UzumakiUchiha

woody i am waiting for you to continue this to the next chapter or the one after next please. I mean come on you cant stop there, its an unfinished subplot. If you want to stop, can you atleast stop when you finish that subplot or without any cliff hangers lol. Sorry my writing and english isnt that good, i hope you know what i am trying to say

Cheers

k-lai

It is coz i think somewhere he used a similar tech on kushina to alert him wherever she is so it's not that far fetched

Edit: Oh please finish it cos i wanna knw the types of training he might give to naruto

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woody_3162

How can I say no when you guys ask so nicely.
I'll have it up tomorrow.

@uzumakiuchiha - I understand and sorry I can't help myself, when you read manga for so long you can help but leave a chapter on a cliffhanger! ;-)

k-lai

^I'm still here waiting, lol..

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apacolypz

A most interesting turn of events...I think it is plausible. Minato learned alot from Kushina...He may have something of sort hidden as a backup. Did you kill off Kabuto...so quickly?? I hope not....the white snake isn't that easy to annihilate. I figure he can teach Naruto a few things...how to use his Shadow clones as the FTG technique and teleport from clone to clone mentally and physically, teach Naruto a way to use his Rasenshuriken to it's ultimate potential, Teach him techniques his mother used, since Tsunade did say his ninjutsu is just like his mothers, Naruto needs to learn three things if possible, how to use restriction seals, another affinity is possible, and how to use barriers to aid him in fights. Other than that the main character has a huge arsenal of jutsus. We have not even seen him use his fusion technique with the toads yet in a real battle (not talking about the stupid arc with Crystal chick) (ANIME)

I think you may have an awesome prediction under way..hoped I helped boost ur ideas

damn I want to steal your thunder a little

woody_3162

You Did thanks, just completed 559 though not sure if you guys will like as there's not much action but i couldn't over look it. will do a 560 to cap it off in a few hours once i get home. enjoy

woody_3162

Naruto 559: Legacy

Panel shows Alliance headquarters. Tsunade, raikage and shikaku are stood together.

Tsunade: The fourth?!! How can that be?! How could they summon the fourth?!!
Raikage: We need to confirm this intel asap Tsunade, if they really have managed to summon Minato then we may need to retreat and reformulate our battle strategy.
Tsunade...
Raikage: As we are currently deployed, with Minato under their control we could be annihilated before the day is out.
Shikaku: if you would take my advice, raikage and hokage, then I wouldn't worry about the Fourth or Naruto.
Raikage: What?!!! If this intel is true he already has Naruto do you even understand the-
Tsunade: Raikage if you please, ok Shikaku explain.

Shikaku: based on the intel we received the Fourth appeared next to Naruto who was already unconscious, and said 'do not worry about him, hold the tide as long as you can' and then disappeared again taking Naruto.

Tsunade: You think that the Fourth is not under the enemies control...then why not bring Naruto here, why not come here himself?!

Raikage: I agree with Tsunade here Shikaku, with Minato on our side the tides of battle would have completely turned in our favour, Minato would
surely have known that.

Shikaku: I can only surmise from the facts available, but he spoke which means at the very least his personality was intact, if what he said was true then it indicates he does have a plan and he wants us to hold out for as long possible and more importantly...

Raikage:...Damn you Shikaku more importantly what?!!
Shikaku: More importantly no one has seen him since! There are no reports of him appearing anywhere else on the battlefield or attacking any alliance ninja.

The Raikage and Tsunade look at each other with shocked expressions.

Raikage: Yes, you're right, if under the enemy control there would be no need to hold him back, we would already be suffering heavy losses at his hand.

Tsunade thinking: Minato, just what are you planning!!


Scene switch to naruto

Naruto is standing with his jacket off, he is breathing slightly heavily.
Minato is standing a little way off facing him looking as calm as ever with a smile on his face.

