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| The Special One |
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| Fenrii |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Just post what Ideas you have. We are all up for suggestions, and we want to get it started, so when everyone takes a look, they instantly become hooked into our story.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
So am I suppose to wait for the order........ or just write now?
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
no, Just write what you think we should start the story on. Post, and then we will vote.
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Genin
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
I would like to see each writer take on a specific character and show the same event through their characters eyes. Not all the time because the story would never advance, but just for one major event. Let us see the whole thing through Sakura's eyes, then see the same event through Naruto's eyes, etc. I just think it would be an interesting concept because of the old saying. If 5 people see a car accident, each will have an entirely different story about what they saw.
As for story lines in general, I would like to see Naruto go on the offensive. Instead of waiting for someone to attack the village, or going to save a friend, let Naruto finally get pissed and go looking for the trouble himself. |
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I am not sure about the different view points... it sounds like it could work, but I think it could get a little old after a while. Besides taking forever for the story to progress. As for Naruto going on the offensive, could that kind of nagate what has happend to that charactor in the last ten chapters? He has really made himself a powerful peace maker than storm bringer?
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
I have a picture of Nila getting corned by multiple Chuunin level shinobi as she begins to investigate. Apparently, they have ties to the meteor that landed somehwere. She asks them about it however, they were told to assasinate anyone trying to piece togther information regarding the incident. She fights amazingly well against the Chuunin however, they get the upperhand.
Immediately she is about to get pierced by a Kunai, when a familure figure stands in the way and takes the blow for her. SHe cries out to her father's dramatic appearance, then all of a sudden poof, it was a shadow clone. Behind the troops, a couple shadow clones restrain them. Automatically the Chuunin recognizes the signature jutsu and prepares to say the name of the man feared as Konoha's Hokage, but the screen cuts to a woman with the Byakugan activated. Nila turns around and yells out to her mother. (The parents of Nila are too perceptive to let her sneak out this far.) They now know of the strange meteor and begins to have a nice long talk about the circumstances involved. Will she go out for investigation? Well I think her parents will arrange a small squad to escort her in her travels. Perhaps even people she know, but are trusted by the Hokage.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
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I thought the purpose of this thread was just to toss about ideas for the writers to toy with and see what would and wouldn't work. A lot of ideas that end up here may be to off to be able to use, but even a wild idea may have a piece of it that inspires a new thought in the writers in which case it would serve it's purpose. |
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Fenril- I get what your saying about wanting to see the perception of others, but do we really want to deicate it to entire week? I think what ever could be concidered a pannel or two would be concidered enough to cover the other people's view? I hope I am making sense. Don't get me wrong, there are a lot of times where I think what other people are thinking about situations. As for the fanfic, I guess your right; I just didn't want to drift to far off of the original charactor. Only some more adventures for that person.
Edit: I just went threw the peices put out, and I like the way it is writen. I like the idea of the Naru/Hina daughter thing but I can see the possible super powered ninja getting out of hand. Not to say that you guys should stop because I will keep reading out of interest. How good of a ninja is she that she is already using her natured chakra at 15, and so well I might add?
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Where is the rest of Shiverx, "The PAst and The Future" story i was getting into that!!!
Where Where Whereeeeeeeeeeeee
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Hehe, Nutty, It is not for me to write.....
I had some ideas about Nila encountering the meteor and starting a journey of some kind to unravel the mysteries around it. Nila is indeed talented for 15 years old but that is part of the theme of Nila. Instead of superpowerful "un-happy" people, Nila is something of a contradiction. A talented Nin that have a happy childhood and a "normal" life. Not without problems though as we will see I'm sure. Gah, I would like to write more about my ideas for the story but I won't as I don't want to influence the writers. But ofc there is a lot more thought out and partly written. I will really enjoy changing my view of the story as others perspective change the circumstances. One tip though. Please don't rush the story. Let it be a nice character development and build up for the story to events that come later on. Can't wait for next.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Shiverx is it possibly for you to post your version of part 2 then in the aftermath forum
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Oh sorry, silly me ^^^i like TSO ideas that is brillant, continue from there if u want to.
Where can i sign up to write??? Please stop posting others stuff about sai's fing brother like on pg 2-3 those do not concern the fanfic, because it makes for more for Shiverx and Hokage Inuyasuka, (who i will refer to as HoInu from now on), to read through Where is the list of writers that have sign up? And did i say nice start to Shiverx, hehehe basically we are dealing with the next generating here but there is just one problem Shiverx, i don't think you'll like the name others agree to give Shikamaru son/daughter, or even the ccouples we might make, but if a name has been decided on by writers then we stick with that please and the couples they have form. P.S i will delete this by Friday (since it has nothing to do with concept of this forum) just need to get some answer.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Whatever the writers write will be fine
![]() We all have preferences, but that is what is cool with colaboration, we can create something more that one persons vision.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
Near the border of Lightning Country.
A female ninja approach a male ninja dress like a black ops and carrying a large sword." The Raikage want to see you Sasaki." says the female ninja. Sasaki turns around and says " Sweet. Now bring on the Sand chicks and cream soda." The female ninja gives a stares at Sasaki. Sasaki gave her a big grin before telepoting himself. At the Raikage office, the Raikage, a young talented kunoichi is doing some desk job when suddenly Sasaki teleported himself in. "Hey there smart sexy lady, typin' recipes?". The Raikage look up at hope and smash Sasaki's face with a huge bat. "HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU TO ADDRESS ME AS RAIKAGE!!!!!" The Raikage sits down and took a file from her drawer. " Now for the reason why I called you here. Are you even listening?". "You're in denial, you know that?" says Sasaki while he's trying to stands up. The Raikage gave a huge sigh before opening the file. "Something just landed just outside the border of the Fire Country and whatever its it scram most of our devices at the border. Your mission is to get whatever that is and bring it back." "AWWWW, Can't I get a real mission like saving helpless sassy hot chicks from a sinking ship built by peoples that have a social structure in which a number of all male workers maintain their country under the rule of the Queen?" ask Sasaki. "No. Ready your things. You leave immediately." Sasaki makes a face at the Raikage and then he teleport himself. From the shadows of the Raikage office, an oldman step forward. "Can he be trusted?". The Raikage looks at him and says " He's probably the the biggest pervert, and an idiot. But in one man inflitrartion mission, he's the best the village has to offer." I tried to make like a fanfic, so please comment what to add or delete.
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Suggestions and comments!
OK everyone, I added a poll on who's Idea should we start with next week. Please, who ever is picked 1st, based on the vote, will start regardless of how good or how bad there ideas are. So support whomever is picked. I cant wait!
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