547 prediction/ spoilers - Page 2

apacolypz · 07-07-2011, 06:46 AM

Jericho....Great one man! I def enjoyed the use of diamond in the sand...You pumped me up for a book long prediction lol! I am personally not feeling this chapter much...but I will make the best out of it hoping for next week.

jericho Uzimaki · 07-07-2011, 11:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by apacolypz

Jericho....Great one man! I def enjoyed the use of diamond in the sand...You pumped me up for a book long prediction lol! I am personally not feeling this chapter much...but I will make the best out of it hoping for next week.

i just noticed your in/from Raleigh. I am from fayetteville!

I am in Txeas now due to the Air Force, but i will probably be back through between this year andnext summer. We should PM our email addresses maybe we could work on some stuff, i like your writing style, you draw too?

jericho Uzimaki · 07-07-2011, 01:01 PM

549.

"Father/son Day II"

Leaf, "yes Master Naruto, you are correct i am ashamed of my previous actions. I will put th epast behind me, for the Leaf for the Alliance and for peace."

Naruto, "Good, but don't call me 'master', Naruto is just fine. But when i am kage then you have to address me correctly..lol."

Bee, "Now where to, stay here there is nothing to do?"

Naruto nods his head. He goes RS then he and Bee depart.

Kage scene.

All the Kages are laid out, with limbs detached.

Mizukage, "I always hated that jutsu!"

Raikage, "Damn we are spread out all over the place, it will take some moments before we regenerate."

He is crawling towards his left leg.

Gaara stands over the 4th kzkg, "i see you tried to shield yourself from the blast, unfortunately for you it did not work well enough."

the 4th has both arms separated from his body and a lower leg detached as well.

4th, "Well it wouldn't be the first plan i had that turned out differently. Gaara, I would be lying if i said i am sorry for putting the Jink in side you. I did it as Kage, as protector of the village."

Gaara, "did it have to be your youngest son? Did it have to be any child at all?"

4th, "who better to protect the village when I can't then my son? We have for generations protected the Sand, you know that."

Gaara looks at him, "I understand, no thought of the consequences to your son, just the village. I do not agree, but i understand."

4th, "One more thing Gaara, when you age and pass the title on, if Temari has a child and you don't, that kid is your best bet. She is just like your mother was."

Gaara, "we agree on one thing, father....Diamond Sand coffin!"

A glittery sand shell surrounds the 4th.

3rd Tsuchikage, "well,well. I guess the little knuckle head grew up."

Oonki flying down towards him as he lays spread out on the ground, "Indeed, Sensei, indeed.

3rd Tchkg, "and old. why are you still Kage, has the village grown weak in my absence? there are no strong willed and wise ninja to pass it to?"

Oonki, "i am Tsuchikage, that is all, the ninja are fine in the village. When i am defeated there are those that will be looked at to replace me."

3rd, "Dammit, Oonki i was afraid of this. You haven't changed a bit, your power is impressive, but no self confidence."

He is reattaching his leg and begins to stand, he still only has one arm.

Oonki, "careful Sensei my guard is not down in the least."

3rd, "you know very well i have no jutsu that i can do with one arm, there is all this sand and crushed diamonds in all our wounds slowing down the regeneration, that Kazekage kid is young but smart."

He walks a closer to Oonki who is still in the air out of arms reach.

"you know you did not have to come out here, i bet you are the oldest Kage aren't you? Don't answer, you could have easily gave them Intel on my jutsu. But had to come out here to prove you deserve to be Kage. My dear student, the only one that needed convincing of your abilities, was always you."

Oonki, "you are wrong, they doubted me they all doubted me, they wondered why i was your student."

Flashback of people whispering behind a young Oonki walking behind the 3rd.

3rd, "they wondered why i picked you as my student ...so late.[Oonki is shocked] You were ready long before that in skill, but your self view was never equal to it."

Oonki, "so why, why pick me then?"

3rd, "i hoped being my student and successor would show you that you are worthy of admiration, without loud boasting and salty attitude to disguise how you really feel."

Oonki turning his head slightly down and away, "i just thought, i always ...I am the 4th Tsuchikage, after this, the 5th Tsuchikage will join the other kages in HQ."

3rd, "good choice, goodbye, 4th Tsuchikage. I know you will pick wisely."

Oonki, "Tombstone Monument!"

A layer of rock covers the 3rd and also creates a small pedestal. It is an actual monument for a fallen Leader.

"That is the other reason i had to be the one to stop you, this is what you deserve,sensei."

Mizukage is in the most pieces, "this damn sand it keeps getting in the way! When i get myself together i am gonna kill one of you, i don't care which, maybe both!"

Gaara just looks at him.

Oonki speaks to Gaara, "should we give the signal now?"

we see the ninja laying in wait.

Gaara is about to speak when, "ahhhhh!!"

