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-Kill Reika?

(The camp is in uproar.)

Hiro: What are you on?

Shisio: Just as I said, kill Reika. (Before Hiro can utter another word, Hope interrupts.)

Hope: That’s not an option… At least, not yet; the UHE wasn’t the only thing we tried to collapse over the years. Reika’s nation was also on our top priority. But that place is crawling with genetically enhanced troops that originated up from under Amegakure’s underground lab. Not to mention every entry into Amegakure is on careful watch by the Sa-mosutatto clan. If it was that simple to infiltrate Amegakure, we would have done that a long time ago.

(Hiro nods his head.)

Zig: And if the rumors were true , a doctor like SNA scientist from the 4th shinobi, had secretly robbed the damaged bloodline strains from the destroyed lab and had worked experiments on the dead as well as living Amegakure shinobi in order to see such results. He had been doing that shit for 11 years, well, that’s what they say and all…

(Everyone is disturbed.)

Hiro: Yeah, not even Kyo when he was alive could pin point the cause as to why his shinobi kept vanishing up from under his nose. Kyo would send his shinobi out on simple transport or, whatever simple missions yet find out that his ninja started to disappear. Ironic that he never would have guessed that his own village was in part responsible for the deaths, or the experiments on his living shinobi.

(Shisio smirks.)

Shisio: It seems you guys know quite a lot about that, congrats, saves me the time of explaining. (Everyone looks at Shisio.)

Misa: That’s right, you use to work for Reika, you should know something that might help them in way of stopping Reika.

Nila: Please, mr. Shisio sir.

Jisho: You know something, that’s one of the reasons why we attempted to track you for so long. You were the closest to her.

Gage: Feed me…

Eart: Well then spit it out…

Chaos: Why fear who isn’t immortal? Shisio, just spill it already.

Mika: Say it already, we gotta back up Kai!

Shisio: First, tell me how you Konoha hounds got so good at recon. (Shisio smirks while everyone else sighs. Hiro then speaks up.)

Hiro: Aito and Shun are Uzumaki Sensei’s body guards however, they are two of the best trackers of Konoha. We managed to gather that much however, an unfortunate attack claimed the life of Aito, while Shun escaped however, half of his face was burned badly by one of Mikoto’s men. Shun managed to escape by reaching safe grounds of our camp. Ever since, none of us ever even dreamed of stepping foot into that place again. The horrors and morbid things he saw there was beyond comprehension. Shun even said their nation has developed a way to reverse the Hachibi and Kyuubi’s chakras attack back on us. Their technology is that great.

Nila: I, can’t believe Aito’s dead… And Shun, where is he?

Hope: Shun is with Dosa’s Reaper unit… They are tasked with cutting off supply routes without being compromised. They’ve been at it for years however, the UHE’s supplying network far exceeds what we can counter.

Hiro: Hmm, Dosa just likes the destroying part…

Eart: Yeah, when are we going to be moving on to more pressing concerns? Shisio, end this pointless discussion.

(Shisio nods his head.)

Shisio: Chakra patterns. Unique chakra waves from a member of that hideout will allow entry. There’s a secret passage way in which only those who belong to Amegakure’s high ranks could get in without being suspected. I’ve always planned to kill Reika, but never got around to it. It would be best to take that path alone. More than one person going through that passageway to her office will not jive with the system. The hand is used to open the passageway, while it shuts right afterwards. But once you’re in there, you’re all alone, it would be best to prepare or, die,

Nila: How do you mimic chakra patterns of a person? Henges won’t work, no matter how skillfully crafted they are.

Shisio: If my hand is used it will work, I will just have to have it be surgically implanted on Hiro, and Hiro will have to give me is hand, so I don’t end up like a cripple.

(Everyone is shocked.)

Zig: You’re kidding me?

Shisio: No, only live chakra signals will work, so I can’t just hack off my hand and give it to you guys, it has to be transplanted on to someone, and that someone should be the person to face Reika.

Hiro: Hmm, if it has to be done, then so be it.

Nila: But Sensei, that’s your arm we’re talking about. Not to mention the odds, Shisio even said that a high chance of death once you get in there will be represented.

Hiro: I always play bad hands in poker, that way it makes the victory that much more satisfying when you defy the odds. (Hiro grins while Zig and Hope nods their heads.)

Chaos: It’s a sacrifice worth striving for, if he fails, oh well, but if he wins...

(Time passes as the story is now 4 days into the future. The Sevenmist swordsmen with the aid of Misa, and Shisio are now standing on the outskirts of Mizugakure. Shisio now has Hiro’s right hand attached to where his own hand use to be. In the middle of a battlefield, countless corpses can be seen. However, Kai is standing, injured, but still standing. The Bijuu are all collapsed on the ground… The reinforcement group rushes to Kai’s aide. The Scene switches to a tower somewhere at Mizugakure. Asura, who is monitoring the battle, now springs his new trap.)

Asura: It seems a masterful host such as the Hachibi was able to overpower the Bijuu. After all, hosts are infinitely more powerful than Bijuu because they have the mind and will to control the masses of chakra perfectly. Though, it took four years for Kai to release his true power. The Bijuu needs time to recover. I must store them back into the meteor.

(Soon a portal opens up and Tank appears.)

Tank: The boss said things weren’t lookin to good over here, and that you required my help. How is it that this place isn’t to hell in a hand basket yet, when you control 7 Bijuu? DISSAPOINTMENT! YOU WAKE ME UP FOR THIS SHIT?

Asura: The Hachibi Host has grown with each new experience over the war. His power now even rivals the 7 Bijuu, but the meteor’s full strength can now effectively erase this planet from existence however, I’ve daunted to long and let the Bijuu get weakened, so the meteor needs to recover. To think Kai would come this far without Uzumaki on the field… I need you to settle the mess that’s down there. You are the Iron Fist of the UHE, the most physically strongest and most gifted in taijutsu. And you have also had your powers even further augmented by the Meteor… So, handle-…

(Tank interrupts.)

Tank: I DON’t NEED YOU TO REMIND ME! I’m gonna squash them like bUGS! (The Scene switches to the battlefield outside. Kai is now resting on the ground as a small recovery station was just set up.)

Misa: He’s done well; we have a chance after all.

Jisho: He’s definitely something else; his mastery over the Hachibi is absolute. He’s even more masterful over the Bijuu than The Hokage himself.

(Shisio looks into the sky and notices something. Shisio draws his blade.)

Shisio: Something’s coming. (The Sevenmist swordsmen takes notice pulls out there blades and guards Kai. Soon, a large man comes crashing down, which creates a huge crater in the earth. Everyone feels the vibrations.)

Gage: I’m hungry! His chakra feels yummy yum… (The defeated Bijuu then lifts into the air.)
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Jisho: Damn, they’re using this time to recover the Bijuu.

Chaos: In my years on this planet, never have I seen a man walk in which he shook the earth. (Tank walks closer to them as small earthquakes are being made.)

Misa: This man, he’s Tank of the UHE. I’ve fought with him before, but his powers have drastically improved, it’s not the same as before.

Jisho: What do you think it could mean?

Misa: I don’t know, but keep your eyes on him and strike from long range.

Eart: Bigger they are the harder they fall, I’m not scared of this idiot.

Vato: Study his movements. (Mika rushes off the face Tank. Everyone is shocked.)

Shisio: FOOL!

Jisho: NOOOO!

Mika: AHHHHHH Take THISS! (She rushes toward Tank and tries to stab his torso with her twin blades however, they shatter upon making contact with his body.)

Tank: That itched BITCH!

Mika: Impossible!

Jisho: GET OUT OF THERE!

Mika: Suiton: Front Shield. (Tank However, uses his back hand to break through the barrier of water. Everyone is shocked.)

Gage: I’m not so hungry anymore…

Vato: No way.

Shisio: With his back hand hmm…

Tank: Back hand no jutsu foolz. NOWZ! MY STRAIGHT RIGHT PUNCH NOOBZ.! (The mist swords men and Misa rushes to Mika’s aid however it was too late. Tank’s punch hits Mika’s face and utterly destroys it. Blood and disfigurement is left upon Mika’s once cute face. Blood sprays everywhere while everyone is now in disbelief. Mika’s body hits the ground. Everyone pauses in fear of the brutal Tank. Tank now lifts up his foot, preparing to step on Mika’s head.)

Damn, broke your shit! NOW, IT’S TIME TO END IT! (Tank steps on her head with great force, which causes brains and gooey substances to leak from the sides. A huge crater is created again, which forces everyone back while Jisho grabs Kai and places him to a safer location. The mist shinobi gets on their guard yet, are so shaken up from Tank’s enormously powerful form and animalistic nature, they begin to shiver.)

Chaos: Not in my entire life time.

Shisio: His intent to kill far surpasses mine. Not even a decade of more killing can bring me to the point in which I’d become that cold.

Vato: She brought that on herself, though, it was still a shame to see such a thing happen to one of our own.

Gage: He no look good anymore.

Misa:….(A tear falls down her face.)

Eart: There has to be another way to stop him.

Jisho: Mika… HEH!!! (He tries to rush forward however, Shisio uses his speed to reach Jisho and stop him.)

Shisio: Do you want to end up just like her? (Jisho bows his head down. Tank yells at the top of his lungs.)

Tank: LISTEN UP! I’M GOING TO BEAT EACH AND EVERYONE OF YOU INTO PUDDLES OF MUSH! WHEN YOU FUCKIN PISS ME OFF AND WAKE ME FROM MY GOD DAMN SLUMBER , NOT A SINGLE THING IN THIS WORLD WILL STOP ME FROM RELEASING MY RAGE!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (Chakra forms around Tank’s fists as he balls them up. Soon the chakra thins out and becomes skin type, as his balled up fists glows. The Scene switches to an underground base. The room has a large scroll set up that covers the floor like a carpet. Countless of shinobi are sitting on top of the scroll. In the middle of the scroll, The Hokage sits and helps transmit his chakra into the scroll. Around him are the Kages that are also doing the same thing. Soon, Yoshiyuki walks near the scroll and sits down next to Raikage.)

Raikage: Is the chakra barrier still strong?

Yoshiyuki: Yes, not even the UHE’s penetrative sight can see through this barrier.

The Hokage: I hope the allied forces are still fairing well. I left Kai on the outside a few months ago. I hope that his mastery of the Bijuu, and the others have managed to hold the UHE off long enough for us to form the counter meteor.

Kazekage: Tetsuo won’t know what hit him.

Tsuchikage: But, will it be enough?

Raikage: Four years we’ve been at this, that’s why it should be enough. (Soon everyone besides the Kages starts to collapse.)

The Hokage: It just drains so much energy, that we haven’t had enough time and man power to fight outside. So many casualties, it has to work. But our next move is to figure out how to reach Tetsuo, and make it to his world.

(Scene switches to Zig, Nila, and Hope’s location, they are standing in the middle of nowhere however, there is a door lying on the ground.)

Zig: So you are saying you can break down barriers, then break down this one and let us into this door way and into the underground hall.

Hope: NO DON’t! Tetsuo might find out, just wait until Yoshiyuki lets us in.

(Nila notices that Zig is staring at her. Nila instantly covers herself up.)

Nila: Jerk! I can’t wait until I get some new clothing, geeze!

Next Time: Mist Swordsmen vs. The Iron Fist!
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“So what’s the plan?” ask Vato. “Overpowering him is not an option. So…” says Chaos. “We outsmart him.” Says Jisho. Chaos nods and he charges straight towards Tank. Tank yelled and he charge towards Chaos and as they get closer, Chaos jumps upwards and throw a pink ball at Tank’s face.

