KiddJutsu

That'll be cool. Looking fwd to it.

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Vishnu

Actually Shakti it's not necessary part of the trinity of life. The most common accepted Gods in the Trinity are Vishnu- the one who keeps balance, Shiva- the one who brings chaos and destruction and Brahma the one who created everything. Usually the Creator it's seen as a genderless deity, but some variants of the Hinduism presents him as a man, Brahma. Shakti is equivalent to the Christian's Holy Ghost. She is a force that has connections with the Universe, molding the Creation. Nevertheless, i like the idea of the locations. You could consider using a hyperbole: making Shakti a paradisiacal city, Vishnu a regular city and Shiva a city simmilar with Hell. Just an idea.

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Vishnu

Guys, my short break it's over. Even though i completed the trilogy, it doesn't mean that i'm done writing. All that i can spoil for now, it's that i just started working on something new. I won't tell you anything about the scenery or the action or anything at all. Just this:

He spoke in the darkness:* “Let there be light!”* And right away there was light, scattering the darkness and showing the infinite space.*

In a week the first chapter of the new fanfic it's going to be posted. This time, i'm doing something that it's more complex, many more twists, and some familiar characters.

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Bazooka_Joe

u have no idea how happy i am now vishnu:P

Narut0360

Chapter continuation from page 63

KiddJutsu

Oh Hell yeah man! When can we anticipate that new goodness?

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Numinous

I'm fully aware the most known trinity is Brahma-Vishnu-Shiva, but that's on a theoretical point. On a practical point, Brahma is not part of the trinity of worshiping cults, but rather the Shaiva cult (Shiva), the Vaishnava (Vishnu) and the Shakta (Shakti). So if towns were built as a homage to an Hindu trinity, it'd probably be around those Shakti-Vishnu-Shiva rather than Brahma-Vishnu-Shiva.

Also I don't like when group have an odd case in them. Proof of that is the Land of Maat, which has 3 of the Four Sons of Horus and I pretty much excluded the one who didn't have an animal head, so I preferred to make the Hindu trinity all human-like rather than two humans and an anthropomorphic elephant. Nitpicking, I know, but I can't help myself.

You'll see when it the time comes.

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so does anyone have any feedback or thoughts on my last chapter?

and any questions u have please ask them, they help me with detail that i might have forgotten and will have to add later, and it helps me creatively .....

Thank you

lopiskes

A have a thought plz write more A CAN'T WAIT !!!!!!

Vishnu

Yeah you're right about the practical point. I missed that one. Anyway i understand your preference of using human forms rather than hybrids. I did the same in my fanfic with the Hindu Gods that i have used.

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Apacolypz Fan Fic Prediction 596

The approaching ONSLAUGHT


As Sasuke and squad head out, over the horizon we see a shimmering light.
Naruto and crew are taking a small break to question their strategy. Naruto thinks back to what Itachi told him. Itachi: Every jutsu has a weakness. Naruto then thinks back to fighting Pain. He remembers even a shinobi who was thought to be a God had a weakness. Naruto then remembers when Kurama told him his Bijuu mode was only given five minutes until they get used to it.
Kakashi: What is it Naruto?!
Naruto: His Jutsu I want to track when he becomes intangible. He is too difficult to strike. I am wondering does his jutsu like my own sage and bijuu mode have a time limit? Kakashi!!!? Good thinking Naruto! If we can at least find a weakness in his time space jutsu we can turn this fight around.

Guy: We will need some sort of distraction. Killer Bee can you fight on in that form?
Killer Bee: No our chakras are about done! I can transform and fight alongside you for more fun! OH YEAHHHH!
Kakashi: Guy and Killer Bee go to the right. Naruto, make four clones and take three of them left. With your last clone head with me straight ahead. For some reason I was unable to warp Gedo Mazo away with Kamui. I want to know what occurred. Something is not sitting right with me. Naruto: I will make five clones. I have an idea.

