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Old 06-05-2009, 07:51 AM   #1
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Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

Please post all your Suggestions for the Fanfiction thread here. We are looking for some good insight, so please help us out. Also Any comments you might have about the story you read, post them here too.
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Old 06-05-2009, 08:13 AM   #2
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

My vote is for " Naruto leaves the village/ travels alone" for several reasons.

.The Manga might not go there at all
.Even if it did it would lack depth
.Naruto's absence gives other character the chance to dev
.Sakura is a bitch and i want her to have 0 friends
.We can get grim/dark with this theme by injecting more mature concepts into it, with character intruductions/ fights.
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Old 06-05-2009, 08:28 AM   #3
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I like the idea of naruto leaving the village to redevelop himself...but that would never happen unless he goes on a mission...but i would want someone to travel with him like hinata...gives us that whole pain and konan concept. maybe a civil war in konoha erupts or something of that sort...and naruto will come back and take over...
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Awesome Ideas, lets keep them coming. Once we get a few Ideas rolling, I will make a Poll, and we can vote for the 1st story. I do like what ShiverX Started.
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Old 06-05-2009, 09:15 AM   #5
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

one of these events will happen

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naruto decides to leave the village so he can get stronger, while he is out sasuke invade konoha and almost crush konoha which force the villagers to compare sasuke who's been praised as konoha number rokie the brother of itachi with naruto the dead last the kyubi kid.

and how they treated both and how every turned out.especially sakura wko'll face sasuke during his invasion and compares between both of them.sasuke manages to beat the crap out of her but doesn't kill her and leave her on the ground and flee to face danzo and the elder but before/or during the fight the secrets are revealed to everyone.
the thing is will kakashi fight sasuke during his invasion or not?
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Old 06-05-2009, 09:49 AM   #6
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I like your idea Dagoro but I'd still like to keep somewhat to what will actually happen or could. Naruto can travel so that is fine but I feel i is a bit close to the manga as it might(just might) catch up to us. I'd rather have side storys or other timed storys to view Naru-vers from another angle than it's current state.
How about Minato Gaiden?

Or About uzumaki Nila ofc ;D
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Old 06-05-2009, 10:18 AM   #7
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

Minato Gaiden would be awesome i hope kishi will write it soon

Btw, ShiverX, did you posted 451 prediction, or not yet? Cuz i didnt find it
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Old 06-05-2009, 10:55 AM   #8
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Nope, not yet.
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Maybe combine Naruto leaving, with Sakura maturing under Danzo's dictatorship?
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Old 06-05-2009, 11:30 AM   #10
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can i be a writer?
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Quotes for noobs (learn how to break up a quote)
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Ok Stubborn donkey, how do you break it up please and if your not willingly to tell me, then please DONT offer me no advice in future
So you can post the second bit and i shouldnt be allowed to if i dont tell you? Why be so rude?

Anyways, here is a quotes for noobs guide


1. A basic quote

[*QUOTE][*/QUOTE]

(the * need to be removed for it to work, I put them in so you can see the text) is a basic quote that just wraps something in a quote without saying who quoted it who quoted so

[*QUOTE]this is a quote[*/QUOTE] without any * would look like
Quote:
this is a quote

Edit: there is a button for this, it looks like a speech bubble. If you select text and then press the button the selected text will automatically be wrapped with the quote tag


2. A quote that says who said it

[*QUOTE=who said it][*/QUOTE] this adds who said the post, manually putting that there can be useful when quoting something external. Example:

[*QUOTE=Mangastream]Remember all you sexy bastards out there, Naruto, Bleach, OP, FT, etc. all on break this week. Feel free to take your rage out on us[*/QUOTE] without any * would look like
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mangastream
Remember all you sexy bastards out there, Naruto, Bleach, OP, FT, etc. all on break this week. Feel free to take your rage out on us
3. A quote that says who said it and links to the post where it was said

[*QUOTE=who said it;X][*/QUOTE]

Where X is the post number.

