Zig as the conversation skips to a more pressing topic.) “Wow, are you for real? A clan leader, I’m proud you’ve made it this far. Looks like, I guess that means you’re recognized as one of the elites of this village hmm,” asked Zig. “Yep! I wish I could work with you like old times, but I got to lead these guys over there into battle,” said Nila. “I see, good luck then. Don’t worry about me, I got Kato on my side, the two latest hotshots, we’ll be fine,” smiled Zig.

“That’s nice, too bad Laya isn’t qualified,” said Nila. “Nahh, she’d just hold everybody down,” laughed Zig. (Nila punches Zig in the stomach.) “I was just kidding! It’s for the best this way though,” said Zig. “What do you mean, we’ve hardly did anything without each other being in arm’s reach,” said Nila. “That’s not what I meant. I’m talking about her carrying on our will? If we die in battle, she’ll be able to tell the next generation and her children of how brave and courageous we were in the 5th shinobi war,” said ZIg.

“Umm, Zig, don’t scare me like that, it’s not like you to be a downed pessimist. What’s really on your mind,” asked Nila. “The true measure of a shinobi is not how he lives, but how he dies,” said Zig. “Zz, Zig,” asked Nila. “I had come to a conclusion about how my life would end a long time ago,” said Zig.

(Nila grabs Zig and shakes him.) “Please stop, what’s gotten into you,” asked Nila. (Zig smiles.) “Jackass,” said Nila. “Do you know where I got those quotes from,” asked Zig. “Your infinite glossary of jackassary,” said Nila. (Zig cracks up laughing.) “I got it from a book called the Legend of the Gusty Shinobi,” said Zig. (Nila is shocked.) “You don’t mean,” said Nila. “That’s right, from the words straight out of Jiraiya Sama’s mouth. He was one of the legendary Sannin, and your father’s master.

I’m shocked you couldn’t recognize the words, didn’t your father read you that book as a nursery rhyme when you were young every night? I remember you telling us that it was so cheesy and silly,” laughed Zig. “Yeah, I guess, it kind of slipped my mind,” said Nila. “Regardless, he was a spectacular shinobi, I try to model myself after him,” said Zig. “That’s wonderful, it’s good you have a role model to look up to,” said Nila. “I use to look up to my brother,” said Zig. (Nila is shocked from hearing that however before she responds, the Hokage and Shikamaru are automatically standing in front of everyone else on top the stage. Soon, voice over the PA is heard.)

“We will like to get your undivided attention, as The Hokage and Shikamaru will discuss the mission,” yelled person on PA. “I guess it’s time to rock and roll… Tetsuo… We’ll bring this to an end,” whispered Zig to himself. (Nila looks over at Zig, as Zig looks kind of different to her.) “Why does it seem like this is the last time I’ll see Zig? He’s not the type to worry but something’s different, I can’t put my tongue on it but his eyes look depressed, yet somewhat determined,” thought Nila. (Automatically Zig is hugging Nila.) “Zig,” mumbled Nila. (She hugs him back, Zig whispers near her ear for an extended pause in real-time, as a tear runs down Nila’s face. They break away as Zig says one final thing.)

“Don’t expect sun shines and flowers, I’ve heard from my father that war brings out the deepest and darkest cruelty in men,” said Zig. (Nila runs to her station as she tears up and starts to blush as she remembers what Zig said; flash back to what he whispered to her.)

“If it comes down to it, I’ll be the one who gives up their life for you… I could live the same life an infinite number of times over and still make the same choice. I don’t need to tell you why I’d do this for you, you already know. But, by the off chance that I do survive, I recommend we date each other,” said Zig. (The scene switches back to the present as Nila continues to blush.) “Anything wrong ma’am,” asked another unidentified Hyuuga clan member. “Umm no, I’m fine,” said Nila. (The Scene switches to Hope as he stares at his sister.)

“I see you. Don’t die Zig,” thought Hope. (The Scene switches over to The Hokage and Shikamaru, they are now beginning to speak.) “SHIKAMARU WILL REMAIN IN THIS VILLAGE AS THE HOKAGE WHILE WE’RE OUT FENDING FOR THIS VILLAGE’S SURVIVAL AS WE STRIKE DOWN THE SNA THREAT AS WELL AS OTHER SUSPICIOUSONS! BE WARNED, SOME OF THE SHINOBI WE MIGHT FACE WERE AT ONE TIME INHABITATNS OF HIS VILLAGE, BUT GIVEN THE CURRENT SITUATIONS, WE CAN’T AFORD TO LEND THEM MERCY,” yelled The Hokage. “AHHHHH OHHHHHH,” yelled the crowd. “SHIKAMARU,” yelled Choji. (Shikamaru sighs.)

“I WILL NOT BE GOING BY THE NAME OF HOKAGE DURING THIS MISSION; THEREFORE I WILL BE GOING BY MY CODE NAME! GENERAL TOAD SAGE,” yelled Toad Sage. “GENERAL TOAD SAGE! AHHHH OHHHHHH,” yelled the crowd. (The scene switches over to Shun and Hiro as they stand in the front row.) “Looks like he can still work up a crowd,” laughed Shun. (The scene switches to Nila’s location.) “My father commanding such presence… Wow, never thought I’d see this,” thought Nila. (Scene switches back to the Stage.) “GENERAL TOAD SAGE HAS ALREADY SENT TRANSCRIPTS REGARDING OUR TARGETS TO THE KAGES,” yelled Shikamaru. “How come they don’t cheer and pump their hands when I talk? What a drag,” thought Shikamaru.

(Soon a lone boo is heard across the area.) “BOOOO! SHIKAMARU SMELLS LIKE POOO,” yelled Kiba. (The crowd bursts out into a defiant laughter.) “Kiba that dick, I hope he gets neutered that dog face,” thought Shikamaru. “ANYWAY! SINCE WORD TO THE KAGES IN REGARDS TO OUR BATTLEPLANS MAY TAKE A WHILE, WE’LL TAKE THE OPPORTUNITY TO SPEED THINGS UP! OUR UNIT WILL GATHER FORCES FROM EACH OF THE HIDDEN VILLAGES ; WE WILL MEET UP WITH EACH AND EVERY HIDDEN VILLAGE THAT’S ALLIED TO US. FROM SUNAGAKURE WE WILL FORM CHAINS THAT PASSES THROUGH THE ALLIED FORCES THAT WILL INTERLOCK US TOGETHER THROUGHOUT THIS WAR.

A TWISTING CHAIN THAT CONTAINS ALL OF THE BATTLEFIELD STRATEGIES, JUTSU, AND MILITARY MIGHT OF THE ALLIED FORCES WILL BE USED TO FEND OFF THE THREATS. THIS CHAIN WILL SURROND THE SNA HEADQUARTERS WHEN ALL OF US PUT OUR MINDS AND INVESTGATIVE RESEARCH TOGETHER. WE WILL PATROL FOR DAYS UNTIL WE FIND THE SNA! BY THE OFF CHANCE WE COME ACROSS MIZUKAGE AND SASUKE’S TEAM, WE WILL PUT RESISTANCE IF WE HAVE TO, BUT OUR MAIN GOAL IS THE SNA’S DESTRUCTION,” yelled Toad Sage.