“What the…”

The pink ball explodes and large gluey material like chewing gum covers Tank’s face. “What happen!!!!!!” yelled Tank. “Now!!!” yelled Shisio and Jisho run to Tank and stuffed explosive in Tank’s mouth and he makes a hand seal. The explosive start to glow and Tank’s head explode, killing him.

“That was too easy.” says Eart. “Well when Mika’s blade couldn’t penetrate him, I know, he can’t be defeated if we attack from the outside. That’s why I use the gum ball to block his vision. And told Jisho to stuff that freak’s mouth with explosive. I’ve been fighting for hunderds of years. Reading that brute capability is like reading a five year old text book.” Says Chaos. “Now, they pretty much know we’re here.” Says Eart. “Good, the more the merrier.” Says Vato. “As a matter of fact, I'm preparing for a tough war. That will bring us neither money nor fame. Want to join?” Says Shisio. “Yeah!!!” everyone shout. Shisio looks at Kai who is standing in the midst of the battlefield. “Misa, stand by him.” Ordered Shisio. “What?” ask Misa. “Stand by him.” Says Shisio. “No. Mika’s gone. You need me.” Says Misa. “We need a trained ninja, not a wimpy gunslinger.” Says Vato. “Maybe. But now you got a wimpy gunslinger as the seventh ninja.” Says Misa.

“….”

“What?” ask Misa.

“I thought you gonna cry when Vato says like that.” Ask Eart. “Hmph.” Grunts Vato.

“Move people.” Says Jisho and the six remaining swordsmen runs towards Mizugakure.

At a tower at Mizugakure.

“Seven?” says Asura as he looks through the telescope. He signals his troops and the UHE and Mist ninjas began to mobilize at the main gate. Asura smirks as the seven ninjas approach. “Their forces are mobilizing at the main gate.” Says Misa.

“Now.” Says Shisio and all seven ninjas make the same hand seals. “Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Technique.” says all seven ninjas and mist began to cover the main gate. “Hmph, child’s play.” Says Asura and he and the rest of the UHE ninjas put on their googles, but Asura notice something strange, the mist didn’t dissapear when put his googles on. “That mist is laced with chakras.” Says Asura and he signal more troops to concentrate at the main gate. Suddenly there’s explosion behind the gathering troops and Chaos, Vato, Eart and Gage strike their enemies from behind.

“What!!!!” scream Asura and he saw Shisio, Jisho and Misa running towards the tower. “Scramble all troops!!!!” yelled Asura. Chaos, Vato, Eart and Gage slash through their opponets and manage to cause confusion between the UHE ninjas who seems to run for their life.

“Regroup men!!!” yelled a UHE ninja while another ninja fired a signal flare to the sky to alert other ninjas within the city.

“Gage, go to the south barracks and kill everything that moves.” Ordered Chaos. “Yay!!! You heard that Samehada.” Ask Gage. Samehada wriggles. “I know. All you can eat buffet.” Says Gage and he went to the east barracks. “Chaos, look.” Says Vato and he points to the south west area. Hundreds of ninja is storming to their direction. “Where are those giant puppets?” ask Vato and suddenly the ground shakes and five giant puppets heads towards them. One of the puppets opens its chest and reveals hundreds of explosive kunai. The ninja inside the puppet moves some strings and the puppet shoot its payload towards the three swordsmen. “Evasion!!!” yelled Chaos and all of them jump away and Vato jumps towards one of the giant puppets. “Dragon Slash!!!!” yelled Vato and he cuts one of the puppets right arm. Another giant puppet looks at Eart and opens its mouth to reveal a giant cannon. “Aww, crap.” Says Eart and the giant puppt shoot the cannon towards Eart. Eart unsheath his Hiramekarei. “Hiramekarei Unleashed: Frontal Shield.” Says Eart and the chakra around his sword transform into a shield shape and Eart blocks the cannon ball, but the impact sends him flying hundreds feet back and crash into a house. Blood flows from his temple, his left arm is badly wounded, blood gushed from his abdomen and his sword is a few feet away from him.

“Ouch…” says Eart and he look up and sees hundreds ninjas are rushing towards him.

“This won’t end well…..” says Eart as he struggles to reach his sword.

“More ninjas from the north!!!” yelled Chaos and he find himself surrounded by UHE Anbus. “Well, gentlemen, how many lives must I end?” ask Chaos and he stabs one of the Anbu by the throat. “That’s one.” Says Chaos and he looks at the other Anbus who circling him at the moment.

“En garde!!!” yelled Chaos.

Shisio, Jisho and Misa are cutting through UHE ninjas as they’re getting closer a huge explosion occur behind them. “Will they be ok?” ask Jisho. “Who knows?” Answers Shisio as they get closer to the main tower.

“Dammit.” Says Asura and a man approach him from behind. Asura looks behind him and sees Uchiha Sasuke. “It seems these seven men cause you a lot of trouble.” Says Sasuke. “You must stop them. If the meteor falls down, then the new Uchiha village…” says Asura. “They are clones.” Says Sasuke. “Yes they are, but the new ones are born like normal human. They are the real next generation of Uchihas.” Says Asura. Sasuke close his eyes. “If the barrier falls down, what will stop the alliance from commiting genocide towards the Uchihas? The real human Uchihas are just babies.” Says Asura. Sasuke opens his eyes and runs towards the window and plunge down towards Shisio. Asura grins as he sees Sasuke prepares to attack Shisio.

Jisho, Misa and Shisio runs towards the tower, when suddenly they felt something is approaching them. Shisio looks up and saw Uchiha Sasuke. Shisio drew his sword and parries Sasuke’s attack. “Both of you, continue the mission!!!” yelled Shisio. Jisho and Misa nods and they run towards the tower. “And you think I let them?” ask Sasuke. “I’m your opponent!!!” yelled Shisio and fire burns his sword. “This time I will throw your body at the Mist River.” Says Shisio. Lightning cracks at Sasuke’s blade and Shisio turns his blade chakra into wind. “Let see which is better at close combat, wind or lightning.” Says Shisio. Sasuke activate his sharingan.
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-Allied Forces Strikes BACK!

(The scene starts off in the South Barracks. The Samehada in Gage’s hands has grown into its more mature form. Around Gage lies numerous of shinobi that have been sliced into ribbons.)

Gage: How do you like it Samehada?

Samehada: Gi, GI, GI, GI…

Gage: Yummy yum. Now give me sum! Don’t hog up all the CHAKRA FOR YOURSELF!

(Scene switches over to an alleyway somewhere in Mizugakure, Vato is slumping his way out of the alley while he his right hand covering his right eye. Blood drip down his face, blood from his damaged eye.)

Vato: Bastards got my eye… (Soon Vato notices that there are four shinobi approaching him from each end [for a total of eight shinobi].) My mother always told me about walkin down allies alone. Heh, looks like that hag was talking some sense in this case. (The UHE members yell at the top of their lungs as they rush towards the trapped Vato.) And I thought this would be the fastest way to the Tower, what with me avoiding all the commotion and all. (Vato pulls out his Katana. It has jagged teeth all over it. Just rubbing it the wrong away will rip your fingers into confetti.)

This is my Razor teeth blade… Feel my teeth and get butchered! (As all eight shinobi draws close to Vato, the scene switches over to Chaos’s location. Chaos is surrounded by numerous of shinobi. Chaos pulls out a rapier and gets into a point guard stance. He the swings his blade with such finesse.)

Chaos: I said Engarde! Ladies and gentlemen, let me demonstrate for you an art of sword play that you shinobi have yet to comprehend.

UHE: HEY! HE CAN’T DO ANYTHING WITH THAT SKINNY BLADE! GET EMM! (Three UHE members lined up in a vertical line rushes towards him.) Oh no! That’s the worse combat formation against a skilled striker like me… (Immediately Chaos thrusts his body and blade forward which pierces through all three UHE members like they were shish kabob. Chaos quickly withdraws his blade and gets back into his stance. The other UHE members are amazed at Chaos’s swordsmen skills.)

UHE Commander: Oh SHIT!

UHE member: What do we do sir?!

UHE member 2: That skill is strange but it killed all nasty like.

UHE: Commander: DON’T BE DISCOURAGED! AVOID SINGLE FILE FORMATION AND ATTACK HIM FROM ALL SIDES! (The other members yell.)

Chaos: Looks like you children catch on fast. But it won’t be enough to handle a vet like me. Eart… Just hold on a little longer kid... (Scene switches to a nearby location, Eart is wobbling to the Tower’s location. He is all injured and scarred up. He carries his Hiramekarei on his back however, due to his injuries to his torso, he leans over as he continues to walk.)

Eart: Damn… It shouldn’t have been that difficult to take down a hundred of those goons… I must still be suffering from that blow by that super puppet. Have to keep on going… Not going to die out here… (Soon a Lightning Bolt hits the ground near Eart. As the smoke clears, it is revealed to be Raitie.) Aint that a bitch huh?

Raitie: Yes sir, it is… (Raiton Armor Crackles around Reitie’s body.)

Eart in thought: Of all people to show up… I don’t have enough in the tank to tangle with her…

Raitie: After wasting that Konoha ninja, Izo was it? I think I can take a wounded sevenmist swordsman… What do you say Dragon of the Hiramekarei? (Eart pulls out the Hiramekarei.)

Eart: Hiramekarei: RELEASE! EHH. (Eart leans as he unsheathes his weapon. The Scene switches over to Shisio vs. Sasuke. Sasuke is knocked back however, he digs his Katana into the earth to create friction and slow his fall.)

Shisio: A wind blade is the strongest blade, be sure to remember that. (Sasuke returns to a steady posture.)

Sasuke: You were mine… Why do you fight for these mindless fools?

Shisio: I’m my own person, no one has ever had control over my own decisions except me.

Sasuke: You have the darkness in you, come, follow me into the depths of darkness. That’s the only place where our purposes can be fulfilled. Why aide a side that will be vanquished by the dark? You should conquer the dark, not become a slave to it.

Shisio: Heh… Your control over this turf is ending… Good thing I’ve switched sides…

Sasuke: Nonsense.

Shisio: They’ve played weak in order to build up over these years. That’s what I’ve been told. You guys had the advantage however, they never intended on fighting with their full might those years… (Sasuke makes the ox and monkey handseal and forges Chidori as Sasuke sheathes his blade.)

Sasuke: They’ve had no might. Not even NARUTO could stop us…

Shisio: True, but they’ve played the victim long enough… (Sasuke is angered as he rushes toward Shisio with Chidori. Shisio uses his blade to cut his hand a little. He quickly sheathes his blade and uses the blood with a string of handseals. He then touches the ground with one palm before Sasuke gets within range. A Cloud of Smoke fills the area. It soon clears which reveals seven coffins that, emerges from the ground. Sasuke backs up and gets on his guard.)

Sasuke: What the hell kind of summoning is that?

Shisio: The rule, well a tradition in Mizugakure is to pass down this scroll to the strongest/leader of the sevenmist swordsmen. When I was their leader I was given this scroll and I’d have to be a fool if I didn’t make use of it just because I had defected. Only I have it in my possession. A long time ago, maybe over a century and a half ago, the very first sevenmist swordsmen members always wanted to help out the next generation of sevenmist swordsmen if they were facing odds in which they couldn’t defeat. So, before they died, they’ve wired their souls to be resummoned in battle. This summoning requires a large amount of chakra and seven corpses at my disposal.

Sasuke: So, it’s like Orochimaru’s Edo Tensei.

Shisio: Kind of, but only those recognized by the blood contract and the original sevenmist swordsmen’s acknowledgement of spirit, body, and jutsu of the strongest of the current sevenmist swordsmen can ever hope to use this technique. Since they’ve acknowledged me and I’m bound to a pact, the only person who can hope to use them at this time is me. This is one of the reasons as to how I was able to kill thousands of people during this war…

(The Coffins starts to open up. Sasuke activates Mangekyou Sharingan and draws upon the Dark Susanoo complete with a sword and Shield. The Scene switches to inside the tower. Misa and Jisho are surrounded by all of the of shinobi in that entire base on the first floor [apparently it’s a large base] next to the elevator, as the shinobi came pouring down from the long stairway waiting for them.)