Naruto: so how long was I unconscious?
Minato: You were out for about 2 hours after I brought you here, though that did give me a chance to look around and do a little reconnaissance.
Naruto: so what did you find out?!
Minato:...a lot of what I already expected when i realised there was a war going on...and some which I hoped not to learn.
Naruto:?!!
Minato: anyway that can wait for later, so i've seen what you can do in base mode, now show me your sage mode that you've been raving about.

Naruto forms the seals for the Kagebunshin jutsu
Naruto: well it's about time.

Scene switch to Madarra

He is standing in an open area surrounded by his paths.

Madarra thinking: ( I can't be sure but it seemed like I saw...)
I think I had better pay Kabuto a visit after all, if that really was the Fourth then Kabuto could be more troublesome than expected.

The paths suddenly shoot off as Madarra begins to warp away.

Scene switch back to Naruto

Minato is standing ready, he's breathing slightly faster himself now.
Minato: I can't believe you managed to complete the rasengan AND sage mode! And so many different variations too, ha that throwing one took me by surprise! You certainly have grown into a fine ninja naruto. At this rate you'll be a Kage in no time.

Naruto stands a little distance away panting heavily. A big grin crosses his face as he hears this.
Naruto: I've still not managed to touch you once though, I've known you were wicked but I never thought you'd be this strong!
Minato: hey I am your dad after all.
Naruto: You've not seen me in Kyubbi mode yet hehe
Minato:??!
Naruto: but why can't we save the training for later, we could take care of Madarra easily with you on our side, let's go end this war now!
Minato:...No naruto, I won't be able to fight in this war and I can't defeat Madarra.
Naruto:?!! But you're the Fourth hokage, your the most badass hokage that ever lived!!
Minato: Naruto I've seen Madarra and what the rest of this war contains, I know what you're up against and as I am now I would not be able to help you win, at best I might be able to provide some support at worst I'd be captured and possibly even used against you.

Naruto: As you are now?! What...what's wrong with you?!

Minato sits down and motions for naruto to come sit next to him.
Minato: Naruto the Edo tensei technique that was used to bring my soul back is a permanent technique, it only dispels once the user releases you or allows you the freedom to move on your own, the user that brought me back did neither of these.
Naruto:...then how...
Minato: I learnt a lot from the Uzumaki clan and even more from your mother, I can honestly say that I might never have become hokage if I hadn’t met her.
Naruto:...
Minato: I have seals placed on my body that me and your mother created, they stop me from being controlled by exterior forces.
Naruto: then you’re free to do what you want! You can help us win the war!!
Minato: No naruto I can’t, you see the seals technically don’t stop you being controlled but more allow you to override any control placed on you.
Naruto:…I…I don’t understand.
Minato: *Sigh* you can move pretty fast can’t you Naruto
Naruto nods his head in agreement
But how fast could you move if you physically had to move and place your legs with your hands?

Naruto looks up at his dad in surprise

Minato: You see I have to will every action that I wish to take to override the constant control of the edo tensei technique, which means I am currently slower than I originally was. I’ve seen Madarra too whilst you were unconscious, and he has certainly improved now that he has both the sharingan and the rinnegan in one body, if I fought him now I would certainly lose with my current handicap.
Naruto: He has the rinnegan and the sharingan?!!
Minato: yes, me joining the battle now would only cause more problems for the ninja alliance.
Naruto:…
Minato: you see I could quite easily take out the few edo’s that are still out on the field, but against madarra my reaction speed would be too slow and also if I join the battle there is the possibility that the alliance army would get too complacent thinking they’d already won. It is best that this generation win this fight themselves.

Naruto: But I’ve not been able to land one punch on you this whole time and I’ve really been trying! Are you telling me your even faster than this?!
Minato: haha, yes much faster, also you’ve not been able to hit me because even though you have a wide variety of attacks your fighting style is pretty direct.
Naruto: what??
Minato: hehheh just like your mother. once I saw you fighting for a few minutes it was easy to figure out your fighting style, also your moves are too open and obvious and its quite easy to read your attacks once you know what to look for. I’ve been able to prepare my counters as soon as you try to move.
Naruto:!!?? Then what do I do?
Minato: Well since you don’t have a couple of years to gain experience and refine your fighting style I guess there is only one thing to do
Naruto:…
Minato: I will pass on the legacy of the Uzumaki and Namikaze clans to the one person that can win this war....to Uzumaki Naruto...son of the yellow flash!!!