“AHHHH OHHHH,” yelled the crowd. “GENERAL TOAD SAGE INFORM THEM OF THE SQUADS’ POSITIONS,” yelled Shikamaru. (No one cheers.) “Oh you guys just suck,” thought Shikamaru. “IT WILL BE BROKEN UP INTO SEVERAL UNITS. TEAM SECURITY HAS ALREADY BEEN DECIDED, A SELECTED AMOUNT OF JOUNIN, SPECIAL JOUNIN, AND CHUUNIN COMMANDERS, WHO HAVE NOT SHOWN UP IN THIS CURRENT MEETING WILL BE STAYING BEHIND IN THIS VILLAGE UNDER THE GUIDE OF SHIKAMARU TO ENSURE THAT THIS VILLAGE CAN DEFEND FROM A POTENTIAL COUNTERSTRIKE!
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TEAM HYUUGA WILL BE LEAD BY MY DAUGHTER NILA, WHO WILL BE STATIONED IN THE FRONT OF OUR ARMY! WITH THEIR BYAKUGAN THEY WILL NOTIFY US OF ANY POTENTIAL INCOMING THREATS! TEAM RECON WILL CONSIST OF SAI’S ROOT; THAT TEAM WILL SPIT INTO TWO PARTIES AND GATHER ANY INFORMATION ON THE LOCALE FROM 5 KILOMETERS EAST AND WEST OF OUR UNIT’S POSITION. THEY WILL KEEP US NOTIFIED WITH COMMUNICATION SCROLLS VIA ANIMAL SUMMONINGS IN 30 MINUTE INVERVALS! KAI AND MYSELF WILL BE IN THE CENTER, WHILE EVERYONE ELSE WILL SURROND US! SINCE WE ARE CAPABLE OF THE BIJUU, WE NEED TO STAY ALIVE, AS IF I DIE, THE GENERAL, KONOHA LOSES! DAISUKE OF THE LION WILL ALSO BE IN THE CENTRAL UNIT WITH ME. SHUN OF THE KEZUGAMA CLAN WILL GUARD THE LEFT FLANK WITH HAYASHI AITO’s HELP. SHIMIZU HIRO WITH GUARD THE RIGHT FLANK WITH NEJI’s HELP. LEE, KIBA, Sarutobi, AND CHOJI WILL GUARD THE REAR. HOPE WILL PATROL AHEAD OF THE STRIKE UNIT WITH IZO’s ASSISTENCE, JUST BEHIND THE HYUUGA TEAM! THOSE INDIVIDUAL SHINOBI THAT MENTIONED WILL PATROL SEVERAL METERS AWAY FROM THE MAIN UNIT! NOW, DAWN BREAK HAS COME, LET’S GET INTO FORMATION,” yelled Toad Sage.

“AHHHH OHHHH,” yelled the crowd. (The scene switches over to Nila.) “Ok, I’m ready for this,” said Nila. “Don’t worry, we’ll protect you miss,” said Hyuuga clan member. “No harm will come to the Hokage’s and former master Hinata’s blood,” said another. “We will lay down everything,” yelled a female member. “Guys, thanks; but I’ll make it an objective for everyone to return home alive,” said Nila. (They cheer as the Scene switches to back to on the stage, Toad Sage whispers in Shikamaru’s ear.)

“Shikamaru , have Sakura make Amaya’s medical staff be ready for deployment; their implement into the army will come as we go,” said Toad Sage. (The Scene switches to outside the outskirts of Konoha. The units’ positions are already in formation. Shun is standing next to Aito, a man of average height wearing battle field armor just like everyone else. He is of average build. He has a red Mohawk with green eyes. His face looks like the typical biker gang kind of face. He opens his mouth and begins to talk.) “Radical! I’m about to go hysterical as I go out styling on em,” yelled Aito. (Shun sighs.) “How long have we been body guards for the Hokage,” asked Shun. “WOAH, don’t say such complex things, but since you asked all kool like, I’d have to say maybe a decade,” said Aito. “Bout time you start acting like it then,” said Shun. “WOAH DUDE! Don’t put me down like that, you been like a bro, just like The Hokage, us three go way back in da day,” said Aito.

“Ahh man, I hate dealing with this guy,” mumbled Shun. (The Scene switches to Izo and Hope’s location. Izo is also wearing battle field armor. He is a tall man of 6 ft 4 inches. He is lean however, he is extremely physically fit. He has a mini-fro that is 3 inches in length. He has facial hair style that resembles Jak 3.He has a red bandana going across his forehead where his forehead protector should be. He is of black descent, having medium brown complexion. His facial structure is a mixture of George’s from Gantz and Tousen’ from Bleach. Izo has a deep and raspy voice.)

“You’re that Rinnegan kid who was picked up by The Hokage… Heard some good things about you boy, but let me have it! Who was it that Hiro said killed my comrades? I’m going to enjoy smashing the person’s brains in,” said Izo. “So, the rumors of you recovering were true… Anyway, Hiro told me it was an SNA elementalist known as Reitie of the Lightning Succubus,” said Hope. (Izo pulls some fly ass shades from his pockets and puts them on.)

“I don’t give a damn how powerful she thinks she is… I’m going to beat the bricks for this slut. In fact, I’ll probably take her scull home as a souvenir. The skull will serve as a cup in which I drink satisfying 1800 from. I’m not going to let her die easily though… The more she begs for her life, the more pain I’ll inflict on her body. I’ll break her fingers first, then her hands, legs, and eventually her spine. Hey kid! How about I rip her arm off and beat her with it,” said the malicious Izo.

(Hope gets startled from the response.) “I heard word about my father’s strongest Anbu-agent being a sadistic and ruthless assassin, but I never knew he was so cruel, at least not to this degree,” thought Hope. “I ‘d actually prefer I gouge out her eye balls and force them down her throat,” said Izo. (Hope turns his head.) “The moment she killed my comrades, was the day she sealed her fate with devil. Braig, Rise, and Bruce, I do this for you,” thought Izo. (The Scene switches over to a group of white cloaked shinobi, they are the medical unit Shikamaru sent for earlier, one of them is particularly short; that short one flips the hood up. They rush over to join up with the unit and become assimilated. Amaya is the first one to lift up her hood, which reveals a cute young innocent face. Her face resembles Kepachi’s lieutenant’s face [the little girl with the pink hair].)

“I’ll gladly lend my services,” said Amaya. (The scene switches over to a wasteland, Temari is seen rushing towards the direction of Konoha.)

“One more day, and I’ll reach Konoha,” thought Temari. (From a distance, Michi, Oita, and Blank spots Temari.)

“Who’s that,” asked Michi. (They all put on their binoculars. The image shows a close up on Temari’s person. They manage to catch the forehead protector around her head.) “A Kunoichi Jounin from the sand,” said Blank. “Not a bad looker for a middle aged women,” said Oita. “Do we killer her,” asked Micihi. “Let’s follow her,” said Blank.

“By the way, Michi, weren’t you and the boss from Konoha prior to being shipped off to the SNA lab of experiments,” asked Oita. “Hah,” smiled Michi.

Next Time: Oita, Michi, and Blank close in on Temari. One more day until Temari reaches Konoha however, the same logic applies to them. Over the next two days, Konoha’s armed forces will travel to Sungakure in hopes of gathering more forces and restructuring.

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Izo: He is the most feared as well as the most gifted Anbu of all Konoha. He once led a team of 3 other Anbu who were recognized as the best Anbu-ops in Konoha. Izo is a very scary man. He’s brutal, cruel, sadistic, and expert in torture. He is sadist as he enjoys the punishment of his opponents as he cracks their bones and laughs while they endure pain. Surprisingly, he is a patriot to his village and will never betray his homeland despite his horrific nature. He highly respects the Hokage as well as other prestigious persons from Konoha. A formidable opponent in battle, he was assigned to track down the SNA on a private mission however, he got seriously wounded when he was ganged up on by a hundred of their men, he defeated them all, at the expense of being injured and out of commission for the first half of the series. His special ability is to create a vortex like vacuum that sucks the oxygen from his opponent’s body causing them to pass out, or suffer brain damage due to the lack of oxygen to their brains .

Aito: He is the second body guard to The Hokage, so that means he is Shun’s teammate/cooperator. He is a hard time partier who likes the crazy and wild things in life. He has an explosive attitude and is always worried about what is hip! Though, he is an extremely gifted shinobi . He and Shun go way back, and were trained by the same teacher, thus they have very similar abilities. No one tends to look up to him though, maybe because his personality is so radical that it tires people out when they try to understand him.