Jisho: Looks like we gotta get down and dirty. (Misa rustles through her pocket and pulls out a gas bomb.)

Misa: Let’s smoke em!

Jisho: NOOO! I’ll die.

Misa: Didn’t I tell you to take that pill before we entered the tower?

Jisho: Oh yeah, so if that explodes, I won’t get effected?

Misa: Nope, you are totally immune. (Misa tosses a gas bomb as Jisho and herself gets down. Soon a large volume of gas erupts and fills the entire room. The UHE members cough gag and then vomit their insides out. One person coughs up his liver [lol].Another commits suicide by running a Kunai into his heart.)

Jisho: Damn, those things are that effective? Who’d think life would be that bad you’d have to kill yourself. Then again I suppose coughing up your organs isn’t particularly appealing. I’d kill myself too. Why not use it against Tetsuo?

Misa: It took me 10 years to create that supplement. Considering that it took out all of the shinobi who came through here instantly, we can make our way to the top. It was risky, but the chances of us getting through here without that supplement were like less than 1%. At least now we can proceed to the control room without interruptions.

Jisho: Don’t you have another vile?

Misa: Nope, 10 years to make, remember that…

Jisho: That’s inconvenient…

Misa: Well I only had a couple of vaccines anyway. If it exploded near everyone else, we’d be in trouble. 5 years to make vaccine pills.

Jisho: That’s so damn risky it isn’t even funny.

Misa: Not to mention I didn’t think the vaccine was perfect, yet you and me are still alive, so I guess it came out all right.
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Jisho: WHAT MY FATE WAS POSSIBILITY AT BEST?

Misa: Hey, remember what Konoha’s Aerial Hatchet said? About playing bad hands and what not; well the victory is always more satisfying this way (Jisho is sweating).

Jisho (in thought): My life was a coin flip… (The scene switches to the top of the tall tower. The door is blown apart as Jisho swings his huge beheader. Asura backs up as Misa and Jisho proceeds into the control room. Misa pulls out one of her .45 Caliber pistols and points it at Asura as he puts his hands up, like he’s being held up.)

Misa: Stick em’ up! Now be a good boy and turn off this meteor or, I’ll stick a bullet in your head. (Asura sweats.)

Asura in thought: I’ll just send this meteor to the other side and let Tetsuo end things.

(Soon a large bluish-yellowish meteor that’s even larger than the one in the sky clashes with the one in the sky. Asura, Misa, and Jisho looks out of the window in awe as they catches the sight. Soon everyone fighting in Mizugakure notices the sight as well. The Scene switches to Sasuke vs. Shisio. 7 Black clad sprits wielding translucent blades from a variety of shapes and sizes are surrounding Susanoo however, Shisio and Sasuke pauses as they look up in the sky. The Scene switches to the meteors. The bigger one then explodes as it takes the smaller one with it.

Waves of colors and energies floats through the sky, everyone is temporarily blinded as they duck for cover. The sky no longer has any meteor. The Scene switches to the outskirts of Mizugakure. All of the Kages, some of the remaining allied forces from the great hidden villages, Yoshiyuki, Hope, Zig, Nila, Blake (from the Rock) [and many more] are all standing on a huge scroll that covers the ground. Apparently, the meteor came from them. Kai is also standing on the scroll next to The Hokage. Nila [now in a black trench coat with black leather shirt and pants], Zig, and Hope walk over to The Hokage.)

Nila: We did it! (Everyone smiles. The Hokage pats Nila on the head.)

The Hokage: Nila, Zig, and Hope. You three come with me, we are going to help the mist swordsmen put an end to all of this. (Kai walks over as well.)

Kai: Let me go as well, this is my home, and those fools won’t destroy it with me here!

(Nila activates Byakugan.)

Nila: We’re on the far outskirts of Mizugakure but, if we hurry we can make it in like 30 minutes.

Hope: We’ll go together…

Zig: Too bad Laya couldn’t be here to see this… [Nila is shocked as she starts to cry tear up however, Hope taps her to bring her back to reality.] (The Hokage, Nila, Zig, Hope, and Kai, rushes off towards Mizugakure, a little time goes by as the scene switches back towards the Allied Forces locale. The Kazekage starts to move forward however, the Raikage stops him.)

Raikage: This is their right; Tetsuo was the Leaf's mistake, and besides, the seven mist swordsmen are there as well, have faith. We’re not part of it anymore. The best we can do now is holding the fort for them. (Soon a portal opens up in front of the allied forces. It is revealed that Michi and Oita emerges from it. The allied forces are shocked.)

Oita: So, it’s gone…

Michi: Tetsuo is pissed at you people. (The Raikage smirks as she runs in front. Soon Yoshiyuki joins her.)

Raikage: You up for some action?

Youshiyuki: Asao… It’s time we end the UHE, you and me… For the OLD MAN! (The remaining two Kages rushes behind to watch their backs. Soon another portal opens up, near the allied forces, it appear behind the kages but in front of the allied forces. It is Ino Shika Cho.)

Ino Shika Cho: Hmm, all these people, looks like they were able to pull it off. (Blake, Take, and Sazx steps up. The Scene switches back to Mizugakure. It seems the mist swordsmen are doing their thing however, overlooking the battle field is Sakuya. The Scene switches to the Enchanted World on the other side of the barrier. Tetsuo and Blank prepares to cross over.)

Tetsuo: We’ve underestimated them… No… We simply didn’t consider them a threat. So, it was all a ploy to think we had them down and out…

Blank: We’re going over aren’t we?

Tetsuo: Yes, it seems Uzumaki Nila has developed her powers enough to shatter the barrier. I’ve been watching how things have been turning out with the crystal ball, we’ve been fooled. To think they’d put of a shielding mechanism that could even surpass my watchful eye… Even if we stay here, they’ll make their way over here. Don’t worry… Their powers still can’t match ours, especially not mine. Tank was physically the strongest, but he was the weakest out of all of us in technique and in mind capabilities…

The true end of the Shinobi world begins the moment we step outside. We have the citizens of that world over here anyway. They are brainwashed by our genjutsu. Life is good once we correct the Shinobi’s mistakes…(Tetsuo places his hand on the barrier and shatters it. The Scene switches over to a barren waste land. Mikoto is walking the lands however, he stops once he notices someone in his path.)

Mikoto: So… A challenger approaches…

Teru: I’m much more than before. I’m no longer a kid… (Teru now has neck length hair. He also has a noticeable chin hair. He has grown about 2 inches. So he’s like 5 ft 10. He dresses in the typical Sand attire.)

Mikoto: Revenge… I don’t care! NINJA ART: Microwave Oven over a mile radius! (Mikoto’s skin grows red soon, Teru makes handseals quickly. His body then hardens like black platinum; everything else in that mile radius is incinerated; birds, trees, animals, people [UHE members.lol]. Mikoto is shocked that Teru managed to increase his Earth Style to such a degree.)

Impossible… Platinum… So you can alter your body using earth to that degree… But be warned. When I touch you I’m going to melt right through your defenses…

Teru: We’ll see…

Mikoto: You can’t beat what just hasn’t been beaten… Get that through your skull.

Teru: Hmm. (The scene switches to Amegakure. Reika is in her traditional attire instead of Kyo’s armor [because she doesn’t need to hide anymore]. Soon the passageway to her room is open. She walks over to it and notices that Hiro appears much to her shock. She gets on her guard and backs up.)

Reika: How did you? Impossible! (Hiro smirks and shows off his right hand.)

Hiro: Shisio’s, you like?

Reika: Why he?

Hiro: End of the Line… (Hiro draws out both of his Mountain Cutters. They are circling with wind chakra. Reika makes a handseal as her eyes go crock like.)

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-Conclusion Part one of three

(Tetsuo and Blank are standing in the middle of Mizugakure, which is now in ruin. Amongst their feet they can see numerous of corpses, all in which use to be followers under their command. Tetsuo shakes his head then looks into the sky and notices that the meteor is no longer there.)

Tetsuo: This, we should’ve foreseen this… (The two high up UHE members continue to walk forward however, they stop and notices that there are those in opposition standing in front of them. It is Gage and Vato.)

Vato: If it isn’t Tetsuo… Finally got off your high horse and brought your sorry ass here huh? Well it’s not like it means anything now. We foiled your plans, ha, ha.

Gage: SAMEHADA FEED ME HIS CHAKRA!

Tetsuo: Deal with the wayward souls… (Blank nods his head. Vato and Gage rushes forward, instantly Blank begins making handeals.)

Blank: Suiton: Bubbles of Drowning! (With rapid speeds Blank shoots out two large bubbles of highly compressed water from his mouth that flies down the throats of Vato and Gage. Both of them drops their weapons and begins drowning on land.)

Gage: Gargle, gargle, gargle, gargle….. (He dies. Vato reaches his hand out towards his friend in agony, while he’s in pain as well. He soon starts to convulse.)

Vato: Gargle, gargle, gargle, gargle… (He then dies as well.)

Blank: The Deed is done…

Tetsuo: We should have come here sooner… Let’s sweep the area, this time, we’re taking it BACK! (The Scene switches over to a barren waste land, where it is occupied by Teru and Mikoto. Mikoto’s heat effect is still there. Teru, who is in platinum armor, is standing his ground.)

Mikoto: No matter how high I amp the heat, your body just won’t melt. That’s fine… (Mikoto cancels his field effect. Mikoto goes in thought.) If I can’t harm is outside, I must find away to make that into my advantage. End of Mikoto’s thought. Teru gets angry.)

Teru: I’M COMING! (Teru rushes forward however, he’s much slower.)
Mikoto: He’s slower… (Teru attempts to punch Mikoto however, Mikoto slips his head and then backs off. Soon Teru goes into a deep thought.)

Teru: Crap… He figured out my new mode’s flaw… But I can’t just cancel this form or, he’ll either freeze me, or cook me.(End of Teru’s thought. Mikoto smirks and then rushes off.) Bastard get your ass back here! (Teru surely, but slowly follows him. The picture drops on Mikoto.)

Mikoto mumbles to himself: Hmm, that’s right kiddo… Keep following. I’ve been out in the thick of things a lot longer than you. I know this locale like the back of my hand. In terms of actual skill only those in which were tested and used on the battlefield becomes an effective ability. Those just used in the training hall becomes a liability… (The Scene switches over to Reika’s headquarters. Reika avoids several wind induced Shuriken, by ducking, jumping, and side stepping. The Shuriken all crash into the wall in back.)

Reika: C’mon Aerial Hatchet, you’ll have to use more than academy tricks against someone as renowned as me… Please, ha, ha, ha… What a joke.

Hiro: Heh… (Hiro pulls out two small scrolls from his pockets. He unravels them and then smashes them on the ground. He picks up two Fuuma Shuirken [in which were summoned from the scrolls]. Reika then smirks and makes a sickening chuckle as she shakes her hand.)

Reika: Didn’t I tell you kid-boy to stop with the childish games. (Hiro tosses both of the Shuriken up at the ceiling, they are now mounted there.) Hmm, what he’s up to? (Hiro then pulls out a smoke bomb and tosses it. Reika covers up as she goes into a deep thought.) I’ll just wait to see what he’s planning. Just because he’s Konoha Aerial Hatchet, I should be cautious… But, I’m still a Sage… (Reika begins to hear the sound of the two Shuriken approaching her.)