As discussed the three teams head out in different directions racing toward Gedo Mazo and Tobi. Tobi: They plan to separate and attack my blind spots. These children will never learn! Tobi forms an invisible barrier around himself. As he claps his hands we see him push the barrier over a perimeter around his position. Tobi: I have to account for the blind spot. As he readies his war fan we see Guy and Killer Bee approach first. Bee quickly goes into cloak mode. He rushes at Tobi's head as he is about to clothesline him. Tobi reaches toward Bee's face and grabs his throat sucking in Bee's ninjutsu. As his cloak slowly fades. We see Guy crashing down kicking Tobi backward. Bee leaps into the air and spins on top of Tobi with his eight sword attack. Tobi phases through Bee's onslaught and uses his fan to slingshot the spinning ball that is bee away from him. Knocking Bee away Tobi and Guy fight hand to hand. Tobi attempts to use his war fan to swing at Guy. Guy ducks Tobi's fan slash at his waste and stretches his arm out to slap Tobi with his two headed dragon numchucks. Tobi: Naraka Path! Tobi attempts to pull out Guy's soul. As the soul leaks out of Guys body we see the Blue Beast fall to one knee in numbing pain.

Suddenly the barrier notifies Tobi of a threat coming in behind him. As Tobi drops Guy and turns to face Naruto he phases his head but solidifies his arm. Naruto is about to strike Tobi in the face but is caught off guard as Tobi punches him backwards. Naruto smirks at Tobi as he launches back toward his masked foe. Naruto: You think I will give up?! YOU REALLY DON'T KNOW WHO YOU'RE FUCKING WITH! Naruto runs in at Tobi with another clone running directly across from him. Tobi: This will be close, Asura Path! Tobi covers his body in milky armor. Naruto and his clone form a huge odama Rasengan. As it connects and smashes into one another the Rasengan throws dirt into the air as the jutsu explodes. Naruto is standing before the smoke Through the smoke a figure is seen. Tobi: Futile attempts!!! Tobi is seen wrapped with dozens of white coiled up cabled laser heads. As he shoots out hundreds of homing lasers toward Naruto another clone comes downward with a monstrous sized Rasenshuriken. Tobi is unable to evade the attack completely.(A large clap is heard along with racing air. Tobi:!! He tries to absorb majority of the attack as he quickly phases through the rest under the ground.

As the remaining Naruto clone rest Tobi rises from the ground revealing a black under armor. Naruto looking observes Tobi's body. Noticing his shoulder which has a chalkier color tone than the rest of his body. Naruto: So that is why you're so powerful. You're just like those plant thingies. Tobi grabs his war fan from the ground. Naruto: You got nothing to say! Tobi stretches his arm out and pulls Naruto toward him using the rinnegan. Naruto is panicking as he can't get out of the jutsu. Naruto quickly notices something. He forms a Rasengan from chakra arms, as Tobi prepares his mighty swing Naruto spikes Tobi with his Rasengan. As Tobi attempts to absorb the jutsu dropping Naruto. As Naruto hits his feet he quickly resumes rikudo cloak mode and fast steps toward the oblivious Tobi. Still in the middle of absorbing Naruto's rasengan the panel shows Tobi getting impaled with a rasengan to his chest while reaching upward toward the vanishing chakra. Slapped back hundreds of yard Tobi is smothered by dirt and dust. Lying on the ground Tobi raises his upper turning toward Naruto. Tobi: His fighting style is similar but totally different from that man!...(Thinking back to when he fought against the Fourth Hokage.

Rising to his feet he laughs a little. Naruto: What's so funny? Tobi: You pressure me this much, but like your father you will die in the end. It is all meaningless, for me a man who is not bound by time. I will win! I will overcome your hope and your ambitions...I will shatter your dreams! Come Naruto! As Tobi wields his war fan a familiar orb is seen racing behind him. Tobi: I told you already this is futile! Tobi lets the Naruto clone run through him attempting to end it with a mini bijuudama. Tobi guts Naruto in the stomach and is seen pulling out his soul. Tobi: Foolish! So you are the real one!!! Using one hand to grab Naruto's throat and the other to pull out his soul the end is in sight. Out of no where, (chirping birds are head, thousands) A huge hole is seen pierced through Tobi's chest. Killer Bee: GOT YOU MOTHERFUCKA!!! Kakashi: You're not the only one who has a sharingan. The team is seen penetrating Tobi's chest at the same time. Tobi: UGH! (blood is seen leaking from the crack in the mask.) Tobi quickly warps away in front of the Mazo.