Oonki, "Kazekage!"

4th Raikage He is has both legs but no left arm. Black Lightning is running across and around his body.

"you cannot hold down the Raikage of the Cloud for so long. You are strong but my Black lightning is always stronger!"

Oonki is holding Gaara, {He is alive just knocked out. I hate fighting this guy i barely made it last time,20 years ago!}

Mizukage, "just kill one of them!"

4th, "shut up. i will show you who why i am the strongest of the Cloud!"

As 3rd walks towards the Tsuchikage and Gaara an explosion occurs right at his feet, stopping him and leaving a big hole.

3rd looks up, "well well, if it isn't B.."

We see the A standing from neck up.

3rd, "but who is this? this isn't that raping fool, no wait well shit how long have i been gone..."

We see standing with his left hand sparking with Black lightning. "Darui."

Raikage, "I see you are without a left hand, so i am lending you mine."

4th, "you are leaving, don't you want to test your might against me?!"

A, "I am currently the 2nd fastest ninja living and tied with being the strongest with another Kage, no there are no more tests for me."

He walks over to Gaara and picks him up. As he is about to turn to leave.

Oonki, "call my student to my side i have Urgent news that may not weight til later."

He shows where he is bleeding on his side from a deep wound, "When we clashed Dust Elements he managed to sneak a few rock shards through."

Raikage A, "I understand, which one of the two am i summoning for you?"

we cut to Naruto by himself running in RSM, "i hope i get to them in time they may be way their heads, those are some cunning and skillful opponents! But then again, so are they."

we see Kakashi up close,{i will cut them all down if i have to, for the village for Naruto, my life is forfeit.}

We see Kakashi's eyes with Naruto's under them and Darui's eyes with the 4th under his.

Is Naruto going to help Kakashi's team our someone else? Is Darui strong enough to defeat the creator of Black Lightning?

Next: "Just in time"

BoyThisIsAwkward · 07-07-2011, 01:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jericho Uzimaki

549.

"Father/son Day II"

Leaf, "yes Master Naruto, you are correct i am ashamed of my previous actions. I will put th epast behind me, for the Leaf for the Alliance and for peace."

Naruto, "Good, but don't call me 'master', Naruto is just fine. But when i am kage then you have to address me correctly..lol."

Bee, "Now where to, stay here there is nothing to do?"

Naruto nods his head. He goes RS then he and Bee depart.

Kage scene.

All the Kages are laid out, with limbs detached.

Mizukage, "I always hated that jutsu!"

Raikage Damn we are spread out al over the place, it will take some moments before we regenerate."

He is crawling towards his left leg.

Gaara stands over the 4th kzkg, "i see yoiu tried to sheild yourself from the blast, unfortunatley for you it did not work well enough."

the 4th has both arms separated from his body and a lower leg detached as well.

4th, "Well it wouldn't be the first plane i had that turned out differently. Gaara, I would be lying if i said i am sorry for putting the Jink in side you. I did it as kage, as protector of the village."

Gaara, "did it have to be your youngest son? Did it have to be any child at all?"

4th, "who better to protect the village when I can't then my son? We have for generations protected the Sand, you know that."

Gaara looks at him, "I understand, no thought of the consequences to your son, just the village. I do not agree, but i understand."

4th, "One more thing Gaara, when you age and pass the title on, if Temari has a child and you don't, that kid is your best bet. She is just like your mother was."

Gaara, "we agre on one thing, father....Diamond Sand coffin!"

A glittery sand shell surrounds the 4th.

3rd Tsuchikage, "well,well. I guess the little knuckle head grew up."

Oonki flyin gdown towards him as he lays spread out on the ground, "Indeed, Sensei, indeed.

3rd Tchkg, "and old. why are you still kage, has the village grown weak in my abscence? ther are no strong willed and wise ninja to pass it to?"

Oonki, "i am Tsuchikage, that is all, the ninja are fine in the village. When i am defeated there are those that will be looked at to replace me."

3rd, "Dammit, Oonki iwas afraid of this. You haven't changed a bit, not in power that is impressive, but in self confidence."

he is reattaching his leg an dbegins to stand, he still only has one arm.

Oonki, "careful Sensei my guard is not down in the least."

3rd, "you know very well i have no jutsu that i can do with one arm, there is all this sand and crushed diamonds in all our wounds slowing down the regeneration, that kazekage kid is young but smart."

He walks a closer to Oonki who is still in the air out of arms reach.

"you know you did not have to come out here, i bet you are the oldest kage aren't you? Don't answer, you could have easily gave them intel on my jutsu. But had to come out here to prove you deserve to be kage. My dear student, the only one that needed convincing of your abilities, was always you."

Oonki, "you are wrong, they doubted me they all doubted me, they wondered why i was your student."

Flashback of people whispering behind a young Oonki walking behind the 3rd.