Next Week: Inheritence

k-lai

Never mind the no fighting that was great, keep it up

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UzumakiUchiha

Woody man, that was AWESOME. Its not always about the fighting, its the script and the dialogues you create between the characters that gives you the excitement and for more chapters. I always love reunions and cant wait for the next chapter.

If its possible and your willing to do it, i think you should do more chapters until you finish the subplot of minato, until he dissapears, you can call it the " return of minato arc" or something like that lol.


After minato helping naruto with his jutsus and fighting , It would be nice to see some other reunions like with:

Kakashi > (e.g. minato saves kakashi just in time from getting killed in battle or save him from a epic suicide jutsu kakashi about to perform)

Tsunade and Raikage> (bit of some nice cheesy dialogue between tsunade and minato, reaction and dialogues between raikage would be quite funny i think)

(One possible way to end minato is killed by sasuke in battle, for example after the meeting with raikage or tsunade, obviosuly minato aids in the war for battle startegies or whatever, after going in a mission by himself with some clever plan a plot against madara he come acrosses Sasuke, and sasuke kills him in battle.

When naruto finds out the truth, after some period of time, we see naruto and sasuke facing eachother for thier final battle with a bit of intense dialogues between naruto and sasuke about killing his father and other relevant conversations, then STOP! no need to write out the fight between sasuke and naruto.

sorry I just wrote how i would go with the story and just trying to give out some ideas and obviously you can make it so much better or in a different turning point and yeah lol i know I am asking for too much, but hey i am fan of your fictions. You obviously dont have to do it lol.

k-lai

^Don't worry, with u asking nicely above how can he refuse?

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Maybe, just maybe I may be able to do it and you would not be there when I'm doing it but just so you know, I did it without your help and that'll be my legacy.

woody_3162

You know I'm actually thoroughly enjoying writing this 'return of Minato arc'
But damn you run into so many frickin prOblems lol.

I've just written about a chapter and a half just between Minato and naruto no scene switches
And I'm glad you like story in between action as thats what it mostly is...with a little tutorial. I've been dying to get to the action myself but damn it's taking it's time coming!

Anyway I will finish this 'arc off' but the next one will be tomorrow, but based on what I have so far you'll have two chaps instead of one!

G'night for now

apacolypz

I would enjoy writing along side this arc..seems fun and I feel the need to ask permission...I don't wanna get stoned for stealing your ideas or thunder


Enjoyable story indeed so far

Vishnu

Guys we don't we move to 558 instead? I plan to go on another prediction spree this week. Woody i think that you should do the same. I don't know how good my pred are but yours are amazing.

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woody_3162

@ Vishnu

Sounds Good, i'll move this arc to 558 and add a link for the previous predics.
And mate your predics are awesome, its you and Jericho that started giving me ideas and got me in the mood to start writing predics. Keep em coming!!

@ Apocalypz, the more the merrier! Go for it!! I'd love to see it written out in a different way myself but don't have the time to do one in 5 different ways, so would love to see different takes on the same arc.

By the way I just had an amazing (well i think so) idea on what happens to minato whilst i was having my cig break at work and i had to come on and post about it
I just thought its wicked since it was something quite unexpected and it ties in with my arc plus i've not heard anything similar in any other fan fics.

He doesn't go out in a blaze of glory in an all out fight but he does go out in a clever way that i feel does him justice,
so all i'll say is this arc isn't finishing until minato doesn't leave once and for all...which should hopefully be within 4 chapters, touch wood.

Definitly more up tonight in about 4 hours.