Amaya: She is the head of the medical squadron. She is only 13 years old, yet displays such talent in the arts of medical ninjutsu. She is not a fighter by any means, but she is recognized as Sakura’s prize student. She can virtually heal even the nastiest of injuries.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

For almost a day Michi, Oita and Blank follows Temari as she walks towards Konoha. Not far from them Nila and the Hyuuga team are scouting the perimeter. Suddenly Michi raise her hand and began sniffing the air. “What?” ask Blank. “I smell Hyugas. Lots of Hyuugas. And one of them have the Hokage’s smell.” Says Michi. “Must be your target. Is today their gathering day?” ask Oita. “No. I smell other ninjas. And they reeked of Will of Fire.” Says Michi. “Konoha Army?” ask Blank. “Maybe. Something must happen if Konoha amasses such large number of ninja.” Says Oita. “We need to lure Nila out. To do that we need a bait.” Says Michi. All three of them looks at Temari.

At the Hyuugas location, Nila and her team moves closely until one of the Hyugas raise his hand. “Mistress. There are something up ahead. Should I check it out?” ask the Hyuuga. Nila looks at the direction with her Byakugan and saw a body hanging upside down from a tree. “I’ll go. You two come with me.” Says Nila and she with two Hyuugas approach the body while the other Hyuugas stay back. Nila and her two guards approach the body and she saw Temari. She put her finger to Temari’s neck. “She’s alive. Take her down.” Says Nila and the guards pull Temari down. “Why is she hanging up there? Unless… IT’S A TRAP!!!!” scream Nila. Suddenly two snakes appear from the ground and bite both Hyuugas, inflicted them with poison that paralyzed them. Nila looks up and saw Blank jumping down from the trees and land behind her. She turns around but before she can do anything Blank punches her guts and Nila fell to her knees. Blank quickly took out a bottle and spray a gas to Nila’s face, knocking her out. The Hyuugas behind Nila saw what happened and they charge towards Blank. AS they focus on Blank, the Hyuugas didn’t notice Oita and a giant spider on top of them. Oita signals the spider and it shoots web to the Hyuugas, immobilizing them. “That went well.” Says Oita. “We must move quickly.” Says Blank. “Incoming!!!” yelled Michi and she jumps up to the trees. Blank looks at immobilize Hyuugas and saw Hope and Izo jumps over them.

Hope rush towards Blank while Izo rush towards Oita. Blank quickly makes a hand seal, “Water element: Grand Water Wave.” Says Blank and shoots a huge tidal wave of water towards Hope. Quickly Hope extends both of his arms. “Absorption Technique.” Says Hope and Izo jumps pass him and charges towards Oita. He sneers and a snake appears behind Izo and ensnares him. Izo falls to the ground and before he can do anything, Michi jumps from trees and stomps on Izo’s head, knocking him unconscious. “Now, while Hope is distracted by the tidal wave.” Says Michi and all three escapes with Nila. The tidal wave is gone and Hope looks around and saw Izo knocks out. “Amazing team work. It seems we under estimate them.” Says Hope and then he makes a hand seal. “Do you hear me general? Nila is captured.” Says Hope. “What? The Hyuugas?” ask Naruto. “Immobilize.” Says Hope. “No……” says Naruto. “Don’t worry they wont kill her. Yet. She is the bait.” Says Hope. “How can you stay so calm, Hope?” ask Naruto. “Because panicking wont do me any good. Bring the medic to the front. We have some injuries.” Says Hope. “Understood.” Says Naruto.

Outside Rain Village.

Sasuke, Shisio, Mikoto and the Marine Squad are greeted by Reika who now wears Kyo’s armor. Girls,take the injured guests to the infirmary. Sasuke, lets have a chat shall we.” Says Reika as Kakuya and kimiko took Shisio and Dolphin back into Dream’s lab. “What do you want?” ask Sasuke. “Straight to the point. I like it. I know you need to see Dream about your, condition. But to get there you need to get pass me first.” Says Reika. Sasuke looks at her suspiciously. “What do you want?” ask Sasuke again. “You see, your best buddy is gathering an army and have declared ninja war.There is many situations I can take advantage. Such as bring your corpse to the Hokage as a peace offering.” Says Reika and she look at Sasuke with devilish eyes. Sasuke quickly grabs his sword. “That won’t do you any good. Beside I’m a sage. Or I can give you Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and you will stand by my side.” Says Reika. “What makes you think I will stand by your side?” ask Sasuke. Reika grins and wave her hand. Then a figured appear behind Reika and approach them closer and closer until Sasuke can see it’s face. Sasuke face is frozen with shock with what he sees. Uchiha Itachi. “You like it? Think Sasuke. When you stand with me and win this war. I can ask Dream to recreate your clan. Your family. Your parents. The noble Uchiha will be back on the map. What do you say, partner?” ask Reika. “I heard many story about you. Your reputation is quite dubious.” Says Sasuke. “People say many things, Sasuke. They can say ten lies in one truth.” Says Reika. Sasuke looks at her and then look at Itachi’s clone. “Do you want the Uchiha die when you or your boy dies?” ask Reika. Sasuke walks pass Reika and stops. “ I will ally with you for the moment. But I expect you to hold your promise.” Says Sasuke.

“Good. I will show you the way.” Says Reika and then she mumble to herself. “In case you betray me, I have a back up plan.”

At Sand Village.

Gaara and the rest of the Sand Village gathered at Scar’s funeral. Kuja stands up and looks at the crowd. “You all know old man Scar. He’s good ninja. A bit edgy, cranky but a good ninja. I remember when I was a genin.” Says Kuja.

Flash back.

A young Kuja is running towards Scar. “I’m sorry old man. I lost the bracers and scroll you took from Sound. You know the one you gave me. I did everything I can to take it back from those missing nin.” Says young Kuja. “What why didn’t you tell me when it got stolen?” ask Scar. “I didn’t want to because I didn’t want you think I can’t handle it like a man.” Says young Kuja. “Kid that’s the point being in a village. So you don’t have to worry about stupid things like handling like a man.” Says Scar. “What?” ask young Kuja. “We never fight fair boy. We believe in overwhelming force. At least I do.” Says Scar. “Wow, that’s the most logical thing I’ve heard. Even more logic than the Kazekage’s talking about handling like a man.” Says young Kuja.

End flashback.

Gaara looks at Kankuro. “Scar teach the kids to think like that?” ask Gaara. Kankuro just shrugs. Kuja looks at Teru. “I’m maybe he’s most trusted student, but you Teru are his most beloved. He left something for you kid.” Says Kuja and he took out a giants scroll. “Inside this is where he wrote his best jutsus and technique. And he wants me to gave it to you, if anything happens to him.” Says Kuja and he walks towards teru and hand him the giant scroll. “Just to let you know, you’ve got the whole village with you. Overwhelming force.” Says Kuja. Teru looks at him. “Thanks. But I’m gonna study this scroll, master it and I will defeat the Mikoto guy, one on one.” Says Teru. “Suit yourself. But like the old man says. When you got a village behind you, there is no reason to fight fair.” Says Kuja. “I‘ll pass. I believe in the Kazekage’s principle.” Says Teru.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

-Retribution

(The Scene starts off in the conference room. A secret meeting held by the Kazekage; Kankuro, Teru, and Kuja are in the room as well.)

“Sasuke’s team based off Yuki’s information now consists of Shisio and Mikoto. It seems Ryu of the Cloud has been persuaded to return back to his village. We also however, spotted Mizukage’s Marine Squad, they must be in cahoots with each other. We have already sent Temari to Konoha to inform Uzumaki of Sasuke’s potential plans, but they’ve shed blood on our soil, that act is unforgiveable. We can’t wait around for The Hokage, now we have vendetta against Sasuke and the Mizukage ourselves,” said Kazekage.