3rd, "they wondered why i picked you as my student ...so late.[Oonki is shocked] You were ready long before that in skill, but your self view was never equal to it."

Oonki, "so why, why pick me then?"

3rd, "i hoped being my student and successor woud show you that you are worthy of admiration, without loud boasting and salty attitude to desquise how you really feel."

Oonki turning his head slightly down and away, "i just thought, i always ...I am the 4th Tsuchikage, after this, the 5th Tsuchikage will join the other kages in hq."

3rd, "good choice, goodbye, 4th Tsuchikage. I know you will pick wisely."

Oonki, "Tombstone Monument!"

A layer of rock covers the 3rd and also creates a small pedestal. It is an actual monument for a fallen Leader.

"That is the other reason i had to be the one to stop you, this is what you deserve,sensei."

Mizukage is in the most peices, "this damn sand it keeps getting in the way! When i get myself together i am gonna kill one of you, i don't care which, maybe both!"

Gaara just looks at him.

Oonki speaks to Oaara, "should we give the signal now?"

we see the ninja laying in wait.

Gaara is about to speak when, "ahhhhh!!"

Oonki, "Kazekage!"

4th Raikage, He is has both legs but no right arm. Black Lightning is running across and around his body.

"you cannot hold down the Raikage of the Cloud for so long you one, You are strong but my Black lightning is always stronger!"

Oonki is holding Gaara, {He is alive just knocked out. I hate fighting this guy i barely made it last time,20 years ago!}

Mizukage, "just kill one of them!"

4th, "shut up. i will show you who why i am the strongest of the Cloud1"

As 3rd walks towards the Tsuchikage and Gaara an explosion occurs right at his feet, stopping himand leaving a big hole.

3rd looks up, "well well, if it isn't B.."

We see the A standing from neck up.

3rd, "but who is this? this isn't that raping fool, no wait well shit how long have i been gone..."

We see standing with his left hand sparking with Black lightning. "Darui."

Raikage, "I see you are without a left hand, so i am lending mine."

4th, "you are leaving, don't you want to test your might against me?!"

A, "I am currenty the 2nd fastest ninj aliving and tied with being the strongest with another Kage, no there are no more tests for me."

He walks over to Gaara and picks him up. As he is about to turn to leave.

Oonki, "call my student to my side i have Urgent news that may not weight til later."

He shows where he is bleeding on his side from a deep wound, "When we clashed Dust Elements he managed to sneak a few rock shards through."

Raikage A, "I understand, which one of the two am i summoning for you?"

we cut to Naruto by himself running in RSM, "i hope i get to them in time they may be way their heads, those are some cunning and skillful opponents! But then again, so are they."

we see Kakashi up close,{i will cut them all down if i have to, for the village for Naruto, my life is forfeit.}

We see Kakashi's eyes with Naruto's under them and Darui's eyes with the 4th under his.

Is Naruto going to help Kakashi's team ro someone else? Is Darui strong enough to defeat the creator of Black Lightning?

Next: "Just in time"

^moar ?

jericho Uzimaki · 07-07-2011, 01:21 PM

Was that too much talking in there guys, i didn't wanna get to sappy. I just wanted to do a little character development on Oonki and have Gaara confront his dad. But Gaara isn't Naruto, he doesn't a hug and be told everythingis alright, it wouldn't fit.

So let me have it!

Marlboro · 07-07-2011, 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jericho Uzimaki

549.

"Father/son Day II"

Leaf, "yes Master Naruto, you are correct i am ashamed of my previous actions. I will put th epast behind me, for the Leaf for the Alliance and for peace."

Naruto, "Good, but don't call me 'master', Naruto is just fine. But when i am kage then you have to address me correctly..lol."

Bee, "Now where to, stay here there is nothing to do?"

Naruto nods his head. He goes RS then he and Bee depart.

Kage scene.

All the Kages are laid out, with limbs detached.

Mizukage, "I always hated that jutsu!"

Raikage Damn we are spread out al over the place, it will take some moments before we regenerate."

He is crawling towards his left leg.

Gaara stands over the 4th kzkg, "i see yoiu tried to sheild yourself from the blast, unfortunatley for you it did not work well enough."

the 4th has both arms separated from his body and a lower leg detached as well.

4th, "Well it wouldn't be the first plane i had that turned out differently. Gaara, I would be lying if i said i am sorry for putting the Jink in side you. I did it as kage, as protector of the village."

Gaara, "did it have to be your youngest son? Did it have to be any child at all?"

4th, "who better to protect the village when I can't then my son? We have for generations protected the Sand, you know that."

Gaara looks at him, "I understand, no thought of the consequences to your son, just the village. I do not agree, but i understand."

4th, "One more thing Gaara, when you age and pass the title on, if Temari has a child and you don't, that kid is your best bet. She is just like your mother was."

