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View Poll Results: Which Members Idea should we start with
ShiverX 4 40.00%
Dagoro 5 50.00%
The Special One 1 10.00%
platinumrug and ThesixthHokage 0 0%
stubborn_narut0 0 0%
Silverblade 0 0%
Fenrii 0 0%
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Old 06-08-2009, 11:02 AM   #31
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

I liked ShiverX's first chapter, it's a good introduction for the story. Though I wonder who's daughter she is :P, lol.
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Old 06-08-2009, 11:33 AM   #32
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I defintly like approach. TheSixthHokage, do you want to go after or before me?
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Old 06-08-2009, 11:43 AM   #33
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I'd prefer after as I am probably one of the poorer writers so it's best if I can get the feel of what you, Dagoro and ShiverX want to portray and use those details and character traits in my chapter.
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Old 06-08-2009, 11:51 AM   #34
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

OK Great. So I just need to check with Dagoro, but the order will be like this as of today.

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The special one
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I am still waiting for a few to see if they will participate.

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Old 06-08-2009, 01:02 PM   #35
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

If ShiverX's story is the one that members will build upon then i would respectfully like to step down for the roster. Not because i didn't like the idea, but because i don't think i would do a good job running with it.

When it comes to collabs i prefer to have a solid base so the people involved, myself included don't overstep the boundaries and write over eachother.

I like what ShiverX wrote ( Who could her parents possibly be ?? ;P ) but the character is too much of a blank slate for me.

This is something i would like to read from the original prospective ( ShiverX's ), the character opens the mind too much and people's brains might fall off due to the non existent limits on the character, running the risk of making it not very believable with so many people toying with it.

Thats just my opinion, please don't take it the wrong way because i mean no harm by it.
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Old 06-08-2009, 02:34 PM   #36
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

No Prb. What we can do is since we have 2 more confirmed memebers, we can get a poll or vote and see what the 1st story or the general idea for the story will be. TSO, and Sivlerblade are the other 2. so If they can post here and we get the ideas flowing, I am sure we can come up with a great Plot and Start.
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Old 06-08-2009, 03:27 PM   #37
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

How many writers does this fanfic have? I might want to join in.


If Naruto does leave the village, I would think he becomes more concerned with how he uses his powers. Almost to the fact that J-man never showed how powerful he was until it was really needed. Naruto doesn't really do that at this time in the Manga. I think a humbling experance needs to take place.


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Old 06-08-2009, 04:59 PM   #38
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Hmm. Very interesting. Later we'll find out what kind of person she really is. Like Dag said, her persona ccan be easliy painted to fit other's perception of how they want her to be. However, I believe that we'll get her personality down pat sooner or later before we get our hands at it.
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Old 06-08-2009, 10:59 PM   #39
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

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OK Great. So I just need to check with Dagoro, but the order will be like this as of today.

ShiverX
Dagoro
The special one
H_I
TheSixthHokage
OG.
Silverblade

I am still waiting for a few to see if they will participate.
i dont mind where i am on list, if anyone wants to go ahead of me[hoping we get moar members, YEA YOU. e.e], im fine with that too =]
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

I think the perspective in regards to this fanfic should be open, I mean, let's do our best and this is our first collab. Surely if we all want to, we can do a second and use this experience to make it even better. I am optimistic as hell.
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Old 06-09-2009, 02:30 AM   #41
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

Hmm.. I would really like Dagoro to be on board as he is a great writer. Maybe we could have paralell stories running? As long as you mark what story your continuing then that would be fine. Many writers involved in writing for some stories, maybe even merging them at some points.
I see you already posted my text. I guess that means my week is up?
Hmm..Well, it will be fun to se what people can do with it ;D
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Old 06-09-2009, 02:41 AM   #42
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!

Im not in any way shape or form dogging your idea, just making it clear. My problem with invented characters in a collab is that it could become unrealist really fast.

The character you introduced was dealt a pretty fat hand in terms of lineage, we all know who her parents are. So pretty much given her circumstances there are really no limits in regards to how many jutsu, persona etc changes she can have.

By time the story makes its way back to you she might have like 20 new jutsu and some insane event which will totally make the character unrecognizable.

That is why for collabs, a canon character is usually best because everyone has a solid knowledge of their personality/potential/limitations and therefore there is less of a chance of stepping all over eachother.
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I think ShiverX has a decent solution, the OC story could continue with a strict canonC-only story. If there are multiple writers it could work, particularly if we are more in tune with each other's plot goals... no, Nuclear Bomb no Jutsu's or Instant Death Laser Eye Beams...
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Aye Dagoro. I indeed see your point.
What is your take on multiple storyline then? I know it may sound as our normal story/predictions but the difference here is all writers can pick up on each others stories.
And we may limit it to just some stories, like 3-5 top.
And in the beginning of each weeks writing, just mark with the name so people know which one it is. I would love to do this as in the long run the stories could connect or use each other as background/reference to enhance story.

I don't ask you to write on the one I started, but I do want to have you on board as you are really one of the best writers here.

What say you?
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I've got some ideas but I never good at writing. Maybe I put some major points someone write it?
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