“I understand bro, but we have no idea where they’re stationing their forces, or what kind of threats we’re up against. I’m sorry but you’re going to have to rethink things,” said Kankuro. “Not to mention Sazx has been severely injured; this means one of our best agents is out of commission. We don’t have much to work with here considering Dax and I still haven’t completely recovered,” said Kuja.

(The Kazekage Sighs.) “I suppose you’re correct, I just got so festered. We’ll just have to await word from Konoha before we can do something about this. Though, we’ll send word to the other hidden villages on the information we have gathered. Kankuro, prepare the communication pigeons,” said Kazekage.

“What about the SNA,” asked Kankuro. “Konoha, Kumo, and the Earth village have more information on them. It would be wise to wait until the Hokage responds,” said Kazekage.

(Teru pulls the scroll he got from Kuja, and looks at it.)

“Sa-mosutatto Mikoto,” mumbled Teru. “I understand Teru, but Sasuke’s team is too hot right now plus, we don’t know where the unit is located,” said Kazekage. “Not to mention Mikoto’s skills, he is the most gifted of his clan,” said Kankuro. “I can attest to that, there’s just no way around him. I’ve never seen an ability like that,” said Kuja.

“They are definitely a troublesome group. The Hokage told our council about it, the incident happened during the seige of the 4th shinobi war that was instigated by Reika. Originally the clan’s strength was so powerful that many of the smaller countries employed them to settle wars with the warring nations, as other clans were too weak, or was unable to work for such little pay which risked their lives. But the Sa-mosutatto clan was different; they were natural born shinobi whose genetics became strong due to their civil wars that lasted for generations, which caused their bodies to be exposed to harsh battlefield conditions day in and day out. They’d fight for the money, no matter how little it was, and that brought the clan to a truce. With the money their clan had established, it wanted more and tried to take over Amegakure because Rain village had managed to stow away a large sum of funds from Akatuski, not to mention Amegakure has one of the highest security technologies of all. It would have been a suffice location for the Sa-mosutatto to gain some form of dominance in the shinobi world as they were just known as heartless killers who’d scrape by for a piece of change. Kyo gave them a chance, and it backfired.

But, Uzumaki Naruto with his connections to Kyo managed to make the clan flee into hiding. I can see why Mikoto, the new leader of his village would side with Sasuke and would want to topple Konoha. After all, it was Konoha’s interference that caused the Sa-mosutatto’s downfall,” said Kazekage.

“And if Mikoto is aiding Sasuke and Mizukage, it is possible that the entire clan of the Sa-mosutatto might have a hand in things too,” said Kankuro. “It’s all bad,” said Kuja.

“It appears as though the Mizukage has abandoned her village. So where is she getting her power,” asked Kazekage. “Didn’t Yuki of Konoha mention anything else regarding that matter,” asked Kankuro.

“I’ll try to remember. Though, I do recall her saying Dosa was ganged up on by two sisters who physical movements in battle were super human. One had the Sharingan, while the other had the Byakugan,” said Kazekage. “That sounds unlikely,” said Kuja. “Impossible, there aren’t any registered Byakugan users outside Konoha. And the only people who had access to genetic information and samples of deceased bloodlines were the three scientists of the Global SNA, and they’re long since dead,” said Kankuro.

“Indeed that seems like the case. Dream, Sin, and Fate have all been exterminated,” said Kazekage. “Dream, Sin, and Fate,” questioned Teru. “Obviously code names, right bro,” asked Kankuro. “Let Gaara explain it to you,” said Kuja. “Precisely, no one knows their true names and it was so highly classified that even I couldn’t look at the details. Raikage of the Cloud is a very tactical women, she made sure their names would be erased from all of history. She certainly takes after her father,” said Kazekage.

“That doesn’t explain how there are two venerable bloodlines out in the open like that,” said Kankuro. “Unless one of the scientists survived, that would have to be the only explanation. But that’s not all that is puzzling. Yuki said Kyo of the Tortoise was dueling it out Mizukage. If the Marine Squad and Sasuke’s team were able to make it to our village, it means Kyo must be dead,” said Kazekage.

“But what would Mizukage gain by killing him, UNLESS,” yelled Kankuro. “Exactly, we’ll proceed with everything once Konoha contacts us,” said Kazekage. (Teru gets up.) “What’s on your mind,” asked Kuja. “Training,” said Teru. “Don’t think you can take him down on your own kid,” said Kankuro. “I guess we’ll see won’t we,” said Teru. (He leaves the room.) “Arrogant kid, not at all unlike you when you were young bro,” said Kankuro. “Hmm. He’s a genius no doubt about it. He can use every type of earth elemental ninjutsu which is a rarity at best. He’ll probably use that scroll to develop his skills further,” said Kazekage.

“But Scar was a wind specialist,” said Kankuro. “No, he was also known more to be a very exceptional mud user, even above the legendary Jiraiya’s ability to manipulate swamp mud. He was once named as Scar of the Mudslide because he was able sink his opponents into the deepest pits of muck,” said Kuja. “I stand corrected,” said Kankuro. “No doubt Teru will pick up that mud style and manipulate it to its finest ability. I have faith in him, I’ve never seen a boy so determined and mature. He’s not challenging Mikoto just solely for revenge. He wants to witness the strength of the man who killed his teacher. And if Teru can prevail, nevertheless, he would have surpassed Scar and did something in which no one has yet to do, and that is defeat Mikoto,” said Kazekage.

“Whatever you say, just wait we’ll probably have to bust in and save him,” smirked Kankuro. “I wonder about that,” said Kazekage. “Scar entrusted him with his mud style, perhaps he really can do this,” thought Kuja.

(The Scene switches over to Michi, Oita, and Blank. Blank is carrying Nila on his shoulder. They are dashing forward.)

“They’re closing in,” said Oita. “NOOOO,” yelled Michi. (Soon a portal opens up 20 ft ahead of them.) “I see,” said Blank. “It’s Tetsuo,” yelled Michi. “We’re saved,” yelled Oita. (They rush into the portal. They soon reappear inside the UHE’s headquarters. The higher ups are all surrounding the room. Asura is also seen leaning up against a wall.)
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

“Good work, the bait has been set. Now we wait for the Hokage and the other Kages to gather,” said Tetsuo. (Blank tosses Nila on the ground near Tank and Sakuya.) "SO, we're back at the old look out ehh," said Oita. "For the meantime, we lay low here, either way, the ball's in our hands now. If they head to Mizugakure first they'll be intercepted beforing ruining our plans," said Tetsuo “Mind if I rough her up a little bit,” asked Tank. “You’re awful,” said Sakuya. “Be gentle,” said Tetsuo. “ALRIGHT. FEELZ MY FOOT BITCH,” yelled Tank. (He prepares to step on her however, Nila quickly activates her Byakugan looks up and evades the blow by sliding under his leg. She then activates wind chakra around her left palm. She then strikes upwards and slashes Tank’s face, giving him a deep scar on his left cheeck. He slides back and crashes into a wall while everyone is amazed.)

“I remember her, she was at the meteor’s project experimental ground,” said Ino Shika Cho.

“Wow, the little kitty cat has some claws,” said Michi (She licks her face). “That drug should have had her out for at least 2 hours. Could she have wielded herself to immediate recovery,” thought Blank. “I’d expect nothing less of you Nila, daughter of the Hokage,” said Tetsuo. (Nila turns around and looks at Tetsuo’s face.)

“Oh my God. It’s, it’s you,” said Nila. “How’s Zig,” asked Tetsuo. “Where am I, and why are you doing this,” asked Nila. “That’s of no concern to you, take her out,” smiled Tetsuo.

“Shit, this must be their headquarters. Believe. It’s becoming clear,” thought Nila. “It can’t be,” thought Tetsuo. (Nila is now spinning rapidly while wind as well as natural chakra is surrounding her in spirals. Asura’ s eye gets a close up on Nila’s rotation.)