As Tobi's foes quickly approach him, the Gedo starts to transform. Tobi: Finally it has started. I am almost at my limit. As the Mazo begins to shed it's skin. Naruto: Sage Arts: Gargantuan Rasengan Barrage! Naruto strikes at twelve o clock right on top of the Gedo's head from the sky. As his clones all fall smashing the dense spheres against the Mazo's head Tobi looks on in complete disbelief. Naruto alongside Kakashi impatiently observe the disappearing dust and debris. Naruto's face falls to complete shock. As a cold sweat covers his forehead his body shakes in fear. Naruto: Wh Wha WHA WHAT IS THAT KAKASHI SENSEI?!
Kakashi: IF WE CAN'T STOP IT, THE END OF THE WORLD NARUTO!!! THE JUUBI!!!

Tobi quickly jumps on top of the Juubi's head. Tobi: Naive heathens! Let death welcome you! The Juubi is seen forming his legendary Sharinnegan.

Elsewhere..................

Madara is taunting Oonoki. Suddenly he turns towards Naruto's direction. Madara: So he has made his move!! Tsunade: What is this feeling? Raikage: WHAT POWER?! Mei: Is this possible?! Gaara: I have felt this dark sensation before! Oonoki: This can't be?! (his face is puzzled) Madara faces the Kages. Madara appears before Oonoki. Madara: Inner Growth! He touches Oonoki's forehead. Oonoki grabs his chest in pain as Madara watches on Madara: I grew tiered of your speeches and dreams of hope!. Vines and sprouts start to trickle out of the Tsuchikage's nostril. Tsunada :NOOOOO!!!!!!! Suddenly branches emerge from inside the Tsuchikages body killing him instantly. The Kages are seen frozen in place. Gaara sheds a tear as he watches Oonoki turn into a tree. Madara: Born anew you old fool! A peaceful reincarnation to the next life. Madara flies off in the direction of the infamous chakra source. (With his fist balled up tight) Raikage: WE FUCKIN FAILED! I'M SORRY OONOKI OF THE DRAGON SCALES...WE FAILED YOU! Tsunade: I have lost another ally and new friend. We cannot stop here! We cannot fail this generation. Our lives we give to protect the next Shinobi world. Mei: How do we compete against Uchiha Madara? Tsunade: Once we find Gamma and his group, I have an idea how we can help HIM!

Scene quickly flashes back to the Naruto. Who sheds his fear and stands confident before the eye of Death itself.

END TBC

apacolypz

Apacolypz Continuation 597


Standing before the last remaining fragments of the Alliance army....The Mythical Juubi!

Guy lands down beside Kakashi followed by Bee and Naruto. Guy: Well even our split strategy didn't work. How do we fight against such tremendous power? Kakashi: We cannot allow him to become the ten tailed Jink. Even if we put our lives on the line will that be enough? Naruto balls his fist up and slices the air. Naruto: Hey Kakashi sempai! Don't tell me even you have lost your cool? Don't tell me any of you are giving up? Here today we can stop it all and banish all the hate! Even if my life ends today I will make sure everyone has something to look forward to..tomorrow! Kakashi is in disbelief, he smirks as he acknowledges Naruto's true growth. You have done well Naruto. You are not the Hokage yet but you sure do act like one! Kakashi: Any ideas besides the obvious? Naruto: I have one..Everyone looks on in shock.