Gaara, "we agre on one thing, father....Diamond Sand coffin!"

A glittery sand shell surrounds the 4th.

3rd Tsuchikage, "well,well. I guess the little knuckle head grew up."

Oonki flyin gdown towards him as he lays spread out on the ground, "Indeed, Sensei, indeed.

3rd Tchkg, "and old. why are you still kage, has the village grown weak in my abscence? ther are no strong willed and wise ninja to pass it to?"

Oonki, "i am Tsuchikage, that is all, the ninja are fine in the village. When i am defeated there are those that will be looked at to replace me."

3rd, "Dammit, Oonki iwas afraid of this. You haven't changed a bit, not in power that is impressive, but in self confidence."

he is reattaching his leg an dbegins to stand, he still only has one arm.

Oonki, "careful Sensei my guard is not down in the least."

3rd, "you know very well i have no jutsu that i can do with one arm, there is all this sand and crushed diamonds in all our wounds slowing down the regeneration, that kazekage kid is young but smart."

He walks a closer to Oonki who is still in the air out of arms reach.

"you know you did not have to come out here, i bet you are the oldest kage aren't you? Don't answer, you could have easily gave them intel on my jutsu. But had to come out here to prove you deserve to be kage. My dear student, the only one that needed convincing of your abilities, was always you."

Oonki, "you are wrong, they doubted me they all doubted me, they wondered why i was your student."

Flashback of people whispering behind a young Oonki walking behind the 3rd.

3rd, "they wondered why i picked you as my student ...so late.[Oonki is shocked] You were ready long before that in skill, but your self view was never equal to it."

Oonki, "so why, why pick me then?"

3rd, "i hoped being my student and successor woud show you that you are worthy of admiration, without loud boasting and salty attitude to desquise how you really feel."

Oonki turning his head slightly down and away, "i just thought, i always ...I am the 4th Tsuchikage, after this, the 5th Tsuchikage will join the other kages in hq."

3rd, "good choice, goodbye, 4th Tsuchikage. I know you will pick wisely."

Oonki, "Tombstone Monument!"

A layer of rock covers the 3rd and also creates a small pedestal. It is an actual monument for a fallen Leader.

"That is the other reason i had to be the one to stop you, this is what you deserve,sensei."

Mizukage is in the most peices, "this damn sand it keeps getting in the way! When i get myself together i am gonna kill one of you, i don't care which, maybe both!"

Gaara just looks at him.

Oonki speaks to Oaara, "should we give the signal now?"

we see the ninja laying in wait.

Gaara is about to speak when, "ahhhhh!!"

Oonki, "Kazekage!"

4th Raikage, He is has both legs but no right arm. Black Lightning is running across and around his body.

"you cannot hold down the Raikage of the Cloud for so long you one, You are strong but my Black lightning is always stronger!"

Oonki is holding Gaara, {He is alive just knocked out. I hate fighting this guy i barely made it last time,20 years ago!}

Mizukage, "just kill one of them!"

4th, "shut up. i will show you who why i am the strongest of the Cloud1"

As 3rd walks towards the Tsuchikage and Gaara an explosion occurs right at his feet, stopping himand leaving a big hole.

3rd looks up, "well well, if it isn't B.."

We see the A standing from neck up.

3rd, "but who is this? this isn't that raping fool, no wait well shit how long have i been gone..."

We see standing with his left hand sparking with Black lightning. "Darui."

Raikage, "I see you are without a left hand, so i am lending mine."

4th, "you are leaving, don't you want to test your might against me?!"

A, "I am currenty the 2nd fastest ninj aliving and tied with being the strongest with another Kage, no there are no more tests for me."

He walks over to Gaara and picks him up. As he is about to turn to leave.

Oonki, "call my student to my side i have Urgent news that may not weight til later."

He shows where he is bleeding on his side from a deep wound, "When we clashed Dust Elements he managed to sneak a few rock shards through."

Raikage A, "I understand, which one of the two am i summoning for you?"

we cut to Naruto by himself running in RSM, "i hope i get to them in time they may be way their heads, those are some cunning and skillful opponents! But then again, so are they."

we see Kakashi up close,{i will cut them all down if i have to, for the village for Naruto, my life is forfeit.}

We see Kakashi's eyes with Naruto's under them and Darui's eyes with the 4th under his.

Is Naruto going to help Kakashi's team ro someone else? Is Darui strong enough to defeat the creator of Black Lightning?

Next: "Just in time"

I need moar!

apacolypz · 07-08-2011, 02:58 AM

@ Jericho Uzumaki, Yeah man def from Raleigh..hey I will inbox u my email..yeah I draw...it's been a while.. i used to draw and write dbz adaptions back in the day....need to pick that back u...thanks man for serving our country. I appreciate that man, i enjoy your writing style as well...good predictions man i will have one out very very very soon.

xxMESTxx · 07-08-2011, 05:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jericho Uzimaki

i just noticed your in/from Raleigh. I am from fayetteville!