“That’s not the ordinary Hyuuga rotation. She has implemented the wind element into that as well. This could get deadly. Tetsuo, what do you recommend we do? If we take her lightly things could get serious,” said Asura. (Tank bursts out from the print in the wall.)

“BITCH, NOW YOU DIE,” yelled Tank. (He begins gathering chakra around him.) “No Tank, we can’t afford to kill her,” said Tetsuo. (The winds get stronger and starts to push everyone back a bit. Everyone then braces themselves and thinks of what to do. Tetsuo makes a handseal and then extends his arms, this disrupts the wind elemental rotation and stops Nila in her tracks. She can’t move at all. Her Byakugan cancels as well. Tetsuo still has his hands extended.)

“What the hell is happening to me? What did they do? My chakra, I can’t gather my chakra. I can’t even move. It feels as though my chakra flow has been completely disrupted,” thought Nila.

“Sakuya, prepare the genjutsu. But don’t overdo it,” said Tetsuo. (Sakuya jumps in front of Nila.) “A genjutsu? Crap, I don’t have my Byakugan active. What do I do? These guys? Their incredible,” thought Nila as she shivers in fear. (Sakuya makes a handseal.) "Asura, I will soon open a portal. Spring the Meteor near Mizugakure, the hosts' chakra has already been sucked out and sealed within these chakra absorbtion scrolls, I want you to assimulate the Bijuu's chakra into the meteor" said Tetsuo. (He hands over 4 scrolls to Asura.) "Wait, there's one more scroll, take it. It contains all the chakra Sakuya, Tank, and myself have managed to gather for three days. Use this to summon the completed meteor. Once it appears over Mizugakure, Misa the spy for Mizugakure who is now under our genjutsu spell, will contact Kai, and he will believe that she's still on good terms with him. This will ignite the allied forces to Mizugakure. Once the Hokage reaches there, I will telepathically relay a message from our hideout. He will offer up his life to Asura while we threaten to kill Nila. If he refuses to have his Bijuu restrained, we'll assisinate Nila from our hideout," said Tetsuo. (Tetsuo hands over the 5th and final scroll to Asura.)

"What if he doesn't believe we have her," asked Ino Shika Cho. "I'll manage a visual mental link up to our headquarters, he'll have no choice but to cooperate. We'll have him by the balls. And if they attempt to strike Asura or, overtake the meteor, which would be nearly impossible now due to it being matured and uncontrollable to those who lack the key behind it, we'll launch all the forces we have stationed at Mizugakure, this will also include the Mizugakure troops we ensared by genjutsu," said Tetsuo.

"GOT IT ALL PLANNED HUH," yelled Tank. (He wipes the blood off his face.)

"Alright, just tell me when you are going to warp me," said Asura.

“Ends of earth,” said Sakuya. (Nila sweats as the scene switches over to Konoha’s troops. Everyone is now gathered at the spot in which the portal previously opened up and sucked their last hopes of finding Nila. The Scene is at the center where Toad Sage, Hope, Hiro, Kai, Shun, Aito, and Daisuke stand.)

“The Security squad just sent me detailed results over radio that a portal opened up here and soon they just vanished into thin air! How did we let this happen,” yelled Toad Sage.

“It’s a trap Sensei, they’re trying to lure us in,” said Hiro. “DON’T YOU THINK I KNOW THAT!? I just can’t let them do this my little girl. I can’t believe I let the one person closest to me get captured. I knew I shouldn’t have had her on the front lines. DAMMIT I KNEW IT!. HINATA WOULD NEVER LOOK AT ME IF SOMETHINGBAD HAPPENS,” said Toad Sage.

“Wrong, you put her up there because you had faith in her ability. Don’t look down on yourself for that. This couldn’t have been seen through easily. It seems the SNA have tracking and scouting abilities that far surpasses our own. If they were able to open up a portal to save their men, it must mean our movements have been watched to some degree,” said Hiro.

“We should be more concerned with our mission however, Nila is an important aspect of his unit, I agree we can’t just abandon her, but,” said Shun. “JUST CHILL HOKAGE DUDE. WORRYING NEVER BRINGS HAPPINESS,” yelled Aito. (Naruto makes seven shadow clones.)

“I’ll do this then. If I come across the areas of interest and or, the enemy and my shadow clones disperses, I should be able to pin point their location. It might take a while, but I’ll never give up on my daughter. The day I give up on her, is the day I give up on my life. That’s my way,” said Toad Sage.

(Hope shakes his head. Zig rushes into the center.) “Is it true Hope,” asked Zig. “Yeah, but it wasn’t your fault, no one could have seen it coming,” said Hope. “Let me go with the shadow clones general, I made a promise to her,” said Zig. “A promise you say? (Toad Sage has a flash back to when he promised to bring Sasuke back. Scene switches back to the present.) I hope you’re promise is stronger than mine,” smiled Toad Sage. (Zig pauses. Then he nods his head.) “Sir, a single string of hair won’t be out of place,” said Zig. (The shadow clones gathers around Zig.) “Remember you are only to determine their location, use your Jounin skills to help my shadow clones pin point her location. Don’t do anything reckless on your own,” said Toad Sage.

“Zig was it, take Max,” said Daisuke. “Max,” questioned Zig. (Daisuke makes some handseals and summons Max. It walks over to Zig.) “He has insane hearing and smelling senses and is strong to boot, he should come in handy,” said Daisuke. “I leave my sister’s whereabouts in your capable hands Zig,” said Hope. “Right,” said Zig. (Daisuke, ZIg, and the seven shadow clones rush off.)

“Do well Zig,” thought Hiro.

“I feel content, the will of fire in the next generation is sure reassuring. Hinata, don’t you worry,” thought Toad Sage. (Daisuke whispers in the Toad Sage’s ear.) “Toad Sage, I meant to tell you earlier that Kyo’s corpse had no body armor. It seems it was stripped from him. Perhaps that could lead to a clue to our other target’s location,” whispered Daisuke. “I see, we’ll worry about that once we reach the Sand,” said Toad Sage.

(The Scene switches over to Amegakure. In the basement, Sasuke is lying on a hospital bed. Dream is tampering with his eyes using all kinds of instruments and tools while Sasuke lays unconscious [due to a drug].)

“Yes, yes. It seems there’s a hidden membrane that awakens in the eyes of the Uchiha once the Mangekyou is released and it grows like a tumor upon repeated use. If I remove that genetic membrane that inhabits blindness, perhaps I can reverse the damage done to his eyes. Though, it’ll resurface again in the future. But at the very least he would be able to use the Mangekyou again with fresh eyes. ANYWAY, with his help I’m just be one more step closer to remaking a world that only clones are the inhabitants. This is something even Reika does not know of. I’ll continue my research in secret,” thought Dream.

Next Time: Over the course of another day Konoha draws to Sunagakure while Tetsuo thruts his plans into action.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