Hmm, I’m smarter than that… (She slips to the side however, she now hears the sound of explosive tags, end of Reika’s thought as she gets shocked.) SHIT HE TRICKED ME! THAT KID MUST HAVE APPLIED TAGS TO THEM WHEN THE SMOKE WAS THICK! (She rushes forward out of the smoke however, she notices that Hiro has thrown one of his wind induced mountain cutters. With swift reflexes she avoids however, she has a slash on the side of her face. She rushes forward however, Hiro swings his other mountain cutter, this emits a wind wave that cuts horizontally, Reika begins making handseals.) Suiton: Wall, times two!

(She fires a second wall of water that dual layers the first. As the colliding attacks bursts, Reika and Hiro both rushes towards each other, Hiro downward slashes with his last mountain cutter however, Reika slips to the side and swipes [she now develops claws from her connection with crocks] at Hiro. Hiro disperse [apparently it was a shadow clone].) He got me. (Immediately from behind Hiro is thrusting both of his mountain cutters at the rear of Reika.) EEEK! (Reika is stabbed from behind however, immediately Hiro’s grin turns into frightening look.)

Hiro: As I expected, Reika of the Croc. (Close up on Hiro’s torso shows that a crock tail is piercing through the left side of his chest. Blood starts to pour out of his mouth. Reika has two blades logged into her back however, due to her skin now taking on a crock’s texture, the blades didn’t piece her vitals however, she’s definitely injured.)

Reika: Sorry, about that… But, I can’t afford to lose my life now. You were a remarkable young man… Naruto would be proud. (He enters cardiact arrest, Hiro then has flashbacks. He sees himself training with Naruto and his teammates, Rina and Dosa. He sees flash backs of himself and the gang drinking together and playing cards. He has a flash back of Dosa. Then he has a flash back of his Team, Nila, Zig, and Laya. Switches back to the present, Hiro gets a sudden burst of will power and wills himself back to life and stabs hard into Reika.) AHHHHHHHHH! (Reika then extends her tail and effectively pierces all the way through Hiro’s heart, killing him as blood pours out of his mouth. Reika also falls down.) Blood, I’m losing too much blood… (Reika faints. Time goes by as she awakens on a recovery lab in Dream’s lab. She is in bandages.) I’m alive… (Dream walks through the door.)

Dream: Miss Reika that was definitely a close call. Any closer and I wouldn’t have been able to save you. You survived, Hiro is dead. It must have been an amazing struggle if you were up against one of Konoha’s bests. But you are no longer in the condition to fight. You must recover for the meantime, the tissue damage to your body won’t recover easily, if it wasn’t for Sage Mode, you definitely would have died. But I have something I need your consent to.

Reika: You saved my life, what is it that you desire.

Dream: Let me rule over Amegakure in your absence.

Reika:…. (A little time goes by as Dream is now sitting in the throne room of Amegakure. The room is to hell, but he doesn’t care.)

Dream: Now that Reika is out of the way, I can exact the first phase of the clone project. But, I must stay discrete. Such a plan will take decades to construct. (Soon Kakuya and Kimiko come crashing in.)

Kakuya: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED DOWN HERE!

Kimiko: Oh my God, all of this blood…

Dream: Hiro and Reika had an amazing battle of wits. Hiro is dead and Reika is critically injured.

Kakuya: I See, well I’m go finish Reika off.

Kimiko: SIS!

Dream: No… We need her alive. But now that she is no longer of use in this war… Our stake in this war is over for now. We all cling onto her power however, without it we no longer stand a chance in this war. It would be best to avoid the allied forces as much as possible. The clones of the Uchiha clan were just the beginning. We need years of dedication and secrecy from the allied forces. Let’s let them believe they dealt a blow to us… We already got the data of the sharingan from Sasuke. Let’s have the allied forces deal with him as well. We go underground from here.

Kakuya: Hmph…

Kimiko: Why do you want to produce clones having genetic ties to hidden bloodlines? We serve you so why are you doing these things?

Kakuya: Yess, we want to know the cause for what we work…

Dream: It’s all for the sake of science. I want to determine which bloodline is the overall best. That’s all. I will make armies of shinobi. Each squadron with have a specific bloodline, when I have gathered all of the bloodlines and combined them with acceptable hosts, I will put them into the corresponding squadron. The bloodline that prevails will-(The scene switches over to on the outskirts of Amegakure. Michi is tired.)

Michi: They’re incredible. (Two shinobi clad in Raiton armor immediately appears in front of her. It’s Yoshiyuki and Raikage. Immediately Yoshiyuki and Raikage are palming Michi’s face as she screams in pain.) EKKKKKKKK!

Raikage and Yoshiyuki: Face Palm SPEACIAL! (Michi then falls over and dies from the brutal attack. Raikage and Yoshiyuki faces each other and shakes each other’s hands.)

Yoshiyuki: Like old times huh Asao?

Raikage: Heh, don’t act like this changes things punk… (She smiles a little. Oita, short distances away is standing in front of Kazekage and Tsuchikage.)
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Oita: Heh. (He Begins making handseals and summons Cerberus.)

Cerberus: You always bring me out when things go to shit.

Kazekage: Get prepared Kenjiro…

Tsuchikage: Alright Gaara, show me the power of the sand… (The Scene switches over to Mizugakure. Tetsuo is chocking Chaos.)

Chaos: AHHH. Ugh.

Tetsuo: That’s right you’re immortal… That’ll explain why Blank couldn’t drown you. Just coughed up the water that got into you. Though I figure your lugs don’t feel too nice. (Tetsuo smirks.)

Blank: What do we do with him? (Tetsuo tosses him onto the ground.)

Tetsuo: We enslave him… Torture him. (Tetsuo feels something nearby.) Blank, ready the shield…. (Blank begins making handseals. On all sides, walls of water encloses Blank and Tetsuo. Immediately fire balls, shinra tensei, a shadow clone using Rasengan, and a dispersing effect destroys the water barrier. As the barrier falls, Zig, Hope, The Hokage, and Nila are surrounding Blank and Tetsuo.)

Tetsuo: Been a long time little brother… (Zig makes the ram handseal. Veins go across his forehead. His body charges with chakra. Chakra is pulsing through Zig’s body. He is surrounded by chakra.) Oh, so you’ve learned to amp your chakra. Pretty interesting skill; good to see you all actually; Uzumaki Naruto, the Toad Sage and Kyuubi Host, Hope of the Rinnegan, and of course, you, Nila.

Zig: YOU’LLL PAY!

Hope: Settle down Zig, we don’t want to approach this the wrong way!

(Blank and the Hokage lock eyes. Blank then holds his head with both hands.)

The Hokage: It can’t be… You’re (The Hokage has a flash back to Uzumaki Zane.) It’s, you!

(The scene switches over to another location at Mizugakure. Eart is defeated by Reitie. She prepares to stab him with a Kunai however, Sakuya intervenes.)

Reitie: Why are you stopping me?

Sakuya: We have other matters to attend to. Kai is still around. We have to stop him from interfering with the boss…

(The Scene switches over to Sasuke vs. Shisio. Sasuke’s Susanoo dissipates. Shisio’s summoning skill starts to fade as well. Sasuke looks into the sky and focuses Amaterasu up into the sky, this creates cumulous clouds.)

Sasuke (in thought): It’ll be down to Kirin, my final jutsu.

Shisio: Must be a Raiton of incredible magnitude if he is using Amaterasu as pure heat. I have to do something quickly, though I was saving this for Hiro… (Shisio goes into thought.) It’s time for my Fatal Mist… (End of Shisio’s thought. The Scene switches over to a cliff. Teru clad in platinum reaches the cliff. He notices that it’s overlooking a huge lake.)

Teru: Why did he bring me here? (The scene switches to Mikoto who is standing on the lake.)

Mikoto: It’ll take time for him to change out of the mode, so I’ll put this match to its conclusion. (Mikoto tosses several Kunai with explosive tags on them towards the cliff.)

Teru: Crap, I can’t move as quickly. (He Notices that the cliff is falling.) WAIT, THAT’S HIS PLAN! I can’t revert fast enough. (Teru claps his hands. Teru falls into the water and sinks fast. Mikoto touches the water with his hand.)

Mikoto: Now Freeze! (Mikoto freezes the lake, which now holds Teru prisoner underneath the ice.) You simply need more experience… (The Scene switches over to another barren waste land. Dosa and Shun are walking forward.)

Shun: I sense something.

Dosa: Is it hostile? I want to kill it… (Soon Yuki lands in.)

Yuki: Hey guys!

Dosa: Yuki… Impossible you’re dead…

Yuki: Sigh…

Shun: Well this reunion needs to end now; the Marine squad are closing in on our location.

Dosa: And we’ve been looking for them for months. What timing…

Yuki: I was briefed that you two were cutting off supply routes, so why are you dedicated to messing around with such a wild bunch instead of weakening the UHE’s supply network?

Dosa: Don’t speak Zombie, the Yuki I know died during the 10,000 UHE troop raid on your plan Platoon when Sasuke scouted you out. I don’t speak to dead people…

Yuki: Are you on pixie dust or something? You make it seem like I can’t escape from anything. Well in actuality, I had help from this kid you see. You know, Sasuke’s boy…

Shun: Enough of this, we gotta get on guard.

Dosa: Well if you’re really Yuki, then you gotta prove it…

Yuki: Sigh, how did I ever fall for an idiot like you?

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-Conclusion Part two of three

(The Heroes from Konoha stare down their advasaries. The Hokage comes to a startling revelation.)

The Hokage: Zane! Why!? WHY ARE YOU WITH THE UHE LEADER! (Blank shakes his head in pain however, manages to let out a response.)

Blank: Please... Get this over with... (The people from Konoha as well as Tetsuo are shocked from his response.)

Hope: He can't be "THE" Uzumaki Zane? I heard he was killed during the 4th shinobi war!

Nila: Is this the man I heard you praise? Dad! Is this your proud friend!?

Zig: He's part of the UHE! I don't give a damn what he was known for!

The Hokage: WAIT!

Hope: Damn it, Zig...

Nila:.... (She covers her face in shock as Zig pulls out two Kunai. Zig goes into a striking position, preparing to attack the torn Zane. Tetsuo puts his hand on Zane's shoulder, as a way to comfort his mind however, Zane shrugs off his shoulder.)

Tetsuo: BlanK?

Zane: Just who am I? No, I rather not know. (Zane has flash backs of him hanging out with The Hokage years ago before the 4th shinobi war, as well as leading his village, of the Whirlpool country. The scene switches back to the present. The Hokage orders everyone to appear aside him... Zig reluctantly but surely, returns to The Hokage's command.)

Hope: This is unexpected, what do you suggest sir?

The Hokage: I don't know, but if push comes to shove let me handle Zane alone.

Nila: BUT DADDY!

The Hokage: He's an honest to goodness Uzumaki... Only I can handle him...

Nila: But if that's the case let me help! I'm also of Uzumaki blood!

The Hokage: NO! You three will face Tetsuo... He's much more troublesome. And I'm sure you three have realized, but the three of you combined are stronger than even me! It's not just by chance that you three are to face Tetsuo...

(Zig Shrugs.)

Hope: Listen to our father, he knows what he's talking about. Just follow his command-(Hope cuts himself off as the heroes from Konoha watched as Zane straight punched Tetsuo in the face, knocking him out flat!)

Zig: WHAT THE FUCK!

Hope: Well, I guess that solves one problem.

Nila: What is going on?

The Hokage: I just don't know... (Zane rips off his shirt, on his back he is branded with the the words, SNA PROJECT ORIGIN. Tetsuo gets up and rubs his face.)

Tetsuo: Really now, so you're just going to punch me? (The Scene switches over to our good guys.)

Hope: So that's how it is...

Zig: SNA PROJECT ORIGIN!?