I am in Txeas now due to the Air Force, but i will probably be back through between this year andnext summer. We should PM our email addresses maybe we could work on some stuff, i like your writing style, you draw too?

Haha I know its not directed at me but im reppin garner

krurk · 07-08-2011, 04:23 PM

Chapter 547

-----Gaara's Determination------

"Gaara! What do you mean you do not have one tailed beast anymore." his father says

"The people you are fighting for took one tail out of me, it would had killed me if it hadn't been for the elders of the sand, and our Leaf allies." Gaara says

"Ah so you are now allies with the Leaf, when Orochimaru killed me, we were set to destroy the hidden leaf, what idiot would go back on my orders as Kazekage." his father says

"I did, I am the Kazekage, and I am the one who will send you back from where you came." Gaara says

Gaara's father is shocked staring at Gaara, Gaara using Sand Coffin to try and swallow his father but his father uses his ability to magnetize gold to stop the attack. Gaara creates a sand whip and sends it at his father, his father creates a gold whip and begins slashing at the sand, the sand keeps getting destroyed by the gold and moving closer to Gaara, all of a sudden a huge wave of sands comes from the ground destroying the gold whip.

"So you have improved my son, it is good to see you gained some strength as Kazekage, but you are still no match for me." his father says

Gaara's father begins trying to pull gold out of the earth but is struggling to pull up anything at all, he looks around trying to figure out what is happening to his powers.

"I used my sand to crush up the gold minerals, that is why I have been on the defensive, I needed to be able to stop your attacks, and now, it is time for you to go." Gaara says

Gaara uses sand coffin and his father begins to slowly be taken up by the sand....

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"My apprentice, you are still alive but you have gotten very old." Dust Element says

"I AM NOT THAT OLD!" Tsuchikage says

"Enough talk, its the two of you against four previous Kage, you do not stand a chance." Dust Element says

"It is Gaara and myself, two Kage, plus our men." Tsuchikage says

The Tsuchikage gives the signal and the alliance shinobi attack, Dust Element uses his sub particle technique to take out a few shinobi and the Raikage uses black lightning as well.

Tsuchikage takes advantage of this and attacks his former sensei but it is blocked by black lightning, Tsuchikage uses Dust element technique flash to blind the enemy. This allied the alliance shinbi to get closer for close range combat as they attack the former Raikage and Mizukage.

Tsuchikage looks over and sees Gaara trapping his father in sand coffin, he uses this oppurtunity to use dust particle technique on the former Kazekage.

"Sub particle technique!" Tsuchikage yells

"Good job Gaara, I am proud of you." the former Kazekage says as he is taken away by the Tsuchikage's technique

"Gaara, we need to take out my former sensei next he will be the biggest challenge." Tsuchikage says

"Okay, we can do the same thing we just di....." Gaara is cut off

"sub particle TECHNIQUE." yells dust element.

A square is sent flying at Gaara as the Tsuchikage pushes him out of the way being absored into the sqaure and shruken down.

"Kazekage, I leave the rest to you." Tsuchikage says as he is diminished to nothing

Gaara uses sand Tsunami driving the enemy back from their position to give the alliance shinobi time to rest and re-group.

"I need you to send word back, the Tsuchikage has been killed, we may need back up." Gaara says

"Yes sir." a shinobi says

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"Raikage and Hokage, we have a report that the Tsuchikage has been killed." a shinobi says

Tsunade and Ei look at one another stunned, Tsunade sits down trying to think of a plan and Raikage punches the wall.

"We need to send Gaara reinforcements, he is going against the former Mizukage, Tsuchikage, and Raikage." Shukaku says as he looks at Ei.

"MY FATHER IS THERE?!?!" Ei yells.

"Raikage relax, we need to come up with a plan." Tsunade says

"Yeah, I have one, its called tell Naruto and Bee to head there, and I will head out as well." Raikage says

"But sir, you are the comman...." Shukaku is cut off

"I relinquish command to Tsunade, I am not made for this politics stuff anyway." Raikage says as he walks out the door.

"Let Bee and Naruto know they are going to be needed there once Naruto has eliminated all the imposters." Tsunade says

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"One of your kage are down already, I hope you have a plan because they will send more shinobi." Black Zetsu says

"Oh I have one don't worry, I have an ace." Kabuto says

"HAHAHA Well if it wasn't for Madara, we wouldn't stand a chance in this war, with the jinks and Sasuke, there is no way we can lose." Black Zetsu says

"Yeah well, my ace is much more dangerous than just two mere Uchiha." Kabuto says

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End Chapter.