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The final weeks of 4th ninja war. At a war torn town near border between the Fire and The Rain, ruins of once home, markets and shrines are left hanging and corpses lies everywhere. In the middle of the town plaza a full armored Kyo of the Tortoise is standing alone. “I know you’re here.” Says Kyo and a man comes out from a house. He grins widely like the joker and wear a crimson coat. Blood drips from his mouth and he licks them clean. “Always wonder why you wear a full armor like a samurai.” Says the man. “And I wonder, does making a contract with the bats, turn you into a blood sucker?” ask Kyo. The man gave a wide grins while his eyes looks at Kyo like he is his next meal. “We are sages. You the Tortoise sage wears an armor like a tortoise, not to mention stupid and slow like one. And me Blood. Sage of the bat. A blood sucking cannibal. You came here for revenge? Because I kill that paper girl Konan?” ask Blood and he unsheathes two blades that have dry bloods all over it. Kyo quickly charge towards Blood. “Shell Charge!!!” yelled Kyo and a shell made of chakra surrounds him as he charges towards Blood who raise his blade to meet Kyo’s attack. Kyo rams into Blood and knocks him back through several houses until he finally crashes into a shrine. Blood slow rise up like a zombie and look at Kyo. He grins sadistically. Kyo jumps up and plunge himself towards Blood like a missile. Blood takes a deep breath and exhale a green mist around him. Kyo seems undeterred by the mist crash into the shrine. He then stands up and looks around him but the mist block his vision. He then heard a maniacal laughter behind him and as he turn Blood is charging towards him and as he gets closer he points the blades towards Kyo but the blade didn’t manage to penetrate Kyo’s armor. Blood jumps behind Kyo with blades on Kyo’s neck. “Gotcha.” Says Blood. Suddenly Kyo puff into a log and Kyo appear next to Blood. The surprised Blood couldn’t react in time and Kyo punches with all his might at Blood’s head and he went flying into the houses. Kyo looks at the rubbles and Blood’s hand came out from it and slowly he pulls himself out. “Surprised? That punch should be the end of me or at least it should be.” Grins Blood. “What are you?” ask Kyo. “I’m Blood. Sage of the Bat. I knew fighting another sage is hard. So I came prepared. I suck dry a few living humans to make sure fresh blood are flowing inside of me. And when there fresh blood flowing in me, I can’t die.” Says Blood. “Why do you side with the Sa-mosutatto?” ask Kyo. “I never side with anyone. I just hate self proclaim righteous ninjas. And some free meal. No one will ask twice about acceptable losses. Just like your precious Konan.” Grins Blood. Kyo yelled in frustration and charge blindly towards Blood. Blood quickly makes a hand seals and exhales a blue mist and Kyo is caught in it. Kyo quickly jumps out from the mist. Suddenly he falls to his knees and cough uncontrollably while Blood laughs maniacally. “What all that armor and you cant take some poison?” ask Blood and he kicks Kyo in the gut. “Too bad your blood now is contaminated with my poison. Always wonder how sages blood taste.” Says Blood and he raise his blade. Then a tongue appears behind him and stops him for gutting Kyo. Blood looks behind him and saw Naruto with a toad that uses its tongue to bind Blood and Sakura. “I’ll take Mr. freaky. You heal Kyo. Sakura nods.

At a tent near the battlefield, Hiro, Shun, Aito, Izo and Sai is looking at the battlefield map. “We manage to push the Sa-mosutatto back from the temples, but I just received some disturbing news. Blood, the cannibal vampire is reported allies with them. And I also received info someone is providing them with supplies to fight us.” Says Sai. “As if the SNA isn’t enough.” Says Hiro. “The Cloud and the Mist are cornering them as we speak. Shikamaru with a number of our men is heading there to aid them. The Sand is fighting with the SNA within their borders.” Says Sai. “So it’s up to us to stop them. Sending Shikamaru to to stop the SNA. Who’s leading the team that’s guarding the village?” ask Shun. “Gai Sensei and Rock Lee.” Answer Sai. The room suddenly becomes quiet. “With those two leading, no one with brains will attack the village.” Says Hiro. The other seems to agree with Hiro. “Izo. We need to figured out who is supplying them with weapon, foods and medicine and I want to know why.” Says Sai. “Can I castrate the suppliers?” ask Izo. “No.” says Sai. “But Aito always robs SNA corpse.” Says Izo. “Hei I need to pay my rent and my bills.” Says Aito. “Hiro and Aito will lead our troops. You must make contact with our ally the Rain. Shun go find the Hokage. For God Sake where is he?” ask Sai.

At the Sa-mosutatto clan location.

A young Mikoto is looking at the clan leader,Kichi who is worn out from the battle and is talking with Reika. “You send this?” ask Kichi and he looks at the medicine and weapons Reika brought. “And now your part. During the siege of SNA lab we have info you took Dream with you. Where is he?” ask Reika. “And if we don’t answer?” ask Kichi. “The supplies stop and we will see how long you can last with Konoha and Rain assault.” Says Reika. “60 miles south. In a hut by a cherry tree.” Says Kichi. Reika smiles and she takes her leave. When she is quite far from the Sa-mosutatto location, the Marine squad appears. “I want all of you to find Dream at this location. Secure him and take him to safety. And then inform me and me only, no else’s.” The Marine Squad nods and disappears.

Blood: The blood sucking cannibal sage. No one knows from what village he is from but he can always be seen in battlefields. A crazy maniac that sucks his victim until they are dry. And after he sucks their blood, for a temporary moment he will be invincible. His Justus mainly is summoning bats, use poisons, acids. He rarely kills his victim on the spot. He will stab them, maimed them, torture them until they die. And he always knows which button to push to make his opponent angry.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

-An event taking place during closing of the 4th Shinobi War

(After the collapse of Mizugakure, Reika still had plans to throw everyone into turmoil. The Scene starts off where Mizukage stands on an open field. Her son Kai, who is inexperienced in terms of his mother’s ways at the time, soon comes out of nowhere and approaches her.)

“Why is our village currently allied with the other great villages after they’ve done this to our home? Mizugakure is now on a constant watch by all of them. How is it that we have to do what they said when they used those crazy ass SNA monsters to strip us of everything,” yelled Kai.

“I thought I told you to never track me when I’m outside of the Kage’s office,” said Mizukage. “BUT MOM,” yelled Kai. (She walks over to him and puts her hand on his shoulder.)

“War is never a reason to end beneficial alliances. Even if they collapsed our government, the only thing we can do now is protract and do what the allied forces tell us, otherwise their promises to destroy us for our previous acts will hold through. We have no other choices but to cooperate. The threat of the SNA is no longer our threat since I’ve sewed the seed of hatred between the allied forces and the SNA. Now, the allied forces have in a sense disregarded me as a current threat to global security,” said Mizukage.

“When will we get our power back,” asked Kai. “It’ll take time, but secretly dealing with the Sa-mosutatto clan under the allied forces’ noses will help us secure power in the future; that’s why we need Dream alive and secured where no one will bother to check,” said Mizukage. “But what if we get caught? We’ll be in the same spot as before, or worse. Now that all our ties to the smaller countries and their villages have been broken, we can’t afford to be caught. The Bijuu our key, is also,” Kai before getting cut off by Mizukage.

“Enough, like you said, we can’t afford to be caught. We won’t be caught because they can’t expect it. What fool would do something so conniving and underhanded to those who showed mercy? Our government is on the verge of collapse, even one mistake that annoys our adversaries, and we’d be six feet under. What I am doing is indeed dangerous and life risking. But I refuse to play the puppet and slave to the allied forces; I’d rather meet the man downstairs.

Living near death’s door and overcoming it, is the only way to survive in this dangerous climate we are in. Lies and deceit is the only way to glory! It’s only cheating if one is caught in the act, otherwise it is assumed that one just conquered without strings attached; that’s society in a nutshell. I won’t get found out, because I’m knocking on death’s door! Those who are perceived as defeated and conquered can’t possibly do anything more life threatening in the logic of the shinobi world, that’s why we are overlooked by the allied forces,” said Mizukage.

(Kai is shocked from hearing his mother speak like that. He then comes to a realization.)

“At that moment, I came to believe the true magnitude of the kind of person my mother was, the kind of women who’d turn this world inside-out,” thought Kai. “Konoha will never find out about the shipments. The Sa-mosutatto has gathered large sums of money thanks to the regime I brought in when I was a dominating power. By organizing small countries and villages to overtake lands for my sake, those rare nations with the money will try to hire mercenaries, those such as the Sa-mosutatto. It is so silly how the market I created ran. Hired mercenaries may become threats to those who previously had contracts with. Mad chaos is what it is. Since the Sa-mosutatto is so strong, they’ve managed to live through the strife. They’ve been getting fat as of lately, so they could have easily bought, or ordered those supplies and inventory from foreign lands. Ha, ha, ha! The Hokage and Konoha have no evidence to suggest I’d do such a thing such as supplying them with tools, food, and what not,” yelled Mizukage.