Nila: What does it mean? (All of a sudden Zane backs off and rushes to the aide of the heroes. Zig gets on his guard ready to attack, The Hokage yells.)

The Hokage: ZIG, CALM!

Zig: Tsk...

(The Hokage walks over and faces Zane.)

The Hokage: So?

Zane: My DNA was used as data to support the growth of the SNA, as by some stupid chance my genetic make up had the ingredients to produce the results required from their biological enhancements... My memories were wiped but, I was slowly able to piece them back together... My friend, I'm sorry, but, I no longer deserve to stand under your light, for I may cast a greater shadow.

I gave up my village in hopes to become a weapon that would guide my people to glory but, in the end, I ended up as a weapon in opposition to my people. My very being is the reason why the SNA exists... Please, do not interfere. As the original SNA troop, allow me the opportunity to attempt to put this all to an end. If I can't even do that much, then my death is worth such a failed attempt! (Zane rushes forward as The Hokage reaches out his hand.)

The Hokage (in thought): I never blamed you... To me, you were always....A hero of the people; if you can pull this off, your mistakes will be long since null in comparsion...

(Hope talks to the Hokage.)

Hope: So, are you just going to let him go, even after telling such a story?

The Hokage: This is his redemption... At the very least, Zane is a formidable fighter. Now that he had his body enhanced by the SNA scientists, he should be an opponent for even Tetsuo...

Nila: That's probably a reason he's second in command... The guy knocked me out instantly four years ago.

Zig: I guess we'll just have to see this out.

The Hokage: We should get to higher ground, this isn't going to be a safety zone. (They all nod as they rushes off to higher elevation. The Scene switches over to Zane as he lands in front of Tetsuo.)

Tetsuo: You'll abandon me? Even after all we've bee through... You're such a fool...

Zane: I rather we not talk... Blank is no more. His existence faded the moment I came back to the true...

Tetsuo: I didn't foresee this, but even you must realize how capable I really am. Oh yeah, I must have forgotten... You're not Blank, so you wouldn't know would you? Even if your former self was instigated through technology, it had reason on its side. You'll really die against me, you know that...

Blank: Your attempts at persuasion bore me, or are you actually scared of my power?

(Tetsuo smiles.)

Tetsuo: Blank was much better than this. (Zane immediately rushes forward while Tetsuo smirks.) Taijutsu huh? The basis of all combat. Fine, let's start with this... (Zane does a quick right straight punch, as Tetsuo slips his head. Tetsuo takes this opportunity to cling Zane's arm with his arms. Immediately, Tetsuo lifts Zane into the air. Tetsuo squeezes tightly.)

I'll just break it off. HAAA!

Zane: AHHHHHH. (Zane then retaliates by using his free hand; he begins socking Tetsuo in the face.)

Tetsuo: HAVE IT YOUR WAY! (Tetsuo swings around in circles and then tosses Zane through the air. Zane quickly pulls out two Kunai. He digs them into the earth to increase friction. Immediately, Tetsuo is in front of the shaken up Zane. Tetsuo makes very fast hand signs.)

Zane (in thought): The speed of his hand signs are remarkable.

Tetsuo: Fuuton: DISK SLICER (A large round circular disk of wind forms in front of Tetsuo, it then fires off... Just inches from hitting Zane's body, Zane activates body flicker and avoids it. Zane appears about a few meter's distance away from Tetsuo's left side.

Tetsuo turns around to face Zane. Tetsuo smirks. Close up on Zane's torso shows that a horizontal cut near his belly button has just contributed to bloodshed however, it isn't deep at all. So he managed to avoid a certain death.)

Tetsuo: Hmm... I drew first blood... As expected. Though, I didn't expect you'd avoid that attack from close range. I'll give you credit for that at least... (Zane begins making handseals. Then many [about 100 hundred of them) bubbles of water, the size of fists, expels from Zane's mouth... They begin to circle around the area.) Didn't know you could make this many... One slip into my mouth and it's all over for me right? But I say to you this... Overconfidence leads to recklessness.

(Zane sticks out his hands and takes control of the floating bubbles. He then starts directing them towards Tetsuo. Tetsuo then starts to gather chakra, then he starts moving his hands all over the place, some how dispersing the bubbles coming at him from a distance. Everywhere Tetsuo directs his hands, bubbles bursts all around him [telepathically almost].)

Zane (in thought): He is indeed worthy of the title Boss of SNA.... (Bubbles keep flying at Tetsuo while Tetsuo keeps using his mind and hands to disperse the bubbles. Eventually all of the bubbles are reduced to puddles of water in which now turns the floor of the area into a small, knee high flood.

Zane then quickly makes the bore hand sign and quickly touches the water, as Tetsuo is caught off guard. A dome of water made from the water that was created from the flood on the ground forms an enormous water prison. Basically, instantly Tetsuo's body is encased in a sphere of water. The scene switches to the Konoha heroes.)

Zig: No way!

Hope: He's astounding...

The Hokage: Zane...

Nila: I guess we don't have to do anything after all. (The scene switches back to the battlefield. Tetsuo is floating calmly in the huge sphere of water... Soon a large whirlpool forms in the water as Zane puts his hands on the sphere. It seems he created it in there to cause more trouble for Tetsuo. Soon, automatically the orb of water explodes which sends water everywhere. Zane then falls back and hits the ground hard from Tetsuo's chakra disrupting attack.)

Zane: Damn it... And I used up almost all of my chakra with that multi-layered jutsu... (The Scene switches to the Konoha heroes.)

Hope: He couldn't hack it.

Nila: And he was so close...

The Hokage: That technique, Tetsuo used...

Zig: Could it be?

Nila: What Zig?

Zig: The jutsu Tetsuo is using... I think I know... The way he controlled his chakra.

Nila: I guess since you're his brother, then maybe...

Hope: I noticed it too.

The Hokage: Quickly, debrief it!

Zig: Well...

(The Scene switches back over to the battle. Tetsuo has his foot on top of Zane's torso.)

Tetsuo: It could have been great... You were the best out of all of them... Your only flaw was coming to your original persona... You are no different from all of the other fools I crushed under my feet. In face of overwhelming pressure, the smart conforms in order to stimulate the growth of a legacy. It seems even you can fail to understand such a simple yet instinctively law of nature... (Tetsuo digs his foot deeper into Zane's body.)

Next time: Is this the end of Uzumaki Zane? Conclusion Part 2 of 3 (Part 2)...
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-Conclusion Part 2 of 3 (Part 2)

(As Tetsuo moves his hand over Zane's face to commit to the final blow, Zig, The Hokage, Nila, and Hope rushes to Zane's aide. Immediately, Tetsuo delivers the final blow by destroying the internals of his once former lieutenant's head. Blood flows from Zane's nose, ears, and mouth. Immediately, the heroes are in front of Tetsuo; they look down at the slaughtered Zane.)

The Hokage: Zane..... (The Hokage's eyes go demon. Immediately he produces two shadow clones while the real Hokage remains motionless.)

Nila: Dad... We'll get him. Just don't try to do this all on your own... You're not the only hero around here. (Nila smiles. The Hokage nods his head. Zig amps his chakra again, while Hope gets ready to attack.)

The Hokage: NOW HOPE!

Tetsuo: Oh a formation?

Hope: Bansho Tenin (Hope trusts out his right palm. Zig is there making a handseal. Hope's jutsu isn't drawing Tetsuo in.) Any day now Zig!

Zig: Shit I'm trying, just focus.

The Hokage: Well I'm taking the lead, Nila you watch my back.

Nila: Yeah! (Two of The Hokage shadow clones open up an assault against Tetsuo. One rushes in front, while the other rushes in back of Tetsuo. They both forms medium [not regular] sized Rasengans.)

Two Shadow Clones: Oodama Rasengan! (Before they can get their attacks off, they instantly disperse.)

The Hokage: NILA! (Nila focuses her Byakugan on Tetsuo.)

Nila: Time to reduce you to scraps baby! (However, nothing happened when Nila zeroed in on Tetsuo's internals.)

Hope: Damn it Zig! Do something! (Hope is still trying his Bansho Tenin. Soon The Hokage enters Sage Mode.)

The Hokage: Nila, Hope. Let Zig continue trying to disrupt Tetsuo's technique. I'll handle him from close range...

(The Hokage produces four shadow clones. The four shadow clones rushes off somewhere. Everyone nods their head. Immediately Sage Kage is standing in front of Tetsuo.)

Tetsuo: The venerable Toad Sage I see... I'll definitely have to watch for Frog Katas, that I can't deal with. Fine, ninjutsu vs. Senjutsu, we'll do just that.)

Sage Kage: If you get the chance! (Sage Kage does a roundhouse kick however, Tetsuo does a backward flip, and backs off really far into the air before the wave of natural energy reached him. Sage Kage immediately grins. He forms two Rasengans, one in each hand.)

Sage Tech: Rapid Spiral Fire (Immediately, The Hokage is ditching out many Rasengans into the air. Each one that reaches Tetsuo gets dispersed. After about 10 shots. The Sage Kage stops however, he notices that Tetsuo's pants leg is damaged.)

Heh, looks like you couldn't stop that one. There must have been a limit to how many jutsu you can actually disrupt... Tetsuo looks back at Zig.)

Tetsuo in thought: Heh... I have to give my little bro more credit than that. If he would have timed it just a little sooner, I would have died by a Rasengan. Hmm. I'll just have to off the little bastard... (Tetsuo begins making handseals.)

Zig: QUICKLY. HIS field effect is down! Pour everything you have onto him. I got him, just end it while I have everything under control. Everyone gets hyped!)

Nila: OH YEAH BABY! THAT'S MY MAN! (Zig blushes a little from a far.)

Hope: GOOD JOB ZIG!

Sage KAGE: THE UHE'S RULE HAS NOW COME TO AN END!

(Immediately Sage Kage makes two shadow clones. Each of them helps him make dual Rasen Shuriken. Using Chibaku Tensei gravitational forces, Hope lifts Tetsuo into the air and draws him towards a core that forms small rubble around it. Nila begins to zero in on Tetsuo's location.)

Sage Kage, Zig, Nila, and Hope: TOGETHER! (As they launch out their ultimate attacks immediately Tetsuo smiles. Soon a large amount of chakra erupts from his body and forms a kind of barrier. The barrier keeps growing and growing, eventually mimicking the meteor however, this time, it is about 1/5th the size of the actual meteor. The attacks collides with it however, nothing happens.)

Sage Kage: No way... DAMN IT! (Sage Kage's Sage Mode ends however, he makes the shadow clone jutsu handseal to disperse a shadow clone from a distance, which allows him back into Sage Mode.)

Hope: Did he plan this from the beginning!?

Nila: ARE YOU SERIOUS!? ARE YOU freakin SERIOUS!?

(Tetsuo then cancels the barrier, as he falls from the sky and lands on his feet. He is standing in the middle of his four opponents. Tetsuo's hair however, grays as a middle streak appears through his hair.)

Tetsuo: I see... I acknowledge your power... Is this the power of those who want to protect something? It is truly a marvelous power, the will of fire. Yet, there is also something I want to protect...

Zig: Spare me, you're just another criminal to deal with... The only difference is that you have power... And a criminal with power becomes drunk with it.

Tetsuo: Heh, heh... You're still quite the child Zig...

Zig: Run that by me again... (Zig slightly loses control.)

Hope: Don't let him get to you, of you break your concentration his dispelling technique will be active again.

Nila: The will of fire has more to do with protecting love ones and ensuring that future generations prosper... You're only after destruction... We can't-I can't accept that as an inheritor of the will of fire...

The Hokage: Being the one who sent you off to the SNA during the 4th shinobi war, I knew what kind of potential you had. But, I had no idea you'd turn out like this. You even believed so yourself... You wanted to do anything you could to ensure that your village would survive the war and bring peace to the warring nations.