Konnaha_yellow_flash · 07-08-2011, 04:48 PM

I could see Onoki sacrificing himself to show gaara he hasnt "forsaken himself". Thus gaara gets upset and awakens the use of the Bloodline Expansion allowing him to use the dust element too. Well, that would take a couple chapters not just one IMO.

Vishnu · 07-08-2011, 04:56 PM

Awankens the use of bloodline expansion? You're really desperate aren't you?

Sensei-Q · 07-08-2011, 05:43 PM

Ignore that shit, Vishnu.

Vishnu · 07-08-2011, 05:46 PM

Yeah..let's go with the : cool story, bro!

Konnaha_yellow_flash · 07-08-2011, 05:46 PM

Onoki said theres a SECRET to using the Blood line expansion, not a special KKG one has to be born with in particular. IMO, since gaara already has (most likely, but not confirmed yet) a KKG to magnetism "wind+earth". He has a chance of learning the BLE since all hes missing is the fire element. Gaara could possibly figure out the jutsu by watching Onoki and the 2tsuchi go at it..

Vishnu · 07-08-2011, 05:51 PM

Actually that's the problem. He is missing the fire element. He needs to have an affinity for that element so he can use it. And since he doesn't have one he can't use the dust element. And you can't comprehend a jutsu's principles just by watching it performed.

07-07-2011, 06:46 AM	#16
apacolypz Jounin Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: NC Raleigh Posts: 979 Thanks: 496 Thanked 669 Times in 293 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Jericho....Great one man! I def enjoyed the use of diamond in the sand...You pumped me up for a book long prediction lol! I am personally not feeling this chapter much...but I will make the best out of it hoping for next week.

07-07-2011, 01:01 PM	#18
jericho Uzimaki ANBU Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Fayetteville, NC Posts: 1,619 Thanks: 1,892 Thanked 1,559 Times in 504 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers 549. "Father/son Day II" Leaf, "yes Master Naruto, you are correct i am ashamed of my previous actions. I will put th epast behind me, for the Leaf for the Alliance and for peace." Naruto, "Good, but don't call me 'master', Naruto is just fine. But when i am kage then you have to address me correctly..lol." Bee, "Now where to, stay here there is nothing to do?" Naruto nods his head. He goes RS then he and Bee depart. Kage scene. All the Kages are laid out, with limbs detached. Mizukage, "I always hated that jutsu!" Raikage, "Damn we are spread out all over the place, it will take some moments before we regenerate." He is crawling towards his left leg. Gaara stands over the 4th kzkg, "i see you tried to shield yourself from the blast, unfortunately for you it did not work well enough." the 4th has both arms separated from his body and a lower leg detached as well. 4th, "Well it wouldn't be the first plan i had that turned out differently. Gaara, I would be lying if i said i am sorry for putting the Jink in side you. I did it as Kage, as protector of the village." Gaara, "did it have to be your youngest son? Did it have to be any child at all?" 4th, "who better to protect the village when I can't then my son? We have for generations protected the Sand, you know that." Gaara looks at him, "I understand, no thought of the consequences to your son, just the village. I do not agree, but i understand." 4th, "One more thing Gaara, when you age and pass the title on, if Temari has a child and you don't, that kid is your best bet. She is just like your mother was." Gaara, "we agree on one thing, father....Diamond Sand coffin!" A glittery sand shell surrounds the 4th. 3rd Tsuchikage, "well,well. I guess the little knuckle head grew up." Oonki flying down towards him as he lays spread out on the ground, "Indeed, Sensei, indeed. 3rd Tchkg, "and old. why are you still Kage, has the village grown weak in my absence? there are no strong willed and wise ninja to pass it to?" Oonki, "i am Tsuchikage, that is all, the ninja are fine in the village. When i am defeated there are those that will be looked at to replace me." 3rd, "Dammit, Oonki i was afraid of this. You haven't changed a bit, your power is impressive, but no self confidence." He is reattaching his leg and begins to stand, he still only has one arm. Oonki, "careful Sensei my guard is not down in the least." 