Tobi on top of the Juubi's head makes a few handsigns. Tobi: I have to hurry, I have been badly hurt. I have to give them credit. Unlike their Kages they actually had a chance at stopping me. Kurama: Naruto! He is about to start the ritual! Tobi: Have patience Juubi, I will not cast you aside like The Sage. I will use you as my catalyst, my tool. Your place is within me! Naruto resumes his rikudo mode and races in toward Tobi. Tobi forms a clone, as he continues to seal the Juubi starting the Ten tailed Jink ritual. Down on the ground. Tobi Clone: Keiyaku Fuin! Hakke Ju Fuin! The ceremonial pedestal appears. Tobi jumps down and lays on the ritual bed. The clone disperses a barrier around them made of chains of the outer path. Tobi: With my last bit of chakra I will place it all down on a gamble. Naruto and group try their best to get into the barrier. Kakashi: He was too smart! He forced us out! Naruto: I can't give up! Suddenly, Shukaku: Naruto listen up! This is Nara Shukaku of headquarters. Madara is headed your way! The Kages have failed to stop him. He has broke his Edo Tensei, now being immortal to the complete word. The Kages have a plan that will help us turn this battle in our favor. Naruto: What is it? Shukaku: You are to learn the jutsu of the Fourth Hokage, Flying Thunder God! Not only that but Tsunade has another hidden jutsu for you to learn that she has tweaked. Naruto's eyes grow wide as he hears this. Shukaku: Naruto at this moment you are our only HOPE! I am sorry for the heavy burden but we have little options.

Instantly Gamma and squad along side the remaining Kages are teleported to the battlefield. Bee: BROTHER! Kakashi: TSUNADE SAMA! Naruto: Grandma Tsunade?! (walking toward Naruto and company) Tsunade: LISTEN UP UZUMAKI NARUTO! You are to learn the FTG technique! To do so I will need to speak with your bijuu. (inside thinking) Kurama:??? Kurama switches places with Naruto. Tsunade: Kurama is it? We all will need your aide to stop Uchiha Madara and this Tobi fellow! I know the past Kages and shinobi have only used you as a weapon, a force! Today we ask that you help us with your power. With your might we may have a chance to eradicate the hate spewing across this world! Will you help us? Will you help the Alliance Army? As Kage what say you? Kurama: NO!!!.. Everyone is shocked! Kurama: I do not do this to help just your army or the five nations. I do this to help Naruto! For Grampa Sage! I do this for peace! It is what he would have wanted. Everyone is relieved, (inside Naruto smiles). Kurama: So what you aim to teach us the Fourths Technique? Tsunade: No we aim to show you FTG and something I have been working on. Tsunade: Gamma take Naruto and Kurama to a isolated location. I am giving you five minutes to break down this jutsu to them. Knowing the Kyuubi he will learn it at a faster pace than that of Naruto. I believe in you! As she delivers her signature smile. With her hand her on hip she turns towards the approaching alliance army reserve and Kakashi and group.

Gaara: Here comes Temari and the remainder of our forces! Raikage: We will not retreat! We aren't going to abandon our belief in the ninja world. As the Chief Commander, we will fight to the fucking death!!! Tsunade: KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU! KATSUYA!! As Katsuya hits the battleground, Tsunade: BREAK DOWN AND HEAL EVERYONE! Katsuya: Yes Tsuande Sama! It is great to see you so riled up! As Katsuya heals everyone a large bellow is heard as the Juubi is seen being sucked down like a reverse tornado. As the ritual nears its end. The barrier drops, we see Tobi's clone poof away. As he stands we see that the huge gaping hole in his chest has healed itself. A dark aura is seen racing around his body. Tobi: So you all have come to greet your new leader eh? Raikage engulfs himself in his iron clad armor. As he maxes it out he instantly is seen behind Tobi. Raikage creates a ration sickle from his iron clad arm. Just as the blade is about to swipe Tobi a large purple chakra arm comes out punching the Raikage back hundreds of feet. BEE:??!! Kakashi: Impossible! Without so much as flinching he was able to land a punch on the Raikage?

Tsunade runs in behind Kakashi and Bee. Bee runs a little left and Kakashi runs a little right. As the two men fast step they strike Tobi dead on. Their hands are caught by two chakra arms. Tobi: Shinra Tensei! He sends the lighting tech ninjas back on their asses as well. Tsunade then strikes Tobi landing a punch on his mask shattering it. Tobi: I give it to you Senju Tsunade! You were the only fighter able to break my mask. AS the mask falls Tsunade catches a glimpse of Tobi's face. Tsunade: It cannot be!? Tobi: You forget my Rinnegan. I was able to absorb some of the chakra wrapped around your arm. Otherwise I would not have a head! Tsunade: Mitotic Regeneration Jutsu! Tobi: So you aim to break me apart by brute force? (Menacing glare) I DARE YOU TO TRY!