Yet, why do you do this? As the purest holder of the 1st's bloodline, the ability to control the Bijuu... As the SNA tampered with you and found you'd be compatible with the Rinnegan's blood samples, you must have arrived to the conclusion what you'd be truly capable of... The world that exists parallel to ours... The world the Six Realm's Sage planned for peace... What is your true goal, and why do you obstruct in the way of those who came before you! The 1st and the Six realms Sage, and the peace that they so wanted to achieve. Their power exists within you and all of us here... BUT WHY! WHY DO YOU WANT TO END OUR EXISTENCE?! THE VERY EXISTENCE OUR FORE FATHERS WANTED TO PRESERVE?

Tetsuo: Fine... Since everything will come to an end... I'll reveal to you what that is... It is only fitting you you know the hour of your demise...

Next Time: Tetsuo's Motives, Conclusion Part 2 (Part 3)
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-Tetsuo's True Motives

Tetsuo: Even all those years ago, when I was first drafted into the SNA, I saw that the shinobi world was destined to fall. But, I wouldn't acknowledge it. I loved my village and this world far too dearly to accept that as reality. I was simply in denial, and so are you all...

Zig: Brother... You just simply gave up...

The Hokage: Let him talk, Zig!

Tetsuo: With the start of the 4th shinobi war, 11 years ago, I began to study the history of the shinobi world and its wars. Just to see if there were some potentially avoidable misconceptions... Before there was an organized shinobi nation, clans were pitted against each other in order to secure territory for the feudal lords. At that time clans were under contractors that paid them to eliminate threats. Feudal lords vs. feudal lords, which meant clan vs. clan... The strongest of clans belonged to the richest of feudal lords... However, two clans out of the rest became so versed in political affairs that they were able to develop the logical awareness to compete with the feudal lords, and to expand their own territory in order to change the world.

The Hokage: The Senju and the Uchiha...

Tetsuo: Yes, as the Hokakge I'm sure you know of this...

Hope: Tetsuo, what is the purpose of giving us a history lesson?

Tetsuo: Heh, prude as always, eh Hope? The second and third shinobi wars involved Konoha and the Rock... The Rock began to overtake the lands of the smaller hidden villages so that they could increase their power. Konoha, as a humanitarian, wanted to preserve the peace of all hidden villages, regardless of size, or power. The two clashed, and with the aid of the great hidden villages Konoha established from treaties, Konoha managed to subdue the rock… As you can see, that war set precedent for the 4th shinobi war many decades later…

In order to establish the balance that was ripped apart from the Akatuski rule, the Bijuu were returned to their original homes… Some were embedded into new hosts, some escaped… Reika wanted to do more than over take smaller nations; she wanted to reshape this world through conflict and turmoil… She wanted to go down in history as the person who instigated the spark that plunged the shinobi into a chaotic frenzy, after all, she believed that shinobi were at most living their lives on the battlefield.

Nila: How different is that from your own goal?

Tetsuo: I don’t want anything to do with this world… I simply want to end everything and start a new… You know Nila, of the world that exists parallel to this one… You’ve been there for four years…

The Hokage: If my assumptions are correct, then…

Tetsuo: Because I am the atavism of the 1st Hokage, I was used as the one who would snatched the Bijuu from Reika during the 4th shinobi war… That was my purpose… The SNA decided that I should have Rinnegan blood in me, why I didn’t know, after all, I was just a lab rat…

Hope: So 11 years ago, that’s why I was called in to transfuse you with my blood.

Zig: Just like The Hokage said…

Tetsuo: I was given this new power you see… Remember, the Senju and the dojutsu has a common ancestral point, that being the Rikudou Sennin. The Senju and those of dojutsu inheritance split off from each other and never interbred… If the two clans had interbred, a similar power that ran through Rikudou’s genes would have came about in the offspring… The Scientists of the SNA knew that; they did their homework… So, I was embedded with Hope’s blood, this set off some chain reactions in my body and gave me special powers beyond what I could do before… The mixing of the bloodlines gave birth to a new, more potent chakra and ninjutsu… I could also learn an abundance of jutsu in a short time span given that I give up a bit of my life; but that’s another story… With my power I was able to command the six strongest strains of the SNA… After all, that’s what I was assigned to do… Until something happened.

The Hokage: The framing… (Hope, Nila, and Zig are shocked.)

Tetsuo: Yes… We worked for you allied nations, we died all so you all could live through the 4th shinobi war…

Zig:… Brother….

Tetsuo: In an instant you all turned on US! We were labeled as mankind’s most deadliest threat to humanity… And after everything we’ve done for you, we were quickly considered the enemy just because we were different… The feudal lords heard that some experiments failed and the subjects of the SNA went berserk however, that was only the test subjects, they weren’t deployed into actual combat…

That’s the problem with this world; everything that’s different must be the cause of a major problem just because one example did so… Huh, so judgmental, and so predicable of you all. That’s one of the reasons why war will never stop… This place will eventually be ran to hell with those wanting power and those wanting to kill because of generalizations…

Zig: BUT THE ALLIED FORCES DIDN’T KNOW IT WAS A SET UP!

Tetsuo: Still such a child Zig… Did you listen to anything I've said? Despite the allied forces facing off against Reika and running her to the ground, the thought that she wouldn’t try to pit us against everyone didn’t even register… Or, even if it did, they began to fear us because we were different and because we had a few bad apples, so typical of mankind…

(The Hokage remembers back to when he was a kid being made fun of and shunned because he was the Kyuubi’s host. He also remembers back to when he started to make friends and was surrounded by the lot of them… The Hokage snaps back to reality as his Sage Mode ends again [because he held it for so long].)

The Hokage: You’re no different for trying to kill all of us… You’re just a hypocrite. You want us all dead because of one blunder… Tetsuo, your logic fails…

Nila: YEAH! You’re just a heartless murderer that destroyed our world because you’re still a child who can’t have it his way…

Zig: From this day you are no longer a brother of mine.

Hope: We won’t let you do this…

Tetsuo: Fine, consider me a crazed killer but let me tell you guys something, why did I bother to save all of the non-shinobi and civilians and move them to the other side? (Everyone is now puzzled) It’s because I want to save them, not have them die in this way… I want to end the rule of the shinobi, not humanity… Before I got side tracked, I was explaining the other world… Before the Rikudou Sennin got ill, he didn’t want everyone in the world to vanish one day through turmoil… SO, using the power of the Juubi he was able to physically manifest a world using chakra as the substance… Water was made from Suiton, Earth was made from Doton, air from Fuuton, and the other elements to construct what is known as a basic foundation for a planet. The Juubi had that power… He eventually planned for his children to complete that world however, their disputes got in the way…

Hope: I read about this using my Rinnegan to decipher the scroll from of the Uchiha hideout… The world was created somewhere in space however, a portal to that world would open up given someone with similar chakra to the creator, placed his hands upon a stone tablet located somewhere in South Western Border of the Fire country…

Zig: That’s where Hokage, that lion, and I searched for Nila at 4 years ago… Just like you said right Hokage?

Hope: The world is then fixated upon the earth in a parallel line once that happens… I could never do that much because I lack the Bijuu’s chakra, the means to control them, or the opportunity...

The Hokage: So that’s the purpose of the meteor… (Tetsuo nods.)

Tetsuo: The meteor fused the Bijuu’s energy and provided me with enough to summon the other side back here… Now you know why I’ve done this. I’ve tricked my fellow comrades into believing everyone will get the power from the meteor however, that was only a ruse… The people should remain powerless while I, and if I have servants that survives, maintains a steady balance. You see, shinobi in that world would probably waste it by fighting and using chakra.

Normal civilians and other non-shinobi have no idea how to manage and build up chakra… Therefore, they’d live in a happy life without fighting and without destruction… My power, and the power of the UHE will ensure that a balance stays. This is what will go down, and there’s nothing that can be done. This world WILL END AND WITH IT, THE WAY OF THE SHINOBI WILL DIE!
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(Nila gets angered.)

Nila: You piece of shit!

Zig: Hey, that’s my line…

Nila: Your dream means that countless live here will cease to exist… I won’t stand here and let you kill us! I Won’t! WE HAVE A RIGHT TO LIVE! WE ARE GOING TO DO OUR BEST TO SURVIVE THIS!

Tetsuo: You shinobi have a right to die… All you do is cause war, what I’m doing will prevent it, therefore, your kind should cease to exist…

Zig: Why did it have to end up like this! DAMN IT!

(The Hokage disperses a clone from a distances and goes back into Sage Mode. Nila makes the ram handseal… Wind chakra starts to circle around her like a spiraling sphere much to the surprise of everyone else…)

The Hokage: This chakra… She’s come a long way…. I will stand my ground and ensure that we survive this…

Zig: Do it Nila, do it while I still have control over his field effect…

Hope: I got your back sis…

(Nila makes the Bird, Dog, Horse, Snake, Dragon, Ox, and Rat handseals.)

Nila: This is the jutsu Hiro taught me, the jutsu only I can use…

(The Scene switches over to Tetsuo.)

Tetsuo: Hmm… Goodbye shinobi world….

Next Time: Tetsuo utters the end of the Shinobi world… WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!?
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-Where the battles pick up

(The scene is at a barren waste land... Mikoto can be seen lying down on the sandy floor...)

Mikoto (in thought): Have I led my family to their deaths? Heh, I should go take care of all those UHE goons if they don’t keep their word… (Soon Mikoto hears a noise behind him, so he quickly stands up and turns around, and much to his shock, a shuriken zips right past him... The shuriken leaves a small cut on the left side of his cheek... From the distance a shadowy figure becomes clearer.)

Mikoto: A challenger? But to reach me from that range... He must be quite skilled... It couldn't be that kid? (Mikoto then gets in a striking stance... The figure is now 15 ft from Mikoto... the mystery person is dressed in a brown cloak that covers his entire body... This man is of average height, having a slightly thick build to him...)

WHO ARE YOU!? Are you looking for a fight?

Mystery Man: I've finally found you... Sa-mosutatto Mikoto...

Mikoto (in thought): Who the hell is this man? Could it be a Hunter nin from the allied forces? No, it couldn't be... The allied forces can't afford to send off such a shinobi in this kind of climate...

Mystery Man: There was a young sand Jounin defeated and trapped submerged under some ice... Your doing?

Mikoto: And if it is?

Mystery Man: I saved that kid, but that doesn't concern me now... All I require is that you come back with me... Someone as dangerous as you can't be wandering the fields... Konoha's orders...

Mikoto: KONOHA? Heh... Very well... I see how it is...
Mystery Man: I rather not kill you, since it goes against my code... Just surrender and come back with me...

Mikoto: Here’s my code… I much rather you burn to crisp than have you iced… Only your ashes blowing through the wind will fuel my rage for your death… Konoha trash! (Mikoto rushes forward and then throws a horizontal elbow... The Mystery man counters by doing the same with his left arm, in one quick motion the mystery man forms the shadow clone handsign by extending out his left hand's fingers horizontally and applying his right hand fingers vertically, and then connects the two hand gestures. A shadow clone appears and uppercuts Mikoto.)

Urrgghgh. (Mikoto backs off as the Mystery Man's shadow clone disperses.)

Mikoto (in thought): Shit, he countered me so quickly... Only one shinobi can use the shadow clone jutsu that fluidly in the heat of parrying blows... Maybe I should go right out and say it...

Mikoto: Konoha's Hokage! Is that you under there?

Mystery Man: Hah... Actually, I'm better than Naruto...

Mikoto (in thought): What the hell? Someone stronger than the Hokage here? Bullshit... Konoha can't risk sending some like that out... Could it be Shimizu Hiro? No... His style isn't like that...