For the post that i originally quoted it would look like this

[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164]Ok Stubborn donkey, how do you break it up please and if your not willingly to tell me, then please DONT offer me no advice in future[*/QUOTE]

That is what you get when you press the quote button.

4. Breaking up a quote

Now that you know how quotes work it all boils down to preference, how you want it to look like and how you want to do it.

One way of doing it is copying the latter part of the original quote [*/QUOTE] and then pasting it after each section you break up, write your reply, choose the text you want then paste it after that portion, repeat till you finish the go back and copy then paste the first part of the text at the beginning of each portion of text. Of course you can immediately copy and paste both parts of a poste so that you dont forget one in the end.

The end result would be something like this

[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164]Ok Stubborn donkey,[*/QUOTE]
My reply 1
[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164] how do you break it up please[*/QUOTE]
my reply 2
[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164]and if your not willingly to tell me, [*/QUOTE]
my reply 3
[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164]then please DONT offer me no advice in future[*/QUOTE]
my reply 4



Which without any * would look like

Quote:
Originally Posted by minato uchiha View Post
Ok Stubborn donkey,
My reply 1
Quote:
Originally Posted by minato uchiha View Post
how do you break it up please
my reply 2
Quote:
Originally Posted by minato uchiha View Post
and if your not willingly to tell me,
my reply 3
Quote:
Originally Posted by minato uchiha View Post
then please DONT offer me no advice in future
my reply 4


Another way of doing it would be to cut and paste the second part of the quote tag after the first section of text you want to seperate then write your reply select the second part and hit he quote button (it looks like a text bubble),if you do that without anything else the end result would be

[*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164]Ok Stubborn donkey,[*/QUOTE]
My reply 1
[*QUOTE] how do you break it up please[*/QUOTE]
my reply 2
[*QUOTE]and if your not willingly to tell me, [*/QUOTE]
my reply 3
[*QUOTE]then please DONT offer me no advice in future[*/QUOTE]
my reply 4

Which would look like

Quote:
Originally Posted by minato uchiha View Post
Ok Stubborn donkey,
My reply 1
Quote:
how do you break it up please
my reply 2
Quote:
and if your not willingly to tell me,
my reply 3
Quote:
then please DONT offer me no advice in future
my reply 4

To make it like the previous example (which wpuld be preferred, though not necessary ) copy the part that says who posted with the link to the post and paste it accordingly to the proper part in each first half of each quote tag. In my I would copy =minato uchiha;2118164 and paste it where the # is
[*QUOTE#] to get [*QUOTE=minato uchiha;2118164] (of course with the * removed)


Of course you can use any other method you like to get to the end result, but now that you know what the end rwsult looks like I think there shouldnt be any problems
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Old 06-05-2009, 11:35 AM   #11
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

Sure you can, but understand once it's your turn, you must be commited on completing your week. The week you write, gives the other writers much needed time to come up with fresh ideas. So I need, no WE need a solid commitment from you.
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Is this going to feature OC's or just canon charaters?
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Old 06-05-2009, 01:38 PM   #13
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My problem with non canon characters is that it more often than not, they entice people to leap off the grid completely by getting over creative.

So many fanfic people have writen where they pump the characters they've created full of jutsu on a chapter basis. Makes it unrealistic.

That is why writing about Naruto is such a challenge, he has only a few jutsu with endless combo possibilities. Makes you think about how to use his not so diverse arsenal in a fight.

As for the Manga sneaking up on us, even if Naruto leaves the village in the manga, it won't even come close to what we would do to the kid.

Hunger, being forced to kill, homelessness all that while being on the run and targeted for capture/assassination. This is the marute feel the series lacks, but we can work with it.
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I'm definitely for Naruto leaving the village in order to give other characters some development OR to talk about the first time skip and give some characters their development then. See how they all progressed throughout the years when Naruto was gone.
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I'm definitely for Naruto leaving the village in order to give other characters some development OR to talk about the first time skip and give some characters their development then. See how they all progressed throughout the years when Naruto was gone.
I'd love some Sakura and Sai development. Particularly the former, some genjutsu training would make Sakura useful again.
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