Next Time: NEW DEVELOPMENT The story switches back to the present! Kumogakure, The Most powerful Hidden Village Now gets Majorly involved with the Plot!

-Kumogakure The Strongest Hidden Village.

(In the Kage Office stationed at Kumogakure, Asao, the apparent Raikage sits in her seat while both of her aides rushes to her desk.)

“You sent for us Lord Raikage,” asked Matsu. “Umm, aaa, anything you want,” asked Tsuneo.

“Dumbasses, retarded as hell,” yelled Raikage. “But miss, you called us down,” said Matsu. “Rrrr, Right,” said Tsuneo. “Then why the hell are you asking if I called you two down or, not!? I’m not damn senile I’m still in my stinckin 30s, so don’t you ever do this dumb shit again! Like I need you to tell me what I just freakin said, like my memory capacity is the size of a gold fish’s! Is that what you two are trying to tell me,” yelled Raikage.

“No my excellency, not at all,” yelled Matsu. “Werrr, we’re sorry for our ignorance and stupidity. Please don’t hurt us,” yelled Tsuneo. “Men these days, a bunch of brainless losers,” said Raikage. “Forgive us,” said Matsu. “We’ree atttt, you’rrre serrrvice,” stuttered Tsuneo. “Like Oh My God! If you don’t fix that utterly phail ass stuttering, I’m going to fix it for you with my heel down your throat,” yelled Raikage.

“Please no, I’m cured,” yelled Tsuneo. (Apparently Tsuneo’s stuttering has been overcome by fear.) “Let’s get on with it shall we,” yelled Raikage. “She’s the one who scared us shitless,” thought Matsu. “Listen up! Several days ago I’ve ordered you two to send Uyeda and Shuji to bring that womanizing kid home for a kick in the pants. I want to know why is it taking those two so long to find Ryu? And since they prefer you two over me, I was wondering if they’ve contacted either of you two in regards to Ryu’s whereabouts,” asked Raikage.

“Well Ryu is also part of the Swift Team, so perhaps even the other two members of that squad couldn’t catch up to their missing teammate,” said Matsu. “Answer the question genius! And besides, Ryu is known for the Flying Thunder God jutsu, a skill that I had to bust my ass to find and figure out up from under Konoha’s watchful eyes. I know the mechanics of the jutsu, and it leaves some blindspots that makes it possible to track, so don’t give me that bull shit that those two couldn’t find Ryu and bring him back,” said Raikage.

“Maybe those two are at a bar or, causing trouble and what not. After all, those two are the prime example as to why Ryu acts the way he does,” said Tsuneo. “Tsuneo,” said Raikage with a firmer voice. “Oh please, I hope didn’t anger her,” thought Tsuneo. “That’s great observational skills. How about I cut you some slack? You don’t have to cut, trim, and polish my toe nails tonight,” said Raikage.

“That lucky fool,” thought Matsu. “But I like taking care of Raikage’s feet, they are so nice and pampered. Mainly because I have to take care of them,” thought Tsuneo. “Wad about me,” asked Matsu. “What about you? You still have to scrub and massage my back while I’m in the bubble bath and if you dare try to take a look at my front, or take a cheap feel that’s too low I’ll shatter your teeth,” said Raikage as she balls up her fist. “Damn it, like usual, I’ll have to wait until she goes to sleep to take a peek, her eyes are so keen. She usually naps in the tub,” thought Matsu.

“In regards to the SNA’s headquarters, Tori have sent me several communication lizards on the SNA’s true base; not a dummy organization from the previous reports we were use to scouting out. We can launch an entire battalion and bum rush their fortress at anytime. Heh, we shit on all the other village’s espionage tactics; hah, they’d never find the SNA’s tower by just simply searching around. I don’t know what the other Kages are planning, but before they do something stupid, I need Ryu as well as Uyeda and Shuji to user their fast speeds to quickly inform them of what’s going down. See, with the Swift Team, other communication methods are obsolete. If only those three could pull their shit together and report back here on time they could individually seek out the hidden village’s and inform everyone in less than a day,” yelled Raikage.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

(Raikage digs in her desk and pulls out a smaller scroll and lays it on the table.) “What’s that from,” asked Matsu. “This was an inscription code for the chakra sealing method that is used to store a large amount of chakra into scrolls for unleashing at a later time. I’ve heard Bijuu’s chakra can be sealed within these however, I’ve also heard that the Hokage had initially planned on using one to contain that meteor that loomed over the River Country however, the plan failed and one of the SNA middlemen escaped with meteor using a chakra concealment method. But, I have my ways of gaining as many jutsu as possible to keep this village prepared for whatever crisis.

Ryu is just one of those agents dedicated to tracking and recording the components that go into jutsu. And since he has the sharingan, it makes his job a lot easier. I bet he told everyone back at the meteor site that he was scouting Asura a while ago however, he actually copied the components that go into that jutsu and recorded that down on this scroll. The Hokage also has a similar jutsu like this, but I always wanted my own, and I knew the Hokage wouldn’t part with it so nicely, and besides, this one is much grander and advanced than the assumed ones used for Bijuu concealment. This jutsu is also massively better than what The Hokage’s technique was capable of, based on the data I’ve studied and researched anyway. So earlier, I’ve sent this scroll that contains codes to this jutsu to the one and only jutsu deciphering unit and I’ve learned the basics behind it after it was returned to me,” said Raikage.

“What are you planning to do,” asked Tsuneo. “Try to suck up another meteor most likely,” said Matsu. “IDIOTS! No, that would be risky to try and absorb their assumed massive ball of death right from under their noses with the kind of powers they have under their belts. I have a more strategic approach to things.

If everyone who is opposed to the SNA have gathered and transmitted all their chakra to this special chakra concealment method, then if we had someone capable of unleashing that chakra, the damage and destruction it could wrought might just be enough to counter whatever the SNA is planning. But in order for us to do something like that, WE NEED THE KAGES ASSISTANCE! DAMN IT. WHERE ARE THOSE TWO FOOLS? They better had come into contact with Ryu! Oh, and I need Yoshiyuki up here immediately he needs to learn this jutsu because he can handle this feat above what I can do! Matsu, you’re good for that job in rounding his ass up,” yelled Raikage.

“Yes Ma’am,” yelled Matsu. “Tsuneo! Tell the scroll factory create the largest scroll in existence if Yoshiyuki is to have enough material to work with,” yelled Raikage. “YES WILL DO,” yelled Tsuneo.

(They rush off.)

“To think, I’d be relying on that man’s help, the one man in this village that surpasses my ability,” thought Raikage.

(The Scene switches to the outside of Unraikyo, a cave that sits somewhere in the wide plains of Kumogakure. Near the cave’s opening, Yoshiyuki sleeps on a beach chair soaking up the rays of the sun with his arms folded back behind his head. He utters one phrase in his sleep.)

“The way of the shinobi is killing my youth,” mumbled Yoshiyuki. (The Scene switches over to a wide open plain. Ryu is rushing to where he is supposed to be at, while he gets interrupted by a flash of bright light that blinds his eyes. He covers his eyes as the light fades. Soon a figure can be seen.)

“Don’t tell me it’s you guys… I guess Asao, wants me back and pronto. That nagging women, she just needs a dick in her and she’d settle down,” said Ryu. “Aye! Don’t shit talk the Raikage like dat, you aren’t even above my level yet to be saying things like that chump,” said Uyeda.

“Yeah, yeah wait until I tell you the mad action I’ve been getting as of lately,” smirked Ryu. “Whatever dog, I bet you still a virgin,” said Uyeda. “Shut up, like you know what I be getting! Anyway, where’s that punk ass Shuji at,” asked Ryu. “You know him, always straggling,” said Uyeda. (After about an hour of waiting a poof appears, after the smoke clears, a figure can be seen.)