Mystery Man: Hah, hah, hah... I guess you want to see who's going to go apeshit on ya.lol Well that should be a one clue...

Mikoto: Are you for real? This goof... (The mystery man pulls back his hood, he has one high spec goggle over his right eye [it also has a transmitter on it]... Shockingly, a middle aged Konohamaru is revealed. He has long spiky hair... He has a soul patch under his bottom lip.)

Konohamaru: I am Konohamaru... I also go by the Ravaging Ape of Konoha... Like I said, I'll go apeshit on ya if you don't cooperate...

(Mikoto smiles.)

Mikoto: I thought you died in the 4th shinobi war... Unfortunately, you should have stayed under cover...

Konohamaru: Oh really? I’ll warn you that I’m not that snot nosed kid you roughed up… Please, use that heat enhancement trick by all means… Like you said earlier… You’ll make me feel the heat!?(Mikoto makes a handseal.)

Mikoto (in thought): Hmm…. He’ll be toast… (Mikoto’s skin turns red.)

Konohamaru (in thought): Here it comes…

Mikoto: AHHHH… AHAHHHHHH! AHHHHHHH! AHHHHHH! (Heat waves emit from his person… Konohamaru adjusts eye device… Konohamaru then jets off and runs like the wind….)

YOU ARE’NT GETTING AWAY FROM ME NOW THAT YOU INSTIAGATED IT! (Mikoto decides to follow Konohamaru, as the waves of heat bears on Konohamaru… While running, Konohamaru gets slightly worried.)

Konohamaru (in thought): The only way is to go underground… (As he runs, Konohamaru digs in his pocket and pulls out many smoke bombs…. He tosses them… Meanwhile, Mikoto stops and waits as the smoke clear.)

Mikoto (in thought): He must have escaped underground using a Doton… No matter, the moment he resurfaces, he’ll be toast…
(Underground Konohamaru thinks of a plan…)

Konohamaru (in thought): He’s a toughie, but good thing he’s using the heat amplification; if he used his chilly jutsu, the plan would have failed… Well there goes taking him in for questioning. If all goes well… Hmm… (Back to higher ground Mikoto spots something in the distance…)

Mikoto: Another challenger?! (It is Teru… He is stumbling forward… Teru is already in his platinum armor.)

Kid? You still want to tangle? I’ll make myself clear… I don’t want to kill anyone who poises no challenge towards me… But, as long as you keep showing yourself in front of me, the shorter my tolerance…

Teru: Ahh… (Teru digs in his pocket and presses a button… The scene switches back to underground… Konohamaru’s eye gadget beeps.)

Konohamaru (in thought): That’s the signal… I have to move some distances away before I use the jutsu… (Konohamaru tunnels his way elsewhere. Back to the battle outside.)

Mikoto: What could have changed?

Teru: Your defeat… (Teru starts making handseals quickly… Then he quickly touches the ground… A large chunk of earth that stands inbetween the two fighters lifts up far into the air and begins liquefies into mud… Teru planning on use this mud to swallow Mikoto whole.)

Mikoto: Hmm… I’ll just escape… (Mikoto tries to escape from the building wave of mud however, it’s impossible.) WHAT!? (Mikoto notices that the solid ground has also turned into mud that is pulling him under like quick sand.) IF YOU HAD THIS BEFORE! WHY NOT USE IT EARLIER!

(The ground rises and continues to liquefy.)

Teru: The Mud tidal wave technique consumes a lot of chakra and can be avoided however, with the help of another, this technique is unavoidable…)

Mikoto: (in thought): That one guy?!

Teru: From below Konohamaru is using Swap of the underworld… Combined with my technique… You’ll be completely submerged and then crushed… It’s been a good ride… But this time, you won’t leave alive… This is the curse you put on yourself for killing my sensei… (Mikoto is then hit with a title wave of mud… Under the mud Mikoto goes into one last thought.)

Mikoto (In thought): Hmm… Even if I try to freeze the earth, it won’t do any good… I have to cool down before using my technique… That will take time… So, they tricked me into using the heat amp… Then again, I always prefer using that technique over the other… Old habits die hard, really… This really is the end… My clan, my village… All I wanted was for my clan to have the power to have their own stake in the shinobi world… But Konoha… Their idiot quest for humanitarianism would prevent even that… Those who have the means should rise to the top and crush all in their way…

The weak should not be spared… Then again, I’m the one being crushed for my hypocritical ways of not killing the weak to begin with… I’m a fool… Maybe the weak does stand chance if we oppressors get over confident of our abilities and let stragglers go, only for our own egotistical purposes… (The Scene switches back to outside… Teru’s armor breaks away as the heat subsides… The Scene switches over to Konohamaru from over mile away… A hole in the earth shows he used that to get out of underground.)

Konohamaru: Heh… Using swap of the underworld to control a small area of land from this distance uses up so much of my chakra... Heh… Though, I wanted to take him in and have him questioned, I guess this was the only alternative… It was a good thing I found that kid… The chances he had the one technique to take that brute down was a miracle… Then again, Naruto did send me to rendezvous with Teru , so I guess he must have known that, that kid was the student of Scar… Naruto’s not that dumb after all…

Next time: With Mikoto’s defeat, the shinobi world can now hopefully survive the blistering heat and the bitter coldness of the battlefield…
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Konohamaru: He is a high level Jounin from Konoha... He himself stated that his level was beyond even that of Uzumaki Naruto's. However, whether that was the truth, or a bluff to get into his opponent's yet to be determined... Not much is known about his whereabouts all of this time, except for the fact that he was listed a KIA during the 4th shinobi war... Konohamaru's nick name is the Ravaging Ape of Konoha, this hints that he carries the Monkey summoning legacy of his grandfather, The 3rd Hokage... With his ability to use Jiraiya's Swap of the Underworld, and his masterful skills of shadow clone jutsu, it is no doubt that his skill as a shinobi far lives up to the recent hype of his character... He rather take people in for questioning rather than killing, which shows he's a really good guy, maybe too good... He is known for joking and not taking things seriously even in the heat of battle...
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-Accepting Death

(The Scene switches over to the battle held between Team Konoha and Marine squad... The panel focuses on Yuki impaling Dolphin with a Chidori through the heart.)

Yuki: Sorry girl, I don't mean to be a bad bitch, but... (Yuki viciously withdraws chidori from Dolphin, as Dolphin vomits blood and falls to the ground... From afar, Yuki can hear the cries of Shark morning his sister's death.)

Shark's cries: DOLPHINNNNNN! (The scene switches over to Shark... A tear runs down his face as he turns his head left, towards the scene of his sister's death.)

Shark: ARAHRAHARHARAH! (Immediately, Shun catches Shark off guard with one of his circular blades by swinging it horizontally near Shark's head... As soon as Shark turns his head to face Shun's blade, Shark weaves out of the way and then cartwheels out of focus and rushes to his sister's aid.)

Shun: YUKI! GET IN POSITION!

(While Shark is rushing to Dolphin's corpse.)

Yuki: GOT IT! (Shark lands and grabs his sister's corpse much to the shock of Shun and Yuki... Instead of attacking Yuki, Shark rushes off in another direction... Meanwhile, Shun regroups with Yuki.)

Shun: Nice one! Looks like you got her...

Yuki: That hulking guy was more focussed on gathering up her corpse...

Shun: He's most certainly heated... He's the kind of brute that's easily excited and ruled by his emotions... Things could get dangerous if we aren't careful, but at the same time, a person ruled by his emotions in the heat of battle are blinded with aggression and tends to overlook the situation... Plus, given that it's two on one, we should be able to take him out.

Yuki: Our boy Dosa has his hands full with Orca, I hope he's watching his ass out there...

(Shun touches Yuki's shoulder.)

Shun: Emotions shouldn't interfere in the way of battle... That's one of the iron rules of the shinobi... I know he's your significant other, but he is Dosa, the Reaper, one of The Hokage's direct disciples... He can handle himself...

Yuki: When did you become such a smart ass?

Shun: Hah!

(Yuki and Shun chases after Shark. The scene switches over to a nearby location... Dosa is standing in the middle of a battle torn area... Dosa is not holding his scythe [it must have been lost somewhere during their battle] immediately, Orca is behind Dosa and has a Kunai placed in front of Dosa's neck.)

Dosa: Nah ah! (Dosa quickly grabs Orca's arm and redirects the Kunai by twisting Orca's arm and pointing it back at Orca by doing an amazingly impressive reverse maneuver. Now Dosa is facing Orca while Orca's arm with the Kunai, is pointed at Orca's face.)

Orca: You saw through my Silent Homicide Technique with such ease... You aren't the same man who was nearly wasted four years ago...

Dosa: Tsk, tsk, tsk... You must not know shit about me eh? I'm call the Reaper because I silently and swiftly behead my opponents before a sound is even heard by their allies... Silly you, I know all about that sneaky, stealth, killing shit.lol Of course that mess you tried to pull over me wouldn't work... I know all of the submissions for escaping, or applying the pressure...

(Orca smiles and his mouth fills up with water... Dosa catches on, so he lets Orca go... Orca tosses the Kunai at Dosa, as Dosa backs away, so Dosa pulls out a kunai and tosses it at the approaching Kunai, which knocks both Kunai out of the way... Immediately, Orca spews out a long, twisting, 8in circumference, drilling like shape manipulation of water that attempts the skewer Dosa once it leaves Orca's mouth...)

Dosa (in thought): Fuck! That's some freaky shape manipulation... (Dosa somehow manages to position his body out of the way however, it pierces through Dosa's right shoulder, leaving a huge hole in it... Dosa falls to his knees and grips his shoulder in pain...)

Dosa: Ahhh! DAMN! That's some SUITON FOOL!

Orca: I call that Diamond cutter... It's an S-Ranked Suiton that can even pierce A-Rank Doton Ninjutsu... The shape manipulation is employed in the jutsu is immense... The speed of the attack is also due to how I shaped it... How do you like it? I have to distract my opponent before I fire the attack... If it misses, too much of a waste would be imposed on me... Sorry... I usually don't brag like this... But it's a rarity that I can get off a technique such as that... Forgive my manners... I usually don't look this cool in front of strong adversaries such as yourself...

Dosa (in thought): The pig's just gloating at me? Who the hell does he think he is?

(Immediately a load, roaring voice can be heard.)

Shark: BROO! BROO! (Shark appears carrying dead Dolphin in his arms... He lands to the side of the kneeing Dosa and the modest Orca.)

Orca: How did this?... Damn!

Dosa: Yes, looks like we got us a dead fish... HA!

Shark: SHUT THE FUCK UP! I'm GONNA EAT YOU, YOU MINNOW! BIG BRO! LET ME KILL HIM! I WANT REVENGE! C'MON! LET ME!

Orca: You're letting your feelings get the better of you... Dosa is my prey... Besides, you just ran with her corpse! Do you realize how stupid that is? Dolphin died on the battlefield... Carrying her corpse while being chased by the others isn't wise because it lowers yours defensive capabilities... I thought I taught you not to get hot headed and ignore the situation...

SharK: SHE WAS OUR SISTER! HOW DARE YOU TALK LIKE HER BODY IS NOTHING MORE THAN THE WASTED SCUM THAT LITERS THESE BATTLEFIELDS!

Dosa (in thought): Internal strife, great... If my shoulder wasn't shot to high-hell I would seize this opportunity...

(Immediately a loud cry can be heard.)

Yuki: DOSA!

(Shun and Yuki land in back of Dosa and quickly approaches him.)

Shun (in thought): Injured again?

Yuki: Dosa, are you ok...

(Dosa stands up and nudges his injured shoulder.)

Dosa: I'll live... And guys... I didn't need your help...

