Dagoro

I noticed it too.

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platinumrug

Lol, I wondered if I was one of the only whos who noticed it? I guess I'm not alone.

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The Special One

Funny thing, is that will be my major when I start College, which may be in the Fall or in Winter. I'm have an overactive imagination, the best way I cope with it is to get my ideas down on paper, otherwise the people I hang out with begin to fear that I'm a handful.lol

But thanks, I appreciate it.

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dsyoji

What is stopping Naruto from producing a shadow clone and performing a henge to disguise himself so he can leave with team Samui. It is doubtful that Danzo's Anbu would be able to tell the difference.

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icedraon620

i was thinking along the same lines. Walk out as a hobo or Brock's dad for those of you who have seen pokemon way back then return.

no prob TSO. your writing is a tleast good, never bad, sometimes astounding.

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thegodfather2450

about the moon it's either that or the situation the moon was in when itachi did what he did.

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poolangya

thanks freakout, been trying my luck since yesterday to make a thread.but i guess only you got the power.

i'll post my pred later in the week, for now, i guess naruto will be out of konoha with team samui in no time. kishi will probably do this to avoid a naruto vs sasuke confrontation.it's too early for that i think,sasuke needs to have another powerup or he will just shit himself fighting naruto. sakura will be left behind and witness a sasuke trashing danzou. and she will have to let go of her puppy love soon after.,she needs to mature, and a confrontation with sasuke will probably fulfill that.

anburaydin

@tso

great prediction like always
keep them coming.

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TheSixthHokage

I so want Karui and/or Samui hitting on Naruto, lol. C'mon, heroes need lovin' too and Hinata's in a different area code.

I assume this chapter'll be a gigantic tease where Sasuke moves in to strike at chapter's end. I assume Madara'll be there as Mizukage.

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pharix

Cookisame!

and yeah, I'm guessing that the eye of the moon thing is SOMETHING to do with Sharingan

Myth

Prediction

Scene opens with Naruto

Forlong

Hi ho, hi ho, it's off to predict I go...

Chapter 454: Loyalty
Opens on Naruto.
Naruto: "But before I tell you anything, I have to talk to Danzo."
Omoi: "Why? What's so important?"
Naruto: "No one knows the Akatsuki as well as I do. My master made it his business to know what they were doing. I've fought several of them; I've defeated two of them. If you're going after them, Danzo should have gotten me."
Sai (whispering to Naruto): "He doesn't want you to risk being captured."
Naruto (whispering): "I know, but I just beat the Akatsuki leader. They won't be catching me anytime soon."
Omoi: "You've got a point."
Naruto: "I've got an idea, but I need your help. Don't worry, you won't be taking any risks. I promise I'll do everything I can to help you find your master."
Cut to Danzo. Danzo is spouting some sort of crap, when Naruto, Sakura, and the Cloud Shinobi come in.
Naruto: "Danzo, why didn't you tell me these Cloud Shinobi were going after the Akatsuki? No one knows them better than I do. I could help them find Killer Bee."
Cloud Nin: "What do you mean?"
Naruto: "The Akatsuki need the Jinchuriki alive. Killer Bee my still be alive. You should focus your strength on finding him."
Danzo (standing up): "I did not call you. Leave now, before you test my patience."
Naruto: "I have a few more questions for you first. Why did the elders replace Tsunade-sama? Did you tell them that her acts of compassion brought this upon the village?"
Danzo (glaring at Naruto): "You seem to have already learned much without my help. Know your place, Jinchuriki. Tsunade my have given you free reign, but I will not be so weak."
Sakura clenches her hand into a fist.
Naruto: "Because, if that is the case, you are misinformed. The ones that attacked the Leaf Village, Nagato and Konan, told me why they attacked it. The Leaf Village attack the Rain Village...their village. You killed their friend Yahiko, and for that all your men were killed and you were crippled. Maybe that's why the elders didn't choose you as the Third."
Danzo glares harder at Naruto.
Naruto: "I hated Nagato for killing Jiraiya. I hated him for what he did to the village. But I understood how he felt. What was I to do? Kill him so another could exact vengence upon me? I chose to give him a second chance. And he used that chance to bring life back into as many of those he killed that he could, sacrificing his own."
Sakura: "...Naruto...?"
Naruto: "We don't need a Hokage that will continue this chain of hatred. We need a Hokage that will know when to fight and when not to fight. And I will be that Hokage!"
Danzo: "...What...did...you...say!?"
Naruto: "You heard me. I challange you for the possition of Hokage!"
Sai walks in.
Sai: "Danzo-sama, I think Naruto is questioning your athority."
Danzo: "I noticed that!"
Sai: "In front of the entire village."
Danzo: "WHAT!?"
Naruto (waving): "Bye."
Naruto and company disapear in a puff of smoke.
Cloud Nin: "Shadow Clones!? Amazing! He even tranfromed some them into my comrads flawlessly."
Danzo walks outside. We see Naruto adressing the crowd.
Naruto: "Danzo is unfit to lead, so I will lead!"
crowd: "NAR-U-TO! NAR-U-TO!"
Sai: "I had no idea he was planning this. He said that his Shadow Clone would tell you everything he told the crowd. How could I have known?"
Danzo: "DAMN IT. At this rate, we'll have to remove the Jinchuriki."
Sai: "What do you mean, Danzo-sama?"
Danzo: "Kill him and find a new host, of course. One that will be loyal to me."
Sai places his sword at Danzo's throat.
Sai: "I'm sorry. I believe I didn't hear what you said. Could you say it louder?"
Cloud Nin: "No need. I heard just fine. How you plan on killing that boy."
Danzo: "Who is going to believe you?"
Sai: "True, your sealing jutsu prevents me from testifying against you."
Sai points at Hinata right behind him.
Sai: "But what about her?"
Hinata: "...you...you...MONSTER!"
Hinata runs to Naruto.
Danzo: "DAMNIT!"
Cloud Nin: "Looks like this kid thought of everything. I'm impressed."
Hinata: "NARUTO-KUN, DANZO JUST SAID THAT HE'S GOING TO KILL YOU!"
Hiashi (Hinata's dad): "What!? Danzo, I have remained sillent for you to long. I will not let you lead the Leaf Village to ruin. The Hyuuga clan will only follow one Hokage to replace Tsunade-sama, and that is NARUTO!"
Shikaku (Shikamaru's dad): "Naruto may not be the wisest man here, but he knows when to ask for advice. He will make a fine Hokage."
Guy: "You are right. He is determined and has the power of youth! He will lead us well!"
One by one, people start calling out their approval.
crowd: "NARUTO! NARUTO!"
Sai: "You were right, Danzo-sama. What you did to Naruto did reflect on you."
Kakashi: "It is decided then...Usumaki Naruto will be...THE SIXTH HOKAGE!"
crowd: "NARUTO! NARUTO!"

Next chapter: Holy S*** That was Awesome!

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pharix

lol, truth.

but I don't think it'd happen sadly I mean if he was Hokage there's no way he'd be able to go after Sasuke anymore, and then there's Killer Bee...

TheSixthHokage

Forlong, that prediction was way too fan-friendly. Kishimoto likes to molest our hopes and dreams, discard them and then offer inferior subsitutes.

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superninja

Forlong, that was not bad, but definitely not going to happen in the next chapter. Still it was fun to read.

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