3rd, "you know very well i have no jutsu that i can do with one arm, there is all this sand and crushed diamonds in all our wounds slowing down the regeneration, that Kazekage kid is young but smart." He walks a closer to Oonki who is still in the air out of arms reach. "you know you did not have to come out here, i bet you are the oldest Kage aren't you? Don't answer, you could have easily gave them Intel on my jutsu. But had to come out here to prove you deserve to be Kage. My dear student, the only one that needed convincing of your abilities, was always you." Oonki, "you are wrong, they doubted me they all doubted me, they wondered why i was your student." Flashback of people whispering behind a young Oonki walking behind the 3rd. 3rd, "they wondered why i picked you as my student ...so late.[Oonki is shocked] You were ready long before that in skill, but your self view was never equal to it." Oonki, "so why, why pick me then?" 3rd, "i hoped being my student and successor would show you that you are worthy of admiration, without loud boasting and salty attitude to disguise how you really feel." Oonki turning his head slightly down and away, "i just thought, i always ...I am the 4th Tsuchikage, after this, the 5th Tsuchikage will join the other kages in HQ." 3rd, "good choice, goodbye, 4th Tsuchikage. I know you will pick wisely." Oonki, "Tombstone Monument!" A layer of rock covers the 3rd and also creates a small pedestal. It is an actual monument for a fallen Leader. "That is the other reason i had to be the one to stop you, this is what you deserve,sensei." Mizukage is in the most pieces, "this damn sand it keeps getting in the way! When i get myself together i am gonna kill one of you, i don't care which, maybe both!" Gaara just looks at him. Oonki speaks to Gaara, "should we give the signal now?" we see the ninja laying in wait. Gaara is about to speak when, "ahhhhh!!" Oonki, "Kazekage!" 4th Raikage He is has both legs but no left arm. Black Lightning is running across and around his body. "you cannot hold down the Raikage of the Cloud for so long. You are strong but my Black lightning is always stronger!" Oonki is holding Gaara, {He is alive just knocked out. I hate fighting this guy i barely made it last time,20 years ago!} Mizukage, "just kill one of them!" 4th, "shut up. i will show you who why i am the strongest of the Cloud!" As 3rd walks towards the Tsuchikage and Gaara an explosion occurs right at his feet, stopping him and leaving a big hole. 3rd looks up, "well well, if it isn't B.." We see the A standing from neck up. 3rd, "but who is this? this isn't that raping fool, no wait well shit how long have i been gone..." We see standing with his left hand sparking with Black lightning. "Darui." Raikage, "I see you are without a left hand, so i am lending you mine." 4th, "you are leaving, don't you want to test your might against me?!" A, "I am currently the 2nd fastest ninja living and tied with being the strongest with another Kage, no there are no more tests for me." He walks over to Gaara and picks him up. As he is about to turn to leave. Oonki, "call my student to my side i have Urgent news that may not weight til later." He shows where he is bleeding on his side from a deep wound, "When we clashed Dust Elements he managed to sneak a few rock shards through." Raikage A, "I understand, which one of the two am i summoning for you?" we cut to Naruto by himself running in RSM, "i hope i get to them in time they may be way their heads, those are some cunning and skillful opponents! But then again, so are they." we see Kakashi up close,{i will cut them all down if i have to, for the village for Naruto, my life is forfeit.} We see Kakashi's eyes with Naruto's under them and Darui's eyes with the 4th under his. Is Naruto going to help Kakashi's team our someone else? Is Darui strong enough to defeat the creator of Black Lightning? Next: "Just in time" __________________ Gamble Joshua the Rogue Transformers:Generations For NaruHina fans First Orange knuckle head ninja The Question Last edited by jericho Uzimaki; 07-08-2011 at 10:33 AM.