“You got some nerve brat, running off like that. You know the Raikage been on our asses because we let you tackle your last mission by yourself,” Shuji. “There weren’t any lasses on a boat infested by pirates anyway, so I don’t know what you’re complaining about, yall just got saved from a sausage fest,” said Ryu. “This blockhead! Whatever, get to gettin, Raikage wants your hide home now,” yelled Shuji. “I know, I know. I’ll accept my punishment, I was heading home anyway,” said Ryu.

“You have to tell us of this so called main squeezes you’ve been getting while you were sightseeing with those badasses,” said the laughing Uyeda. (Ryu blushes in embarrassment.) “You mean little Ryu who don’t know where to stick it in,” asked Shuji. “That’s the one,” said the laughing Uyeda. “Ha, hah, ha. You funny Ryu, you funny as shit,” yelled the laughing Shuji.

“AHHH I’ll Kill you,” yelled Ryu. (He tries to stab Shuji with his sword however, Shuji quickly evades and appears right behind him.) “Stupid body flickering ass mother fucker,” mumbled Ryu. (Shuji pats Ryu’s head over and over again until Ryu about has enough.) “DON’T TOUCH ME! DON’T YOU EVER TOUCH ME,” yelled Ryu. “Aww, don’t be like that, we part of the same unit and been through a lot,” smirked Shuji. (He turns around and tries to cut him again however, Shuji gets behind him again with the quickness and begins patting him on his head again however, Uyeda now intervenes.)

“Alright, alright. As much as I’d like to watch you two screw around all day, we better get back to Raikage Sama. SO Ryu, hand me one of your rites, when I reach Kumogakure, which shouldn’t take too long, maybe about a half a half an hour, or 15 minutes if I don’t stop by near some nude bar on the way (Shuji and Ryu groans). So use your Flying Thunder God jutsu to reverse summon yourself to my location,” said Uyeda. “What about Shuji,” asked Ryu. “Don’t worry about me, unlike you space-time transferring cheaters, I’ll have to take the usual method. It’ll take me a while, but I’ll make it there in less than a couple of hours, if I don’t get laid on the way,” said Shuji.

(Uyeda and Ryu groans.)
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Next Time: Now that Ryu is on his way home to Kumogakure, the Raikage can help out the allied forces with faster response time.

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Raikage: Her real name is Asao of the Yotsuki Clan. Her father was the previous Raikage that appeared during the current series of the Naruto manga. She is of average height for a female and has medium brown skin complexion. Her eye brows, eye shape and hair color resembles that of the previous Raikage’s however, her face is very fair and attractive. But don’t let that fool you, she is a very strong and oppressive leader. Those who annoy her enough might end up in a hospital needing intensive care (she has a really short temper).

She can most certainly come off as a bitch, but she is a stern leader who carries on the will of the true shinobi’s spirit, which is to collect and master as many jutsu as possible in order to maintain power and standing in the world. She has led her village to the most powerful during the course of the years by continuously collecting and amassing power during even the times of peace. She has curly long blond hair and wears a dark conservative kimono.

She basically works her two aides to the bone and slaps them silly if they complain. Even forcing them to do embarrassing labor such as washing her dishes, cleaning her under garments, and taking care of her own personal hygiene; basically, she is very demanding and requires the utmost highest form of maintenance, which is probably why she is single. Though she does not make it a habit to go look for men, as she often says Tsuneo and Matsu does their job just fine of course, she does not permit any kind of intimacy between the three of them. She often criticizes the other hidden villages for their lack of power and standing in comparison to her own village.

Matsu: He is one of the two aides that the Raikage made it a law for her to have. He has a big suck up attitude towards Raikage despite how he personally feels for her, which is that she is a bitch though, that does not stop him from trying to take a peek at her when she is undressed (which usually ends in her smashing his face in). He once whispered to Tsuneo that Raikage is always pmsing, which resulted in a Kunai being logged in his back with the quickness as she apparently heard (I bet he never did that shit again). He dresses in the typical Cloud uniform. He is of average height for a man, and has the typical guyish face. He has short black hair. All and all, he is mud to her in his eyes.

Tsuneo: The second aide to the Raikage. He use to have an apparent stuttering problem (or speech impediment) until the Raikage fixed it by threatening to shove her heel down his throat, which cured him for life. He is a very submissive man, and always does what he is told. He can be assumed as spineless in a sense. Unlike Matsu, Tsuneo enjoys taking care of Raikage, and considers her beautiful despite how she forces him to do such embarrassing tasks. He is a shorter man of a height of 5 ft 4. He dresses in the typical Cloud attire. His face is very soft like, think Ash from Pokemon. He has hair like Hei, but nothing about Tsuneo’s character is badass besides that. The Raikage prefers Tsuneo over Matsu and often cuts Tsuneo some slack when he does something smart, or compliments her however, since he is still like a nuisance to her overall, she pretty much just treats him like crap on a daily basis…

Tori: Nothing much is known about his character besides that he is an master tracker for the Kumogakure spy agency. He helped pin point the SNA’s true headquarters after months of searching God knows how many false leads. He currently communicates with the Raikage via communication lizards from the shadows.

Yoshiyuki: He is the strongest man in all of Kumogakure. Surprising that he is even above Raikage’s level however, he admits that he is indeed afraid of her might. He knows nearly every jutsu that Kumogakure posses as well have having the most chakra out of everyone in the entire village. His age range is in its 30s, just like the Raikage’s. He is perhaps the only man that the Raikage herself respects in every aspect. He has orange hair that is styled like grown up Gohan’s. His face is ripened with experience and has a kind of Kurama from Yuyu Hakusho feel.

He is slightly tall, being just over 5 ft 11. He wears the typical Cloud uniform with a black long sleeve shirt underneath. Despite his extreme ability, he is a very calm and gentle soul. He often worries that his life is being cut short for knowing so much. He is very valuable to the village, and a treasure that most not be exploited. If his knowledge and principles of jutsu were some how extracted from his brain's cerbral cortex, Kumogakure could be in a real bind. He is incrediablly strong, so such things shouldn't normally happen. He spends most of his day at Unraikyo training his chakra manipulation and perfecting any jutsu he isn't so good in.

Because he's so valuable, he hasn't been going on many missions throughout his life, so he lacks in mission experiences. It is assumable to say that Raikage and Youshiyuki use to be squad members when they were younger. They probably had the same Jounin teacher. The only jutsu he does not know are the Flying Thunder God and the jutsu employed by Uyeda. He was never forced to know those because it would encourage him to leave the village in the eyes of the village elders, that's why he was never instructed to know those techniques.

Uyeda: He is part of Kumogakure’s Swift Team, which is composed of three insanely fast shinobi. He is 18 years old and acts like the older brother of the unit. He travels using a space time transfer ability similar to Uchiha Madara’s, the only difference is that he can’t warp attacks that go through him, and it takes a minute or, so for him to gather the chakra required to make the necessary jumps. He, like Ryu and Shuji, are all very vulgar and womanizing. His behaviors passed off on young Ryu however, Uyeda often calls Ryu on his bluffs and BS. His height is 5 ft 9, and he is dressed in the typical cloud attire. He his medium length blond hair that is kind of spiky, think facial and hair feel to that of Tidus’ from Final Fantasy 10.

Shuji: He is the third member of Swift Team. Whereas Ryu uses the Flying Thunder God jutsu and Uyeda uses an advanced space-time transfer, Shuji relies on his actually foot speed backed by his body flicker. He is said to have the fastest body flicker in history. On foot, he is naturally faster than Ryu and Uyeda however, his absolute speed falls in comparison to the other two. He says the other two cheats with their speed feats. He is of average height, ranging somewhere near Uyeda’s. He is 17 years old and often jokes around with Ryu and makes fun of his inability to score with chicks. He has long brown hair, think style like Jecht from Final Fantasy 10 and facial feel to that of Zidane’s from Final Fantasy 9.
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