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Gamma: Kurama and Naruto listen. I am sure by this point you two are aware of the Flying Thunder God. Kurama you sadly saw it when Madara had you attack the village. The jutsu as you saw is capable of transferring a object or ones self to another marker or location. By using this space time technique you can become a one man wrecking crew. Using the chakra seal that you can place anywhere or by throwing kunai with written seals on them you can teleport yourself anywhere where ever the marker is. Kurama (remembers when Minato used his space time barrier to transport his entire bijudama outside the village.) Kurama so how does it work? What is the seal? Kurama eyes a scroll that Gamma pulls out. Kurama this seal?! It is apart of Naruto's key! Kurama: One second! As Kurama and Naruto talk within Naruto's subconscious. Gamma looks on puzzled as he scratches his head. Gamma: Was it something I said? Naruto: So you think you can help teach me the FTG technique. We don't have long Naruto, Your Hokage only gave us five minutes to perfect something it took Kushina years to teach your father. This seal is apart of our synced mode. The key utilized in taming my chakra source is the same seal used in the technique. Naruto: So what does that mean? Kurama: (thinking to himself) (Gosh this will take forever.) (sigh) Naruto it means it is more than likely we can upgrade your fathers jutsu. Naruto: (Glowing) REALLY?! (Smiling hard) But how? Kurama: Naruto I want you to use my chakra and go into your cloaked mode. Naruto quickly covers himself in Rikudo mode. Kurama: Look at your gut Naruto and the key running down your arm. That is the very seal that was embedded in Kushina's seal, that is the FTG! We can use my chakra, by manipulating it we can send out chakra clones who represent the seal itself. Naruto: So instead of throwing out kunai, I am throwing out chakra clones of myself? I don't get it? Kurama: Soon you will!!!! Let's practice quickly Naruto!

Back on the battlefield.......

Tobi is fighting with Tsunade. As she is about to pierce his head with her mighty strike Tobi sends out a shockwave from his palm that sends Tsunade flying. Kitsuchi, son of Oonoki arrives just in time catching Tsunade with a stone golem hand. Tsunade: Kitsuchi san! Thank you! A shocked look appears on her face as she looks up at her savior. Tsunade: I...I...I have to tell you some sad news....As she begins to shed tears, Kitsuchi stares into her eyes and bites hit bottom lip. Kitsuchi: Don't speak! We will mourn our fallen comrades after this battle! A single tear is seen falling off of his jolly cheeks. Kitsuchi alongside Gaara: HIT HIM WITH EVERYTHING YOU HAVE! The alliance army sends out attack after attack at the villainous Tobi.

Kakashi: Looks like things are about to take a turn for the worse. Suddenly Madara appears as he jumps behind Tobi.
Madara: Ultimate Susanoo!! With a mighty swing Madara's Susanoo clears the airway of the entire onslaught of attacks. As a huge impact is heard west in the direction of the swing, Madara lands to his feet and slowly approaches Tobi. Madara looks away as he comforts the shoulder of Tobi.

Madara: Too long has it been my dear brother. Izuna I see you still bear that gruesome scar from your last battle. To think after I created Zetsu you would use his abilities to such a degree. Your Uchiha body broken and now fused alike mine with the dog Senju. Are we bastards of our own making?

Izuna: The Uchiha and Senju strife matters not..for after this nobody will have an identity to call their own.

Suddenly a familiar orange jump suit knuckle head is seen smirking from the alliance party side. Madara: So Uzumaki, Naruto. Come forth, I think it is time I retrieved my property.

Naruto: Don't worry...I plan on bringing it all to you..FULL FORCE

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KiddJutsu

First off it was perfect to have Karin be the person guiding the group in the Tree Village and how she was intrigal to finding all the scattered members. So obviously we must have MORE but also I gotta tell ya your writing started out good and highly creative. Now it's seriously excellent all around with a completely unique storyline that makes it a must read.
Great job sir......

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Also, Num & Vishnu, we are eagerly anticipating your fanfic stuff too.
Jericho - just saw his pic on a milk carton. They cut his pic off at the top. Shame...
Vishnu, can we get a outline preview of the new take for your latest creation.

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Vishnu

No you cannot. This time it's going to be a surprise. No more sneak peeks.

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