Yuki: DAMN YOU! Always swinging your life away... Next time we won't stop you DOSA!

Shun: YUKI!

Orca (in thought): I sense a little tension between them...

Dosa: I still had one last trick... I didn't use Uzumaki Sensei's blood to summon the Toad boss! See, I had it all planned out...

Yuki: Hmph!

(Immediately, Kimiko and Kakuya appear near Shark.)

Dosa (in thought): Those bitches!

Kakuya: Still alive and kickin huh Konoha's Reaper... I was certain I stopped your heart a few years ago...

Dosa: I will have revenge on you yet, filthy skank!

Shun: Dosa, it's not wise to start fights in your condition... Besides, we're outnumbered... (Kimiko activates Byakugan and looks at Dolphin's corpse.)

Kimiko: Umm... Sis... Dolphin is dead...

Kakuya: That twit? I don't give a fly...

Shark: SHE's MY SISTER!

Orca: CALM DOWN! They are our superiors! They must be here for a reason...

Kakuya: Finally, a man with a brain... Yes, Reika-sama is fatally injured, our boss wants us to return just for precaution... (Everyone is shocked upon hearing that.)

Orca (in thought): Impossible...

Shark: WHAT!?

Dosa: Woah... The crock defeated like that?

Yuki: WHo could've done such a thing...

Shun: Must be a monster...

Kakuya: Don't act dumb KONO-HAAAH! We know your Hokage sent the Aerial Hatchet! You all think you're all so slick...

Dosa: Even now... I'm just a witness to his-...

Yuki: That man's a brute...

Shun (in thought): Wait a minute... That lady with the sharingan said injured Reika... SO what happened to Hiro?

Orca: Konoha still seems strong despite what they face... But our great Lady! This isn't good for us...

Shark: *Growl*...

Kakuya: *chuckles*... (Everyone is shocked.)

Orca: Explain your demeanor!

Shun: It's as I feared... (Shun falls to his knees and holds his head with both of his hands.)

Dosa: What's so fuckin serious!?

(Shark starts to crack a smile as well.)

Shark: Oh, so that's how it is? Bro, for once you failed to pick up on the situation.

Yuki: What happened.

Kakuya: I said Reika was seriously injured, but not dead... If Reika survived, what does that mean for your precious Shimizu Hiro?

(Dosa has an frightened look on his face. He then falls over and starts to shiver.)

Dosa: You don't mean... NO! IT CAN't! NOT A GUY LIKE HIM!?

Yuki: Is this for real?

(Shun has a horrified look on his face.)

Kimiko: Umm, we should go... I don't like these kinds of things...

Kakuya: Sheesh... Your such a cunt sis... But yes, Dream needs us... We should go... As much as I like to savor their misery, I don't want to keep our master waiting...

Orca: Shark, it looks like we don't need to take direct vengeance on them... Konoha has just lost on of their precious jewels...

Shark: *Evil grin* Yeah, ha, ha! Irony's a bitch! (Shark [while carrying Dolphin], Orca, Kimiko, and Kakuya, dashes off. Dosa is still curled up in a ball shaking unreasonably... Yuki falls to her knees, crawls over to Dosa and touches his back.)

Yuki: I'm sorr-...

Dosa: DON'T TOUCH ME! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! (Yuki backs off. Shun still looks shaken up as well.)

Shun: It's not possible... He couldn't lose...

(Close up on Dosa's face shows that he's crying in both eyes... Dosa has a mental image of him and Hiro as teenagers holding each other up after one of their sparing sessions.)

Next Time: With the mighty Aerial Hatchet's death being spread across the torn and worn battle fields, how with the shinobi, ally, or enemy, respond to this iconic's unfortunate passing...
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-Destiny's Calling

(The scene switches back over to Mizugakure... Somewhere among the rubble, Shisio and Sasuke are standing several feet from each other... Shisio feels himself about to fall, so he pulls his sword out of his sheath and tries to catch is fall by sticking his blade into the ground... As the blade collides with the earth, it shatters... Shisio ends up on all fours, with his hilt in his right hand.)

Shisio (in thought): My sword, it represents all that I am... Sharp and lethal... (Shisio lifts up his hilt and notices that it's all that's left.) A broken sword...

Sasuke: You've fallen.

Shisio: Finish me... I SAID FINISH ME!

Shisio (in thought): I've killed so many people, taken so many lives, all for the sake of preserving my own. But, no matter how good you are, there are always someone better, I know that... Life's not so convenient that all the strong people can survive...

To measure one's strength, you fight the strongest... In order to ensure that person doesn't come back to succeed you, you take him out for good... That’s how the strong stay alive and make names for themselves... My time has ended... It would have been great to do one more match with you, Hatchet, even if it was just for kicks... (He sees Amy’s face… Shisio reaches out his hand in his mind.) I’m almost there… (The scene switches back to the present, Sasuke has his blade running through Shisio’s stomach, he withdraws it quickly, blood sprays out; Shisio falls on his face.)

Sasuke (in thought): Naruto… I’m coming for you… (Soon a figure swiftly lands in front of Sasuke… The smoke clears and it is revealed to be a grown up Ryu… He has his hair styled exactly like Sasuke’s… He is dressed in the typical cloud attire.)

Ryu: Shisio… Took him out didn’t you?

Sasuke: I did what I had to do… You can either join my cause, or fall like he did…

Ryu (He activates sharingan): You’d kill your only son?

Sasuke: If it comes to that, then I will…

Ryu: I know you are one for tricks… I can see your chakra with my sharingan… You’re in no shape to continue… In fact, if I wanted to withdraw my sharingan… I could… Look, in your condition you couldn’t even beat a dead Shisio…

Sasuke:…

(The scene switches over to another location in the Mizugakure… Kai is in his 6th tailed state, just the cloak… Immediately, Raitei [in Raiton armor] charges Kai from behind… Kai hears the noise, so he turns around to guard… Raitei does a high spinning heel kick however, Kai blocks the attack by raising up his arms and protecting his head… Reitei smirks and backs off. Kai notices Sakuya behind him.)

Kai (in thought): Whatever it is, it won’t work… (Kai turns around and then Sakuya finishes the last string of handseals and a white flashing light blinds Kai…)

Kai: What is this?… (Kai falls to the ground. The scene switches to inside Kai’s new reality. Kai is in heaven standing above the clouds… He is among numerous of angles with large feathery wings.)

Where the hell am I? Is this heaven? (The angels then all fly around him.) Could this be a genjutsu? (Soon the peaceful looking angles smile devilishly and show their sharp, animalistic teeth as they close in on his location.)

AHHHHHHH! (Back to the present… Kai gets off of the ground much to the shock of Raitei.)

That’s some genjutsu skill… You’re more than what you appear. (Sakuya backs off and regroups with Raitei.)

Sakuya: Raitei… It’s the Hachibi… He’s using it to break him out the genjutsu I placed on him… Normally, anyone hit with my genjutsu is forever removed from reality… To think his mastery over the Hachibi was so great that he could drag his consciousness back from even the realm of death…

Raitei: What do we do?

Sakuya: There seems to be a lag time in which he can break out… Use that time to kill him once I put him out with my genjutsu… Fortunately for us, he won’t transform into his full beast form...

Raitie: That’s right, this is his home court and he might interfere with the battles that are going on… The best he could do is fighting us in his cloaked form… Got it, you ready the genjutsu, and I’ll keep him on his toes… We won’t miss this time…

Kai (in thought): I know what they are planning… They’re trying to use the same tactic again… But while I’m temporarily unconscious, they’d use that time to take me out…. I have to stay on my guard, and take out the genjutsu user before I’m caught again… I don’t want to destroy what’s left of my village… And I don’t want to jeopardize everyone’s chances of saving this place… I won’t go full Bijuu… But maybe, this will help… Hachibi, lend me your strength! (Kai goes into version 2.)

Raitei (in thought): I’ll be killed…

(Immediately Asura appears to aid Raitei and Sakuya.)

Sakuya: Asura? (Sakuya makes another handseal… Now three UHE members are up against Kai.)

Raitei: What are you doing here? Never mind, the eight tails is becoming a problem… We could really use your help!

Kai (in thought): What the hell? Looks like things won’t go as planned.

Kai: *Roar*!

Asura: I was held up back at the tower by two mist shinobi… They almost had me, but I cut them lose, they should be off my trail for a while… We’ll take this beast down and assimilate his raw chakra into a new project that I’m scheming…

(Kai forms a large skull around his left shoulder.)

Kai (in thought): Which one should I go for? I’ll take out the one with the genjutsu… I don’t think the other two have it in them to stop my rampage.

Kai: LARIAT! (Kai comes charging forward.)

Raitei: SET IT UP! (Raitei gets out of the way, while Asura completes a string of handseals before him and Sakuya are crushed.)

Asura: Ninja Art: Repellent Film! (Asura creates a wide, thin, rectangular sheet of chakra that stops Kai and bounces him back… (After Kai slides back, the sheet of chakra in front of Asura and Sakuya disperses…)

Kai (in thought): A defensive ninjutsu? Must be to protect the genjutsu user… (Sakuya makes yet another handseal. Kai’s ear twitches… So he backs up… Immediately, a full bodied lightning charged Raitei, shaped of a lightning bolt, hits the ground seconds after Kai moved away from the striking point. The smoke clears as Raitei shows discontent.)

Kai: *Roar*.

Kai (in thought): That was too close… I have to take them all out if I want to win this… The Lightning Succubus, on her own isn’t much of a match for me, but when all three of them are combining their wits against me, I could lose even in version two… I must end it now, but I don’t want to cause a too big of an explosion for obvious reasons; shit it’s so hard to fight when I’m trying to conserve my powers… (Raitei regroups with Sakuya and Asura.)

Raitei: What’s taking the genjutsu so long?

Sakuya: Hush it! My genjutsu techniques uses up so much chakra that it takes a considerable amount of recharge time to gather enough of it to use a second… Not to mention he’s probably having his chakra amped up so he can more effectively counter my next genjutsu shot… My Deadly Heaven technique was an A+ Rank genjutsu… So in order to give you guys more time to take him out, I’ll need to prepare an S-rank genjutsu… Mind you he might only be restrained for a few seconds, but take him out when I get it ready, I’m sure I won’t be able to use another high level genjutsu again…

(Raitei nods. Kai begins roaring much to the shock of his opponents.)

Kai: *ROAR! GROWL! HOLW!* (Kai is on all fours and chakra is forming from his mouth… He’s gathering for a huge chakra blast.)

Kai (In thought): I have to concentrate… Have the elevation of the blast up a little high enough so I don’t eradicate the area…

(The ground begins to shake as an enormous level of chakra builds and gathers.)

Raitei: We have to stop him! (Raitei rushes forward.)

Raitei (in thought): Don’t fear him! (She’s now in front of Kai… While powering up, Kai swipes horizontally at Raitei with his claws, however Raitei ducks and then slides right, out of the way, and positions herself on Kai’s side… She then extends her palm out and stabs Kai in the rib… Blood sprays out…)

Raitei: How’d you like that?

Kai (in though): You’d have to do more than that to harm me… (Reitei withdraws her hand, and notices that it’s burning…)

Raitei: If I didn’t have Raiton armor, I’d of lost my hand…

(Quickly Kai turns around and grabs her with both of his arms… He has the blast readied about to unleash it in her face.)

Kai (in thought): It’s over for this one!

Raitei: AHHHHHHHH!

(Immediately, Asura uses his innate chakra molding ability to form a tennis racket… He rushes over and as Kai is about to vanquish Raitei, Asura, using his jutsu, smacks the ball of chakra into the sky, which explodes and liters the sky with a black shade… Angered, Kai prepares to head-butt Raitei, however, Asura uses his repelling chakra racket to parry Kai’s head.)
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