07-07-2011, 01:21 PM	#20
jericho Uzimaki ANBU Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Fayetteville, NC Posts: 1,619 Thanks: 1,892 Thanked 1,559 Times in 504 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Was that too much talking in there guys, i didn't wanna get to sappy. I just wanted to do a little character development on Oonki and have Gaara confront his dad. But Gaara isn't Naruto, he doesn't a hug and be told everythingis alright, it wouldn't fit. So let me have it! __________________ Gamble Joshua the Rogue Transformers:Generations For NaruHina fans First Orange knuckle head ninja The Question

07-08-2011, 02:58 AM	#22
apacolypz Jounin Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: NC Raleigh Posts: 979 Thanks: 496 Thanked 669 Times in 293 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers @ Jericho Uzumaki, Yeah man def from Raleigh..hey I will inbox u my email..yeah I draw...it's been a while.. i used to draw and write dbz adaptions back in the day....need to pick that back u...thanks man for serving our country. I appreciate that man, i enjoy your writing style as well...good predictions man i will have one out very very very soon.

07-08-2011, 04:23 PM	#24
krurk ANBU Join Date: Jul 2008 Age: 22 Posts: 1,534 Thanks: 76 Thanked 669 Times in 311 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Chapter 547 -----Gaara's Determination------ "Gaara! What do you mean you do not have one tailed beast anymore." his father says "The people you are fighting for took one tail out of me, it would had killed me if it hadn't been for the elders of the sand, and our Leaf allies." Gaara says "Ah so you are now allies with the Leaf, when Orochimaru killed me, we were set to destroy the hidden leaf, what idiot would go back on my orders as Kazekage." his father says "I did, I am the Kazekage, and I am the one who will send you back from where you came." Gaara says Gaara's father is shocked staring at Gaara, Gaara using Sand Coffin to try and swallow his father but his father uses his ability to magnetize gold to stop the attack. Gaara creates a sand whip and sends it at his father, his father creates a gold whip and begins slashing at the sand, the sand keeps getting destroyed by the gold and moving closer to Gaara, all of a sudden a huge wave of sands comes from the ground destroying the gold whip. "So you have improved my son, it is good to see you gained some strength as Kazekage, but you are still no match for me." his father says Gaara's father begins trying to pull gold out of the earth but is struggling to pull up anything at all, he looks around trying to figure out what is happening to his powers. "I used my sand to crush up the gold minerals, that is why I have been on the defensive, I needed to be able to stop your attacks, and now, it is time for you to go." Gaara says Gaara uses sand coffin and his father begins to slowly be taken up by the sand.... -------------------------------------------------- "My apprentice, you are still alive but you have gotten very old." Dust Element says "I AM NOT THAT OLD!" Tsuchikage says "Enough talk, its the two of you against four previous Kage, you do not stand a chance." Dust Element says "It is Gaara and myself, two Kage, plus our men." Tsuchikage says The Tsuchikage gives the signal and the alliance shinobi attack, Dust Element uses his sub particle technique to take out a few shinobi and the Raikage uses black lightning as well. Tsuchikage takes advantage of this and attacks his former sensei but it is blocked by black lightning, Tsuchikage uses Dust element technique flash to blind the enemy. This allied the alliance shinbi to get closer for close range combat as they attack the former Raikage and Mizukage. Tsuchikage looks over and sees Gaara trapping his father in sand coffin, he uses this oppurtunity to use dust particle technique on the former Kazekage. "Sub particle technique!" Tsuchikage yells "Good job Gaara, I am proud of you." the former Kazekage says as he is taken away by the Tsuchikage's technique "Gaara, we need to take out my former sensei next he will be the biggest challenge." Tsuchikage says "Okay, we can do the same thing we just di....." Gaara is cut off "sub particle TECHNIQUE." yells dust element. A square is sent flying at Gaara as the Tsuchikage pushes him out of the way being absored into the sqaure and shruken down. "Kazekage, I leave the rest to you." Tsuchikage says as he is diminished to nothing Gaara uses sand Tsunami driving the enemy back from their position to give the alliance shinobi time to rest and re-group. "I need you to send word back, the Tsuchikage has been killed, we may need back up." Gaara says "Yes sir." a shinobi says ------------------------------------------------------- "Raikage and Hokage, we have a report that the Tsuchikage has been killed." a shinobi says Tsunade and Ei look at one another stunned, Tsunade sits down trying to think of a plan and Raikage punches the wall. "We need to send Gaara reinforcements, he is going against the former Mizukage, Tsuchikage, and Raikage." Shukaku says as he looks at Ei. "MY FATHER IS THERE?!?!" Ei yells. "Raikage relax, we need to come up with a plan." Tsunade says "Yeah, I have one, its called tell Naruto and Bee to head there, and I will head out as well." Raikage says "But sir, you are the comman...." Shukaku is cut off "I relinquish command to Tsunade, I am not made for this politics stuff anyway." Raikage says as he walks out the door. "Let Bee and Naruto know they are going to be needed there once Naruto has eliminated all the imposters." Tsunade says -------------------------------------------------- "One of your kage are down already, I hope you have a plan because they will send more shinobi." Black Zetsu says "Oh I have one don't worry, I have an ace." Kabuto says "HAHAHA Well if it wasn't for Madara, we wouldn't stand a chance in this war, with the jinks and Sasuke, there is no way we can lose." Black Zetsu says "Yeah well, my ace is much more dangerous than just two mere Uchiha." Kabuto says ---------------------------------------- End Chapter.

07-08-2011, 04:56 PM	#26
Vishnu Hunter-Nin Join Date: May 2011 Location: Romania Posts: 1,355 Thanks: 1,883 Thanked 2,200 Times in 804 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Awankens the use of bloodline expansion? You're really desperate aren't you?

07-08-2011, 05:43 PM	#27
Sensei-Q ✪✪✪✪✪ Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Mijdrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands. Posts: 4,279 Thanks: 5,192 Thanked 2,904 Times in 1,711 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Ignore that shit, Vishnu. __________________ "Science has made us gods even before we are worthy of being men." Jean Rostand

07-08-2011, 05:46 PM	#28
Vishnu Hunter-Nin Join Date: May 2011 Location: Romania Posts: 1,355 Thanks: 1,883 Thanked 2,200 Times in 804 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Yeah..let's go with the : cool story, bro!

07-08-2011, 05:51 PM	#30
Vishnu Hunter-Nin Join Date: May 2011 Location: Romania Posts: 1,355 Thanks: 1,883 Thanked 2,200 Times in 804 Posts	Re: 547 prediction/ spoilers Actually that's the problem. He is missing the fire element. He needs to have an affinity for that element so he can use it. And since he doesn't have one he can't use the dust element. And you can't comprehend a jutsu's principles just by watching it performed.

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